as 11 fixed draft 6 part 4

Sanel and Kaya

HWhole FilmDraft 3 (Thriller)

• Laura moves into a new house to find its haunted by 2 maids

• Her life is disturbed by the threatening maids who don’t want her to be there

• She researches the house history to find they died in the closet in her room and we go back into the past to see why they were murdered

• She tries to free the spirits

• She moves house thinking the sprits are free and she moves our but they are still there

Opening Sequence HSanel and Kaya

Draft 3 (Thriller)

• Laura calls friend about dolls that keep returning

• She hears noises and goes to check out whats going on

• Ghosts run behind her as she runs

• She walks into closet and they shut the door

• They’re behind her in the closet

How we have improved from our last opening sequence to our new one

• We have improved our opening sequence by actually building up tension towards the end and creating a thriller and scary vibe for the audience to make sure they have some kind of reaction and to get them off the edge of their seats.

• We fully researched and revised about spirits and how to thrill people so we improved our understanding and knowledge making sure we make an effective opening sequence.

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How are we contributing?

• We are all contributing by meeting up every Thursday and Friday to discuss our ideas and making sure our idea’s match up and make sense to us and to our target audience so everything won’t be confusing.

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Kaya

HWhole FilmDraft 4 (Thriller)

• Laura moves into a new house to find its haunted by 2 maids

• Her life is disturbed by these two girls and two dolls that don’t go away

• She researches the house history to find they died in the closet in her room

• She tries to free the spirits

• She moves house thinking the sprits are free and she moves our but they are still there

Opening Sequence HKaya

• Laura goes home from shopping where she bought a ghost book

• As she reads the book she finds a note while hearing whispers from the closet

• She goes to check the closet and finds nothing to see 2 ghosts in the reflection of her mirror

• She runs and they scream in her face and run into the closet

• She goes to check the closet and the ghost drops a note when she picks it up to be locked inside with them

Draft 3 (Thriller)

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Shot list Final Draft Sanel

Time (secs)

Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed

1-5 She walks down the steps (1)

• Establishg shot She walks down the steps

• Orange top• black skirt• Hoop earrings• Coat• Bag

6-10 Still walking down the steps (2)

• Full body shot She walks down the steps


11-13 You just see a bag (3) • Close-up shot A close up shot is shown to the bag


14-18 see her walking down the steps (4)

• Establishingshot

She is walking down the steps


19-24 She is now walking along the pavement (5)

• Full body shot She carries on walking


Time Scene Type of shots Description Props/costumes needed

25-27 You just see the bag (6) • Close-up shot ofthe bag

A close-up shot of the bag is shown again


28-33 She reaches to the house door (9)

• Full body shot She opens the door


34-37 You see the bag (10) • Close-up shot A close-up shot of the bag is being shown


38-39 You just see her hands (11)

• Close-up shot She opening her bedroom door


40-45 She opens the door (12) • Mid shot See her entering into the bedroom


Shot list Final Draft


46-48 You just see the bag (13)

• Close-up shot Close-up shot of the bag being shown

• Orange top• black skirt• Hoop earrings• Bag

49-50 She lights up candles (14)

• Close-up shot She lights up the candles

• Orange top• black skirt• Hoop earrings

51-57 She starts to pray (15)

• Mid shot She begins to pray



• Close-up shot Close-up shot of her hands touching the rosemary


62-69 She get possessed (17)

• Mid shot She then gets possessed




90-93 She starts to hear something (23)

• Mid shot She looks around as she can hear somewhispering


94-96 You see what was written on the paper (24)

• Close up shot You see that the paper says ‘the closet’


97-99 She stares at something (25)

• Close-up shot She is staring at the cupboard


100-103 You see the cupboard(26)

• Reverse shot You see she is staring at the cupboard


104-107 She walks the cupboard (27)

• Mid shot She walks to the cupboard



Shot list Final Draft Sanel


108-110 She still walks to the cupboard (28)

• Full body shot She is at the cupboard


111-113 You see her face reaction (29)

• Close-up shot She is reallyscared



• Close up shot Her hands ourtouching the cupboard handles


118-120 You see her face reaction (32)

• Close-up shot She is scared • Orange top• black skirt• Hoop earrings

121-125 She looks around in the cupboard (33)

• Point of view She is looking inside the cupboard


126-129 She leave the cupboard open (34)

• Full body shot She the is relieved and closes the cupboard


as 11 fixed draft 6 part 4

Documents

new house

baga closeup shot

house history

effective opening sequence

ghost book

threatening maids

thrillerlaura calls

target audience