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Based on your video recorded presentation:i transcribe (NOT IPA symbols) your presentation;ii number your utterances;iii fill in the table belo usin! complete sentences;
iv identify your stren!ths and ea"ness(es)# and ma"e appropriate improvements here applicable$
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EFFECTI?E: SEM 1( 15/16
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'tren!th 5ea"ness and improvement
EFFECTI?E: SEM 1( 15/16
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EFFECTI?E: SEM 1( 15/16
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'ection =$ Body (Point .)
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'tren!th 5ea"ness and improvement
'upportin! point
'tren!th 5ea"ness and improvement
9etails &les
'tren!th 5ea"ness and improvement
&nhancer (Transitions beteen ideas)
'tren!th 5ea"ness and improvement
EFFECTI?E: SEM 1( 15/16
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'upportin! point
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9etails &les
'tren!th 5ea"ness and improvement
&nhancer (Transitions beteen body to the conclusion)
'tren!th 5ea"ness and improvement
'ection 9$ =onclusion
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'tren!th 5ea"ness and improvement
'ummarisin! "ey points
'tren!th 5ea"ness and improvement
&ndin! on a stron! note
(ma"in! a memorable >uotation or dramatic statement)
'tren!th 5ea"ness and improvement
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EFFECTI?E: SEM 1( 15/16