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Welcome to Writing Class! 

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What do you need (필요하다)?

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What do you need (필요하다)?

I need...

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“Decay, disorder, stunned survivors pack streets.” (Toronto Star).

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“Decay, disorder, stunned survivors pack streets.” (Toronto Star).

“Towns absolutely destroyed.” (CNN).

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“Decay, disorder, stunned survivors pack streets.” (Toronto Star).

“Towns absolutely destroyed.” (CNN).

“Patience wears thin as Haiti’s desperation grows.” (New York Times).

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“Decay, disorder, stunned survivors pack streets.” (Toronto Star).

“Towns absolutely destroyed.” (CNN).

“Patience wears thin as Haiti’s desperation grows.” (New York Times).

Desperate Haitians await foreign disaster relief.” (South China Morning Post).

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“Decay, disorder, stunned survivors pack streets.” (Toronto Star).

“Towns absolutely destroyed.” (CNN).

“Patience wears thin as Haiti’s desperation grows.” (New York Times).

Desperate Haitians await foreign disaster relief.” (South China Morning Post).

“Can the world finally deliver its promises on Haiti?” (Reuters).

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What do you need (필요하다)?

I need...

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Announcements

• Reminder: Show & TellPresentations

Monday May 10, 2010

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Today’s Aims

1. Coherence & Cohesion

2. Create flow using Linking Words

3. The importance of referencing 

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Update: Essay Evaluation

Grammar

Usage

Mechanics

Style

Organization and

Development

Content

ETS: Me:

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Creating Flow

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Creating Flow

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Creating Flow

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Creating Flow

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How to Create

Coherence & Cohesion

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• Carry-over the same idea

How to Create

Coherence & Cohesion

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• Carry-over the same idea

• Repeating key words or synonymous words

How to Create

Coherence & Cohesion

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• Carry-over the same idea

• Repeating key words or synonymous words

• Using pronouns

How to Create

Coherence & Cohesion

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• Carry-over the same idea

• Repeating key words or synonymous words

• Using pronouns

• Linking Words

How to Create

Coherence & Cohesion

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Why is Creating Flow

Important?

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• Easier to read

Why is Creating Flow

Important?

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• Easier to read

• Professional

Why is Creating Flow

Important?

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• Easier to read

• Professional

•Transferable skill

Why is Creating Flow

Important?

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 What is Plagiarism?

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 What is Plagiarism?

Plagiarism is the unauthorized use or closeimitation of the language and thoughts of 

another author and the representation of them

as one’s own original work (Dictionary.com).

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In-text Citation

“Everyone knows they’re going to die, but nobody believesit. If we did, we would do things differently.” (Albom, 37).

(Author, page #)

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In-text Citation

“Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, whileloving someone deeply gives you courage.” (Lao Tzu).

OR

Lao Tzu once said, “Being deeply loved by someone gives youstrength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.”

Famous Quote:

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1. Final Essay is due Session 6

2. Reminder:

✓Show & Tell Presentations

(Session 7)

Homework