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A STUDY ON THE FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE IN EMILY
DICKINSON’S POEM OF NATURE
THESIS
BY:
DILA KURNIA HABZAH
NPM: 10181044
ENGLISH DEPARTEMENT
FACULTY OF LANGUAGE AND LITERATURE
WIJAYA PUTRA UNIVERSITY
SURABAYA
2014
A STUDY ON THE FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE IN EMILY
DICKINSON’S POEM OF NATURE
THESIS
Submitted in a partial fulfillment of the requirements
for the Sarjana Degree
in English
BY:
DILA KURNIA HABZAH
10181044
ENGLISH DEPARTEMENT
FACULTY OF LANGUAGE AND LITERATURE
WIJAYA PUTRA UNIVERSITY
2014
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APPROVAL SHEET I
This thesis entitled A Study on the Figurative Language in Emily
Dickinson’s poem of Nature by Dila Kurnia Habzah, NPM 10181044 has been
approved to be presented in thesis examination.
Supervisor,
Date : 16 / July / 2014
Yulis Setyowati, M.Pd
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Acknowledged by,
The Head of Language and Literature Study Program
Yeni Probowati, S.Pd
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Dickinson’s poem of Nature by Dila Kurnia Habzah, NPM 10181044 has been
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Surabaya, 13 August 2014
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MOTTO
SIMPLE LIVING and HIGH THINKING
This is How my parents encouraged me.
LOVE My Dad and My Mom
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DEDICATION
This thesis is dedicated to:
My beloved family (My mother, my sisters, my brothers, and Didit) thanks for your
encouragement, prayers, and everything that you gave to me.
To all my friends in English Department ‟10:
Gandes ( Mb. Neezz), Maria Ulfa, Eny, Bang ipul, Glen Agus, Mb.Tyas, Arini, Fay,
Emi, Diah, Novi, Inuk, Felix, Yasinta, Novi, Mb. Anis, and my friends in morning
class.
Thank you have been given an amazing experience and not forgotten.
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ACKNOWLEDGMENT
First of all, I would give my praise and deep gratitude to ALLAH SWT,
The cherisher and sustainer of the worlds. God who has been giving His blessing and
mercy to the writer to complete the Thesis entitled “A Study on the Figurative
Language in Emily Dickinson‟s poem of Nature.”
In finishing this project, I really give his regards and thanks to many
people who have give support to me to finish this thesis in the following records.
1. Especially thankful to Mrs. Yulis Setyowati, M.Pd my advisor. Without their help,
constant encouragement and inspiring ideas, this final project would have never
been completed
2. Mrs. Dra. Arjunani, MM as Dean of Faculty of Language and Literature, Mrs.
Yeni Probowati, S.Pd as Head of Language and Literature Study Program and Mr.
Mas Moeljono as My examiner who had given useful comment, criticism,
suggestion and advice for the improvement of my experiences study.
3. My beloved mother, Didit, my brothers, and my sisters.
4. All my friends in English and Literature Faculty eighth semester, thanks for your
friendship and cooperation during 4 years I was in Wijaya Putra University.
Finally, the writer would like to thanks for everyone that helps in the
process of writing this thesis. The writer hopes this thesis can provide benefits to the
development of education, especially in the field of language and literature.
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ABSTRACT
Habzah, Dila Kurnia. 2014. A Study on the Figurative Language in Emily
Dickinson’s poem of Nature. Thesis, Language and Literature Study Program, Post
Graduate Program of Wijaya Putra University. Advisor: Yulis Setyowati, M.Pd.
Keywords: Figurative language, Poem, Nature, Emily Dickinson
This thesis aims at discussing about the forms and the meaning of figurative
language in poems “a bird came down the walk and a drop fell on the apple tree”
written by Emily Elizabeth Dickinson, especially for simile, metaphor, personification,
hyperbole, pleonasm and euphuism .
This thesis uses descriptive qualitative research to collect the data. From the
analysis, the writer finds many figurative languages that Emily Dickinson used. Emily
Dickinson successfully uses figurative language to picture out the realistic of human
life that appear in the poem. It is noted that in the poem:
A bird came down the walk
Than oars divide the ocean
Too silver for a seam,
Or butterflies, off banks of noon,
Leap, splash less, as they swim (Stanza 5, line17- 20)
A drop fell on the apple tree
A few went out to help the brook,
That went to help the sea.
Myself conjectured, Were they pearls,
What necklaces could be! (Stanza 2, Line 5-8)
They are very descriptive and beautiful word. Most of the poems shows to the
readers that the life struggle requires patience, strength of heart, and spirit to overcome
the trials of life can result the success.
Based on the analysis, the writer can conclude figurative languages used in “a
bird came down the walk and a drop fell on the apple tree” written by Emily Elizabeth
Dickinson are more dominated by personification. Many personifications used to
represent elements of life.
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TABLE OF CONTENT
TITLE SHEET ................................................................................................. i
APPROVAL SHEET I ..................................................................................... ii
APPROVAL SHEET II ................................................................................... iii
APPROVAL STATEMENT ............................................................................ iv
APPROVAL OF LETTER .............................................................................. v
MOTTO ........................................................................................................... vi
DEDICATION ................................................................................................. vii
ACKNOWLEDGEMENT ............................................................................... viii
ABSTRACT ..................................................................................................... ix
TABLE OF CONTENT ................................................................................... x
CHAPTER I : INTRODUCTION ............................................................. 1
A. Background of the Study ............................................. 1
B. Statement of the Problem ............................................ 4
C. Objectives of the Study ............................................... 4
D. Significance of the Study ............................................ 5
E. Scope and Limitation ................................................... 5
F. Organization of the Study ............................................ 5
G. Definition of Key Terms .............................................. 6
CHAPTER II : REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE ......................... 7
A. Stylistic ......................................................................... 7
B. Figurative Language .................................................... 8
B.1 The Definition of Figurative Language ................. 8
B.2 The Classification of Figurative Language .......... 10
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C. Reader Response .......................................................... 17
CHAPTER III : RESEARCH METHOD ..................................................... 19
A. Research design ........................................................... 19
B. Object of the research .................................................. 19
C. Source data .................................................................. 19
D. Procedure of data collection ........................................ 19
E. Data of analysis ........................................................... 20
CHAPTER IV : RESEARCH FINDING AND DISCUSSION ................... 21
A. The Forms of Figurative Language that used in Emily
Dickinson‟s poems ....................................................... 25
A.1 Simile .................................................................. 25
A.2 Metaphor ............................................................. 26
A.3 Personification .................................................... 27
A.4 Hyperbole ............................................................ 29
A.5 Pleonasme ........................................................... 30
A.6 Euphemism .......................................................... 30
B. The Purpose of Figurative Language that used in Emily
Dickinson‟s poems ....................................................... 31
CHAPTER V : CONCLUSION .................................................................. 33
BIBLIOGRAPHY
APPENDIXES
EMILY DICKINSON‟S POEMS, “A bird came down the walk and a drop fell on the
apple tree”.
BIOGRAPHY OF EMILY DICKINSON.
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CHAPTER I
INTRODUCTION
A. Background of Study
Literature is the result of creativity that is expressed through feelings,
thoughts expressed in the form a beautiful and sublime creation by using
language as a medium. Literature is also thinking about the author‟s own life
and the others who were subjected to by author. Literature is the work of men
who were especially sensitive to the language of their time and who used the
skill of language to make permanent their vision of life. They manipulated
language to make it contain a unique series of experience and interpretations
(Chapman, 1973: 5).
Literature is media is using language to portray the social and cultural
facts of human life that had occurred such us: prose, drama, novel and poetry.
Literature, they argue, cannot be „studied‟ at all, we can only read, enjoy,
appreciate it. For the rest, we can only accumulate all kind of information
„about‟ literature (Rene Wellek and Austin Warren, 1949:15)
One type of English literature which is quite well known as poetry.
Poetry is one of form a literary works, poetry itself is influenced by many
factors which are assist the poetry in order to become more meaningful and
interesting to be heard and read. Those factors are involved in poetry are
figurative languages, symbols, imagery, senses, and rhyme. Poetry is an
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imaginative awareness of experience expressed through meaning, sound, and
rhythmic language choices as if evokes an emotional respons.
Knickerbocker and Renninger, (1963: 307) say that”poetry is the hymns
of praise, and the essays on the nature of poetry would check the shelves of any
modest public library and overflow onto the floors as well good talk about
poetry is nevertheless rare, and even the best of it will rest lightly on fallow
ground until we ourselves have learned how to penetrate the inner life of a few
poems. Poem is a medium not only to express the feeling of the poets but also
make us enter into these feelings about the things, persons, situation or idea in
the poem. Poetry is a give entertainment, satisfaction, pleasure and enjoyment
to the reader. In other words, Poetry might be defined as kind of language that
says more and says it more intensely than does ordinary language. To
understand this fully, we need to understand what poetry “says”. For language
is employed on different occasions to say quite different kinds of thing,
language has different uses. (Perrine, 1982: 509)
Language is an important thing in our life. We can communicate with other
people through language. Communication has purposes to send a message to other
human. Language itself is not simple a means of communication to inform
something (for example about the weather or clothes) but more than that. It is
also a very important means of establishing and maintaining relationship with
other people (Langacker, 1972:13). Moreover, Language is the most important
elements in a literary work. The beauty in art can be expressed through
beautiful words. Literature will be interesting if the information that is
presented using interesting language too.
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Stylistic is a branch of general linguistics. Stylistic is the study of style,
can be defined as the analysis of distinctive expression in language and the
description of its purpose ad effect (Verdonk, 2002: 4). In literature and
writing, stylistic device can be also called figure of speech, for examples are
metaphor, simile, or personification.
Figurative language is used in any form of communication, such as in
daily conversation, articles in newspaper, advertisements, novels, poems, etc.
The effectiveness of figurative language in four main reasons, Perrine (1982)
First, figurative language affords readers imaginative pleasure of literary
works. Second, it is a way of bringing additional imagery into verse, making
the abstract concrete, making literary works more sensuous. The third,
figurative is a way of adding emotional intensity to otherwise merely
informative statements and conveying attitudes along with information.
Moreover, the last, it is a way of saying much in brief compass.
Emily Dickinson (December 10th
, 1830 – May 15th
, 1886) was born in
Amherst at the Homestead on December 10, 1830. She is considered one of the
great American poets. Her quiet life was infused with a creative energy that
produced almost 1800 poems and a profusion of vibrant letters. Her poetry
remained virtually unpublished until after she died on May 15th
, 1886. After
her death, her poems and life story were brought to the attention of the wider
world through the competing efforts of family members and intimates.
This study is focused in analyzing the types of figurative language that
occur in two poems “A bird came down the walk and A drop fell on the apple
tree” written by Emily Dickinson‟s. It is considered as an important this to
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know that are actually the meanings containing within the poems. It was
useless if just read the poems without understanding what actually the poems
wants to convey to the readers.
In addition, the writer chooses “A bird came down the walk and A drop
fell on the apple tree” written by Emily Dickinson‟s because they are a
beautiful poem, with describe her love to nature, this poems bringing forth the
reality of life. Based on that reason, the writers feel interest to analyze
figurative language these poems more deeply.
B. Statement of the Problem
From the background above, the writer finds the problem based on
topic. The problem that will be research in this study is:
1. What are the forms of figurative language used in Emily Dickinson‟s poem
of nature (a bird came down the walk and a drop fell on the apple tree)?
2. What is the purpose of figurative language used in Emily Dickinson‟s poem
of nature (a bird came down the walk and a drop fell on the apple tree)?
C. Objectives of the Study
Based on the statement of the problem, so the objectives of study are:
1. To describe the forms of figurative language used in Emily Dickinson‟s
poem of nature (a bird came down the walk and a drop fell on the apple
tree).
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2. To describe the purpose of figurative language used in Emily Dickinson‟s
poem of nature (a bird came down the walk and a drop fell on the apple
tree).
D. Significance of the Study
The analysis of the study is to apply the theory of literature learned in
the English Department and write a scientific article to contribute to this
department. Besides, this writing can be used as a reference for the student who
likes to write about literature. And find out what message the poet wants to
deliver to the readers.
E. Scope and Limitation
The writer limits this study in the using of figurative language focus on
simile, metaphor, hyperbole, personification, euphuism and pleonasm in two
poems “A bird came down the walk and A drop fell on the apple tree” written
by Emily Dickinson‟s based on the theory of figurative language proposed by
Laurence Perrine (1987) and C. Hugh Holman (1980).
F. Organization of the Study
The study is divided into five chapters; the following is the overview of
the study. Chapter I, the introduction, content of the background of the study,
statements of the study, the objectives of the study, significance of the study,
limitation of the study, organization of the study and definition of key terms.
And then chapter II, content of the review of related literature; it is discusses
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the general meaning of stylistics and figurative language. The next is chapter
III content of the method of the study; it is explains how the study will be
conducted. Chapter IV content of analysis and discussion. Finally, chapter V
content of the conclusions. And I attach also the appendix, content of Author‟s
biography and poems.
G. Definition of Key Terms
1. Poem : is a medium not only to express the feeling of the
poets but also make us enter into these feelings
about the things, persons, situation or idea in the
poem.
2. Emily Dickinson : She is considered one of the great American poets
(1830 – 1886).
4. Nature : is the phenomenon of the physical world
3. Figurative language : is language using figure of speech and cannot be
taken literally.
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CHAPTER II
REVIEW OF RELATED LITERATURE
A. Stylistics
Stylistic is a study of different language styles usage. Styles are the
product of social situation: of a common relationship between language-users.
Every style is used for communication within the group, large, or small, close-
knit or scattered, with features which are accepted as communication by
members of the group. (Chapman, 1973: 11).
Stylistic is concerned with the study of style in language. These
everyday notions make a good starting point for a more technical discussion of
the use of style in language. In one way or another, all of the, make reference to
a distractive manner of expression, through whatever medium this expression is
given physical shape. Along the same lines, style in language can be defined a
distinctive linguistic expression. But, as with other manifestations of style, we
need to consider what makes an expression distinctive, why it has been
devised, and what effect it has. (Verdonk, 2002:3).
Stylistic, conceived in this wide sense, investigates all devices which
aim at some specific expressive end thus embraces far more far more than
literature or even rhetoric. (Rene Wellek and Austin Warren, 1949:15).
Based on the data above theoretically, the writer can be concluded that
language is the most important elements in a literary work and style is a
combination of two elements: the idea to be expressed and individuality of the
author. In communicating with other people, everyone uses different style,
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different ways to express their ideas, thoughts and feeling because every people
being is unique. A study that analyzes how people do this or in other words that
a study of different language styles usage is stylistic.
B. Figurative Language
B.1 The Definition of Figurative Language
Figurative language: One meaning of "figure" is "drawing" or
"image" or "picture". Figurative language creates figures (pictures) in
the mind of the reader or listener. We use figures of speech in
"figurative language" to add color and interest, and to awaken the
imagination. Figurative language is everywhere, from classical works
like Emily Dickinson „poems, pop music and television. It makes the
reader or listener use their imagination and understand much more than
the plain words.
Figurative language is the opposite of literal language. Literal
language means exactly what it says. Figurative language means
something different to (and usually more than) what it says on the
surface:
•He ran fast. (Literal)
•He ran like the wind. (Figurative)
In the above example "like the wind" is a figure of speech (simile).
An author uses many ways as his tool to make the work
different from other authors (in characterize his work). One of the tools
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is figure of speech. It is very effective and unique to represent an
author‟s idea (Winterowd, 1981: 424). Figurative language is writing
that embodies one or more of the various figure of speech, the most
common of which are : Antithesis, Apostrophe, climax, Hyperbole,
Irony, Metaphor, Metonymy, Personification, Repetition, Simile,
Synecdoche ( Holman, 1908:185)
Figure of speech is a way of saying something other than the
ordinary way, and some rhetoricians have classified as many as 250
separate figures. Figurative language is language using figures of
speech and cannot be taken literally (or should not be taken literally
only) (Perrine, 1987: 581).
Figurative language is used in many forms of communication,
such as in daily conversation, articles in newspaper, advertisements,
novels, poems, etc. The effectiveness of figurative language in four
main reasons. First, figurative language affords readers imaginative
pleasure of literary works. The second, it is a way of bringing additional
imagery into verse, making the abstract concrete, making literary works
more sensuous. The third, figurative is a way of adding emotional
intensity to otherwise merely informative statements and conveying
attitudes along with information. Moreover, the last, it is a way of
saying much in brief compass. (Perrine, 1987: 587)
B.2 The Classification of Figurative Language
Perrine (1987) and Holman (1980) classifies figurative language
can be divided into:
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B.2.1 Simile
Simile the comparison can also be expressed by the use
of some word or phrase such as like, as, than, similar to,
resembles, or seems. A simile expresses a similarity
(Perrine, 1987:581). Holman (1980:418) adds that Simile is
a figure of speech in which similarity between two objects
directly expressed. For example:
“My sister is faithful as a rock”
This example show the signal word of saying the similarity
is the word “as”. (Her faithfulness is compared to the
strength of the rock)
B.2.2 Metaphor
Metaphor is a figure of speech used as a means of
comparing things that essentially unlike. In the metaphor the
comparison is implied. That is, the figurative term
substituted for or identified with literal term. (Perrine,
1987:581) or the other words Metaphor are implicit and
compares two different objects directly without using
introductory words as, like, resembles, seems, and so on.
I. A. Richards's distinction between the tenor and the
vehicle of a metaphor has been widely accepted and is very
useful. The tenor the idea is being expressed or the subject
of the comparison; the vehicles the image which this idea is
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conveyed or the subject communicated (Holman, 1980:264).
For example:
“Her home was a prison”
This example shows that the direct comparison between
someone‟s home (tenor) and prison (vehicle) since the above
example make we understand immediately that her home
had some similarity of the characteristics of a prison, Why it
was a prison we do not know, but that would be clear from
the context--perhaps her husband forced her to stay at home,
or perhaps she is afraid of the outside. And then in the
example above that we do not find a signal word of the
similarity (like, as, etc.) here like what we can find in simile.
B.2.3 Personification
“Personification consists in giving the attributes of a
human being to an animal, an object, or a concept” (Perrine,
1987: 584). Personification is a special form of metaphor
that pictures inanimate things to act, speak, or talk like
humans. Kennedy (2005: 540) personification is a figure of
speech in which a thing, an animal, or an abstract term
(truth, nature) is made human. Thus, personification can be
viewed as figure of speech which endows animals, ideas,
abstractions, and inanimate objects with human form,
character, or sensibilities; there presenting of imaginary
creatures or things as having human personalities,
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intelligence, and emotions; an impersonation in drama of
one character or person, whether real or fictitious, by
another person ( Holman, 1980: 328). For example:
“Look at my car. She is a beauty, isn‟t it so?”
This example show pictures of inanimate things to act
(beauty) like humans.
B.2.4 Apostrophe
Apostrophe is a figure of speech in which the speaker or
the writer directly addressing someone absent or dead, or
something nonhuman as if that person or thing were present
and alive and reply to what is being said. (Perrine, 1987:
585). In other words that someone absent, abstract object or
imaginative personage, as if it presents in front of him and is
able to hear or to reply him. For example:
When the speaker in James Joyce‟s poem cries out:
“My love, my love, my love, why have you left me alone?”
He is apostrophizing his departed sweet heart.
B.2.5 Synecdoche
“Synecdoche is a form of metaphor which mentioning
the part signifies the whole or the whole signifies the part.
(Holman, 1980:438). In other theoretically, Synecdoche (the
use of part for the whole) is a figure of speech that mentions
part of a thing to signify the whole thing or uses the whole to
signify the part. Shakespeare uses synecdoche when he says
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that the cuckoo‟s song is unpleasing to a “married ear”, for
he means a married man (Perrine, 1987: 586).
B.2.6 Metonymy
Metonymy (the use something closely related for thing
actually meant) (Perrine 1987:585). In other words that
Metonymy is often confused with another figure of speech
called synecdoche. They resemble each other but are not the
same. Synecdoche refers to a thing by the name of one of its
parts. For example, calling a car “a wheel” is a synecdoche.
A part of a car i.e. “a wheel” stands for the whole car. In a
metonymy, on the other hand, the word we use to describe
another thing is closely linked to that particular thing, but is
not a part of it. For example:
“The White House is concerned about terrorism.”
The White House is Metonymy and here represents the
people who work in it.
B.2.7 Symbol
Symbol is something that means more than what it is.
(Perrine, 1987: 600). For example:
“The red rose whisper of passion, and the white rose
breathes of love” John Boyle O‟Reilly‟s poem
The author indicates the above examples so clearly that the
red rose is a symbol of physical desire and the white rose is
a symbol of spiritual love.
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B.2.8 Allegory
Allegory is narrative or description that has a second
meaning beneath the surface. It is also defined as an
extended metaphor and sometimes as a series of related
symbols. And often is used in long works such as The
Faerie Queen, Everyman, and Pilgrim‟s Progress. (Perrine,
1987:608)
B.2.9 Hyperbole / Overstatement
Hyperbole is simply exaggeration, but exaggeration in
the service of truth (Perrine, 1987: 221). And according to
Holman (1980: 221) Hyperbole is a figure of speech which
conscious exaggeration is used without the intent of literal
persuasion. For example:
“Her beauty eclipsed the sun.”
Like all figures of speech, overstatement may be used
with a variety effect. It may be humorous or grave, fanciful
or restrained, convincing or unconvincing. (Kennedy, 2005:
541).
B.2.10 Understatement
“Understatement, or saying less than one means, may
exist in what one says or merely in how one says it”
(Perrine, 1991: 622). Holman (1980:418) adds that
Understatement is a form of irony in which something is
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intentionally represented as less than in fact it is. For
example:
“He was no amateur.”
The actually meaning is “He was professional”, but it is said
less than the actual meaning.
B.2.11 Irony
According to Perrine (1987: 624), Irony has a meaning
extend beyond its use merely as a figure of speech. Irony is
an art of indirect expression or speech, which means what is
unsaid. It has various kinds but irony of situation, dramatic
irony, and sarcasm; Socratic irony is few of them. For
example:
“If we call a weak and extremely thin person as Bruce Lee”
It aims at bringing about humors as well as criticism.
B.2.12 Paradox
Perrine (1987:620), Paradox is an apparent contradiction
that is nevertheless somehow true, in other words that
Paradox is a statement which while seemingly contradictory
or absurd may actually be well-founded or true. (Holman,
1980:317). For example:
“Man proposes, God disposes.”
The words propose and dispose in this sentence have strong
contrast in meanings. Propose mean to plan, dispose means
to determine. This means that even how hard human being
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try to fulfil what he has planned before, God is still the one
who determines it.
Holman adds one type of figure speech that Perrine doesn‟t state in his
theory. It is a Pleonasm
B.2.12 Pleonasm
Pleonasm is the superfluous use of words. Pleonasm may
consist of needless repetition, or of the addition of
unnecessary words in an effort to express an idea
completely, or of a combination of the two. (Holman,
1980:335)
For example, in the sentence:
"He walked the entire distance to the station on foot,"
"The entire distance" and "on foot" are pleonastic. Although
pleonasm is a violation of correct grammatical usage, it is
employed occasionally to add emphasis, and in such
instances its use may be considered legitimate.
B.2.13 Euphemism:
A figure of speech which an indirect statement is
substituted for a direct one in an effort to avoid bluntness.
Euphemistic terms have been much used by some writers
in an effort to mention a disagreeable idea in an agreeable
manner. (Holman, 1980:174).
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C. Reader-Response
Reader - Response is how the readers shape the meanings of a text in
each and every reading or in other word that reader-response is an attempt to
understand a text through its results.
Greig E. Henderson and Christopher Brown (1997) said that the reader
is a producer rather than a consumer of meanings. In this sense, a reader is a
hypothetical construct of norms and expectations that can be derived or
projected or extrapolated from the work and may even be said to inhere in the
work. Because expectations may be violated or fulfilled, satisfied or frustrated,
and because reading is a temporal process involving memory, perception, and
anticipation, the charting of reader-response is extremely difficult and
perpetually subject to construction and reconstruction, vision and revision.
(http://www.library.utoronto.ca/utel/glossary/Reader-response_criticism.html)
Reader-Response is also interested in ideas of performance. The
phenomenon of a text is not simply the message, the text, the author and the
readers, but the whole act of communication (Riffaterre, 1980: 37). The
responses of the readers are just as crucial as the input of the writers. To
explore this act more fully for its meanings, one needs to perform it over and
over again (38). And the different readings through each performance to try to
better understand the text itself. So, the performance of the reading experience
plays a big part in our exploration of a text.
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Based on the above theoretically, the writer can be concluded that
Reader responses is literary theory that focuses on the reader (or "audience")
and their experience of a literary work, such us poem or novel and in other
words that a reader response asks the reader to examine, explain and defend
her/his personal reaction to a reading. There is no right or wrong answer to a
reader response. Nonetheless, it is important that demonstrate an
understanding of the reading and clearly explain and support of reactions.
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CHAPTER III
RESEARCH METHOD
A. Research Design
In the research, the writer uses descriptive qualitative study, which
produces descriptive data in the form of written words and not numbers. Thus,
this study will contain quotes of data to give a representation of the study.
B. Object of the research
The material objects that are being analyzed in this study are 2 poems
of Emily Dickison‟s of nature, they are: “A bird came down the walk and A
drop fell on the apple tree”.
C. Source of data
The data in this research was taken from Emily Dickison‟s poems
which describe his love of nature and this study is limited only those poems as
a case. The data covered poemhunter.com and those poems are : “A bird came
down the walk and A drop fell on the apple tree”.
D. Procedure of Data collection
In this Research, The steps of writer use to collect the data are as the
following:
1. Collecting “A bird came down the walk and A drop fell on the apple tree”,
Emily Dickinson‟s poems
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2. Reading and understanding “A bird came down the walk and A drop fell on
the apple tree”, Emily Dickinson‟s poems.
3. Besides reading, giving marks or codes, taking note, blocking marking or
underlining. When it is needed
4. Collecting data selected with figurative language in “A bird came down the
walk and A drop fell on the apple tree”, Emily Dickinson‟s poems
E. Data of Analysis
The data were analyzed systematically using the following steps:
1. Analyzing every figurative language found in “A bird came down the walk
and A drop fell on the apple tree”, Emily Dickinson‟s poems.
2. Analyzing the purpose of figurative language used in “A bird came down
the walk and A drop fell on the apple tree”, Emily Dickinson‟s poems.
3. Drawing conclusion based on the result of data analysis.
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CHAPTER IV
RESEARCH FINDING AND DISCUSSION
A. The Forms of Figurative Language that is used in “A Bird came down the
walk and a drop fell on the apple tree”, Emily Dickinson’s poems.
The Figure of speech is a way of saying messages the other than the
ordinary one, and some rhetoricians have been classified as many as 250
separate figures. The figurative language is language using in figure of speech.
It cannot be taken literally (or should not be taken literally only) (Perrine,
1987: 581). This study is focused in the analyzing the types of figurative
language that occurs in two poems. They are “A bird came down the walk and
A drop fell on the apple tree” those written by Emily Dickinson‟s. It is
considered as an important this to know that are actually the meanings of
containing within the poems.
A bird came down the walk
A bird came down the walk:
He did not know I saw;
He bit an angle-worm in halves
And ate the fellow, raw (Stanza 1)
From the data of poem above, the writer describes the phenomenon and
the situation that had happened to the bird came down the walk. It shows to the
readers that the life of human being needs the effort and work. This sentence
can be illustrated from the line 1 “a bird came down the walk” it indicates that
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the phenomenon to live better and is not easy. No one who wants help the bird
unless he wants to get life better from the way his / her life. Then from the line
three and four show that every human being has to work alone without helping
from another. If he can be still alive so he will make the world change. He bits
an angle-worm in halves and ate the fellow, raw). The world ate the fellow
indicates that the success can be reached from the effort. )
And then he drank a dew
From a convenient grass,
And then hopped sidewise to the wall
To let a beetle pass. (Stanza 2)
From the first line /and then…../ the bird has a change to move and live
better than before. He has reached the aim. It can be shown from the sentences
“from a convenient grass‟. This sentence indicate the life better. The birds had
shown to the writer that every action ought to have confident to do better life.
From the last line in this stanza, the poem shows us that the life can‟t be silent
alone. There is an effort to change the life. It is shown in the last line from the
poem above (to let a beetle pass). So everyone can change his/her life in order
to get better life. It can see in the line 3.
He glanced with rapid eyes
That hurried all abroad,--
They looked like frightened beads, I thought;
He stirred his velvet head (Stanza 3)
From the third stanza, the writer describes that someone may live where
he/she wants. It is need effort to change life (line 2). He/she may change in a
person's life that life can‟t be silent. Life is moving on. People have to do some
things not only imagine thing but also have wish to get better. Life is not easy
as good in his/his mind. The life needs victim that support his/her life in the
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future. He may not silent to do something better. This statement it is shown in
line 1 to 3, but in the last line of this poem, "He stirred his velvet head" the
writer describes person realizes that his/her goals can be reached.
Like one in danger; cautious,
I offered him a crumb,
And he unrolled his feathers
And rowed him softer home (Stanza 4)
In the first line of this stanza, „like one danger‟ it means that every
human being or person involves all activities around his life. He must work
hard to get the aim. The writer describes that life needs the effort. Life needs
careful in all that are required. Every person can stay without another. He needs
the other one to get better life. We need help each other in community life. It
can be shown in the line two “I offered him a crumb”, and in the third line and
the fourth line from this poem can be described with having a good life. The
writer have to think and finish with pure thought.
Than oars divide the ocean,
Too silver for a seam,
Or butterflies, off banks of noon,
Leap, splash less, as they swim (Stanza 5)
In the last stanza of this poem, can be explained that the effort and hard
work bring life better. All problems that the writer faces can change the world
and it can solve the problem that explanation is supported when the writer feels
happiness in his life. It can be shown in line 1 to line 3. An effort and thinking
can result better life and more beautiful. It can be shown in the last sentence in
this poem "Leap, splash less, and they swim”.
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A drop fell on the apple tree(poem)
A drop fell on the apple tree
Another on the roof;
A half a dozen kissed the eaves,
And made the gables laugh. (Stanza 1)
As the title points out, this poem describes about the falling someone in
the apple tree. It means that every people often gets falling down in his life.
After falling down he changes his life better than before. He gets the happiness
in his life (apple tree). This poem is written by Emily Dickinson rainfall.
Naturally, life can change many things on ever life. Each Elements, such as
rain, brings a sense of refreshment to the world. They make the world peace.
By changing the world people can do many things. This poem is focusing on
rain as the topic. And in the fourth stanza, line 4, “laugh” is used to describe
the cheerful sound the pattering of the rain leaves everywhere it lands. The
rainfall is also essential to every day cycles. People do not think about how
important of life. So, the writer in this stanza describes about the rain in the
cheerful situation.
A few went out to help the brook,
That went to help the sea.
Myself conjectured, Were they pearls,
What necklaces could be! (Stanza 2)
In the second stanza of this poem, the writer describes the cheerful
situation but it knows no class. He is there and been in many classes, either the
poor class or the rich class (brook and sea). Cheerfulness is beautiful and
precious thing, it can be shown in the third line and the fourth line from this
poem. The cheerful can be gotten when the aims in the life can be reached well.
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The dust replaced in hoisted roa
The birds jocoser sung;
The sunshine threw his hat away,
The orchards spangles hung. (Stanza 3)
Based on the stanza above, the writer describes the cheerful situation
that make a person who has a problem be a little quieter and lead to positive
thinking and completing. It can be shown in all of sentences in this stanza (the
sunshine threw hit hat away).
The breezes brought dejected
And bathed them in the glee;
The East put out a single flag,
And signed the fete away. (Stanza 4)
Based on the last stanza above, the writer describes the cheerful that
make a sad person happily, It can be shows in the first sentence “The breezes
brought dejected”. And the cheerful can make many people in the round happy
and found happiness.
The classification of figurative language can be found from two poems
“Emily Dickinson (a bird came down the walk and a drop fell on the apple
tree).
A.1.1 Simile
Simile is an explicit and direct comparison of similarities of two different
objects that can be expressed by the use of some word or phrase such as like,
as, than, similar to, resembles, or seems (Perrine, 1987:581). The result of
analysis and discussion of simile in the poem below:
A.1.1.1 a bird came down the walk
They looked like frightened beads, I thought (Stanza 3, line 4)
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The author uses simile to describe picture how she wants to show about
the bird was frightened. The simile can be seen from the word “like” that is
used by the poet in describing the poem. This sentence is called simile because
bird's eyes are compared to frightened beads. It also indicates the condition of
the object of bird. The birds is described as the way to get aims.
Like one in danger; cautious (Stanza 4, line 1)
From the first sentence in this stanza four in this poem is using simile to
describe the condition someone. The word like one shows the reader that the
subject has the own way to get whatever he/she wants. In this sentences
compare the bird with people.
Leap, splash less, as they swim (Stanza 5, line 4)
From the sentence above, it describes about an action from the bird and
the sentence compares between leap and splash less with swim.
A.1.1.2 a drop fell on the apple tree
In this poem, it can‟t be found the simile.
A.1.2 Metaphor
Metaphor is an implicit and compares two different objects directly without
using introductory words as, like, resembles, seems, and so on (Perrine,
1987:581). The result of analysis and discussion of simile in the poem below:
A.1.2.1 a bird came down the walk
He stirred his velvet head (Stanza 3, line 4)
From the sentence above, there is a metaphor that use in this stanza. It
has an aim for the writer, Emily. Emily uses metaphor „He stirred his velvet
head‟ to compares the head of bird, the bird's head is not literally made of
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velvet, but the metaphor above only illustrates it as smooth and silky. It also
show as there is a description about the situation that happen in the writer.
A.1.2.2 a drop fell on the apple tree
Myself conjectured, Were they pearls (Stanza 2, line 3)
Instead of saying myself conjectured, Were they pearls. The writer uses
metaphor to describe his imagination about “they” (rainy) like pearls. In this
poem, rainy is the cheerful, cheerfulness is something very beautiful and
precious like pearls. In this line is also show us about the feeling from the
author. He wants to describe about the real situation in around him.
A.1.3 Personification
Personification is a figure of speech in which a thing, an animal, or an abstract
term (truth, nature) is made human (Perrine, 1987:581). The result of analysis
and discussion of simile in the poem below:
A.1.3.1 a bird came down the walk
He bit an angle-worm in halves (Stanza 1, line 3)
The sentences above shows personification in word “bit”, bit is human
nature, while a suitable for bird is “pecking”.
And then hopped sidewise to the wall
To let a beetle pass. (Stanza 2, line2-3)
In the two sentences above consists about personification. It can be seen
from the sentences that used in line 1. On other side it also happen because
both sentences describe bird like a human, the bird thinking about something
(hopped sidewise to the wall) so the beetle can go and get away from there.
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He glanced with rapid eyes (Stanza 3, line 1)
The sentences above shows personification in word “glanced”, glance
is human nature, and the bird can not to do it ( glance)
And rowed him softer home (Stanza 4, line 4)
The sentences above shows personification in word “rowed”, rowed is
human nature, and the bird can not to do it, bird only to do flapping his wings
not rowed.
A.1.3.2 a drop fell on the apple tree
A drop fell on the apple tree
Another on the roof
A half a dozen kissed the eaves
And made the gables laugh (Stanza 1, line 1-4)
Based on the sentences above, I can be predicted something was drop
fell on the apple tree or on the roof is “rainy” (inanimate things). And the
sentences line 3 shows personification, kiss and laugh is human nature. Kissed
the eaves here means which the rainy a drop fell on the eaves while the gables
laugh means the resulting sound of rainy falling on the roof like sound of
people who were laughing.
A few went out to help the brook
That went to help the sea (Stanza 2, line 5-6)
The two sentences above shows about the kind of personification from
the word „went out help and went to help‟ something is human nature, the two
sentences means the rainy can increase the volume of water in river sand the
sea..
The birds jocoser sung
The sunshine threw his hat away (Stanza 3, line 10-11)
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The Personification in this sentence is shown in word “sung” and
“threw” that actually is the nature of human. For line 10, the birds cannot to
sing, it implied that sing in here is chirp and the sun cannot to threw and don‟t
have a hat.
The breezes brought dejected
And bathed them in the glee
The East put out a single flag (Stanza 4, line 13-15)
The Personification in this sentence is shown in word “brought
detected”, “ bathed “, and put out a single flag, line 13, 14, ad 15 can be
interpreted breeze take away the sadness and replaced with excitement.
A.1.4 Hyperbole
Hyperbole is simply exaggeration, but exaggeration in the service of truth
(Perrine, 1987:581). The result of analysis and discussion of simile in the poem
below:
A.1.4.1 a bird came down the walk
Than oars divide the ocean,
Too silver for a seam,
Or butterflies, off banks of noon, (Stanza 5, line17-19)
The sentences above describes about the action of bird when he look
someone offered him a food, the bird unrolled his feathers and go far. Emily
uses hyperbole in this poem, all of the words is exaggeration, but three
sentences is very beautiful and interesting.
A.1.4.2 A drop fell on the apple tree
In this poem, it can‟t be found the hyperbole.
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A.1.5 Pleonasm
Pleonasm is the superfluous use of words. Pleonasm may consist of needless
repetition, or of the addition of unnecessary words in an effort to express an
idea completely, or of a combination of the two (Holman, 1980:335). The
result of analysis and discussion of simile in the poem below:
A.1.5.1 a bird came down the walk
And ate the fellow, raw (line 4)
Pleonasm in this sentence is shown in word “raw”. It indicate that the
living in the hard place can influence the condition of person. He/she can show
about the situation where the subject want to get better life. It also can be seen
all kinds of food for a bird is a raw food, the poem has been explained that the
bird eating a worm, and it is impossible that the worms are cooked condition.
So the word "raw" it said pleonastic, but the use of this figure of speech poem
look more beautiful..
A.1.5.2 a drop fell on the apple tree
In this poem, it can‟t be found the pleonasm.
A.1.6 Euphemism
Euphemism is a figure of speech which an indirect statement is substituted for
a direct one in an effort to avoid bluntness. Euphemistic terms have been much
used by many writers in an effort to mention a disagreeable idea in an
agreeable manner. (Holman, 1980:174). The result of analysis and discussion
of simile in the poem below:
A.1.6.1 a bird came down the walk
From a convenient grass (Stanza 2, line 2)
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In this part, the author uses the word grass as the symbol of life
from the author. In this stanza is found the euphemism that show about the
situation from the writer. The sentence above shows euphemism, because from
this sentences that the author wants to effort to avoid bluntness with smoothing
out the word so that it makes the poem be beautiful.
A.1.6.2 a drop fell on the apple tree
In this poem, it can‟t be found the euphemism.
Based on analysis, the writer concludes that “a Bird came down the
walk and a drop fell on the apple tree”, Emily Dickinson‟s poems uses many
figurative languages. For the poem “A Bird came down the walk” uses six
figure of speech, they are simile, metaphor, hyperbole, euphemism,
personification and pleonasm while the poem “A drop fell on the apple tree”
only use two figure of speech, it is a personification and metaphor. Among the
kind of figure of speech presented in this study, personification is the most
frequently appear in the two poems. And all of figure of speech uses in the
Emily Dickinson‟s poems make a poem to be a beautiful poem and to indicate
his unique writing style.
B. The Purpose of Figurative Language that used in The Emily Dickinson’s
poem of nature
Based on the data of analysis above, the writer concludes that she finds
some purpose that the author wants. There are some purposes that why Emily
Dickinson uses a lot of figurative language in the poems a bird came down the
walk and a drop fell on the apple tree. First, the use of figurative language
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make easy to convey the content of the poems, and the way it manages to make
the reader more easily understands the purpose of the poems. The language
used to make what is described more impressive, as the following sentence: (A
Bird came down the walk)
Than oars divide the ocean
Too silver for a seam,
Or butterflies, off banks of noon,
Leap, splash less, as they swim (Stanza 5, line17- 20)
From this stanza of poem shows that there are some purposes from the
author that he want to do later. Emily Dickinson describes action of the bird
when he get offering some food from someone, this sentences is very
descriptive and beautiful.
Secondly, A Bird came down the walk and a drop fell on the apple tree
use much personification to assist the readers understanding of the massage
that Emily Dickinson tries to portray. Emily Dickinson describes all the
elements contain at the poem to represent elements in the nature. For example:
He glanced with rapid eyes (A Bird came down the walk poem: Stanza 3, line
1), the sunshine threw his hat away (A drop fell on the apple tree: Stanza 3,
line 11), and etc.
And the last, this poem implicitly gives the reader knowledge about the
values of life in the nature. Emily Dickinson want to give more human
characteristic of what she sees in the nature. His idea is telling the readers that
the nature is poem and able to describe how its feeling and that make those two
poems more imaginative and livelier.
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CHAPTER V
CONCLUSION
After analyzing figurative language in Emily Dickinson‟s poems above with the
title “A Bird came down the walk and a drop fell on the apple tree”, the writer can
conclude that Emily Dickinson uses many figurative languages to indicate his unique
writing style. It also makes the readers easy to understand the intent contained in the
poem.
Before that, the writer describes the phenomenon of situation in the poem a
bird come down the walk. It shows to the readers that the life of human being needs the
effort and work. And in the poem a drop fell on the apple tree describes about the
falling someone in the apple tree. It means that every people often gets falling down in
his life. After falling down he changes his life better than before. He gets the happiness
in his life (apple tree).
Figurative language can be found from two poems “Emily Dickinson (a bird
came down the walk and a drop fell on the apple tree), for the poem “A Bird came
down the walk” uses six figure of speech, they are simile, metaphor, hyperbole,
euphemism, personification and pleonasm while the poem “A drop fell on the apple
tree” only use two figure of speech, it is a personification and metaphor. Among the
kind of figure of speech presented in this study, personification is the most frequently
appear in the two poems.
The writer concludes there are some purposes that why Emily Dickinson uses a
lot of figurative language in these poems a bird came down the walk and A drop fell on
the apple tree. First, the use of figurative language make easy to convey the content of
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the poems, and the way it manages to make the reader more easily understands the
purpose of the poems. Secondly, A Bird came down the walk and A drop fell on the
apple tree use much symbolism to assist the readers understanding of the massage that
Emily Dickinson tries to portray. And the last, this poem implicitly gives the reader
knowledge about the values of life in the nature.
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APPENDIX I
A bird came down the walk (poem)
A drop fell on the apple tree (poem)
APPENDIX II
BIOGRAPHY OF EMILY DICKINSON
Emily Elizabeth Dickinson, the "Belle of Amherst", is one of the most highly-regarded
poets ever to write. In America, perhaps only Walt Whitman is her equal in legend and in
degree of influence. She is considered one of the great American poets. Dickinson, the famous
recluse dressed in white, secretly produced an enormous canon of poetry while locked in her
room and refusing visitor after visitor. Her personal life and its mysteries have sometimes
overshadowed her achievements in poetry and her extraordinary innovations in poetic form, to
the dismay of some scholars.
Dickinson was born in December of 1830 to a well-known family, long established in
New England. Her family lived in the then-small farming town of Amherst, Massachusetts.
The middle child, Dickinson was adored by both her older brother Austin and her younger
Dickinson Lavinia. Her relationship with her mother was distant, and though she was likely
her father's favorite, her relationship with him was sometimes frosty.
Dickinson regularly attended her family's church, and New England Calvinism
surrounded her. Dickinson stood out as an eccentric when, as a young girl, she refused to join
the church officially or even to call herself a Christian. At school she proved a good student,
but spent only one year at Mount Holyoke Female Seminary before leaving the school due to
health problems. In the years prior to her cloistered existence at the house in Amherst,
Dickinson was quite social, attending parties, impressing her father's Washington political
comrades during a trip there, and amusing everyone with her witticisms. Emily Dickinson was
a fun, fiercely intelligent, young woman.
Something changed in her life, and that change is one of the greatest mysteries
surrounding Dickinson's legend. Sometime around 1850 she began writing poetry. Her first
poems were traditional and followed established form, but as time passed and she began
producing huge amounts of poetry, Dickinson began experimenting. In 1855, Dickinson,
already a homebody, took a trip to Washington D.C. after much prodding from her family. She
also went to Philadelphia, spending three weeks there. While in Philadelphia, she made the
acquaintance of a brilliant, serious man named Dr. Charles Wadsworth, a married reverend at
one of the Presbyterian churches in the city. He was an arresting figure and Dickinson deeply
admired him. Most scholars agree that Wadsworth was the man Dickinson fell in love with,
and the man who inspired much of her love poetry. Just before he left his Philadelphia church
in 1861 to move to San Francisco, Wadsworth visited Dickinson to tell her of his plans to
leave. No one in the family witnessed their meeting, but when he left, Dickinson suffered a
nervous breakdown that incapacitated her for a week and nearly ruined her eyesight.
Dickinson was experimenting with the form and structure of the poem. Many of her
innovations form the basis of modern poetry. She sent her poems as birthday greetings and as
valentines, but her love poetry was private. She tied it in tight little bundles and hid it away.
She did, however, seek out a mentor in Thomas Wentworth Higginson, a prominent literary
critic in Boston. They began a correspondence that would last for the rest of her life. Though
she doggedly sought out his advice, she never took the advice he gave, much to Higginson's
annoyance.
During the 1860s and 1870s, Dickinson grew even more reclusive. She stopped
wearing clothes that had any hint of color and dressed only in white, she turned away almost
every visitor who came to see her, and she locked herself in her room for days at a time. In the
late 1870s and early 1880s, a number of people close to Dickinson died in quick succession,
including her mother, her friend Judge Otis Lord, her young nephew, her good friend Helen
Fiske Hunt and Dr. Charles Wadsworth.
In 1886, Dickinson's health began deteriorating and she found herself slowly
becoming an invalid. Dickinson was only fifty-six, but she was suffering from a severe case of
Bright's disease. She died on May 15, 1886, and was buried in a white coffin in Amherst.