banning on mobile phones

8/17/2019 Banning on Mobile Phones

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WRITINGQUESTION 2

EXTENDED WRITING


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The Ministry of Education’s decision to lift the ban on mobile

phones in schools has generally caused uproar. While many

thanked the government for making mobile phones legal in

school, this move has upset many.

You are of the opinion that mobile phones should not bebrought to schools. You would like to give reasons why

mobile phones should be banned in schools.

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Thesisstatement

Topicsentence 1

Topicsentence 2

Topicsentence 3


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Mobile phonesshould be banned

in schools

Topic sentence 1 Topic sentence 2 Topic sentence 3


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Mobile phones shouldbe banned in schools

Students may notconcentrate in class

when their teacher areteaching.

Students may misuse orabuse the use of the

mobile phone.

Might be made asymbol of financialstatus and cause jealousy among

students.


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PARAGRAPH 1: INTRODUCTION

Introductory

line (s)

Many argue that mobile phones have

become a necessary gadget among

young adults nowadays but its uses in

school remains debatable.Stand I am of the opinion that mobile phones

should not be brought to schools.Thesis

statement

Mobile phones should not be legalized in

schools for three obvious reasons.


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PARAGRAPH 2

Topic

sentence

Students may not concentrate in class

when their teachers are teaching.Supporting

Details

-Students will be engaged to their mobile

phones.

-Mobile phones come with a myriad of

functions and are highly addictive.

-Students play games, texting, access to

Internet, listen to songs, etc. via mobile

phones when the teaching and learningprocess takes place.

-Students do not respect their teachers.

-Students could not concentrate and

therefore did not learn anything in school.


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PARAGRAPH 3

Topic

sentence

Students may misuse or abuse the use

of the mobile phones.Supporting

Details

-Mobile phones have a wide array of

functions or applications that are easily

misused.

-Students being at a vulnerable age overlook

the conseuences of their actions.

-Students cheat during exams by taking

photos of notes to be referred.-Students send answers to their friends or

receiving answers from their friends.


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PARAGRAPH

Topic

sentence

Might be a symbol of nancial status

and cause ealousy among students.Supporting

Details

-"reate a lot of disciplinary problems

-Students like to show o# what they have to

their friends.

-Some students will hide stolen mobile

phones in $ower pots or dustbins in the

school compound

-Mobile phones might go missing or beingstolen.

-%laming and pointing &ngers at each other.

-Students who do not have mobile phones

will feel inferior to those who have.


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PARAGRAPH 5: CONCLUSION

!oncluding

line(s)

It is clear that bringing mobile phones

to school has more disadvantages.Suggestion(s) Schools to install more public phones for

students to use.

"dvice(s) 'arents should cooperate by not allowingtheir children to bring mobile phones to

school.#ope(s) Students themselves will understand why

mobile phones should not be brought to

school.$ecommendat

ion(s)

School authority especially the discipline

board to conduct more spot checks.


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!s a counselor in your school, you are asked to give a talk to

&orm i' students in the school assembly on the topic (

Mobile phones should be banned in schools), in not less

than *+ words, write out your script.

Thesis statement There are many reasons why mobile phonesshould be banned in schools.

Topic sentence 1 : Students may not concentrate in class when theirteacher are teaching.

Topic sentence 2 : Students may misuse or abuse the use of the mobilephone.

Topic sentence 3 : might be made a symbol of financial status andcause jealousy among students.

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