aught / naught - may 2016 issue
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First edition of the Aught / Naught poetry newsletter, featuring works from contemporary poets around the world, as well as tips and prompts.TRANSCRIPT
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Aught / Naught
May 2016 Issue: Transition
Edited by @williammatthewpeaster
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AUGHT / NAUGHT – May 2016 Issue
Arranged and edited by William M. Peaster in April 2016.
All rights to the works presented within this newsletter are reserved entirely to the artists who
created them.
Cover picture is ―The Gathering‖ by Mark M. Kiselis
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Contents
Address to the Readers pg. 5
Dedication pg. 6
Epigraphs pg. 7
Aught / Naught
I. (uni)VERSES
1. Black Wind – by @thewordvirus pg. 9
2. Lifted – by @sunseventh pg. 10
3. Custard and Jelly in Her Hands – by @akifkichloo pg. 11
4. Drawing the Line – by @guptaprakhar pg. 12
5. Brood 5 Babe Listeners – by @alanhaiderpoetry pg. 13
6. The Way – by @river_is_love pg. 14
7. Oceanus Says – by @b.oakman pg. 15
8. Nothing Happens – by @williammatthewpeaster pg. 16
9. Ode to Life – by @athenamystique pg. 17
10. Meaning in Side-Street America – by @zackariah.allen pg. 18
11. Purple Tides – by @b.a.mcdonald pg. 19
II. MASTER’S TABLE
Man and Bottle – by Wallace Stevens pg. 21
The Fact of a Doorframe – by Adrienne Rich pg. 22
With the Flies – by Roberto Bolaño pg. 23
II. WORDSHOP
Tips pg. 25
Prompts pg. 26
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ADDRESS TO THE READERS
Greetings friends and peers; in honor of 2016’s National Poetry Month, I welcome you to
the first issue of the Aught / Naught poetry newsletter. I started this project for three main
reasons: 1) to share and exchange our mutual love of poetry, 2) to recognize the powerful and
diverse works of the many artists in our community, and 3) to foster a sense of craftsmanship and
respect amongst our writers.
Why the name Aught / Naught? Well, to me the phrase typifies both existence and poetry;
both anything and nothing goes, and the line between being and nonbeing is thick and thin all at
once. Are our words, our dreams, our lives anything or nothing at all? Such is the question that
blooms at the heart of this project.
For now, each issue of the newsletter will rotate between being themed and un-themed.
With this in mind, the theme of the first Aught / Naught is that of ―Transition,‖ and you’ll find
that each of the submitted pieces in the pages beyond deal with this thematic in unique and
varying ways.
The newsletter is split into three sections. In section one, (uni)Verses, you’ll find
provocative poems submitted by contemporary poets from around the world. In section two,
Master’s Table, you’ll find three poems generated by some of the literary titans who preceded
us. And lastly, in the final section, Wordshop, you’ll find a few tips and prompts to help
stimulate your creativity.
I sincerely appreciate your interest in Aught / Naught, and I hope you’ll find the
newsletter to be fun, interesting, and helpful. I don’t live in an ivory tower, either, so don’t
hesitate to message me questions, comments, and concerns at [email protected].
In creating this newsletter, I hope to make an investment in poetry itself, and I hope we’ll
use this opportunity together to spread the good word about our good craft.
Thanks kindly,
—W.M.P. (4/10/16)
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I’d like to dedicate this issue to
Harrison, for his vision and wisdom.
Tiffany and Alan for their ideas and help.
The community for their talent and determination.
And Kayla for her love.
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―Every heart sings a song, incomplete, until another
heart whispers back. Those who wish to sing always find a song.‖
—Plato
―If you are a dreamer come in
If you are a dreamer a wisher a liar
A hoper a pray-er a magic-bean-buyer
If you’re a pretender com sit by my fire
For we have some flax golden tales to spin
Come in!
Come in!‖
—Shel Silverstein
―I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my eyes and all is born again.‖
—Sylvia Plath
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BLACK WIND – by @thewordvirus
Frozen tears litter
Autumn’s violet virgin skin;
Spring’s touch seems so far.
Cow heads hang and sway
from a leather tree—they moo
and a black wind blows.
The sleepy sun yawns,
falling past horizon’s hips—
death stirs under foot.
H’come twilight monks
plucking stars from night’s bosom;
rub the flesh on lips.
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LIFTED – by @sunseventh
The myrrh and cassia
stole my scent
then you
peeled off my fingertips
and buried them
at the scene of the crime
An autotopsy under the cedars
words sequestered
removing and assessing
one organ at a time
My crepe paper heart
measured against truth
then weighted with the loss
only a mourning mother can claim
once the veil has lifted
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CUSTARD AND JELLY IN HER HANDS – by @akifkichloo
It takes both time and distance
for a piece of paper to age.
The edges – stained,
the page – crumpled,
the ink remains the same,
the words read the same,
yet their meaning is different,
evolved into something new.
I noticed my mother’s hands the other day,
holding a bone china dish with
custard and jelly, perfectly made,
just like when I was a young boy.
Her hands unrecognizable – ebbing skin;
transparent, you could see her blood,
I was never told blood turns bluer as you get old.
What time does to us, distance can limit,
but what then, when we set
boundaries for people who need to
be near us?
I have always been heavy,
cannot see my blood through my thick skin,
there is no transition in my hands to notice,
time has always played tricks on me.
And I cry, still;
my nails grow back so fast.
I chew them away,
why do my nails grow back so fast?
I don’t want to be my mother’s age.
I don’t want my mother to be my
mother’s age.
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DRAWING THE LINE – by @guptaprakhar
Only when the frugal stream
Appears from the horizon
Must you stop bathing
Your dreams in the river
And drink little
Droplets
So you never forget
The taste of hot summer
Afternoons
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BROOD 5 BABE LISTENERS – by @alanhaiderpoetry
Cicada rhythms brought
Magicicada underground
New York Virginia Ohio
seventeen years in ago
the girls blossom with
each brood & boys sing
choruses giant boyband
groups a desperate try
to attract a mate this
fate I can commiserate
the fall a cicada dies
like we hoped boybands
would all we see she’s
just a child no longer
in the eyes of the law
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THE WAY – by @river_is_love
Transitions are lines in the dirt
Connecting to others;
We scribble in vain believing in
What does not haunt us
While geometry tells us lines never end,
They start endlessly
Along the horizon
Infinitely cozy beneath our feet, so certain of the way
Like the smile of the moon;
And if the smile is shifted, the same remains true—
Earth becomes earth,
Full or hidden
The moon becomes moon,
All unbidden.
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OCEANUS SAYS – by @b.oakman
Wrap the sun around your finger and feel how it burns during the chorus
of Bohemian Rhapsody. We open doors to feel needed by strangers and
hearts to be rejected by friends and pop cans to feel a little more
grounded by the weight of the extra cents in our pocket; but the truth is,
words hinge on molars and unsung pianos till they calcify from old age (a
sorry sight). Giants will use them on walking sticks during the rain dance
until they cry in victory – haven’t you always wondered how the oceans
came to be? We still taste the salt brine on cloudy days and tap our left
foot to the silence; this is how to overcome the fear of deep waters.
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NOTHING HAPPENS by – @williammatthewpeaster
over the dunes
the sea becomes a lahar
it turns sideways and churns
black along the glassy shore
catching in an instant
every swimmer and vessel
in a hideous aslant rushing,
man, machine, and mud wrestling
in the ugliest sight I ever saw:
I pinch my arm and nothing happens.
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ODE TO LIFE – by @athenamystique
my skin has never been perfect and
one day, it’ll slough right off
my skeleton and
melt into the sea
everything will end
one day
so i remove myself
loosen attachments
expectation leads
to depression
i need to be super prescient
taking cues from ancients
to read the ruins of my emotions
the dead still speak and
loudly if you’re willing to listen
why repeat their mistakes when
everything ends
it’s there in the bones
written in the dust of
athens and rome
it’s in the obsidian of pompeii
every star screams brilliantly
exploding and you fail to see
the beauty in decay
this life is dying and
it's worth the admission cost
so pull up a chair and heed
or jump on the stage
before the curtain closes
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MEANING IN SIDE-STREET AMERICA – by @zackariah.allen
I hung out with
deadbeats and losers
and I was below them
the wallflower
from the first floor
the party above
sniffing and snorting
away their parent’s money
they fucked
to feel and laughed
until tears and I was
left wondering
―is this it?‖
and then it was me
and the years I didn’t sleep
finding my way through
side-street America
with Cobain screeching
and the rain pouring
it was the men living
paycheck to paycheck
it was the whores with
open pocketbooks
and open legs
it was the doctor
with the shrinking pupils
it was affirmed by
the homeless
and the hopeless
and everything without
that whatever this is
would still be here
when I finally woke up
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PURPLE TIDES – by @b.a.mcdonald
the days are stairways
as we climb
lies escape like dreams
in black and white
it is dark
and purple tides rise
and fall over distant faces
when we reach the top
the past awakens
and our faces are
swimming across from
each other
lovers who have yet to touch
united in a current
that does not exist
not yet drowning
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MAN AND BOTTLE – by Wallace Stevens
The mind is the great poem of winter, the man,
Who, to find what will suffice,
Destroys romantic tenements
Of rose and ice
In the land of war. More than the man, it is
A man with the fury of a race of men,
A light at the centre of many lights,
A man at the centre of men.
It has to content the reason concerning war,
It has to persuade that war is part of itself,
A manner of thinking, a mode
Of destroying, as the mind destroys,
An aversion, as the world is averted
From an old delusion, an old affair with the sun,
An impossible aberration with the moon,
A grossness of peace.
It is not the snow that is the quill, the page.
The poem lashes more fiercely than the wind,
As the mind, to find what will suffice, destroys
Romantic tenements of rose and ice.
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THE FACT OF A DOORFRAME – by Adrienne Rich
means there is something to hold
onto with both hands
while slowly thrusting my forehead against the wood
and taking it away
one of the oldest motions of suffering
as Makeba sings
a courage-song for warriors
music is suffering made powerful
I think of the story
of the goose-girl who passed through the high gate
where the head of her favorite mare
was nailed to the arch
and in a human voice
If she could see thee now, thy mother’s heart would break
said the head
of Falada
Now, again, poetry,
violent, arcane, common,
hewn of the commonest living substance
into archway, portal, frame
I grasp for you, your bloodstained splinters, your
ancient and stubborn poise
—as the earth trembles—
burning out from the grain
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WITH THE FLIES – by Roberto Bolaño
Poets of Troy
Nothing that could have been yours
Exists anymore
Not temples not gardens
Not poetry
You are free
Admirable poets of Troy
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WMP’S TIPS
1. Be wary of mixing your metaphors; a phrase like ―A Herculean rise from the ashes,‖ which
simultaneously implies the rising of a Phoenix and the rise of Hercules, is actually quite goofy if
you think about it. Consider untangling a mixed metaphor by choosing a single thread and
removing the other, such as ―A Herculean rise from the valley,‖ which removes the Phoenix
connotation altogether.
2. Poems use heightened language to heighten our senses. We can see poems like mini-movies in
our minds, but only if poets give us concrete imagery to spring from. A big thing that my
Creative Writing professor pointed out to me several years ago is that many poets who are just
starting out tend to rely too much on rhetoric and too little on imagery (though every rule can be
broken). For the most part try to show and not tell, and if you can do this, your poetry will be
much sharper. The pure rhetoric of I feel the jealous rage rising inside me / until I know that
today I will speak up offers no concrete imagery to guide the reader’s imagination. Now, here’s
the same sentiment expressed through concrete images: My eyes swell green with kudzu / until
vines spring through my mouth and I must scream. Not only is the second option more poetic and
more symbolic, but it allows your reader to visually move down the stanza with a mini-movie
playing in their head because each line has at least one image.
3. Try to weed out unnecessary words in your poems. Maybe there’s none, maybe there’s only
one, or maybe there’s thirteen. This is really up to your subjective judgment, but take the
sharpness of haikus for example: they are so short and dynamic that a single superfluous word
would wreck their electricity. Take this principle and try to apply it to any of your poems, large
or small. If you can weed out some unnecessary words then chances are your poem will be
tighter, clearer, and more electric. Use your best judgment, but don’t be afraid to cut things here
and there. I’ve often found that an average poem can be turned into a good poem by editing out a
few words or lines: at times it certainly can make all the difference.
4. Consider starting a dream journal and then using the weird and crazy events from your dreams
as the basis for new poems. There’s a lot of untapped creative potential in your unconscious, and
when dreams let us in on this potential from time to time, we’re often flabbergasted. You can use
the incredible and surreal narratives of dreams to supercharge your own poems. Try setting your
alarm for 3:00 a.m. and then jotting down exactly what you were just dreaming once you wake.
You’ll soon have tons of great material to work from.
5. A ―tag‖ is a poetic technique that is derived from Ancient Hebrew poetry that involves several
consecutive lines being started in the same manner, such as As he that bindeth […] / As a thorn
goeth […] / As a dog returneth […] / As the door turneth […] and et cetera, with the tag here
being As. I’ve found that tags can be a great way to write poems or to generate ideas for poems,
so try messing around with this technique and see what interesting effects you can achieve with
it.
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WMP’S PROMPTS
1. There’s a relatively new poetic form going around called a ―Cinqku,‖ which is a combination
of the Eastern haiku with the Western cinquain. Here are the main rules for writing one:
-A syllable count of 2, 3, 4, 6, and 2, so the first line has 2 syllables, the next has 3, and et cetera.
-All in all, there’ll be 17 syllables on 5 lines.
-Use sharp, imagistic language like in haikus; feel free to use unconventional syntax.
-Can be linked to other Cinqkus to make longer pieces.
Here’s an example of a Cinqku by the poet Denis M. Garrison:
buried
five cold years
but never gone—
our bedroom’s fragrant with
her scent
Now it’s your turn; for this prompt, take a stab at writing a Cinqku and share your results with
the community.
2. Write a haiku from the perspective of a bird without mentioning the word ―bird‖ anywhere in
the haiku or title of the piece.
3. Write a poem of 8 or so lines and start each line with a ―tag,‖ which we discussed just
previously in the TIPS section, and once you’re finished with this, flip the order of the lines so
that the first line you wrote is now the last, the second line you wrote is now the second to last,
and et cetera. Which way do you like it better? Forwards or backwards? Give it a go and find
out.
4. Take one of your favorite writer’s shorter poems and then ―ghostwrite‖ it; in other words, use
the form and rhythm of the original piece, but insert your own words and ideas into the structure,
like filling an empty pool up with water.
5. Look up the surreal Dadaist poetry of Tristan Tzara and note how he links together disparate
images in odd ways. Then, do your best to make a provocative and surreal Dadaist poem in the
same manner.
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FINIS