pick up your english binder. turn to “tracking my growth in narrative writing: w73c.” pull up...

WELCOME! Pick up your English binder. Turn to “Tracking My Growth in

Narrative Writing: W73c.” Pull up your personal narrative on the

laptop.

Good News! 3rd hour is leading the English binder challenge! Organized and all in place. 6th – not well organized.5,6,8,9 – Not all binders put away in the proper place!

SENTENCE VARIETY & SENTENCE PATTERN 4 Sentence pattern 4 – open with an

adverb An adverb:

A word that changes a verb, adjective or another adverb by telling how something is done, when something is done, where something is done, or to what extent something is done.

NOW FOR THE W73C These adverbs are ALSO transitions!

1. Currently, 10. *Sleepily,2. Immediately, 11. Quickly,3. Recently, 12. Carefully4. Gradually,5. Presently,6. Simultaneously,7. Briefly,8. Finally,9. Suddenly

*Sleepily – may or may not be a transition, but will definitely work for pattern.

YOUR PEER’S TEXTThe dog was catching up. He bit my ankle while I was climbing up the fence. I finally made it out the stranger’s yard.

…Finally, I made it out of the stranger’s yard.

YOUR PEER’S TEXTWhere can we add an adverb?I kept getting killed over and over again. I just wanted to throw my control out the window. I was so mad that I quit playing the game.

Eventually, I was so mad that I quit playing the game.

ADDING SENTENCE PATTERN 4 TO YOUR WRITING… Look through your personal narrative and

find a sentence that starts with a word ending in “ly.”

If you do not have a sentence starting with an adverb ending in "ly," then edit a sentence to begin with an adverb.

Done with Pattern 4 and your story? Dialogue! Hooks! Closings Go to Weebly and look at more revising ideas.

Final Draft – due Friday

NOW FOR THE W73C These adverbs are ALSO transitions!

1. Currently, 10. *Sleepily,2. Immediately, 11. Quickly,3. Recently, 12. Carefully4. Gradually,5. Presently,6. Simultaneously,7. Briefly,8. Finally,9. Suddenly

*Sleepily – may or may not be a transition, but will definitely work for pattern.

EXIT Planner – CW: Add an adverb; HW –

final draft of story due Friday at the end of class.

Put your name on a Post-It. Put your Post-It on the board. I feel great about my story being done by Friday.

I hope my story will be done by Friday.Friday? You can’t be serious.

Log off. 9th hour – put computers away. Put away binders

E&R Take out a sheet of paper. Write your

heading. Write the title: Social Media Effects After taking the quiz, write a

PARAGRAPH1st sentence (topic sentence) – main

idea of the article.Include 3 pieces of evidence from the

article.Include: who, what, where, when, whyLast sentence – closing idea