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My table of Contents

Melissa Chin

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The changes that I made here was that I changed the The changes that I made here was that I changed the wording slightly which made the editors letter seem wording slightly which made the editors letter seem

more appealing to the reader. more appealing to the reader.

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First DraftFirst Draft

Second DraftSecond Draft

I changed the I changed the heading of my heading of my

table of contents table of contents from “Contents from “Contents

Page” to Page” to “Contents” as “Contents” as

this takes up less this takes up less space and makes space and makes

the page seem the page seem more more

presentable presentable

ChangesChanges Here I realigned the editorial pillars Here I realigned the editorial pillars on my contents page, using the Grid on my contents page, using the Grid

tool on Adobe Photoshop . tool on Adobe Photoshop .

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I used the magnetic lasso tool to crop the I used the magnetic lasso tool to crop the background out of the picture. So that I background out of the picture. So that I

can place on my contents page. can place on my contents page.