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Page 1: Be descriptive: Expand Sentences with Adjectives

Be descriptive:Be descriptive:Be descriptive:Be descriptive:

Expand Sentences with Expand Sentences with AdjectivesAdjectives

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• Step 1—correct sentences• Step 2—colorful, interesting, vivid, specific

To make readers see, hear, smell, taste, or feel the things you are wring about

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1. Will I do well in all my classes? Will the teachers be friendly and fun or stern and boring?

2. She lives in Edinburgh in Scotland. She lived in a very small, cold apartment.

3. There is a way to help us remember these joys of childhood, the fun, silly, imaginary things that were once such a big part of our lives: to read children’s poetry.

4. When someone found him in his room, his shoes and clothing were wet through and icy cold.

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5. In Taiwan, people have two very specially and different ways of cerebrating Lantern Festival. In the north, they send thousands of sky lanterns into the night sky, creating a beautiful and peaceful scene of lights going up to the heavens.

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Make a comparison • The butterfly has a body and two wings.

• The butterfly has a swollen body and two shriveled wings.

• The butterfly has a short, swollen body and two small, shriveled wings.

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• The alarm clock rang for three minutes, and I reluctantly opened my eyes.

• The shrill alarm clock rang loudly for three painful minutes, and I reluctantly opened my eyes.

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• The watermelon was from Taichung.

• The sweet and juicy watermelon was from Taichung.

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• The place may have dead rats in it.

• The place smells strange and moldy and may even have dead rats in it.

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• The jacket can help you fight off the wind.

• This soft and warm jacket can help you fight off the cold wind.

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• After the storm, many drivers started to appear on the road, trying to go back to their families.

• After the violent storm, many drivers started to appear on the slippery road, trying anxiously to go back to their families.

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I cannot understand why Hello Kitty is so popular wit young people in Taiwan.

• Actually, it just has a face with two circles as its eyes and six lines as its whiskers.

• Actually, it just has a plain face wit two dull circles as its eyes and six uninteresting short straight lines as its whiskers.

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Practice A

The tiny caterpillar was hungry. He ate some green leaves every day. Gradually, he wasn’t a little caterpillar anymore. He became a big caterpillar. He then built a huge cocoon around himself. One day, he pushed his way out of the cocoon and became a colorful butterfly.