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Acting on Feedback. How to use essay feedback constructively. Purpose of feedback. Feedback and comments on essays should explain areas where improvement could be made It is important to understand the comments that tutors often make - PowerPoint PPT PresentationTRANSCRIPT
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ACTING ON FEEDBACKHow to use essay feedback constructively
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Purpose of feedback Feedback and comments on essays
should explain areas where improvement could be made
It is important to understand the comments that tutors often make
Rectifying these areas can lead to significant improvements in future assignments
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Need for more..
Elaborate Explain further Expand Substantiate your claims Analyse
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Need for less…
Too descriptive No argument Too lengthy Not to the point Omit Confused/Unclear
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Argumentation – structure and flow
Take this further! Logic: Point B does not follow from A What is the connection? Fallacies
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Structure
Weak introduction Where is your thesis statement? So what? Weak conclusion
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Quality of research
Unreliable source Insufficient Research Misinterpretation Misrepresentation