Positive Comments / Diagnostic Targets: Development 4 Sustainable Feedback

Development 4 Sustainable Feedback

Development 4 Sustainable Feedback

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Positive Comments MAD Target

When undertaking your research you have produced a very detailed analysis of sustainable features. Excellent! Spelling, punctuation and grammar You need to ensure that you check and spell accurately the key words shared in all the lessons.

Spelling, punctuation and grammar You need to ensure that you check and spell accurately the key words shared in all the lessons. Highlight your key words. Use a dictionary to correct your spelling mistakes highlighted and copy out 5 times in the SPAG corrections section on your design page.

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When undertaking your research you have produced a detailed analysis of sustainable features Very good!

It is very important that you DO NOT simply describe what features the product has but rather explain and analyse the success or failure of those features.

Spelling, punctuation and grammar You must ensure you can read your writing and correct your spelling mistakes highlighted. Highlight your key words. Use a dictionary to correct your spelling mistakes highlighted and copy out 5 times in the SPAG corrections section on your design page.

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When undertaking your research you have produced an analysis of sustainable features. Well done!

It is very important that you DO NOT simply describe what features the product has but rather explain and analyse the success or failure of those features.

You need to improve your presentation. Make sure when you import an image that you double click on it to bring up the picture formatting toolbar.

Can you use the picture styles to improve your presentation? Remember don’t go over the top with lots of different styles. Pick one! Use it consistently throughout your folder.

Also remember to crop your images and resize

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When undertaking your research you have produced a detailed analysis of famous architects and their influences. Excellent! Spelling, punctuation and grammar You need to ensure that you check and spell accurately the key words shared in all the lessons.

You need to add more detail to your sustainable features and products research.

Why is the product you are researching a solution to the task? What are the main advantages and disadvantaged associated with the product? (for example solar panels) What improvements can be made to the product? Would it influence a first time buyer to purchase the house?

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You have produced an analysis of the research you have conducted. Highlight the advantages and disadvantages. Use a dictionary to correct your spelling mistakes highlighted and copy out 5 times in the SPAG corrections section on your design page.

You need to add more detail to your sustainable features and products research. • What do green facades do? • Why are they sustainable? • What are the main advantages of green

facades? • What are the disadvantages of green

facades? • Would your consumer purchase them? • How could they be improved? • Would you use them in your design?

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You have produced a detailed analysis of the research you have conducted. Highlight the advantages and disadvantages. Use a dictionary to correct your spelling mistakes highlighted and copy out 5 times in the SPAG corrections section on your design page.

You need to add more detail to your sustainable features and products research. • What do rainwater collectors do? • Why are they sustainable? • What are the main advantages of rainwater

collectors ? • What are the disadvantages of rainwater

collectors ? • Would your consumer purchase them? • How could they be improved? • Would you use them in your design?

Positive Comments / Diagnostic Targets: Development 4 Sustainable Feedback

Development 4 Sustainable Feedback

Development 4 Sustainable Feedback

SCOL A2L

Positive Comments MAD Target

Product design isn’t just about designing and making things. It is also about developing thinking skills that help each of us to judge the value of our own work and others’ work and to have confidence in the judgements we make. It is about identifying and solving problems through informed research that identifies key features, characteristics and components in other successful products and apply them to our own designs with confidence.

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Positive Comments MAD Target

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Positive Comments MAD Target

You need to add more detail to your sustainable features and products research. • What do solar panels do? • Why are they sustainable? • What are the main advantages of solar panels? • What are the disadvantages of solar panels? • Would your consumer purchase them? • How could they be improved? • Would you use them in your design?

You have produced an analysis of the research you have conducted. Highlight the advantages and disadvantages. Use a dictionary to correct your spelling mistakes highlighted and copy out 5 times in the SPAG corrections section on your design page.

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Positive Comments MAD Target

You need to add more detail to your sustainable features and products research. • What do wind turbines do? • Why are they sustainable? • What are the main advantages of wind turbines? • What are the disadvantages of wind turbines? • Would your consumer purchase them? • How could they be improved? • Would you use them in your design?

You have produced a detailed analysis of the research you have conducted. Highlight the advantages and disadvantages. Use a dictionary to correct your spelling mistakes highlighted and copy out 5 times in the SPAG corrections section on your design page.

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When undertaking your research you have produced an analysis of sustainable features and their impact. Well done!

It is very important that you DO NOT simply describe what features the product has but rather explain and analyse the success or failure of those features.

You have produced detailed research on solar panels, well done. Sometimes to solve a problem we need to remove a mental (and unnecessary) constriction, could you extend it further; Do solar panels have to have one function? Do solar panels have to be a rectangular shape?

You need to add more detail to your sustainable features and products research.

What other sustainable feature could you research?

• Rainwater collectors • Green roofs / green facades • Passive solar heating • Maximising sunlight (for example: light

wells) • Capturing kinetic energy

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When undertaking your research you have produced a detailed analysis of famous architects and their influences. Excellent! Spelling, punctuation and grammar You need to ensure that you check and spell accurately the key words shared in all the lessons.

Research how kinetic energy could be potentially harnessed in buildings Watch the video ‘London Underground’ on the link below. Research and suggest how you could harness kinetic energy in your own design?

http://www.designoutthebox.com/divergent.html.

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Positive Comments MAD Target

Product design isn’t just about designing and making things. It is also about developing thinking skills that help each of us to judge the value of our own work and others’ work and to have confidence in the judgements we make. It is about identifying and solving problems through informed research that identifies key features, characteristics and components in other successful products and apply them to our own designs with confidence.

You need to add more detail to your sustainable features and products research. • What do green roofs do? • Why are they sustainable? • What are the main advantages of green roofs? • What are the disadvantages of green roofs? • Would your consumer purchase them? • How could they be improved? • Would you use them in your design?