高考专题复习——漫画作文

How to describe a pictureHow to polish your writing

如何描写漫画 如何润色作文

请仔细观看右边漫画，结合自己的实际生活，写一篇关于“节能环保”的英语短文。要求：1 ）简要描述图中现象2 ）分析这种现象的原因

（如没有良好的习惯）3 ）提出你的建议

图中在睡觉的是小明，妇女是小明的母亲

How to describe a picture?

开头：From the picture, we can see…As we can see from the cartoons, …As can be seen from the cartoons, …This is a funny and instructive picture. In the

picture, …

时态：一般现在时如果故事性很强的漫画，可用过去时

1.What time is it?

It is 2 o’clock in the morning.

2.What is Xiao Ming doing?

Xiao Ming is sleeping.

3.电视还开着。The TV is still _______.

soundly/deeply.

4.What does Xiao Ming’s mother do then?

She turns off the TV.

5.What does she say?“I have told you many times that you should turn off the TV first, but you is always forget it ”

on

How to polish it?

It is 2 o’clock in the morning. Xiao Ming is sleeping soundly. The TV is still on. Xiao Ming’s mother turns off the TV and says, “I have told you many times that you should turn off the TV first, but you always forget it ”

His mother turns off the TV and blames him

加开头

变为 with 结构

变虚为实

As can be seen from the picture, it is 2 o’clock in the morning. Xiao Ming is sleeping soundly

with the TV on.

for not having turned

off the TV again.

请仔细观看右边漫画，结合自己的实际生活，写一篇关于“节能环保”的英语短文。要求：1 ）简要描述图中现象2 ）分析这种现象的原因

（如没有良好的习惯）3 ）提出你的建议

图中在睡觉的是小明，妇女是小明的母亲

Many people like watching TV at deep night. They alw

ays feel tired and fall sleep with turning off the TV. It is r

eally a bad habit. It wastes many energy and harm our en

viroment.

Save energy is important. We should stress the importa

nce. We should rise people’s aware of environmentally fri

endly. When people realize the important, they will be wil

ling to kick off their bad habits.

How to polish it?

词层面：拼写、时态、句子主谓一致、句子无主语…

asleep without

much

Saving

raise awareness

importance

being

environment

harms

Many people like watching TV at deep night. They

always feel tired and fall asleep without turning off the TV.

It is really a bad habit. It wastes much energy and harms

our environment.

Saving energy is important. We should stress the

importance. We should raise people’s awareness of being

environmentally friendly. When people realize the

importance, they will be willing to kick their bad habits.

三、肯定变双否

五、陈述变倒装

二、单句变复句How to polish it?

句层面：

一、单词变短语

四、主动变被动

……

Is it good enough?

[ 原文 ] Many people like watching TV at deep night. [improve] Many people prefer to watch/are fond of watching TV at deep night.

一、单词变短语

[ 原文 ] Saving energy is important. [improve] Saving energy is of great/vital importance.

[ 原文 ] It is really a bad habit. It wastes much energy and harms our environment.

[improve] It is really a bad habit, which wastes much energy and harms our environment.

二、单句变复句

does harm to

is harmful to

[ 原文 ] We should stress its importance.

[improve] We cannot stress the importance too much.

[improve] We cannot stress the importance enough.

[translation] 再…也不为过

三、肯定变双否

[ 原文 ] We should raise people’s awareness of being environmentally friendly.

[improve] People’s awareness of being environmentally friendly should be raised.

四、主动变被动

五、陈述变倒装

[ 原文 ] When people realize the importance, they will be willing to kick their bad habits

[improve] Only when people realize the impo

rtance, will they be willing to kick their bad habits

没有逗号！！！！

How to polish it?

语篇层面：善用连接词； 过渡句

As can be seen from the picture, it is 2 o’clock in the morning. Xiao Ming is sleeping soundly with the TV on. His mother turns off the TV and blames him for not having turned off the TV again. Many people prefer to watch TV at deep night. They always feel tired and fall asleep without turning off the TV. It is really a bad habit, which wastes much energy and harms our environment. Saving energy is of vital importance. We cannot stress the importance too much. People’s awareness of being environmentally friendly should be raised. Only when people realize the importance will they be willing to kick their bad habits.

Is it perfect?

As can be seen from the picture, it is 2 o’clock in the morning. _____ Xiao Ming is sleeping soundly with the TV on. __________,( 看到此情景 ) his mother turns off the TV and blames him for not having turned off the TV again. _____________________________________________________________________________________. Many people prefer to watch TV at deep night. _________, they always feel tired and fall asleep without turning it off. It is really a bad habit, which wastes much energy and does harm to our environment. ______________________, saving energy is of vital importance. We cannot emphasize it too much. _________, people’s awareness of being environmentally friendly should be raised. Only when they realize the importance will they be willing to kick their bad habits.

This is often the case in our daily life./Actually, such phenomena are common in our daily life

However

ThereforeAs far as I’m concerned

not unusual

ButSeeing that

• 书写工整，卷面整洁

• 词层面：

• 句层面：

• 文章连接自然，适当使用过渡词 / 句、连接词

三、肯定变五、陈述变

二、单句变一、单词变四、主动变……

杜绝低级错误（拼写、时态、句 子主谓一致、句子无主语 …）

短语双否

复 句被动

倒装

Homework

• 1. 背诵范文 • 2. describe a picture

• 3. polish some given sentences