16. because and descriptive writing
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Writing 1IECP
Summer 2013Nikki Mattson
Would you rather…
• Sleep every night in a human-sized nest
• OR
• Sleep every night in an underground tunnel?
Agenda
• “because”
• Editing picture descriptions
“Because”
Race
• Example
Editing Picture Descriptions
• Edit picture descriptions
• Comment on other student writings
HW
• Final draft and Editing Log for picture description