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Matthew Kee
8/23/14
3rd period
Geography is harnessed as a habitat for civilizations to adapt and settle in. Ranging
from the creation of nature deities to the main mode of transportation, geography
determines the culture and way of life for each civilization. Both Early China and
Mesopotamia benefited from their respective rivers through agriculture and means of
transport. However, Mesopotamia was able to trade and interact with other civilizations
which allowed them to obtain multiple resources whereas China was isolated, due to the
large mountain ranges in the southwest and stretches of desert in the west to north of
China, allowing them focus heavily on divination and resources given in their land.
On an agricultural standpoint, both river civilizations flourished in staple crops and
transportation after learning to tame the rivers with canals. By 3000 B.C.E. the
Mesopotamians created canals to transport water to the fields. This allowed a steady flow
of water to nourish the soil which would be used to grow Barley, their staple crop.
Furthermore, the Mesopotamians were able to use the river to trade goods with
surrounding civilizations such as the Egyptians and civilizations in Lebanon. The Chinese
also used the canals to their advantage. Rice fields had to be surrounded by water channels
at specific times in order for the crop to ripen. Because the mountain range blocked
transportation by foot, the Chinese were able to use the river in order to travel from west
to the east. The Euphrates and Tigris River allowed the Mesopotamians to harvest their
barley just as the Chinese used the Yellow River to cultivate their rice patties.
Looking at the geography economically and culturally, the mountains hindered the
Chinese as they were very limited to trade with other civilizations. Because of this, the
Chinese focused on producing materials with the resources available such as silk and
bronze. Furthermore, the Chinese invested heavily on philosophy like Daoism, Legalism,
and Confucianism. Since the Mesopotamians did not have this issue, they were able to trade
with nearby civilizations to obtain resources not found in their land. Using the Tigris and
Euphrates Rivers, the Mesopotamians traded with Egypt and Anatolia for precious metals
such as silver and gold. The Mesopotamians also created the language Cuneiform in order
to formally organize used for business transactions between the other civilizations. The
language allowed a central language for marketing purposes. The Mesopotamians
converged with other civilizations allowing a language for trade to be developed whereas
China remained an isolated nation causing them to create controversial philosophies.
Even though the culture and agriculture would soon change as China took on a new
dynasty leading into new cultures and Mesopotamians falling into Dark Ages as their
irrigation ruined the fields with salt, both maintained their original agricultural structures
by using the river to their advantages. However, the Mesopotamians would continue to
prosper awhile longer as the Hittites, Assyrians, and Babylonians cultivated the civilization
to Babylon. China, on the other hand, would continue down their unique dynasty system
until their isolation was no more.