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Welcome to Writing Class!
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What do you need (필요하다)?
I need...
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“Decay, disorder, stunned survivors pack streets.” (Toronto Star).
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“Decay, disorder, stunned survivors pack streets.” (Toronto Star).
“Towns absolutely destroyed.” (CNN).
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“Decay, disorder, stunned survivors pack streets.” (Toronto Star).
“Towns absolutely destroyed.” (CNN).
“Patience wears thin as Haiti’s desperation grows.” (New York Times).
Desperate Haitians await foreign disaster relief.” (South China Morning Post).
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“Decay, disorder, stunned survivors pack streets.” (Toronto Star).
“Towns absolutely destroyed.” (CNN).
“Patience wears thin as Haiti’s desperation grows.” (New York Times).
Desperate Haitians await foreign disaster relief.” (South China Morning Post).
“Can the world finally deliver its promises on Haiti?” (Reuters).
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What do you need (필요하다)?
I need...
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Announcements
• Classroom Contributions
• Essay due date
Monday August 2, 2010
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Final Essay
EarlyBonus
Up to 5 bonus marks!
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Today’s Aims
1. Introduce Show & Tell
2. Do’s and Don’ts
3. Create flow with Linking Words
4. The importance of Referencing
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Show & T ell
Presentation
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Show & T ell
Presentation
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Show & T ell
Presentation
• Groups
• Writing activity
• Template
• Create a sample
• Presentation
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Show & T ell
Presentation
• Groups
• Writing activity
• Template
• Create a sample
• Presentation
Beginning Session 7!
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Do’s & Don’tsGaller Walk!
Do’s and Don’ts
Gallery Walk
Conjunctions Style Tone Cohesion Tense Examples References
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Creating Flow
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Creating Flow
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Creating Flow
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Creating Flow
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Creating Flow with
Coherence & CohesionMy Hero: My Dad
By Kim Jong Il #8 C3
Cohesion
Coherence
Connections
between
sentences
Connectedness of
ideas of your entire writing.
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Why is Creating Flow
Important?
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• Easier to read
Why is Creating Flow
Important?
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• Easier to read
• Transition
Why is Creating Flow
Important?
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• Easier to read
• Transition
• Professional
Why is Creating Flow
Important?
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• Easier to read
• Transition
• Professional
• Transferable skill
Why is Creating Flow
Important?
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What is Plagiarism?
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What is Plagiarism?
Plagiarism is the unauthorized use or closeimitation of the language and thoughts of
another author and the representation of them
as one’s own original work (Dictionary.com).
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In-text Citation
“Everyone knows they’re going to die, but nobody believesit. If we did, we would do things differently.” (Albom, 37).
(Author, page #)
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In-text Citation
“Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, whileloving someone deeply gives you courage.” (Lao Tzu).
OR
Lao Tzu once said, “Being deeply loved by someone gives youstrength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.”
Famous Quote:
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1. Final Essay
2. Show & Tell: Session 7
Reminders
Bonus due date: Friday August 6
Final due date: Monday August 9