be descriptive: expand sentences with adjectives
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• Step 1—correct sentences• Step 2—colorful, interesting, vivid, specific
To make readers see, hear, smell, taste, or feel the things you are wring about
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1. Will I do well in all my classes? Will the teachers be friendly and fun or stern and boring?
2. She lives in Edinburgh in Scotland. She lived in a very small, cold apartment.
3. There is a way to help us remember these joys of childhood, the fun, silly, imaginary things that were once such a big part of our lives: to read children’s poetry.
4. When someone found him in his room, his shoes and clothing were wet through and icy cold.
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5. In Taiwan, people have two very specially and different ways of cerebrating Lantern Festival. In the north, they send thousands of sky lanterns into the night sky, creating a beautiful and peaceful scene of lights going up to the heavens.
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Make a comparison • The butterfly has a body and two wings.
• The butterfly has a swollen body and two shriveled wings.
• The butterfly has a short, swollen body and two small, shriveled wings.
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• The alarm clock rang for three minutes, and I reluctantly opened my eyes.
• The shrill alarm clock rang loudly for three painful minutes, and I reluctantly opened my eyes.
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• The watermelon was from Taichung.
• The sweet and juicy watermelon was from Taichung.
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• The place may have dead rats in it.
• The place smells strange and moldy and may even have dead rats in it.
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• The jacket can help you fight off the wind.
• This soft and warm jacket can help you fight off the cold wind.
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• After the storm, many drivers started to appear on the road, trying to go back to their families.
• After the violent storm, many drivers started to appear on the slippery road, trying anxiously to go back to their families.
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I cannot understand why Hello Kitty is so popular wit young people in Taiwan.
• Actually, it just has a face with two circles as its eyes and six lines as its whiskers.
• Actually, it just has a plain face wit two dull circles as its eyes and six uninteresting short straight lines as its whiskers.
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Practice A
The tiny caterpillar was hungry. He ate some green leaves every day. Gradually, he wasn’t a little caterpillar anymore. He became a big caterpillar. He then built a huge cocoon around himself. One day, he pushed his way out of the cocoon and became a colorful butterfly.