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Page 1: Arizona State Legislature RSI.pdfRECOMMENDED STATUTORY IMPROVEMENTS The following statutory provisions contain defects, inconsistencies or form and style problems of which legislative

2012 RECOMMENDED STATUTORY IMPROVEMENTS Arizona Legislative Council September 2011

Page 2: Arizona State Legislature RSI.pdfRECOMMENDED STATUTORY IMPROVEMENTS The following statutory provisions contain defects, inconsistencies or form and style problems of which legislative

RECOMMENDED STATUTORY IMPROVEMENTS

The following statutory provisions contain defects, inconsistencies or form and style problems of which legislative staff should be aware. Please note, however, that less significant drafting errors, such as the misuse of future tense instead of present tense or passive voice instead of active voice and use of a negative subject, are not usually incorporated in this listing. It is intended instead that in any amendment of a section drafters will seek to effectuate the improvement of that text to the extent acceptable to the bill sponsor. 1-215 (2006) In paragraph 28, after the second "corrections" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 1-218

In subsection A, strike "thereof" and insert "AND". (Grammar.) In subsection B, first sentence, after the first "filing" insert "THAT IS" and strike

"which" and insert "AND THAT". (Grammar.) 1-243

Transfer this section to title 1, chapter 2, article 2. (Correct placement.) 1-304

In subsection B, after "culture" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 3-107 (2008) In subsection A, paragraph 3, third sentence, after "from" insert "THE PROVISIONS OF". (Clarification.) 3-113

In subsection A, strike the first comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 3-121

In subsection B, after "The" insert "ARIZONA" and strike "of the universities and state college of Arizona". (Correct terminology.)

3-123

In the second sentence, after the second "the" insert "ARIZONA" and strike "of the universities and state college of Arizona". (Correct terminology.) 3-141

In paragraph 1, subdivision (b), item (v), "fertilizer" is not defined in section 3-262. Should it be "fertilizer material"?

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3-202 After "things" insert "THAT ARE", strike "which" and insert "THAT" and strike

"is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 3-212

In subsection B, strike "coddling" and insert "CODLING". (Spelling.) 3-264

In subsection B, paragraph 4, after "fertilizers" insert "SUCH". (Grammar.)

3-272 In subsection C, second sentence, should "licenses" be "REGISTRATIONS" to

conform to other references in that subsection? In the fourth sentence, before "opportunity" insert "AN" and before "hearing" insert "A". (Grammar.) 3-283

In subsection A, paragraph 3 does not follow the lead-in. 3-365 (2004)

In subsection D, third sentence, after "school" insert ", A CHILD CARE GROUP HOME". (Conformity.) 3-373 (2008) In paragraph 7, subdivision (a), strike "federal" and insert "UNITED STATES". (Correct terminology.) 3-458

In subsection C, first sentence, strike "were" and insert "WAS". (Grammar.) In subsection D, first sentence, strike "enter" and insert "ENTERS". (Grammar.) In subsection E, strike the second comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.)

3-459

In subsection B, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 3-499

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "such" and insert "COOPERATIVE". (Clarification.) 3-561 (2008) Alphabetize the definitions. (Style consistency.) 3-587

In subsection A, second sentence, after "by" insert "A MAJORITY OF". (Clarification.)

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3-601.01 In subsection A, paragraphs 1 through 8, strike "title" and in paragraphs 7 and 8,

strike "United States Code" and insert "CODE OF FEDERAL REGULATIONS". (Citation correction.) 3-606 (2007) In subsection C, sixth sentence, strike the comma and insert "AND" (grammar) and strike "type style" and insert "TYPESTYLE" (spelling). 3-620

In subsection A, strike the second comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.)

3-625 In subsections A and B, in four places, strike "pure". (Correct terminology.)

3-661

In paragraph 5, strike the semicolon and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 3-717 (2011)

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "that" and insert ", WHICH". (Grammar.) 3-730

In subsection B, first sentence, after "dealer" strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) In the second sentence, strike "remark" and insert "RE-MARK". (Spelling.)

In subsection C, second sentence, strike "remarked" and insert "RE-MARKED". (Spelling.) 3-734

Strike "its" and insert "THEIR". (Grammar.) 3-738

In subsection A, in two places, strike "shell". (Correct terminology.) 3-905

In subsection C, second sentence, after "after" strike "the". (Grammar.) 3-906 (2005) In subsection B, second sentence, before "record" insert "A". (Grammar.) 3-1001 In the section heading, remove "; bond". (The requirement for employee bonds was repealed in 1971.)

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3-1005 In subsection A, second sentence, strike "a bonded" and insert "AN". In the third sentence, strike "is bonded as prescribed by the terms of this article and". (The requirement for employee bonds was repealed in 1971.) 3-1006

Subsection A should be rewritten to eliminate or update and clarify the intention in referencing resolution number 102 of the state fair commission. 3-1009

In paragraph 2, strike "the preceding" and after "paragraph" insert "1". (Style consistency.)

In paragraph 3, strike "so" and insert "AS" and in two places strike "will" and insert "SHALL". (Grammar.) 3-1214 (2007) After "director," insert "THE". (Grammar.) 3-1239

In subsection A, before the colon insert "EITHER". At the end of paragraph 1, strike "; or" and insert a period. (Style consistency.) 3-1344 In subsection B, second sentence, after "deposit" insert ", PURSUANT TO SECTIONS 35-146 AND 35-147,". (Style consistency.) 3-1345 In subsection B, third sentence, after "deposit" insert ", PURSUANT TO SECTIONS 35-146 AND 35-147,". (Style consistency.) 3-1481 (2003) In the section heading, remove "; fees". (Conformity.) 3-2010

In subsection B, in two places, strike "a producer" and insert "AN OWNER". (Correct terminology.) 3-2050

A conflict exists in the use of the term "processors" and the term "establishments". 3-2051

In subsection A, first sentence, after "establishments" insert "THAT ARE" and strike "which" and insert "THAT". (Grammar.) 3-2086

In paragraph 1, before "Affidavit" insert "AN". (Grammar.)

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3-2088 In subsection H, last sentence, strike "lockerplants" and insert "LOCKER PLANTS".

(Spelling.) 3-2096

In subsection B, second sentence, before "certified" insert "BY". (Grammar.) 3-2405

In paragraph 1, strike "defined by" and insert "PROVIDED IN". (Clarification.) 3-2603

In subsection B, paragraph 3, strike "chapter" and insert "ARTICLE". (Internal reference correction.) 3-2605

In subsection D, second sentence, strike "registrant" and insert "LICENSEE". (Consistency.) 3-2616

In subsection A, paragraphs 3, 4 and 5 do not follow the lead-in. 3-2661

In paragraph 3, strike "the" and insert "THIS" and strike the first comma and insert "OR". (Style consistency.)

3-3102

Before "federal" insert "THE". (Grammar.) 3-3108

In subsection A, paragraph 1, insert a period at the end. 3-3109

In subsection C, insert a period at the end of the second sentence. 3-3125

In subsection B, strike "for". (Grammar.) 3-3306 In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike "name" and insert "NAMES". (Grammar.) 4-120 (2009) In subsection C, strike "reverts" and insert "REVERT". (Grammar.) 4-201 (2011) In subsection E, tenth sentence, after "request" insert "THAT". (Grammar.)

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4-203 (2011) In subsection B, paragraph 3, strike "that" and insert "WHICH". (Grammar.) 4-203.02 (2011) In subsection H, third sentence, strike "promulgated" and insert "ADOPTED". (Consistency.) 4-204

In subsection C, first sentence, after the first "chapter" strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) In the second sentence, strike "provision" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Internal reference correction.) 4-206.01 (2011)

In subsection F, last sentence, strike "Laws 2010, chapter 85, section 4, as amended by this act" and insert "AS PROVIDED BY LAW". (Style consistency.)

In subsection J, second sentence, strike "A". (Grammar.) 4-210.01 (2011)

Strike subsection B and insert: "B. THE DIRECTOR MAY REQUIRE A LICENSEE TO PAY A CIVIL

PENALTY ASSESSED PURSUANT TO SUBSECTION A OF THIS SECTION IN A SINGLE PAYMENT OR IN INSTALLMENT PAYMENTS." (Clarification.) 4-228

In subsection C, first sentence, after "permission" insert "TO A CLUB LICENSEE" and strike "to a club license". (Clarification.) 4-243 (2008)

In subsection A, after "rectifier" strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 4-243.04

In subsection A, in the lead-in language, strike the first "on" and insert "OF". (Grammar.) 4-244 (2011)

In paragraph 3, strike "subsections (3), (4), (6) or (7) of" and after "section 501(c)" insert "(3), (4), (6) OR (7)". (Citation correction.) 4-246 (2009) In subsection C, strike "sections" and insert "SECTION" and after "or" insert "SECTION". (Grammar.) 4-248 (2007)

In subsection A, strike "C, D, E or G" and insert "L, M, N OR P". (Internal reference corrections.)

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4-250.01 In subsection C, after "person" insert "WHO IS" and after "rectifier" insert "AND".

(Grammar.) Title 4, Chapter 2, Article 4 (4-251) (2010)

Change the article heading to "SIGNS". (Conformity.) 4-301

Before "the legal" insert "AT LEAST". (Clarification.)

5-104 (2011) In subsection F, paragraph 1, after "a" insert "LICENSE" and strike "established by

the department". (Clarification.) 5-108.03

The language in subsection C appears to be obsolete and should be deleted. 5-108.05

Subsection E should be rewritten to clarify what "permitted medication" means.

5-111.02 In subsection C, seventh sentence, strike "this" and after "subsection" insert "B OF

THIS SECTION". (Internal reference correction.) 5-111.03

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "meets" and insert "MEETINGS". (Grammar.) 5-112 (2007)

In subsection B, eighth sentence, strike "horse racing" and insert "HORSERACING". (Citation correction.) 5-113 (L11, Ch. 35, sec. 3 & Ch. 281, sec. 49) (2011)

In subsection J, last sentence, after "year" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 5-113.01 (2011)

In the fourth sentence, strike "to the department" and insert "AND ARE". (Clarification.) 5-225 (2010)

In subsection C, first sentence, strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 5-235.01 (2010)

In subsection C, second sentence, in two places, after "license" insert "OF", strike ", or any combination of these actions," and after "against" insert ", OR ANY COMBINATION OF THESE ACTIONS,". (Grammar.)

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5-301 In paragraph 9, after the second "waters" insert "THAT IS" and after "boundaries"

strike "which" and insert "AND THAT". (Grammar.) 5-311 In subsection A, paragraph 6, strike "motor boat" and insert "MOTORBOAT". (Spelling.) 5-321 (2005) In subsection E, first sentence, strike "and license tax". (Conformity.) 5-325 What "fund" does the statute refer to? 5-401 (2011) In paragraph 25, after "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) (2009) In paragraph 32, strike "Voluntary" and insert "VOLUNTEER". (Conformity with paragraph 25, which is the only place this term appears in this chapter.) 5-403.01

In the first sentence, after the second "license" insert "LOCATION". (Clarification.) 5-407 (2009) In subsection C, first sentence, strike "if" and insert "FILING" and after the second "reports" insert "THAT". (Grammar.) 5-512 In subsection J, strike "or to sell". (Redundant.) In subsection K, before "vending" insert "A SELF-SERVICE". (Clarification.) 5-513

In subsection A, paragraph 3, subdivision (a), after "mind," insert "IS". (Grammar.) 5-522 (2011)

In subsection E, strike "B" and insert "C". (Internal reference correction.) 5-557 (2011)

In subsection A, first sentence, after "senate" insert "AND SHALL PROVIDE A COPY OF THIS REPORT TO THE SECRETARY OF STATE". (Conformity with section 5-507.) 5-565.02 (2010) In the section heading, change "minors" to "persons under twenty-one years of age". (Conformity.)

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5-572 (2011) In subsection E, strike "B" and "insert "C". (Internal reference correction.)

5-601.02 (2011)

In subsection I, paragraph 6, subdivisions (ccc) and (ggg), strike "Arizona department of economic security" and insert "OFFICE OF EMPLOYMENT AND POPULATION STATISTICS". (Conformity.) Note that 1998 Prop. 105 applies to these changes. 5-602.01 In subsection B, last sentence, strike "transferred to the state treasurer for deposit" and insert "DEPOSITED, PURSUANT TO SECTIONS 35-146 AND 35-147,". (Style consistency.) 5-604

In subsection D, strike the second "any other". (Redundant.) 5-701

In paragraph 5, in the first sentence of the lead-in paragraph, strike the second comma. (Grammar.) 5-702

In subsection E, second sentence, after the second "signs" insert "THAT ARE". (Grammar.) 5-703

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "that are" and insert "SHALL BE". (Grammar.) 5-806 In subsection B, paragraph 18, after "services" insert "THAT ARE" and before "employee" insert "BEING AN". (Grammar.) 5-832 In subsection C, second sentence, after "fund" insert "OR ANY ACCOUNT OR SUBACCOUNT" and strike "authority's" and insert "STATUTORY". (Consistency.) In the third sentence, after "fund" insert ", ACCOUNT OR SUBACCOUNT". (Consistency.) 5-837 In subsection C, last sentence, after "paragraph" strike "2" and insert "3". (Internal reference correction.) 5-838 In subsection B, second sentence, strike "3" and insert "4". (Internal reference correction.)

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5-1103 (2009) In subsection F, second sentence, after the first "office" insert a comma. (Grammar.) In subsection G, in the lead-in language, strike "member" and insert "MEMBERS" and in paragraph 6, strike "paragraphs" and insert "PARAGRAPH" and strike "and" and insert "OR". (Grammar.) Title 6, Chapter 1 (6-101) (2004) Change the chapter heading to "DEPARTMENT OF FINANCIAL INSTITUTIONS". (Conformity.) Title 6, Chapter 1, Article 2 (6-110) (2004) Change the article heading to "DEPARTMENT OF FINANCIAL INSTITUTIONS". (Conformity.) 6-115

In subsection A, after "mortgage," insert "A". (Grammar.) 6-141

In paragraph 4, strike the last comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 6-185

In the third sentence, strike "advanced" and insert "ADVANCE". (Grammar.) 6-235

In the first sentence, strike "thereof" and insert "OF" and strike "thereon," and insert "ON THE DEPOSITS". (Grammar.) 6-236

In paragraph 3, after "persons" insert "WHO ARE" and after "beneficiaries" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 6-384 (2008) In the last sentence, strike "A" and insert "D" (internal reference correction) and strike "subsection C of" and after "6-245" insert ", SUBSECTION C" (style consistency). 6-401

In paragraph 17, strike "prior to the effective date of this chapter" and insert "BEFORE JUNE 25, 1960". (Clarification.) 6-403

In paragraph 1, after "chapter" strike "or" and insert a comma, after "title," strike "or", after "advertising" strike "or" and insert a comma and strike the comma after the second "person". (Grammar.) 6-405 (2011) In subsection A, first sentence, between "one" and "half" insert a hyphen. (Spelling.)

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6-412 Strike subsection C. (Outdated language.) Note: There is an internal reference in

section 6-465. 6-417

In paragraph 1, strike the semicolon and insert a period. (Grammar.) In paragraph 7, strike "it has" and insert "THEY HAVE". (Grammar.)

6-443

In paragraph 1, last sentence of the lead-in language, strike "any and" (unnecessary) and after "all" insert "OF". (Grammar.) 6-506 In subsection C, paragraph 4, after "loans" and after "monies" insert "MAY BE". (Grammar.) 6-510

In subsection D, strike "outside of this state". (Redundant.) 6-532

In subsection A, what is intended by the last sentence? Are these three-year terms? 6-558

In subsection B, strike "an approved" and insert "A" and strike "organization" and insert "APPROVAL". (Conformity with section 6-507.) 6-577

In subsection A, paragraph 2, before the second "the United States" insert "A STATE OF". (Clarification.) 6-585

In subsection B, second sentence, strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 6-638

Combine subsection D into subsection C and strike "section" and insert "SUBSECTION". Reletter to conform. (Style consistency.)

6-710

In paragraph 8, a verb appears to be missing. Rewrite the text after "in any manner". (Grammar.) 6-832

In subsection C, first sentence, after "structure" insert "AS DEFINED IN SECTION 6-841". (Clarification.)

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6-854.01 In subsection B, third sentence, before "After" insert "AFTER APPROVAL OR" and

before "revised" insert "APPROVED OR". (Clarification.) 6-870.02

In subsection H, last sentence, strike "sections 10-850 through 10-858" and insert "TITLE 10, CHAPTER 8, ARTICLE 5". (Style consistency.) 6-902

In subsection B, paragraph 1, before "exempt" insert "AN". (Grammar.)

6-905 In subsection A, paragraph 5, after "crime" strike "of" and insert "INVOLVING".

(Grammar.) 6-910

In the first sentence, strike the second comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 6-912 (2011)

In subsection A, in the lead-in language, after "to" insert "THIS ARTICLE AND" and strike "1,". (Internal reference correction.)

In subsection I, after the last "indictment" insert "OR INFORMATION". (Conformity.)

In subsection J, first sentence, strike "licensed as an exempt person" and insert "TO WHOM A CERTIFICATION OF EXEMPTION IS ISSUED". (Conformity.) In the second sentence, after "person" insert a comma and strike "persons," and insert "PERSON'S". (Grammar.) In the third sentence, after "person's" insert "DIRECTORS, OFFICERS, MEMBERS, PARTNERS, TRUSTEES AND". (Conformity.) 6-942

In subsection C, paragraph 1, before "exempt" insert "AN". (Grammar.) 6-943 (2011) In subsection C, paragraph 3, subdivision (a), item (ii), strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) (2008) In subsection J, paragraph 2, after "provides" insert "TO A MORTGAGE BANKER" and strike "to a mortgage banker which funds" and insert "THAT". (Clarification.) 6-973

In subsection D, paragraph 1, second sentence, after "individual" insert "AS PRESCRIBED BY SECTION 6-976". (Clarification.) 6-982

In subsection C, first sentence, after "trustee" strike the comma and insert "OR" and after the second "or" insert "A". (Grammar.)

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6-991.09 (2009) In subsection C, strike the second "to". (Grammar.) 6-1004

In the last sentence, strike the first comma and strike "be" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 6-1101

Change the specified institutions in paragraph 5 to the singular to conform with the definition. (Grammar.) 6-1201

In paragraph 3, second sentence, strike the first "or" and insert ", BY". (Clarification.)

In paragraph 14, subdivision (g), strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) In paragraph 17, after "facsimile" insert a comma. (Grammar.)

6-1202

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "obligors" and insert "AN OBLIGOR". (Grammar.)

6-1207

In subsection B, fifth sentence, strike "warrants" and insert "WARRANT". (Grammar.) 6-1213

In subsection A, first sentence, strike the first "in". (Grammar.) In subsection D, second sentence, strike the first "or" and insert a comma.

(Grammar.) Title 6, Chapter 12.1 (6-1251 through 6-1263) (2011) Should this chapter be amended or repealed because the program established by this chapter was scheduled to end on July 1, 2010? 6-1252 In paragraph 2, strike "holding itself out to be" and insert "REPRESENTED AS". (Clarification.) 6-1253 In subsection A, last sentence and subsection B, paragraph 1, second sentence, strike the second "any". (Grammar.) 6-1256 In subsection C, after the second "on" insert "OR BEFORE". (Clarification.)

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6-1403 In subsection A, paragraph 2, after the first "broker" insert "WHO IS" and after

"insurance" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 6-1413

In subsection B, strike the second comma. (Grammar.) Subsection E conflicts with section 44-6852.

8-102 After "alien" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 8-103 (2005) In subsection A, after "separated" insert a comma. (Grammar.)

(2011) In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike the comma and insert "AND THE". (Grammar.) 8-114 In subsection I, strike "natural" and insert "BIRTH". (Correct terminology.) 8-129

In subsection B, paragraph 1, after the first "person" insert "PLACING THE CHILD". (Clarification.) In paragraph 2, strike the first "or" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 8-162

In subsection C, paragraph 1 and subsection D, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "SEPTEMBER 27, 1990". (Clarification.) 8-208

In subsection H, after the second "educational" insert "RIGHTS" and strike "rights". (Citation correction.) 8-238 (2011)

In subsection D, strike the last comma. (Grammar.) 8-302

In subsection D, in three places, after "criminal" insert "DIVISION OF THE SUPERIOR". (Correct terminology.) 8-349 In subsection B, paragraph 4, subsection C, paragraph 5, subsection D, paragraph 4 and subsection E, paragraph 4, strike "individualized" and insert "INDIVIDUAL". (Consistency.) 8-350.01 (2007) In subsection C, after "younger" insert "AND". (Grammar.)

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8-386.01 In subsection A, strike "Beginning on the effective date of this section,"

(unnecessary) and before "is materially" insert "THAT" (grammar). In subsection C, strike "8-286" and insert "8-386". In paragraph 3, strike "8-286" and

insert "8-386" and strike "8-290.03" and insert "8-393". (Internal reference corrections.) In subsection D, strike "8-286" and insert "8-386". (Internal reference correction.) Strike subsection F. (Date constraint obsolete.)

8-390 (2005) In subsection D, strike the last comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 8-392.01

In subsection A, paragraph 1, after "postajudication" insert "NOTICE REQUEST". (Correct terminology.) In paragraph 4, strike the quotation marks (grammar) and in the second sentence of the statement, after the first "your" insert "HOUSEHOLD". (Clarification.)

In subsection B, strike "notification" and insert "NOTICE". (Correct terminology.) 8-395 In subsection A, strike "individualized" and insert "INDIVIDUAL". (Consistency.) 8-418 (2005) In subsection A, first sentence, after the first "or" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 8-502 Strike "chapter 1 of" and after "46" insert ", CHAPTER 1". (Style consistency.) 8-503

In subsection A, paragraph 4, subdivision (d), strike "defined" and insert "PRESCRIBED". (Clarification.) In paragraph 8, first sentence, should "JUVENILE" be inserted before "corrections"? 8-506.01

In the second sentence, after "given" insert "TO". (Grammar.) 8-507 In subsection A, after "necessary" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 8-513 (2010)

In subsection C, strike "other". (Clarification.) 8-514 (2006) In subsection A, strike the second comma. (Grammar.) In subsection D, strike the fourth comma. (Grammar.)

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8-515.03 In paragraph 2, second sentence, strike the second "parent" and insert "PARENT'S". (Grammar.) 8-515.05 In subsection A, first sentence, strike "title" and strike "subsection" and insert "SECTION". (Correct citation form.) In subsection B, first sentence, strike "inform" and insert "NOTIFY". (Clarification.) In subsection C, second sentence, strike "informing" and insert "NOTIFYING". (Clarification.) 8-525 (2009)

In subsection G, paragraph 2, strike "to protect". (Grammar.) 8-527 (2011)

After "B" strike the comma. (Grammar.) 8-528 (2009)

In subsection B, paragraph 2 and in subsection C, paragraph 2, after "provider," insert "OF". (Grammar.)

In subsection D, paragraph 3, after "church," insert "OF". (Grammar.) In subsection L, second sentence, after the second "system" insert

"ADMINISTRATION". (Clarification.) 8-550.01 (2008) In subsection A, first sentence, strike the last comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 8-556

In subsection A, strike "camp site" and insert "CAMPSITE". (Spelling.) 8-652 (2009) In subsection C, first sentence, strike "school" and insert "SCHOOLS". (Correct terminology.) 8-803 (2007)

In subsection A, paragraph 6, in two places, strike "ombudsman-citizen" and insert "OMBUDSMAN-CITIZENS". (Correct terminology.) 8-810 (2008) In subsection A, last sentence, strike the second comma and insert "OR" and after "or" insert "A". (Grammar.) 8-813

In subsection B, after "friends" strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.)

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8-816 (2010) Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2010? 8-821 (2008) In subsection B, paragraph 3, second sentence, strike "meaning" and insert "MEANINGS". (Grammar.) In subsection C, paragraph 2, strike "them" and insert "THE PARENT". (Grammar.) 8-823 (2009) In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike "ombudsman-citizen's aide" and insert "OMBUDSMAN-CITIZENS AIDE'S". (Correct terminology.) In paragraph 11, first sentence, after "names," insert "THE" and after "persons" insert "WHO ARE" and in the third sentence, after "child" insert a comma. (Grammar.) In paragraph 12, after "names," insert "THE" and after "persons" insert "WHO ARE". (Grammar.) 8-828 (2005)

Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2005?

8-841 (2009) In subsection D, paragraph 5, after "names," insert "THE" and after "persons" insert "WHO ARE". (Grammar.) 8-843 (2007)

In subsection C, strike "A" and insert "B". (Internal reference correction.) 8-845 (2010)

In subsection C, third sentence, strike "amongst" and insert "BETWEEN". (Style consistency.) 8-847 (2009)

In subsection E, paragraph 2, strike "D" and insert "E" and strike "6" and insert "7" (internal reference corrections) and after "8-842" insert a comma (grammar). 8-864 (2008) In paragraph 3, strike "E" and insert "F". (Internal reference correction.) 8-881 In subsection D, third sentence, strike the last "the". (Grammar.) 8-891 (2004) In subsection A, paragraph 4, strike "exist" and insert "EXISTS". (Grammar.)

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8-1001 In subsection B, paragraph 9, strike "their" and insert "ITS". (Grammar.)

(2005) Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2004? 9-101.02

In subsection F, first sentence, after the second "city's" insert "FISCAL YEAR". (Clarification.) 9-122 (2010)

In subsection H, second sentence, after "taxes" strike the comma and insert "AND" and strike "and local transportation assistance fund monies" and strike the fourth sentence. (The local transportation assistance fund has been repealed.) 9-201 In subsection B, after "warden" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 9-212 In subsection A, between "one" and "half" insert a hyphen. (Spelling.) 9-232

In subsection A, first sentence, after the first "city or town for" insert "AT LEAST" and after "in such area for" insert "AT LEAST". (Clarification.) In subsection C, at the beginning of the sentence, insert "EXCEPT FOR A COMMON COUNCIL ORGANIZED AS PRESCRIBED BY SECTION 9-232.04,". (Clarification.) 9-237

After "marshal" strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 9-243

In subsection B, paragraph 1, in two places, strike "lineal" and insert "LINEAR". (Clarification.) The second "such" has unclear reference and should be followed by "PARCEL" or "STREET". (Clarification.)

In subsection E, paragraph 1, after the first "existing" insert "BUILDINGS OR". (Consistency.) 9-249 (2009) In subsection C, paragraph 1, subdivision (c), strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 9-282

In subsection C, second sentence, after the second "if" insert "IT IS". (Grammar.)

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9-305 (2011) In subsection A, strike "their". (Grammar.) In subsection B, second sentence, after "by" insert "THE". (Grammar.)

9-441.04

In subsection B, after "jurisdiction," insert "TO". In paragraphs 1 and 2, strike the first "to". (Grammar.) 9-441.05

In the first sentence, strike the comma. (Grammar.) 9-461 (2011)

In paragraph 2, strike the first "that" and insert "WHICH". (Grammar.) 9-461.11

In subsection E, in the lead-in language, strike the third comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 9-461.12

In subsection D, paragraph 1, insert "INDIAN" before "tribes". (Consistency.) 9-463.05 (2011)

In subsection B, paragraph 7, subdivision (a), strike "improvement" and insert "IMPROVEMENTS" (correct terminology) and in subdivision (c), strike "apply" and insert "APPLIES" (grammar).

In subsection E, paragraph 7, strike "users" and insert "USER". (Correct terminology.)

In subsection S, paragraph 3, strike "improvement" and insert "IMPROVEMENTS". (Correct terminology.) 9-463.06

In subsection B, paragraph 1, after the first "active management area" insert "AS DEFINED IN SECTION 45-402". (Clarification.)

In subsection C, paragraph 1, subdivision (c) and paragraph 2, subdivision (b), strike "Stating". (Grammar.)

In subsection B, first sentence, subsection C, paragraph 1 and subsection I, paragraph 5, after "urban" insert "LAND", strike "urbanizable" and after "land" insert "SUBJECT TO POTENTIAL URBANIZATION". (Clarification.)

(2010) In subsection D, first sentence, strike "as defined in section". (Conformity.) 9-471.02

In subsection H, first sentence, strike the first "or" and insert "OF". (Clarification.) In subsection I, in two places, strike "court" and insert "BOARD". (Clarification.)

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9-476 In the last sentence, after "thereon and" insert "THE MAP OR PLAT SHALL BE".

(Clarification.) 9-499.01

Before "title" insert "THIS" and strike "9". (Style consistency.) 9-499.06

Strike "or legally organized fire district" and "or, in the case of a fire district, in the fire fighters' relief and pension fund". (Obsolete language.) 9-499.14 (2009)

In subsection A, paragraph 1, first sentence, after the first "of" insert "A" and after the third "or" insert "ANY". (Grammar.) In the last sentence, after "energy" insert "INCENTIVE". (Correct terminology.)

In subsection C, strike "as". (Style consistency.) 9-500.11 (L05, Ch. 105, sec. 2 & L05, Ch. 200, sec. 1) (2005) These two versions conflict. If section 9-500.11 is amended, both versions of the section should be addressed in the legislation and the end result should be one version of the statute.

(L05, Ch. 200, sec. 1) In subsection F, after "retail" insert "DEVELOPMENT". (Consistency.) In subsection H, after "development" insert "TAX". (Consistency.) 9-500.12 In subsection A, paragraph 1, second sentence, after "exaction" insert "THAT IS" and after "town" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 9-500.13

Strike the first blank and insert "512", strike the second blank and insert "374", strike the third blank and insert "505" and strike the fourth blank and insert "1003". (Citation corrections.) 9-500.14

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "reports" and insert "PAMPHLETS". (Conformity with section 35-454.) 9-500.16

In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike "of this section". (Style consistency.) 9-500.19 (2003) Strike "as defined in section 43-1086.01". (That section has been repealed.) 9-506 (2007) In subsection H, second sentence, strike the second "of" and after the second "section" insert "EFFECTIVE ON SEPTEMBER 19, 2007". (Clarification.)

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9-511 In subsection A, second sentence, after "electricity" strike the comma and insert

"AND". (Grammar.) In subsection B, strike "charges" and insert "CHARGED". (Grammar.)

9-520 In subsection C, paragraph 3, strike "and". (Grammar.)

9-529

In subsection A, second sentence, after the second "and" insert "SHALL". (Grammar.) 9-582 In subsection D, third sentence, is the reference to "subsection A, paragraph 1 of this section" correct? 9-605 (2003) In subsection B, paragraph 3, after "dollars" insert ", EXCEPT AS PROVIDED IN SUBSECTION C OF THIS SECTION". (Clarification.) 9-833 (2011)

In subsection J, paragraph 3, after "3." insert "TO". (Grammar.) 9-835 (2011)

In subsection K, after "or" insert "A" and strike "expire" and insert "EXPIRES". (Grammar.) 9-840 (2011)

In paragraph 2, strike "a municipal" and insert "MUNICIPALLY". (Clarification.) 9-901

In paragraph 3, strike "include" and insert "INCLUDES". (Style consistency.) 9-921

In subsection B, paragraph 9, strike "9-692 through 9-707" and insert "48-595 THROUGH 48-610". (Internal reference corrections.)

In subsection C, last sentence, strike "actuarily" and insert "ACTUARIALLY". (Spelling.) 9-923

In subsection A, paragraph 5, strike ", malt, or other intoxicating". (Clarification.) 9-934

In subsection A, after "safety" insert "PERSONNEL" and strike "personnel". (Correct terminology.)

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9-951 In subsection B, first sentence, after "served by a" insert "FIRE". (Clarification.)

9-955

Parts of subsections A and D are redundant. The payment to the private fire protection company's pension fund may violate

article IX, section 7, Constitution of Arizona. 9-957

In subsection B, paragraph 9, strike "9-692 through 9-707" and insert "48-595 THROUGH 48-610". (Internal reference corrections.) 9-967.01

Strike "from that same department". (Redundant.) 9-970

In the last sentence, strike "firemen" and insert "FIREFIGHTERS". (Correct terminology.) 9-971

Strike "service credits" and insert "RATING". (Correct terminology.) 9-973

Strike "firemen" and insert "FIREFIGHTERS". (Correct terminology.) 9-981

In subsection B, in three places, strike "firemen" and insert "FIREFIGHTERS". (Correct terminology.)

In subsection C, paragraph 3, strike "firemen's" and insert "FIRE FIGHTERS'". (Correct terminology.) 9-1301 (2006) In paragraph 2, after "city" insert "OR TOWN". (Consistency.) In paragraph 6, strike "as". (Style consistency.) 9-1302 (2006) In subsection A, paragraph 5, after "city's" insert "OR TOWN'S". (Consistency.) 9-1305 (2006) In subsection A, after the first and third commas insert "FOR". (Clarification.) 10-128

In subsection A, strike "to furnish" and insert "FOR". (Clarification.) 10-130

Strike "and regulations". (Conformity.)

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10-141 In subsection B, first sentence, strike "facsimile" and insert "FAX". (Correct

terminology.) In subsection G, last sentence, strike the first comma and insert "THAT ARE".

(Grammar.) 10-722

In subsection C, paragraph 2, first sentence, after "firm," insert "A". (Grammar.)

10-742 In paragraph 2, strike the first "or" and insert a comma. (Grammar.)

10-850

In paragraph 2, first sentence, strike "other". (Redundant.) In paragraph 5, first sentence, strike "other". (Redundant.)

10-856

In subsection A, paragraph 2, in the lead-in language, after "or" insert "A". (Grammar.) 10-857

Strike "other". (Redundant.) 10-860

In paragraph 1, subdivision (a), item (ii), after "and" insert "THE INTEREST IS". (Clarification.) In subdivision (b), in the lead-in language, after the last "and" insert "THE INTEREST IS". (Clarification.)

In paragraph 3, in the lead-in language, strike "of a director". (Redundant.) In paragraph 5, strike "respecting a transaction". (Redundant.)

10-861 In subsection B, at the beginning of paragraphs 1 and 2, insert "THE". (Grammar to

fit with the lead-in language.) 10-1430

In the section heading, remove "or equitable relief". (Conformity.) 10-1431

In the section heading, remove "or equitable relief". (Conformity.) 10-1521 (2006) In subsection A, paragraph 5, subdivision (a), strike "have" and insert "HAS". (Grammar.) 10-1633

In the third sentence, after the second "if" insert "THEY ARE". (Grammar.)

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10-1842 In subsection B, first sentence, strike "money" and insert "MONIES". (Consistency.) 10-2004 In subsection C, insert an apostrophe after "days". (Grammar.) 10-2015 (2011) Between "one" and "half" insert a hyphen. (Spelling.) 10-2020 (2007) Strike the second "and". (Style consistency.) 10-2080 Strike "chapter 12 of" and after "44" insert ", CHAPTER 12". (Style consistency.) 10-2125

In subsection A, paragraph 5, strike "provisions" and insert "PROVISION". (Grammar.)

10-2213

In subsection D, in two places, strike "prior to" and insert "AS IN EFFECT BEFORE". (Clarification.) 10-2228

Strike the first "subsection" and insert "SECTION". (Internal reference correction.) 10-2249

In subsection B, strike "now" and after "existing" insert "ON JANUARY 1, 1996". (Clarification.) 10-2721

In subsection A, paragraph 5, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "SEPTEMBER 27, 1990". (Clarification.) 10-3101

After "40" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Internal reference correction.) 10-3102

In two places, strike "this act" and insert "CHAPTERS 24 THROUGH 40 OF THIS TITLE". (Internal reference corrections.) 10-3120 (2007) In subsection F, paragraph 1, strike the first "its" and after "corporation," insert "BY". (Grammar.)

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10-3128 In subsection A, strike "to furnish" and insert "FOR". (Clarification.)

10-3130

Strike "make" and insert "ADOPT" and strike "and regulations". (Conformity.) 10-3140 (2003) In paragraph 18, after "includes" insert "SENDING BY". (Grammar.) 10-3141 (2003) In subsection C, first sentence, after "member's" insert "OR DIRECTOR'S". (Consistency.) 10-3160

In subsection A, strike "impractical" and insert "IMPRACTICABLE". (Grammar.) In subsection D, strike "practical" and insert "PRACTICABLE". (Grammar.)

10-3207

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "defined" and insert "AS PRESCRIBED". (Clarification.) 10-3222

In paragraph 6, after "by" insert "THE". (Grammar.) 10-3302

In paragraph 16, strike the last comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) In paragraph 20, after "act" insert "THAT IS" and after "law" insert "AND".

(Grammar.) 10-3614

In subsection C, last sentence, after "and" insert "THE MEMBER". (Grammar.) 10-3632

In paragraph 2, strike the first "or" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 10-3634

In subsection A, strike "subsections" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Grammar.) 10-3701

In subsection D, after "matter" insert "THAT IS". (Grammar.) 10-3721

In subsection B, after the second "or" insert "A". (Grammar.) 10-3722

In the last sentence, strike the last comma. (Grammar.)

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10-3727 In subsection C, after "has" insert "A". (Grammar.)

Title 10, Chapter 30, Article 3 (10-3730)

In the article heading strike "AGREEMENT" and insert "AGREEMENTS". (Conformity.) 10-3822

In subsection A, strike "provide" and insert "PROVIDES". (Grammar.) In subsection B, first sentence, strike "provide" and insert "PROVIDES". (Grammar.)

10-3823 (2003) In subsection A, second sentence, after "mail" insert a comma. (Grammar consistent with meaning of sentence.) 10-3830

In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike "person" and insert "PERSONS". (Consistency.) 10-3850

In paragraph 2, first sentence, strike "other". (Redundant.) In paragraph 3, strike "include" and insert "INCLUDES". (Style consistency.) In paragraph 5, first sentence, strike "other". (Redundant.)

10-3852

In subsection B, in two places, strike "10-851" and insert "10-3851". (Internal reference corrections.)

In subsection C, first sentence, strike "10-851" and insert "10-3851" and strike "10-854" and insert "10-3854". (Internal reference corrections.) 10-3856

In subsection A, paragraph 2, in the lead-in language, after "or" insert "A". (Grammar.)

In subsection B, after "also" insert "A". (Grammar.) 10-3857

Strike "other". (Redundant.) 10-3860

In paragraph 1, subdivision (a), item (ii), after "and" insert "THE INTEREST IS" and in subdivision (b), in the lead-in language, after the last "and" insert "THE INTEREST IS". (Clarification.)

In paragraph 3, in the lead-in language, strike "of a director". (Redundant.) In paragraph 5, strike "respecting a transaction". (Redundant.)

10-3861

In subsection B, at the beginning of paragraphs 1 and 2, insert "THE". (Grammar to fit with the lead-in language.)

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10-3864 In subsection B, paragraph 3, strike "have" and insert "OFFER" and strike "the

offering of". (Grammar.) In subsection C, paragraph 1, strike the first "or" and insert a comma. (Grammar.)

10-11108

After "promise" insert "THAT IS" and strike the last comma. (Grammar.) 10-11202

In subsection B, paragraph 1, last sentence, should "plan" be changed to "PROPOSED TRANSACTION"?

In subsection E, strike the second comma. (Grammar.) (2011) In subsection H, in the lead-in language and in three places in paragraphs 1

and 2, after "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference corrections.) 10-11251 (2011) In paragraphs 5 and 7, after "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference corrections.) 10-11502

In subsection F, last sentence, strike the last "a". (Grammar.) 10-11622

In subsection E, first sentence, strike "containing" and insert "THAT CONTAINS" and strike the second comma and insert "AND THAT IS". (Grammar.) 10-11633

In the third sentence, after the second "if" insert "THEY ARE". (Grammar.) 10-11804 (2008) In subsection E, strike "law" and insert "THE LAWS". (Style consistency.) 10-11806 (2008) In two places, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "SEPTEMBER 26, 2008". (Clarification.) 10-11908 In subsection B, after the second "40" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Style consistency.) 11-135

In subsection B, second sentence, after "notify" insert "BY CERTIFIED MAIL". (Conformity with subsection D.)

11-143

In subsection A, eighth and ninth sentences, after "services" insert "AS". (Grammar.)

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11-144 In subsection A, first sentence, after "college" insert "DISTRICTS". (Clarification.)

11-251.12 (2007)

In subsection D, strike the second "that". (Grammar.) 11-254.01

In subsection A, first sentence, after "county" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 11-256.01

"Public finance corporation" is not defined. 11-269.02

In subsection B, strike "collection" and insert "GROUP". (Clarification.) 11-269.05 (2003) Strike "as defined in section 43-1086.01." (That section has been repealed.) 11-269.10 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 1, first sentence, after the second "the" insert "ARIZONA". (Correct name.) 11-292

(2011) In subsection C, paragraph 4, last sentence, strike "director of the department of economic security" and insert "OFFICE OF EMPLOYMENT AND POPULATION STATISTICS". (Conformity.)

(2011) In subsection O, third sentence, strike "department of economic security" and insert "OFFICE OF EMPLOYMENT AND POPULATION STATISTICS". (Conformity.)

(2007) In subsection R, strike "22-217" and insert "22-117". (Internal reference correction.) 11-296

In subsection A, paragraph 5, strike the comma. (Grammar.) In subsection B, strike the first comma. (Grammar.)

11-300 (2011)

In subsection C, last sentence, strike "department of economic security" and insert "OFFICE OF EMPLOYMENT AND POPULATION STATISTICS". (Conformity.) 11-307

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "44" and insert "47". (Internal reference correction.) 11-309

In subsection D, first sentence, the language providing that excise taxes be placed in a special fund conflicts with section 42-5035 requiring deposit in the county general fund.

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11-403 (2008) In subsection B, in the lead-in language, strike "of the first class".

(Outdated.) Designate the last sentence of the section as a new subsection C and after the first

"client" insert "UNDER SUBSECTION B, PARAGRAPH 2". (Clarification.) 11-410

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "reports" and insert "PAMPHLETS". (Conformity with section 35-454.) 11-448

Strike "so" and insert "AS". (Grammar.) 11-461 (2007)

In subsection C, after "government," insert "BY". (Grammar.) In subsection G, first sentence, strike the third comma (grammar) and in the third

sentence, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section," and insert "SEPTEMBER 19, 2007" (clarification).

In subsection H, second sentence, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section," and insert "SEPTEMBER 19, 2007". (Clarification.)

In subsection J, strike the first "a". (Style consistency.) 11-479 (2011)

In subsection A, after "typewriting" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 11-487.01 (2005) In the lead-in language, strike "chapter" and insert "ARTICLE". (Internal reference correction.) 11-505 (2007)

In subsection B, after the first "to" insert "A TAXPAYER MAY BE DISCLOSED" and in paragraphs 1, 2, 3 and 4, strike "A taxpayer may be disclosed". (Consistency.) In paragraph 3, strike "entity" and insert "AGENCY". (Conformity.)

In subsection D, paragraphs 1 and 2, after "payment of" insert "ANY". (Grammar.) 11-538

In subsection B, second sentence, strike "applies" and insert "APPLY". (Grammar.) In subsection C, strike "submit" and insert "REPORT". (Clarification.)

11-583

Designate the last sentence of subsection A as a new subsection B and after the first "client" insert "UNDER SUBSECTION A, PARAGRAPH 2". (Clarification.)

Reletter to conform. 11-591 (2007)

In paragraph 11, strike "section 371 of". (Clarification.)

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11-593 (2007) In subsection A, paragraph 10, after "10." insert "DEATH INVOLVING".

(Clarification.) 11-596 (2007)

In subsection C, after "examiner," insert "THE". (Grammar.) 11-600

In subsection B, last sentence, it is unclear whether the duty of providing disposition arrangements for the body devolves in the order provided in section 36-831, subsection A. Should ", AS APPLICABLE" be added after "county"? 11-604

In subsection B, second sentence, after the first "sick" insert "PAY". (Correct terminology.) 11-622

In subsection A, strike the third "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 11-624.01

In subsection A, insert a period between "liability" and "the". (Grammar.) 11-640

In the second sentence, strike "his" and insert "THE". (Clarification.) 11-664

In subsection B, first sentence, after the second "for" insert "A". (Grammar.) In subsection C, first sentence, before "action" insert "THE". (Grammar.)

11-671 (2006) In subsection J, strike "as". (Style consistency.) 11-681.01 (2011)

In subsection A, in the lead-in language, after the second "board" insert a comma. (Grammar.)

11-702

In subsection A, sixth sentence, strike "remainder of the" and insert "MAYORS OF THE REMAINING" and after "shall" insert "EACH". (Clarification.) 11-803 (L10, Ch. 244, sec. 7) (2010)

In subsection B, last sentence, after the second "board," insert "THE". (Grammar.) 11-806 (2011)

In subsection B, strike "department of economic security" and insert "OFFICE OF EMPLOYMENT AND POPULATION STATISTICS". (Conformity.)

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11-817 (2010) In subsection C, after "C." insert "IF". (Grammar.)

11-822 (2010)

In subsection A, fourth sentence, strike "land" and insert "LANDS". (Correct terminology.) 11-833 (2010)

In subsection D, first sentence, strike "as defined in section". (Conformity.) 11-862

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "at least members" and insert "A MEMBER" and after "from" insert "EACH OF". (Clarification.) 11-874

In paragraph 4, second sentence, strike "regulations" and insert "RULES". (Conformity.) 11-875

In subsection A, second sentence, after "49-541" insert "AND". (Grammar.) In paragraph 3, strike "of this section". (Style consistency.) 11-876 In subsection A, first sentence, strike "49-451" and insert "49-541". (Internal reference correction.) 11-877 (2007)

In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "SEPTEMBER 19, 2007". (Clarification.) 11-903

In subsection A, strike the first "free" and after the first "county" insert "FREE". (Correct terminology.) 11-914

In subsection B, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "AUGUST 13, 1986". (Clarification.)

11-932

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "ten-year" and insert "TWENTY-FIVE YEAR". (Conformity with section 11-256.) 11-934

In subsection B, last sentence, between "one" and "third" insert a hyphen. (Spelling.)

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11-952.01 (2010) In subsection H, strike the third sentence. (This requirement was deleted from section 11-952.) 11-1014.01 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "prohibit" and insert "PREVENT". (Clarification.)

In subsection B, paragraph 3, strike the second comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 11-1022 (2011)

In subsection H, paragraph 2, after the fourth and sixth "the" insert "UNITED STATES". (Conformity.) 11-1023

In the lead-in language, strike "or for" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 11-1025

In subsection B, paragraphs 1, 2, 3 and 4, strike "In". (Grammar to follow the lead-in.)

11-1202 In subsection D, strike the first comma and strike "grants" and insert "GRANTING". (Grammar.) 11-1205 In subsection C, strike "defined" and insert "PRESCRIBED". (Clarification.) 11-1402

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "To assume" and insert "ASSUMING". (Grammar to follow the lead-in.)

11-1437

In subsection B, first sentence, after the first "employees" insert "WHO ARE" and after "agreement" insert "AND". (Grammar.) In the third sentence, strike "section". (Internal reference correction.) 11-1440

In subsection B, paragraph 6, strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 11-1603 (2011)

In subsection J, paragraph 3, after "3." insert "TO". (Grammar.) 11-1605 (2011)

In subsection A, strike "regulation" and insert "CODE". (Conformity.) In subsection K, after "or" insert "A" and strike "expire" and insert "EXPIRES".

(Grammar.)

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11-1609 (2011) In subsection C, strike "governing body" and insert "BOARD OF SUPERVISORS".

(Conformity.) 11-1610 (2011)

In paragraph 1, strike "they are" and insert "IT IS". (Grammar.) 12-120.21 (2004) In subsection A, paragraph 4, before "rules" insert "ARIZONA". (Correct terminology.) 12-121 (2004) In subsection C, before "bureau" insert "UNITED STATES". (Correct terminology.) 12-131 (2010)

In subsection B, first sentence, strike the second "for" and insert "ON" (correct terminology) and in the second sentence, after "shall" insert a comma (grammar). 12-164

In subsection D, after the first "of" insert "THE SUPERIOR COURT IN". (Correct terminology.)

12-171

Strike "the court" and insert "IT". (Clarification.)

12-242 In subsection A, after "is" insert "A". (Grammar.)

12-282 (2010)

In subsection A, after "rules" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 12-283 (2007)

In subsections I and J, after "case name," insert "THE CASE". (Clarification.) 12-287

In subsection C, strike "submit" and insert "REPORT". (Clarification.) 12-298

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "and chapter 9, article 10 of this title". (Renumbered.)

In subsection G, second sentence, strike "regular" and insert "FIRST CLASS". (Clarification.) 12-313

In subsection A, at the end of paragraphs 1 through 4, strike the commas and insert periods. (Style consistency.)

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12-341.02 (2010) Strike "will" and insert "SHALL". (Clarification.)

12-345

In the section heading, change "fees" to "costs". (Conformity.) 12-401

In paragraph 15, strike "it" and insert "THE ACTIONS". (Grammar.) 12-405

Strike "A" and insert "THE", after the first "court" insert "IN ANY COUNTY" and after the second "court" strike "of" and insert "IN". (Clarification.) 12-504

In subsection E, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "AUGUST 13, 1986". (Clarification.) 12-511 (2005) In subsection G, paragraph 2, subdivision (b), strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "AUGUST 12, 2005". (Clarification.) 12-552

In subsection G, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "MAY 14, 1992". (Clarification.) 12-553

In subsection A, after "if" insert "ANY OF THE FOLLOWING OCCURS". (Clarification.) 12-556

In subsection C, paragraph 5, in the lead-in language, after "area" insert "BOTH". (Clarification.) 12-569

Strike "conducted pursuant to section 12-567". (This section has been repealed.) 12-572 (2009) In subsection A, after "and" insert "ACTIVE". (Citation correction.) 12-652

In the section heading, remove "or television". (Conformity.) In subsection B, before the first "station" insert "VISUAL OR SOUND RADIO

BROADCASTING". (Consistency.)

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12-687 Letter the lead-in sentence as subsection "A." (Style consistency.) In paragraph 1, second sentence, strike "However," and insert "2." and after

"position" insert "THAT IS" and strike "which" and insert "AND THAT". (Grammar.) Reletter paragraph 2 as subsection "B." and strike "subsection" and insert

"SECTION". (Conformity.) Reletter to conform. In current paragraph 3, after the second "review" insert "OR THE REASONABLE

REMEDIAL MEASURES". (Clarification.) In current paragraph 4, second sentence, strike "procedures" and insert

"PROCEDURE". (Correct terminology.) 12-713 (2007) Strike "that is" and insert "WHO ARE". (Grammar.) 12-714 In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike "2" and insert "II". (Citation correction.) 12-715

In subsection A, first sentence, strike the last comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 12-717 (2007) In subsection A, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 12-742

In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike "or" and insert "OF". (Correct terminology.) In subsection C, strike "chapter 6," and strike "title" and insert "CHAPTER".

(Internal reference correction.) 12-743

In subsection B, first sentence, strike the first "or" and insert "OF". (Correct terminology.) 12-761 (2007)

In subsection H, paragraph 1, after "art" strike the comma and insert "OR", strike the fourth "or" and insert a comma, after "radio" strike the comma and insert "OR" and after the fifth "or" insert "IN ANY". (Grammar.) 12-771 (2008) In subsection A, after "if" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 12-820 (2010)

In paragraph 3, strike "providing" and insert "WHO PROVIDES" and after "and" insert "WHO". (Grammar.)

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12-821.01 Should the references throughout this section to "a claim" or "claims" be changed to

"AN ACTION" and "ACTIONS"? In subsection C, second sentence, after the third "claim" insert "PROCESS".

(Clarification.) In the third sentence, strike "provision" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Clarification.)

In subsection F, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "JULY 17, 1994". (Clarification.) 12-822

In subsection A, before "Arizona" insert "THE". (Grammar.)

12-886 Review the constitutionality of the seven-year time limit imposed by this section.

Most states now provide for a custodial taking on behalf of the owner of unclaimed property and allow claims at any time. 12-888

In subsection B, last sentence, after "court" strike "of" and insert "IN". (Correct terminology.) 12-889

In the section heading, remove "and regulations; salary". (Conformity.) In subsection B, strike "promulgate" and insert "ADOPT" and strike "and

regulations". (Conformity.) 12-941

In subsection B, paragraph 4, after "state or" insert "A" (grammar) and strike the last "of" and insert "OR" (clarification).

In subsection G, strike "will" and insert "SHALL". (Clarification.) 12-943

In subsection B, third sentence, after "a state or" insert "A". (Grammar.) 12-971

In paragraph 1, after "means" insert "ANY OF THE FOLLOWING". (Clarification.) In subdivisions (a), (b) and (c), strike "; and" and insert a period. (Style consistency.) 12-981

In paragraph 1, clarify whether the state is included in the definition. In paragraph 5, first sentence, strike the first "or" and insert a comma. (Grammar.)

12-990 (2003) In paragraph 2, after "pursuant to" insert "TITLE 32," and strike "of this title". (Internal reference correction.)

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12-1000 (2005) In subsection F, paragraph 1, first sentence, after "pursuant" insert "TO". (Grammar.) 12-1101

In subsection A, strike "any one" and insert "ANYONE". (Spelling.) 12-1111

(2006) In the lead-in language, after "the state," insert "BY". (Grammar.) In paragraphs 10 and 17, strike "pipe lines" and insert "PIPELINES". (Spelling.) In paragraph 16, strike "water courses" and "water course" and insert

"WATERCOURSES" and "WATERCOURSE". (Spelling.) In paragraph 18, hyphenate "rights of way". (Spelling.)

12-1114 (2004) In paragraph 5, strike "paragraph 2 of" and after "12-1111" insert ", PARAGRAPH 2". (Style consistency.) 12-1121

In subsection B, strike "articles 2 and" and insert "THIS ARTICLE AND ARTICLE". (Style consistency.) 12-1124

In the second sentence, strike "which" and insert "THAT" and after "interest," insert "AND". (Grammar.)

12-1128 (2006) In subsection B, second sentence, after "dispose" insert "OF". (Grammar.) 12-1134 (2009) In subsection B, paragraph 7, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "DECEMBER 7, 2006". (Clarification.) 12-1156 After "all" insert "OF". (Grammar.) 12-1191 (2005) In subsection D, paragraphs 1 and 2, strike "does" and insert "DO". (Grammar.) 12-1310

Strike "thereof", "therein" and "heretofore". (Style consistency.) 12-1361 (2008) In paragraph 7, strike "title 32, chapter 20" and insert "SECTION 32-2101". (Internal reference correction.)

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12-1366 (2007) In subsection A, paragraph 1, third sentence, strike the second comma and insert "AND IN". (Grammar.) 12-1509

In the first sentence, strike "sections" and insert "SECTION". (Grammar.) 12-1512

In subsection A, in the lead-in language, strike the second "and" and insert "AN". (Grammar.) 12-1514

In the first sentence, strike "confirmity" and insert "CONFORMITY". (Grammar.) 12-1566

In subsection C, fifth sentence, insert quotation marks around the words "fair market value" and strike "shall mean" and insert "MEANS". Since this term is also used in subsection B, the definition should probably be in a new subsection J beginning with "FOR THE PURPOSES OF THIS SECTION," and the section heading should include "; definition". (Style consistency.) 12-1574

In subsection A, after "sheriff" strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 12-1596 (2011)

In subsection C, in paragraph 2, subdivision (e) of the form and in paragraph 3, subdivision (b) of the "Request for hearing," strike "veterans' administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 12-1597

In subsection B, strike the second "the" and insert "THIS". (Clarification.) 12-1642

In subsection B, strike "situate" and insert "SITUATED". (Grammar.) 12-1701

Strike the colon and insert a comma. (Style consistency.) 12-2234

In subsection C, strike "defined" and insert "PRESCRIBED". (Clarification.) 12-2239 (2003) In subsection C, after third "the" insert "DOMESTIC VIOLENCE". (Consistency.) In subsection I, after the second "or" insert "A". (Grammar.)

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12-2294.01 (2005) In subsection B, in the lead-in language, strike "payments" and insert "PAYMENT". (Consistency.)

(2006) In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike "42" and insert "45". (Citation correction.) In subsection D, paragraph 4, subdivision (c) and subsection E, paragraph 4, strike "sections 290dd-3 and 290ee-3" and insert "SECTION 290dd-2". (Citation correction.) 12-2312

Before "sheriff's" insert "A" and before "county" insert "A". (Grammar.) 12-2501

In subsection F, paragraph 3, in two places, strike "workmen's" and insert "WORKERS' ". (Correct terminology.) 12-2506

In subsection D, paragraph 3, strike the comma and insert parentheses around "45 United States Code section 51". (Style consistency.) 12-2601

In paragraph 1, strike "through" and insert ", 12-562 AND" and strike "of this title". (Style consistency.) 12-2603 (2004)

In subsection B, in two places, strike "H" and insert "A". (Internal reference correction.)

In subsection D, after the fourth "or" insert "THE". (Grammar.) In subsection H, paragraph 1, strike "through" and insert ", 12-562 AND". (Style

consistency.) 12-2605 (2005) After the first "a" insert "LICENSED". (Consistency.) 12-2701 (2007) In paragraph 3, subdivision (a), in two places, strike "immigration and naturalization service" and insert "UNITED STATES IMMIGRATION AND CUSTOMS ENFORCEMENT OR UNITED STATES CITIZENSHIP AND IMMIGRATION SERVICES". (Correct terminology.) 12-2702 (2007) In subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (b) and paragraph 3, subdivision (d), strike "United States commissioner of immigration and naturalization" and insert "ASSISTANT SECRETARY OF THE UNITED STATES IMMIGRATION AND CUSTOMS ENFORCEMENT, THE DIRECTOR OF THE UNITED STATES CITIZENSHIP AND IMMIGRATION SERVICES". (Correct terminology.)

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12-2901 In paragraph 17, strike "include" and insert "INCLUDES". (Style consistency.) 12-2904 In subsection C, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "AUGUST 22, 2002". (Clarification.) 12-3029 (2010)

Strike "463" and insert "464". (Citation correction.) 13-116 (2005) In the second sentence, strike "require" and insert "REQUIRES". (Grammar.) 13-407 (2006) In the section heading, add "; definition". (Style consistency.) 13-410

In subsection C, in the lead-in language, after "another" insert "PERSON". (Clarification.) 13-414

In the section heading, after "means" add "by correctional officers". (Style consistency.) 13-416

In the section heading, after "means" add "by security officers". (Style consistency.) Strike subsection B and amend the same language in the correct title 41 section.

(Proper code placement.) 13-606 In subsection A, strike "subsection B of" and after "13-605," insert "SUBSECTION B," and strike "chapter 5 of" and after "36" insert ", CHAPTER 5". (Style consistency.) 13-610 (2011)

In subsection M, in the lead-in language, strike the third "of" and insert "FOR". (Grammar.) 13-702 (2008) In subsection E, first sentence, after "pursuant" insert "TO". (Grammar.) 13-711 (2007)

In subsection A, strike "sentence or". (Consistency.) 13-713 (2011)

In subsections F and G, in two places, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "July 20, 2011". (Clarification.)

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13-757 In subsection C, strike the first and second "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.)

13-802

In subsections A, B and C, before "not" insert "OF". (Grammar.) 13-819

In subsection C, in two places, strike "12-1598.12" and insert "12-1598.11". (Internal reference correction.) 13-823 In subsection A, paragraph 1, after the first "probation" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 13-901.03

In subsection A, first sentence, strike the second "the" and insert "A". (Clarification.) 13-911

Strike "sections" and insert "SECTION". (Grammar.) 13-917

In subsection A, last sentence, strike the first "or" and before "terminate" insert "MAY". (Grammar.) 13-923 (2007)

In subsection D, paragraph 3, strike "this state" and insert "ARIZONA", strike "title 13," and after "40" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Citation corrections.) 13-925 (2011)

In subsection C, first sentence, after "On" insert "THE" and in paragraph 4, strike the first comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.)

In subsection G, strike "affect" and insert "EFFECT". (Grammar.) 13-1101

Alphabetize the definitions. (Style consistency.) 13-1209

In subsection B, strike "Motor vehicles that are used in violation of this section are" and insert "A MOTOR VEHICLE FROM WHICH A PERSON COMMITS A DRIVE BY SHOOTING IS". (Clarification.) 13-1211

In subsection C, paragraph 2, strike "both" and after "lodging" insert ", OR BOTH". (Clarification.)

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13-1213 In subsection C, after "high" insert "-POWERED" and between "low" and "powered" insert a hyphen. (Spelling.) 13-1305

Strike subsection D and remove "; definition" from the section heading. (The defined term is not used in the section.) 13-1416

In subsection A, in the lead-in language, strike the second comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 13-1420 (2005) In subsection C, paragraph 4, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "AUGUST 12, 2005". (Clarification.) 13-1603

In subsection B, in the lead-in language, strike "punished" and insert "PUNISHABLE". In paragraphs 1 and 3, after "if" insert "THE ACT IS". (Clarification.) 13-1706 (2003) In subsection A, strike the second "to". (Grammar.) 13-1808 In subsection D, first sentence, strike "regular" and insert "FIRST CLASS". (Clarification.) In subsection E, in the form of notice strike "19". (Outdated language.) 13-1811

In subsections B, C and D, before "bad check trust fund" insert "COUNTY". (Correct terminology.) 13-1813

In subsection F, strike "property" and insert "SECURITY". (Correct terminology.) 13-2001 (2004) In paragraph 4, after "unique to," insert "IS". (Grammar.) 13-2105

In subsection A, paragraph 2, after the first "holder" strike "to" and insert "OF". (Grammar.) 13-2204

In subsection B, strike "as". (Style consistency.)

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13-2303 In the section heading, add "; classification". (Style consistency.)

13-2308.01 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 11, second sentence, strike "device" and insert "AGENT" (correct terminology) and in paragraph 15, strike "destruct" and insert "DESTROY" (grammar). 13-2314.02

In subsection G, first sentence, after the second "interest" strike the comma. (Grammar.)

In subsection J, second sentence, after "title" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 13-2318

In paragraph 3, strike the second "as defined". (Redundant.) 13-2320 (2007)

In subsection E, paragraph 3, after the second "interest" insert "IN" and after "in" insert "A". (Clarification.) 13-2402

In subsection B, strike "hinderance" and insert "HINDRANCE". (Spelling.) 13-2504

In subsection A, in the lead-in language, after the comma insert "A". (Grammar.) In subsection B, after "confined" insert ", TO ANY CONFINEMENT IN A

SECURE CARE FACILITY". (Clarification.) 13-2505

In subsection E, after "practitioner" insert "AS DEFINED IN SECTION 32-2801". (Clarification.) 13-2704 (2006) In subsection B, strike "paragraph 1," and after "A," insert "PARAGRAPH 1". (Style consistency.) 13-2905

In subsection A, paragraph 5, the reference to "college" does not include community colleges. If it was intended to include them under loitering they need to be specifically listed. 13-2907.01

In subsection B, before "Violation" insert "A". (Grammar.)

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13-2910 In subsection B, paragraph 1, first sentence, strike the first "and" and strike the last two commas. (Grammar.) 13-2912 In subsection A, paragraph 1, insert "THE" before "Livestock". (Grammar.) 13-2923

In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "their" and insert "THE PERSON'S". (Grammar.) 13-3006 (2008)

In paragraph 2, in three places, strike "communications" and insert "COMMUNICATION" (conformity with the defined term) and after the first "provider" strike the comma and insert "OR AN" (grammar). 13-3009 (2008)

Strike "communications" and insert "COMMUNICATION". (Conformity with the defined term.) 13-3013 In the lead-in language, before "The" insert "ANY OF" and strike "constitute" and insert "CONSTITUTES". (Clarification.) 13-3015

In subsection A, strike "determines" and insert "DETERMINE". (Grammar.) 13-3103

In subsection A, strike the paragraph designation "4." and insert "B." Reletter to conform. (Style consistency.) 13-3108 (2010)

In subsection D, strike "the effective date of the amendment to this section" and insert "JULY 29, 2010". (Clarification.) 13-3114 (2010)

In subsection C, after the first "firearm," insert "A". (Grammar.) 13-3119 (2008) In subsection B, paragraph 4, after "approved by the" insert "UNITED STATES". (Clarification.) 13-3208

In subsection A, after "or" insert "OF A". (Grammar.)

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13-3302 (2011) In subsection B, in the lead-in language and in paragraph 4, after "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference corrections.) 13-3311 (2011) In subsection D, after "43-1201, insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 13-3403.02

In subsection A, paragraph 5, after "card" insert "THAT IS". (Grammar.) Strike subsection E because it duplicates section 28-3309, subsections B and C.

13-3461

In paragraph 5, strike "subsection" and insert "SECTION". (Internal reference correction.) 13-3510

In subsection B, before "violation" insert "A" (grammar) and strike "article" and insert "CHAPTER" (internal reference correction). 13-3513

In subsection B, in the lead-in language, after "and" insert "THE DEFENDANT". (Clarification.) 13-3620 (2006) In subsection A, second sentence, after the second "clergy," insert "A". (Grammar.) (2003) In subsection A, paragraph 4, strike "advocate" and insert "ADVOCATES". (Grammar.) (2003) In subsection H, first sentence, strike "them" and insert "CHILD PROTECTIVE SERVICES". (Clarification.) (2009) In subsection P, paragraph 4, subdivision (b), strike "of" and insert "OR VIEWING". (Correct terminology.) 13-3623.01 (2009)

In subsection B, last sentence, in two places, strike "the effective date of the amendment to this section" and insert "SEPTEMBER 30, 2009". (Clarification.) 13-3624

In subsection D, paragraph 3, strike the first comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 13-3719

In subsection A, after the first "device" strike ", who" and after the last "device" insert a comma. (Grammar.)

In subsection F, paragraph 1, strike the second "an" and insert "THAT". (Clarification.)

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13-3723 (2004) In subsection A, strike "they were" and insert "THAT THE PERSON WAS". (Grammar.) In subsection B, first sentence, strike "any person" and insert "SOMEONE". (Clarification.) In subsection C, strike "that" and insert "WHO". (Grammar.) 13-3724 (2004) In subsection B, in the lead-in language, strike "violated" and insert "COMMITTED" (clarification) and in paragraph 3, strike the second "an" (grammar). 13-3726 (2007)

In subsection C, paragraph 1, after "art" strike the comma and insert "OR", strike the fourth "or" and insert a comma, after "radio" strike the comma and insert "OR" and after the fifth "or" insert "IN ANY". (Grammar.) 13-3821 (2010)

In subsection A, paragraph 10, after "13-3212" insert a comma and strike "paragraphs" and insert "PARAGRAPH". (Grammar.) 13-3822 (2007)

In subsection D, paragraph 2, after "include" insert "A" and strike the last comma. (Grammar.) 13-3841 (2007) In paragraph 1, subdivision (e), strike "The conviction" and insert "BEING CONVICTED." (2006) Transpose paragraphs 2 and 3. (They are not in alphabetical order.) 13-3845

In subsection B, paragraph 2, after "Fingerprints" insert "THAT ARE" and after "authority" insert "AND". (Grammar.)

13-3850

Strike the subsection designation "A.". (Style consistency.) 13-3859.01

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "a correctional facility in the state department of corrections" and insert "AN ARIZONA STATE PRISON". (Clarification.) 13-3869

In subsection D, paragraph 2, strike the last "or" and insert a comma and after "parole" insert "OR COMMUNITY SUPERVISION". (Consistency.)

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13-3885 In subsection A, strike "as defined in section 20-340". (Redundant.) In subsection G, paragraph 1, strike "20-282.01" and insert "20-340". (Internal

reference correction.)

13-3901 Strike "some one" and insert "SOMEONE". (Spelling.)

13-3912

In paragraph 3, after "preventing it" insert "FROM". (Grammar.) 13-3914

In subsection C, last sentence, strike the first "and" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 13-3967 (2008) In subsection F, paragraph 4, last sentence, strike "subsection" and insert "PARAGRAPH". (Internal reference correction.) 13-3989.02 In subsection A, in the form, third sentence, strike "documents and tapes" and insert "RECORDS AND RECORDINGS". (Consistency.) 13-4031 (2004) Before "rules" insert "ARIZONA". (Correct terminology.) 13-4040

In the first sentence, strike "has" and insert "HAVE". (Grammar.) In the last sentence, strike "is" and insert "ARE" (grammar) and before "department"

insert "STATE" (correct terminology). 13-4041 (2006) In subsection B, first sentence, strike the second comma and after "or" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 13-4063

Strike "rape" and insert "SEXUAL ASSAULT". (Correct terminology.) 13-4072

In subsection B, paragraph 3, strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) In subsection D, first sentence, after "delivery to" insert "THE". (Grammar.) Strike subsection G. (Section 13-4076 has been repealed.)

13-4202 (2007)

In subsection L, strike the second "execution". (Clarification.)

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13-4231 In paragraph 5, first sentence, strike "that". (Clarification.)

13-4232

In subsection C, second sentence, strike "Though" and insert "ALTHOUGH". (Grammar.) 13-4312

In subsection H, paragraph 4, first sentence, strike "J and K" and insert "L AND M". (Internal reference correction.) 13-4401.01 In subsection A, first sentence, strike "article" and insert "CHAPTER". (Internal reference correction.) 13-4405.01

In subsection A, strike "Beginning on the effective date of this section," (unnecessary) and before "is materially" insert "A CRIMINAL OFFENSE THAT" (clarification).

In subsection C, paragraph 3, after "release" insert "OR ESCAPE". (Clarification.) In subsection D, after "performs" strike "that" and insert "THE". (Grammar.) In subsection F, after " enforcement" insert "AGENCIES". (Clarification.)

13-4411.01

In subsection A, paragraph 4, strike the quotation marks (style consistency) and in the first sentence of the statement, strike "the victim's" and insert "YOUR" (clarification).

In subsection C, strike the first comma and strike ", is not to receive mail". (Grammar.) 13-4413

In subsection A, in the lead-in language, insert "STATE" before the second "department". (Correct terminology.) 13-4414

In subsection A, strike "section 31-326" and insert "31-236" and strike the third "section". (Style consistency and although section 31-236 has been repealed the reference to it needs to remain in this section.)

In subsection B and subsection C, first sentence, strike "pardons and paroles" and insert "EXECUTIVE CLEMENCY". (Correct terminology.) 13-4424

In subsection B, at the beginning of the sentence insert "IN PREPARING THE PRESENTENCE REPORT,". (Clarification.) 13-4436 (2006) In subsection B, second sentence, before "Failure" insert "THE". (Grammar.)

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13-4514 In subsection A, in the lead-in language, strike "which" and insert ", AND THE

COURT". (Clarification.) 13-4901 (2005) In paragraph 1, in two places, before "nuclear regulatory commission" insert "UNITED STATES". (Clarification.) 14-1201 (2011)

In paragraph 3, after "means" insert "AN". (Grammar.) 14-1301

Insert the subsection designation "A." before "Except" and "B." before "This title". (Style consistency.) 14-1311 (2010)

Strike the second "the" and insert "A" and after the second "of" insert "THE". (Conformity.) 14-1404 (2008) In subsection A, before the first "Notice" insert "A" and before the second "notice" insert "THE". (Grammar.) 14-2103

In paragraph 4, in three places, before "half" insert "ONE-". (Correct terminology.) 14-2301

In subsection A, in the lead-in language, strike the first "as". (Grammar.) 14-2507

In subsection D, last sentence, strike "they" and insert "THE WILLS". (Clarification.) 14-3108

Insert the subsection designation "A." before "An informal" and "B." before "These limitations". (Style consistency.)

In newly lettered subsection B, second sentence, after "under" insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Conformity.) 14-3204

In the last sentence, strike "provision" and insert "SECTION". (Style consistency.) 14-5107

In subsection A, strike "have" and insert "HAS". (Grammar.)

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14-5109 (2011) In subsection B, strike "subsection" and insert "SECTION". (Internal reference correction.) 14-5110 (2011)

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "JANUARY 1, 2012". (Clarification.) 14-5310.01

In subsection A, last sentence, strike "act" and insert "SECTION". (Internal reference correction.)

In subsection B, after "Upon" insert "A" and strike the second "to" and insert "OF". (Grammar.) 14-5312.02 (2011)

In subsection A, second sentence, before "14-5312.01" insert "SECTION". (Style consistency.) 14-5407 (2011) In subsection C, in three places strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 14-5414 (2011) In subsection G, second sentence, strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 14-5419 (2011) In subsection E, in four places strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 14-5425 (2011) In subsection A, paragraph 4, strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.)

In subsection B, after "14-5401," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 14-5426

In subsection B, strike the last sentence. (Outdated language.) 14-5502

Strike "has" and insert "HAVE", strike "inures" and insert "INURE" and strike "binds" and insert "BIND". (Grammar.)

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14-5606 In subsection D, paragraph 6, after the second "share" insert "OR DEVISE".

(Consistency.) 14-6102 In subsection C, strike "interments" and insert "INSTRUMENTS". (Consistency.) 14-6303

In subsection A, in two places, after "this" insert "ARTICLE" (clarification) and strike "of the law" (redundant). 14-7418 (2009) In subsection F, second sentence, strike "section 7520 of the internal revenue code of 1986, as amended,". (Redundant.) 14-7420 In subsection D, in three places, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "JANUARY 1, 2002". (Clarification.) 14-7421 In subsection D, in three places, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "JANUARY 1, 2002". (Clarification.) 14-7670

In the lead-in language, strike "earlier" and insert "EARLIEST". (Grammar.) 14-7671

In the lead-in language, strike "its effective date" and insert "SEPTEMBER 30, 1988". (Clarification.) 14-10012 (2005) In subsection D, paragraph 1, strike "surviving" and insert "SERVING". (Clarification.) 14-10016 (2005) In two places, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "AUGUST 12, 2005". (Clarification.) 14-10104 (2008) In subsection A, in the lead-in language, strike "apply" and insert "APPLIES". (Grammar.) 14-10602 (2008) In subsection B, paragraph 2, after "regard" insert "TO". (Grammar.)

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14-10702 (2008) In subsection C, paragraph 5, strike "state" and strike "banks" and insert "FINANCIAL INSTITUTIONS". (Correct terminology.) 14-10802 (2008) In subsection B, paragraph 5, after "becoming" insert "A". (Grammar.) 14-10807 (2008) In subsection D, strike "law" and insert "LAWS". (Style consistency.) 14-12502 (2010) Strike "sec." and insert "SEQ." (Spelling.) 14-12503 (2010)

In subsections A and B, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "JULY 29, 2010". (Clarification.) 15-107 (2008) In subsection L, strike "fail" and insert "FAILS". (Grammar.) 15-113 (2011)

In subsection E, paragraph 1, strike "it" and insert "THE MATERIAL OR ACTIVITY". (Clarification.) 15-121 (2010)

In subsection D, paragraph 2, strike "an underperforming" and insert "A" and after "school" insert "ASSIGNED A LETTER GRADE OF D PURSUANT TO SECTION 15-241". (Correct terminology.) 15-132

After "teacher" insert "OR PROFESSOR". (Consistency.) 15-141 (2011) In subsection A after the second "educational", subsection B after the first "educational" and subsection D, fourth sentence, after the second "educational" insert "RIGHTS" and strike "rights". (Citation correction.) In subsection E, paragraph 2, after "school or" insert "ENGAGING IN". (Grammar.) 15-151

(2004) In subsections A and B, strike "ware" and insert "WEAR". (Spelling.) In subsection E, strike "standards of the". (Redundant.)

Title 15, Chapter 1, Article 6 (15-161)

Change the article heading to "PRIVATE SCHOOLS". (Conformity.)

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15-161 After "districts" insert "WITH". (Grammar.)

15-184 (2010)

In subsection A, fourth sentence, after "has" insert "THE" and strike "their". (Clarification.) 15-202

In subsection D, after "majority of" insert "ALL MEMBERS OF". (Clarification.) 15-205

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "act of Congress approved" and insert "JOHNSON-O'MALLEY ACT (48 STAT. 596;" and put a parenthesis after "1934" and after "1936" insert "(49 STAT. 1458; 25 UNITED STATES CODE SECTIONS 452 THROUGH 456)". (Citation correction.) 15-209

In the first sentence, strike "division of finance". (Conformity.) 15-213.02 (2007)

In subsection B, paragraph 1, subdivision (d), first sentence, strike the second "that" and insert ", WHICH" and in the second sentence, strike the first comma. (Grammar.) In subdivision (g), first sentence, strike "shall". (Clarification.)

In subsection D, after "15-910." insert "THE" (grammar) and strike "saving" and insert "SAVINGS" (grammar). 15-231.01 (2009) Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2009? 15-231.02 In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "curriculum" and insert "CURRICULA". (Grammar.) (2010) Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2010? 15-234 (2007)

In subsection D, fourth sentence, after "instruction" insert "AND" (grammar) and in the fifth sentence, after "the" insert "STATE" (correct terminology). 15-235 In subsection F, second sentence, in the federal citation strike "(A)(21)(b) and (c)" and insert "(a)(21)(B) AND (C)". (Citation correction.)

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15-241 (2011) In subsection C, second sentence, after "educational" insert "RIGHTS" and strike "rights". (Citation correction.) In subsection AA, in the statement, after "been" insert "ASSIGNED A LETTER GRADE OF F OR". (Conformity.) 15-241.01 (2010)

In subsection D, second sentence, strike "grade letters" and insert "LETTER GRADES". (Consistency.) 15-242 (2007) In subsection A, strike "By July 1, 2006,". (Outdated language.)

In subsection E: (2007) First sentence, strike "Beginning on July 15, 2006,". (Outdated language.) (2005) Second sentence, strike ", on or after the effective date of this section,".

(Outdated language.) (2005) Strike subsection H. (Redundant. It repeats subsection G.) 15-249.01 (2010)

In subsection C, strike "who" and insert "THAT" (grammar) and after "preschool" and "kindergarten" insert "PROGRAMS" (clarification). 15-253

In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike the last "to". (Grammar.) In subsection B, last sentence, before "The" insert "IF THE ATTORNEY GENERAL

REVISES THE COUNTY ATTORNEY'S OPINION,". (Clarification that the opinion of the attorney general prevails over an opinion of a county attorney.) 15-271 In the section heading, remove "; annual report". (Conformity.) 15-272 (2008) In subsection C, strike the comma. (Grammar.) 15-326

Strike "shall" and insert "MAY". (Clarification.) 15-341 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 15, strike "2" and insert "3". (Internal reference correction.) In paragraph 24, subdivision (b), ninth sentence, after "official" strike the comma and insert "OR" and in the last sentence, strike the first "a". (Grammar.) 15-343

Strike subsection H. (Superfluous.) 15-361

Strike "children" and insert "PERSONS". (Clarification.)

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15-364 Review and rewrite this section to eliminate ambiguities and redundancy. In subsection B, after "agreements with" insert "OTHER COUNTIES,".

(Clarification.) In subsection C, clarify whether school districts may also issue bonds

notwithstanding section 15-491. In subsection C, strike "Cities, towns and" and after "census" insert "AND CITIES

AND TOWNS". (Clarification.) 15-391 (2010)

In paragraph 5, subdivision (f), strike "Had" and insert "HAS". (Grammar.) 15-393 (2011)

In subsection O, second sentence, after "1" insert a comma. (Grammar.) In subsection P, strike "approved pursuant to" and insert "DEFINED IN".

(Clarification.) 15-401

In subsection A, strike the definition and insert it in section 15-101. (Style consistency.)

In subsection C, clarify that election officers must complete and return the tally lists. 15-402

Strike ", who meets the requirements". (Redundant.) 15-423

In subsection A, after the second "school district" insert "ELECTION PRECINCT". (Clarification.)

In subsection D, last sentence, "governing board of the school district" should probably be stricken and "COUNTY SCHOOL SUPERINTENDENT" inserted. (Clarification.) 15-443

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "Set" and insert "SETS". (Grammar.) 15-444

In subsection B, after "ten per cent of" insert "THE RESIDENTS OF". (Clarification.) 15-445 (2008) In subsection D, second sentence, after "boundaries of a" insert "UNION". (Consistency.) 15-447.01 (2011) In subsections A and B in the lead-in language and in subsection C, strike "4" and insert "3". (Internal reference corrections.)

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15-449 In subsection B, after the third "if" insert "THE NEXT REGULAR ELECTION IS".

(Clarification.) 15-450 (2006)

In subsection M, last sentence, strike "that" and insert "WHERE". (Grammar.) 15-453

In subsection C, strike "and" and insert a comma and after "high school district" insert "OR A JOINT UNIFIED SCHOOL DISTRICT". (Conformity.) 15-456

In subsection B, first sentence, strike the statutory references and insert "AND AS OTHERWISE PROVIDED FOR THE JOINT COMMON SCHOOL DISTRICTS". (Clarification.) 15-465.01 (2008) In subsection E, strike "issue" and insert "INCUR". (Clarification.) 15-512 (2009) In subsection H, second sentence, strike "By December 31, 2009,", strike "to be implemented sixty days after adoption" and after "exempt" strike remainder of the sentence and insert "A PERSON FROM THE REQUIREMENTS OF THIS SUBSECTION IF THE PERSON'S NORMAL JOB DUTIES ARE NOT LIKELY TO RESULT IN INDEPENDENT ACCESS TO OR UNSUPERVISED CONTACT WITH PUPILS." (Clarification.) In subsection L, paragraph 2, subdivision (d), after "31" insert "EACH YEAR". (Clarification.) 15-513

In subsection A, first sentence, after "cause" insert "TO BELIEVE". (Clarification.) In subsection B, first sentence, after "the accident," insert "TO BELIEVE".

(Clarification.) 15-534 (2009) In subsection G, second sentence, after "board" insert "OF EDUCATION". (Clarification.) 15-539 (2011) In subsection B, second sentence, after the fourth "the" insert "GOVERNING". (Clarification.) Title 15, Chapter 5, Article 4 (15-561) (2006) Repeal the article heading. (Sections 15-561, 15-562 and 15-563 have been repealed.)

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15-702 (2005) In subsection D, strike "develop" and insert "ADOPT". (Style consistency.) 15-706

In subsection A, last sentence, strike "on". (Grammar.) 15-712 In subsection C, strike ", in consultation with the committee established pursuant to section 41-617,". (That section has been repealed.) In subsection E, paragraph 1, strike "prescribed" and insert "LISTED". (Clarification.) 15-714 (2011) In the section heading, remove "in use of bows or firearms". (Conformity.) 15-720.01 (2007)

In subsection C, second sentence, strike "and the joint legislative budget committee". (Redundant.) 15-726

In subsection A, strike "have advisory authority to assist" and insert "ADVISE". (Clarification.) 15-732 (2004) In subsection B, strike "part 1194 of title 36 of the Code of Federal Regulations" and insert "36 CODE OF FEDERAL REGULATIONS PART 1194". (Style consistency.) 15-741 (2009) In subsection D, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "NOVEMBER 24, 2009". (Clarification.) 15-743 In subsection D, first sentence, strike "grade equivalents,". (Clarification.) 15-751 In the lead-in language, strike the comma and insert a colon. (Style consistency.) At the end of paragraph 2, insert a period. (Grammar.) 15-753 In subsection A, fourth sentence, strike "20" and insert "TWENTY" and strike the semicolon and insert a period. (Style consistency.) In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike "5th" and insert "FIFTH" and strike "; or" and insert a period. In paragraph 2, strike "10" and insert "TEN" and strike "; or" and insert a period. In paragraph 3, second sentence, strike "250" and insert "TWO HUNDRED FIFTY". (Style consistency.)

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15-754 In the second and third sentences, strike "statute" and insert "ARTICLE". (Clarification.) 15-756.01 (2006) In subsection C, last sentence, strike "includes" and insert "INCLUDE". (Grammar.) In subsection G, first sentence, after "delete" insert "FROM" and after "add" insert "TO". (Grammar.) 15-763.01 (2007)

In subsection A, paragraphs 1 and 3, strike "300.20" and insert "300.30". (Citation correction.) In paragraph 4, after "homeless" insert "ASSISTANCE". (Citation correction.) 15-766 (2006) In subsection B, first sentence, after "whether" strike "a" and insert "THE". (Clarification.) In the second sentence, after "consent" insert "TO". (Grammar.) 15-773 In subsection B, last sentence, strike "student" and insert "PUPIL" (correct terminology) and strike "their" and insert "THE PUPIL'S" (grammar). 15-774 In subsection C, second sentence, after "deposit" insert ", PURSUANT TO SECTIONS 35-146 AND 35-147,". (Style consistency.) 15-782 (2005) In subsection A, strike "having" and insert "THAT HAS" and strike "which" and insert "THAT". (Grammar.) 15-785 In the first sentence, strike "and regulations". (Conformity.) 15-787 In subsection A, strike the second "vocational". (Conformity.) 15-788 In subsection A, first sentence, after "by" insert "CAREER AND TECHNICAL EDUCATION AND". (Correct terminology.) 15-790 (2010) In subsection C, first sentence, strike "technological" and insert "TECHNICAL". (Conformity.)

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15-809 (2006) In subsection D, second sentence, strike the second "department of". (Correct terminology.)

In subsection E, strike "Arizona" and after "standards" insert "ESTABLISHED BY THE STATE BOARD OF EDUCATION". (Clarification.)

(2010) Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2010? 15-821 (2011)

In subsection C, sixth sentence, strike the second "a" and insert ", THE". (Grammar.) 15-823 (2007)

In subsections G and H, strike "exceed" and insert "EXCEEDS". (Grammar.) 15-825.02 (2008) In subsection A, last sentence, after "boundaries of a" insert "UNION". (Consistency.) 15-841 In subsection H, first sentence, strike "as defined in section 13-2911". (Added to definition, below.) In the lead-in language, after the second "institution" insert "AS DEFINED IN SECTION 13-2911". (Clarification.) 15-842

Review the liability limitation of a parent or guardian for misconduct of a minor that results in personal injury or property damage. See section 12-661. 15-881 (2005) In subsection B, paragraph 2, after "available," insert "THAT". (Grammar.) In subsection C, strike "prescribe" and insert "ADOPT". (Style consistency.) 15-901.04 (2010)

Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2010?

15-901.05 (2010)

Strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "JULY 29, 2010". (Clarification.) 15-901.06 (2011)

In subsection E, paragraphs 1, 2 and 3, at the beginning of each paragraph strike "A pupil" (redundant) and in paragraph 1, strike "their" and insert "THE" (grammar). 15-903 (2010) In subsection B, fifth sentence, strike "technological" and insert "TECHNICAL". (Conformity.)

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15-906 In subsection B, third sentence, strike "except reverted monies as provided in section 15-991.02". (That section has been repealed.) In the last sentence, strike "paragraphs 4 and 5" and insert "PARAGRAPH 3". (Internal reference correction.) 15-918

In subsection D, first sentence, strike the first "for" and insert "BY". (Clarification.) 15-918.02

In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike "report card" and insert "REPORTS". (Conformity with section 15-743.) In paragraph 2, strike "which" and insert "THAT" and after "teachers" strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 15-922 (2005) In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "an". (Grammar.) 15-951 (2010)

In subsection A, paragraph 2 and subsection E, paragraph 2, strike "H" and insert "G". (Internal reference correction.) 15-975 In the fourth sentence, strike "in a format provided". (Clarification.) 15-980 (2004) In subsection D, first sentence, strike "were" and insert "WAS". (Grammar.) 15-995

In subsection B, strike the first "as" and insert "IN ORDER". (Clarification.) 15-996 (2006) In paragraph 1, second sentence, strike "15-2021,". (That section has been repealed.) 15-1043 (2011) After the second "educational" insert "RIGHTS" and strike "rights". (Citation correction.) 15-1045 (2008) In subsection B, paragraph 2, after "not" insert "A". (Grammar.) In subsection C, strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) Title 15, Chapter 10, Article 1 (15-1101)

Change the article heading to "REVOLVING FUNDS". (Conformity.)

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15-1105 (2003) In subsection A, first sentence, after "equipment" insert a comma. (Grammar.) In subsection B, first sentence, after "organizations" insert a comma. (Grammar.) In subsection C, strike the second "person" and insert "PERSON'S" and strike the second "group" and insert "GROUP'S". (Grammar.) 15-1171 Strike "provisions of" and strike "U.S.C. sec." and insert "UNITED STATES CODE SECTION". (Style consistency.) 15-1173 In subsection C, strike "vocational". (Conformity.) 15-1251 (2004) In subsection C, paragraph 2, strike "each of which, beginning in fiscal year 1999-2000, also shall be". (Outdated language.) 15-1301

In paragraph 1, subdivision (b), strike the first comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) In subdivision (c), strike the second comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) In subdivision (d), after "service" insert "WORKERS". (Clarification.) 15-1303 (2009)

In subsection A, strike the second "school" and insert "SCHOOLS". (Correct terminology.)

15-1321 (2005) In subsection A, second sentence, strike "the governor shall appoint". (Grammar.) 15-1341

In subsection B, strike the first "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 15-1344

In subsection A, strike the second "person" and insert "CHILD". (Clarification.) 15-1402.01 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 5, strike the first "section" and insert "SUBSECTION" (internal reference correction) and after "provisional" insert "COMMUNITY" (clarification). In paragraph 6, strike the second "section" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Internal reference correction.) 15-1410 (2003) In subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (h), rewrite the sentence to follow the lead-in as follows "OTHER MEANS ADOPTED PURSUANT TO DISTRICT BOARD POLICIES, INCLUDING NATIONAL STANDARDIZED EXAMINATIONS AND CREDIT BY EVALUATION OR EXAMINATION."

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15-1445 (2010) In paragraph 7, in two places and in paragraphs 8, 9, 10 and 12, strike "technological" and insert "TECHNICAL". (Conformity.)

(2006) In paragraph 16, in two places, strike "purchase" and insert "ACQUIRE" (clarification), strike "flag and" and insert "FLAGS," (grammar) and before the second "display" strike "and" (grammar). 15-1450

In subsection B, paragraph 1, lead-in language, strike "a" and strike the first "member" and insert "MEMBERS". (Grammar.) 15-1452 (2010) In the section heading, change "technological" to "technical" and in the first sentence, strike "technological" and insert "TECHNICAL". (Conformity.) 15-1467 (2007) In subsection B, after "April 15" insert "OF EACH YEAR". (Clarification.) 15-1468

In subsection A: (2011) In the lead-in language, after the first "15-1402" insert "AND". (Grammar.)

Paragraph 3, strike "and". (Style consistency.) 15-1469 (2004) In subsections D and E, after "May 15" insert "OF EACH YEAR". (Clarification.) 15-1474 (2009)

After the third "college" insert "DISTRICT". (Clarification.) 15-1484 (2004) In subsection A, paragraph 8, strike the semicolon and insert ", AND". (Grammar.) 15-1622

In subsection A, first sentence, strike the second comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) In the third sentence, after "give" insert "AN". (Grammar.)

In subsection B, after "for" insert "THE". (Grammar.) 15-1634

In subsection B, the first sentence appears to violate article IX, section 2, Constitution of Arizona.

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15-1636 In subsection B, in two places, strike ", paragraph 10," (style consistency) and in the

last sentence, strike "pursuant to" and insert "AS DEFINED IN" (clarification). In subsection C, strike "the effective date of subsection B of this section" and insert

"JULY 20, 1996". (Clarification.) 15-1640 In subsection A, paragraph 1, subdivision (b), second sentence, after "contract" insert "THAT IS" and after the second "university" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 15-1648 (2003) In subsection B, second sentence, strike "chapter 13," and strike "title" and insert "CHAPTER". (Internal reference correction.) 15-1650.01 (2008) In subsection A, paragraph 4, strike "which" and insert "WHOM". (Grammar.) In subsection F, paragraph 6, first sentence, strike "of each year". (Redundant.) 15-1652 and 15-1653

These sections appear to lack a constitutional basis since the teacher training schools were under the jurisdiction of other boards. 15-1663

In subsection B, paragraph 1, last sentence, after "monies" insert "THAT ARE" and strike "which" and insert "AND THAT". (Grammar.) 15-1667

The 1925 act has been repealed. It is incorporated in and the citation should be to the "Hatch Act of 1887, as amended (Act of Mar. 2, 1887; ch. 314; 24 Stat. 440; 7 United States Code sections 361a through 361i)". (Citation correction.) 15-1668

In subsections B and C, strike "institution" and insert "UNIVERSITY". (Conformity.) 15-1746

In subsection C, first sentence, strike "plus" and insert "AND PAY". (Clarification.) In the second sentence, strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.)

15-1753

In subsection B, should "MEDICAL" be inserted before "residents"? (Clarification.) 15-1754

In subsection A, last sentence, strike "be" and insert "IS". (Grammar.)

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15-1767 In subsection B, after "chapter 6" insert ", ARTICLE 10". (Internal reference correction.) 15-1770 In subsection C, paragraph 2 of the form, strike "the student athlete" and insert "YOU". (Clarification.) Title 15, Chapter 13, Article 11 (15-1781) (2010)

Change the article heading to "MATHEMATICS, SCIENCE, SPECIAL EDUCATION AND ELEMENTARY EDUCATION TEACHER STUDENT LOAN PROGRAM". (Conformity.) 15-1805 (2007) In subsection A, strike "their" and insert "ITS". (Grammar.) 15-1821 (2007) In subsection D, after "November 15" and in subsection E, after "September 30" insert "OF EACH YEAR". (Clarification.) 15-1822 (2007) In subsection A, after "October 31" and in subsection B, after "September 1" insert "OF EACH YEAR". (Clarification.) 15-1823 (2006) In subsection A, second sentence, strike "Notwithstanding subsection B of this section,". (Clarification.) 15-1877 (2006) In subsection C, strike "exist" and insert "EXISTS". (Grammar.) 15-1891 (2009) In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.)

Title 15, Chapter 14 (15-1895) (2010) Change the chapter heading to "PROVISIONS RELATING TO BOTH

COMMUNITY COLLEGES AND UNIVERSITIES". (Conformity.) 15-2003 (2006) In subsection C, strike "the deficiencies correction fund established by section 15-2021 or". (That section has been repealed.) 15-2081 (2006) Strike subsection A, paragraph 1, subdivision (a). (Section 15-2021 has been repealed.)

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15-2091 In subsection A, after the second "revenue" insert "BOND". (Correct terminology.) 15-2101 In the section heading, after "Definition" add "of impact aid revenues". (Style consistency.) In the section, strike "and" and insert "AID". (Conformity.) 15-2104 In subsection D, second sentence, strike "mean" and insert "MEANS". (Style consistency.) In paragraph 3, strike "use" and insert "THE AMOUNT IS". (Clarification.) 15-2132 (2005) In subsection B, strike "exist" and insert "EXISTS". (Grammar.) In subsections C and D, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "AUGUST 12, 2005". (Clarification.) 15-2301 In subsection C, paragraph 2, subdivision (b), before the first "degradation" insert "PERSONAL". (Consistency.) 15-2401 (2011)

In paragraph 5, in the lead-in language, after "act" insert "OF 1973". (Citation correction.) In subdivision (b), strike "B" and insert "D". (Internal reference correction.) 15-2402 (2011)

In subsection B, paragraph 3, strike "subsection B of". (Internal reference correction.) In paragraph 4, subdivision (h), strike "11" and insert "26". (Citation correction.)

In subsection F, strike "child" and insert "STUDENT". (Clarification.) In subsection H, strike "does" and insert "DO" (grammar) and strike "qualifying" and

insert "QUALIFIED" (correct terminology). 16-103 (2006) In subsection B, after "1973" insert "ff". (Citation correction.) In subsection D, after "1973" insert "ff-6". (Citation correction.) 16-121.01 (2004) In subsection A, second sentence, between "number," and "nonoperating" insert "A". (Grammar.) 16-140 In subsection D, last sentence and in subsection F, paragraph 1, strike "394" and insert "1973gg". (Citation correction.) 16-142 (2006) In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "394" and insert "1973gg" and after "1973" insert "ff". (Citation correction.)

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16-163 (2010) In subsection D, second sentence, after "election" insert a comma. (Grammar.)

16-165 (2004) In subsection C, first sentence, before "district" insert "UNITED STATES". (Clarification.) 16-166 (2007) In subsection F, paragraph 4, second sentence, strike "immigration and naturalization service" and insert "CITIZENSHIP AND IMMIGRATION SERVICES". (Correct terminology.)

In subsection G, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "DECEMBER 8, 2004". (Clarification.)

Note that 1998 Prop. 105 applies to these changes. 16-182 and 16-183

Both sections deal with violations of the voter registration provisions and create an overlap of coverage. The two should be rewritten to better divide the subject matter coverage. 16-191

In subsection A, the first "except" clause modifies the second "except" clause and needs to be clarified itself and in conjunction with subsection B. 16-192

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "reports" and insert "PAMPHLETS". (Conformity with section 35-454.) 16-213

This section should be expanded to specify that each allotted office of representative in Congress is to be filled at each general election. (Clarification.) 16-226

In subsection B, strike "chapter" and insert "ARTICLE". (Internal reference correction.) 16-241

In subsection B, last sentence, strike "clerk" and insert "CLERKS". (Clarification.) 16-311 (2004) In subsection C, strike "to the contrary". (Style consistency.) 16-312 (2010) In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike "48-1082,". (Conformity.)

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16-408 In subsection D, first sentence, strike the first "election" and insert "SPECIAL".

(Correct terminology.) In the second sentence, strike "special" and strike "election" and insert "SPECIAL". (Correct terminology.) 16-424

In subsection A, strike "be constructed to" and "facilities". (Clarification.) 16-501

Strike "title 16," and after "5" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Style consistency.) 16-502 (2011)

In subsection B, in the ballot text, strike the quotation marks before "Section" and after "written." (Grammar.)

In subsection H, in the ballot text, strike the quotation marks before "Section" and after "adopted." (Grammar.) 16-516 (2011)

In subsection A, in the form, strike the quotation marks before "Poll" and after "election." and strike the comma after the second "election". (Grammar.) 16-542 (2011)

In subsection J, first sentence, strike the first and second "or" and insert a comma and in two places after "committee" insert "OR OTHER ORGANIZATION". (Conformity.) 16-545 (2011)

In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike the second "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 16-547 (2011)

In subsection A, last sentence of the affidavit form, strike "their" and insert "THE VOTER'S" and strike "they" and insert "THE VOTER". (Grammar.) 16-558

In subsection A, strike the first "board" and insert "BODY". (Correct terminology.) 16-561, subsection C, 16-570, subsection B and 16-606, subsection A, paragraph 5

Contains the unclear term "watchers". The term is not defined in statute, so a definition should be added. Is the term "watcher" obsolete? 16-606

Subsection A contains the term "watchers". (See the note for section 16-561.) In subsection B, first sentence, strike the fourth comma and insert "AND".

(Grammar.)

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16-641 In subsection B, the reference to "independent party" is unclear since electors who

register no party affiliation are not members of an independent party. 16-646

In subsections B and D, strike "them" and insert "IT". (Grammar.) 16-650

Strike "B" and insert "E". (Internal reference correction.) 16-672

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike the second "to" and insert "FOR". (Grammar.) In subsection B, in two places, strike "of" and insert "IN". (Conformity.)

16-673

In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "party" and insert "PERSON". (Clarification.) In paragraph 2, strike the second "or". (Grammar.) 16-805 and 16-806

These sections have been found unconstitutional as a bill of attainder and deprivation of due process of law. The sections should be rewritten to use less drastic measures for regulation of the Communist party or, if not deemed of continuing need, should be repealed. 16-901 In paragraph 23, strike "is" and insert "SATISFIES" and after "(a)" insert "IS". (Grammar.) 16-906

In subsection B, first sentence, after "election" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 16-915

In subsection A, paragraph 3, subdivision (a), first sentence, after "report" insert "AND". In paragraph 5, after "date," insert "THE". (Grammar.) 16-921 (2004) In subsection J, paragraph 3, strike "as". (Style consistency.) 16-925

In subsection B, second sentence, after the second "or" insert "ANY". (Grammar.) 16-948 (2005) In subsection A, second sentence, strike "sections" and insert "SECTION". (Grammar.)

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16-949 (2005) In subsection D, first sentence, strike "election" and insert "ELECTIONS". (Correct terminology.) 16-959 (2011) In subsection B, first sentence, between "one" and "third" and "one" and "half" insert a hyphen. (Spelling.) Note that 1998 Prop. 105 applies to this change. 16-1005 (2011)

In subsection E, strike "who" and insert "THAT" and in subsection F, after the second "or" insert "ANY". (Grammar.) 16-1019 (2011)

In subsection B, strike "was" and insert "OR MATERIALS WERE" and after "signs" insert "OR PRINTED MATERIALS". (Conformity.) 17-201 (2003) In subsection B, first sentence, after "after" insert "A". (Grammar.) 17-231 (2011)

In subsection B, paragraph 13, before "required" insert "THE". (Grammar.) 17-240

In subsection C, paragraph 2, strike "has been". (Grammar.) 17-241

In subsection A, paragraph 1, hyphenate "rights of way". (Spelling.) 17-246

In subsection A, strike "facilities" and insert "FACILITY". (Conformity with section 17-281). 17-247

In paragraph 9, second sentence, strike "provision" and insert "PARAGRAPH". (Clarification.) 17-249

Strike "ARCOR enterprises" and insert "ARIZONA CORRECTIONAL INDUSTRIES". (Clarification.) 17-273 In subsection A, first sentence, strike "(e)" and insert "(a), ITEM (iii)". (Internal reference correction.) 17-283

In subsection B, strike "44" and insert "47". (Internal reference correction.)

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17-290 In the section heading, remove "monies of the authority;". (Conformity.) In subsection A, after "designate" insert a colon and set out the remainder of the

subsection with paragraphs. (Clarification.) 17-296

Alphabetize the definitions. (Style consistency.) 17-298 Insert a subsection A that reads: "A. MONIES RECEIVED PURSUANT TO SECTION 5-522 SHALL BE SPENT AS FOLLOWS:" and change subsections A through E to paragraphs 1 through 5. In subsections A through E strike "of the monies received pursuant to section 5-522 shall be spent", in subsection B, second sentence, strike "subsection" and insert "PARAGRAPH" and in subsection F and subsection G, paragraph 6 strike "subsections A through E" and insert "SUBSECTION A". (Clarification.) 17-298.01

In the first sentence, strike "succeeding". (Redundant.) 17-301

In subsection B, first sentence, before "boat" insert "A". (Grammar.) In subsection D, first sentence, after the first comma insert "WITH" and after the

fourth comma insert "AND". (Grammar.) In paragraph 3, after "projects," insert "FOR" and after "States" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 17-302

In subsection E, after "lion" strike the rest of the sentence. (Clarification.) 17-309 (2006) In subsection D, paragraph 5, after "subsection B" insert ", PARAGRAPH 3". (Internal reference correction.) 17-314 (2006) In subsection A, paragraph 2, after "mountain lion," insert "PRONGHORN" and insert parentheses around "antelope". (Conformity.) 17-333.02

In subsection B, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "MARCH 1, 1993". (Clarification.) 17-342

In subsection C, strike "Shore line" and insert "SHORELINE". (Spelling.) 17-361

In subsection A, strike the first comma. (Grammar.)

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17-471 (2006) In subsection B, paragraph 3, strike the fifth comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 19-101

In subsection A, in the Petition for Referendum, strike the first colon and after "measures)" insert a colon. (Style consistency.) In the lead-in language and in the first sentence, after "local" insert a comma. (Grammar.)

19-102 In subsection B, after the final quotation mark insert a period. (Grammar.) 19-119

In subsection B, second sentence, after the second "or" insert "ANY". (Grammar.) 19-121

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "its" and insert "THEIR" and strike "sheet" and insert "SHEETS". (Grammar.)

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "at which time a receipt is" and insert "WHO SHALL" and strike "issued by the secretary of state" and insert "ISSUE A RECEIPT". (Clarification.)

In subsection E, first sentence, after "4" insert "OF THIS CHAPTER" (internal reference correction), strike the first comma and insert "OR" (grammar) and before "county" insert "A" (grammar). 19-141 In subsection B, first sentence, after the first "city" insert ", TOWN". (Consistency.) 19-202.01

This section would read much more clearly if the required information in subsection A were set out in numbered paragraphs. 19-203

This section would read much more clearly if subsection A were divided into numbered paragraphs.

19-206

In subsection A, strike "or subscribe" and strike "or subscribing" in two places. (Outdated language.) 19-212 (2009) In subsection B, after "15-424," insert "16-822,". (Internal reference correction.) 19-216

In subsection B, after "returns" insert "AND THE QUALIFICATION OF THE SUCCESSOR". (Clarification.)

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20-112 In the first sentence, strike "code" and insert "TITLE". (Correct terminology.)

20-117 (2011) In paragraph 2, after "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 20-119 (2004) In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "is" and insert "BE". (Grammar.) 20-147

In subsection B, after "years" insert an apostrophe. (Grammar.) 20-149

In subsection A, first sentence, strike the first comma and strike the last "any". (Grammar.) 20-173 Strike "this title,", after "7" strike the comma and insert "OF THIS TITLE" (style consistency) and strike the last comma (grammar). 20-206

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "therefor". (Unnecessary.) 20-230

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "so" and insert "AS". (Clarification.) In subsection B, after the first "transact" insert "INSURANCE", strike the first

"insurance" and strike "so" and insert "AS". (Clarification.) 20-232

Use of "student" in this context should be defined. Does it exclude persons over eighteen years of age? If so, it should be indicated. 20-236

After "request" insert "REQUIRED". (Clarification.) 20-261.04

In two places, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "SEPTEMBER 21, 1991". (Clarification.) 20-262

In subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (d), after "certifies the" insert "INSURED'S SUCCESSFUL". (Clarification.) 20-271 (2003) In subsection B, second sentence, after "concerning" insert "THE". (Grammar.) In subsection D, paragraph 1, after "names" insert "OF," and after "to" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 20-287

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In subsection A, in the lead-in language and in paragraph 4, before "producer" insert "INSURANCE". (Clarification.) 20-289.01 (2005) In subsection A, paragraph 1, after "licensee's" insert "OR APPLICANT'S" and in paragraph 2, after "or" insert "THE LICENSEE'S OR APPLICANT'S". (Consistency.) 20-311.02 In subsection E, paragraph 3, after "losses" insert "THAT ARE" and after the third "insurer" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 20-321 (2011)

In paragraph 2, subdivision (a), after the comma insert "A". (Grammar.) 20-321.01 (2011)

In subsection E, strike "submit" and insert "THE SUBMISSION OF". (Grammar.) In subsection G, strike "need not comply with" and insert "IS NOT SUBJECT TO".

(Clarification.) 20-340.01 (2011)

In subsection B, before "bail" insert "A". (Grammar.) 20-344 In subsection B, after the fifth "the" insert "DESIGNATED" and strike "designated by the director pursuant to section 20-371, subsection D". (Clarification.) 20-361 In subsection A, in the lead-in language, after "file" insert "ALL OF THE FOLLOWING WITH THE DIRECTOR". (Clarification.) 20-400.02

In the third sentence, is the reference to publishing rules necessary? 20-400.08

In subsection A, first sentence, should "CONSUMER" be inserted after the first "insurance"?

In subsection G, strike "subsections" and insert "SUBSECTION" and strike "and G". (Internal reference correction.) 20-400.10 In subsection D, paragraph 10, strike "Chapter 2," and strike "title" and insert "CHAPTER". (Style consistency.)

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20-401.03 In subsection C, first sentence, after "proceeding" strike "or". (Clarification.)

20-401.07 (2011)

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "by". (Grammar.) 20-407 (2005) In subsection D, paragraphs 1 and 2, strike "chapter 2," and strike "title" and insert "CHAPTER". (Style consistency.) 20-410

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "from" and insert "THAT IS ISSUED BY". (Clarification.) 20-417 In the second sentence, strike the reference to "section 20-411". (That section no longer provides for the filing of a bond.) 20-441 In subsection B, paragraph 10, strike "Any". (Grammar.) 20-443.02 (2008) In subsection B, paragraph 2, in the lead-in language, strike "apply" and insert "APPLIES". (Grammar.) 20-444

In subsection B, strike the first "that" and insert "WHO" (grammar), strike "infers" and insert "IMPLIES" (clarification) and strike "it" and insert "THE PERSON" (clarification). 20-445

In the first sentence, strike "code" and insert "TITLE". In the second sentence, strike "provision" and insert "SECTION". (Conformity.) 20-448.01

In subsection A, paragraph 3, in three places before "virus" insert "HUMAN IMMUNODEFICIENCY". (Clarification.) In paragraph 5, before "title" insert "THIS" and strike "20". (Internal reference correction.)

In subsection C, paragraph 2, subdivision (a), strike "will" and insert "SHALL" and strike "AIDS" and insert "ACQUIRED IMMUNE DEFICIENCY SYNDROME". (Clarification.) In subdivision (b), in two places strike "AIDS" and insert "ACQUIRED IMMUNE DEFICIENCY SYNDROME". (Clarification.)

In subsection K, first sentence, strike "other" (conformity) and before "title" insert "THIS" and strike "20" (internal reference correction).

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20-448.02 In subsection A, second sentence, strike "as". (Style consistency.) In the third

sentence, strike "expressed" and insert "EXPRESS" (grammar) and after the second "test" insert "OR THE PERSON AUTHORIZED PURSUANT TO LAW TO CONSENT FOR THAT PERSON" (consistency).

In subsection B, paragraph 2, after the second "for" insert "A". (Grammar.) 20-456 (2004) In subsection B, after "20-461" strike "and" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 20-461 (2004) In subsection B, strike "16" and insert "17". (Internal reference correction.) 20-462

In subsection A, first sentence, after "1986" insert "IF", after the first "claim" insert "IS" and after "adjudication" insert ", THE INSURER". (Clarification.)

Subsection C, paragraph 3 does not follow the lead-in. It could be a separate subsection. In paragraph 5, strike "proofs" and insert "PROOF". (Grammar.) 20-466.01 (2011)

Beginning October 1, 2013, strike the first "or" and insert a comma and after "20-463.01" insert "OR 20-3215". (Conformity.) 20-466.02 (2011)

Beginning October 1, 2013, in four places after "20-463.01" insert ", 20-3215". (Conformity.) 20-481.07

In subsection A, paragraphs 4 through 9 do not follow the lead-in. 20-481.11

In subsection B, strike "the thirty-first day of" and after "December" insert "31". (Style consistency.) 20-481.19

In subsection B, in two places, strike "the thirty-first day of" and after "December" insert "31". (Style consistency.) 20-481.25 (2003) In subsection C, sixth sentence, strike "director's" and insert "ECONOMIST'S". (Clarification.) 20-481.30

In subsection A, first sentence, after the second "any" insert "RULE OR" and strike ", rule, regulation". (Conformity.)

In subsection B, strike ", regulation," and insert "OR". (Conformity.)

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20-488.08 In subsection C, in the lead-in language, strike "and" and insert "OR". (Clarification.) 20-503 In paragraph 3, strike "chapter 3," and strike the third "title" and insert "CHAPTER". (Style consistency.) 20-551

In subsection C, paragraph 1 and paragraph 2, subdivisions (a) and (b), strike "Poor" in three places and insert "POOR'S". (Proper name correction.)

In subsection D, strike the first "do" and insert "DOES". (Grammar.) 20-562

In subsection A, strike the second "if" and insert "WHEN". (Grammar.) In subsection B, paragraph 2, after "cent" insert "BUT LESS THAN SEVEN PER

CENT". In paragraph 3, after "cent" insert "BUT LESS THAN SIX PER CENT". (Clarification.) 20-611 (2011)

In paragraph 12, strike the fourth comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 20-631 (2011)

In subsection A, strike the fifth comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 20-661 (2007)

In paragraph 5, after the second "insurer" insert "THAT IS" (style consistency), strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "SEPTEMBER 19, 2007" (clarification) and after "20-623" insert a comma (grammar). 20-663 (2007)

In subsection B, strike "who are" and insert "THAT IS". In paragraph 2, strike "shall be" and insert "WHO IS". In paragraph 3, strike "representing" and insert "WHO REPRESENTS". (Style consistency.) 20-696 (2007)

In subsection B, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "SEPTEMBER 19, 2007". (Clarification.) 20-696.02 (2007)

In subsection E, paragraph 1, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "SEPTEMBER 19, 2007". (Clarification.) 20-696.04 (2007)

In subsection J, after the first "reserve" insert a comma. (Grammar.)

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20-697.01 (2009) In subsection A, after the third "or" insert "AN". (Grammar.) In subsection B, strike "so long as" and insert "IF" (style consistency), strike "that"

(grammar), strike ", nor shall" and insert a period (grammar) and after "section" insert "SHALL NOT" (grammar).

In subsection D, paragraph 1, after "section" insert a comma. (Grammar.) In paragraph 2, strike the fifth comma. (Grammar.) In paragraph 3, strike "subsections A through D of". (Style consistency.) 20-730

In subsection A, strike "and" and insert "OR" and strike "it" and insert "IS". (Clarification.)

In subsection B, paragraph 1, before "Equitable" insert "IT IS" (grammar to fit with lead-in language). In paragraph 2, first sentence, before "Subject" insert "IT IS" (grammar to fit with lead-in language) and insert a hyphen between "three" and "fourths" (spelling). In paragraph 8, insert a hyphen between "one" and "half". (Spelling.) 20-826.01 In subsection G, strike paragraph 3. (The term is not used.) 20-826.02 (2006) In subsection A, first sentence, after "out-of-pocket" insert "PAYMENTS". (Clarification.) 20-830

In subsection B, last sentence, strike "article 2," and after "3" insert ", ARTICLE 2". (Style consistency.) 20-846 (2009)

In subsection B, paragraph 1, subdivision (b), strike "insurance" and insert "INCOME". (Citation correction.) 20-1018 In the second sentence, strike "sale" and insert "SALES". (Grammar.) 20-1052.01

In subsection C, paragraph 2, strike the first "of" and insert "ON". (Clarification.) 20-1057.07 In subsection H, strike paragraph 3. (The term is not used.)

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20-1057.08 In subsection A, paragraph 2, second sentence, insert "APPROVED" before "United States" (clarification) and after "drug" insert "ADMINISTRATION" (proper name correction). In subsection B, first sentence, strike "federal" and insert "UNITED STATES". (Proper name correction.) In subsection C, strike "this" and insert "THE", after "exemption" insert "IN SUBSECTION B" (clarification) and strike "federal" and insert "UNITED STATES" (proper name correction). In subsection G, paragraph 3, insert parentheses around "i" and "iii". (Style consistency.) 20-1057.09 (2006) In subsection A, first sentence, after "out-of-pocket" insert "PAYMENTS". (Clarification.) 20-1063

In subsection C, before "title" insert "THIS" and strike "20". (Style consistency.) 20-1077

In the lead-in language, after "center" insert ", AS DEFINED IN SECTION 36-401,". (Clarification.) 20-1079 (2009)

In subsection B, paragraph 1, subdivision (b), strike "insurance" and insert "INCOME". (Citation correction.) 20-1094

In the last sentence, after "agreement" insert "OR AMENDMENT" in three places. (Consistency.) 20-1095.04

In subsection D, strike "it" and insert "THEY". (Grammar.) 20-1097

In paragraph 1, strike "contracts" and insert "CONTRACT". (Grammar.) 20-1097.02

In subsection A, it is unclear which "person" must obtain a certificate of authority. 20-1097.05

In the second sentence, strike "title 20," and after "4.1" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Style consistency.) 20-1097.11

In subsection A, second sentence, strike the second "and". (Clarification.)

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20-1098.04 (2007) In subsection C, paragraph 3, strike "corporation" and insert "COMPANY". (Correct

terminology.) 20-1098.11 (2007)

In subsection C, strike the first "to". (Clarification.) 20-1099 (2004) In paragraph 2, first sentence, after "product warranty" insert ", THAT ARE" and strike "relating" and insert "AND THAT RELATE". (Grammar.) 20-1104 (2011) In subsection C, paragraph 4, after "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 20-1209.01

In subsection J, strike "applies" and insert "APPLY". (Grammar.) 20-1241.02 (2003) In subsection C, paragraph 1, strike "end date" and insert "ENDING DATES". (Grammar.) 20-1242.01 (2003) In subsection A, paragraph 3, subdivision (b), strike "sections" and insert "SECTION". (Grammar.) 20-1242.05 (2003) In subsection B, strike "purposes" and insert "PURPOSE". (Grammar.) 20-1256 (2004) In the second sentence, strike the second comma. (Grammar.) 20-1342 (2009)

In subsection A, paragraph 3, second sentence, strike the first "shall". (Grammar.) 20-1342.03 In subsection F, strike paragraph 3. (The term is not used.) 20-1342.04 (2006) In subsection A, first sentence, after "out-of-pocket" insert "PAYMENTS". (Clarification.)

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20-1377 (2006) In subsection K, last sentence, strike "section" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Clarification.) In subsection M, first sentence, after "under" insert "SUBSECTION L OF" and in the last sentence, strike "section" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Clarification.) 20-1379 (2009)

In subsection I, paragraph 3, after the first "insurance" insert "OR" and strike "or". (Clarification.)

In subsection U: Paragraph 6, strike "analysis" and insert "ANALYSES". (Grammar.) Paragraph 7, strike the second "a". (Grammar.)

20-1383 (2009)

In subsection B, paragraph 1, subdivision (b), strike "insurance" and insert "INCOME". (Citation correction.) 20-1402.01 In subsection F, strike paragraph 3. (The term is not used.) 20-1404.01 In subsection F, strike paragraph 3. (The term is not used.) 20-1408 (2006) In subsection J, last sentence, strike "section" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Clarification.) In subsection M, first sentence, after "under" insert "SUBSECTION L OF" and strike "provision" and insert "SECTION" and in the last sentence, strike "section" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Clarification.) 20-1412 (2006) In subsection A, first sentence, after "out-of-pocket" insert "PAYMENTS". (Clarification.) 20-1533

In subsection D, after "undertaking" insert "AND THAT ARE". (Grammar.) 20-1534

In subsection A, paragraph 3, in the lead-in language, after "as" insert "A" and strike "bonds" and insert "BOND". (Grammar.) 20-1549 (2003) In subsection A, first sentence, after "4.1" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Internal reference correction.)

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20-1550 (2010) In subsection I, paragraph 2, subdivision (a), strike the second "the" and insert "AN

INSURED". (Conformity.) 20-1564 (2011) In subsection B, paragraph 1, second sentence, strike "administrator of veterans' affairs" and insert "UNITED STATES SECRETARY OF VETERANS AFFAIRS" (correct name), at the end of subdivisions (a) and (b), strike the semicolon and insert a period (grammar) and in subdivisions (b) and (c), strike "administrator of veterans' affairs" and insert "UNITED STATES SECRETARY OF VETERANS AFFAIRS" (correct name). In subsection E, after "under" insert "SUBSECTION D," and strike "subsection D" and insert "THIS SECTION". (Style consistency.) In subsection F, last sentence, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "JANUARY 1, 1968". (Clarification.) 20-1575 In subsection A, in the lead-in language, after "but" insert "THAT" (grammar) and strike "herein" and insert "IN THIS STATE" (clarification). 20-1591 In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike the comma and insert a period. In paragraph 2, strike ", and" and insert a period. (Grammar.) 20-1631 (2011) In subsection B, after "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 20-1661

Subsection B should be made part of the definition of "direct response solicitation" and strike the subsection designations "A." and "B.". (Style consistency.) 20-1662

In the lead-in language, strike "citizens" and insert "RESIDENTS". (Consistency.) 20-1679

Strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "MAY 21, 1986". (Clarification.) 20-1691.05 (2003) In subsection B, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "SEPTEMBER 18, 2003." (Clarification.) In subsection E, after "care" insert "INSURANCE". (Consistency.) 20-1691.06 (2003) In subsection B, after "care" insert "INSURANCE". (Consistency.)

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20-1692 In paragraph 5, after "group" insert "HEALTH". (Clarification.)

20-1692.02

In subsection A, after "organization" insert "OR". (Grammar.) 20-1692.03

In subsection C, after "organization" insert ", GROUP HEALTH PLAN". (Consistency.) 20-1721

In subsection A, before "title" insert "THIS" and strike "20". (Style consistency.) 20-1724

In subsection A, last sentence, strike "paragraphs 2, 3 and 4 of subsection B of" and after "20-1721" insert ", SUBSECTION B, PARAGRAPHS 2, 3 AND 4". (Style consistency.)

In subsection B, remove the reference to "20-1701". (That section has been repealed.) Strike "title 20," and after "4" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Style consistency.) 20-1803

In subsection E, second sentence, strike "paragraphs 1 through 15 of subsection B of" and after "20-1802" insert ", SUBSECTION B, PARAGRAPHS 1 THROUGH 15". (Style consistency.) 20-2108 In subsection G, strike the quotation marks. (Style consistency.) 20-2109 In subsection G, strike the quotation marks. (Style consistency.) 20-2110 (2003) In subsection F, paragraph 6, second sentence, strike "section" and insert "PARAGRAPH". (Internal reference correction.) 20-2121 In the section heading and in subsection A, after "Gramm" and after "Leach" insert a hyphen. (Citation correction.) 20-2308 (2006) Strike "is-not" and insert "IS NOT". (Grammar.) 20-2318 (2004) Strike "16" and insert "17". (Internal reference correction.)

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20-2328 In subsection F, strike paragraph 3. (The term is not used.) In paragraph 5, first sentence, strike "contract" and insert "HEALTH BENEFITS PLAN". (Clarification.) 20-2329 In subsection A, paragraph 2, last sentence, insert "APPROVED" before "United States" (clarification) and after "drug" insert "ADMINISTRATION" (proper name correction). In subsection B, first sentence, strike "federal" and insert "UNITED STATES". (Proper name correction.) In subsection C, strike "this" insert "THE", after "exemption" insert "IN SUBSECTION B" (clarification) and strike "federal" and insert "UNITED STATES" (proper name correction). In subsection F, paragraph 3, insert parentheses around "i" and "iii". (Style consistency.) 20-2331 (2006) In subsection A, first sentence, after "out-of-pocket" insert "PAYMENTS". (Clarification.) 20-2403 In subsection B, paragraph 1, after "financial statement" insert "THAT IS", strike the second "which" and insert "THAT" and after "accountant and" insert "THAT". In paragraph 4, after "verify" insert "THAT". (Grammar.) In subsection C, third sentence, after "risks" insert "THAT ARE", strike the first "which" and insert "AND THAT" and strike the second "which" and insert "THAT". (Grammar.) 20-2406

In subsection A, strike the comma and insert "OR THE". (Grammar.) In subsection B, first sentence, strike the first "or" and insert "AND".

(Clarification.) 20-2407

In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike "specify" and insert "SPECIFIES". (Grammar.) In subsection B, first sentence, strike the last "of" and insert "OR". (Clarification.) In subsection C, in two places, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert

"AUGUST 18, 1987". (Clarification.) 20-2410

Before "20-220" strike "section" and insert "SECTIONS" and strike the second "section". (Style consistency.) 20-2502

In subsection B, paragraph 4, strike the comma and enclose the citation in parentheses. (Style consistency.)

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20-2532 In subsection E, last sentence, strike "submit" and insert "FILE" and strike "filing".

(Clarification.) 20-2534 In subsection D, first sentence, strike the second "process". In the second sentence, strike the second "the" and insert "AN" and strike "process". (Conformity with section 20-2537.) 20-2537 In subsection K, paragraph 2, in two places, after "an" insert "EXPEDITED". (Consistency.) In subsection N, second sentence, strike the second "proceedings" and insert "HEARINGS". (Clarification.) 20-2541 In the lead-in language, strike the colon, strike paragraph 1 since it is not an ongoing fee and strike the paragraph designation of paragraph 2. (Clarification.) 20-2605

In subsection B, paragraph 2, subdivision (b), the use of (A), (B) and (C) in a formula might be less confusing if quotation marks were used instead of parentheses. 20-2802

In subsection A, paragraph 2, before "Health" insert "A" and strike "plans" and insert "PLAN". (Consistency.)

In subsection B, second sentence, strike "of the department of insurance". (Director is defined for the title.) 20-2803 In subsection E, strike "C" and insert "D". (Internal reference correction.) 20-2804

In subsection C, paragraph 2, after "provider" insert "REGARDING THE ENROLLEE". (Clarification.) 20-3151 In the lead-in language, strike "section" and insert "CHAPTER". (Internal reference correction.) 20-3201 (2011)

In paragraph 5, in the lead-in language, after "provider," insert "A". (Grammar.) 20-3202 (2011)

In subsection K, strike "F" and insert "C". (Internal reference correction.)

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20-3205 (2011) In the first sentence, strike the fourth comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.)

20-3206 (2011)

In subsection D, strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 20-3207 (2011)

In subsection K, strike the first "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 20-3211 (2011)

In subsection X, paragraph 1, subdivision (a), strike the fifth comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 20-3213 (2011)

In subsection A, first and second sentences and in subsection B, first and second sentences, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "OCTOBER 1, 2013". (Clarification.)

In subsection A, second sentence and subsection B, second sentence, strike "thirty days after the effective date of this chapter" and insert "OCTOBER 31, 2013". (Clarification.) 21-122

Strike ", at the expense of the county,". (Redundant.) 21-331 (2007)

In subsection D, strike "21-334" and insert "21-223". (Internal reference correction.)

21-406 In subsection A, last sentence, strike "title 21," and after "chapter 3" insert "OF THIS

TITLE". (Style consistency.) 21-410

Strike the subsection designation "A." (Style consistency.) 22-125 (2005) In subsection A, paragraph 4, strike "through" and insert ", 28-663,". (Style consistency.) 22-261

In subsection C, third sentence, strike "who". (Grammar.) 22-352

In subsection A, last sentence, before "sentence" and "fine" insert "A" and strike the first comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.)

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22-374 In subsection B, after "may" insert "DO ONE OF THE FOLLOWING". In

paragraph 1, strike "; or" and insert a period. (Style consistency.) In subsection C, after "may" insert "DO ONE OF THE FOLLOWING". In

paragraph 1, strike the semicolon and insert a period. (Style consistency.) 22-407

Strike the second "or" and insert a comma and strike "thereof,". (Grammar.) 22-429

In subsection A, second sentence, after "of" insert "A", after "fine" strike the comma and insert "OR" and after "imprisonment" and "both" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 22-512

In subsection B, remove the reference to section 32-261. (That section has been repealed.) Designate the hanging paragraph as "7." (Style consistency.) 22-513

In subsection A, in two places, subsection B and subsection D, in two places, strike "registered or". (Consistency.) 23-101

In subsection B, strike the third sentence. (Outdated language.) In the fourth sentence, strike "thereafter". (Outdated language.) In the eighth sentence, before "five" insert "AT LEAST". (Clarification.) 23-108.01

After "by" insert "THIS CHAPTER," strike "1,", after "6" insert "OF THIS TITLE", after "and" insert "CHAPTER 3," and strike "of chapter 3". (Style consistency.) 23-201

In subsection C, strike "was" and insert "WERE". (Grammar.) 23-230

In paragraph 6, strike "and" and insert "OR". (Clarification.) In paragraph 16, after "single" insert "-LACING". (Clarification.)

23-231

In subsection A, paragraph 9, strike "meat packing" and insert "MEATPACKING" and in paragraph 14, strike "ship-breaking" and insert "SHIPBREAKING". (Spelling.) 23-232

In subsection A, paragraph 9, subdivision (h), after "added" strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.)

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23-235 In subsection A, paragraph 1, subdivision (a), before "not" insert "IS". (Grammar.)

23-236

In subsection A, second sentence, after "violated, and" insert "SHALL STATE". (Clarification.) 23-241

In the section heading change "variation" to "variance". Throughout the section strike "variation" and insert "VARIANCE". (Clarification.)

In subsection E, strike "4, article 1" and insert "6". (Internal reference correction.) Title 23, Chapter 2, Article 4 (23-261) (2006) Repeal the article heading. (Section 23-261 has been repealed.) 23-318

In subsection A, second sentence, after "from" insert "THE" and strike "courts" and insert "COURT". (Consistency.)

In subsection B, after "court" strike "of" and insert "IN". (Clarification.) In subsection C, strike "courts" and insert "COURT". (Consistency.)

23-325

In subsection B, first sentence, after "court" strike "of" and insert "IN". (Clarification.)

In subsection E, after "appeals from" insert "THE" and strike "courts" and insert "COURT". (Consistency.) 23-350 In paragraph 3, first sentence, strike the fifth comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 23-351 (2011)

In subsection H, first sentence, after "due" insert "TO" (grammar) and after "card" insert "ACCOUNT" (consistency). 23-361.02 (2011)

In subsection C, strike "Within ninety days after the effective date of this section,". (Outdated language.) 23-362 (L97, Ch. 51, sec. 1 & 2006 Prop. 202, sec. 2) (2007) These two versions conflict. If section 23-362 is amended, both versions of the section should be addressed in the legislation and the end result should be one version of the statute.

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23-391 (2007) In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "the person shall receive". (Redundant.) (2004) In subsection B, before "board of regents" insert "ARIZONA". (Correct terminology.) 23-402

Strike ", Arizona Revised Statutes,". (Style consistency.) 23-406

In subsection B, strike "personnel commission" and insert "DEPARTMENT OF ADMINISTRATION". (Outdated language.)

In subsection C, paragraph 2, strike "relate" and insert "RELATES". (Grammar.) 23-411

In subsection C, paragraph 2, strike "therefor" and insert "FOR THE NONCOMPLIANCE". (Clarification.) 23-415

In subsection A, first sentence, before "violation" insert "A". (Grammar.) 23-420

In subsection F, strike "5" and insert "4". (Internal reference correction.) 23-421

In subsection C, third sentence, enclose "filed" in quotation marks. (Style consistency.) 23-423

In subsection H, remove the paragraph designations. (Style consistency.) 23-429

Remove the reference to section 32-261. (That section has been repealed.) 23-432

In the third sentence, strike the second "any" and insert "THE". (Consistency.) 23-485 (2008) In subsection F, last sentence, strike "section" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Clarification.) 23-491.04

In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike "23-491.05" and insert "23-491.06". (Internal reference correction.)

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23-491.06 In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "concensus" and insert "CONSENSUS".

(Spelling.) In subsection B, first sentence, strike the second "of" and insert "IN". (Clarification.)

23-491.09

In subsection D, first sentence, strike "this", after the second "subsection" insert "C" (internal reference correction) and after "court" strike "of" and insert "IN" (clarification). 23-493 (2011)

In paragraph 9, subdivision (a), strike the first comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 23-493.06 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 6, strike the second "while". (Grammar.) 23-504

In subsection A, first sentence, should "no vision or acuity" be "NO VISION OR VISUAL ACUITY"? See section 41-1973. 23-553 In subsection C, after "labor" insert "SERVICE". (Consistency.) In subsection D, strike the third "TO". (Grammar.) 23-561 (2005) In paragraph 2, second sentence, strike the first "A". (Grammar.)

In paragraph 4, subdivision (c), after the third "and" insert "THAT" and after "obligations" insert "THAT ARE". (Grammar.) Title 23, Chapter 4 (23-601)

Change references to "commission" or "employment security commission" to "DEPARTMENT". (Clarification.) 23-613

Move the paragraph following subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (c) to the left margin. (Style consistency.) In paragraph 6, strike "section" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Internal reference correction.) 23-613.01

In subsection F, strike "(A)" and insert "(a)". (Citation correction.) 23-615

The numbering and lettering need major revision. It even breaks into divisions smaller than items, which we do not do. (Style consistency.)

In paragraph 5, subdivision (c), before "(a) or (b)" insert "SUBDIVISION". (Clarification.)

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23-618.01 Strike "Arizona state" and after "health" insert "SERVICES". (Department name

correction.) 23-619.01

In subsection B, paragraph 3, strike "title 23," and after "14" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Style consistency.)

23-625

After "any" insert "LEGAL". (Clarification.) 23-634

In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike the comma, strike "2." and strike "3." and insert "2." (Style consistency.) 23-725

In subsection F, strike "paragraph 2 (c) of subsection A of" and after "23-613" insert ", SUBSECTION A, PARAGRAPH 2, SUBDIVISION (c)" and strike "paragraph 6 (b) of" and after "23-615" insert ", PARAGRAPH 6, SUBDIVISION (b)". (Style consistency.) 23-733.01 (2005) In subsection A, last sentence, before "trade" insert "THE". (Grammar.) In subsection E, strike the first "this" and insert "THE". (Consistency.) 23-737.02

In subsection A, second sentence, strike the second "and" and insert "OR". (Clarification.) 23-741

Strike the first "to" and insert "OF". (Clarification.) 23-762

In subsection A, paragraph 3, first sentence, strike "predecessor" and insert "PREDECESSORS". (Clarification.) 23-771 (2004) In subsection D, first sentence, strike "of a" and insert "INVOLVING" and strike "offense as defined in" and insert "PURSUANT TO". (Clarification.) 23-772 (2009) In subsection B, insert a hyphen between "base" and "period". (Conformity with the definition in section 23-606).

In subsection C, first sentence, strike the last comma. (Grammar.)

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23-777 (2005) In the section heading, add "; definition". (Style consistency.) 23-789.01

In subsection C, after "under" insert "SUBSECTION B OF". In subsection D, after "overissuance" insert "OF FOOD STAMP COUPONS".

(Clarification.) 23-792

In subsection D, strike the second "any". (Grammar.) 23-794

In subsection C, strike "as". (Style consistency.) 23-901.02

After "dust" insert "OR ASBESTOS FIBERS". (Clarification.) 23-910

In the first sentence, before "licensee" insert "REAL ESTATE, MEMBERSHIP CAMPING OR CEMETERY". (Clarification.)

In paragraph 1, strike "remunerations" and insert "REMUNERATION". (Grammar.) 23-928

In subsection B, first sentence, strike the second "a" and insert "THE". (Consistency.) 23-941

In subsection D, second sentence, strike "need be given" and insert "IS REQUIRED". (Clarification.)

In subsection F, strike the first "or" and insert "OF". (Clarification.) In subsection I, first sentence, strike "hearing officer" and insert

"ADMINISTRATIVE LAW JUDGE". The first sentence also refers to "such matters" and "such matter". It should be made parallel. (Consistency.)

In subsection K, paragraph 2, strike ", surplus property division". (Clarification.) 23-941.01 (2011)

In subsection B, first sentence, after "settlement" insert "AGREEMENT" (consistency) and in the last sentence, strike "defined" and insert "DESCRIBED" (clarification).

In subsection C, second sentence, after the first "settlement" insert "AGREEMENT". (Consistency.)

In subsection D, after the first "settlement" insert "AGREEMENT" and strike "a settlement" and insert "AN AGREEMENT". (Consistency.) 23-967 (2005) In the section heading, remove "violation;". (Style consistency.)

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23-969 Review the article to determine if a section is needed establishing liens. If necessary,

propose such a section. If it is not necessary, repeal this section. 23-1022

In subsection D, first sentence, should "section" be "CHAPTER"?

23-1031 In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "incarcerated" and insert "DETAINED" and

strike "correctional facility" and insert "DETENTION CENTER". (Correct terminology.) 23-1043

In paragraph 2, after "birth" strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 23-1043.02

In subsection B, paragraph 1, after "handling" insert "OF" (grammar) and strike "title 36, chapter 6, article 4" and insert "SECTION 36-661" (internal reference correction). 23-1061 (2008) In subsection J, last sentence, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this subsection" and insert "SEPTEMBER 26, 2008". (Clarification.) 23-1066

In subsection A, second sentence and in subsection B, before "superior" strike "a" and insert "THE". (Consistency.) 23-1329 (2011)

Strike the third "a" and insert "THE". (Grammar.) 23-1386

In subsection B, fourth sentence, should "EMPLOYER" be inserted between "agricultural" and "representatives" in two places?

In subsection C, second sentence, strike "agriculture" and insert "AGRICULTURAL EMPLOYERS". (Consistency.) 23-1501 In paragraph 3, subdivision (c), item (x), strike "leaves" and after "right" insert "TO LEAVE WORK". (Conformity with sections 8-420 and 13-4439.) 25-102 and 25-122

These two sections should be reworked together. (Redundant.) 25-103

In paragraph 1, strike the semicolon and insert a period. (Style consistency.)

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25-218 In subsection C, first sentence, after "surrogate" insert "PARENTAGE".

(Consistency.) 25-318 (2008) In subsection B, second sentence, after "pursuant" insert "TO". (Grammar.) 25-318.01 (2010)

In paragraphs 2 and 3, strike "retirement" and insert "RETIRED". (Correct terminology.) 25-319 (2004) In subsection B, paragraph 13, strike "results" and insert "RESULTED". (Clarification.) 25-403 (2009)

In subsection A, paragraph 11, strike "or child abuse as defined in" and insert "PURSUANT TO". (Clarification.) 25-406 (2008) In subsection B, strike the first "or" and insert "AND" and strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Conformity.) 25-410 In subsection A, after "education," insert "CARE," and strike the comma after "health". (Clarification.) 25-501 (2007)

In subsection G, strike "numbers" and insert "NUMBER". (Grammar.) 25-521

In subsection A, after the first "to" insert "AT LEAST" and strike "issue a". (Clarification.)

In subsection D, strike the third comma. (Grammar.) 25-653

In subsection C, in the lead-in language, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 25-684

In two places, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "JULY 20, 1996". (Clarification.) 25-904

In paragraph 3, third sentence, before "petition" insert "THE". (Grammar.) 25-1004 In subsection A, in two places after "act" insert "OF 1978". (Citation correction.)

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25-1058 In subsection D, paragraph 2, strike "25-1054" and insert "25-1055". (Internal reference correction.) 25-1060 In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "25-1053" and insert "25-1055". (Internal reference correction.) 25-1067 Strike "section" and insert "SECTIONS". (Grammar.) 25-1271 (2004) In subsection B, paragraph 6, strike "36-322" and insert "36-334". (Internal reference correction.) 25-1310 (2004) Strike "of this section". (Clarification.) Title 26, Chapter 1, Article 1.1 (26-113)

The article heading needs to be changed because the division of military affairs no longer exists. 26-261 (2010)

In subsection B, paragraph 4, subdivision (b), strike "from" and insert "OF". (Grammar.) 26-301 (2005) In paragraph 7, after "whether" insert "A", after "permanent" insert "WORKER", before "paid" insert "A" and after "volunteer" insert "WORKER". (Clarification.) 26-303 (2007)

In subsection A, paragraph 2, after "components" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 26-304

In subsection A, paragraph 10, before "department" insert "ARIZONA". (Conformity.) 26-314 (2005) In subsection A, strike the third comma and insert "AND" and strike "other". (Grammar and clarification.) In subsection C, second sentence, strike "other". (Clarification.) 26-342

Before "This" insert "EXCEPT AS OTHERWISE PROVIDED IN THIS ARTICLE,". (Clarification.)

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26-343 (2007) In subsection B, paragraph 3, after "chiefs" insert an apostrophe. (Grammar.)

26-344

In subsection B, paragraphs 3 and 5, strike "and" and insert "OR". (Clarification.) 26-349 In subsection A, before "40" strike "title". (Style consistency.) 26-350 In subsection D, third sentence, after the first "and" insert "FIRE". (Clarification.) 26-351 In subsection B and subsection D, first sentence, before "40" strike "title". (Style consistency.) 26-1003

In subsection A, first sentence, after "person" insert "WHO IS" and after "guard" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 26-1016

In paragraph 2, strike "A". (Grammar.) 26-1049

In subsection D, paragraph 3, strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 26-1051

In subsection D, last sentence, strike the second "if" and insert "IS". (Clarification.) 26-1057

In subsection B, before "26-208" insert "SECTION". (Style consistency.)

26-1108 Strike "though" and insert "THROUGH". (Clarification.)

26-1110

In subsection B, after "vessel" insert "OR". (Clarification.) 26-1121

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike the second "to". (Grammar.) 27-129 (2008) In subsection G, strike "who" and insert "THAT". (Grammar.) 27-131

In subsection D, first sentence, strike "each year". (Redundant.)

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27-152.01 (2009) In paragraph 3, first sentence, strike "11" and insert "9". (Internal reference

correction.) 27-206

In the second sentence, strike the first "or" and insert a comma and after "plat" insert "OR SKETCH". (Conformity with section 27-203.) 27-208

In subsection D, where does the remaining twenty percent of the fees collected go? 27-235

(2011) In subsection A, strike the third comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) (2009) In subsection E, paragraph 3, in two places after "owner or" should "lessee"

be "LESSOR"? 27-271

In paragraph 3, after "fill" strike the comma and insert "OR" and after "stone" strike the comma and insert "OR FOR". (Grammar.) 27-271.01

In the first sentence, after "lands" insert "THAT ARE" (grammar), after the first "sale" insert "UNDER THIS ARTICLE," (clarification), after "37-312 and" insert "THAT" (grammar) and after "county" insert "WITH A POPULATION" (clarification). In the last sentence, after "sale" insert "UNDER THIS ARTICLE". (Clarification.) 27-272

In the section heading, add "; exception". (Conformity.) 27-301

In paragraph 13, after "partnership" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 27-423 (2006) In subsection A, strike "haulageways" and insert "HAULAGE WAYS". (Spelling.) 27-508.01

In subsection C, strike the first comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 27-514

In subsection C, strike the first sentence. In the second sentence, strike "Subsequent". (Outdated language.) 27-517 (2005) In subsection C, second sentence, strike "subsection A of" and after "27-527" insert ", SUBSECTION A". (Style consistency.)

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27-524 In subsection A, strike ", regulation" (conformity) and after "court" insert "IN THE

COUNTY" (clarification). In subsection B, first sentence, after the second "restraining" insert "THE" and before

"illegal product" insert "AN". (Grammar.) In the second sentence, before "summons" insert "A". (Grammar.)

In subsection C, first sentence, before the first "action" insert "AN" (grammar) and after "court" strike "of" and insert "IN" (grammar).

In subsection D, before "plaintiff" insert "THE". (Grammar.) 27-527

In subsection C, first sentence, strike "shall be" and insert "ARE" (style consistency), before "action" insert "AN" (grammar), in two places after "court" strike "of" and insert "IN" (grammar) and strike "are" and insert "IS" (grammar). In the second sentence, strike "any penalty shall not operate to legalize so that it is no longer contraband" and insert "A PENALTY DOES NOT LEGALIZE". (Clarification.) 27-531

In subsection A, strike "27-516" and insert "27-517". (Internal reference correction.) 27-536

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "division". (Clarification.) 27-554

In subsection A, fourth sentence, strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 27-555.01 (2008) In subsection B, paragraphs 2 and 3, before "commission" insert "OIL AND GAS CONSERVATION". (Clarification.) 27-560

In the last sentence, strike "37-214" and insert "37-215". (Internal reference correction.) 27-566

In subsection D, fourth sentence, strike "section" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Internal reference correction.) 27-568

After "earliest" insert "PRACTICABLE". (Clarification.) 27-658

In subsection A, strike the second "or" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 27-671

In subsection A, strike "well head" and insert "WELLHEAD". (Spelling.)

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27-673 In the last sentence, strike "37-214" and insert "37-215". (Internal reference

correction.) 27-903 (2009) In subsection B, in two places before "United" insert "THE". (Grammar.) 27-905

(2009) In subsection F, strike "78" and insert "78a". (Citation correction.) In subsection H, paragraph 2, after "trustees" strike the comma and insert

"AND". (Grammar.) 27-952 In subsection B, last sentence, strike "an" and insert "THE". (Grammar.) 27-971

In subsection B, paragraph 9, subdivision (d), after "fish habitat, and" insert "EVIDENCE". (Clarification.) 27-972 In subsection C, second sentence, strike "an" and insert "THE". (Grammar.) 27-1204 (2005) In subsection B, first sentence, after "fund" insert "ESTABLISHED BY SECTION 27-1233". (Clarification.) 27-1205

(2005) In subsection F, strike "78" and insert "78a". (Citation correction.) (2009) In subsection H, paragraph 2, after "trustees" strike the comma and insert

"OR". (Grammar.) 27-1222 (2005) In subsection D, first sentence, after "before" insert "AUGUST 12, 2005 AND" and strike "this chapter and". (Clarification.) 27-1229 (2005) In subsection B, paragraph 3, after "manage" insert "PUBLIC". (Clarification.) 27-1230 (2005) In subsection A, paragraph 3, after "manage" insert "PUBLIC". (Clarification.) 27-1277 (2010)

In subsection B, paragraph 4, after "owner," insert "THE". (Grammar.)

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28-337 (2009) In subsection B, paragraph 6, after "vehicles" insert "AS DEFINED IN SECTION

28-601". (Clarification.) 28-370 (2011)

In subsection C, strike ", a title service company or any other" and insert "OR A". (Conformity.)

28-401 (2004) In subsection D, paragraph 5, strike "subsection D," and strike the first "section" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Style consistency.) 28-410 (2006) In subsection E, after "with" insert "INDIAN". (Conformity.) 28-448 In subsection B, after "and" insert "MAY NOTIFY THE DEPARTMENT". (Clarification.) 28-455 (2006) In subsection B, paragraph 5, strike "7671" and insert "7671q". (Citation correction.) In subsection C, paragraph 9, strike "the commercial motor vehicle safety act of 1986 (" and after "31317" strike the parenthesis. (Clarification.) In subsection F, first sentence, strike the second comma. (Grammar.) 28-641 (2010)

After the second sentence, insert "THE MANUAL SHALL INCLUDE THE SPECIFICATION THAT THE YELLOW LIGHT DURATION MUST BE AT LEAST THREE SECONDS." (Clarification.) See note for section 28-643. 28-643 (2010)

Strike the last sentence and insert that language in section 28-641. (Clarification.) See note for section 28-641. 28-645 (2003) In subsection A, paragraph 3, subdivision (a), second to last sentence, strike "convicted" and insert "FOUND RESPONSIBLE". (Clarification.) 28-647 (2003) In paragraph 1, second to last sentence, strike "convicted" and insert "FOUND RESPONSIBLE". (Clarification.) 28-649 (2004) In subsection D, after "means" and after "strobe," insert "A". (Grammar.)

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28-669 In subsection A, second sentence, after "reports" insert "REQUIRED".

(Clarification.) 28-735 In subsection C, strike "to" and insert "IF" and strike "who". (Clarification.) 28-776 (2008) In subsection B, first sentence, strike "D" and insert "E". (Internal reference correction.) In subsection F, fourth sentence, strike "marshall" and insert "MARSHAL". (Spelling.) 28-857 (2010) In subsection C, paragraph 3, strike "technological" and insert "TECHNICAL". (Conformity.) 28-883

In subsection B, after the first "country" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 28-884

In subsection B, after the first "disability" insert "IN A VEHICLE". (Clarification.) 28-929 (2008) In paragraph 2, subdivision (c), second sentence, after "lamp" insert "ON EACH SIDE". (Clarification.) In subdivision (d), second sentence, after "reflector" insert "ON EACH SIDE". (Clarification.)

In paragraph 4, subdivision (b), second sentence, after "lamp" insert "ON EACH SIDE". (Clarification.) In subdivision (c), second sentence, after "reflector" insert "ON EACH SIDE". (Clarification.) 28-1179 (2008) In subsection A, paragraph 5, after "or" insert "IN". (Grammar.) 28-1326 (2003) In subsection C, paragraph 2, strike "health services" and insert "PUBLIC SAFETY". (Consistency.) 28-1385 (2011)

In subsection C, paragraph 4, after "department" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 28-1401 (2011) In subsection F, strike "I" and insert "J". (Internal reference correction.) 28-1464 (2011)

In subsection L, strike "I" and insert "J". (Internal reference correction.)

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28-1591 In subsection C, first sentence, strike "regular" and insert "FIRST CLASS". (Clarification.) 28-1632 (2006) In subsection B, strike "fine" and insert "OBLIGATION". (Consistency.) 28-1635 (2006) In subsection A, strike "fine or penalty" and insert "MONETARY OBLIGATION". (Consistency.) 28-1822 In subsection B, strike "their" and insert "THE CHAIRPERSON'S". (Grammar.) 28-2003 (2009)

In subsection A, paragraph 6, strike the first "and" and insert a comma. (Grammar). 28-2059 In subsection B, second sentence, strike "regular" and insert "FIRST CLASS". (Clarification.) 28-2092 (2004) In paragraph 1, strike "of the following" and strike subdivision (b). (Clarification.) 28-2134 (2003) In subsection C, after "deposited" insert ", PURSUANT TO SECTIONS 35-146 AND 35-147,". (Style consistency.) 28-2154.01 (2008) In subsection B, paragraph 1, subdivision (c), strike "currently" and insert "CURRENT". (Grammar.) 28-2166 (2005) In subsection H, after the comma insert "AN" and after "owner" insert "WHO IS". (Consistency.) 28-2356 (2004) In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike "pursuant to chapter 13 of this title". (Clarification.)

In subsection C, paragraph 3, strike "shall issue" and insert "ISSUES". (Grammar.) In subsection F, strike "decrement" and insert "DECREASE" (grammar) and strike

"D" and insert "E" (internal reference correction).

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28-2408 In subsection C, strike "certified by the American speech, language and hearing association" and insert "LICENSED PURSUANT TO TITLE 36, CHAPTER 17" to reflect the change in the regulation of audiologists. 28-2409 (2011)

In subsection E, in the lead-in language, in two places after "department" insert "OF TRANSPORTATION". (Clarification.) In paragraph 2, strike "veterans administration" and insert "DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct terminology.)

In subsection F, strike "veterans administration" and insert "DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS" (correct terminology), after the first "or" insert "THE" (grammar) and in two places after "department" insert "OF TRANSPORTATION" (clarification). 28-2426 (2007)

In subsection A, second sentence, after "dollars" insert "FOR IMPLEMENTATION OF THIS SECTION". (Clarification.) 28-2427 (2007)

In subsection A, second sentence, after "dollars" insert "FOR IMPLEMENTATION OF THIS SECTION". (Clarification.) 28-2428 (2006) In subsection A, second sentence and in subsection C, strike "donation" and insert "DONATIONS". (Conformity.) 28-2531 (2005) In subsection B, paragraph 9, strike "28-4135" and insert "28-4152". (Internal reference correction.) 28-3003 (2009) In subsection A, after "28-3002," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 28-3005 (2007)

In subsection A, after the second comma insert "AND" and after "counselor" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 28-3315 (2011)

In subsection E, paragraph 1, strike the first "section". (Redundant.) 28-3512 (2007) In subsection A, after "4." insert "IF". (Consistency.) 28-3514 (2007)

In subsection I, strike "other" and insert "ANOTHER". (Grammar.)

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28-4134 In subsection B, first sentence, after the first "or" strike "a". (Clarification.)

28-4138

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "sections" and insert "SUBSECTIONS". (Internal reference correction.) 28-4144 (2003) In subsection A, paragraph 2, after "that" insert "THE REGISTRATION OF".

In subsection B, paragraph 1, after the second "that" insert "THE REGISTRATION OF". (Clarification.) 28-4146

Strike "employees" and insert "EMPLOYEE" and strike "agents" and insert "AGENT". (Grammar.) 28-4148

Strike subsection A. (Outdated language.) In subsection B, strike "Effective August 1, 1998,". (Outdated language.) In the last

sentence, strike "as of the effective date of this section," and insert "ON AUGUST 21, 1998". (Clarification.) 28-4333 (2011) In subsection B, after "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 28-4361

In subsection C, paragraph 1, first sentence, after "department" insert "OF TRANSPORTATION". (Clarification.) 28-4495

In subsection A, before the last "off-premises" insert "AN". (Grammar.) 28-4548 (2011) In paragraph 1, after "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 28-4549 In the third sentence, strike "permit" and insert "PLATE". (Consistency.) 28-4804

In the first sentence, strike "may receive monies pursuant to section 28-4802 and" and insert "SHALL DEPOSIT" and strike "for deposit". (Style consistency.)

28-4847 (2009) In subsection A, first sentence, strike the first "The" and insert "A". (Grammar.)

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28-5006 In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "permit" and insert "PLATE". (Consistency.) 28-5110

After the second "has" insert "VIOLATED". (Grammar.) 28-5201 (2011)

In paragraph 9, strike the third comma. (Conformity.) 28-5235

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "in a manner prescribed by the director". In the second sentence, after "shall" insert "BE IN A MANNER PRESCRIBED BY THE DIRECTOR AND SHALL". (Clarification.) 28-5474 (2006) In subsection B, strike "sections" and insert "SECTION" (grammar) and strike "28-5763" and insert "28-5863" (internal reference correction). In subsection C, strike "by rules established". (Clarification.) 28-5612 (2004) In subsection F, last sentence, after the first and second "department" insert "OF TRANSPORTATION". (Clarification.) 28-5619 In subsection D, strike the second "as". (Grammar.) 28-5625 In subsection B, paragraph 3, strike "officer" and insert "OFFICERS". (Grammar.) In subsection F, strike "regular" and insert "FIRST CLASS". (Clarification.) 28-5633

In subsection A, after "and" insert "SHALL". (Clarification.) 28-5645 (2006) In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike "28-5716" and insert "28-5610". (Internal reference correction.) 28-5801 (2008) In subsection B, paragraph 2, subdivision (c), strike "the same use as highway user revenue fund monies" and insert "ANY PURPOSES RELATED TO TRANSPORTATION, AS DETERMINED BY THE BOARD OF SUPERVISORS,". (Conformity.) (2010) In subsection G, strike "subsection" and insert "SUBSECTIONS". (Grammar.)

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28-5802 (2011) In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "veterans' administration" and insert "UNITED

STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS" (correct name) and strike "P.L." and insert "PUBLIC LAWS" (style consistency).

In subsection A, paragraph 2 and in subsection B, strike "veterans' administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 28-5811 (2007)

In subsection A, after "unit," insert "AND". (Grammar.) 28-5928 In subsection B, in the lead-in language and in subsection F, strike "Arizona". (Consistency.) 28-6301 (2004) In paragraph 7, subdivisions (a) and (b), after "freeway," insert "A". (Grammar.) 28-6302 (2004) In subsection C, third sentence, strike the first comma and insert "AND" and before "42-6105" insert "SECTION". (Style consistency.) 28-6313 (2004) In subsection E, before the second "implemented" insert "BE". (Grammar.) In subsection G, paragraph 9, after "title 39," insert "CHAPTER 1,". (Internal reference correction.) 28-6923 (2007)

In subsection G, strike "D" and insert "E". (Internal reference correction.) 28-7011 (2010)

In subsection J, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "JULY 29, 2010". (Clarification.) 28-7046

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "on" and insert "IN". (Clarification.) 28-7054

In subsection A, strike "registered or". (Clarification.) 28-7099 In subsection B, second sentence, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "AUGUST 9, 2001". (Clarification.) 28-7201

In paragraph 4, before "platted" strike "a" and insert "ANY". (Clarification.)

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28-7212 In subsection B, second sentence, strike the second "the" and insert "A".

(Clarification.) 28-7501

In paragraph 3, strike "a" and insert "ANY". (Clarification.) 28-7678 (2005) In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "fiscal years" (redundant) and strike "matures" and insert "MATURE" (grammar). In subsection G, second sentence, after the first "fund" insert "ESTABLISHED BY SECTION 28-6991" and after the second "fund" insert "ESTABLISHED BY SECTION 28-7674". (Clarification.) 28-7906

In subsection G, last sentence, after "advertising" and "both" insert commas. (Grammar.) 28-8424 In subsection B, paragraph 3, strike "article" and insert "ARTICLES". (Grammar.) 28-8461 (2004) In paragraph 7, subdivision (a), strike "For political subdivisions described in paragraph 9, subdivision (a) of this section," (conformity) and strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "AUGUST 25, 2004" (clarification). 28-8484 (2006) In subsection E, last sentence, strike "32-2195.05" and insert "32-2195.03". (Internal reference correction.) 28-8485

In subsection A, before "hearing" insert "A". (Grammar.) 28-9122 Strike subsection D. There are no elections held by the intergovernmental public transportation authority so there is no need for preclearance. 28-9401 (2008) In subsection A, paragraph 13, strike the last comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) In subsection I, strike paragraph 1. (The defined term is not used in the section.) 29-103

In subsection F, strike "29-244 or". (That section has been repealed.) In subsection G, strike "29-248 or". (That section has been repealed.)

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29-104 In subsection A, strike "Pursuant to" and insert "EXCEPT AS PROVIDED IN".

(Clarification.) In subsection B, third sentence, strike "section 29-215, subsection B or". (That

section has been repealed.) 29-302 (2005) In paragraph 3, after the second "state" insert a comma and after "which" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 29-313 In subsection F, in the lead-in language, after "with" insert "SUBSECTION E OF". (Clarification.) In subsection H, after the third "to" insert "SUBSECTION E OF". (Clarification.) 29-334

In subsection C, paragraph 2, subdivision (b), strike "29-215 or". (That section has been repealed.) 29-337

In subsection B, last sentence, strike "In this section" and insert "FOR THE PURPOSES OF THIS SUBSECTION". (Style consistency.) 29-360

Strike the second "this" and insert "THE UNIFORM LIMITED PARTNERSHIP". (Clarification.) 29-362

After the second "the" insert "UNIFORM LIMITED PARTNERSHIP". (Clarification.) 29-368

In the lead-in language, after "unless" insert "THE". (Grammar.) In paragraph 5, strike "this" and after "chapter" insert "2 OR 5 OF THIS TITLE".

(Internal reference correction.) 29-372

In subsection C, paragraph 3, after the second "partnership" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 29-374

In subsection B, paragraph 3, after the first "office" insert "AS DEFINED IN SECTION 29-1001". (Clarification.)

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29-376 In the section heading, change "facsimile" to "fax" and in the section strike

"facsimile" in both places and insert "FAX". (Clarification.) 29-632 (2004) In subsection A, paragraph 3, after the second "the" insert "LIMITED LIABILITY". (Conformity.) 29-753

In paragraph 5, subdivision (d), in two places, strike "subdivision (a), (b) or (c) of". (Unnecessary.) 29-786 (2008) In subsection D, second sentence, after "with" insert "THIS" and strike "4 of this title" (style consistency) and strike "trademark" and insert "TRADE NAME" (conformity). In subsection G, second sentence, strike "trademark" and insert "TRADE NAME" (conformity) and in two places after "with" insert "THIS" and strike "4 of this title" (style consistency). 29-807 (2004) In subsection A, paragraph 1, subdivision (d), strike "File with" and insert "DELIVER TO". (Conformity.) 29-854

In subsection C, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "SEPTEMBER 30, 1992" and strike "that date" and insert "SEPTEMBER 30, 1992". (Clarification.) 29-1001

In paragraph 5, after "limited partnership" insert "THAT IS" and strike "which" and insert "THAT". (Grammar.) 29-1051

In paragraph 1, strike "partnership's" and insert "PARTNERSHIP". (Grammar.) 29-1071

In paragraph 2, subdivision (a), after the first "29-1052, subsection B," insert "AND ON". (Clarification.)

In paragraph 7, strike the first "and" and insert a period and strike the second "that" and insert "THE". (Clarification.) 29-1101

In subsection C, at the end of paragraphs 1 through 4, strike the semicolon and insert a period. (Style consistency.)

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29-1106 In subsection A, paragraphs 1 and 2, strike the semicolon and insert a period. In

paragraph 3, strike "; and" and insert a period. (Style consistency.) 29-1108

In subsection A, paragraph 7, strike "interest" and insert "INTERESTS". (Grammar.) 29-1111

In paragraph 1, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "JULY 20, 1996". (Clarification.) 30-101

In paragraph 4, what does "comprehended" mean here? 30-122 In subsection D, first sentence, strike "chapter 1 of" and after "45" insert ", CHAPTER 1". (Style consistency.) 30-123 In subsection A, last sentence, strike "chapter 1 of" and after "45" insert ", CHAPTER 1". (Style consistency.) 30-124

In subsection C, second sentence, strike "the effective date of this act" and insert "APRIL 19, 1956". (Clarification.) 30-127.01 (2007) In two places, after "30-124" strike the comma and insert AND" and strike "30-127.01" and insert "THIS SECTION". (Style consistency.) 30-202 In subsection B, first sentence and in subsection C, strike "chapter 1," and after "35" insert ", CHAPTER 1". (Style consistency.) 30-203 In subsection A, second sentence, after "35-147" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 30-221

Strike the subsection designation "A." (Style consistency.) 30-654 (2003) In subsection C, strike "18" and insert "17". (Internal reference correction.) 30-672

In subsection D, strike "naturopathy" and insert "NATUROPATHIC MEDICINE". (Conformity.)

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30-692 In subsection C, strike the second "by". (Grammar.) In subsection D, second sentence, after "radiation" insert "REGULATORY".

(Conformity.) 30-807

In subsection B, paragraph 4, strike "minorities" and insert "MINORITY". (Grammar.) 30-809 In subsection F, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 30-811

In subsection A, second sentence, strike the comma and insert a period. (Grammar.) 30-813

Strike the fourth comma. (Grammar.) 31-105

In subsection A, before "judge" insert "PRESIDING". (Clarification.) 31-126

Rewrite to conform to recent changes in title 36. In the last sentence, strike the second comma. (Grammar.)

31-161 (2003) In subsection A, first sentence, after the third "or" insert "A". (Grammar.) 31-163

In subsection D, the terms "jurisdiction" and "entity" are both used. Should these both be "jurisdiction" or is there an actual difference between the terms? 31-228

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "is". (Grammar.) 31-229 (2007) In subsection J, paragraph 1, strike "naturalization service" and insert "CUSTOMS ENFORCEMENT". (Correct terminology.) 31-229.01

In subsection C, first sentence, after "Inmates" insert "WHO ARE" and strike the third comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 31-229.02 In subsection B, strike paragraph 5. (Outdated.)

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31-234 In subsection C, after each "sheriff" insert "OR CHIEF OF POLICE". (Consistency.)

31-238

In subsection G, strike "the fifteenth day of" and after "January" and "July" insert "15" (style consistency) and strike "chairman" and insert "CHAIRMEN" (grammar). 31-240

In subsection A, paragraph 3, after "diploma" insert "PREPARATION". (Clarification.) 31-241

Should the acupuncture board of examiners be added to the list of boards? 31-251

Switch the order of subsections D and E. (Style consistency.) 31-251.01

Strike the paragraph designation "1." and rewrite as one sentence. (Style consistency.) 31-254 (2010)

In subsection E, paragraph 3, strike "shall be used exclusively". (Conformity.) Title 31, Chapter 2, Article 13 (31-351) (2006) Repeal the article heading. (Section 31-351 has been repealed.) 31-402 (2011)

In subsection C, paragraph 1, strike "through" insert ", 4.1, 5, 6 AND". (Internal reference correction.) 31-413 In the second sentence, strike "pardons and paroles" and insert "EXECUTIVE CLEMENCY". (Conformity.) 31-417

In the second sentence, in two places after "prisoner" insert "OR OFFENDER". (Consistency.) 31-445

In the first sentence, strike the last comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 31-467.02 Strike "violation" and insert "VIOLATIONS". (Grammar.)

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31-474 In three places after "director of" insert "THE STATE DEPARTMENT OF".

(Clarification.) 32-103

In subsection B, before "geologist" insert "A". (Grammar.) 32-122 In subsection C, strike the colon, strike paragraph 1 and strike "2.". (Redundant.) 32-146

In subsection B, paragraph 3, strike "names" and insert "NAME" and strike "addresses" and insert "ADDRESS". (Grammar.) 32-301

In paragraph 2, subdivision (d), before "Hair" insert "FITTING". (To follow lead-in.) 32-328

Subsection C conflicts with section 44-6852.

32-351 In subsection A, in two places, after "shop" insert "OR SALON". (Consistency.)

32-353

In paragraph 3, after "3." insert "KNOWINGLY" and strike "known". (Clarification.) 32-506

In paragraph 6, after "makeup" insert a comma. (Grammar.) In paragraph 9, strike "supervisory care home" and insert "RESIDENTIAL CARE

INSTITUTION". (Conformity with title 36, chapter 4.) 32-507

In subsection A, paragraph 15, strike "licenses" and insert "LICENSEES". (Grammar.) In paragraph 17, see section 44-6852 and possibly conform. 32-512

In paragraph 4, strike "technician's" and insert "TECHNICIAN". (Consistency.) 32-516 (2009) In subsection E, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "NOVEMBER 24 2009". (Clarification.) 32-558

In the third sentence, after "guardian" insert "OF THE STUDENT". (Clarification.)

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32-735 (2003) In the second sentence, strike "chapters" and insert "CHAPTER". (Grammar.) 32-742.01 (2003) In subsection C, last sentence, strike the third comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 32-821

(2011) In paragraph 1, strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.)

Strike paragraph 2, and insert "2. PERSONS WHO ARE LICENSED PURSUANT TO CHAPTER 7, 13, 14 OR 17 OF THIS TITLE AND WHO ACT WITHIN THE SCOPE OF THEIR PRACTICE." (Clarification.) 32-825

In subsection D, strike "both examinations" and insert "EACH EXAMINATION". (Clarification.) 32-927

In paragraph 3, strike the first comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.)

32-929 (2004) In subsection B, paragraph 1, first sentence, strike the third comma. (Grammar.) 32-1004 (2005) In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike the quotation marks. (Style consistency.) In subsection C, paragraph 1, strike the second comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 32-1023 In subsection C, third sentence, strike "thereof" and insert "IS NOT". (Clarification.) 32-1051 In paragraph 5, subdivision (c), strike "infers" and insert "IMPLIES". (Clarification.) In paragraph 6, strike "inferring" and insert "IMPLYING". (Clarification.) 32-1101.01

Strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "JULY 1, 1981". (Clarification.) 32-1106

In the first sentence, strike the first "section" and insert "SECTIONS" and strike the second "section". (Style consistency.) 32-1121 (2008) In subsection A, paragraph 8, strike "structural" and strike "control" and insert "MANAGEMENT". (Conformity.)

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32-1136 (2011) In subsection B, strike "subsection B of this section" and insert "THIS SUBSECTION." (Internal reference correction.) 32-1155.01 (2011)

In subsection A, last sentence, strike "party's" and insert "PARTY" and strike "their" insert "ITS". (Grammar.)

In subsection I, last sentence, strike the second "a" and insert "AN". (Grammar.) In subsection K, paragraph 2, strike "of contractors". (Conformity.) In subsection L, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "JULY 20,

2011". (Clarification.) 32-1158.01 In subsection A, paragraph 3, after "form" insert "THAT IS" and after the first "registrar" insert "AND". In paragraph 4, after "form" insert "THAT IS" and after "registrar" insert "AND". (Grammar.) In subsection B, after the fourth "the" insert "CONTRACT" and strike the second "of" and insert "REQUIRED BY". (Clarification.) 32-1160

In subsection C, last sentence, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "JULY 17, 1993". (Clarification.) 32-1164 (2007)

In subsection C, strike "violation of" and insert "MISDEMEANOR PURSUANT TO" (clarification) and strike "does" and insert "DO" (grammar). In paragraph 1, strike "Pays" and insert "PAY" (grammar) and strike "violation" and insert "OFFENSE" (clarification). In paragraphs 2 and 3, strike "Pays" and insert "PAY" (grammar) and in two places strike "violation" and insert "OFFENSE" (clarification). 32-1165 (2008) In the section heading, change "effect of" to "violation". (Style consistency.) 32-1166

In subsection C, after "chapter" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 32-1213 (2011)

In subsection N, first sentence, strike "subsection" and insert "SECTION". (Clarification.) In the third sentence, strike "Any dentist" and insert "DENTISTS" and strike "hygienist" and insert "HYGIENISTS". (Grammar.) 32-1233

In paragraph 3, strike "examinations" and insert "EXAMINATION". (Grammar.) 32-1237

In paragraph 3, after "for" insert "AT LEAST". (Clarification.)

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32-1282 In subsection A, strike "So far". (Unnecessary.)

32-1297.06 (2011)

In subsection A, fourth sentence, strike "licensee" and insert "CERTIFICATE HOLDER" and strike "licensure" and insert "CERTIFICATION". (Correct terminology.) 32-1298

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "medical" and insert "DENTAL". (Clarification.) 32-1299.25 (2011)

In subsection C, paragraph 1, strike "section" and insert "ARTICLE". (Internal reference correction.) 32-1301 (2005) In paragraph 27, last sentence, strike "does" and insert "DO". (Grammar.) 32-1302

In subsection A, fourth sentence, after "on" insert "THE THIRD MONDAY IN" and strike "1". (Conformity.) 32-1324

In the first sentence, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "MAY 7, 1998". (Clarification.) 32-1325

In the first sentence, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "MAY 7, 1998". (Clarification.) 32-1327

In subsection C, after "score" insert "ACCORDING TO THE STANDARDS OF THE CONFERENCE OF FUNERAL SERVICE EXAMINING BOARDS". (Clarification.) 32-1330

In the section heading, remove "or" and add a comma and after "embalmer" add "or embalmer's assistant". (Conformity.)

In the second sentence, in two places, after "apprentice embalmer" insert ", EMBALMER'S ASSISTANT". (Consistency.) 32-1334

In subsection A, first sentence, strike the second "or" and insert a comma and strike "cremating" and insert "CREMATION AND". (Grammar.) Should "OR CREMATION" be added after the second "directing"? (Consistency.)

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32-1339 (2003) In the first sentence, strike "national" and insert "FEDERAL" (conformity) and strike "P.L." and insert "PUBLIC LAW" (style consistency). 32-1373 In subsection A, paragraph 8, strike "phone" and insert "TELEPHONE". (Clarification.) 32-1383

In subsection A, last sentence, after "documents" insert "REQUIRED TO BE FILED WITH THE CORPORATION COMMISSION". (Clarification.)

32-1388

In subsection C, paragraph 1, first sentence, strike "at least" and insert "WITHIN". (Clarification.) 32-1391.04 (2004) In subsection A, strike "state banking". (Conformity.) 32-1394 In paragraph 4, strike the first comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 32-1394.01 In subsection B, in two places strike "background" and insert "RECORDS". (Consistency.) 32-1397

In subsection C, paragraph 1, first sentence, strike "at least" and insert "WITHIN". (Clarification.) 32-1421 (2011) In subsection A, paragraph 7, strike "veterans administration" and insert "DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 32-1472

Before "title" insert "THIS" and strike "32" and divide the section into at least two sentences. (Style consistency.) 32-1502 (2008) In subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (b), after "medicine," insert "A". (Grammar.) 32-1524 (2003) In subsection A, strike "P.L." and insert "PUBLIC LAW". (Style consistency.)

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32-1551 (2008) In subsection I, after "physicians" insert "MEDICAL" and strike "of medical examiners". (Consistency.) 32-1557 (2008) In subsections A and B, after "32-1555," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 32-1603 (2009)

In subsection D, paragraphs 1 and 2, strike "of" and insert "BEFORE". (Clarification.) 32-1634.01 (2009)

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "Meets" and insert "MEET". (Grammar.) 32-1639.01 (2009)

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "Meets" and insert "MEET". (Grammar.) 32-1649

Strike "currently". (Unnecessary.) 32-1650 (2010)

In subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (a), after "substances" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 32-1650.01 (2011) In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "of" and insert "FOR". (Correct terminology.) 32-1664 (2009)

In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike the third "and" and strike "relates" and insert "RELATE". (Grammar.) 32-1671

In paragraph 3, first sentence, strike "lense" and insert "LENS". (Spelling.) 32-1684.01 In subsection D, first sentence, before "renewal" insert "VERIFIED". (Consistency.) 32-1691.01 In subsection B, second sentence and subsection C, strike "verified". (Conformity with subsection B, first sentence.)

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32-1728 In subsection A, in three places, and in subsection B, strike "the effective date of the amendment to this section" and insert "AUGUST 9, 2001". (Clarification.) (2008) In subsection D, second sentence, after the first "chapter" insert "TO" and in the last sentence, strike "meets" and insert "MEET" and strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) In subsection E, second sentence, strike "licensees" and insert "LICENSEE". (Grammar.) 32-1771

In paragraph 1, after "person" insert "WHO IS" (grammar), after the first "state" insert a comma (grammar) and after the second "replacement" insert "SOFT" (consistency).

In paragraph 3, after "adjustment" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 32-1772

In paragraph 2, after "under" insert "THIS" and strike "16 of this title". (Style consistency.)

In paragraph 4, strike "A pharmacist" and insert "PHARMACISTS" and strike "a pharmacy" and insert "PHARMACIES". (Consistency.) 32-1773

In this section the singular and plural forms of subjects do not always agree with their verbs.

In subsection C, first sentence, strike the second "for" and insert "OF" (clarification), strike the first comma and insert "AND" (grammar), before the second and third "name" insert "THE" (grammar). In the second sentence, strike "their" and insert "THE APPLICANT'S". (Grammar.)

(2011) In subsection D, after "address," insert "OF". (Grammar.) In subsections D, E and F, strike "registered" and insert "QUALIFIED".

(Conformity.) In subsection F, strike "sanction" and insert "PENALTY". (Correct terminology.)

In paragraph 2, strike "Obtained" and insert "OBTAINS". (Consistency.) In paragraph 4, strike "their" and insert "A". (Grammar.) In paragraph 5, after "replacement" insert "SOFT". (Consistency.) In paragraph 6, strike "jurisdiction" and insert "STATE". (Clarification.) 32-1774

In subsection B, paragraph 3, after "is for" insert "REPLACEMENT SOFT" (consistency) and strike the second comma and insert "AND" (grammar).

In subsection D, first sentence, after "or" insert "A" (grammar) and after "whenever" insert "REPLACEMENT SOFT" (consistency).

In subsection F, first sentence, strike "nonresident" and strike "registered" and insert "QUALIFIED". (Consistency.)

In subsection G, first sentence, strike "such" and insert "SO". (Grammar.) 32-1804 (2008) In subsection B, paragraphs 16 and 27 are identical. Strike paragraph 27. (Redundant.)

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32-1851 In paragraph 3, it is not clear under what conditions these terms cannot be used.

32-1901.01 (2005) In subsection A, paragraph 23, strike the third "the" and insert "A" and in paragraph 29, after the second "devices," insert "IN A MANNER". (Grammar.) 32-1905 (2003) In subsection C, strike ", including" and insert "THAT INCLUDES". (Grammar.) 32-1909 (2006) In subsection D, strike "institutions" and insert "INSTITUTION". (Conformity.) 32-1926.01 (2007) In subsections A and B, strike "immigration and naturalization service" and insert "CITIZENSHIP AND IMMIGRATION SERVICES". (Correct terminology.) In subsection B, strike "give notice to" and insert "NOTIFY" and strike "that the licensee voluntarily terminates" and insert "WHO SHALL THEN REVOKE". (Clarification.) 32-1927 (2005)

In subsection C, strike "who" and insert "WHOM". (Grammar.) In subsection D, last sentence, strike "section" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Internal

reference correction.) In subsection H, strike "provided" and insert "PROVIDES". (Grammar.) In subsection I, second sentence, before "conference" insert "A". (Grammar.) In subsection J, strike the first comma. (Grammar.) Strike subsection N. (Redundant.)

32-1927.01 (2005)

In subsection C, strike "who" and insert "WHOM". (Grammar.) In subsection D, last sentence, strike "section" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Internal

reference correction.) In subsection I, second sentence, before "conference" insert "A". (Grammar.) In subsection J, strike the first comma. (Grammar.) Strike subsection N. (Redundant.)

32-1927.02 (2005)

In subsection C, strike "who" and insert "WHOM". (Grammar.) In subsection D, first sentence, strike the first "of" and insert "ON" (grammar)

and in the last sentence, strike "section" and insert "SUBSECTION" (internal reference correction).

In subsection G, strike "provided" and insert "PROVIDES". (Grammar.) In subsection H, second sentence and subsections J and K, in the lead-in language,

strike "license" and insert "PERMIT". (Correct terminology.)

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32-1963 In subsection C, after "prescription-only" insert "DRUGS" and strike "substance medication" and insert "SUBSTANCES". (Clarification.) 32-1965 In paragraph 8, after "prescription-only" insert "DRUGS" and strike "substance drugs" and insert "SUBSTANCES". (Clarification.) 32-1968 (2010) In subsection D, first sentence, after "except" and after the third "of" insert "SECTION 32-1967,". (Clarification.) 32-1972

In subsection A, strike "shall be" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 32-1973 (2007)

In subsection A, strike "a continuous" and insert "AN ONGOING". (Clarification.) 32-1975 In subsection A, strike "oral". (Clarification.) 32-1976

In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike "for contact lenses" (redundant) and strike the second comma and insert "AND" (grammar). 32-1981 (2005) In paragraph 1, first sentence, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 32-1983 (2005) In subsection B, second sentence, after "that" insert "THE". (Grammar.) 32-1984 (2005) In subsection F, should "B" be "C"? 32-1985 (2005) In the first sentence, strike the second "or" and insert "TO". (Clarification.) 32-1996 (2005) In subsection B, after "chapter" strike the comma. (Grammar.) 32-2021 (2011) In subsection C, paragraph 2, strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.)

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32-2023 (2010) In subsection B, paragraph 4, strike the last "or" and insert "OF". (Spelling.) In subsection C, first sentence, after the second "deficiencies" insert "OR

REASONS". (Consistency.) 32-2026 (2004) In subsection B, strike "meets" and insert "MET". (Grammar.) 32-2032 (2011)

In subsections D and E, after "annual" strike "license". (Conformity.) 32-2050 (2004) In paragraph 3, first sentence, after "license" insert "OR CERTIFICATE" and after "licensee's" insert "OR CERTIFICATE HOLDER'S". (Consistency.) 32-2051 (2004) In subsection I, paragraph 1, after "clinical records," insert "PATIENT" and after "files" strike the comma and insert "AND". (Clarification.) 32-2065 (2009)

In subsection D, before "32-2067" insert "SECTION". (Style consistency.) 32-2071 (2009) In subsection A, paragraph 8, subsection L, paragraph 1 and subsection M, strike "course work" and insert "COURSEWORK". (Spelling.) 32-2091 (2009)

In paragraph 9, after "pursuant to" insert "THIS" and strike "4 of this chapter". (Internal reference correction.) 32-2091.03 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 2, first sentence, after the second "practicum" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 32-2091.09 (2009)

In subsections E, F, G and I, strike "B" and insert "C". (Internal reference correction.) 32-2117 (2009)

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "11" and insert "9". (Internal reference correction.) 32-2119 (2008) In subsections A and B, strike "department of" and insert "STATE" and after "estate" insert "DEPARTMENT". (Correct terminology.)

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32-2125 (2007) In subsection B, in two places after "limited liability" strike "corporation" and insert

"COMPANY". (Consistency.) 32-2125.01 In subsection B, second sentence, after "following" insert "LICENSING". (Clarification.) 32-2126

In subsection A, second sentence, before "change" insert "A". (Grammar.) In the third sentence, before the first "broker's" insert "EMPLOYING". In the fourth sentence, before the second "broker's" insert "EMPLOYING". (Consistency.) 32-2127

In subsection D, fourth sentence, strike "and all". (Unnecessary.) 32-2135 (2011)

In subsection K, first sentence, strike "AN". (Grammar.) 32-2152

In subsection C, strike "sections" and insert "SECTION". (Grammar.) 32-2153.01

In the first sentence, after "appealable agency action" insert "AS DEFINED IN SECTION 41-1092" and after "contested case" insert "AS DEFINED IN SECTION 41-1001". (Clarification.) 32-2165

In the section heading, add "; exceptions". (Conformity.) 32-2183.02 (2008) In subsection C, second sentence, strike the second "to". (Grammar.) 32-2185.09 (2008) In subsection C, first sentence, strike "32-2182.02" and insert "32-2181.02" (internal reference correction) and strike the third comma (grammar). 32-2194.03 In subsection E, in six places strike "agent" and insert "SALESPERSON". (Conformity.) In subsection F, first sentence, strike "The commissioner" and after "section," insert "THE COMMISSIONER". (Style consistency.) 32-2194.08

In the section heading, change "Administrative" to "Civil". (Conformity.)

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32-2194.25 Strike "After the effective date of this article," (outdated) and strike "at the effective

date of this article" and insert "ON JULY 2, 1963" (clarification). 32-2197 In paragraph 2, strike "means of". (Clarification.) In paragraph 16, strike the first "an" and insert "A SALES" and before "agent's" insert "SALES". (Clarification.) Transpose paragraphs 17 and 18. (They are not in alphabetical order.) In paragraph 30, strike the first "is" and insert "MEANS". (Style consistency.) 32-2197.02 In subsection A, strike "register" and insert "FILE". (Clarification.) In subsection B, paragraphs 19 and 20, strike "registered" and insert "FILED". (Clarification.) 32-2197.14 In subsection B, in the lead-in language, after "summary" insert "SUSPENSION". (Conformity with section 32-2157.) In subsection C, first sentence, strike the second "or". (Grammar.) 32-2197.15

In subsection B, second sentence, after the first "writ" insert "OF". (Grammar.) 32-2197.19

In subsection D, strike the second "amount" and insert "AMOUNTS". (Grammar.) 32-2197.22 In subsection B, paragraph 2, subdivision (c), item (ii), strike "(vi)" and insert "(v)". (Internal reference correction.) In items (iii) and (iv), strike "must be". (Grammar.) 32-2197.24 In subsection C, strike "A method, arrangement or procedure that meets the definition of" and strike "pursuant to section 32-2197". (Defined for the article.) 32-2198.01

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "currently" and after "in effect" insert "ON THE DATE OF THE APPLICATION". (Clarification.) In paragraph 3, strike "last" and after "years" insert "IMMEDIATELY BEFORE THE DATE OF THE APPLICATION". (Clarification.)

In subsection B, first sentence, after the comma insert "BY". (Grammar.) 32-2198.02

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "commission" and insert "COMMISSIONER". (Consistency.)

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32-2198.03 In subsection A, paragraph 1, after the first "period" insert a period. (Grammar.)

32-2198.05

In the fourth sentence, clarify that the time period is three days for residents and seven days for nonresidents. 32-2198.08

In subsection B, last sentence, strike "submisssion" and insert "SUBMISSION". (Spelling.)

In subsection C, first sentence, after "engaging" insert "IN". (Grammar.)

32-2198.10 In subsection D, paragraph 5, after "escrow" insert "ACCOUNT". (Clarification.)

In paragraph 8, before "rule" insert "ANY". (Clarification.) 32-2198.14

In subsection B, paragraph 1, subdivision (b), strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 32-2203

In the first sentence, strike "an annual" and insert "A". (Redundant.) 32-2237 (2011)

In subsection A, fifth sentence, strike the first "THE" and insert "AN". (Grammar.) 32-2304 (2008) In subsection A, paragraphs 7 and 8, strike "it" and insert "THE ACTING DIRECTOR". (Clarification.) Strike subsection C. (Redundant.) 32-2324 (2008) In subsection A, first sentence, strike the second "or" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 32-2324.01 (2008) In subsection A, first sentence, strike the second "or" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 32-2325 (2008) In paragraph 5, subdivision (b), first sentence, strike the first "or" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 32-2371 (2011)

In subsection C, after the second "entity" insert a comma. (Grammar.)

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32-2413 (2006) In subsection A, paragraph 4, strike "pursuant" and insert "THAT IS COMPARABLE". (Clarification.) 32-2458 Strike "Except as provided in section 32-2411,". (Clarification.) 32-2459 (2005) Rewrite subsection E to mirror the language of section 32-2640, subsection D. (Clarification and consistency.) 32-2522 (2008) In subsection E, second sentence, strike the third "an" and insert "THE". (Clarification.) 32-2531 (2010)

In subsection C, after "devices" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 32-2601 (2005) In paragraph 16, strike the second "service" and insert "SERVICES". (Grammar.) In paragraph 22, strike the fourth comma and insert "OR" and after the second "or" insert "ANY". (Grammar.) 32-2608 (2006) In subsection A, after the second "act" insert "AS," and after the first "is" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 32-2610 (2006) In subsection A, paragraph 4, strike "pursuant" and insert "THAT IS COMPARABLE". (Clarification.) In subsection B, strike ", paragraphs 1 through 4". (Style consistency.) 32-2611 (2003) After the first "act" insert "AS". (Grammar.) Should "chapter" be changed to "article" in both places? Title 32, chapter 26, article 2 relates to agency licensing. This language is already in place in section 32-2608 for security guards. 32-2632 In subsection A, strike "of all persons" insert "FOR EACH PERSON" and strike "security guards" and insert "A SECURITY GUARD". (Clarification.) Title 32, Chapter 27 (32-2701) (2006) Repeal the chapter heading. (Title 32, chapter 27, article 1 was repealed January 1, 1993.)

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32-2811 In subsection D, paragraph 1, strike "naturopathy" and insert "NATUROPATHIC

MEDICINE". (Conformity.) In paragraph 3, strike the second "Arizona". (Conformity.) 32-2902 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 3, before "32-2912" insert "SECTION". (Style consistency.) 32-2906 (2008) In subsection A, second sentence, strike "medical" and insert "AND INTEGRATED MEDICINE". (Conformity.) 32-2951 (2011)

In subsection C, strike the first "this". (Grammar.) 32-3025

In subsection A, after "program license" insert "OR LICENSE". (Clarification.) 32-3102

In paragraph 1, strike "legislatively" and strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "AUGUST 7, 1985". (Clarification.)

In paragraph 3, strike "legislation" and insert "LAW". (Clarification.) 32-3106

In paragraph 2, subdivision (a), strike "board" and insert "ENTITY". (Consistency.) 32-3108

After the second "made" insert "AND WHO IS". (Grammar.) In this section, should "board" be "REGULATORY ENTITY"? (Consistency.) 32-3201 (2006) In paragraph 3, strike "record" and insert "RECORDS". (Correct terminology.) 32-3207 In subsection E, after "control" insert "AND PREVENTION". (Proper name correction.) 32-3209 (2003) In subsection B, after "health" insert "PROFESSION". (Consistency.) 32-3210 (2006) In subsection B, second sentence, strike "does" and insert "DO". (Grammar.)

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32-3231 (2008) In paragraph 1, strike the first comma and insert "OF OR". (Grammar.) In paragraph 5, strike the comma. (Grammar.) In paragraph 6, strike the first "and" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 32-3233 (2009) In subsection G, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "NOVEMBER 24, 2009". (Clarification.) 32-3251 (2003) In paragraph 9, in the lead-in language, strike "theory" and insert "THEORIES". (Consistency.) In paragraph 12, subdivision (ll), last sentence, after each "licensee" insert "OR CERTIFICATE HOLDER". (Consistency.) In subdivision (mm), after "Any" insert "CONDUCT THAT RESULTS IN A". (Grammar to fit with lead-in language.) 32-3253 (2008) In subsection A, paragraph 14, second sentence, after "from" insert "THE PROVISIONS OF". (Clarification.) 32-3276 (2003) In subsection A, strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 32-3278 (2003) In subsection B, strike "licensee" and insert "PERSON". (Conformity with subsection A.) 32-3280 (2003) In subsection A, first sentence, strike the first comma (grammar), strike "history" (conformity with criminal records check statutes) and strike "P.L." and insert "PUBLIC LAW" (style consistency). In subsection B, first sentence, strike "history" (conformity with criminal records check statutes) and strike "P.L." and insert "PUBLIC LAW" (style consistency). In subsection C, strike "current class one or class two" and insert "VALID". (Conformity with fingerprinting statutes.) 32-3401 (2008) In paragraph 10, subdivision (n), strike the second "that" (grammar) and strike "subsection" and insert "PARAGRAPH" (internal reference correction). In subdivision (r), in the second sentence of the lead-in language, strike "section" and insert "SUBDIVISION". (Internal reference correction.) 32-3423 (2008) In subsection A, paragraph 5, strike "in" and insert "PURSUANT TO". (Correct terminology.)

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32-3427 (2008) In subsection A, after "board" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 32-3501

In paragraph 5, subdivision (b), strike "exhibits" and insert "EXHIBIT". (Grammar.) In paragraphs 6 and 7, the definitions need more substance. In paragraph 8, after the second "program" insert "THAT IS" and before "adopted"

insert "AND THAT IS". (Grammar.) Strike paragraph 9. (The defined term is not used.) In paragraph 10, strike "acts". Subdivision (h) is not consistent with the lead-in

language. 32-3504

Strike subsection C and reletter to conform. (Redundant. See section 32-3506.) 32-3631 (2011)

In subsection D, first sentence, after the second "license" insert "OR CERTIFICATE". (Conformity.) 32-3651 (2009)

In paragraph 1, after the second "valuation" insert "OR LEGAL CLASSIFICATION". (Clarification.) 32-3662 (2010)

In subsection B, paragraph 8, after "property" insert "APPRAISAL". (Clarification.) 32-3672 (2010)

In subsection D, after "property" insert "APPRAISAL". (Clarification.) 32-3701

In subsection A, first and second sentences and subsection B, first sentence, strike "LICENSING". (Consistency.) 32-3801

Strike "professional board" and insert "REGULATORY ENTITY". (Consistency.) 32-3902

In subsection A, paragraph 1, last sentence, strike "five". (Conformity.) In paragraph 3, strike "chapters" and insert "CHAPTER". (Grammar.)

In subsection F, strike the first "the" and insert "AN". (Grammar.) 32-3921

In subsection B, paragraph 2, after "student" insert "WHO IS" and after the first "board" insert "AND WHO IS". (Grammar.)

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32-3924 In paragraph 1, after "organization," insert "OR". (Grammar.)

32-3952

Before "32-3951" insert "SECTION". (Style consistency.) 32-4121 (2011) In paragraph 3, strike "veterans administration" and insert "DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 32-4123 In subsection B, after "chapter 6" insert ", ARTICLE 10". (Clarification.) 32-4154 In subsection A, strike paragraph 5 to conform with title 41, chapter 6, article 10. 32-4155 Strike subsection F to conform with title 41, chapter 6, article 10. In subsection G, second sentence, strike "board rules" and insert "TITLE 41, CHAPTER 6, ARTICLE 10". (Conformity.) 32-4161 Before "Board" insert "EXCEPT AS PROVIDED IN SECTION 41-1092.08, SUBSECTION H,". (Clarification.) 32-4202 (2003) In subsection B, second sentence, strike the period and insert ", EXCEPT THAT". (Clarification.) 32-4203 (2005) In subsection A, paragraph 2, last sentence, strike "within six months of the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "BY OCTOBER 20, 2005". (Clarification.) 32-4222 (2005) In subsection A, paragraph 9, first sentence, strike "board" and insert "AGENCY". (Consistency.) In subsection B, paragraph 2, subdivision (a):

(2005) Strike the second "of" and insert "IN". (Grammar.) (2011) Strike the sixth "of" and insert "FOR". (Correct terminology.)

32-4228 (2011) In subsection A, strike the second "of" and insert "FOR".

In subsection B, strike "Arizona" and strike the second "of" and insert "FOR". (Correct terminology.)

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32-4255 (2003) In subsection C, strike the second comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 33-276

In subsection A, strike "its effective date" and insert "AUGUST 7, 1985". (Clarification.) Title 33, Chapter 3 (33-301)

Rework provisions of title 33, chapter 3 and title 33, chapter 10 to correct any conflicts. 33-303

Repeal. (Redundant. See section 33-1317.) 33-341 In subsection B, first sentence and subsection C, first sentence, in two places after "days" insert an apostrophe. (Grammar.) 33-404

In subsections A and B, after the last "located" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 33-424 (2007)

In subsection A, after "materials," insert "IN". (Grammar.) 33-434.01

In subsection A, in two places, strike "section 49-104, subsection B, paragraph 16" and insert "TITLE 49, CHAPTER 1, ARTICLE 4". (Internal reference correction.) 33-440 (2008) In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "SEPTEMBER 26, 2008". (Clarification.) 33-442 (2010)

In subsection A, first sentence, after the first comma insert "A". (Grammar.) In subsection D, in two places strike "the effective date of this section" and insert

"JULY 29, 2010". (Clarification.) 33-503

Before the colon strike "that" and insert "BOTH OF THE FOLLOWING". (Clarification.) In paragraph 1, strike ", and" and insert a period. (Style consistency.) In paragraph 2, strike the first "that". (Grammar.) 33-601

Strike "some one" and insert "SOMEONE". (Spelling.)

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33-707 (2010) In subsection E, paragraph 6, after the fourth "deed" strike "or" and insert "OF" and

after "trustee's" strike "of" and insert "OR". (Correct terminology.) 33-710

After the first "person" insert "WHO IS". (Grammar.) 33-713

In the first sentence, strike the first "of" and insert "IN". (Conformity.) 33-715 In subsection C, strike "as provided in subsection I, paragraph 5". (Unnecessary and incorrect reference.) In subsection E, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "AUGUST 22, 2002". (Clarification.) 33-745

In subsection B, second sentence, after "subordinate to that" insert "OF". (Grammar.) In subsection C, the last word on the form "(Jurats)" probably should be

"ACKNOWLEDGMENTS" to be consistent with other sections in this article. 33-811 (2004) In subsection D, fourth sentence, strike "other". (Clarification.) 33-812 (2010)

In subsection A, paragraph 4, fourth sentence, strike "H" and insert "I" and in subsection J, strike "L" and insert "M". (Internal reference correction.) 33-821

Strike the reference to title 42, chapter 10, article 2 (that article has been repealed) and strike "title 33," and after "3" insert "OF THIS TITLE" (internal reference correction). 33-901

Strike the second "or" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 33-966

Strike the subsection designation "A.". (Style consistency.) 33-967

In subsection D, after "money" insert "AND THAT IS". (Grammar.) 33-992 In subsection E, third sentence, strike the fourth "to" and insert "AT". (Consistency.) 33-993

In subsection I, last sentence, strike "as defined in section 33-993". (Unnecessary.)

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33-1004 (2008) In subsection B, third sentence, after "by" insert "AN". (Grammar.) In subsection C, first sentence, after the second "lien" insert a comma and after "thereof" insert a comma. (Grammar.) In subsection D, paragraph 2, second sentence, after the first "date" insert "THE". (Grammar.) 33-1008

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "their" and insert "THE OWNER'S OR CONTRACTOR'S". (Grammar.) 33-1021.01

In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike "no less in size than" and insert "AT LEAST". (Clarification.) 33-1054

In the second sentence, after "person" insert "WHO IS" and before "who" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 33-1055

In subsection A, second sentence, after "person" insert "WHO IS" and before "who" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 33-1056

In subsection B, in the lead-in language, strike "all" and insert "BOTH". (Grammar.) 33-1071 In subsection B, strike "title 33, chapter 7," and after "article 6" insert "OF THIS CHAPTER". (Style consistency.) In subsection D, paragraph 2, strike "It" and insert "THE REAL PROPERTY". (Clarification.) 33-1072 In subsection C, first sentence, after the second "county" insert "OR COUNTIES". (Clarification.) In the third sentence, strike "and shall be entitled 'broker's preliminary notice of intent to lien'". (Redundant.) 33-1075 In subsection A, last sentence and subsection C, strike "penalties" and insert "DAMAGES". (Conformity with section 33-712.) 33-1076 In subsection D, paragraph 2, after "2." insert "THE". (Consistency.)

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33-1206 In subsection A, first sentence, strike "his unit and its" and insert "THE OWNER'S

UNIT AND THE OWNER'S". (Clarification.) In subsection B, first sentence, strike "its" and insert "THE OWNER'S".

(Clarification.) 33-1228

In subsection J, strike "contain" and insert "CONTAINS". (Grammar.) 33-1229 (2005) In the lead-in language, before "requirement" insert "THIS". (Grammar.) 33-1241

In the first sentence, after "is" insert "INITIALLY". (Clarification.) 33-1244

In subsection C, strike "condominum" and insert "CONDOMINIUM". (Spelling.) 33-1250 (2005) In subsection F, paragraph 1, consider whether the reference to subsections A and B should also include subsection C. 33-1253

In subsection M, strike "additonal" and insert "ADDITIONAL". (Spelling.) 33-1260 (2011)

In subsection C, second sentence, before the last "documents" insert "THE DATE THE". (Clarification.) 33-1261 (L11, Ch. 152, sec. 1, Ch. 154, sec. 2, Ch. 156, sec. 2 & Ch. 292, sec. 1) (2011) In subsection H, strike the comma. (Grammar.) 33-1270

In subsection B, strike the first "section" and insert "SECTIONS" and strike the second "section". (Style consistency.)

33-1309

In subsection B, fifth and last sentences, strike "B" and insert "C". (Internal reference correction.) 33-1310 (2005) In paragraph 2, strike "include" and insert "INCLUDES". (Style consistency.) 33-1318 (2007)

In subsection H, strike the second "or" and insert "OF". (Clarification.)

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33-1329 In subsection B, after "including" insert "A". (Grammar.)

33-1331 (2010) In subsection B, second sentence, after "in" insert "SECTION". (Style consistency.) 33-1364

In subsection A, paragraph 1, last sentence, strike "above". (Unnecessary.) 33-1368

In subsection A, paragraph 1, after "income of" insert "THE". (Grammar.) In the material following paragraph 2, fourth sentence, strike "defined" and insert "PRESCRIBED". (Conformity.)

In subsection C, strike the first comma. (Grammar.) 33-1370

In subsection E, third sentence, strike "title 33, chapter 10" and insert "THIS CHAPTER". (Style consistency.)

In subsection F, paragraph 2, after "Hold" insert "FOR THE BENEFIT OF THE TENANT" and strike "for the benefit of the tenant". (Clarification.) 33-1371

In the section heading, after "payments" add "; waiver of right to terminate". (Conformity.)

In subsection A, fourth sentence, strike "article 4 of this chapter" and insert "THIS ARTICLE". (Style consistency.) 33-1404

In subsection C, strike "title 33," and after "article 1" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Style consistency.) 33-1409 (2005) In paragraph 14, subdivision (a), item (i), after "structure" insert "THAT WAS" and strike "which" and insert "THAT". (Grammar.) 33-1412

In subsection C, after the second quotation mark insert a comma. (Grammar.) 33-1413.03

In the fourth sentence, strike "in no way modifies" and insert "DOES NOT MODIFY". (Style consistency.) 33-1438 (2006) In the first sentence, strike "parks" and insert "PARK". (Grammar.)

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33-1476.02 (2009) In subsection B, strike "building and fire" and insert "FIRE, BUILDING AND LIFE". (Correct terminology.) 33-1476.05 (2011)

In subsection D, paragraph 3, first sentence, strike "not approve" and insert "DISAPPROVE". (Clarification.) 33-1485

In subsection B, second sentence, strike the first "and" and insert a comma, strike the first comma and insert "IF" (grammar) and after "sent" insert "IF THE SUMMONS IS SENT" (clarification). 33-1551 (2011)

In subsection C, paragraph 4, second sentence, after the second comma insert "AN". (Grammar.)

33-1705 (2010)

Strike the comma. (Grammar.) 33-1804 (2011)

In subsection A, fourth sentence, strike "tape record" and insert "AUDIOTAPE". In the fifth sentence, strike "taping" and insert "AUDIOTAPING OR VIDEOTAPING" and strike "tape recording" and insert "AUDIOTAPING". (Clarification.) 33-1806 (2011)

In subsection C, second sentence, before the last "documents" insert "THE DATE THE". (Clarification.) 33-1808 (L11, Ch. 152, sec. 2 & Ch. 292, sec. 2) (2011)

In subsection H, strike the comma. (Grammar.) 33-1809 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 1, first sentence, after the second "the" insert "ARIZONA" and after the third, fourth and fifth "corporation" insert ", FEDERALLY REGULATED UTILITY". (Clarification.) 33-1815 (2007)

After "trademark" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 33-1816 (2007)

In subsection B, strike the comma and insert "OR" and strike the first "or" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 33-1902 (2006) In subsection G, first sentence, strike "per day". (Redundant.)

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33-1906 (2006) In the third sentence, strike "shall" and insert "SECTION DOES". (Style consistency.) 33-2002

In subsections A and C, strike "chapters" and insert "CHAPTER" and after "9" strike "and" and insert "OR". (Clarification.) 33-2122 (2006) In subsection E, last sentence, after "long-term" insert "RENTAL". (Correct terminology.) 33-2201 (2005) In the first and second sentences, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "AUGUST 12, 2005". (Clarification.) 33-2202 (2005) In paragraph 2, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 33-2211 (2008) In subsection E, in two places, and in subsection F, paragraph 4, strike "substitute" and insert "SUCCESSOR". (Correct terminology.) In subsection G, fourth sentence, strike the second comma. (Grammar.) 34-203 (2007)

In subsection A, paragraph 1, after the comma insert "OF". (Grammar.) In paragraph 2, strike "On the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "BEGINNING SEPTEMBER 19, 2007" (clarification) and after "2009," insert "OF" (grammar). 34-223

In subsection A, at the end of the first sentence, after the last "supplied" insert "OR". (Grammar.) In the second sentence, strike "Such" and insert "THE FINAL WRITTEN". (Clarification.) 34-243

After the second "state" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 34-254

In subsection B, after the first "and" and after "court" insert commas. (Grammar.) 34-255

In subsection B, strike "corporaton" and insert "CORPORATION". (Spelling.)

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34-401 In subsection A, strike "after the effective date of this section" and insert "ON OR AFTER JULY 1, 2003". (Clarification.) 34-501

In paragraph 1, strike "as" and strike ", paragraph 1". (Style consistency.) In paragraph 2, after "that" insert "IS ALL OF THE FOLLOWING". In subdivisions

(a), (b) and (c), strike "Is". (Clarification.) 34-603 (2010)

In subsection C, paragraph 2, subdivision (b), second sentence, after the comma insert "THE REQUEST FOR QUALIFICATIONS SHALL". (Grammar.) 34-613 (2007)

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "On the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert " BEGINNING SEPTEMBER 19, 2007". (Clarification.) 35-113 (2006) In the last sentence, strike "estimate" and insert "ESTIMATES". (Clarification.) 35-113.01 (2008) In subsection A, strike the third comma and strike the fourth comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) (2004) In subsection B, first sentence, after "copy of" insert "AN". (Grammar.) (2004) In subsection C, strike the last comma. (Grammar.) 35-131 (2007)

In subsection G, strike the second "the". (Clarification.) 35-149 In subsection C, first sentence, strike "who" and insert "WHICH". (Grammar.) 35-152

In subsection E, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "JULY 13, 1995". (Clarification.) 35-185.02

In subsection D, after the first "treasurer's" insert "WARRANT". (Consistency.) In subsection E, second sentence, after the first "warrant" insert "NOTE".

(Consistency.) 35-188

In two places, strike "set-off" and insert "SETOFF". (Spelling.)

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35-191 In subsection D, strike "requesting agency" and insert "BUDGET UNIT". (Correct

terminology.) 35-325

In subsection A, strike the second comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 35-327 (2008) In subsection H, strike "35-190.01,". (That section has been repealed.) 35-341

The definition of "agency" needs to be clarified as to whether it refers to agencies required by title 11 or agencies established pursuant to title 11. 35-391 (2008) In paragraph 15, subdivision (a), strike "are" and insert "IS" and, in two places, strike "involve" and insert "INVOLVES". (Grammar.) In subdivision (b), strike "are" and insert "IS", strike "involve" and insert "INVOLVES" and strike "include" and insert "INCLUDES". (Grammar.) 35-391.01 (2008) In subsection A, strike "Within one hundred eighty days after the effective date of this article" and insert "ON OR BEFORE MARCH 25, 2009". (Clarification.) In subsection B, strike "the one hundred eighty-day period" and insert "MARCH 25, 2009". (Clarification.) 35-391.03 (2008) In subsection B, paragraph 2, after "35-391.02," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 35-391.06 (2008) In subsection H, strike "Within one year after the effective date of this section" and insert "ON OR BEFORE SEPTEMBER 25, 2009". (Clarification.) 35-393.01 (2008) In subsection A, strike "Within one hundred eighty days after the effective date of this article" and insert "ON OR BEFORE NOVEMBER 19, 2008". (Clarification.) In subsection B, strike "the one hundred eighty day period prescribed in subsection A" and insert "NOVEMBER 19, 2008". (Clarification.) 35-393.05 (2008) In the second sentence, strike the third comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.)

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35-393.06 (2008) In subsection C, first sentence, after the first "or" insert "A" and in the second sentence after "or" insert "A". (Grammar.) In subsection D, after "or" insert "A". (Grammar.) In subsection G, after the third "state" insert "ON". (Grammar.) In subsection I, strike "Within one year after the effective date of this section". (Outdated.) 35-402

Strike "ad valorem and". (The state no longer levies ad valorem property taxes.) 35-403

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "anticipations" and insert "ANTICIPATION" (conformity) and in the last sentence, strike the second "shall" (grammar).

(2008) In subsection B, see note for section 35-402. 35-404 (2008) See note for section 35-402. 35-451.01

In subsection C, strike "9" and insert "IX". (Citation correction.) 35-458 (2008) In subsection A, strike the second comma and insert "AND" and strike the second "and". (Grammar.) 35-465

In paragraph 5, strike the second "any". (Grammar.) 35-494

After "Contracts" insert "FOR". (Clarification.) 35-511

In paragraph 2, strike "agriculture" and insert "AGRICULTURAL". (Correct terminology.) 35-513

After the second "or" insert "THAT". (Grammar.) 35-701 (2011) In paragraph 11, strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 35-702

In subsection A, last sentence, strike the first comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.)

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35-706 (2005) In subsection A, strike "shall have" and insert "HAS" and strike the second "the following" and insert "THOSE POWERS". (Clarification.)

(2011) In subsection D, paragraph 1, strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 35-722

Strike the first comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 35-724

Last sentence, strike "In the event of" and insert "A". (Clarification.) 35-741 In the last sentence, strike "9" and insert "IX". (Citation correction.) 35-743

In two places, after "board" insert "OF". (Clarification.) 35-1001

In paragraph 1, strike ", municipality", after the second "state" insert "WITH A POPULATION OF AT LEAST THREE HUNDRED THOUSAND PERSONS", strike "political subdivision," and after "foregoing" strike the remainder of the sentence. (Clarification.)

In paragraph 3, before "bank" insert "A". (Grammar.) 35-1003

In the first sentence, strike "or empowered". (Redundant.) 35-1005

Strike ", and" and insert a period. (Clarification.) 36-125.06 (2008) In subsection B, second to last sentence, strike "as defined in section 36-401". (Conformity.) 36-125.07 In subsection B, last sentence, strike "D, paragraphs 13 and 14" and insert "C, PARAGRAPH 2, SUBDIVISIONS (k) AND (l)". (Internal reference correction.) 36-139 In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "film strips" and insert "FILMSTRIPS". (Spelling.) In subsection B, last sentence, strike the last comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.)

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36-142 (2010) Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2010? 36-151

Alphabetize the definitions. In paragraph 3 in three places, in subdivision (a), item (i) and in paragraph 4,

subdivision (c), item (i), strike "and surgeon" and insert "LICENSED TO PRACTICE IN THIS STATE PURSUANT TO TITLE 32, CHAPTER 13". (Clarification.) 36-183.04 In subsection I, strike the second "the" and insert "A" (consistency) and strike "a" (grammar). 36-183.05 In subsection A, strike the second "a". (Grammar.) In subsection C, strike the second "the" and insert "A" (consistency) and strike "a" (grammar). In subsection D, strike the second "a". (Grammar.) 36-186 In paragraph 3, after "department" insert "OF HEALTH SERVICES". (Clarification.) 36-203 (2011)

In subsection D, strike "a mentally retarded" and insert "AN" and after the first "adult" insert "WITH AN INTELLECTUAL DISABILITY". (Correct terminology.) 36-213

In subsection C, first sentence, strike "created" and insert "ESTABLISHED". (Style consistency.) 36-264 (2011)

In subsection D, first sentence, strike "who". (Grammar.) 36-333.03

(2009) Reletter the second subsection B as subsection C, reletter to conform and in relettered subsection F strike "D" and insert "E".

(2007) In subsection F, after "or" insert "A". (Grammar.) 36-344 (2004) In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "who". (Grammar.) 36-351 (2011)

In subsection B, in the lead-in language, strike the second comma. (Grammar.) In subsection D, first sentence, strike the last comma. (Grammar.) In subsection E, first sentence, strike the second "and" and strike "on" and insert

"AFTER". (Style consistency.)

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36-401 (2010) In subsection A, paragraph 43, after the second "license" insert "THAT IS" and after

"location" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 36-405.01

In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike "title 36," and after "4.1" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Style consistency.) 36-406 In paragraph 1, subdivision (d), last sentence, strike "The department shall not impose a violation on a licensee for not making a vaccination available" and insert "THIS SUBDIVISION DOES NOT APPLY" and strike "that vaccination" and insert "A VACCINE". (Clarification.) 36-425.01

In subsection B, paragraph 3, strike "Meets". (To follow lead-in.) 36-427 In subsection C, after the second "director" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 36-431.01 In subsection F, second sentence, after "deposited" insert ", PURSUANT TO SECTIONS 35-146 AND 35-147,". (Style consistency.) In subsection G, strike "transmit" and insert "DEPOSIT", strike "to" and insert "IN" and after "fund" insert ", PURSUANT TO SECTIONS 35-146 AND 35-147". (Style consistency.) 36-431.02 In subsection A, last sentence, strike "D" and insert "F". (Internal reference correction.) 36-434 (2009)

In subsection A, paragraph 3, after "health" insert "CARE". (Conformity.) 36-436

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "hospital" and insert "HOSPITALS". (Grammar.) 36-436.03

After "agency" insert "AS DEFINED IN SECTION 36-151" (clarification) and strike "supervisory care home" and insert "A RESIDENTIAL CARE INSTITUTION" (consistency). 36-446.02 (2005) In subsection B, in two places, after "36-401" strike the comma, after "manager at large" insert "WHO IS" and after "two public members" insert "WHO ARE". (Grammar.)

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36-446.06 In subsection B, after the last "license" insert "OR CERTIFICATE". (Consistency.)

36-448.55

In subsection D, third sentence, strike "personnel" and insert "STAFF MEMBER". (Clarification.) 36-449.02

In subsection B, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "AUGUST 6, 1999". (Clarification.) 36-449.03 (2003) In subsection C, paragraph 4, strike "physician's" and insert "PHYSICIAN". (Consistency.) 36-450 (2003) In paragraph 2, after "licensure" insert "OR CERTIFICATION". (Clarification.) 36-463.02

In subsection E, second sentence, strike "chapter" and insert "TITLE" and strike "article" and insert "CHAPTER". (Internal reference corrections.) 36-466 (2004) In subsection H, strike "federal" (style consistency) and strike "100-518" and insert "100-578" (citation correction). 36-472.01 (2006) In subsection B, second sentence, strike "does" and insert "DO". (Grammar.) 36-491

In subsection D, paragraphs 10 and 11, strike "A provision for". (To follow lead-in.) 36-491.03

In subsection C, in the lead-in language, strike "provisions". (Redundant.) 36-491.04

After the second "chapter" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 36-503.02 (2005) Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2005? 36-507 (2005) In paragraph 5, strike the first "to". (Grammar.)

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36-517.02 In subsection D, strike "immunitites" and insert "IMMUNITIES". (Spelling.)

36-524

In subsection D, third sentence, strike "the original signature of the applicant on" and strike "facsimile" and after the second "application" insert "THAT CONTAINS THE APPLICANT'S ORIGINAL SIGNATURE". (Clarification.) 36-540 (2011) In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 36-544

Subsection C refers to unauthorized absence from the "jurisdiction". This should probably be "TREATMENT AGENCY". (Consistency.) 36-548 (2011) In the section heading, change "veterans administration" to "United States department of veterans affairs". In subsection A, in six places, in subsection B, in two places, in subsection C, in three places and in subsection D, in three places, strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 36-550.05

In subsection B, paragraph 3, first sentence, strike "semi-supervised" and insert "SEMISUPERVISED". (Spelling.)

In subsection C, is "Individual and family support prevention services" the correct title or language? 36-550.06 (2011) In subsection B, strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 36-551 (2011)

In paragraph 22, second sentence, strike "the". (Grammar.) 36-554

In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "service" and insert "SERVICES". (Grammar.) In subsection C, paragraph 1, after "placement" insert a comma. (Grammar.)

36-557 (2010)

In subsection B, last sentence, strike the first "and". (Grammar.) In subsection G, in the lead-in language, after "contractors" insert a comma.

(Grammar.) In subsection H, after "setting" strike the comma. (Grammar.)

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36-561 In subsection B, third sentence, after "days" insert an apostrophe. (Grammar.)

36-564

In subsection B, strike "apppointment" and insert "APPOINTMENT". (Spelling.) 36-565

In subsection C, first sentence, after "days" insert an apostrophe. (Grammar.) 36-572 In subsection B, after "consists of" insert "DONATIONS AND". (Consistency.) 36-574 (2011) In subsection A and in subsection B, paragraph 1, strike "behavioral" and insert "BEHAVIOR". (Correct terminology.) 36-582

In subsection G, strike "subsequent to the effective date of this section" and insert "AFTER DECEMBER 1, 1978". (Clarification.) 36-595 (2010)

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "promulgate" and insert "ADOPT". (Correct terminology.) 36-595.03 In subsection A, first sentence, strike "of developmental disabilities in the department". (Defined for the chapter.) In the third sentence, strike "this" and insert "THESE". (Grammar.) 36-596 In subsection C, first sentence, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "SEPTEMBER 30, 1992". (Clarification.) 36-596.51

In paragraph 6, strike the fourth "or" and insert a comma and after the fifth "or" insert "A". (Grammar.)

In paragraph 10, strike "enables" and insert "ENABLE" and strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 36-596.54

In subsection A, third sentence, after "system" insert "ADMINISTRATION". (Conformity.) 36-601 (2007)

In subsection A, paragraph 18, strike the last comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.)

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36-601.01 (2008) This section requires many changes to conform to the drafting style used in Arizona Revised Statutes.

In subsection L, paragraph 3, strike "36-190" and insert "35-190". (Internal reference correction.) Note that 1998 Prop. 105 applies to these changes. 36-601.02

In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike "using areas". (Clarification.) 36-605 (2008) Strike "wash house," and insert "WASHHOUSE OR" (spelling and grammar) and strike the last comma (grammar). 36-624 In the first sentence, after "that" insert "AN". (Grammar.) 36-663 (2008) In subsection A, first sentence, strike the second "of" and insert "TO". (Grammar.) 36-666 (2004) In subsections B and C, in the phrase "health care facility" strike "care". (Consistency.) 36-673

In subsection D, first sentence, strike "minor child" and insert "PUPIL" and strike the second "child" and insert "PUPIL". (Consistency.) 36-694 (2009) In subsection H, paragraph 7, after "system" insert "ADMINISTRATION". (Correct terminology.) 36-697

In subsection E, paragraph 1, after "by" insert "A". (Grammar.) 36-698 In subsection C, strike "pilot". (Conformity.) 36-711

In paragraph 8, in the lead-in language, strike "examination" and insert "EXAMINATIONS". (Grammar.) In subdivision (d), before "centers" insert "FEDERAL". (Proper name correction.)

In paragraph 10, strike "as". (Style consistency.) In paragraph 15, after the second "physician" insert "AND". (Grammar.) In paragraph 17, strike "the age of". (Redundant.)

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36-714 In subsection A, fourth sentence, before "officer" insert "CONTROL".

(Consistency.) In subsection B, paragraph 3, first sentence, after "foreign government" strike the

comma and insert "OR" and strike "other" and insert "ANOTHER". (Grammar.) In subsection C, after "foreign government" strike the comma and insert "OR", strike

"governments, or" and insert "GOVERNMENT, ANY" and strike "other" and insert "ANOTHER". (Grammar.) 36-721

In paragraph 4, strike "To". (To follow the lead-in.) 36-723

In subsection A, paragraph 1, first sentence, strike "in the performance of that person's duty to prevent or control tuberculosis". (Duplicates the lead-in language.) In the second sentence, after "lands," insert "A" and after "building or" insert "ANY". (Clarification.) In paragraph 2, strike "in the performance of that person's duty to prevent or control tuberculosis". (Duplicates the lead-in language.) In paragraph 3, third sentence, strike the second comma and insert "OR" and strike "or a designated representative". (Consistency.) 36-725 (2009)

In subsection E, second to last sentence, before "guardian", "conservator", "parent", "custodian", "relative" and "friend" insert "A". (Grammar.) 36-726

In subsection N, first sentence, before "tuberculosis" insert "ACTIVE". (Consistency.) 36-728 (2009)

In subsection H, second to last sentence, before "guardian", "conservator", "parent", "custodian", "relative" and "friend" insert "A". (Grammar.) 36-729 (2009)

In subsection A, first sentence, before "guardian", "conservator", "parent", "custodian", "relative" and "friend" insert "A". (Grammar.) 36-731 (2009)

In subsection A, second sentence, before "health care provider", "guardian", "conservator", "parent", "custodian", "relative" and "friend" insert "A" and before "ambulance or ambulance service" insert "AN". (Grammar.) 36-735

In subsection A, paragraph 4, before "A" insert "THE RIGHT TO". (To follow the lead-in.)

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36-751 In paragraph 3, after "person" insert "WHO IS LICENSED UNDER THIS ARTICLE

AND". (Clarification.) 36-752

In subsection B, paragraphs 1 and 3, after "physician" insert "WHO IS" and after "32" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 36-771 In subsection A, third sentence, after "department" insert "OF HEALTH SERVICES". (Clarification.) 36-782 (2010) In subsection A, first sentence, after the second "has" insert "OCCURRED". (Grammar.) 36-786 In subsection A, first sentence, after "to" insert "AN". (Grammar.) 36-787 In subsection A, first sentence, after "condition" insert "THAT IS". (Grammar.) In subsection C, paragraph 1, after "with" insert "AN". (Grammar.) In subsection E, after "or" insert "ANY". (Grammar.) 36-788 In subsection A, third sentence, after "or" insert "ANY". (Grammar.) In subsection E, second sentence, strike the last comma. (Grammar.) In subsection F, strike the comma. (Grammar.) 36-789 In subsection A, first sentence, strike the comma. (Grammar.) In paragraph 1, after "emergency" insert "OR STATE OF WAR EMERGENCY". (Consistency.) In subsection E, third sentence, after "continuance" insert a comma. (Grammar.) In subsection K, fourth sentence, after "emergency" insert "OR STATE OF WAR EMERGENCY". (Consistency.) In subsection L, second sentence, strike "allows" and insert "ALLOW". (Grammar.) 36-790 In subsection B, first sentence, strike the second comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 36-798.02

In subsection B, second sentence, strike the first comma and insert "THAT". (Grammar.)

In subsection C, strike the second "machines" and insert "MACHINE". (Grammar.)

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36-831 (2011) In subsection C, second sentence, strike "veterans' administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS" (correct name) and after "give" insert "THE DEPARTMENT OR" (clarification). In the third sentence, after "If" insert "THE DEPARTMENT OR". (Clarification.) 36-848 (2007)

In subsection D, strike the last comma. (Grammar.) 36-860 (2007)

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike the last comma. (Grammar.) 36-884 (2009)

In paragraph 6, first sentence, after "enter" insert "INTO". (Grammar.) In the second sentence, after "entrance" insert "INTO" and strike the second "and" and insert a period. (Grammar.) 36-888

In subsection A, third sentence, strike "registered" and insert "CERTIFIED". (Clarification.) 36-889 In subsection B, strike "other" and insert "ANOTHER". (Grammar.) 36-891.01 In subsection D, before "A" insert "EXCEPT AS PROVIDED IN SUBSECTION C,". (Clarification.) 36-897.01 (2010)

In subsection E, strike the second "program". (Clarification.) In subsection G, strike "licensee" and insert "CERTIFICATE HOLDER" and strike

"licensure" and insert "CERTIFICATION". (Correct terminology.) In subsection Q, strike "licensees" and insert "CERTIFICATE HOLDERS". (Correct

terminology.) 36-897.08 In subsection D, before "A" insert "EXCEPT AS PROVIDED IN SUBSECTION C,". (Clarification.) 36-897.12 In subsection A, strike "review" and insert "REVIEWING". (Grammar.)

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36-905 In subsection A, first sentence, strike "paragraphs 2, 3 and 13 of" and after "36-904,"

insert "SUBSECTION A, PARAGRAPHS 2, 3 AND 13". In the second sentence, strike "paragraph 1 of" and after "36-904" insert ", SUBSECTION A, PARAGRAPH 1". (Internal reference corrections.) 36-972

Strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 36-1162

(2009) Should this section be amended because the program established by paragraph 9 of this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2009?

(2007) In paragraph 10, should "chemical or other toxic fire event" be defined for the purposes of the paragraph or should it reference the definition in section 36-104? 36-1408

In the first sentence, before "providing" strike "its". (Grammar.) 36-1409.01

In subsection B, second sentence, strike "as defined in" and insert "PURSUANT TO". (Conformity.) 36-1418

In subsection A, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 36-1473 (2003) In subsection B, first sentence, after "redevelopment" insert "PROJECT". (Consistency.) 36-1478

(2005) In subsection D, strike "articles 2 or 3 of chapter 8," and after "12," insert "CHAPTER 8, ARTICLE 2 OR 3". (Style consistency.) 36-1601 (2010)

In paragraph 1, strike "part" and insert "PARTS". (Style consistency.) 36-1621 In paragraph 1, after "specifications" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 36-1638

Strike "which is" and insert "THAT CONTAINS STANDARDS THAT ARE". (Clarification.) 36-1647

Strike "which is" and insert "THAT CONTAINS STANDARDS THAT ARE". (Clarification.)

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36-1681 In subsection C, the lead-in language does not match each of the following

paragraphs. In subsection D, paragraph 1, after "canals" strike the comma and insert

"OR". (Grammar.) In paragraphs 4, 5 and 6, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "JUNE 2, 1991". (Clarification.) Title 36, Chapter 13, Article 8 (36-1691) (2010) Should this article be amended or repealed because the program established by this article was scheduled to end on July 1, 2010? 36-1692 In subsection B, after "deposit" insert ", PURSUANT TO SECTIONS 35-146 and 35-147,". (Style consistency.) 36-1693 Strike subsection D. (Outdated.) In subsection E, first sentence, before the first "fund" insert "RISK ASSESSMENT". (Clarification.) 36-1702 (2010)

In subsection C, in the lead-in language, strike "federal" and insert "UNITED STATES". (Correct terminology.) 36-1902 (2007)

In subsection C, strike "Arizona". (Correct terminology.) 36-1903 (2004) In subsection B, after the first "the" insert "HEARING AND SPEECH PROFESSIONALS". (Clarification.) 36-1909 (2007)

In subsection D, in two places strike "telecommunications" and insert "TELECOMMUNICATION" (conformity), after "program" insert "THAT IS" (grammar), strike "by" and insert "PURSUANT TO" (style consistency) and after "36-1947" insert "AND" (grammar). 36-1940.04 (2006) In the section heading, change "pathologist" to "pathology". (Correct terminology.)

In subsection A, strike "pathologist" and insert "PATHOLOGY" (correct terminology) and in paragraph 4, strike "is" and after "not" insert "BE" (grammar). In subsection D, paragraph 3, strike "speech" and insert "SPEECH-LANGUAGE". (Correct terminology.)

In subsection F, paragraph 3, subdivision (b), strike "pathologist" and insert "PATHOLOGY". (Correct terminology.)

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36-1971 In subsection C, paragraph 5, last sentence, strike the last "parent" and insert "PARENT'S". (Grammar.) 36-1975 In paragraph 3, after "meet" insert "THE" and strike "as". (Grammar.) 36-1976 In subsection B, strike "its rules" and insert "TITLE 41, CHAPTER 6, ARTICLE 10". (Conformity.) In subsection C, strike "under this section" and insert "PURSUANT TO TITLE 41, CHAPTER 6, ARTICLE 10". (Conformity.) 36-2002

Repeal because the council expired on July 1, 1973 pursuant to this section. 36-2005

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "8-249" and insert "8-343" and in the last sentence, after "36-2219.01," insert "SUBSECTION B,". (Internal reference corrections.) 36-2006

In subsection A, strike "8-249" and insert "8-343". (Internal reference correction.) 36-2023 In subsection A, last sentence, strike "an approved" and insert "A". (Clarification.) 36-2153 (2009) In subsection E, second sentence, after "parent," insert "A". (Grammar.) 36-2173

In subsection B, paragraph 2, after "system" insert "ADMINISTRATION". (Proper name correction.) 36-2175 (2005) In subsection E, paragraph 3, strike "care". (Consistency.) In subsection G, second sentence, strike "agency" and insert "DEPARTMENT". (Consistency.) 36-2202 In subsection A, paragraph 6, first sentence, strike "caused" and insert "PROVIDED". (Clarification.) In subsection D, strike "make" and insert "MAKES". (Grammar.) 36-2203.01

In subsection A, paragraph 8, strike "specializing" and insert "WHO SPECIALIZES" and after "medicine" insert "AND". (Consistency.)

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36-2204.01 Strike "as defined in section 36-2201, paragraph 7". (That term is defined for the chapter.) 36-2204.02 In subsection C, second sentence, before "The" insert "EXCEPT AS PROVIDED IN SECTION 41-1092.08, SUBSECTION H,", after "The" insert "FINAL ADMINISTRATIVE", strike "further" and strike "title 41, chapter 6, article 10" and insert "TITLE 12, CHAPTER 7, ARTICLE 6". (Conformity.) 36-2208 (2004)

In subsection C, third sentence, strike "as defined in section 36-401". (Conformity.) 36-2232 In subsection F, paragraph 1, strike "by" and insert "IN". (Style consistency.) 36-2233

In subsection E, paragraph 3, strike "annexation" and insert "SUBSEQUENT ANNEXATIONS". (Clarification.) 36-2235

In subsection C, a hearing under section 36-2245 is not an appropriate proceeding to show cause. 36-2241

In subsection C, strike "provider's" and insert "AMBULANCE SERVICE'S". (Clarification.) 36-2245 (2006) In subsection M, first sentence, after "article" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 36-2264

In subsection C, strike "title 36," and insert "THIS" and strike "21.1,". (Style consistency.) 36-2301.01 (2004) In subsection A, paragraphs 1 and 3, second sentence, strike ", subsection C". (Internal reference correction.) 36-2301.02 In subsection B, last sentence, strike the first and third "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.)

(2004) In subsection E, paragraph 4, strike ", subsection C". (Internal reference correction.)

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36-2544 In subsections A and B, before "board" insert "STATE", after "board" insert "OF

PHARMACY" and after the first "department" insert "OF PUBLIC SAFETY". (Clarification.) 36-2901.01 In subsection A, first sentence, strike "heath" and insert "HEALTH" (spelling) and strike "health care financing administration" and insert "CENTERS FOR MEDICARE AND MEDICAID SERVICES" (conformity). In subsection B, strike "sufficent" and insert "SUFFICIENT". (Spelling.) In subsection C, first sentence, before "health" insert "ARIZONA" (consistency) and strike "adminstration" and insert "ADMINISTRATION" (spelling). 36-2901.02 (2010) In subsection B, paragraph 2, first sentence, strike "E" and insert "C". (Internal reference correction.) Note that 1998 Prop. 105 applies to this change. In subsection B, paragraph 2, last sentence, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "NOVEMBER 27, 2000". (Clarification.) 36-2901.04 In subsection C, first sentence, after "subsection" strike "A" and insert "B". (Internal reference correction.) In the second sentence, strike "beginning with" and insert "CONSISTING OF". (Clarification.) 36-2902.01

In subsection A, paragraph 3, after "director" insert "OF THE DEPARTMENT OF HEALTH SERVICES". In paragraph 4, after "director" insert "OF THE DEPARTMENT OF ECONOMIC SECURITY". (Clarification.)

In subsection B, strike "health care financing administration" and insert "CENTERS FOR MEDICARE AND MEDICAID SERVICES" (conformity) and strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS" (correct name).

In subsection D, should subsection A, paragraph 2 be cited? 36-2902.02

In subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (e), in the first and second sentences, should "medicaid" be "ARIZONA HEALTH CARE COST CONTAINMENT SYSTEM"? 36-2903.05 (2006) In subsection A, strike "in the premium sharing program,". (This program has been repealed.) 36-2905.07 (2005) Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2005?

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36-2907.05 (2003) In subsection A, remove the reference to section 36-2921. (That section was repealed and a new section 36-2921 was enacted, but its provisions do not apply to this section.)

In subsection F, paragraph 2, strike "illness" and insert "ILLNESSES". (Grammar.) 36-2907.06 (2003) In subsection A, remove the reference to section 36-2921. (That section was repealed and a new section 36-2921 was enacted, but its provisions do not apply to this section.) 36-2907.08 (2003) In subsections F and G, remove the references to section 36-2921. (That section was repealed and a new section 36-2921 was enacted, but its provisions do not apply to this section.) 36-2909 In subsection A, second sentence, should "prepaid capitated provider" be changed to "CONTRACTOR"? 36-2918 In subsection D, first sentence, should "provider" be changed to "CONTRACTOR"? 36-2922 (2003) In subsection A, remove the reference to section 36-2921. (That section was repealed and a new section 36-2921 was enacted, but its provisions do not apply to this section.) 36-2932 (2006) In subsection B, paragraph 16, strike "posteligibilty" and insert "POSTELIGIBILITY". (Spelling.) 36-2934 In subsection A, paragraphs 2 and 4, strike "aid to families with dependent children" and insert "TEMPORARY ASSISTANCE FOR NEEDY FAMILIES". (Conformity.) 36-2934.01 (2004) In subsection B, paragraph 4, subdivision (e), second sentence, after "parent" insert "OR GUARDIAN". (Consistency.)

(2007) In subsection E, after "principal" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 36-2942

In paragraphs 3 and 4, strike "subsection" and insert "SECTION". (Internal reference correction.) 36-2946

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "the first day of the first calendar quarter following the adjournment of the first regular session of the fortieth legislature" and insert "JULY 1, 1991". (Clarification.)

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36-2971 In paragraph 6, strike the first "and" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 36-2973 In subsection B, last sentence, strike "federal health care financing administration" and insert "CENTERS FOR MEDICARE AND MEDICAID SERVICES". (Conformity.) 36-2982 (2006) Strike subsection H. (This program has been repealed.) In subsection I, first sentence, strike "federal health care financing administration" and insert "CENTERS FOR MEDICARE AND MEDICAID SERVICES". (Conformity.) 36-2983 (2006) In subsection G, paragraph 2, strike the second sentence. (This program has been repealed.) 36-2999.01 (2006) In paragraph 3, after "3." insert ""COMPREHENSIVE CARE FOR THE ELDERLY CENTER" OR" (clarification), after "facility" insert "THAT IS" (grammar) and after "organization" insert "AND" (grammar). In paragraph 4, after "program"" insert "OR "PROGRAM"" and strike "members" and insert "PARTICIPANTS". (Clarification.) In paragraph 6, after "participant"" insert "OR "PARTICIPANTS"". (Clarification.) In paragraph 7, after "accreditation" strike "and" and insert a comma and after the fifth "and" insert "WHO". (Grammar.) In paragraph 9, after "9." insert ""COMPREHENSIVE CARE FOR THE ELDERLY ORGANIZATION" OR" (clarification), strike "and shall be" and insert ", THAT IS" (grammar) and after the third "and" insert "THAT" (grammar).

Alphabetize the revised definitions. 36-2999.03 (2006) In subsection A, paragraph 3, after "program" insert "TO". (Grammar.) In subsection C, second sentence, strike "who". (Grammar.) 36-2999.04 (2006) In subsection A, paragraph 4, strike "at a minimum of". (Redundant.) 36-2999.05 (2006) In subsection A, strike "medicaid". (Consistency.) In subsection B, strike "medicaid" (consistency) and strike the third comma and insert "OR" (grammar). 36-2999.06 (2006) In subsection A, strike "sections" and insert "SECTION". (Grammar.)

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36-3281 In subsection D, strike ", a person's inability" and insert "A PERSON IS

UNABLE". (Grammar.) 36-3282 In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "32-3281" and insert "36-3281". (Internal reference correction.) 36-3286

In the second sentence, strike the period and insert a colon. (Grammar.) In the mental health care power of attorney form, first paragraph, fourth sentence,

strike the second comma. (Grammar.) In the form in the last paragraph preceding the principal's signature after "36-3285"

insert ", ARIZONA REVISED STATUTES". (Style consistency.) 36-3410 (2011) In subsection A, first sentence, strike "their" and insert "ITS". (Grammar.) 36-3412

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "savings and loan" and insert "DEPOSIT". (Conformity.)

In subsection D, third sentence, strike the third comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 36-3413 In subsection D, in two places, after "system" insert "ADMINISTRATION" (clarification) and before the last "Arizona" insert "THE" (grammar). 36-3414 (2003) In subsection A, remove the reference to section 36-2921 (that section was repealed and a new section 36-2921 was enacted, but its provisions do not apply to this section), strike the fourth comma (grammar) and strike "4" and insert "6" (internal reference correction). 36-3504 (2004) In subsection A, first sentence, strike "36-342" and insert "36-341". (Internal reference correction.) 36-3703

In subsection E, strike "chapter" and insert "ARTICLE". (Internal reference correction.) 36-3704 In subsection E, before "committed" insert "CIVILLY". (Clarification.) 36-3707

In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike "and" and insert "WHERE THE PERSON". (Grammar.)

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36-3710 In subsection E, second sentence, after "plethysmograph" insert a comma.

(Grammar.) 36-3712

In subsection B, paragraph 6, after the first "responsible" insert "FOR". (Grammar.) 36-3713

In subsection B, first sentence and subsection C, second sentence, after the first "release" strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.)

In subsection C, second sentence, strike "chapter" and insert "ARTICLE". (Internal reference correction.) 36-3716

In subsection B, strike the first "of" and insert "ON". (Grammar.) 36-3717 In subsection A, paragraph 6 and in subsection D, first and third sentences, before "committed" insert "CIVILLY". (Clarification.) 36-3801 (2011)

In paragraph 5, second sentence, after "entities" insert "THAT ARE". (Grammar.) 36-3805 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike "rule" and insert "STANDARD". (Conformity.) 36-3807 (2011)

In the first sentence, strike "within three years after the effective date of this section" and insert "ON OR BEFORE JULY 20, 2014". (Clarification.) 37-221

In subsection D, strike "public school" and insert "TRUST". (Clarification.) 37-257

In subsection A, strike "have" and insert "HAS". (Grammar.) 37-281.04 In subsection B, third sentence, strike "post office" and insert "MAILING". (Clarification.) In subsection D, strike "subsection C of". (Internal reference correction.) 37-286.01

In subsection E, second sentence, strike the third "state". (Consistency.)

37-311 In paragraph 2, subdivision (b), strike "An existing" and insert "A". (Clarification.)

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37-312.01 In the first sentence, after the first "lands" insert "AS SUITABLE". (Clarification.)

37-321

In subsection A, first sentence, before "person" strike "other" and insert "ANOTHER". (Grammar.) 37-321.01

In subsection A, should "SURFACE" be added before the first "water"? In subsection F, strike the second "article". (Style consistency.)

37-322

In subsection C, second sentence, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "JUNE 23, 1961". (Clarification.) 37-482

In subsection B, fifth sentence, strike "their" and insert "THE DEPARTMENT'S". (Clarification.) 37-503 (2003) In subsection C, paragraph 3, subdivision (b), after "loss" insert "OF". (Grammar.) In subsection D, first sentence, after "any" insert "OTHER" (clarification) and in the last sentence, strike the last comma and insert "AND" (grammar). 37-620 (2007)

In subsection D, paragraph 3, third sentence, strike "Public Law" and insert "P.L." and in two places strike the slash marks and insert commas. (Citation correction.) 37-620.01 (2011) In the section heading, change "veterans administration" to "United States department of veterans affairs". In subsection A, strike "administrator of the veterans administration of the United States" and insert "UNITED STATES SECRETARY OF VETERANS AFFAIRS", strike "administrator's" and insert "SECRETARY'S" and strike "administrator" and insert "SECRETARY". (Correct name.) 37-622 (2004) In subsection A, paragraph 2, after the first "state" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 37-706 In subsection A, after "citizen," insert "WHO IS", strike the third comma and before the first "department" insert "UNITED STATES". (Clarification.) In subsection B, first sentence, in two places, before "applicant" insert "THE". (Grammar.)

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37-804 In subsection A, strike "subject" and insert "THE" (style consistency) and strike

"reflect the area" and insert "THE DATE" (clarification). 37-907

This section may be unconstitutional under article IX, section 2, Constitution of Arizona. 37-1002

In paragraph 14, strike "and" and insert "THAT ARE". (Grammar.) 37-1015 (2008) In subsection C, strike the reference to section 41-2252. (That section has been repealed.) 37-1036

In subsection C, third sentence, strike "the date of this section" and insert "JUNE 20, 1968". (Clarification.) 37-1052

In subsection A, insert a hyphen between "vice" and "chairman". (Spelling.) 37-1121 (2011)

In subsection C, second sentence, after "unexpended" insert "AND UNENCUMBERED". (Clarification.) 38-231 (2005) In the section heading, after "form;" add "violation;". (Style consistency.) 38-300 (2005) After the second "state" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 38-311

Strike the first comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 38-431.06 In subsection A, strike "their own" and insert "THE" and after "initiative" insert "OF EITHER". (Grammar.) 38-443

Strike "omits" and insert "FAILS". (Clarification.) Title 38, Chapter 3, Article 7 (38-491)

Change the article heading to "CIVIL SERVICE PREFERENCES". (The Laws 1975, chapter 146 amendments were not limited to veterans.)

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38-492 (2011) In subsection E, strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 38-502 (2007) In paragraph 7, strike "defined" and insert "PRESCRIBED" (clarification) and strike "chapter 4, article 3" and insert "CHAPTER 23" (internal reference correction). 38-532 (2011)

In subsection H, second sentence, before "city" insert "A". (Grammar.) 38-608

In the section heading, add "; definitions". (Style consistency.) In subsection A, after the first "week" insert "AND". (Grammar.) In subsection B, paragraph 2, after "city" strike the comma and insert "OR".

(Grammar.) 38-610 (2010)

In subsection A, after the second "state" strike the comma and insert "OR" and after the second "town" strike the comma. (Grammar.) 38-611

In subsection C, strike "school" and insert "SCHOOLS". (Correct terminology.) 38-614

This section may violate article IX, section 7, Constitution of Arizona.

38-621 In subsection B, strike "fulltime" and insert "FULL-TIME". (Spelling.)

38-652 In subsection A, second sentence, strike the last comma. (Grammar.) 38-738 (2003) In subsection B, paragraph 2, last sentence, strike "subsection" and insert "PARAGRAPH". (Internal reference correction.) In subsections C and D, in two places, strike "were" and insert "WAS". (Grammar.) 38-750 (2008) In subsection E, first sentence, strike the second comma. (Grammar.) 38-760 (2006) In subsection B, paragraph 1, subdivisions (c) and (d) and in paragraph 2, fifth and ninth sentences, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "JULY 1, 2008". (Clarification.)

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38-772 In subsection C, strike paragraph 1 and merge paragraph 2 into subsection C. (The

term "prior service" is not used in this section.) 38-791

In subsection D, first sentence, strike "employee" and insert "MEMBER". (Consistency.) 38-810.04 (2011)

In subsection D, second sentence, after "in" insert "SECTION". (Style consistency.) 38-843.05 (2011)

In subsection D, second sentence, after "in" insert "SECTION". (Style consistency.) 38-848 (2011) In subsection E and in subsection H, paragraph 7 in three places and in paragraph 10, strike "fund manager" and insert "BOARD". (Correct terminology.) 38-852.01 Strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "APRIL 30, 1973". (Clarification.) 38-874

In subsection A, strike "title 38, chapter 5," and after "2" insert "OF THIS CHAPTER". (Internal reference correction.) 39-101 In subsection C, after "officer" insert "WHO IS" and after "records" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 39-121.02 (2006) In subsection B, second sentence, strike "paragraph" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Internal reference correction.) 39-204

In subsection C, paragraph 2, second sentence, after "made" insert "IN THE COUNTY" and after "circulation" strike "in the county". (Clarification.) 40-113

In subsection B, paragraph 4, strike "minorities" and insert "MINORITY". (Grammar.) 40-202 (2005) In subsection C, paragraph 2, after the first "or" insert "THAT" and strike "their" and insert "ITS". (Grammar.)

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40-209 In the second sentence, strike the first and second "its" and insert "THEIR"

(grammar) and strike "as of the effective date of this section" and insert "ON AUGUST 21, 1998" (clarification). In the third sentence, strike "subsection" and insert "SECTION". (Internal reference correction.) 40-210 (2010)

In subsections A and B, after "title 32" insert ", CHAPTER 10". (Clarification.) 40-244

In subsection B, third sentence, strike "days" and insert "DAY'S". (Grammar.) 40-332 In subsection B, last sentence, strike the comma and insert parentheses around the United States Code citation. (Style consistency.) 40-335

In subsection A, paragraph 7, strike the first comma and insert "AND". In paragraph 9, strike the second comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 40-337

In subsection C, first sentence, strike "demands" and insert "DEMAND". (Grammar.) 40-344

In subsection H, after "court" strike "of" and insert "IN". (Conformity.) 40-360

In paragraph 2, after the second "certificate" insert "THAT IS", strike "which" and insert "AND THAT" and after "line" insert a comma. (Grammar.)

In paragraph 6, strike the comma and insert "OR" and after "line" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 40-360.02 In subsection C, paragraph 7, strike "The plans for any new facilities shall include". (Grammar.) 40-360.03

In the first sentence, strike the comma and insert "OR" and after "line" and "both" insert commas. (Grammar.) 40-360.06 (2011) In subsection D, second sentence, after "available," insert "THE". (Grammar.) 40-360.13

In the section heading, change "compatability" to "compatibility". (Spelling.)

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40-360.21 (2006) Alphabetize the definitions. (Style consistency.) 40-360.22 (2006) In subsection A, second sentence and subsection B, first and second sentences, strike "practical" and insert "PRACTICABLE". (Grammar.) In subsection F, paragraph 1, strike "is" and insert "CONSTITUTE". (Clarification.) 40-360.32 (2006) In subsection B, second sentence, strike the first "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) In subsection E, fourth sentence, strike the first "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 40-360.54 (2006) In paragraph 3, strike the second "facilities" and insert "FACILITY". (Correct terminology.) 40-423

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "does or permits to be done" and insert "PERFORMS OR ALLOWS" and strike "omits to do" and insert "FAILS". (Clarification.) 40-432

Strike the second "operator" and insert "COMPANY". (Clarification.) 40-441 (2005) In subsection A, last sentence, after "Code" strike the comma. (Grammar.) In subsection B, strike the first comma (grammar) and strike "that act" and insert "THOSE LAWS" (clarification). 40-443 (2003) In subsection C, after "from" insert "THE PROVISIONS OF". (Clarification.) 40-491

In paragraph 4, strike "action is" and insert "ACTIONS ARE". (Grammar.) In subdivision (f), strike "(f)" and insert "(e)". (Internal reference correction.) 40-809

In subsection A, paragraph 7, hyphenate "right of way". (Spelling.) In subsection C, first sentence, in two places hyphenate "right of way". (Spelling.)

40-812

Contains two subsections C. Reletter as appropriate. 40-843

In subsection B, first sentence, after "court" strike "of" and insert "IN". (Conformity.)

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40-847 In subsection C, paragraph 1, between "One" and "half" insert a hyphen and strike

"thereof". In paragraph 2, between "One" and "half" insert a hyphen and strike "thereof shall be". (Style consistency.) 40-1111

In the lead-in language, before "articles" insert "THIS ARTICLE AND", strike "2," and after "4" insert "OF THIS CHAPTER". (Internal reference correction.) 40-1113

In subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (c), after "counties" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 40-1124

In paragraph 7, second sentence, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "AUGUST 11, 1970". (Clarification.) 40-1131

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "principle" and insert "PRINCIPAL". (Spelling.) 40-1147

In the first sentence and twice in the second sentence, before "articles" insert "THIS ARTICLE AND", after "2" strike the comma and insert "AND" and strike "and 4". In the last part of the second sentence, before "article" insert "THIS" and strike "4 of this chapter". (Internal reference correction.) 40-1207 In subsection B, after "If" insert "A". (Grammar.) 41-111 (2011)

Subsection B is internally inconsistent. Members can serve either three years or at the pleasure of the governor, but not both. 41-132

In subsection D, paragraph 2, after "would" insert "JEOPARDIZE". (Grammar.) 41-163 (2011)

In subsection B, fourth sentence, strike "1 or 2" and insert "2 OR 3". (Internal reference correction.) 41-176 In subsection A, strike "640(d)" and insert "640d". (Citation correction.) In subsection C, after "tribe" insert "AND" (grammar), after "1996 (" insert "P.L. 104-301;" and strike "640(d)" and insert "640d" (citation correction).

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41-191 In subsection B, paragraph 2, in the lead-in language, strike "attorney" and insert

"ATTORNEYS". (Grammar.) Strike the last sentence of the subsection and add it as a new subsection F and after the first "client" insert "UNDER SUBSECTION B, PARAGRAPH 2 OF THIS SECTION". (Style consistency.) 41-192.03

Strike "law enforcement officer advisory council" and insert "PEACE OFFICER STANDARDS AND TRAINING BOARD". (Conformity.) 41-193

In subsection C, last sentence, after "court" strike "of" and insert "IN". (Conformity.) 41-194 In subsection A, first sentence, before "any" strike "to". (Grammar.) 41-196

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "so" and insert "FOR AS". (Grammar.) 41-197 (2010) Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2010? 41-311 (2011)

In paragraph 12, after "and" insert "THE". (Grammar.) 41-328

In subsection B, after "by" insert "BLOOD,". (Conformity.) 41-329

In subsection A, first sentence, after "attorney" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 41-361 In subsection A, fourth sentence, strike "record" and insert "RECORDS". (Grammar.) 41-366 In subsection B, after "by" insert "BLOOD,". (Conformity.) 41-367 In subsection A, second sentence, strike the first "in". (Grammar.) 41-370 (2005) In subsection A, third sentence, after the first "of" insert "THE". (Style consistency.)

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41-511.06 In subsection B, last sentence, the wording after "roads" is unclear and should be

reworded. 41-511.07

Strike "article 9, chapter 2," and after "37," insert "CHAPTER 2, ARTICLE 9,". Strike "subsection B of" and after "41-511.06" insert ", SUBSECTION B". (Style consistency.) 41-511.14

This section is no longer necessary. 41-511.16 (2006) In subsection A, paragraph 1, after "869-4)" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 41-511.18

In subsection A, paragraph 1, first sentence, strike "defined" and insert "DESCRIBED". (Clarification.)

(2010) Strike paragraph 3. (Outdated and that fund has been repealed.) In subsection C, first sentence, strike "operations" and insert "OPERATION".

(Grammar.) In the second sentence, strike "will" and insert "SHALL" (style consistency) and strike "donations" (conformity). 41-511.22

In subsections C and D, after "parks" insert "ENHANCEMENT". (Conformity.) 41-515

In subsection B, in two places, before "designated" insert "ESTABLISHED OR". (Clarification.) 41-532 (2010)

In subsection A, strike "plans" and insert "PROJECTS". (Clarification.) 41-533 (2010)

In subsection A, fourth sentence, strike "on" and insert "OF". (Clarification.) 41-534 (2010)

In subsection A, after "legislature," insert "THE". (Grammar.) 41-543 In the last sentence, strike the last "monies" and insert "APPROPRIATIONS". (Conformity.) 41-563 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (a), strike "department of economic security" and insert "OFFICE OF EMPLOYMENT AND POPULATION STATISTICS". (Conformity.)

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41-563.05 (2011) In subsections A and B, strike "department of economic security" and insert

"OFFICE OF EMPLOYMENT AND POPULATION STATISTICS". (Conformity.) 41-608 (2011)

In subsection A, at the beginning of the third sentence, insert "NOTWITHSTANDING SUBSECTION D OF THIS SECTION,". (Clarification.) 41-608.05 (2009)

In subsection C, paragraph 4, subdivision (a), strike "at some period during their life". (Unnecessary.) 41-609 (2011)

In subsection A, in two places strike "veterans" and insert "VETERAN". (Clarification.) 41-611 (2011)

In subsection B, strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) Title 41, Chapter 3, Article 9 (41-617.01)

Change the article heading to "ARIZONA DRUG AND GANG PREVENTION RESOURCE CENTER". (Section 41-617 was repealed by sunset provisions.) 41-619.51 (2011)

In paragraph 5, insert a subdivision referencing "SECTION 36-207" in the appropriate location and reletter the remaining subdivisions to conform. (Internal reference correction.) 41-621 (2006) In subsection I, after "inapplicable" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 41-622.01

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "C" and insert "D". (Internal reference correction.)

In subsection B, in two places and in subsection D, strike "funds" and insert "FUND". (Consistency.) 41-705 (2008) In subsection B, paragraph 1 and in subsection C, before the first "department" insert "ARIZONA". (Consistency.) 41-735

In subsection D, second sentence, strike "their" and insert "THE ATTORNEY GENERAL'S OR COUNTY ATTORNEY'S". (Grammar.)

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41-762 After "6" insert "OF THIS CHAPTER". (Internal reference correction.)

41-763.01

In subsection D, first sentence, before "blind" insert "THE". (Conformity.) 41-776

Strike "title 41," and after "23" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Style consistency.) 41-777 In subsection A, second sentence, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "JULY 18, 2000". (Clarification.) 41-844

In subsection D, strike the second "on" and insert "OF". (Conformity.) In subsection K, in two places, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert

"SEPTEMBER 27, 1990". (Clarification.) 41-865

In subsections A and B, strike "corporations" and insert "CORPORATION" (Grammar.)

In subsection C, strike "Within one year after the effective date of this section". (Outdated.)

In subsection I, strike the first comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) In subsection J, paragraph 4, after "Group with" insert "A". (Consistency.)

41-886 In subsection A, paragraph 5, strike "a city" and insert "CITIES". (Clarification.) 41-888 In subsection A, strike "department of" and insert "ARIZONA STATE". (Conformity.) 41-902 In subsection D, strike "chapter 1," and after "35" insert ", CHAPTER 1". (Style consistency.) 41-906 (2007) In subsection A, strike "United States commissioner general of immigration" and insert "ASSISTANT SECRETARY OF THE UNITED STATES IMMIGRATION AND CUSTOMS ENFORCEMENT AND THE DIRECTOR OF THE UNITED STATES CITIZENSHIP AND IMMIGRATION SERVICES". (Correct terminology.) 41-942 (2005) In subsection C, paragraph 3, subdivision (b), strike the last comma. (Grammar.) 41-1022

In subsection C, first sentence, strike "regular" and insert "FIRST CLASS" (clarification) and strike the second "to" (grammar).

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41-1026.01 In subsection C, paragraph 4, strike "and". (Style consistency.)

41-1061

In subsection D, strike "chapter 6 of" and after "title 23," insert "CHAPTER 6,". (Style consistency.) 41-1062

In subsection A, paragraph 1, fourth sentence, strike the first comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) In paragraph 4, second to last sentence, strike "courts of the state of Arizona" and insert "COURT". (Conformity.)

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "otherwise" (unnecessary) and after "of" strike "an" and insert "THAT" (clarification). In the second sentence, strike the first "rule" and insert "RULES". (Grammar.) 41-1082

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "cost" and insert "CHARGE". (Clarification.)

In subsection B, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "JANUARY 1, 1995". (Clarification.) 41-1092.07 (2004) In subsection G, paragraph 4, strike "title 41," and after "24" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Style consistency.) 41-1092.11

In subsection A, before "limited" insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 41-1092.12

In subsection C, third sentence, strike "title 41," and after "1" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Style consistency.) 41-1225

Strike "or sections 41-1282 or 41-1283,". (Those sections have been repealed.) 41-1231

In paragraph 10, after "state or" and after "bonding" insert commas and strike "lobbying for". (Clarification.)

In paragraph 11, first sentence, after "member" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 41-1251

The committee is not currently included in the sunset termination schedule. For consistency, the committee and its statutes should be included in the sunset termination schedule.

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41-1271 In subsection A, first sentence, strike the last comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.)

In the second sentence, after "their" insert "RESPECTIVE" and strike the first "committee" and insert "COMMITTEES". (Clarification.) 41-1275

In subsection B, fourth sentence, strike "program" and insert "PROGRAM'S". (Grammar.) 41-1276 (2006)

In subsection H, second sentence, strike "county" and insert "STATE" and strike "for education" and insert "PROPERTY TAX". (Conforming.) Note that 1998 Prop. 105 may apply to this change. 41-1281

In the section heading, change "Definitions" to "Definition of bribe". (Style consistency.)

Strike the colon and insert a comma and strike "1." (Style consistency.) 41-1292 (2009)

In subsection C, strike ", paragraphs 9 and 10". (Conformity.) Strike subsection D and reletter to conform. (Clarification.)

41-1293

In subsection A, third sentence, strike the comma and insert "OR" and after "speaker" and "both" insert commas. In the fourth sentence, in two places, strike "their" and insert "THE PRESIDENT'S OR SPEAKER'S". (Grammar.) 41-1304.01

In subsection A, paragraph 2, second sentence, after "successful" insert "INITIATIVE OR". (Clarification.) 41-1304.02

In subsection A, strike "2 and" and after "4" insert "AND 5". (Internal reference correction.) Title 41, Chapter 8, Article 4 (41-1361)

Because the legislative members of this commission serve only as advisors, this article should be removed from this chapter on legislative agencies and added as a new article in title 41, chapter 3. The sections should be renumbered as appropriate. The term "legislative" referring to the commission should be stricken from the article heading and in the sections.

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41-1373 In subsection A, paragraphs 1 and 2, second sentence, strike "One member" and

insert "MEMBERS", strike "each" and insert "DIFFERENT" and strike "party" and insert "PARTIES". (Clarification.)

In subsection B, third sentence, strike "made" and after "vote" strike "of" and insert "BY". (Clarification.) 41-1375

In subsection G, first sentence, strike "chapter" and insert "ARTICLE". (Internal reference correction.) 41-1376.01 (2007)

In subsection C, paragraph 4, subdivisions (i) and (j), strike "133a" and insert "133(a)". (Citation correction.) 41-1380

In subsection D, third sentence, strike "gathers" and insert "GATHER" and strike the last "and". (Grammar.) 41-1401

In subsection A, strike the outdated language relating to the first board. In subsection C, in two places between "vice" and "chairman" insert a hyphen.

(Spelling.) 41-1421 In subsection B, after "discriminated" insert "AGAINST". (Grammar.) 41-1464

(2007) In subsection B, after the first "is" insert "AN". (Grammar.) In subsection C, after the second "labor organization" strike "or relating to any

classification or referral for employment by a labor organization". (Redundant.) 41-1482

In subsection A, first sentence, insert "OF THIS CHAPTER" before the period. (Internal reference correction.) In the fifth sentence, strike the first "of" and insert "OR". (Clarification.) In the fourth and sixth sentences, after "court" strike "for" and insert "IN". (Conformity.) 41-1483

In subsection A, after "article 4" insert "OF THIS CHAPTER". (Internal reference correction.) 41-1491.04

In subsection B, clarify whether the definition requires all or just one of the criteria listed in the following paragraphs.

In subsection C, first sentence, after "faith" insert "ON A REPRESENTATION". (Clarification.)

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41-1491.31 In subsection A, strike "last" and insert "LATER". (Grammar.)

41-1491.33

In paragraph 4, strike "ordering" and insert "AN ORDER OF". (Clarification.) 41-1491.34

In subsection C, strike "ordering" and insert "AN ORDER OF". (Clarification.) 41-1492.03

In subsection A, first sentence and in subsection B, first sentence, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "SEPTEMBER 30, 1992". (Clarification.) 41-1492.06

In subsection A, strike "Not more than one year after the effective date of this article". (Outdated.) 41-1492.10

In subsection A, after "charge" strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 41-1493.02

In subsections A and B, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "AUGUST 6, 1999". (Clarification.) 41-1502 (2011)

In subsection D, second sentence, after "chairperson," insert "THE". (Grammar.) In subsection I, paragraph 1, after the first "applicant's," insert "THE". (Grammar.) 41-1504 (2011)

In subsection J, strike "telecommunications" and insert "TELECOMMUNICATION". (Correct terminology.)

In subsection L, paragraph 2, after "applicant's," insert "THE". (Grammar.) 41-1505 (2011)

In subsection E, paragraph 5, after "5." insert "WHETHER". (Grammar.) 41-1517.01 (2007)

In subsection E, paragraph 1, strike the first "company" and insert "APPLICATION" and strike the second "company" and insert "APPLICANT". (Conformity.) In subdivision (b), strike "company" and insert "APPLICATION". (Conformity.) In paragraph 2, strike the first "company" and insert "APPLICATION" and strike the second "company" and insert "APPLICANT". (Conformity.) In subdivision (b), strike "company" and insert "APPLICATION". (Conformity.)

In subsection L, paragraph 2, strike "as defined" and insert "PRESCRIBED". (Clarification.)

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41-1552.03 (2011) In subsection A, paragraph 6, after "procedures to" insert "ESTABLISH". (Clarification.) 41-1604.04

In the section heading, change "service" to "services". In the first sentence, strike "service" and insert "SERVICES". (Consistency.)

41-1609.02 (2008) Strike subsection G. (Section 41-1610.04 has been repealed.) 41-1621

In paragraph 3, before "Director" insert a quotation mark. (Grammar.) 41-1682

In the section heading, add "; security officer qualifications". (Consistency.) In subsection B, paragraph 2, after "administration" insert a comma and strike

"listing" and insert "THAT LISTS". In paragraph 4, strike "paragraphs" and insert "PARAGRAPH". (Grammar.)

In subsection E, after the second, third and fourth "director" insert "OF THE DEPARTMENT OF ADMINISTRATION" and in the first sentence, after "prison" insert "NAMED". (Clarification.) (2005) In subsection E, last sentence, strike "prisons" and insert "PRISON". (Consistency.) 41-1684

Strike "incarceration" and insert "CUSTODY". (Conformity.) 41-1719

In subsection B, paragraph 3, after "committee" insert "ESTABLISHED BY SECTION 13-3826". (Clarification.) 41-1724 (2011)

In subsection E, in two places strike "fund" and insert "SUBACCOUNT". (Correct terminology.) 41-1743

In the second sentence, strike "vehicle superintendent" and insert "ASSISTANT DIRECTOR FOR THE MOTOR VEHICLE DIVISION". (Correct title.) 41-1743.01

In subsection B, after "object" insert "TO". (Grammar.)

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41-1749 In subsection B, strike "tele-communications" and insert

"TELECOMMUNICATIONS". (Spelling.) 41-1758 (2011)

In paragraph 4, insert a subdivision referencing "SECTION 17-215" in the appropriate location and reletter the remaining subdivisions to conform. (Internal reference correction.) 41-1801 (2007)

In paragraph 2, strike the first "and" and insert a comma. (Grammar.) 41-1803 (2008) In subsection D, between "government" and "owned" insert a hyphen (spelling) and strike "their" and insert "ITS" (grammar). 41-1805 (2007)

Strike "who" and insert "THAT" (grammar) and strike "as defined in section 41-1801" (unnecessary). 41-1822 (2011)

In subsection C, strike paragraph 2 and renumber the remaining paragraph. (Duplicates subsection D, paragraph 1.) 41-1830.31

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "All" and insert "A" and strike "prisons" and insert "PRISON". (Clarification.)

In subsection D, is the reference to "director" the director of the department of administration?

(2005) In subsection F, strike "state". (Correct terminology.) 41-1831

In paragraph 1, strike "especially" and insert "SPECIALLY". (Style consistency.) In paragraph 3, strike "as defined in this article". (Unnecessary.)

41-1837 In subsection A, remove the reference to "11-297.02". (That section has been repealed.) 41-1843

This section should be repealed. (It is outdated.) 41-1904

In subsection B, paragraph 2, second sentence, strike the second "of". (Grammar.)

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41-1954 (2011) In subsection B, in two places in the lead-in language, after "department" insert "OF ECONOMIC SECURITY" (clarification) and strike "veterans administration" and insert "UNITED STATES DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS" (correct name). In paragraph 2, after "department" insert "OF ECONOMIC SECURITY" (clarification). In paragraph 4, strike "department's" and insert "DEPARTMENT OF ECONOMIC SECURITY'S". (Clarification.) 41-1991

In the section heading, remove "; procedures". (Unnecessary.) 41-2097 (2011)

In subsection A, first sentence, after "evidence of" insert "A", strike "checks" and insert "CHECK" and strike "drivers" and insert "DRIVER". (Grammar.) 41-2122 (2005) In subsection A, second sentence, strike "From and after September 30, 1999 through March 31, 2000 and" and "thereafter". (Outdated language.) In subsection E, strike "Beginning on January 1, 2005,". (Outdated language.) 41-2131

In paragraph 6, strike "eight" and insert "EIGHTY". (Correct number.) 41-2146 (2010)

In subsection A, paragraph 8, strike "liquid" and insert "LIQUEFIED". (Correct terminology.) 41-2162 (2010)

In subsection A, paragraph 3, after "paragraph 2" insert "AND". (Grammar.) In subsection E, first sentence, strike "who" and insert "THAT". (Grammar.) In subsection F, strike the second "marshal" and insert "MARSHALS".

(Clarification.) 41-2167

In subsection D, paragraph 1, second sentence, after "detection" insert "REWARD". (Conformity.) 41-2188 In subsection C, strike "can" and insert "MAY". (Style consistency.) 41-2192 Strike "41-2188,". (Internal reference correction.)

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41-2252 (2011) In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "director's" and insert "CHIEF EXECUTIVE

OFFICER'S". (Consistency.) In subsection C, strike "under this chapter" and "for their services under this chapter".

(Clarification.) In subsection G, first sentence, before the last "authority" insert "GREATER

ARIZONA DEVELOPMENT". (Clarification.) 41-2254 (2011)

In subsection E, paragraph 3, strike "E" and insert "G". (Internal reference correction.) 41-2263 (2011)

In subsection B, strike "title 41," and after "10.1" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Style consistency.) 41-2304

In subsection B, paragraph 4, add La Paz county. (La Paz county is not currently included in any area.) 41-2306 (2010)

In subsection A, paragraph 2, last sentence, strike "subsection" and insert "PARAGRAPH". (Internal reference correction.) 41-2417

In subsection F, strike "as". (Style consistency.) 41-2451 (2003) In paragraph 3, subdivision (a), after "act" insert "OF 2000" and strike "6000" and insert "15001". (Citation correction.) 41-2454 (2009) In paragraph 2, after "sector" strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 41-2504

Strike "displaced" and insert a more legally descriptive term such as "superseded". 41-2553

In subsection D, paragraph 8, after "transportation" strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 41-2562

At the beginning of the section heading add "Procurement". (Clarification.) 41-2578 (2010)

In subsection C, paragraph 2, subdivision (b), second sentence, after the comma insert "THE REQUEST FOR QUALIFICATIONS SHALL". (Grammar.)

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41-2586 In subsection B, strike the second "who" and insert "THAT". (Grammar.)

41-2612

In the lead-in language, strike ", as a minimum," and after "address" insert "AT LEAST". (Grammar.) 41-2631 (2010)

In paragraph 3, strike "for disabled individuals" and insert "THAT SERVE INDIVIDUALS WITH DISABILITIES". (Defined term.) 41-2636 (2010)

In subsection G, paragraph 2, strike the second "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 41-2804.01

The paragraphs should be reorganized as subsections. The paragraphs and subdivisions should be sentences in the subsections. The colons should be replaced by periods. (Style consistency.)

In subsection B, strike "so" and insert "AS". (Grammar.) 41-2813

In subsection C: Paragraph 1, strike "will" and insert "SHALL". (Style consistency.) (2009) Paragraph 2, in two places strike "section" and insert "DIVISION". (Correct

terminology.) 41-2820 (2011)

In subsection F, paragraph 3, strike "must sign" and insert "SIGNS". (Clarification.) 41-2827 (2007)

In subsection C, after the first "manufactured" insert ", PROVIDED". (Clarification.) 41-3007.02

In subsection B, strike the first comma. (Grammar.) 41-3012.09 (2006) In the section heading, change "Allopathic" to "Arizona medical" and remove "of medical examiners". (Conformity.) In subsection A, strike "allopathic" and insert "ARIZONA MEDICAL" and strike "of medical examiners". (Conformity.) 41-3012.11 (2007)

In subsection B, strike "chapter" and insert "CHAPTERS" and strike "is" and insert "AND 17 ARE". (Conformity.)

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41-3014.07 (2004) In subsection B, strike ", article 1". (Internal reference correction.) 41-3014.10 (2004) In the section heading and subsection A, strike "state banking" and after "department" insert "OF FINANCIAL INSTITUTIONS". (Conformity.) 41-3016.23 (2006) In subsection A, after "The" insert "ARIZONA". (Correct terminology.) 41-3017.07 (2007)

In subsection B, strike "Title 41, chapter 17 and". (Conformity.) 41-3201

The definitions contained in subsection H should be placed in a separate section and apply to the article. 41-3505 (2011)

In subsection B, first sentence, strike the second comma. (Grammar.) 41-3542 (2011)

In subsection C, second sentence, after "director" insert "OF THE DEPARTMENT OF ADMINISTRATION". (Clarification.) Title 41, Chapter 33 (41-3701) (2003) Repeal the chapter heading and the article 1 heading. (Sections 41-3701 and 41-3702 were repealed September 2, 2003.) 41-3802 In subsection C, after the second "panel" insert ", TEAM". (Consistency.) 41-3804 In subsection A, fourth sentence, strike "guideline does" and insert "GUIDELINES DO". (Grammar.) In subsection I, fourth sentence, before "'Personally" insert "FOR THE PURPOSES OF THIS SUBSECTION," (style consistency) and strike the second "or" and insert a comma (grammar). 41-3906 In subsection F, paragraphs 10 and 11, strike "A provision for". (Grammar.) 41-3953 (2010) In subsection B, paragraph 5, strike "and chapter 4.3 of this title". (That article has been repealed.)

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41-3956 (2003) In subsection A, second sentence, strike "1" and insert "2". (Internal reference correction.) 41-4503 (2009) In subsection G, strike "title 41," and after "chapter 23" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Style consistency.) 42-1002

In subsection B, strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 42-1008

In the first sentence, before "state" insert "THE". (Grammar.) In the last sentence, strike "discharge" and insert "DISMISSAL". (Clarification.) 42-1117

In subsection B, first sentence, after "director" insert "OF THE DEPARTMENT OF ADMINISTRATION". (Clarification.) 42-1127 (2006) In subsection F, after "with" strike "the", strike "act of 1978" and insert "LAWS" and strike "P.L. 95-575; 92 Stat. 2463;". (Clarification.) 42-1204

In subsection D, paragraph 2, after the first "received" insert "BY THE INDIVIDUAL". (Clarification.) 42-2001 (2009)

In paragraph 2, subdivision (a), item (ix), strike "H" and insert "I". (Internal reference correction.) 42-2056 (2011)

In subsection G, second sentence, strike " industrial" and insert "INDUSTRY" and strike the second "code". (Clarification.) 42-2072

In subsection B, first sentence, before "otherwise" insert a comma and strike "possibly" and insert "POSSIBLE,". (Grammar.) 42-2077 (2006) In subsection D, second sentence, strike "defined by" and insert "DESCRIBED IN" (clarification) and strike "28(2)(4)" and insert "28(a)(4)" (internal reference correction).

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42-2101 (2008) In subsection E, first sentence, after "applicable" insert a comma. (Grammar.) In subsection K, first sentence, after "information" insert "RULING". (Clarification.) In subsection M, paragraph 2, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "SEPTEMBER 26, 2008". (Clarification.) 42-2252

In subsection B, paragraph 4, after "4." insert "A". (Grammar.) 42-2301 (2005) In paragraph 2, strike "chapters" and insert "CHAPTER". (Grammar.) 42-2303 (2005) In subsection A, after "taxpayer's" insert "AUTHORIZED". (Correct terminology.) 42-3003

In subsection B, strike the first comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 42-3009

After "substance" insert "THAT IS". (Grammar.) 42-3201 (2006) In subsection F, strike "apply" and insert "APPLIES". (Grammar.) 42-3202.02 (2011) In subsection A, paragraphs 2 and 6, strike "veterans' administration" and insert "DEPARTMENT OF VETERANS AFFAIRS". (Correct name.) 42-3226 (2004) In subsection A, after the second comma insert "THE PERSON'S". (Grammar.) 42-3228 (2004) In subsection B, last sentence, strike "commits" and insert "IS GUILTY OF". (Correct terminology.) 42-3307

After "city" strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 42-3354 (2005) In subsection D, paragraph 2, strike "spirituous" and insert "VINOUS". (Correct terminology.) 42-3355 (2006) In subsection B, strike "liquor or". (Redundant.)

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42-5032 (2004) In subsection D, strike "amount" and insert "AMOUNTS". (Conformity.) 42-5033.01 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "director of the department of economic security" and insert "OFFICE OF EMPLOYMENT AND POPULATION STATISTICS". (Conformity.)

In subsection A, paragraph 2 and in subsection B, paragraphs 1 and 2, strike "department of economic security" and insert "OFFICE OF EMPLOYMENT AND POPULATION STATISTICS". (Conformity.) 42-5034.01 In subsection C, first sentence, strike "A" and insert "B". (Internal reference correction.) In subsection D, first and second sentences, strike "consumer" and insert "CUSTOMER". (Consistency.) 42-5075 (2005)

In subsection B, paragraph 8 and subsection B, paragraph 8, subdivision (a), remove the references to section 9-499.08. (That section was repealed and a new section 9-499.08 was enacted, but its provisions do not apply to this section.)

42-5155 (2006) In subsection A, second sentence, after the first "the" insert "RATE IS A" and strike the second "is" and insert "OF". (Clarification.) 42-5167 In subsection E, strike the first "certificate" and insert "PERMIT". (Consistency.) 42-5201 (2006) In paragraph 9, second sentence, strike the quotation marks. (Style consistency.) 42-5251

In paragraph 4, strike "offering" and insert "THAT OFFERS" and strike ", which" and insert "AND THAT". (Grammar.) 42-6006 Strike the first "tax". (Grammar.) 42-6009 (2005) In subsection C, in the lead-in language, strike "states". (Grammar.) 42-6010 (2011) In subsection D, paragraph 1, strike "affect" and insert "EFFECT". (Grammar.)

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42-6051 (2011) In paragraph 2, after "document" insert "THAT IS". (Grammar.)

42-6108.01 In subsection A, first sentence, after "persons" insert a comma. (Grammar.) In paragraph 1, strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 42-6109.01 In subsection B, paragraph 2, after "under" insert "THIS" and strike "42-6109.01". (Style consistency.) 42-6206 (2010)

In subsection C, third sentence, strike "subdivision" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Internal reference correction.) 42-11101 In paragraph 2, strike "themselves" and insert "THAT PERSON". (Grammar.) 42-11105 (2006) In subsection D, first sentence, strike the comma. (Grammar.) 42-11107 (2004) After the second "property" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 42-11130 (2004) Strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 42-11131 (2005) In subsection A, paragraph 4, after "act" insert "OF 1996". (Citation correction.) 42-11133 (2006) In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike "applies" and insert "APPLY". (Grammar.) 42-12001 (2009) In paragraph 10, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 42-12004 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 1, subdivision (b), second sentence, strike "paragraph" and insert "SUBDIVISION". (Internal reference correction.) 42-12052 (2011)

In subdivision B, third sentence, before "right" strike "the". (Grammar.)

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42-12056 (2008) In subsection A, after "properties" insert "THAT ARE" (grammar), in two places, strike "defined" and insert "PRESCRIBED" (clarification) and strike the last comma (grammar). In subsection B, after the first "distribution" insert "SYSTEMS" (clarification) and strike "is" and insert "ARE" (grammar). 42-13007 (2007) In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike "valuation and equalization" and insert "TAX". (Correct terminology.) 42-13355

In paragraph 2, strike the fourth comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 42-13402 (2004) In subsection D, after "section" insert a comma and strike "receives" and insert "RECEIVE". (Grammar.) 42-13403

In subsection B, second sentence, strike the second "assessment" and insert "VALUATION". (Consistency.) 42-14156 (2007)

In subsection B, paragraph 1, in two places strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 42-14157 (2003) In subsection B, after "or" insert "THE". (Consistency.) In subsection D, after "owner" insert "OR THE COMBINED GROUP". (Consistency.) 42-15066

In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike the fourth comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 42-16051 (2003) In subsection D, first sentence, strike the last comma. (Grammar.) 42-16108 In subsection C, strike the second "on" and insert "IN". (Grammar.) 42-16210 In subsection B, in the lead-in language, strike "occur" and insert "OCCURS". (Grammar.) 42-17051 (2006) In subsection B, first sentence, strike "42-15054" and insert "42-15053, SUBSECTION F, PARAGRAPH 2". (Internal reference correction.)

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42-17058 In paragraph 2, after "out" insert "OF". (Grammar.)

42-18101 (2006) In subsection A, strike the first comma and insert "AND" and strike "and 6". (Article 6 has been repealed.) 42-18102

In subsection A, after "properties," insert "THE". (Grammar.) 42-18302 (2007)

In subsection B, strike "prints" and insert "PUBLISHES". (Clarification.) 43-207

In subsection A, third sentence, strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 43-310

In subsection F, paragraph 1, strike "and regulations". (Consistency.) 43-311

In subsection F, paragraph 1, strike "and regulations". (Consistency.) 43-327 (2007) In subsection E, first sentence, after "agreement," insert "A". (Grammar.) 43-407

In subsection A, first sentence, strike the last comma. (Grammar.) 43-416

After "intent to appropriate," insert "ALL OR PART OF THE TAX" and strike "or any portion". (Clarification.) 43-432

In subsection B, second sentence, after the first "department" insert "OF REVENUE". (Clarification.) 43-567

In subsection A, first sentence, after "grantor of" strike "the" and insert "A" and strike "constitute" and insert "CONSTITUTES". (Grammar.) 43-568

Strike ", the following shall apply" and insert "AND" and strike the first period and insert a comma. (Grammar.)

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43-613 In subsection B, first sentence, after the first "department" insert "OF REVENUE". In the second sentence, after the first "department" insert "OF REVENUE" and strike "who" and insert ", WHICH". The entire second sentence could probably be stricken. In the third sentence, after the second "department" insert "OF REVENUE". In the fourth sentence, after "department" insert "OF REVENUE". (Clarification and grammar.) 43-614 In the section heading, remove "Arizona". (Consistency.) In subsection B, second sentence, after the first "department" insert "OF REVENUE". (Clarification.) 43-615 In subsection B, first sentence, before "commission" insert "ARIZONA GAME AND FISH". (Clarification.) In the second sentence, strike "who" and insert ", WHICH". (Grammar.) The entire second sentence could probably be stricken. 43-616 In subsection B, first and second sentences, after the first "department" insert "OF REVENUE" (clarification) and in the second sentence strike "WHO" and insert ", WHICH" (grammar). The entire second sentence could probably be stricken. 43-617 In subsection B, first and second sentences, strike "who" and insert ", WHICH". (Grammar.) The entire second sentence could probably be stricken. 43-618 In subsection A, strike "as amended by Laws 1997, chapter 210". (Conformity.) In subsection B, first sentence, after the first "department" insert "OF REVENUE". (Clarification.) In the second sentence, after the first "department" insert "OF REVENUE" (clarification) and strike "who" and insert ", WHICH" (grammar). The entire second sentence could probably be stricken. 43-645

In subsection B, after the first "grantor" strike "or" and insert "OF". (Clarification.) 43-1031 (2011)

In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike "department of commerce" and insert "GOVERNOR'S ENERGY OFFICE". (Conformity.) 43-1071 (2008) In subsection F, paragraph 3, first sentence, strike the second "under" and insert "BY". (Clarification.) In the second sentence, after "which" insert "THE" (grammar) and strike the first "under" and insert "BY" (clarification).

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43-1073 (2005) In subsection B, after "43-1043 and" insert "SECTION". (Style consistency.) 43-1074.01 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 1, subdivision (c), last sentence, after "regard" insert "TO". (Grammar.)

In subsection C, paragraph 1, strike "department of commerce" and insert "ARIZONA COMMERCE AUTHORITY" and strike "department of commerce's" and insert "ARIZONA COMMERCE AUTHORITY'S". (Conformity.) 43-1089.02 (2007)

In subsection B, paragraph 3, strike "and" and insert "OR" (style consistency) and strike "V" and insert "U" (internal reference correction). 43-1090

In subsection A, paragraph 1, subdivision (b), after "dwelling" insert "UNIT". (Consistency.)

In subsection F, strike "to reach" and insert "IN COMPUTING". (Clarification.) 43-1092

In subsection B, strike "of" and insert "IN". (Clarification.) 43-1123 (2006) In subsection A, paragraph 1, subsection B and subsection C, strike "deduction" and insert "SUBTRACTION". (Correct terminology.) 43-1168 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 1, subdivision (d), after the last period insert "FOR THE PURPOSES OF THIS SUBDIVISION, "BASIC RESEARCH PAYMENTS" HAS THE SAME MEANING PRESCRIBED BY SECTION 41(e) OF THE INTERNAL REVENUE CODE." (Clarification.)

In subsection D, paragraph 1, strike "department of commerce" and insert "ARIZONA COMMERCE AUTHORITY" and strike "department of commerce's" and insert "ARIZONA COMMERCE AUTHORITY'S". (Conformity.) 43-1176

In subsection A, paragraph 1, subdivision (b), after "dwelling" insert "UNIT". (Consistency.)

In subsection F, strike "to reach" and insert "IN COMPUTING". (Clarification.) 43-1182 (2005) In subsection A, first sentence, after "sources" insert "AND" and strike "end" and insert "ENDS". (Grammar.) In subsection G, fifth sentence, after "received" insert "IN THAT CALENDAR YEAR". (Clarification.)

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43-1211 (2011) After "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 43-1212 (2011) After "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 43-1214 (2011) In paragraphs 1, 2 and 3, after "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference corrections.) 43-1215 (2011) In the lead-in language and in paragraph 3, after "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference corrections.) 43-1216 (2011) After "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 43-1217 (2011) After "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 43-1231 (2011) In two places, after "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference corrections.) 43-1242 (2011) In subsection A, paragraphs 1, 2, 3, 4 and 5, after "43-1201," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference corrections.) 43-1505 (2010) In subsection A, strike "28-224.07" and insert "20-224.07". (Internal reference correction.) 44-101

In paragraph 6, last sentence, strike the last comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 44-132

In subsection B, first sentence, in two places, strike "and" and insert "OR". (Clarification.)

In subsection C, strike the first "a", insert quotation marks around "homeless minor", strike "is" and insert "MEANS", after "individual" insert "WHO IS" and after "years" insert ", WHO IS". (Style consistency and grammar.) 44-133.01 (2007)

After "age" insert "AND". (Grammar.)

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44-145 In subsection C, alphabetize the definitions and in the section heading add

"; definitions". (Style consistency.) 44-289 In subsection A, paragraph 2, after "attorney" insert "WHO IS". (Grammar.) In subsection B, first sentence, strike "be" and insert "IS" (grammar) and strike "therein" and insert "IN THAT ARTICLE" (clarification). In subsection D, last sentence, strike "subsection B of", after "44-286," insert "SUBSECTION B," and strike the comma after "signed". (Style consistency and grammar.) 44-316 In subsection A, paragraph 5, strike the first "the other" and insert "ANOTHER". (Grammar.) 44-329 In subsections A and B, in four places strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "JANUARY 1, 2001". (Clarification.) 44-332 (2010) Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2010? 44-333 In subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (a), strike "title" and insert "CHAPTER". (Internal reference correction.) 44-335 In subsection A, in the lead-in language, strike "title" and insert "CHAPTER". (Internal reference correction.) 44-336 (2011)

In subsection C, paragraph 2, second sentence, strike "will constitute" and insert "CONSTITUTES". (Style consistency.)

In subsection M, paragraph 1, after the first "department" insert "THAT IS" (grammar) and strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "JULY 20, 2011 AND" (clarification and grammar). 44-337 In subsection C, after "final" insert "ADMINISTRATIVE" and strike "or order" and insert "AS DEFINED IN SECTION 41-1092". (Consistency.) 44-338 In subsection A, first sentence, strike "pursuant to" and insert "AS DEFINED IN" and strike ", paragraph 3". (Consistency) In subsection C, strike "question" and insert "APPEAL". (Consistency.)

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44-339 In the first sentence, strike "taxpayer" and insert "CLAIMANT". (Clarification.) 44-351

In paragraph 5, after "trust" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 44-1006

In paragraph 1, subdivision (b), after "garnishment" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 44-1008

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "1" and insert "2". (Internal reference correction.) 44-1222

In subsection B, before the colon insert "ANY". In paragraphs 1 and 2, strike ", or" and insert a period. (Style consistency.) In paragraph 3, after "application for" insert "ANY". (Grammar.) 44-1231.05

In the lead-in paragraph, strike the second "section". (Style consistency.) 44-1244

Strike "chapter" and insert "ARTICLE". (Internal reference correction.) 44-1278 In subsections A and B, strike "their" and after "behalf" insert "OF EITHER A SELLER OR SOLICITOR". (Grammar.) In subsection B, paragraph 6, strike the comma. (Style consistency.) 44-1303 (2011)

In subsection B, in two places, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "JULY 20, 2011". (Clarification.) 44-1304

In subsection D, paragraph 4, after "cover" insert "MATERIAL". (Clarification.) 44-1304.01 (2011)

In subsection A, paragraph 8, in two places, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "JULY 20, 2011". (Clarification.) 44-1351

In paragraph 11, subdivision (a), strike "from". (Clarification.) In paragraph 12, after the first "to" insert "MAKE A". (Consistency.)

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44-1352 In subsection A, first sentence, after "sells" strike "an" and insert "A NEW".

(Clarification.) In subsection C, strike "dealers" and insert "DEALER". (Grammar.) In subsection D, paragraph 1, strike the first "and" and insert a comma (grammar) and

strike "lessor" and insert "DEALER" (clarification). In subsection E, paragraph 1, strike "dealer" and insert "LESSOR". (Clarification.)

44-1355

In subsections B and C, should "section" be "ARTICLE"? 44-1366 In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike "shall" and strike "identify" and insert "IDENTIFIES". (Grammar.) 44-1372.01 (2003) In subsection A, in the lead-in language, strike "apply" and insert "APPLIES". (Grammar.) 44-1372.03 (2003) Strike "section" and insert "ARTICLE". (Internal reference correction.) 44-1372.04 (2003) In subsection A, in the lead-in language, strike "messages" and in paragraph 4, strike "message". (Consistency.) In subsection B, in the lead-in language, strike "apply" and insert "APPLIES". (Grammar.) 44-1373 (2006) In subsection G, strike "after the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "BEGINNING JANUARY 1, 2007". (Clarification.) 44-1374 (2004) In subsection I, paragraph 1, subdivision (a), after "person" insert "OR ENTITY" and in subdivision (c), after each "person" insert "OR ENTITY". (Consistency.) 44-1376 (2007)

In paragraph 3, after "Arizona," insert "AND". (Grammar.) 44-1376.01 (2007)

In subsection A, paragraphs 1, 2 and 3, before "communication" insert "A". (Grammar.) 44-1378 (2010)

In paragraph 6, after the second "foreclosure" insert "IS RECORDED" and after "or" insert "AT THE TIME OF". (Clarification.)

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44-1379 (2011) In subsection A, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "JULY 20,

2011". (Clarification.) 44-1381 (2011)

In the second sentence, strike "regardless if" and insert "WHETHER". (Grammar.) 44-1401

Strike the colon and insert a comma. (Style consistency.) 44-1406

In subsection E, paragraph 3, strike "person's" and after "attorney" insert "OF THE PERSON". (Clarification.)

In subsection F, strike "another" and insert "THE". (Grammar.) 44-1448.01

In subsection A, first sentence, after "is" should "DISTINCTIVE AND" be inserted and should "or trade name" be stricken?

In subsection C, paragraph 3, should "USE OF A MARK IN" be inserted at the beginning? 44-1527

In subsection A, strike "sections" and insert "SECTION". (Grammar.) 44-1551

In paragraph 3, strike the last comma. (Grammar.) In paragraph 11, after "not" insert "BE". (Grammar.)

44-1554 In paragraph 2, strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 44-1557

In paragraph 1, strike ", provided that" and insert a period. (Style consistency.) In paragraph 2, first sentence, strike ", provided that where" and insert ". IF" and

strike ", and further provided that" and insert a period. (Style consistency.) 44-1572 (2009)

Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2009? 44-1573 (2009)

Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2009?

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44-1574 In subsection F, last sentence, strike "chapter 10," and strike "title" and insert

"CHAPTER". (Style consistency.) (2009) Should this section be amended or repealed because the program established

by this section was scheduled to end on July 1, 2009? 44-1604

Strike "act" and insert "ARTICLE". (Internal reference correction.) 44-1642 (2007)

In subsection A, paragraph 4, after "birth" strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.)

In subsection G, strike "old" and insert "OF AGE". (Style consistency.) 44-1691 Transpose paragraphs 2 and 3. (They are not in alphabetical order.) 44-1693

In subsection D, second sentence, after "licensure" strike the comma and insert "OR", strike "or received" and insert ", RECEIVES" and strike the second "received" and insert "RECEIVES". (Grammar.) 44-1694

In subsection C, strike "previously". (Clarification.) 44-1709

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "consitutes" and insert "CONSTITUTES". (Spelling.) 44-1710

In subsection A, strike the third comma and insert "OR" and strike the last comma. (Grammar.) 44-1771

In paragraph 4, subdivision (e), after the second "of" insert "MATERIALS PRESCRIBED IN". (Clarification.) 44-1793 (2009)

In subsection D, in the "Notice to customer", strike the quotation marks before "Notice" and after "hours." and strike the single quotation marks around "Operating day" and insert double quotation marks. (Grammar.) 44-1797

In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike the third "organization". (Clarification.)

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44-1797.03 In subsection A, paragraph 2, after "whichever" insert "IS". (Grammar.) In subsection B, strike "the foregoing paragraphs" and insert "SUBSECTION A OF

THIS SECTION". (Style consistency.) 44-1797.04

In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike "by subdivisions (a) through (e) in". (Internal reference correction.) In paragraph 6 and subsection B, in the lead-in language, after "exercising control or" insert "HAVING". (Grammar.) 44-1797.05

In subsection D, the notice refers to two dates, "Enter date of transaction

(Date)". It is unclear what those dates are. After "traded in" strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 44-1797.11

In subsection E, should "MARTIN LUTHER KING, JR. DAY" be included? 44-1798 (2006) In paragraph 1, subdivision (a), after "principal" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 44-1798.05 (2006) In paragraph 2, strike "law" and insert "LAWS" and after the second "state" strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 44-1798.21

In subsection A, first sentence, strike the first and second commas. (Grammar.) 44-1799.02

In subsection C, strike "prospective" and strike "written notice of the purchaser's rights. The notice shall be". (Clarification.)

In subsection D, last sentence of the notice, strike "consumer" and insert "PURCHASER". (Clarification.) 44-1799.05

In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike the third comma. (Grammar.) In subsection D, paragraph 3, first sentence, before "purchaser" insert "DATE THE".

(Clarification.) In subsection H, paragraph 3, strike "subsection A" and insert "SECTION

44-1799.02". (Internal reference correction.)

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44-1799.32 In subsection A, paragraph 6, strike "lot" and insert "AREA". (Clarification.) In subsection D, first sentence, strike the second and third "in" and insert "ON". (Grammar.) 44-1799.35 After "by" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 44-1799.51 (2006) In subsection F, strike the first comma and insert "OR" and strike the fourth comma. (Grammar.) 44-1801 In paragraph 27, strike "'Self-regulatory organization' or" because the term is not used in the chapter or chapter 13. 44-1814 In the first sentence, after "supervision" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 44-1923 In subsection A, first sentence, before the second "hearing" insert "A". (Grammar.) 44-1945 In subsection A, paragraph 7, strike "enjoinder" and insert "COURT ORDER". (Clarification.) 44-1971 In paragraph 1, strike ", regulations". (Conformity.) 44-6552

(2010) In subsection A, strike "E" and insert "F". (Internal reference correction.) (2011) In subsection B, second sentence, strike "they participate" and insert "IT

PARTICIPATES". (Grammar.) 44-6554 In subsection C, paragraph 4, strike "Violating" and insert "THE VIOLATION OF". (Grammar.) 44-6702

In subsection A, paragraph 4, first sentence, strike the first "to". (Grammar.) 44-6707

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "executor" and insert "PERSONAL REPRESENTATIVE". (Conformity.)

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44-6709 In subsection A, in two places, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert

"JULY 17, 1993". (Clarification.) 44-6751

After the second "investment" insert "THAT IS" and after "government" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 44-6801

In paragraph 1, after "enter" insert "INTO". (Grammar.) 44-6803

In subsection C, first sentence, strike "disclosure" and insert "DISCLOSURES". (Consistency.) 44-6804

In paragraph 10, strike "expressed" and insert "EXPRESS". (Consistency.) 44-6852

This section possibly conflicts with section 6-1413, subsection E, section 13-1809, subsection E, section 32-328, subsection C, section 32-507, subsection A, paragraph 17 and section 44-6002, subsection H. 44-6951 In paragraph 1, strike "statement" and insert "REPORT". (Consistency.) 44-6953 In subsection A, first, second and third sentences, strike "annual" and insert "AUDITED". (Consistency.) 44-7004 Strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "JULY 18, 2000". (Clarification.) 44-7008 In subsection D, paragraph 2, strike "or regular mail". (Clarification.) 44-7010 In subsection B, strike ", paragraphs 1 and 2 do" and insert "DOES". (Internal reference correction.) 44-7011 In paragraph 3, strike "any electronic notary law" and insert "TITLE 41, CHAPTER 2, ARTICLE 3". (Clarification.) 44-7012 In subsection E, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "JULY 18, 2000". (Clarification.)

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44-7014 In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "actions" and insert "ACTS". (Grammar.) In subsection B, strike ", paragraphs 1 and 2". (Internal reference correction.) 44-7016 In subsection F, paragraph 2, strike "the electronic record". (Redundant.) 44-7043 (2011) In the first sentence, strike "governmental information technology agency" and insert "DEPARTMENT OF ADMINISTRATION". (Correct name.) 44-7051 In subsection C, paragraph 2, strike "that". (Grammar.) 44-7152 In subsection A, last sentence, after the second "for" insert "AT LEAST". (Clarification.) 44-7156 In the first sentence, strike "violations" and insert "VIOLATION". (Grammar.) 44-7301 (2005) In paragraph 6, strike "protocol/internet" and insert "PROTOCOL OR INTERNET" (clarification) and strike "it" and insert "ITS" (grammar). 44-7402 (2005) In subsection E, strike "title 44," and after "7" insert "OF THIS TITLE". (Style consistency.) 44-7501 (2006) In subsection J, paragraph 1, strike "of 1999". (Clarification.) 44-7601 (2006) In subsection B, paragraph 1, second sentence, strike "not properly" and insert "IMPROPERLY." (Clarification.) In subsection E, paragraph 1, strike "of 1999". (Clarification.) In paragraph 3, strike the comma and insert a parenthesis and after "1681x" insert a parenthesis. (Style consistency.)

In subsection G, after "venture," insert "A". (Grammar.) 45-101

The term "riparian area", although defined here, is not used elsewhere in this title. 45-103

In subsection B, before "its" insert "OF". (Grammar.)

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45-110 (2004) In subsection A, paragraphs 2 and 4, strike "head gates" and insert "HEADGATES". In subsection B, in three places, strike "head gate" and insert "HEADGATE". (Spelling.) 45-112 (2004) In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "head gate" and insert "HEADGATE". (Spelling.) 45-131

In paragraph 2, strike "artifically" and insert "ARTIFICIALLY". (Spelling.) 45-141

In subsection A, strike "flood" and insert "FLOODWATER" and strike "waste" and insert "WASTEWATER". (Spelling.) 45-174

In the second sentence, strike "head gates" and insert "HEADGATES". (Spelling.) 45-181

In paragraph 1, strike "stockwatering" and insert "STOCK WATERING". (Spelling.) In paragraph 3, strike "flood" and "waste" and insert "FLOODWATER" and

"WASTEWATER". (Spelling.) 45-182

In subsection A, first sentence, subsection D, first sentence and subsection E, in four places, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "MARCH 17, 1995". (Clarification.) 45-203

In the section heading, change "Head gates" to "Headgates". In subsection A, first sentence, strike "head gate" and insert "HEADGATE". In subsection D, first sentence, strike "head gates" and insert "HEADGATES".

(Spelling.) 45-205 (2004) In subsection A, strike "head gates" and insert "HEADGATES". (Spelling.) 45-251

In paragraph 1, last sentence, after "irrigation provider or" strike "a". (Grammar.) In paragraph 5, after the second "decree" insert "THAT IS" and after "jurisdiction"

insert "AND". (Grammar.) 45-253

In subsection D, paragraph 2, first sentence, strike "registered" and insert "CERTIFIED". (Conformity.)

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45-254 In subsection G, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and

insert "MARCH 17, 1995" and strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "MARCH 17, 1995". (Clarification.) 45-257

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "within sixty days after the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "BEFORE MAY 17, 1995". (Clarification.) 45-258

In subsection A, paragraph 2, second sentence, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "MARCH 17, 1995". (Clarification.) 45-264

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "of the department of water resources". (Conformity.) 45-272

In subsection C, first sentence, strike "prior to one year after the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "BEFORE MARCH 18, 1996". (Clarification.) 45-291

After "estate" strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 45-313.01 (2004) Strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "AUGUST 25, 2004". (Clarification.) 45-342 (2005) In subsection A, strike the second "subsections" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Grammar.) In subsection L, third sentence, strike "subsections" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Grammar.) 45-411

In subsection A, strike "on the effective date of this section". (Unnecessary.) In subsection B, strike "on the effective date of this chapter". (Unnecessary.)

45-411.04 In subsection A, third sentence, strike "States/Mexico" and insert

"STATES-MEXICO". (Style consistency.) In subsection C, strike the second "or". (Grammar.)

45-431 (2006) Strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "JUNE 20, 1980". (Clarification.)

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45-437.01 In the lead-in language, strike "all" and insert "BOTH". (Grammar.)

45-437.02

In subsection A, in the lead-in language, strike "all" and insert "BOTH". (Grammar.) 45-437.03

At the beginning of subsection A, paragraph 4, should "IF THE FARM UNIT IS ELIGIBLE TO RECEIVE CENTRAL ARIZONA PROJECT WATER," be added? 45-451

In subsection B, strike the second "definition" and insert "DESCRIPTION" (clarification) and strike "article 9 of" and after "1" insert ", ARTICLE 9" (style consistency). 45-462

In subsection C, strike "applicaton" and insert "APPLICATION". (Spelling.) 45-464

In subsection A, paragraph 2, after the first "right" insert "THAT IS" and strike "which" and insert "AND THAT". (Grammar.) 45-465.02

At the beginning of subsection A, paragraph 4, should "IF THE FARM UNIT IS ELIGIBLE TO RECEIVE CENTRAL ARIZONA PROJECT WATER," be added? 45-473.01

In two places, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "APRIL 18, 1986". (Clarification.) 45-483 (2003) In subsection A, last sentence, strike the semicolon and enclose "110 Stat. 888" in parentheses. (Style consistency.) In subsection C, in the lead-in language, strike "apply" and insert "APPLIES". (Grammar.) 45-515

In subsection A, paragraph 6, third sentence, strike "section" and insert "PARAGRAPH". (Internal reference correction.) (2008) Strike subsection D, paragraph 2. (Section 45-676 has been repealed.) 45-516

In subsection C, before "poor" insert "THE". (Grammar.)

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45-566.01 (2007) In subsection A, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and

insert "SEPTEMBER 19, 2007" and strike "this amendment to". (Clarification.) In subsection C, in the lead-in language, strike "non per-capita" and insert

"NON-PER CAPITA". (Spelling.) In subsection E, strike "this amendment to". (Clarification.)

45-576.05 In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike "45-576" and insert "45-576.01". (Internal reference correction.) 45-576.07

In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "city" and insert "CITY'S" and strike "town" and insert "TOWN'S". (Grammar.) 45-578 (2006) In subsection B, last sentence, strike "I" and insert "J". (Internal reference correction.) 45-605

In subsection B, second sentence, after the first "director" insert "OF WATER RESOURCES". (Clarification.) 45-618

In subsection B, strike "consist" and insert "CONSISTS". (Grammar) In subsection E, third sentence, after "resources" insert an apostrophe. (Grammar.)

45-811.01 (2005) In subsection D, in the lead-in language, strike "all" and insert "BOTH". (Grammar.) 45-1022

Strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "SEPTEMBER 30, 1992". (Clarification.) 45-1441

In paragraph 2, strike "flood plain" and insert "FLOODPLAIN". (Spelling.) In paragraph 4, subdivision (b), before "access" strike "for". (Grammar.)

45-1902

In subsection B, after "area" insert ", EXCEPT FOR TERRITORY EXCLUDED PURSUANT TO SUBSECTION C, PARAGRAPH 5 OF THIS SECTION". (Clarification.)

In subsection C, paragraph 6, second sentence, after the second "exclude" insert "TERRITORY". (Clarification.)

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45-2102 In the lead-in sentence, strike "specifies" and insert "REQUIRES". (Style

consistency.) 45-2103

In subsection A, paragraphs 8 and 9, before "appointed" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 45-2104

In subsection B, paragraph 6, strike the first comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 45-2201

In paragraph 9, after the second "district" insert "THAT IS", strike ", which" and insert "AND THAT" and strike "P.L." and insert "PUBLIC LAW". (Grammar and style consistency.) 45-2223

In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike "Manage," and after the first "and" insert "MANAGE AND". (Clarification.) 45-2261

In subsection D, "political subdivision" probably should be limited to "of this state". 45-2421

In subsection B, paragraphs 4 and 5, after "person" insert "WHO IS" and after "38-211" insert "AND". (Grammar.) In paragraph 5, after "entity" insert "THAT IS", after the first "river" insert "AND" and strike the last comma. (Grammar.) 45-2451

In the second sentence, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "APRIL 30, 1996". (Clarification.) 45-2458

Subsection A, paragraph 7 doesn't follow the lead-in language. It should probably be a separate subsection and the internal reference to "paragraphs 4, 5 and 6 of this section" should be corrected.

In subsection B, in the lead-in language, strike "all" and insert "BOTH". (Grammar.) 45-2471

In subsection A, paragraph 2, after "interstate" insert "WATER". In paragraph 3, strike "shall" and insert "DOES". In paragraph 4, after "interstate" insert "WATER" and strike "may be" and insert "IS".

In subsection D, second sentence, after "These" insert "WATER". In subsection E, after "interstate" insert "WATER".

(Consistency and style consistency.)

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45-2472 In subsection A, in the lead-in language, after "interstate" insert "WATER".

(Consistency.) In paragraphs 1 and 2, strike "user agrees" and insert "USERS AGREE". (Grammar.)

In subsection B, strike "user" and insert "USERS". (Grammar.) 45-2602 (2005) In subsection A, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "DECEMBER 14, 2007". (Clarification.) 45-2603 (2005) In subsections A and B and in subsection C, paragraph 1, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "AUGUST 12, 2005". (Clarification.) 45-2604 (2005) Strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "DECEMBER 14, 2007". (Clarification.) 45-2611 (2005) In subsection A, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "DECEMBER 14, 2007". (Clarification.) 45-2622 (2005) In subsection A, strike "following the year in which this section becomes effective" and insert "AFTER 2007". (Clarification.) 45-2626 (2005)

In subsection G, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "DECEMBER 14, 2007". (Clarification.) 45-2631 (2005) In subsection A and in subsection B, paragraph 2, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "AUGUST 12, 2005" and in subsection D, strike "the effective date of article 6 of this chapter" and insert "DECEMBER 14, 2007". (Clarification.) 45-2641 (2005) In subsection A and in subsection B, paragraphs 1 and 4, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "AUGUST 12, 2005" and in subsection C, strike "the effective date of article 6 of this chapter" and insert "DECEMBER 14, 2007". (Clarification.) 45-2701 (2005)

In paragraph 6, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "DECEMBER 28, 2007". (Clarification.) Title 46, Chapter 1, Article 2 (46-111) (2006) Repeal the article heading. (Sections 46-111 through 46-115 have been repealed.)

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46-132 In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike "Assist" and insert "ASSISTING". In paragraph

3, strike "Establish" and insert "ESTABLISHING". (Grammar.) 46-134 (2005) In subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (b), strike "caring" and insert "CARE". (Correct terminology.) 46-151

In subsection A, first sentence, after "each" insert "FISCAL". (Clarification.) Title 46, Chapter 1, Article 5 (46-161) (2006) Repeal the article heading. (Sections 46-161, 46-162 and 46-163 have been repealed.) 46-192

In subsection B, strike "so as" and insert "IN ORDER". (Grammar.) 46-193

In the last sentence, before "individual" insert "ELDERLY". (Clarification.) 46-206

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "voucher" and insert "VOUCHERS". (Grammar.) 46-215

In subsection C, paragraph 3, strike "defined" and insert "PRESCRIBED". (Clarification.) 46-241

In paragraph 1, strike "is contracted by" and insert "HAS A CONTRACT WITH" and after "short-term" insert "CRISIS". (Grammar and consistency.)

In paragraph 4, strike "guideline" and insert "GUIDELINES". (Consistency.) In paragraph 5, in two places, strike "participant" and insert "PERSON".

(Clarification.) 46-299 In subsection J, paragraph 3, subdivision (e), strike "paragraph" and insert "SUBDIVISION". In paragraph 5, subdivision (d), item (i), last sentence, strike "section" and insert "ITEM". (Internal reference corrections.) 46-300.05 In subsection C, strike "provide the services prescribed by" and insert "USE TEMPORARY ASSISTANCE FOR NEEDY FAMILIES MONIES PROVIDED IN". (Clarification.)

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46-404 In subsection A, strike the second "or" and insert "OF". (Clarification.)

46-442

In subsection A, first sentence, strike the first "a" and insert "THE CHILD SUPPORT CASE" and strike "of child support orders". (Clarification.) 46-444 In subsection G, strike "for" and insert "OF". (Grammar.) 46-452.02

In subsection B, paragraph 6, strike the federal citation in parentheses and insert "P.L. 100-175; 42 UNITED STATES CODE SECTION 3027(a)(12)". 46-456 (2009)

In subsection D, strike "transitions" and insert "TRANSACTIONS". (Correct terminology.) 46-458 (2006) In subsection E, strike "41-1061, subsection B" and insert "41-1092.03". (Internal reference correction.) 47-2A104

In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "SEPTEMBER 30, 1992". (Clarification.) 47-2A506

In subsection D, strike "this chapter becomes effective" and insert "SEPTEMBER 30, 1992". (Clarification.) 47-2A524

In subsection A, strike the second "section 47-2A523,". (Style consistency.) 47-2A525

In subsection B, strike the second "section 47-2A523,". (Style consistency.) 47-3204

In subsection A, first sentence, strike the second "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.)

47-3418 In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike "may". (Grammar.)

47-3501

In subsection B, paragraph 4, strike "cut-off" and insert "CUTOFF". (Spelling.)

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47-5115 In the first sentence, strike "article" and insert "CHAPTER". (Internal reference

correction.) 47-5117

In subsection C, paragraph 3, after the first "to" insert "THE". (Grammar.) 47-7703 (2006) In four places, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "SEPTEMBER 21, 2006". (Clarification.) 47-7704 (2006) Strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "SEPTEMBER 21, 2006". (Clarification.) 47-8207

In subsection B, before "assessment" insert "AN". (Grammar.) 47-9307

In the section heading, after "debtor" add "; definition". (Style consistency.) 47-9516 In subsection B, paragraph 5, subdivision (c), item (ii), after the semicolon insert "OR". (Grammar.) 47-9518

In subsection B, paragraph 2, at the end strike the period and insert a semicolon. (Grammar.) 47-9614

In paragraph 3, last sentence of the form, at the end of the sentence insert a period. (Grammar.) 48-147

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "44" and insert "47". (Internal reference correction.)

In subsection B, first sentence, after "days" insert an apostrophe. (Grammar.) 48-175

In subsection E, clarify the language. The meaning is unclear. 48-241

In paragraph 4, subdivisions (b) and (c), after "paragraph" strike "4". (Style consistency.)

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48-266 (2006) In subsection D, at the end of the sentence insert a period. In subsection F, first sentence, after "if" insert "THE". (Grammar.) 48-291 (2010)

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "and that". (Grammar.) 48-309

In subsection D, second sentence, strike the second "of" and insert "IN". (Conformity.) 48-401

In paragraph 1, strike "of". (Grammar.) In paragraph 3, after "all" insert "OF". (Grammar.)

48-507 (2011) In subsection D, paragraph 5, between "one" and "half" insert a hyphen. (Spelling.) 48-528

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "10 o'clock" and insert "10:00". (Style consistency.) 48-548

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "council" and insert "GOVERNING BODY". (Clarification.) 48-554

In subsection A, after "superior court" strike "of" and insert "IN". (Conformity.) 48-571 (2005) In subsection A, paragraph 7, after "1977" insert a comma (grammar), before the first "42 United" insert "P.L. 95-128;" (citation correction) and before the second "42 United" insert "P.L. 89-174;" (citation correction). In paragraph 22, after "this" insert "ARTICLE". (Clarification.) 48-579 (2011) In subsection B, in two places, between "one" and "half" insert a hyphen. (Spelling.) 48-586

In subsection C, last sentence, in two places, strike "city" and insert "MUNICIPALITY". (Clarification.)

In subsection F, strike "bondsman" in six places and insert "SURETY" and strike "bondsman's" and insert "SURETY'S". (Correct terminology.)

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48-599 In subsection F, second sentence, strike "date" and insert "DATES" and in the last

sentence strike "section" and insert "SECTIONS". (Grammar.) 48-608 (2008) In subsection F, strike "state and". (The state no longer levies ad valorem property taxes.) 48-620

In subsection G, seventh sentence, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 48-633

In subsection A, strike "39-121" and insert "39-204". (Internal reference correction.) 48-688 In subsection A, second sentence, after the second "and" insert "SHALL". (Grammar.) 48-707 (2006) In subsection H, second sentence, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "SEPTEMBER 21, 2006". (Clarification.) 48-804 (2010)

In subsections A, D and E, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "JULY 29, 2010". (Clarification.)

In subsection D, first sentence, strike "position" and insert "POSITIONS". (Grammar.) 48-812 (2006) In subsection C, strike the first comma. (Grammar.) 48-815.01 (2010)

In subsection A, paragraph 7, first sentence, strike the first comma (grammar) and in paragraph 12, strike "formal" and insert "FORMER" (correct terminology).

In subsection E, strike the second comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 48-831

Strike "an employee" and insert "EMPLOYEES". (Grammar.) 48-851 (2011)

In subsection E, in the lead-in language, after "either" insert "OF THE FOLLOWING". (Clarification.)

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48-853 (2011) In subsection A, paragraphs 3 and 4, strike "The district shall". (Grammar.) In

paragraph 10, subdivision (b), first sentence, strike the third "a" and insert "THE" and strike the second "formed pursuant to section 48-851, subsection E, paragraph 2" (grammar), and in the last sentence, strike "subsection A, paragraph 8," and strike "section" and insert "PARAGRAPH" (internal reference correction). In subdivision (c), first sentence, strike "subsection A, paragraph 8," and strike "section" and insert "PARAGRAPH". (Internal reference correction.) In subdivision (d), sixth sentence, after "provide" insert "NONCONTIGUOUS COUNTY ISLAND". (Clarification.) 48-910 (2007)

In subsection E, first sentence, after the comma insert "A". (Grammar.) 48-911

In the section heading, hyphenate "rights of way". (Spelling.) 48-937

In subsection C, after "twenty" insert a comma, after "or" insert "SHALL" and after the second "not" strike "to". (Grammar.) 48-950

In subsection F, strike "the terms", after "service" insert "BY" and after "class" insert "MAIL". (Clarification and style consistency.) 48-966

In subsection E, second sentence, after "include" insert "AN". (Grammar.) In subsection F, after "refunding" insert "BONDS". (Clarification.)

48-986.01 In subsection B, second and third sentences, strike "evidence" and insert "EVIDENCES". (Grammar.) 48-1001

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "thereon". In subsection B, strike "thereafter" and strike "either". (Unnecessary.)

48-1020 (2005) In subsection D, second sentence, strike "any" and insert "ALL". (Clarification.) In subsection E, after the second "as" insert "A". (Grammar.) In subsection F, strike "on" and insert "IN". (Clarification.) In subsection G, third sentence, strike "each" and insert "ALL". (Grammar.) 48-1033

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "supervisor's" and insert "SUPERVISORS'". (Grammar.)

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48-1062 In subsection A, paragraph 1, before "action" insert "AN". (Grammar.) In paragraph

4, strike "above" and insert "IN PARAGRAPHS 1, 2 AND 3 OF THIS SUBSECTION". (Clarification.) 48-1083 (2007)

In subsection A, after "directors" insert "THAT IS A SEPARATELY ELECTED BOARD FORMED PURSUANT TO THIS ARTICLE". (Clarification.) 48-1101

In subsection A, paragraph 2, after "translator" insert "AND RELAY". (Clarification.) 48-1103

In subsection B, paragraph 1, before "chapter" insert "TITLE 11," and strike "of this title". (Internal reference correction.) 48-1209

In the lead-in paragraph, strike "In addition to the powers specifically granted,". (Unnecessary.)

In paragraph 3, strike the second comma and insert "THAT ARE" and strike the third comma and insert "AND THAT ARE". (Grammar.)

In paragraph 9, strike "assessment". (Clarification.) 48-1211

In subsection C, should "regulated operating costs" be "related operating costs"? See section 48-1210, subsections A and E. 48-1313

In subsection C, last sentence, strike "producers" and insert "PRODUCER'S". (Grammar.) 48-1401

Strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "SEPTEMBER 30, 1988". (Clarification.) 48-1511

In subsection A, last sentence and in subsection B, strike "therein". (Unnecessary.) In subsection C, first sentence, strike "thereafter" and strike "required" and insert

"REQUIRES". In the second sentence, strike "thereafter" and strike "qualified" and insert "QUALIFY". (Unnecessary and grammar.) 48-2001

In subsection B, paragraph 1, second sentence, after the first "sewage" strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.)

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48-2002 In subsection C, first sentence, after "near" strike "by". (Grammar.)

48-2029

In subsection J, strike the period and insert "AS FOLLOWS:". (Grammar.) 48-2033 (2011)

In subsection D, paragraph 3, strike "renewal" and insert "EXTENSION". (Clarification.) 48-2048

In subsection A, paragraph 9, first sentence, after "spouse" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 48-2049

In subsection A, after "if" insert "EITHER". (Clarification.) 48-2206

In subsection A, strike the second comma and insert a period. (Grammar.) 48-2207

In subsection A, strike "it appears that". (Clarification) In subsection B, strike the first "and" and insert a comma. (Grammar.)

48-2210

In subsection A, after "ambulatory" insert "MEDICAL SERVICE". (Grammar.) 48-2223 (2006)

In subsection C, last sentence, after "directors" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 48-2303

Strike the subsection designation "A." (Style consistency.) 48-2333 (2008) In subsection B, second sentence, insert a hyphen between "Three" and "days" and after "days" insert an apostrophe. (Grammar.) 48-2336

In subsection A, paragraph 5, in the lead-in and in subdivision (g), strike "5". (Style consistency.) (2007) In subsection B, last sentence, strike "paragraph" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Internal reference correction.)

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48-2339 In subsection B, after "supervisors" strike ", are" and insert "IS" and, in two places,

strike "owners" and "controllers" and insert "OWNER" and "CONTROLLER". (Grammar.) In subsection C, hyphenate "right of way". (Spelling.)

48-2633 (2011) In subsection A, first sentence, between "one" and "half" insert a hyphen. (Spelling.) 48-2811

In subsection A, strike "menance" and insert "MENACE". (Spelling.) 48-2835 (2008) In the first sentence, after "clerk" insert "OR SECRETARY". (Clarification.) 48-2838 (2008) In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "If" and strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 48-2854 (2008) In subsection A, strike "state and". (The state no longer levies ad valorem property taxes.) 48-2987

In subsection B, third sentence, before "chapter 3" insert "TITLE 45," and strike "of this title". (Internal reference correction.) 48-3011

In subsection A, sixth sentence, strike "two candidates" and insert "CANDIDATE" with reference to the at large director. (Clarification.) 48-3020

In subsection B, second sentence, strike "two candidates" and insert "CANDIDATE" with reference to the at large director. (Clarification.) 48-3072

In subsection B, third sentence, strike the comma. In paragraph 2, after "judgment" insert "IS". (Grammar.) 48-3190 (2006)

In subsection C, strike the commas inside the quotation marks. (Grammar.) 48-3203

After "48-3202" strike "through" and insert "AND". (Internal reference correction.) 48-3214

In paragraph 3, strike "to" before "fix". (Grammar.)

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48-3219.04 In subsection B, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.)

48-3227 In subsection B, strike "articles 3, 4 and 5, chapter 3 of" and after "title 35" insert ", CHAPTER 3, ARTICLES 3, 4 AND 5". (Style consistency.) 48-3615.01 (2006) In subsection E, fourth sentence, strike the second comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 48-3620.02

In subsection A, first sentence, before "fixing a time" strike the comma and insert "AND" and before "once a week" insert ". NOTICE SHALL BE GIVEN". (Clarification) 48-3702 (2005) Strike "13" and insert "XIII". (Citation correction.) 48-3703

In paragraph 2, strike "PL" and insert "PUBLIC LAW". (Style consistency.) 48-3714

After the second "district" strike "and" and insert a comma and strike "sections" and insert "SECTION". (Grammar.) 48-3731

In subsection A, after "multi-county water" insert "CONSERVATION" and after "multi-county" insert "WATER". (Consistency.) 48-3754

In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike the fourth "or". (Grammar.) In subsection B, strike "its" and insert "THEIR". (Grammar.)

48-4204 (2010)

In subsection D, after the first "to" insert "AN". (Grammar.) 48-4401

In paragraph 36, last sentence, strike "3" and insert "3.1". (Internal reference correction.)

In paragraphs 30, 37 and 38, strike "as". (Style consistency.) In paragraph 39, strike "definition" and insert "SAME MEANING". (Style

consistency.)

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48-4431 In subsection A, paragraph 1, second sentence, before "subsection" insert "THIS" and

strike "A". (Style consistency.) In paragraph 5, first sentence, strike "section" and insert "SUBSECTION". (Internal reference correction.)

48-4432

In subsection A, after "48-4461," insert "SUBSECTION A,". (Internal reference correction.) 48-4475

In subsection B, first sentence, strike the second "any". (Grammar.) 48-4831 (L93, Ch. 107, sec. 15 & L93, Ch. 144, sec. 1) These two versions conflict. If section 48-4831 is amended, both versions of the section should be addressed in the legislation and the end result should be one version of the statute. 48-4971

In subsection C, strike "replenishment authority" and insert "MULTI-COUNTY WATER CONSERVATION DISTRICT". (Conformity.) 48-4975

In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike "an active management area in which" and strike "is located". (Clarification.)

In subsection C, paragraph 1, strike "assessor". In paragraph 2, strike "property tax" and insert "COUNTY". (Clarification.) 48-4976 (2008) Strike subsection E, paragraph 4. (Section 45-676.01 has been repealed.) 48-4979

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "for the active management area in which the district is located". (Clarification.) 48-4981

In paragraph 1, strike "an active management area in which" and strike "is located". (Clarification.) 48-4983

In subsection B, last sentence, strike the second "district" and insert "SPECIAL". (Conformity.) 48-5122 (2010)

In paragraph 1, strike "regional" and after "of the" insert "REGIONAL". (Correct terminology.)

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48-5703 In subsection A, paragraph 3, first sentence, after the second "statement" strike the

comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) In subsection C, last sentence, strike "defined pursuant to" and insert "PRESCRIBED

IN" (clarification) and after "section 16-121" strike the comma and insert "AND" (grammar). In subsection D, after "hearing" strike the comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.)

48-5705

In subsection A, paragraph 3, strike "defined" and insert "PRESCRIBED". (Clarification.)

In subsection E, last sentence, after the second "person" insert "WHO IS" and after the second "section" insert a comma. (Grammar.)

In subsection F, last sentence, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) In subsection I, last sentence, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.)

48-5902 (2003) In subsection A, paragraph 4, second sentence, strike the first comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 48-5910 (2003) In subsection B, after "furtherance" insert "OF". (Grammar.) 48-5912 (2003) In subsection A, paragraph 2, after "area of" insert "THE". (Consistency.) In subsection B, second sentence, strike "include" and insert "INCLUDES". (Grammar.) 48-6201 (2005) Strike "title" and insert "CHAPTER". (Internal reference correction.) 48-6202 (2011)

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "department of economic security" and insert "OFFICE OF EMPLOYMENT AND POPULATION STATISTICS". (Conformity.) 48-6231 (2005) In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike "beverage" and insert "BEVERAGES". (Grammar.) 48-6233 (2005) In subsection A, paragraph 1, strike the first comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 48-6251 (2005) In subsection A, paragraph 9, strike "C" and insert "D". (Internal reference correction.)

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48-6287 (2005) In subsection B, strike "multipurpose" and insert "THEME PARK AND VEHICLE SUPPORT". (Clarification.) 48-6416 (2007)

In subsection G, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "SEPTEMBER 19, 2007". (Clarification.) 48-6655 (2008) In subsection C, after "April 1" insert "OF EACH YEAR". (Clarification.) 48-6673 (2008) In subsection A, in the lead-in language, strike "subsections" and insert "SUBSECTION" and strike "and G". (Internal reference correction.) 49-104 (2011)

In subsection B, paragraph 14, subdivision (b), third sentence, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "JULY 20, 2011". (Clarification.) 49-116 In subsection G, fifth sentence, strike "Payment of" and strike "shall not be eligible" and insert "DOES NOT QUALIFY". (Clarification.) In the sixth sentence, strike "contact" and insert "CONTRACT". (Spelling.) In the last sentence, after the second "list" insert "BUT". (Grammar.) In subsection J, first sentence, strike "fees" and insert "PAYMENTS". (Consistency.) In subsection K, paragraph 1, first sentence, strike "bachelors" and insert "BACCALAUREATE". (Conformity.) In the third sentence, strike "be" and insert "HAVE BEEN". (Grammar.) In paragraph 2, subdivision (c), before both "49-287.01" and "49-287.03" insert "SECTION". (Style consistency.) 49-117 (2010)

In the second sentence, strike "apply" and insert "APPLIES". (Grammar.) Title 49, Chapter 1, Article 4 (49-151)

In the article heading, before "REMEDIATION" insert "SOIL". (Clarification.) 49-152 (2003) In subsection F, paragraph 1, strike "Issuance of a tax deed" and insert "SALE OF A REAL PROPERTY TAX LIEN". (Clarification.) 49-152.01 (2003) In subsection B, paragraph 1, subdivisions (c), (d) and (f), after the subdivision designation insert "A" and in subdivision (e) before "insurance" insert "AN". (Grammar.)

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49-152.02 (2003) In subsection F, paragraph 2, strike the second sentence. (Duplicative text.) In subsection G, first sentence, after "penalty" insert "OF". (Grammar.) 49-158 (2004) In subsection A, fourth sentence, after "affect" insert "A". (Grammar.) (2003) In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike "Issuance of a tax deed" and insert "SALE OF A REAL PROPERTY TAX LIEN". (Clarification.) 49-173 (2006) Strike the subsection designation "A." (Style consistency.) In paragraph 4, strike "one or more" and insert "EITHER OR BOTH". (Clarification.) In paragraph 8, subdivision (b), strike the second "section" and insert "SECTIONS". (Grammar.) 49-175 In subsection B, in the lead-in language, strike "applies" and insert "APPLY". (Grammar.) 49-176 In subsection A, in the lead-in language, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "JULY 18, 2000". (Clarification.) In paragraph 3, first sentence, strike the third "section". (Style consistency.) 49-177 In subsection G, strike "Laws 1997, chapter 287, sections 51 and 52" and insert a phrase that describes those incentives or requirements. (Clarification and style consistency.) 49-202

Strike subsection E and make the appropriate relettering changes in subsections B, F, J and M. (Outdated.)

In subsection K, paragraph 3, after "conservation" insert "AND". (Conformity.) 49-223

In subsection G, first sentence, after "established" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 49-232 In subsection A, sixth sentence, strike "41-1092, subsection B" and insert "41-1092.03". (Internal reference correction.) In subsection E, after "unless" should "EITHER OF THE FOLLOWING APPLIES" or "BOTH OF THE FOLLOWING APPLY" be inserted? In subsection I, first sentence, strike "section 49-232," and after "subsection A" insert "OF THIS SECTION". (Style consistency.)

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49-233 In subsection B, first sentence, strike "the effective date of this article" and insert "JULY 18, 2000". (Clarification.) 49-236 (2009) Repeal. This section is outdated. 49-243.01

In subsection C, first sentence, strike "who own" and insert "THAT OWNS" and strike "operate" and insert "OPERATES". (Grammar.) 49-245.02

In subsection A, paragraph 1, subdivision (c), last sentence, after "made" insert "PURSUANT". (Grammar.) 49-247 (2007)

In subsection A, first sentence, after "rule" insert a comma. (Grammar.) In subsection G, first sentence, after "hearing" insert a comma. (Grammar.)

49-263 (2005) In the section heading, remove "; civil penalties". (Conformity.) 49-264

In subsection B, paragraph 5, before "The" insert "IF". (Grammar.) 49-286

In subsection A, strike "the effective date of this chapter" and insert "AUGUST 13, 1986". (Clarification.) 49-287.05

In subsection A, paragraphs 6 and 7, after "site" insert "OR PORTION OF THE SITE". (Consistency.) 49-287.07

In subsection A, paragraph 3, subdivision (b), first sentence, strike "agree" and insert "AGREES". (Grammar.) 49-289.05

In the second sentence, strike "their" and insert "ITS". (Grammar.) 49-301 (2004) In paragraph 1, strike "title". (Style consistency.) 49-333

In subsection D, last sentence, before "well" insert "DRY". (Consistency.)

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49-371 (2009) In subsection E, strike "18-9-A902(G)" and insert "R18-9-A902(G)". (Citation correction.) 49-401

In subsection A, second sentence, strike "by this act" (style consistency), strike "state-wide" and insert "STATEWIDE" (spelling) and strike the semicolon and insert a comma (grammar). 49-401.01 (L10, Ch. 287, sec. 16 and Ch. 315, sec. 1) (2010)

In paragraph 7, subdivisions (a) and (b), strike "49-247" and insert "49-427" (internal reference correction) and in subdivision (b), item (vi), strike the third "and" and insert "ANY" (clarification). 49-406

In subsections C, D and E, strike "agency" and insert "ORGANIZATION". (Consistency.)

In subsection E, strike "subsection" and insert "SUBSECTIONS". (Grammar.) 49-407

In subsection B, paragraph 2, after "letter," insert "A" and strike the second "issuing". (Grammar.) 49-429

In subsection B, after the first "to" insert "A". (Grammar.)

49-433 In the section heading, add "; violation; classification". (Style consistency.)

49-437

In subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (a), strike the first semicolon and insert a comma and strike the second semicolon. (Style consistency.)

In subsection B, second sentence, strike the first "and" and insert "FOR". (Grammar.) 49-439

In subsection C, after "permit" insert "ADMINISTRATION" (conformity) and strike "49-555" and insert "49-455" (internal reference correction). 49-457 (2011)

In subsection P, paragraph 1, subdivision (d), strike "reduces" and insert "REDUCE". (Grammar.) 49-457.05 (2011)

In subsection A, after "the" insert "UNITED STATES". (Correct name.)

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49-471 In paragraph 3, after "quantities" strike ", which" and insert "THAT," and strike the second "which" and insert "THAT". (Grammar.) 49-471.04 In subsection A, strike "41-471.08" and insert "49-471.08.". (Internal reference correction.) In paragraph 2, first sentence, strike "regular" and insert "FIRST CLASS". (Clarification.) 49-471.06 In subsection E, first sentence, after "designee" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 49-471.10 In subsection C, second sentence, strike "No later than September 1, 2000,". (Outdated.) 49-471.15 In subsection B, second sentence, strike the first comma and insert "AND SHALL CONTAIN" and strike "shall contain". (Grammar.) 49-474

Insert "A." at the beginning of the section. (Paragraph 5 does not follow the lead-in language.) In the lead-in language, strike "their" and insert "ITS" and strike "counties" and insert "COUNTY". (Grammar.)

In paragraph 4, strike "their" and insert "ITS". (Grammar.) Strike "5." and insert "B."

49-476.01 (2011)

In subsection D, strike the first "subsection" and insert "SUBSECTIONS". (Grammar.) 49-480.04 (2006) In subsection E, first sentence, strike "and sections" and insert ", SECTION" and after "49-480 and " insert "SECTION". (Style consistency.) 49-491

In subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (a), strike the first semicolon and insert a comma and strike the second semicolon. (Style consistency.) 49-494

In subsection B, strike "paragraphs 1 and 2 of" and after "issued" strike the period and insert "IF:". In paragraphs 1 and 2, strike "If". (Style consistency.) 49-497.02 In subsection E, second sentence, strike the first comma and insert "AND SHALL CONTAIN" and strike "shall contain". (Grammar.)

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49-514 Strike "From and after October 31, 1994:". (Outdated.) In subsection A, strike "U.S.C." and insert "UNITED STATES CODE". (Style

consistency.) In subsection N, paragraph 8, strike "factor" and insert "FACTORS". (Grammar.) In subsection Q, last sentence, strike "above" and insert "IN THIS SUBSECTION".

(Style consistency.) In subsection T, in two places, strike "the term". (Style consistency.)

49-542.03

In subsection B, second sentence and subsection C, after "subsection G" strike the comma. (Grammar.)

In subsection D, strike ", paragraph 4". (Internal reference correction.) 49-546

In subsection G, paragraph 2, strike "their" and insert "THE DEALER'S". (Grammar.) 49-552

Strike the first "or" and insert a comma and after "county" insert a comma. (Grammar.) 49-556

In subsection A, first sentence, strike the first "part" and insert "PARTS" and strike the second and third "part". (Style consistency.) 49-581

In paragraph 19, strike "which program shall begin in January, 1989". (Outdated.) 49-701.01

In subsection B, paragraph 20, in the lead-in language, after "materials" insert "THAT ARE" and after the first "site" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 49-706 (2011)

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "JULY 20, 2011". (Clarification.) 49-747 (2011)

In subsection C, second sentence, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "JULY 20, 2011". (Clarification.) 49-761 (2011)

In subsection D, paragraph 2, third sentence, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "JULY 20, 2011". (Clarification.) 49-762.03 (2011)

In subsection F, second sentence, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "JULY 20, 2011". (Clarification.)

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49-762.05 (2011) In subsection H, second sentence, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this

section" and insert "JULY 20, 2011". (Clarification.) 49-762.08

In subsection A, strike "Beginning July 1, 1998,". (Outdated.) In subsection C, paragraph 3 and subsection F, strike the second "part". (Style

consistency.) In subsection E, first sentence, strike "defined" and insert "PRESCRIBED".

(Clarification.)

49-766 In subsection A, paragraph 2, strike "local". (Clarification.)

49-767

In subsection F, first sentence, after "2" strike the comma. (Grammar.) 49-770

In subsection A, third sentence, after "landfills" insert "BEGINNING". In the fourth sentence, after "apply" insert "BEGINNING". (Clarification.) 49-772

In subsection A, paragraph 2, subdivision (f), strike the second "is" and insert "WAS". (Clarification.)

In subsection D, paragraph 2, strike the first and second commas and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 49-783

In subsection A, first sentence, strike "articles" and insert "ARTICLE" and after the second "chapter" strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.)

In subsection B, first sentence, strike "articles" and insert "ARTICLE", after the third "to" insert "THIS" and strike "4". (Grammar and style consistency.) 49-784

Strike "sections" and insert "SECTION" (grammar) and strike "for" and insert "IN" (conformity). 49-801

In the lead-in language, strike the first comma. (Style consistency.) 49-802

In subsection E, strike "is" and insert "ARE". (Grammar.) 49-810

In subsection C, strike "defined in this article" and insert "PRESCRIBED BY SECTION 49-801". (Clarification.)

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49-834 In the section heading, after "newsprint" add "; civil penalty". (Style consistency.) 49-855 (2011)

In subsection C, paragraph 2, second sentence, strike "the effective date of this amendment to this section" and insert "JULY 20, 2011". (Clarification.) 49-868

In the section heading and in the text, strike "agency" and insert "DEPARTMENT". (Clarification.) 49-902

Subsections A through D are temporary and should be repealed when their purposes are accomplished. The statute does not give the director ongoing authority to establish hazardous waste disposal facilities, which appears to conflict with other provisions of title 49, chapter 5, article 1.

In subsection F, strike "on the effective date of this section" and insert "BEGINNING ON JULY 17, 1993". (Clarification.) 49-926

After "distribution," insert "TREATMENT,". (Conformity.) 49-942

Before "public facility" insert "APPROPRIATE" and strike "sites" and insert "SITE". (Clarification.) 49-943

In paragraphs 1 and 2, before "public facility" insert "APPROPRIATE". (Clarification.) 49-965 (2003) In subsection D, last sentence, strike "Notwithstanding section 49-551, subsection C, paragraph 5,". (Internal reference correction.) 49-968

In subsection B, after "add" insert "TO" and strike the first "to" and insert "FROM". (Grammar.) 49-969

In subsection A, strike the first "and" and insert a comma and strike "a" and insert "ANY". (Grammar.) 49-973

In subsection B, paragraph 1, strike "H" and insert "I". (Internal reference correction.)

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49-1008 In the last sentence, strike "parts" and insert "SECTIONS". (Conformity.)

49-1012

In subsection A, first sentence, after "apparatus" strike "or" and insert a comma and after "data" strike the comma and insert "OR". (Grammar.) 49-1016 In subsection G, last sentence, after the first and third "of" insert "THE". (Grammar.) In subsection H, in the lead-in language, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 49-1091.01 In subsection A, in the lead-in language, after "owner," insert "AN". (Grammar.) In paragraph 1, subdivision (b), strike "defined" and insert "PROVIDED". (Clarification.) In paragraph 2, subdivision (b), strike the comma and insert "OR" and after "groundwater" insert a comma. (Grammar.) In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike the second "section 49-1091,". (Style consistency.) In subsection C, after "subsection I" strike the comma. (Grammar.) 49-1092 In subsection E, paragraph 3, after "requirement" insert "AND". (Grammar.) 49-1093 In subsection C, in the lead-in language, strike "apply" and insert "APPLIES". (Grammar.) In subsection H, second sentence, strike the second comma and insert "AND". (Grammar.) 49-1101

In paragraph 2, second sentence, strike "search" and insert "SEARCHLIGHTS", strike "spot" and insert "SPOTLIGHTS" and strike "flood lights" and insert "FLOODLIGHTS". (Spelling.) 49-1102 (2003) In subsections C and D, strike "are" and insert "IS". (Grammar.) 49-1104

In subsection A, strike "the effective date of this section" and insert "AUGUST 13, 1986". (Clarification.) 49-1106

Strike "chapter" and insert "ARTICLE". (Internal reference correction.)

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49-1201 (2007) In paragraph 6, second sentence, strike "article" and insert "CHAPTER". (Internal

reference correction.) 49-1241

In subsection A, paragraph 4, strike "repayment" and insert "REPAYMENTS". (Clarification.) 49-1268

In subsection A, paragraph 1, first sentence, should "C" be "D"? In subsection B, paragraph 2, strike "cost" and insert "COSTS". (Clarification.)

49-1302 (2004) Strike the comma. (Grammar.)