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And the word became text:
to the clause and beyond
Daniel O’Sullivan
Sessional Teacher – MEB Uni Clayton Campus
Professional Development Day
3rd November 2015
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And the word became text:
to the clause and beyond
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Agenda
1 Layers of language
2 The elephant in the room
3 From the word to the group
4 From the group to the clause
5 From the clause to the sentence
6 Activities/practice
Layers of language: from the word to text
Text (genre): reports, essays, summaries etc.
Paragraphs: “introduction”, “body”, “conclusion”
Sentences: simple, compound, complex, non-defining clauses
Clauses: clause structure
Groups: group/phrase structure – from simple to complex (def. clauses)
Words: spelling, pronunciation features
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Layers of language: top-down/bottom-up
Text (genre): reports, essays, summaries etc.
Paragraphs: “introduction”, “body”, “conclusion”
Sentences: simple, compound, complex, non-defining clauses
Clauses: clause structure
Groups: group/phrase structure – from simple to complex (def. clauses)
Words: spelling, pronunciation features
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Whole text Paragraph Sentence
(grammar)
Word
(grammar &
lexis)
Expressing
ideas
?
Developing
ideas
Interacting
with others
Organizing
cohesive texts
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Whole text Paragraph Sentence
(grammar)
Word
(grammar &
lexis)
Expressing
ideas
?
Developing
ideas
Interacting
with others
Organizing
cohesive texts
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Grammar: from the word to the clause
Words
groups
clauses
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Words
Word class: how would you explain these words to a student?
adjective adverb noun
verb article conjunction
preposition pronoun
Parts of speech identify the class of a word and are a good starting point.
However, they fail to cover the linguistic complexity that our students face.
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Limitations of “parts of speech”
What is the class of Bathurst, town and country in the following
clauses?
– Bathurst is a town in the country.
– Bathurst is a country town.
– My cousin has bought a town house in Bathurst.
– Stop here for a real Bathurst experience.
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Limitations of “parts of speech”
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Limitations of “parts of speech”
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Limitations of “parts of speech”
– Bathurst is a town in the country.
– Bathurst is a country town.
– My cousin has bought a town house in Bathurst.
– Stop here for a real Bathurst experience.
Bathurst, town and country in sentence 1 are nouns. But what
about country in sentence 2, town in 3 or even Bathurst in 4? In
terms of Class, they are nouns, but here they play in different role in
terms of Function. How can we make this visible to students?
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What now?
Moving above and beyond the words to larger ‘blocks’ of meaning
Taking the step from class to function
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From words to groups: nominal groups
What are the nominal groups?
– Bathurst is a town in the country.
– Bathurst is a country town.
– My cousin has bought a town house in Bathurst.
– Stop here for a real Bathurst experience.
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From words to groups: nominal groups
What are the nominal groups?
– Bathurst is a town in the country.
– Bathurst is a country town.
– My cousin has bought a town house in Bathurst.
– Stop here for a real Bathurst experience.
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From words to groups: nominal groups
The identification of a word class doesn’t always aid understanding
How do we understand meaning in nominal groups?
How can we teach this?
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Nominal groups: “traditional” grammar
Adjectives the delicious food
Noun modifiers the college student, chicken soup
Determiners:
– Articles a, an, the
– Demonstratives this, that
– Possessives my, his, her
– Quantifiers some, many
Complement:
– Prepositional phrases the student of physics
– ‘That’ clause the idea that the world is
a small village
- Subject Complement The best car safety device is a rear-view mirror with a cop
in it. (In this example, the first noun phrase is the subject,
and the second is a subject complement.) (Resource: http://www.grammar-monster.com/glossary/noun_phrases.htm
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Nominal groups: a functional perspective
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Nominal groups: a functional perspective
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Introducing this in class
Give an example identifying the function of the words
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Nominal groups: a functional perspective
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Activities with nominal groups
Students identify nominal groups in a text
Classify nominal groups into topic groups
Identify different functional parts
Modify describing adjectives
Substitute describing adjectives
Substitute a classifier
Extend description using describers and classifiers
Extend description using defining clauses and prepositional phrases
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Why is this useful?
Consider the following clause/sentence:
The term moraine refers to the rock debris carried or deposited by a glacier
What problems might a student have when reading this?
Which word(s) might students identify as the main verb?
What affect will this have on understanding meaning?
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Why is this useful?
With an understanding of the nominal group:
The term moraine refers to the rock debris carried or deposited by a glacier
The nominal group includes a defining clause
The defining clause includes 2 verbs
The main verb now becomes visible to the students
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Nominal groups: a functional perspective
Nominal groups are useful for understanding meaning and vocabulary
development.
Word banks of factual describers, classifiers and technical terms can be
built up when learning about a particular topic.
The nominal group also provides a meaningful context for addressing
some of the grammatical challenges students face with articles, word
order, prepositions and defining relative clauses.
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Group: verbs and verbal groups
A verbal group may consist of a single word or several words.
In English, the verbal group is the central part of a clause/sentence and
identifies the tense, aspect, voice, modality etc. In other languages, the
verbal group may not do so.
Students often struggle to identify the verb/verbal group, and hence the
central idea, in a clause/sentence. If they struggle to identify this, then
their writing suffers.
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Verbal groups
Auxiliary and/or main verbs
Type of verb (action/thinking/linking/reporting/ etc.)
Phrasal verbs (turn off the light)
Passive verbs (the grammar was understood by the students)
Tense and aspect (I walk, I was going to walk, I have walked)
Modality (I can/will/must study)
Multi-word verb groups (Everyone should be allowed to finish eating)
Non-finite verb groups (To be or not to be)
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Group: circumstances
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Group level: 3 functional groups
Nouns and nominal groups function as participants (e.g. subjects and
objects) to identify who/what’s involved
Verbs and verbal groups function processes to identify what’s happening
Circumstances function to give extra information such as place, time,
manner, accompaniment etc.
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Introducing these ideas in class
Give a model
Hand-over control to students
Build through feedback
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Modeling layers
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Students identify group function
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Consolidation
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Group level: 3 functional groups
The concepts of participants, processes and circumstances are
categories which explain in the most general way how phenomena,
ideas and experience are expressed in linguistic structures
Halliday & Matthiesen (2004: 178)
Once students can identify the groups in terms of the meanings they
make, then they are ready to think about their formation.
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From the groups to the clause
A clause must have a verb/verbal group
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Ambiguity
“This morning, I shot an elephant in my pyjamas”
What he was doing in my pyjamas, I’ll never know!
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Meaning in context
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Making groups and meaning visible
How? - By using colours!
Verb = red
Participant (subject/object) = black/blue
Circumstance = green
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Clause structure
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Blending class, function and group
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Blending class, function and group
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Clause structure
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From clauses to sentences
A clause must have a main verb/verbal group
A sentence contains at least one clause
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Sentence types
A simple sentence contains one clause
A compound sentence contains 2 (or more) independent clauses
A complex sentence contains 2 (or more) clauses, of which there must be
an independent clause and one (or more) dependent clauses
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Conjunctions/linking words
Between clauses?
– Compound (BOAS/FANBOYS)
– Complex (while/if/non-defining etc.)
Between sentences? Adverbials/text organisers?
More advanced
“Internal” = link ideas in clauses/sentences/paragraphs (paragraph level)
(so/and/although etc.)
“External” = rhetorically organise ideas/paragraphs across text (text level)
(on the other hand/in conclusion etc.)
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Linking clauses and sentences
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Sentence – clause – group – word
Top-down
Identify the number of sentences
Identify the number of clauses by highlighting verbs/verbal groups
Identify linking words (and logic relations) between clauses/sentences
Identify the functional groups within the clauses
Check meaning/understanding/function of words
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Word – group – clause – sentence
Bottom-up
Check meaning/understanding/function of words
Identify the functional groups within the clauses
Identify the number of clauses by highlighting verbs/verbal groups
Identify linking words (and logic) between clauses and/or sentences
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Group 1: Word/group level
– Identifying topic-based vocabulary/strands
– Word grammar/function/collocation
– Nominal relations: composition (parts/wholes)
classification (types)
Group 2: clause/sentence level
– Identifying main verb/verbal groups
– Identifying linking words (between clauses or sentences)
– logical relations
Group 3: nominal groups
– Construction and function
– Building subject-specific knowledge in nominal groups
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Function Examples of linguistic resources Relation to context
Expressing ideas Grammatical elements that build clauses
Constructing technical, specialized and
formal knowledge of a discipline
The topic or subject
Field
Connecting ideas Composition and classification
Conjunctions of cause, contrast etc
Relationships
between topics and
sub-topics
Interacting with
others
Evaluative language
Rhetorical resources like modality and
concession
Relationship between
writer and audience
Creating well-
organized and
cohesive texts
Organisers – text previews and topic
sentences
Cohesive devices
Channel of
communication as
spoken or written
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Function Examples of linguistic resources Relation to context
Expressing ideas Grammatical elements that build clauses
Constructing technical, specialized and
formal knowledge of a discipline
The topic or subject
Field
Connecting ideas Composition and classification
Conjunctions of cause, contrast etc
Relationships
between topics and
sub-topics
Interacting with
others
Evaluative language
Rhetorical resources like modality and
concession
Relationship between
writer and audience
Creating well-
organized and
cohesive texts
Organisers – text previews and topic
sentences
Cohesive devices
Channel of
communication as
spoken or written
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Function Examples of linguistic resources Relation to context
Expressing ideas Grammatical elements that build clauses
Constructing technical, specialized and
formal knowledge of a discipline
The topic or subject
Field
Connecting ideas Composition and classification
Conjunctions of cause, contrast etc
Relationships
between topics and
sub-topics
Interacting with
others
Evaluative language
Rhetorical resources like modality and
concession
Relationship between
writer and audience
Creating well-
organized and
cohesive texts
Organisers – text previews and topic
sentences
Cohesive devices
Channel of
communication as
spoken or written
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Function Examples of linguistic resources Relation to context
Expressing ideas Grammatical elements that build clauses
Constructing technical, specialized and
formal knowledge of a discipline
The topic or subject
Field
Connecting ideas Composition and classification
Conjunctions of cause, contrast etc
Relationships
between topics and
sub-topics
Interacting with
others
Evaluative language
Rhetorical resources like modality and
concession
Relationship between
writer and audience
Creating well-
organized and
cohesive texts
Organisers – textual connections; text
previews and topic sentences
Cohesive devices
Channel of
communication as
spoken or written
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Halliday, M.A.K. & Matthiessen, C.M.I.M. (2004). An introduction to functional grammar. 3rd edition, London: Edward Arnold.
Humphrey, Sally. (2013). And the word became text: A 4 x 4 toolkit for scaffolding writing in secondary English [online]. English in Australia, Vol.
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Images
Martin, J. [jodie__martin]. (2015, Aug. 23). Sometimes I think I have more fun doing my job than I really should. #sysfunc #transitivity [Tweet].
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Martin, J. [jodie__martin]. (2015, Aug 23). Hm... it's made it into the lecture. Gone more w the atom/solar system pic analogy than evil eye.
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