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And the word became text:

to the clause and beyond

Daniel O’Sullivan

Sessional Teacher – MEB Uni Clayton Campus

Professional Development Day

3rd November 2015

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And the word became text:

to the clause and beyond

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Agenda

1 Layers of language

2 The elephant in the room

3 From the word to the group

4 From the group to the clause

5 From the clause to the sentence

6 Activities/practice

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Layers of language: from the word to text

Text (genre): reports, essays, summaries etc.

Paragraphs: “introduction”, “body”, “conclusion”

Sentences: simple, compound, complex, non-defining clauses

Clauses: clause structure

Groups: group/phrase structure – from simple to complex (def. clauses)

Words: spelling, pronunciation features

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Layers of language: top-down/bottom-up

Text (genre): reports, essays, summaries etc.

Paragraphs: “introduction”, “body”, “conclusion”

Sentences: simple, compound, complex, non-defining clauses

Clauses: clause structure

Groups: group/phrase structure – from simple to complex (def. clauses)

Words: spelling, pronunciation features

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Whole text Paragraph Sentence

(grammar)

Word

(grammar &

lexis)

Expressing

ideas

?

Developing

ideas

Interacting

with others

Organizing

cohesive texts

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Whole text Paragraph Sentence

(grammar)

Word

(grammar &

lexis)

Expressing

ideas

?

Developing

ideas

Interacting

with others

Organizing

cohesive texts

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Grammar: from the word to the clause

Words

groups

clauses

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Words

Word class: how would you explain these words to a student?

adjective adverb noun

verb article conjunction

preposition pronoun

Parts of speech identify the class of a word and are a good starting point.

However, they fail to cover the linguistic complexity that our students face.

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Limitations of “parts of speech”

What is the class of Bathurst, town and country in the following

clauses?

– Bathurst is a town in the country.

– Bathurst is a country town.

– My cousin has bought a town house in Bathurst.

– Stop here for a real Bathurst experience.

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Limitations of “parts of speech”

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Limitations of “parts of speech”

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Limitations of “parts of speech”

– Bathurst is a town in the country.

– Bathurst is a country town.

– My cousin has bought a town house in Bathurst.

– Stop here for a real Bathurst experience.

Bathurst, town and country in sentence 1 are nouns. But what

about country in sentence 2, town in 3 or even Bathurst in 4? In

terms of Class, they are nouns, but here they play in different role in

terms of Function. How can we make this visible to students?

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What now?

Moving above and beyond the words to larger ‘blocks’ of meaning

Taking the step from class to function

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From words to groups: nominal groups

What are the nominal groups?

– Bathurst is a town in the country.

– Bathurst is a country town.

– My cousin has bought a town house in Bathurst.

– Stop here for a real Bathurst experience.

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From words to groups: nominal groups

What are the nominal groups?

– Bathurst is a town in the country.

– Bathurst is a country town.

– My cousin has bought a town house in Bathurst.

– Stop here for a real Bathurst experience.

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From words to groups: nominal groups

The identification of a word class doesn’t always aid understanding

How do we understand meaning in nominal groups?

How can we teach this?

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Nominal groups: “traditional” grammar

Adjectives the delicious food

Noun modifiers the college student, chicken soup

Determiners:

– Articles a, an, the

– Demonstratives this, that

– Possessives my, his, her

– Quantifiers some, many

Complement:

– Prepositional phrases the student of physics

– ‘That’ clause the idea that the world is

a small village

- Subject Complement The best car safety device is a rear-view mirror with a cop

in it. (In this example, the first noun phrase is the subject,

and the second is a subject complement.) (Resource: http://www.grammar-monster.com/glossary/noun_phrases.htm

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Nominal groups: a functional perspective

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Nominal groups: a functional perspective

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Introducing this in class

Give an example identifying the function of the words

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Nominal groups: a functional perspective

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Activities with nominal groups

Students identify nominal groups in a text

Classify nominal groups into topic groups

Identify different functional parts

Modify describing adjectives

Substitute describing adjectives

Substitute a classifier

Extend description using describers and classifiers

Extend description using defining clauses and prepositional phrases

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Why is this useful?

Consider the following clause/sentence:

The term moraine refers to the rock debris carried or deposited by a glacier

What problems might a student have when reading this?

Which word(s) might students identify as the main verb?

What affect will this have on understanding meaning?

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Why is this useful?

With an understanding of the nominal group:

The term moraine refers to the rock debris carried or deposited by a glacier

The nominal group includes a defining clause

The defining clause includes 2 verbs

The main verb now becomes visible to the students

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Nominal groups: a functional perspective

Nominal groups are useful for understanding meaning and vocabulary

development.

Word banks of factual describers, classifiers and technical terms can be

built up when learning about a particular topic.

The nominal group also provides a meaningful context for addressing

some of the grammatical challenges students face with articles, word

order, prepositions and defining relative clauses.

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Group: verbs and verbal groups

A verbal group may consist of a single word or several words.

In English, the verbal group is the central part of a clause/sentence and

identifies the tense, aspect, voice, modality etc. In other languages, the

verbal group may not do so.

Students often struggle to identify the verb/verbal group, and hence the

central idea, in a clause/sentence. If they struggle to identify this, then

their writing suffers.

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Verbal groups

Auxiliary and/or main verbs

Type of verb (action/thinking/linking/reporting/ etc.)

Phrasal verbs (turn off the light)

Passive verbs (the grammar was understood by the students)

Tense and aspect (I walk, I was going to walk, I have walked)

Modality (I can/will/must study)

Multi-word verb groups (Everyone should be allowed to finish eating)

Non-finite verb groups (To be or not to be)

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Group: circumstances

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Group level: 3 functional groups

Nouns and nominal groups function as participants (e.g. subjects and

objects) to identify who/what’s involved

Verbs and verbal groups function processes to identify what’s happening

Circumstances function to give extra information such as place, time,

manner, accompaniment etc.

)

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Introducing these ideas in class

Give a model

Hand-over control to students

Build through feedback

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Modeling layers

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Students identify group function

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Consolidation

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Group level: 3 functional groups

The concepts of participants, processes and circumstances are

categories which explain in the most general way how phenomena,

ideas and experience are expressed in linguistic structures

Halliday & Matthiesen (2004: 178)

Once students can identify the groups in terms of the meanings they

make, then they are ready to think about their formation.

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From the groups to the clause

A clause must have a verb/verbal group

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Ambiguity

“This morning, I shot an elephant in my pyjamas”

What he was doing in my pyjamas, I’ll never know!

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Meaning in context

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Making groups and meaning visible

How? - By using colours!

Verb = red

Participant (subject/object) = black/blue

Circumstance = green

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Clause structure

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Blending class, function and group

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Blending class, function and group

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Clause structure

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From clauses to sentences

A clause must have a main verb/verbal group

A sentence contains at least one clause

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Sentence types

A simple sentence contains one clause

A compound sentence contains 2 (or more) independent clauses

A complex sentence contains 2 (or more) clauses, of which there must be

an independent clause and one (or more) dependent clauses

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Conjunctions/linking words

Between clauses?

– Compound (BOAS/FANBOYS)

– Complex (while/if/non-defining etc.)

Between sentences? Adverbials/text organisers?

More advanced

“Internal” = link ideas in clauses/sentences/paragraphs (paragraph level)

(so/and/although etc.)

“External” = rhetorically organise ideas/paragraphs across text (text level)

(on the other hand/in conclusion etc.)

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Linking clauses and sentences

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Sentence – clause – group – word

Top-down

Identify the number of sentences

Identify the number of clauses by highlighting verbs/verbal groups

Identify linking words (and logic relations) between clauses/sentences

Identify the functional groups within the clauses

Check meaning/understanding/function of words

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Word – group – clause – sentence

Bottom-up

Check meaning/understanding/function of words

Identify the functional groups within the clauses

Identify the number of clauses by highlighting verbs/verbal groups

Identify linking words (and logic) between clauses and/or sentences

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Group 1: Word/group level

– Identifying topic-based vocabulary/strands

– Word grammar/function/collocation

– Nominal relations: composition (parts/wholes)

classification (types)

Group 2: clause/sentence level

– Identifying main verb/verbal groups

– Identifying linking words (between clauses or sentences)

– logical relations

Group 3: nominal groups

– Construction and function

– Building subject-specific knowledge in nominal groups

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Function Examples of linguistic resources Relation to context

Expressing ideas Grammatical elements that build clauses

Constructing technical, specialized and

formal knowledge of a discipline

The topic or subject

Field

Connecting ideas Composition and classification

Conjunctions of cause, contrast etc

Relationships

between topics and

sub-topics

Interacting with

others

Evaluative language

Rhetorical resources like modality and

concession

Relationship between

writer and audience

Creating well-

organized and

cohesive texts

Organisers – text previews and topic

sentences

Cohesive devices

Channel of

communication as

spoken or written

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Function Examples of linguistic resources Relation to context

Expressing ideas Grammatical elements that build clauses

Constructing technical, specialized and

formal knowledge of a discipline

The topic or subject

Field

Connecting ideas Composition and classification

Conjunctions of cause, contrast etc

Relationships

between topics and

sub-topics

Interacting with

others

Evaluative language

Rhetorical resources like modality and

concession

Relationship between

writer and audience

Creating well-

organized and

cohesive texts

Organisers – text previews and topic

sentences

Cohesive devices

Channel of

communication as

spoken or written

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Function Examples of linguistic resources Relation to context

Expressing ideas Grammatical elements that build clauses

Constructing technical, specialized and

formal knowledge of a discipline

The topic or subject

Field

Connecting ideas Composition and classification

Conjunctions of cause, contrast etc

Relationships

between topics and

sub-topics

Interacting with

others

Evaluative language

Rhetorical resources like modality and

concession

Relationship between

writer and audience

Creating well-

organized and

cohesive texts

Organisers – text previews and topic

sentences

Cohesive devices

Channel of

communication as

spoken or written

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Function Examples of linguistic resources Relation to context

Expressing ideas Grammatical elements that build clauses

Constructing technical, specialized and

formal knowledge of a discipline

The topic or subject

Field

Connecting ideas Composition and classification

Conjunctions of cause, contrast etc

Relationships

between topics and

sub-topics

Interacting with

others

Evaluative language

Rhetorical resources like modality and

concession

Relationship between

writer and audience

Creating well-

organized and

cohesive texts

Organisers – textual connections; text

previews and topic sentences

Cohesive devices

Channel of

communication as

spoken or written

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Halliday, M.A.K. & Matthiessen, C.M.I.M. (2004). An introduction to functional grammar. 3rd edition, London: Edward Arnold.

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