(Worse) Joint cooperation between the two organizations depends on whether the available resources are adequate enough.

(Better) Cooperation between the two organizations depends on adequate available resources.

(Worse) A major breakthrough in modern technology of today is the emergence of artificial intelligence.

(Better) A breakthrough in modern technology is the emergence of artificial intelligence.

(Worse) The major benefit of the proposal is that the true facts about the very unique industrial situation can be obtained.

(Better) The major benefit of the proposal is the ability to obtain the facts about the unique industrial situation.

(Worse) The final outcome between the two teams was an unexpected surprise .

(Better) The outcome between the two teams was a surprise.

(Worse) During that period in time, the fabrics were of cheap quality and rough in texture.

(Better) During that period, the fabrics were cheap and rough textured.

(Worse) The physical phenomenon that occurs in the physics field is often times of an uncertain condition and extreme in degree.

(Better) The physical phenomenon that occurs in physics is often uncertain and extreme.

(Worse) The terrible tragedy was unusual in nature and of a strange type.

(Better) The tragedy was unusual and strange.

(Worse) It is the terminal that communicates with the mainframe to accomplish tasks.

(Better) The terminal communicates with the mainframe to accomplish tasks.

(Worse) There is an engineer who adjusts the parameters.

(Better) An engineer adjusts the parameters.

(Worse) It is computer networking that allows a group of interconnected computers to achieve a number of important tasks.

(Better) Computer networking allows a group of interconnected computers to achieve many (OR several) important tasks.

(Worse) There is a manager who makes a compilation of the data and performs an arrangement of the assignments.

(Better) A manager compiles the data and arranges the assignments.

(Worse) It is ink jet printers that vastly outsell laser and multifunction printers in view of the fact that they print in color as well as black and white.

(Better) Ink jet printers vastly outsell laser and multifunction printers because they print in color as well as black and white.