*701 *702 Graduate Seminar

Useful Tips

Host: JJ Hoyt

Preliminaries

The talks are 15 minutes in length, with 5 minutes of questions/set-up.

Everyone in the group should speak.

Be on time. Bring your own computer of a copy of your talk. If youbring a copy show up early to test it on my MacBook Pro.

Attendance is mandatory.

Elements of effective presentation

I. A literature reviewII. A formulation of the research problemIII. A clear explanation of the results obtainedIV. A competence in answering questionsV. Technicalities (graphics, readable fonts, etc.)

Motivation!

Motivation

Why is the problem you are studying an important one?

What has been done in the past? What was learned? (Literature review!) What questions remain?

What will you do to answer outstanding questions? Why is your experimental/ theoretical/modeling approach appropriate to answer these questions? Will you read a book with no plot,

no climax? Or a presumably interesting book written in Aramaic?

Set the premise of your “story”:From Prof. Malakhov

Also From Prof. Malakhov

• Hydrogen is our future

• Hydrogen is a clean fuel

• Hydrogen can be used as a fuel for automobiles

• We have to develop new materials for hydrogen storage

• Everyone loves Raymond and everyone loves hydrogen

• Blah-blah-blah…

What is wrong with this motivation?

“Hydrogen is a clean fuel . . .

Today I will discuss the role of Ti in the absorption kinetics ofHydrogen in alanates.”

Be specific. Tell your story in more detail. How do we go from H as the possible answer to global warming to Ti?

Clear Explanation of Results

How were these resultsobtained and what do theymean?

How do these results moveus closer to answering thequestion posed in themotivation?

Note: clear explanation of data

Note: readable axes labels

Equations and Theoretical Concepts

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Why are you using this equation/theory? Again, refer back to motivation.

What do each of the terms mean? Are they known? Would a schematic diagram help?

Velocity

Technicalities

A nice micrograph, butwhat are α, β and γ ?

. . . And what does themicrograph say ?

Always a good idea!

A Bad SlideFour score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.Now we are engaged in a great civil war, testing whether that nation, or any nation, so conceived and so dedicated, can long endure. We are met on a great battle-field of that war. We have come to dedicate a portion of that field, as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this.But, in a larger sense, we can not dedicate—we can not consecrate—we can not hallow—this ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here. It is for us the living, rather, to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced. It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining before us—that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion—that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain—that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom—and that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth.

Nerves !!