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The December issue of Northern Ireland's monthly poetry and arts magazine featuring the works of Clare McCotter, Aoife Reilly, Kushal Poddar, John Doyle, Simon Ferris, Christophe Bregaint & Peter O'Neill, Alistair Graham, Lynne S Viti, Marcus Strider Jones, Wim de Vlaams, Patrick Goodman and PW Bridgman

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Page 1: ANU issue 39 / A New Ulster

ISSN 2053-6119 (Print) ISSN 2053-6127 (Online)

Featuring the works of Clare McCotter, Aoife Reilly, Kushal

Poddar, John Doyle, Simon Ferris, Christophe Bregaint & Peter

O'Neill, Alistair Graham, Lynne S Viti, Marcus Strider Jones, Wim

de Vlaams,Patrick Goodman and PW Bridgman Hard copies

can be purchased from our website.

Issue No 39

December 2015

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A New Ulster Editor: Amos Greig

On the Wall Editor: Arizahn

Website Editor: Adam Rudden

ContentsContentsContentsContents

Editorial page 5

Clare McCotter; 1. Los Descansos

2. Mary Magdalene’s Foot

3. Saint Bernadette’s Ribs

4. Saint Catherine’s Head

Aoife Reilly;

1. Hydrogen plus Oxygen

2. Recycling

3. June at the Cabin

Kushal Poddar;

1. My Relationship With Light

2. One More Ghost To My Hallowed Evening

3. Space

4. Fragmented Family of Hope

5. Paradigm

6. Requesting The Source

7. Strangescape

8. Hobby House

John Doyle

1. External Affairs

2. Soul Runners

3. Tuone Udaina

Simon Ferris;

1. Stranger on the Waves (fiction)

Christophe Bregaint & Peter O’Neill;

1. Christophe Bregaint Microworlds

2. From Arcadia

3. Ground Zero

4. Ugolino

5. Land of Ire

Alistair Graham;

1. Maybe I’ll Strike it Lucky (Short Story)

Lynne S Viti;

1. Felus Catus

2. Salad Days

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3. The Stone in Your Chest

4. Early Morning in Kresson

5. Inclined Plane, Pulley, Wheel & Axle

Marcus Strider Jones;

1. Babylon’s Bohemian Bougquet

2. In Maid’s Water

3. You Colour the Charcoal Sea

4. Sins and Angels

5. On Tonquin Beach

6. Beautiful Mind

Wim de Vlaams;

1. Wandering Souls

On The WallOn The WallOn The WallOn The Wall

Message from the Alleycats page 53

Round the BackRound the BackRound the BackRound the Back

Patrick Goodman;

1. Interview

P W Bridgman;

1. Canyons of Shadow and Light Review

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Manuscripts, art work and letters to be sent to:

Submissions Editor

A New Ulster

23 High Street, Ballyhalbert BT22 1BL

Alternatively e-mail: [email protected]

See page 50 for further details and guidelines regarding submissions. Hard copy distribution is

available c/o Lapwing Publications, 1 Ballysillan Drive, Belfast BT14 8HQ

Digital distribution is via links on our website:

https://sites.google.com/site/anewulster/

Published in Baskerville Oldface & Times New Roman

Produced in Belfast & Ballyhalbert, Northern Ireland.

All rights reserved

The artists have reserved their right under Section 77

Of the Copyright, Design and Patents Act 1988

To be identified as the authors of their work.

ISSN 2053-6119 (Print)

ISSN 2053-6127 (Online)

Cover Image “Wanderers” by Amos Greig

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“There are no strangers here; Only friends you haven’t met ” Yeats.

Editorial

The past couple of months have been harrowing for the world in general I hope the

work within this issue helps ease some of that burden even if only for a few hours.

We have an interview with Patrick Goodman on his writing style his work looks impressive

and the novellas are worth reading. We also have a review of In the Canyons of Shadow and

Light a book by Emily Donoho.

This is our December issue and once again I find myself putting the final touches n this

issue while the situation in Syria worsens and the world still resonates with the attacks in Paris I

found some solace reading the poems and prose which make up this issue. Of course A New

Ulster wouldn’t be what it is without the poets and artists who submit their work each month

and this issue features some very strong material as well as some first time writers we also have

some established names for you.

We have prose and traditional poetry formats for you to explore I am just a gatekeeper

and today the door is open once more.

Enough pre-amble! Onto the creativity!

Amos Greig

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Biographical Note: Clare McCotterBiographical Note: Clare McCotterBiographical Note: Clare McCotterBiographical Note: Clare McCotter

Clare McCotter’s haiku, tanka and haibun have been published

in many parts of the world. She won the IHS Dóchas Ireland

Haiku Award 2010 and 2011. In 2013 she won The British

Tanka Award. She has published numerous peer-reviewed

articles on Belfast born Beatrice Grimshaw’s travel writing and

fiction. Her poetry has appeared in Abridged, Boyne Berries, The

Cannon’s Mouth, Crannóg, Cyphers, Decanto, Iota

(forthcoming), Irish Feminist Review, The Leaf Book Anthology

2008, The Linnet’s Wings, The Moth Magazine, The Poetry Bus

(forthcoming), Poetry24, Reflexion, Revival, The SHOp and The

Stinging Fly. Black Horse Running, her first collection of haiku,

tanka and haibun, was published in 2012. Home is

Kilrea, County Derry.

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Los Descansos

(Clare McCotter)

Descanso for Marie

in memory of Marie Oliver

Cleaning corridor and classroom

many a lesson you taught

speaking barely a word.

Never glad ragged

for a dance or walking out

even less said

time cancer called.

Plaster on the only walls

you ever owned

still not dry

that night

a fresh faced boy said

nothing more can be done.

For you Marie

we will build a descanso

of red oak and slate

tall at the sheskin bridge.

When the stream crosses

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a moss moon

your nieces will come

with a letter

and Byzantine icon.

Leaving under slim eaves

black bicycle bones

blanketed with snow in summer.

Descanso for Alice

in memory of Alice McGrath-Doherty

Not for you Alice a descanso

on Belfast’s Somerton Road.

In a niche

cut from white stone and glass

passersby will keep

your votive candle burning

at the gate

to Son John’s Rodden.

Placing there

beside the stalwart ghost

of an almond-eyed sight hound

a book of Persian verse

and carnation pink nail polish.

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Descanso for Maggie

in memory of Maggie McGill (née McGiugan)

Three in the morning

and the winter bird

is pouring song

over young ash boughs.

In their supple shade

opposite the house

mother Mailya built

we will fashion

a descanso

of cherry wood

and shingle.

Setting on its polished floor

phlox after rain

the Tuesday prayer

a neggin’ of fire water

and at its door

one stout white candle.

Lighting for you

the tracks

of small things

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that passed in the night.

Descanso for Bernie

in memory of Bernie Larkin (née McAtamney)

Some suggested Bann Terrace

Drumard or Dullaghy.

But really Bernie

only one place will do

the hedge at the end

of O’Neill’s Lane.

In an ambry

cut from whitethorn

photographs of five children

will be spread

on a kaleidoscope of thread.

In the mouth

of a multi-coloured fish

a silver needle

shining like a sickle

in an orchard of stars

will illumine hands

gathering still

for all the bare branches

blue sheaves of wild blue silk.

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Descanso for Katie

in memory of Katie McGill

The stride they called strut

your purple lipstick

auburn hair

menthol cigarettes

and French flares

caused a stir

returning from England in ’47.

Freestanding on the Point Hill

our marker for you

like those on the islands

will be glass

set in bright enamelled blue.

Stopping there

we will offer

in candlelight

Frank singing Mack the Knife

news of this or that

war wedding funeral

the Saturday crossword

a Dubonnet on ice.

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Leaving in an orchid box

gritty with desert sand

poems from the high snow fields

and from the borderlands.

Descanso for Sadie

in memory of Sadie McGill

In sodium light

the ash tree is a basilica

for the restless.

Among its branches

at Drumsaragh’s road end

we will fix your shrine

in a locker of ivy.

Laying in its glossy heart

a wooden comb

silver earrings

a green pilgrim stone

the old leather purse

you brought from France

decked with sprigs

of lowland cloth.

So the mistilan bird

can bring to you

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a pale blue speckled egg.

Descanso for Rose

in memory of Rose McShane (née O’Kane)

Steadfast on the gravel bed

at your roadside fence

we will place

a descanso of glass

and wrought iron.

Offering there

all you offered

Katie in the final years.

Spring water

from Donaghy’s well

grapes and trapeziums

of sweet melon

nectarines

and oil of geranium.

Leaving open

in a celandine moon

one small portal

for the true lover’s knot

night butterfly of the north.

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Descanso for Josephine

in memory of Josephine McCotter (née McGill)

Your ways the quietest ones

far from beaten tracks

this descanso

will be made for you

at the old railway house

on Martina’s Lane.

Few travellers

will notice

in a small recess

splitting

the first pine’s coral

olive wood beads

evening primrose balm

an hexagonal

of cloudy sea glass

hung to harvest sun.

Over painted fields

of iceberg blue

wherein a black horse runs.

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Mary Magdalene’s Foot

(Clare McCotter)

They claim this reliquary houses your foot

same witched by the beauty of the road

travelled back in the day

with Mary of Bethany

Martha and Salomé.

A myrrh bearer in eastern light

casting off sandals

before entering

the fields of the forest

your deep satchel in hazy dawn

brimming pomegranates and Syrian spices.

Prophet preacher priest evangelist apostle

wise woman of the black harp sea

telling others all you have seen

your footprint

beside morning’s stone

a weathered intaglio

washed in wild hyssop and water.

They could not know or you tell

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what drew you out

in quartz storms to the high bare places

fingertips wired to a stour of stars

wandering sole set on the dark red mineral earth.

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Saint Bernadette’s Ribs

(Clare McCotter)

She has a skylight in her side.

They came for the heart

her listed body

making them make do

with four right ribs.

If only they had known

it was all about the bones.

They were flutes

charming water

up from field and forest.

Hearing its timbre

in winter white or granite grey

mountain dialects

her delving hands reached

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deep down in mud

drawing a corm of cloud

out from its own dark silks.

Seeding translucence

in a stony foothill crevice

one sprouted

into a kind of presence.

Compassing in porphyry

a place of confluence

for the sad the sick the insane.

All their lights

and desperate dazzling dreams

stippling the snow meadows.

A mandala of minds.

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Saint Catherine’s Head

(Clare McCotter)

Times I wonder how it might be to lie down

with a spine and arms and legs

a pelvic bone spilling moon

over reed beds

where a crane pulls away to the stars.

But the migrants have gone

their white wings spread

on thermal streams above the earth’s panopticon.

Gazing on this chalice of bone some will think

the seat of consciousness

fitting memento

for in life I commanded crowds.

Philosopher preacher partisan

on the road with wayworn apostles

feeding pope and peasant

pearlescent seeds from rough cambric pockets.

They will say mine was already a body in pieces:

scalped starved sundered

before his spicy blade split a spasm of stars

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tangled in silvery psalms.

Little do they know

of creamy myrtle mornings

or green gold barley

scythed at midnight in the place of my petition.

So return this stern relic to the burnt sienna hills

burying it without marker

in a forest of jasper.

No more shall I remember

implore be implored

by the faithful unfaithful

soul craving succour.

All I want is the dark the deep adamantine dark.

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Biographical Note: Aoife Reilly

Aoife is a teacher and psychotherapist living in Galway,

Ireland. She attends poetry workshops at the Galway Arts

Centre with Kevin Higgins. Her poems have been published

in Crannóg, Skylight 47, The Galway Review, The Lake, in

other on-line magazines and on the Poethead website.

Aoife was recently short listed for the Doolin Poetry Prize

and long listed for the Over The Edge New Writer of the

Year award and have been a featured reader at Galway City

Library's Over The Edge literary event.

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Hydrogen plus Oxygen

(Aoife Reilly)

Yes, water laps like a lullaby

but it also thunders and growls through

crushed up stony river bends.

Do you prefer to soothsay or scream?

My water sears the air, rips the lid off pristine

streams down my back ,between my legs

in and around the archipelagos

of unborn plans and messy beds.

Maybe you know this undercurrent stream.

His water is a sea stained cry for lost selkies,

tunes for those who grab mackerel in silk ripple inlets,

For her it’s thousands of drops of sad

for the broken people, the fixed people, the in-between people

who imprint sweat beads and prayers tied to

dis solvable wishes beyond control

Once I felt the whip of it,

crystal cold across my fourteen year old face

right through the greasy kitchen window

no one ever cleaned.

I have lived with the lack of you, water

a rusty caravan and re-channeled

puddles around potholes and scree

til I knew the assorted ingredients of tears;

amrita, onions, underwater luminescence,

a half empty home on a rollercoasting love

Hydrogen plus oxygen.

The lump in your throat

and what comes after,

make sure you’re not quiet if you need to storm the well.

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Recycling

(Aoife Reilly)

Imagine a wand

that takes you where

it doesn’t matter anymore.

Where you can put love back

folded neatly and steam ironed

into the red polished box,

that really fancy one,

it pulls out reshaped facts and

sparks of kindness

without ribbons or medals or

claims to the Throne of First

in your hall of fame.

Imagine a space

that takes you beyond

your boxes and your bones

where there are no more words

when you walk and walk

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till there is nothing left of you

between the sand and the sun

but the exquisite truth

of your invisible recycling.

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June at the Cabin

(Aoife Reilly)

Why should her life

be worth less than mine?

Because she has grey wings

and a strange beat of heart?

I’d watched her for days

the simple flight of her

slight body slowing,

I pull her up from the lane.

They call her

in grieving circles above.

Smoky eyes, still warm

jackdaw body in my hands

soft downy nape

fine wings that carried her

through days now

slipping through the coming dark,

suspended summer scent of elder

to celebrate the going.

I trace the beauty patterns

across her life and mine

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gather up prayers

offer passing tunes

with some tobacco.

Two wings

two legs

life is what it is.

I carry her moment in my hand.

Tomorrow she will carry mine.

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Biographical Note: Kushall PoddarBiographical Note: Kushall PoddarBiographical Note: Kushall PoddarBiographical Note: Kushall Poddar

Born in a warm corner of India, a lone child and brought up with his

shadow mates, Kushal Poddar (1977- ) began writing verse at the age of

six. He adopted his second tongue as the language to dream on. Widely

published in several countries, prestigious anthologies included Men In

The Company of Women, Penn International MK etc, Van Gogh’s Ear,

been featured as the poet of the month by prestigious Tupelo Press and

featured in various radio programs in Canada and USA and collaborated

with photographers for an exhibition at Venice and with performers for

several audio publications, he once answered in an Interview- "This

morning a stranger from his seat next to mine in a public bus pointed out

toward the sky, Does not the blue look like a child in a cradle?

This is the role of poetry in our society. Poetry is a tool to arrest the vast

beyond within the canvas of personal experience. To limit the limitless so

our thirst and longing for it remains unquenched. And hence I write."

He was hailed by several authors as ‘the finest Indian Poets writing in

English’.

He is presently living at Kolkata and writing poetry, fictions and scripts for

short films when not engaged in his day job as a counsel/ lawyer in the

High Court At Calcutta. The forthcoming books are “Kafka Dreamed Of

Paprika” and “A Place For Your Ghost Animals”.

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My Relationship With Light (Kushal Poddar)

Snapped this selfie with light,

still holding its warm hand.

See, everything is seen

because I see, and it

let me see them.

My relationship

with light follows

a straight line.

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One More Ghost To My Hallowed Evening (Kushal Poddar)

What is one more ghost

to my Halloween?

A leaf, pile, fence

long waiting for cat.

In a sea of air

I breathe and drown,

and it won't let me die,

and it won't let me

survive. What is

one more autumn to

this life? Sometimes I

lie and rest supine

and see, instead of moon,

assorted darkness

stressed by occasional

lightnings. Let it rain.

You say. Oh shut up!

Stay inside my head.

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Space (Kushal Poddar)

The drone spacesuit

drowns in darkness.

Horizons. Horizons.

One grain of sand

speaks to the other

when storm comes.

And then I unclothe

my eyes to light gloom.

Walls. Walls.

One grain of loss

screams to the other.

Today the boy

forgot newspaper.

My meat suit still bends

and tries to unroll

the earth.

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Fragmented Family of Hope (Kushal Poddar)

1

Innate, I am wounded

and yet

the idiot in me seeks

ways to survive midst wrecks.

2

The pieces I gather

and glue together

to bring back my mother

rest on my palms.

Some for the house.

Some for the home.

One chip missing.

A hole in the wall.

I listen to the wind's whistling.

3

Inmate, I burble,

our plans sunk, and in this cell

we shall degenerate.

The shadow says,

I heard they will serve

Fresh vegs in the gruel.

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Paradigm (Kushal Poddar)

Shadows of abundance,

I slip into the dream abandoned midway

and gybe according to the drift.

Requesting The source

Just because I exist

I seek what I seek

and today I see

the mirror. Why don't

you stand still? It says.

I wipe the mist.

Strangescape

I know, no, I don't,

that the things I say

I see, don't exist.

What is to one more high,

one more low, sinking

slowly in what I

think but may not be

a deep end of some

water body?

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Hobby House (Kushal Poddar)

There stands my hobby house,

happy road, clouds of light,

clowns of grief making faces

we know best to ignore.

There her hand waves at me,

and we own the copyright

for waving, tilting heads,

deleting bad snaps from

the memory chip. There,

I squint my eyes, stand I

a thin door through which

I must pass to touch everything.

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Biographical Note: John DoyleBiographical Note: John DoyleBiographical Note: John DoyleBiographical Note: John Doyle

John Doyle, 39, from County Kildare has recently returned

to writing poetry after a considerable absence. He was

educated at N.U.I. Maynooth, and is influenced by a

diverse range of writers, many of whom do not adhere to

canonical peccadilloes.

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External Affairs

(John Doyle)

I am a siren,

my garden is my refuge;

isogloss rocks define me

from partial otherworlds.

My captors have sirens too -

car horns

they tell me someone has gotten married,

are then there are the war cries -

junior b hurling champions

carrying women over their shoulders from Clougherinkoe.

Some sirens meant war had ended -

"Tardelli... Scirea... Tardelli...

GOOOOOAAAAALLLLLL!!!"

nothing but watery Fanta-can sunsets for all of 1982 -

watch a child-siren sifting Bettystown sand,

a single grain a black hole nudging his fingers

on to a setting Sunday sun -

rocks sterlised by salty foam,

isogloss speech

baptised in translation.

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Soul Runners

(John Doyle)

Our muscles become roads -

tightened, hardened,

on highways we mocked,

our ages

have left us,

stamped as coffee-coloured muffled-leaves,

as we encroach from mountains,

Wicklow's limbs fall vitreously

where Dublin's depths even out.

Air is taut;

blue lakes chill our brows,

we are like towns who know ranges of death -

falsetto - peaceful sleeping pensioner,

baritone - retreating alcoholic with noose;

We are ones who wash our mouths clean of city-killers,

when afternoon snarls at our lapels,

we cleanse our clothes from foundry smoke

and we stop - briefly counting abacus beads of sweat;

Avanti - awaiting pines whisper our secret codes

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Tuone Udaina

(John Doyle)

And rocks commence their crumble,

grey-steel thunder pre-deceases

speech,

the water below you is breathless, chilly,

mercurial-blue;

But it is dust that clasps your throat,

hunts your penultimate expression

under a paper-flat musing of flesh, paper

without pen, black-red ink oozing for sea,

land and memory are a biting descent of childless love;

Tumbling rocks soften days so precisely,

archaic alphabets dry on your limpid tongue, motionless in pollen-like dust,

no earth, no land can warm its spores, your speech you see,

lighter than broken Autumn leaves,

a brusque snowfall, 10th of June -

every flake melted in your choking tone

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Biographical Note:Biographical Note:Biographical Note:Biographical Note: Simon FerrisSimon FerrisSimon FerrisSimon Ferris

Simon is a writer based in Donegal. He writes short fiction

and feature sports articles. Simon’s educational background

is in "Film and Television production."

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Stranger on the Waves

(Simon Ferris)

A small boat drifts along in the open sea as waves crash against its weak frame. On

the horizon a cluster of lights flicker in and out of sight. They are a glimmer of hope

for the stranger close to death inside. Amongst the lights a young boy stands by the

shore. He stares out into the sea, dreaming of what lies beyond the waves.

***

Rian Sweeney is twelve years old. He spends his days exploring the forest or on the

shore beside the sea. He plays with the neighbour’s dog and even talks to him

sometimes. On weekdays the school bus collects him and travel’s thirty kilometres to

where he has friends. Sometimes he has nightmares in which he misses the bus and all

his of friends forget him. Every weekend he dreams of a friend coming to him from

the forests or the ocean, one he could see anytime who would never forget him.

His father Diarmuid is known as a strong, brave man. Rian just knew him as his dad.

Nonetheless he grew up with stories of his father putting his life in danger countless

times to protect others. These stories inspired Rian; he wanted his own to tell

someday. So he asked his dad how to be like that. Diarmuid told him “If that’s who

you are then that’s how you will be. But instead of all that just be yourself; that will

make me more proud of you than anything.”

One hundred people make up the inhabitants of the town. They are a close knit

community. Everybody knows everybody else; apart from Rian who knows next to

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nobody. Every Saturday evening they gather in the local community centre for tea and

a town meeting. Usually to discuss what they can do to bring more tourists to town;

which was fine by Rian because the current crop just wouldn’t do.

One of those inhabitants is a widowed man named Avery. Rian got to know him

when he was seven, his mother had just died and Avery was kind to him. Diarmuid

was distraught. The strength and bravery he was known for waned and in its absence

numbness grew. Rian had taken to visiting Avery ever since, a habit that grew on the

old man with time. His wife had died a long time ago. He would tell Rian about all the

places he and his wife had travelled while they drank juice and ate biscuits. On one of

their visits he explained the towns name to Rian.

“This place like every other place in the world started out empty. People came from

everywhere and nowhere for one reason or another.” Avery took a big gulp of his

juice, which was in a smaller glass than Rian’s. It was the same colour as apple juice

but smelled like paint stripper. “Evangeline and I came here after the war. There were

only five other families living here then.” He put down his glass.

“So we called it Hermitage, do you know why?” Rian was after scoffing a chocolate

biscuit whole. He just managed to squeeze out the word “No” before choking. Avery

cracked a half smile, “We had all come here for the same thing. To build a life

somewhere safe; where we could let ourselves hope for better. Hermitage just so

happens to mean haven, so we thought it was poignant”. He paused, “in hindsight we

should have chosen something catchier. But we had consumed quite a lot of this

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delicious juice that particular evening”. Avery let out a chesty laugh before he too

choked.

***

Rian stood by the rocky shore skimming stones into the water. It was Saturday so he

wouldn’t get back here until tomorrow. His father would be expecting him at the

community centre soon. In the town shop doors crept closed. The barber flipped the

sign on his door from ‘Open’ to ‘Closed’. The butcher took off his apron, which did

indeed have more meat on it than Mrs. Barrett, as Avery once remarked. The people

of Hermitage made their leisurely way towards the top of the hill.

Rian was about to join them when he heard someone shout, “Help please.” He

glanced behind him towards town but nobody was there. The voice was unfamiliar to

him. “Here, in the water!” He looked towards the sea. Beyond the waves rushing into

shore he saw a small raft, or was it a fishing boat? He had never cared to learn the

difference. It was trapped behind some rocks about twenty or so yards from shore. The

light was fading fast as dusk crept in. He strained his eyes and could see a head

peeking out, barely visible. “What are you doing out there?” Rian shouted to the

waves. “Help me please.” A ladies voice replied clearer with desperation in her voice

and the young boy felt scared.

He turned on his heels and ran for the town. His father would know what to do. The

Main Street was small, narrow and on a hill, at the top of which was the community

centre. Everybody from town would be there. They could all help the lady in the boat.

Rian was sure of it. He danced over the cobblestones, his shadow appearing and

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disappearing with the street lights. He slammed through the doors into the community

centre and whipped his head from side to side in search of his father’s face. He was

near the front with his head bowed forwards speaking to Avery.

An empty chair sat on his father’s left where Rian would be sitting by now any other

Saturday. “Dad” he did his best to whisper as he got closer to his father, “Quick,

there’s a lady trapped in a boat down at the water. We have to help her.” His father

looked towards his son with a less concerned expression than Rian had hoped for.

“Who is trapped?” Diarmuid asked scanning the room in search of an empty seat,

there were none. Rian pulled at his dad’s coat “Come quick.” Avery leaned across

Diarmuid and looked Rian in the eyes, “Calm down lad I’ll talk to Mr. Barrett.”

Avery stood and made his way towards the front. When he reached Mr. Barrett he

began to whisper something to him. He turned and pointed towards Rian which made

the boy shift in his seat uncomfortably. Rian wondered if he was in trouble and why

they hadn’t just gone to help the lady. Mr. Barrett was a stout man with a generally

vacant expression. Diarmuid once said he was the self-appointed Mayor of Hermitage.

“Nobody else wanted it so it was just easier to let the poor sod have at it.” He had said

smirking.

Diarmuid made a hushing motion towards Rian when Avery sat back down,

anticipating that his son about to start asking questions. Everybody was glancing from

Rian to Mr. Barrett. Rian’s feet were tapping on the wooden floor impatiently. Mr.

Barrett cleared his throat and started speaking, “A stranger has got, eh, stuck on the

rocks by the water. Do any of you here know this person?” he asked. Rian couldn’t

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believe what he was hearing. He couldn’t understand why nobody was doing anything

“We need to help her!” Rian shouted. He was standing now, he hadn’t consciously

shouted or stood up but there he was doing both.

His father tried to pull him by the arm back onto his seat but Rian pulled back and

glared around the room once again. “Why are you all just sitting there?” He roared,

his words echoed back to him undisturbed, still they did nothing. He looked to Avery

who was talking to his father and was certain they would make them help, but they

didn’t.

Mr. Barrett spoke again, “We have to be cautious here. We don’t know this person,

where they have come from or what they want. Just the other day I read in the

newspaper…” Rian felt the blood rise through his body. “Shut up you wingebag!

What does that matter; we have to help her or she’s going to die.” Rian’s father was

startled. He heard his wife Alice, named for courage, in his son’s words. She had

always said that Mr. Barrett was an ‘insufferable wingebag’. He couldn’t believe Rian

would be able to remember that.

Diarmuid stood and grabbed his son “We have to hurry.” Alice would never have sat

by and done nothing, not with her son watching. Together they ran through the front

door and down the steep hill of the town. They passed by the closed up shops as the

lights above guided their way. Behind them Avery followed as quick as he could, “We

don’t know this person, be careful.” he shouted after them. Rian’s stomach sank as he

ran. “Not Avery too” he thought. The hall had emptied after them as the others

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followed with caution. Rian and his father reached the shore-line out of breath and

gasping for air. They began searching the waves for signs of life.

“Hello? Are you there?” Rian shouted to the darkness. He heard the boat’s rhythmic

thud against the rocks. The lady’s head was no longer peeking up. Rian began to panic

“No! We waited too long. Why didn’t you come when I asked?” He hit his father as

hard as he could across the chest. Avery sat down on a rock and tried to reassure Rian.

“The boat’s still there. We can have someone fetch it in.” Rian couldn’t look at him.

The rest of the people slowly reached the shore and looked curiously towards the

water. “Why didn’t you help?” Rian bellowed at them. Most people stared at him with

looks of mild insult. It wasn’t there responsibility after all, “We didn’t make this

stranger come here.” The butcher said. A few others stared at the ground looking

embarrassed.

Avery struggled to his feet and walked towards Rian. He had told this boy that

everyone had come to this town for safety and hope, including himself. He put his

hand on Rian’s shoulder and could feel the boy shake with anger at him, at his father

and at this place. Avery felt ashamed of himself and his neighbours.

Suddenly Rian bolted into the water. He forced his legs through the waves. When he

got out far enough he dived forwards and began swinging his arms and legs as fast as

he could. He had to get to the boat. Maybe it’s not too late he thought desperately. He

heard his father roar after him “No! Wait!”

Diarmuid followed his son into the water. He dove straight in and began swimming

as fast as his body would allow. He saw Rian reach the raft, fling his arms towards it

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and cling to the edge. He had to reach his son. Rian’s fingertips inched away from the

edge. He was falling back into the water when Diarmuid caught him by the collar and

hoisted him into the boat.

Rian struggled for balance as the raft swayed back and forth. His father grabbed onto

the side “Check if she’s alive” he said. Rian leaned over the lady and whispered

“Hello, Are you okay?” She whispered “My baby”; he looked in her arms and saw

that she had a baby wrapped in a rag. The woman was soaking wet and shivering as

the baby lay still in her arms. Rian couldn’t tell if the child was breathing. “We have

to get them to the shore.” He said to his father.

Rian jumped into the water and grabbed the front of the boat. His father joined him

and they started trying to pull it free from the rocks. They struggled against the waves

and pulled as hard as they could. They couldn’t make it budge. A few others from the

town were in the water now. They reached Rian and his father. They all started

heaving at the boat until finally they dragged it beyond the rocks. At crawling speed

they made their way towards the shore.

Some people screamed when they saw the woman up close and cried when they

realised she had a baby. The butcher slipped away as unnoticed as he could. Most

were so shocked they seemed to be frozen solid. Mr. Barrett had gone to the town and

brought back some dry towels. He had also called for an ambulance. The last part he

announced as loud as possible. ‘God forbid nobody hears that he the brave and valiant

Mayor Wingebag had called for the ambulance’. Diarmuid thought as he rolled his

eyes towards Avery.

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Now Rian had his own story to tell. Not of bravery, it was about how the lady on the

boat needed help and was instead met with hesitation. He tried to imagine how he

would have felt if the people he had turned to wasted so much time deciding what to

do. He was afraid the lady and her baby wouldn’t survive, and frightened if this

happened again nobody would do anything different. What scared him the most was

how easy it was for so many to do so little.

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Biographical Note: Peter O’Neill & Christophe BregaintBiographical Note: Peter O’Neill & Christophe BregaintBiographical Note: Peter O’Neill & Christophe BregaintBiographical Note: Peter O’Neill & Christophe Bregaint

Christophe Bregaint was born in Paris in 1970. He is the

author of two collections of poems: A l'avant-garde des ruines, (Recours au Poeme Editeurs, 2015) and Route de nuit, ( LA DRAGONNE, 2015).

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The Micro-Poetics of Christophe Bregaint,

By Peter O' Neill

For a couple of years now I have been transversing the micro poems of the Parisian

based, and born,

poet Christophe Bregaint. Christophe posts his poems on a daily basis on his

Facebook page, to which I

am subscribed to. Needless to say, his output is prolific.

It is the daily nature of Christophe's 'micro-events' , his poems, that I firstly wish to

address here.

Parce que

rien

ne dérange

le quotidien

Inéluctable

Raccord

des crânes en

mouvement

dans un curieux

vertige

The above is the first part of a poem Christophe only recently posted on Fb, and it is

the term quotidien

which I wish to remark upon, the everyday in English. As it is a word which is so

essential in Bregaint's

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lexicon. Quotidien in French, of course, so much better describes the day to day

annihilation which

takes place in Paris, on Parisians who commute to and from work on a daily basis. It is

this most

exacting, specific engagement of Bregaint, with the quotidien, or everydayness, which

I find so utterly

compelling about his work.

Voila

vers quoi

tu cours

à travers

ta grille

de déchire

Jour après jour

tu vas et viens

sur ta méridien

du non-étre

si violent

mensonge

de ta vie

it is this

towards which you

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strive to circumscribe

behind the grill

which destroys

day after day

your comings and goings

under the meridian

of such non-Be-ing!

This violence

which lies

against all life

I told Christophe recently that I considered him to be the most quintessential of

Parisian poets, I used

the term terroir as oenologists, or winemakers, would use, in relation to his work, as it

refers to the

certain specific socio- geographic qualities which embody the make up of his micro-

cosmos.

Le quotidian is one essential ingredient, as is the colour grey, or gris. Everything is

grey in Bregaint's

universe, comme a Paris. Anyone who has lived for significant periods of time in the

French capital

will recognise this world which Christophe Bregaint writes about. It is the monstrous

soul destroying

grey which, like Nabokov with his butterflies, he nets and pins down for us. So that

we may inspect the

little micro beasts, which are sent down to destroy us, daily.

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Bouche

sèche

tu as

depuis longtemps

rencontré

en vertue

de ton dépérssement

ce cavallier de

l'apocalypse

sur

son monture noire

il a peaufiné

le travail

du mauvais sort

dans son sillage

ne reste

pour toi

que dénuement

l'épuissement de tes forces

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dry

mouth

for a long time

now you have known

by virtue of your encounter

with decay

the horseman

of the apocalypse

upon

his black mount

he has raffined

the labour

of his bad kind

in his wake

there only remains

for you

the extent

of your finite

powers

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In fact, so compelling do I find Christophe Bregaint's micro-poetics I use them as a

template to my

own cycle, which I am currently working on.

FROM ARCADIA

for Christophe Bregaint

Prayer

stealth death

the ice of it inhabits

now you must dig deep

for the morning to be ever so secure

catch the illicit warmth

through acts of sheer devotion

and possible blindness

enrapture

the rose cloth

of dull habit

there's your plough

now furrow

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Ground Zero

your graft now

with the old thoughts

the body too

swinging into

blue bloody ruin

the environment also to consider

all manner of pungent manure

weighing heavy upon the air

while below

the strata of fauna

with an eye too on the kill

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Ugolino

and the contradictions

of the palate

the rose of taste

on the tongue

to the flesh

how to reconcile your scripture to it

the great Bibleless night

all Rembrandtean storm

O holy Samaritan

but the hammer of the claviers

so thrills to the fever of such matters

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Land of Ire

esse est percepi ( Berkeley)

state of negation

the self annihilated

piecemeal

and on a daily basis

weather too

as if in on the conspiracy

boycott by water

piss on 'it'

image of a little stony wall

erected in small fields

spread out like a patchwork

throughout the

country

no stone left unturned

such is the nuomenon

that is perceived

masonic advancement

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Biographical Note: Alistair Graham

Alistair lives and works in Belfast.

He has two published collections;

War and Want

Streets of Belfast

Both published by Lapwing.

He is currently working on a third collection which is approaching

completion.

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Maybe I’ll Strike Lucky

(Alistair Graham)

Now that his wife was gone, it was Karl’s responsibility to water the house plants. He carried

a glass jug into the kitchen to fill it with water from the tap. The flow of water began to

splutter then it stopped. Karl looked at the tap. He took a sip of his whiskey from the glass

on the counter then turned the tap off and on, but still no water.

“God damn it,” he said. “How’s a man supposed to keep his plants alive if he can’t give

them water to drink? There are plants in every bloody room demanding my attention, staring

at me, watching me drink my whiskey while they sit gasping in their little deserts.”

Karl set the glass of whiskey on the counter and tried the tap once more. The water began

to flow faster, the jug filling up quickly until another splutter, a loud plop and gush, then a

tiny little man shot into the jug and down through the water to the bottom. The little man

waved his arms at Karl and shouted through the glass. Karl lifted an old wine bottle cork

from the shelf and dropped it into the jug.

“Use that to float,” he said. “Save your strength.”

The little man folded his arms around the cork and began shouting but it was difficult to

understand what he was saying. Karl picked the jug up close to his face.

“I have plans for you,” he said. “You will be the headline in the newspaper. Everyone will

want a piece of you.”

The little man spoke again but Karl could not understand; he took a mouthful of whiskey

from the glass.

“Fear not, little man,” he said. “I will take care of you and provide your every need.” Karl

looked at the two large plants sitting by the kitchen window then turned to the little man in

the jug.

“You will eat three meals per day and you can have the small bedroom at the back of the

house. It’s a quiet room, away from the traffic noise. I will teach you about the finer things

of life and what it is to live like a human; not like the Philistines. I will teach you to sew and

knit and how to grow all manner of plants and flowers and things to eat and I will show you

how to make clay pots and paint pictures of your favourite things.”

The little man looked at Karl through the jug.

“Don’t worry, little man. I’ll give you instruction on everything and I’ll teach you the

whistle and guitar. I’ll find you a partner to share your bed and if she can’t be found we’ll

use one of your ribs to create her.”

The little man kicked his legs and moved across the water. He put his face against the

glass. “You’ll not even know the rib has gone,” Karl said, taking a large gulp of his

whiskey. “And when I breathe into her nostrils she’ll be ripe and ready and the pair of you

can run off to a bush for some fun and when you return I will have your new clothes laid out

on your bed and towels for after you shower and that evening we’ll throw a party.”

The little man looked up at Karl. Karl smiled back to reassure him.

“Let’s get you out of the water, you must be tired.”

Karl put the little man into a deep sided roasting dish with folded kitchen paper for him to

lie on. Karl wondered if the little man was embarrassed by his nakedness. He searched the

bottom drawer and found a lace doily which he wrapped around the little man’s body and

gently tied it with a small piece of string.

“You can stay in this dish for now while I check all the taps for your friend, the girl, I

mean; the one you’ll spend your life with.”

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Karl knew the little man would be lonely without a partner and would find it difficult to

survive on his own. He lifted the glass jug and walked back to the kitchen tap. The water

flowed at normal pace. He let the water run for a minute then turned the tap off. He ran up to

the bathroom and put the plug in the bath and in the sink before turning on the taps. Karl

watched the water run then turned the taps off and sat on the side of the bath to think. He

knew there would not be another little person. Why should there be? One little person from

a tap was crazy, two would be unthinkable. I’ll make him a wife, he thought. Yes, if I can’t

find a wife, I’ll make him one.

Karl began to imagine the great new life he would make for the little man and what name

he would give him. I can’t make plans for his future, his security and happiness if he doesn’t

have a name, Karl thought. He’s nobody without a name; a man with no name is nobody.

Karl stood up and looked in the mirrored doors of the wall cabinet. “Of course,” he said out

loud, “his name shall be Alan, after my father; Alan is a fine name for the little fellow.”

From the wall cabinet he took the razor he would use to remove the rib. The plastic piece

surrounding the blade came away easily. He poured a little disinfectant into the cap of the

shaving gel can and submerged the blade in the liquid. He carried the cap with the blade

down to the kitchen taking care not to spill the contents. Alan was asleep so Karl left him

alone and made a cup of coffee. The little man would need all his strength for the operation,

thought Karl, and to make a speedy recovery. It will all be worth it; yes, Alan will be happy

with his new wife and the house will be full of life again.

Karl walked out to the garden table with his coffee and lit a cigarette. He looked up at the

kitchen window to the roasting dish on the worktop. This could be a fresh start for me, he

thought. The house has been so empty. A writer needs solitude but being totally alone all of

the time was the road to madness. This could be the inspiration I have been searching for. It

could be a new beginning for my writing career, a chance to make my name. Karl stubbed

out his cigarette and got up to go back into the house.

“How are you?” the voice said.

Karl turned around. His neighbour was across the fence.

“I’m fine,” Karl said, “it’s a great day isn’t it?” Karl thought of Alan in the kitchen. He

wondered if his neighbour had spotted Alan through the window.

“Smashing day,” said the neighbour, “what’s the craic, anything new or strange with you?”

“No, nothing strange with me today; I’m just enjoying a lazy Sunday morning.”

“Back to work tomorrow then?” his neighbour asked.

“I’m afraid so,” said Karl, “have to give the man his pound of flesh. Maybe I’ll strike

lucky, win the lottery or something.”

Karl thought about the lottery. He thought about Alan on the worktop. What if his

neighbour had spotted Alan? What if he calls the police and they cart them both off to the

mad house?

“I’m away in to watch the football,” his neighbour said, “speak to you later.”

Karl walked to the kitchen to check on Alan – as he closed the kitchen door the bells from

the church up the hill began to ring - Alan was asleep in the dish.

This is crazy, Karl thought. If I was to tell my neighbour that I have a two inch man

sleeping on my kitchen counter he would call me a crazy fool. But I’m not crazy; I’ll be

famous before long.

Karl took a mouthful of whiskey and looked at Alan lying in the dish. He was like an

ordinary human being in miniature form. His proportions were all correct; his head, his

shoulders, his torso, his limbs; all in proportion. His hair was dark brown and he had a thin

line for eyebrows.

Alan had pulled his arms up to his chest and was lying in the foetal position with the

kitchen paper over his shoulder. Karl wanted to pick him up and take him outside. Take him

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to meet his friends and maybe to the pub. He would like that, Karl thought. The smoking

room in the pub was always great craic when the right ones were there. Karl walked into the

living room and looked out the window. The traffic was light and the usual Sunday dog

walkers were strolling up and down the hill. He would take Alan out for a drive and have a

chat, after the operation. I want him to know I’m his friend, Karl thought. He can sit in the

little plastic dish on the dashboard. I will remove the loose change and place a glove inside

to make a comfortable seat. He can watch me drive and we can talk and have a laugh.

Karl got excited again. He was thinking about all the places he would take Alan; the

people they would meet. Karl looked at himself in the mirror on the wall.

“Hello young man,” he said to himself, smiling.

He thought again about Alan and the operation; he had promised him a friend for life. He

could not let him down. He needed Alan to be happy. If he’s not happy he may leave. I

can’t let that happen, he thought.

Karl was feeling stressed, exhausted. He decided to take a nap as he would need all his

strength, a clear head and a steady hand to perform the operation. He propped the cushions

on the sofa, took a gulp of whiskey and lay down with his head at the far end, out of the sun.

He lay for some time staring at the sky through the window, thinking of his wife and the life

they had shared. He fell asleep.

Karl slowly opened his eyes. The room was in darkness except for a little light near the

window from the street lights. He noticed the luminous hands on the clock on the fireplace

and jumped to his feet. “Alan? Christ, I’ve left the little man all this time!” He ran to the

kitchen.

There was a lamp in the kitchen on top of the fridge. Karl fumbled in the dark to find the

on switch. It was after 7pm and Alan was not in the oven dish. He had left Alan alone for

more than six hours. Karl switched on a second lamp on the counter and searched behind the

jars where he stored his tea and coffee. He lifted the large pile of unopened letters wedged

between the wall and the empty fruit bowl and spread them out on the counter but there was

no sign of Alan.

Karl felt a sharp pain in his chest. This can’t happen again, he thought; I can’t lose Alan

too.

“Please let me find Alan.” Tears flooded his eyes. “Alan, Alan, where are you Alan?”

Just then, Karl noticed a little hand waving from between the counter and the cooker. Alan

had slipped down into the small gap and had become wedged. Karl smiled and wiped the

tears from his eyes with the back of his hand. Using his fore finger and thumb, he gently

eased Alan up and out of the gap and set him back into his dish. He looked to be unharmed.

“How are you feeling?” Karl said. “Are you ok?

Alan looked at him as if he was a curious sight and then spoke. His voice was so gentle

Karl struggled to understand. Karl moved closer to the counter and leaned over.

“Are you hungry? Would you like something to eat?” Karl put his hand to his mouth and

made a chewing motion.

“Eat, would you like something to eat?”

Alan spoke a few words then stretched out his tiny arm and pointed across the room. Karl

spotted the blade on the counter in the sterilising liquid and remembered the operation.

“Of course,” he said. “You want your new wife, just like I promised.”

Karl glanced around the kitchen for a suitable spot and decided the small counter to the

left of the fridge would be perfect. The space was cluttered with dirty dishes and empty wine

bottles so he moved them to the other side of the sink. He wiped the counter surface with a

damp cloth and covered the area with two sheets of the Belfast Telegraph. He looked over

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both hands on the ridge, watching Karl’s every move. It’s a good job I didn’t give him

something to eat, Karl thought. An empty stomach is required before an operation. Karl

walked back into the lounge to get his glass. He finished the remaining whiskey and looked

at the clock. It was almost 8pm; he was feeling hungry. It was a quiet evening; the church

bells had stopped ringing. Maybe I should have my supper first, he thought. It wouldn’t be

wise for me to perform an operation on an empty stomach. Yes, I will eat first then

concentrate on Alan’s needs.

Karl opened a packet of noodles and placed them in a pot with water. He took the sharp

knife from the top drawer and placed four mushrooms and half an onion on the wooden

chopping board and roughly cut at the onion and clumsily sliced the mushrooms into large

lumps. Using the flat of the blade he crushed two garlic cloves and scraped all the

ingredients from the board into the pan to fry. He half-filled his glass with whiskey and

drank it down. When the noodles had softened he tossed the mushrooms, onions and garlic

into the pot and mixed them through with a pinch of chilli flakes. He carried the plate of food

to the small table in the corner of the kitchen and placed it at the single seat. He took a knife

and fork from the second drawer, lifted a glass from the cupboard and filled it with water

from the tap. He held the glass close to the light form the lamp and studied the contents.

This is my last supper, he thought. It’s the last supper of my old life so I shall drink wine

with my meal. Karl poured the water out of the glass into the sink.

In the cupboard under the stairs there were seven bottles of red wine. Karl picked up a

bottle and unscrewed the cap. The wine glass was sitting beside the sink with a hardened red

ring inside at the bottom. He washed it under the tap, dried it with a towel and filled it to the

top with wine.

Alan watched Karl move around the kitchen and stared at him as he ate from the plate and

drank from the glass. Karl finished his meal and put his plate with the other dishes beside the

sink. He filled his glass again and looked over to Alan.

“Right little man; we’re good to go. It’s time to get the show on the road. I’m going to get

you a beautiful new wife, a lover, a friend; someone you can spend all of your days with. Her

name will be Neave. Together you will be Alan and Neave. “

Alan looked at Karl as if he understood the words. Karl took the blade from the liquid and

placed it on the newspaper. He took the medical box from the third drawer and found the

smallest plaster which he would place over the small wound once the rib was removed. He

placed the plaster on the newspaper beside the blade before pouring another glass of wine.

He felt confident; knew things would turn out fine. He gently picked Alan up.

“Don’t worry little friend. Everything is going to be fine. You have my word.”

Karl moved his hands gently onto the counter and watched as Alan climbed off and lay

down on his back. I should wash my hands before the operation, Karl thought; can’t risk

infection. He rolled up his sleeves and washed his hands and arms with soap from the

dispenser. Alan lay on the newspaper staring at the ceiling. Karl shook the water from his

hands and walked over to where Alan lay. Just then the doorbell rang.

“Jesus, Christ,” Karl shouted. “Who-da-hell wants me on a Sunday night?”

Karl walked slowly into the lounge taking care not to be seen through the window. The

bell rang again.

“Christ,” Karl shouted. “Why can’t they just go away?”

Karl moved his head slowly to the edge of the curtain to see who was at the front door.

“Oh God,” he said in a low voice.

The next door neighbour was standing at his front door. He must have spotted Alan on the

kitchen counter, Karl thought. What does he want? It’s none of his business. I’ll open the

door and tell him so.

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Karl walked out to the hallway and up to the front door. He unlocked the top and bottom

bar and pulled the door open a little to put his head out.

“Yes, what is it?” he said. “I don’t like opening the door when it’s dark.”

“Margaret sent this for you. It’s beef from today’s roast. Too much for us to eat and it

would be a shame for it to be wasted.”

“Oh, thank you. Tell Margaret I said thank you.”

Karl took the parcel from the neighbour and closed the door. He locked the top and bottom

bolt and walked back into the kitchen.

“Excuse me for the interruption, Alan,” he said, as he placed the parcel of beef in the

fridge.

“That will make us a nice dinner tomorrow night. You’ll need to keep your strength up

after the operation.”

Karl carefully leaned over the counter and gently untied the lace doily to expose Alan’s

torso. He picked up the blade in his right hand and then froze. Beads of sweat covered his

face and neck. I can do this, he thought. He reached for his glass and gulped the wine. With

the blade, he gently cut into the flesh with a forward movement to make an opening. Alan

showed no sign of discomfort. With his thumb and forefinger, Karl gently prised open the

wound. It was difficult to see were the ribs began and ended as they were so tiny.

“Don’t move Alan. I will be back in a minute. Just stay still; everything will be fine.”

Karl knocked his glass over as he pulled away to run upstairs to the bedroom.

“The magnifying glass is in the bedside cabinet” he shouted. “Two minutes Alan! Lie

still, I will be back in two minutes!”

Karl searched the bedside cabinet and under the bed. He ran into the bedroom at the back

of the house; it was a mess of boxes, clothes piled high and books stacked in rows.

“I won’t be a minute Alan; hang in there buddy.”

Karl swiped at the rows of books and flung clothes to the back of the room.

“Where’s the bloody magnifying glass?”

Karl was on his knees riffling through the mess on the floor when the magnifying glass

appeared to him. It was sitting on the window ledge just behind the curtain. “I found it!” he

shouted. He jumped to his feet, snatched the object and ran down the stairs into the kitchen.

Alan’s outstretched body lay at the edge of the newspaper in a pool of blood. He must

have walked a few steps then collapsed. Karl leaned over the counter and looked into Alan’s

eyes. He starred at the figure and sobbed like a child. His tears fell onto Alan’s tiny body.

“Alan, Alan, don’t leave me Alan!”

The eyes didn’t move; Alan was gone.

Karl picked up the wine glass beside the newspaper on the counter. He wiped the tears

from his eyes with the back of his hand. He opened another bottle of wine, filled the glass,

and walked into the lounge to think.

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Felus Catus

(Lynne S Viti)

There were never such green and wide

Catseyes as our cat’s eyes.

The hearing went. Those eyes

stayed big and wide, attentive. The ears

were dappled pink and black inside.

She loved it when you grabbed them gently,

Squeezed, then released them.

She’d shake her head, then come back for more.

She climbed on your lap each night

rubbed against your book, your laptop.

We joked she thought you were her mother.

She cried all the way to the animal clinic.

She couldn’t hear herself.

Her weight had fallen by another half-pound.

We could see her skeleton under her three-colored coat.

We remembered when she was plump,

when she deposited voles and small rabbits

on the back stoop, little presents.

Lately she slept, made a running start for the bed,

Grunt-growling as she catapulted onto the quilt.

She cried for reasons we didn’t know,

peed where she shouldn’t, made two-minute visits outside

twice, three, four times a night.

Today we laid her on the handmade quilt

Light green and white, plump with batting.

She rested on the cold steel table in

the examining room. The first shot

sedated her. Those bright eyes stayed wide open.

We stroked her head, her back,

her pink and black black paw pads.

The vet gave the second shot. We waited,

teary. He slid the stethoscope onto his ears,

touched it to her middle and said, “She’s gone.”

He gently closed her catseyes.

She lay as if napping.

You bent to kiss her small head, then turned,

picked up the empty pet carried. We

slipped out the back door.

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Salad Days

(Lynne S Viti)

We lived at home, were always home

for dinner. We thought we dressed like women

when we peeled off the school uniforms and slid into

plaid kilts, blouses with Peter Pan collars and circle pins,

loafers, on Friday night, for a church hall dance.

We thought we knew everything, though we only

knew everything about the things we read in books

or heard on the bus, or the street. We read

magazines to learn how to flirt.

Being sophisticated meant smoking Benson and Hedges—

we wondered how old we’d have to be

to drink at a cousin’ wedding.

Our mothers thought our world was crazy.

Too much Orbison and Presley, then in a whirr,

James Brown, the man in the orange cape, and

the Beatles, who made us scream, or the

subversive Dylan, who questioned us,

How does it feel, to be on your own?

--when our mothers wanted us safe—

Take the bus to school, be home on time.

No drinking, no smoking, study hard,

go to college. Find a nice boy. Get

married, stay in town. Our town, which

changed and burned, changed and burned again.

Some of us left, and those who

stayed didn’t always follow the playbook.

We are neither who we were when we were sixteen

nor are we different from who we were, inside,

even though we’ve tried like crazy to: speak up,

grow up, let go, not judge, relax, achieve, kick back,

question, breathe, believe, not believe—

Now we size ourselves up

against the dreams and goals and fantasies

we had as girls, the plans we spoke of,

the ones we hid. Back then, we didn’t say

It’s all good, but it is, all of it—

The paths and detours, all good, all worth

something, the living of it, the becoming,

never stepping into the same river twice.

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The Stone in Your Chest

(Lynne S Viti)

I never want to walk through the black door you’ve negotiated,

Into the place where mothers bury their sons.

--You didn’t want to, either. You deserved years

of bonding, smiling at the way things turned out well after

the hard years, the impossible maze your adolescent traipsed.

No matter the cause, it’s the backwardness of it that

Makes no sense. It’s the years that knit us to the children,

Then the final rift that drains away all hope. All reason.

If the end is drawn out, hours at the bedside,

Your child on catheters and tubes, fighting a good fight,

The end might mix relief, fatigue and endless loss,

A bitter cocktail at best.

If death is quick, unexpected, it could be worse—planes fall

Out of the sky, a user takes enough of the drug to feel

heroic, exceptional, and then takes more, falls

into the arms of Thanatos, son of Night and Darkness,

The shock, the sequel of the overdose stuns.

Or the intentional, planned and executed death—

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it strips those who loved of all feeling, then guilt, anger rise up—

there’s no way to put a good face on any of this.

You never forget, a woman told me years ago,

but with time it gets softer—around the edges of memory,

you forget how sharp the loss. Our mutual friend had

ended her life, as the obit writers say these days.

Clichés, trusted rituals, maxims, prayers—is there

Anything that works, gives succor or peace, or even

Something to numb you for a while, lull you into

Thinking you can shoulder this, someday remember

The face you loved, recall without tears, without the stone

That sits in your chest where your heart used to be?

Early Morning in Kresson

In my mind’s eye I see it—the stub of a macadam road

Dead-ending into Blue Diamond Coal, its trucks

Lined up each morning for the long hauls.

To the left, the junkyard, heaps of metal and rubber, hard by

An Italianate house, rust-brown, coated with years

Of dust and cinder ash, facing the junkyard cranes instead

Of a lawn. A porch swing, always vacant even on summer

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Evenings. Only the metal cranes noticed.

The folks who lived in the house, white haired, plainly dressed

Bespectacled, came and went together, but mostly stayed home.

My father’s tavern sat amongst these places, the last

In a row of houses. In its former life, the bar

Housed a bakery, we heard—and the baker’s family

Lived upstairs in the cramped rooms, their kitchen

The bakery itself. I used to pretend I could smell

Bread baking, the sweet fragrance of airy

White loaves turning golden in the long-gone ovens.

I went along with my father there before dawn,

the half-light bathing the block in sepia.

I sat at a small table in the back bar reading comics—

my father rolled kegs of beer up from the dank cellar.

Up on the ragged sidewalk I stood peering down

As he slid the keg into a handtruck, up a plywood

Ramp, and into the tavern.

Light crept in through the glass bricks in the storefront.

I leaned around the corner of the darkwood bar,

Watched him roll the keg from handcart to its station,

Waited for the hiss when he tapped the silver barrel.

I inhaled the faint yeasty smell, which oddly, offended—

And pleased me. Sounds of traffic began to flow in

From the bar’s back door, still propped open. I was

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Sent to pick up the paper from the doorstep, laid it

On my father’s work table near the curved jukebox.

It wouldn’t be switched on till lunchtime. Hank

Williams’ and Jerry Lee’s wails issued from it.

But by then I would be back home— quiet streets,

Small green lawns, lolling on an old quilt spread in shade.

Inclined Plane, Pulley, Wheel & Axle

I studied the euthanasia coaster,

the Lithuanian artist’s drawings, the steep

first stage of the steel thing, the sharp

drop meant to cause hypoxia to the brain,

seven inversion loops, clothoids

designed to drive passengers into brain death.

At the end of the ride, said the

artist, they would unload—Unload!—the bodies

then do it over again with

fresh comers.

Strange to think that

coasters that thrilled generations of

those four feet or taller

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who climbed into the toboggans for a night of fun,

could be made into death machines,

for euphoric and elegant death, said the artist—

to solve the problems of life extension.

We used to call that, long life.

We rode the old wooden coaster once.

When the bar was secured

We gripped it hard,

shrieked and screamed, which made it

all the more wonderful. My hair

blew out behind me and

my stomach

leaped up into my heart, which

jumped into my throat.

Your father came to the front door

for his weekly visit, his old car

parked in front of your handsome house.

We were off to Gwynn Oak Park with him—

your brother, you, and I. Did we ride

the Deep Dipper or the Little?

I dreaded both, but you said

your father would sit between us.

We’d be tucked in safe and we could

yell as loud as we liked.

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The ascent scared me far more than

the fast drops towards earth. I hated the

creaking of the toboggan train as it

made its way to the crest.

But the plummeting was a joy,

then we curved around a bend and it

started again, the slow climb.

Three times I felt pure bliss,

heard my a scream shoot out of my head.

Your father was solid between us,

he laughed and hooted. It was

the only time I ever saw him happy.

You were a brave girl. I was uncertain

about such things as roller coasters. You

stayed in Baltimore, married, had kids.

I left as fast as I could and kept moving

You died before you were fifty, leaving me

to reconstruct my memories.

You wouldn’t like this Lithuanian artist’s notion,

his good-death coaster, the

24 passenger trip through euphoria to

quick death. Hearing him, you’d tug at

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your blond hair, turn, walk

into the sunny afternoon, far

from the black toboggans.

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Biographical Note: Marcus Strider JonesBiographical Note: Marcus Strider JonesBiographical Note: Marcus Strider JonesBiographical Note: Marcus Strider Jones

Strider Marcus Jones – is a poet, law graduate and ex civil servant from Salford, England with

proud Celtic roots in Ireland and Wales. A member of The Poetry Society, his five

published books of poetry http//www.lulu.com/spotlight/stridermarcusj.... reveal a maverick

socialist, moving between forests, mountains, cities and coasts playing his saxophone and

clarinet in warm solitude.

His poetry has been published in the USA, Canada, England, Ireland, Wales, France, Spain,

India and Switzerland in numerous publications including mgv2 Publishing Anthology:And

Agamemnon Dead; Deep Water Literary Journal; The Huffington Post USA; The Stray

Branch Literary Magazine; Crack The Spine Literary Magazine; A New Ulster/Anu;

Outburst Poetry Magazine; The Galway Review; The Honest Ulsterman Magazine; The

Lonely Crowd Magazine; Section8Magazine; Danse Macabre Literary Magazine; The

Lampeter Review; Ygdrasil, A Journal of the Poetic Arts; Don't Be Afraid: Anthology To

Seamus Heaney; Dead Snakes Poetry Magazine; Panoplyzine Poetry Magazine; Syzygy

Poetry Journal Issue 1 and Ammagazine/Angry Manifesto Issue 3.

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BABYLON'S BOHEMIAN BOUQUET

(Marcus Strider Jones)

i like the way

some words you say

go against gravity

and linger in the air

when you've gone.

sad or fair,

they blow away

this dungeons dark oblivion,

and water me with wisdom

like a soft shawl

with scents and sounds

that i wrap around

my senses come what may-

you give it all,

and love abounds

in Babylon's bohemian bouquet.

like butterflies

in druid grey skies,

the fragility

of eternity

ripples with uncertainty,

but doesn't woo, then waver in your eyes.

it's steady gaze

seduces praise,

then fondles and savours

loves succulent flavours,

like innocent alibis.

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IN MAID'S WATER

(Marcus Strider Jones)

we've left the well-footed

road,

the rutted

and rebutted

road

of shadows cast

by towered glass.

opened closed curtains

for fusty moths,

chanted white spells with Wiccan's

goths;

left pictured

rooms and halls-

become un-scriptured

hills and squalls-

in maid's water

pouring down her

erect chalk man,

like a wild gypsy,

love tipsy

partisan,

smelling of cinnabar

and his cigar,

swirling

like whirling

clouds

while the changed wind howls.

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YOU COLOUR THE CHARCOAL SEA

(Marcus Strider Jones)

When I,am in pieces,

You talk,to me

So the tempest ceases,

And thoughts flow free.

Where I,see doubts and demons-

You color the charcoal sea-

With lilting love and reasons,

In your soliloquy.

Without you,I suffer,

In solitude and silent voice;

But deep down discover

You within me,and rejoice.

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SINS AND ANGELS

(Marcus Strider Jones)

why do memories

become our enemies,

flooding through the weir

we use to block out fear,

when the past meets that in front

and circles in its font

with sins and angels

sifting voice and smells.

how fast the foam

soon builds, from what is seen and known

and talked about

by strangers on its journey in and out.

these beads and threads,

that banquet and burden in our heads-

like doors to rooms on broken hinges

for crowds of smiles and lonely winges-

turn silent further down the bank,

where river reeds and thought stand blank

behindhand on this watch of time,

that moves old memories out of mine.

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ON TONQUIN BEACH

(Marcus Strider Jones)

moods turn with seasons

shades and sounds;

thoughts walk through reasons

ups and downs.

come sit

by the fireside

close to me,

soft fit

and confide,

watch the sea-

splashed feet break blue water

on Tonquin beach,

tall firs fill a quarter

of sight and reach-

waves wash over shoreline,

a soothing sound,

combing thoughts out before time

gives them ground

to mingle and mischief

the mind into mire,

like a selfish thief-

that plays with selfless desire.

Time speaks to his daughter

through this release,

while loves lore restores her

masked belief.

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BEAUTIFUL MIND

(Marcus Strider Jones)

cover me

with loves lips and beautious breasts

out of satin lace,

and look at me

with longing

on your fabulous face;

feel the race

and rhythm in

my sensuous skin

where my love rests

with you belonging.

tease and tour

the contours

of my beautiful mind,

and discover your

true colours

embroider everything you find.

in celtic swirls

my cloak of passion covers you,

like ink that whirls

in each elaborate tattoo.

you soak all my senses

in the river of your dreams,

and disolve my defences

to roam my secret scenes.

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Biographical Note: Wim De VlaamsBiographical Note: Wim De VlaamsBiographical Note: Wim De VlaamsBiographical Note: Wim De Vlaams

Wim de Vlaams has been living in Lille (north of France) since 1961. Wim loves The

Stooges, and Robert Doisneau, and Charles Bukowski, loves writing short poems, and muki-

haïkus (he is a litlle bit lazy, isn't it?). You can find 47 of his tiny stories in the magazine "Le

Cafard Hérétique" #7.

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Wandering souls

(Wim De Vlaams)

There

Where high were the walls

And the skies so red

When we had

No beginning

And the stories

No end

We walked among the graves

(We had grown up among the graves)

Wandering souls

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December 2015’s MESSAGE FROM THE ALLEYCATS:December 2015’s MESSAGE FROM THE ALLEYCATS:December 2015’s MESSAGE FROM THE ALLEYCATS:December 2015’s MESSAGE FROM THE ALLEYCATS:

December has arrived and it has been unseasonably warm not

that the alleycats are complaining.

Well, that’s just about it from us for this edition everyone.

Thanks again to all of the artists who submitted their work to be

presented “On the Wall”. As ever, if you didn’t make it into this edition,

don’t despair! Chances are that your submission arrived just too late to

be included this time. Check out future editions of “A New Ulster” to

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Biography: Patrick Goodman

Patrick Goodman has been involved in Star Trek RPGs and also the

Shadowrun revival he is the author of several novellas

Patrick has got two novellas currently on Amazon and Barnes & Noble,

ANOTHER RAINY NIGHT and SAIL AWAY, SWEET SISTER. He

has a short story called “Thunderstruck” in an upcoming SHADOWRUN

anthology entitled A WORLD OF SHADOWS, which is at the printers

now and should be available in the very near future (perhaps by the time

this issue releases). And he is wrapping up work on his next novella,

RED RAIN, which should be out early next year

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Organic Writing – An Interview with Tom Benson

This issue, Arizahn and the alley cats have been losing themselves in the mists of time, with

author Patrick Goodman.

ANU: Who do you feel has been your inspiration for writing?

My inspiration for writing...wow. That's one with lots of potential answers. There

have been any number of horrible writers out there who caused me to shake my head

as a youth and say, "I can do better than that!" There are the works of Edgar Allan

Poe, who made me want to be a poet. Isaac Asimov and Jules Verne and H.G. Wells

all filled me with awe. As I grew up, and began to take this whole writing thing more

seriously, I became enamoured of the works of Steven Brust and Neil Gaiman.

Currently, I'm greatly enjoying the Harry Dresden novels of Jim Butcher. Those are

the ones who inspire me AS a writer. There's a couple of non-writers, though, who I

think inspired me to BE a writer. One was my father, who had the works of Poe and

Asimov, etc., on his shelves for me to devour. The other was a man called Dan

Johnson, who was my English teacher in the ninth grade; he taught me that our

language, odd a duck as it might be, could also be beautiful if you knew how it

worked, and he showed me the way it worked.

*

ANU: What are the best and worst parts of writing?

The worst part of writing is sitting there, staring at a blank screen, trying to convince

yourself that you're not a fraud for long enough to get some words on the page. The

best part is getting an email from out of the blue from a stranger saying, "I read one of

your stories today, and you made me smile”. It makes all the pain of thinking you're a

fraud whilst waiting for words to come together in your head completely worth it.

*

ANU: Why did you choose your particular genre?

Why did I choose my particular genre? Sometimes I think it chose me. It was

completely a matter of what I read and watched on television as I was growing up. My

father liked science fiction, and a lot of the books in his house were SF. My earliest

memory of a favourite TV show was STAR TREK, followed closely by the Adam

West BATMAN. Those are the things that moved me as a child; I can't imagine

myself writing something else these days.

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*

ANU: Which – if any – of the characters and themes in your writing do you identify

with?

I think the character I most identify with in my work, at least at the moment, is my

current protagonist, Thomas McAllister. He's basically a good man in a bad situation,

trying to make things in his world right again. He makes mistakes, some of them

willfully, along the way. I see a lot of me in Thomas. Now, themes. I've noticed the

idea of redemption has been cropping up a lot lately. It certainly seems to be one of

the central themes in my work-in-progress, RED RAIN (the other being vengeance; I

find it interesting how the two turn up together so often in literature). I very much

believe in the notion that nobody is beyond redemption, if they want to be redeemed. I

like to explore the concept of justice versus vengeance, the lines that separate them

and the places where they blur together…but I identify most with the quest for

redemption.

*

ANU: When can readers expect to see your next book released?

I've got two novellas currently on Amazon and Barnes & Noble, ANOTHER RAINY

NIGHT and SAIL AWAY, SWEET SISTER. I have a short story called

“Thunderstruck” in an upcoming SHADOWRUN anthology entitles A WORLD OF

SHADOWS, which is at the printers now and should be available in the very near

future (perhaps by the time this issue releases). And I'm wrapping up work on my next

novella, RED RAIN, which should be out early next year

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Biography: P W Bridgman

P W Bridgman is a Canadian writer of literary fiction living in

Vancouver, British Columbia and has been at it for over 20 years.

"Standing at an Angle ..." is his first book.

His stories have appeared in various literary magazines and has won

or placed in competitions in Canada and abroad. In recent years he

has been publishing quite extensively in Ireland and the UK. Since

2011 he have had stories appear in anthologies released in Ireland,

Scotland and England. His most recently published story, entitled

"Win, Win: A Miniature Vancouver Tragicomedy," is a piece of

satire that appeared last October in the online version of Litro, a

London-based magazine with a print circulation of 100,000. Here's

a link to that story:http://www.litro.co.uk/2013/10/win-win-a-

miniature-vancouver-tragicomedy/.

You can learn more about PW Bridgman, his writing life and

"Standing at an Angle to My Age" by visiting his website

at www.pwbridgman.ca.

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Review of In the Canyons of Shadow and Light by Emily Donoho (Upatree Press,

2015)

I am not, typically, a reader of crime thrillers, police procedurals or mysteries. This is

not to say that such writings are, in my estimation, unworthy or inferior. Many

people—and many people whose taste and insights I admire—have a consuming

interest in crime fiction. It is simply a matter of individual preference. I have never

been drawn to the genre. Reading Emily Donoho’s In the Canyons of Shadow and

Light has made me realise that perhaps I have been inadvertently denying myself

some reading pleasures.

I am the first to admit that my lack of experience with crime fiction calls into question

my fitness to serve as a reviewer of In the Canyons of Shadow and Light. To be sure,

I have fewer signposts to follow and comparators to invoke in assessing how the novel

measures up to others in the genre. And I lack an ear that is well tuned to the nuances

and stylistic flourishes that are expected in this particular type of writing. To the

extent that I do not bring those qualities and attributes “to the table” in reviewing In

the Canyons of Shadow and Light, readers of this review should treat my judgment of

it with a measure of caution.

All of that said, I am a voracious reader of literary fiction. I can recognise a well-

conceived and deftly executed narrative arc when I see one. I can distinguish well-

developed and believable characters from two-dimensional, unconvincing ones. I can

appreciate a well-turned phrase and dialogue that rings true.

In the Canyons of Shadow and Light is a long, but well-written book. If I have a

criticism of it, it relates mostly to its length. The story could have been told in many

fewer pages. (I cannot tell you how many pages it comprises because, oddly, it is

unpaginated.) An editor with a careful but suitably ruthless blue pencil could likely

get this novel down to about two-thirds of its existing length—maybe even half—

without inflicting mortal damage to the story that Donoho has sought to tell.

The characters—most importantly, Det. Alex Boswell—are complex and they are

rendered by Donoho with sensitivity to their many intersecting character traits. Their

dialogue is rich and colourful. The inevitable profanity and street-hardened forms of

speech they employ are neither excessive or gratuitous. The people who walk the

pages of this book are believable and as one reads along, one becomes interested in

them and in what will become of them.

The plot line sustains interest throughout, although I will say again that if less detail

were suspended from it, the plot line would be less at risk of fraying and breaking

under its own weight. Donoho supplies a lot of gritty detail and, without doubt, she

evokes the atmosphere of New York’s seamy underbelly when doing so. But a novel

less freighted with detail would be a better novel.

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Former Mayor Bloomberg’s New York City is, rightfully, a character in its own right

in this book. I know something of that character from personal experience and I

consider that Donoho has done credit to NYC’s infinite convolutions in portraying

them so deftly. NYC is a city that, as the cliché goes, one loves and hates

simultaneously. Donoho’s NYC amply gets that across.

The tone and content of the writing is pleasingly Raymond Chandleresque without

degenerating into pastiche or becoming unforgivably derivative. I offer but one

example:

“The victim’s body, bloated, mangled, discolored, hardly even human-

looking, looked the way bodies are when they have been floating around

in the water for some time. Those images never leave your mind. His

brain must be a catalogue of thousands of them. The East River spat it

up near a small park underneath FDR Drive, in the Two-Three Precinct.

No way to identify the body until the ME did the autopsy and morbidly

identified the victim by her teeth using dental records …”

You can almost smell Bogart’s cigarette smoke rising up off the page in Donoho’s

writing; you can almost see it curling up and around the brim of his fedora, and him

leaning back with his feet up on his desk.

Crime fiction presents the new writer with many shoals and hazards. One is the

temptation to create a plot so complex that one needs a flowchart and a basketful of

coloured highlighters to follow its serpentine path. Another is the unconscious

adoption of a voice that is encumbered with the clichés of the genre and apes the

voices of other well-known crime writers. Still another is the creation of cardboard

characters who are parodies of good and evil and bear no resemblance to real people

with all their many contradictions. Happily, Donoho has avoided all these pitfalls in

In the Canyons of Shadow and Light. It is to be hoped that with the involvement of a

more aggressive editor, Donoho’s next novel will jettison some unnecessary verbal

ballast in order to show off her talents to better advantage. In crime fiction, as in most

other writing genres, a nimble Gypsy Moth of a novel is generally preferable to a

well-constructed but still unwieldy dirigible.

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