brian dawkins project portfolio synthesis and final reflection

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Paul Fratarcangeli Comp 1  Dr. Sherry My project on Brian Dawkins this semester has helped me achieve all of the goals that were presented for this course. I am choosing to focus on my packaging and synthesis for the audience and purpose goal, my rookie diary entry for language and conventions appropriate to genre goal, my Hall of Fame survey for the critical use of evidence to formulate and support arguments goal, my magazine cover for media print and non-print goal, and my timeline for the writing process goal. A. Students will be able to compose for particular audiences and pur poses. For the audiences and purposes goal I am focusing on my packaging and synthesis. This project has been constructed especially for fans of Brian Dawkins, but can be for all football or sports fans. I think Philadelphia Eagles an d Denver Broncos fans will really app reciate this work. I did not just want to show the football side of him because I already knew that, but I wanted to show his personal side to get better insight on who Brian Dawkins really is. To link everything together I am making a fan page that will have all the genres on it and additional information as well. B. Students will be able to compose using language and conventions appropriate to genre. For this goal I chose to focus on my rookie diary entry genre. The entry was used to show the struggles he had early in his career and that he overcame them. This is a more laid back and personal type of writing, so I used a less formal style to po rtray a real diary entry to make it as accurate as possible. I want people reading it to feel as if Brian Dawkins himself write the diary entry to make it authentic and emotional. C. Students will be ab le to read, select, and use evidence critically to formulate and supp ort arguments. For this goal I thought the most appropriate genre would be a Hall of Fame survey. The survey would determine whether the people I asked thought Brian Dawkins should be in the Hall of Fame or not. I wanted to go out and do my own research to see if people viewed him the same sense that I did. I walked around my whole dorm building looking for people to participate in my survey. I also gave the participants the choice of not knowing who he is because I thought this was the best way to get accurate results. I researched the information, selected what I would use, and showed the results in writing as well as using a pie chart for a visual. D. Students will be able to interpret and compose in a variety of media and print/non-print genres. For the media print and non-print goal I decided to focus on my magazine cover. I took a picture of Brian Dawkins and used it as the background of the cover. I used heading/headlines instead of traditional sentence structure you might see on an article inside of the magazine. These short phrases or questions make the reader wonder what is inside of the magazine. E. Students will be able to discuss and apply appropriate writing processes both individually and in collaborative contexts.  

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Page 1: Brian Dawkins Project Portfolio Synthesis and Final Reflection

 

Paul Fratarcangeli

Comp 1 – Dr. Sherry

My project on Brian Dawkins this semester has helped me achieve all of the goals that

were presented for this course. I am choosing to focus on my packaging and synthesis for the

audience and purpose goal, my rookie diary entry for language and conventions appropriate to

genre goal, my Hall of Fame survey for the critical use of evidence to formulate and support

arguments goal, my magazine cover for media print and non-print goal, and my timeline for the

writing process goal.

A. Students will be able to compose for particular audiences and purposes.

For the audiences and purposes goal I am focusing on my packaging and synthesis. This project

has been constructed especially for fans of Brian Dawkins, but can be for all football or sports

fans. I think Philadelphia Eagles and Denver Broncos fans will really appreciate this work. I did

not just want to show the football side of him because I already knew that, but I wanted to show

his personal side to get better insight on who Brian Dawkins really is. To link everything

together I am making a fan page that will have all the genres on it and additional information as

well.

B. Students will be able to compose using language and conventions appropriate to genre.

For this goal I chose to focus on my rookie diary entry genre. The entry was used to show the

struggles he had early in his career and that he overcame them. This is a more laid back and

personal type of writing, so I used a less formal style to portray a real diary entry to make it as

accurate as possible. I want people reading it to feel as if Brian Dawkins himself write the diary

entry to make it authentic and emotional.

C. Students will be able to read, select, and use evidence critically to formulate and support

arguments.

For this goal I thought the most appropriate genre would be a Hall of Fame survey. The survey

would determine whether the people I asked thought Brian Dawkins should be in the Hall of 

Fame or not. I wanted to go out and do my own research to see if people viewed him the same

sense that I did. I walked around my whole dorm building looking for people to participate in my

survey. I also gave the participants the choice of not knowing who he is because I thought this

was the best way to get accurate results. I researched the information, selected what I would use,

and showed the results in writing as well as using a pie chart for a visual.

D. Students will be able to interpret and compose in a variety of media and print/non-print

genres.For the media print and non-print goal I decided to focus on my magazine cover. I took a picture

of Brian Dawkins and used it as the background of the cover. I used heading/headlines instead of 

traditional sentence structure you might see on an article inside of the magazine. These short

phrases or questions make the reader wonder what is inside of the magazine.

E. Students will be able to discuss and apply appropriate writing processes both

individually and in collaborative contexts. 

Page 2: Brian Dawkins Project Portfolio Synthesis and Final Reflection

 

I knew that once I started my timeline genre it was going to be tricky. I really wanted one

 because it would show Brian Dawkins’ life as a whole. The tough part was being able to

transform it into my own work. I could not just throw facts on a page and call it a genre. I had to

put my own taste or spin on it. I was having trouble coming up with ideas, but thanks to the help

of Dr. Sherry and a few other of my colleagues I was able to figure out exactly how I would

transform it.

Reflection:

As soon as I learned that I would have to do a semester long project on a topic of my choice I

already knew what I was going to pick. Brian Dawkins. He is my favorite football player of all

time, and he played a majority of his career on my favorite football team, the Philadelphia

Eagles. I went into the project knowing much about his football career, but not much of his

personal life. Since he is my favorite player I was easily motivated to find out information I did

not already know. I learned how much of a role model and how much of a leader he is. I learned

that he had struggles like many other “ordinary people”, but he did not let that be the reason for 

him to not succeed.

This project has taught me that writing is not only about essays or traditional types of writing.

Writing can consist of many other pieces that people may not think of when they hear writing.

The multigenre project gave me more of a well-rounded writing experience than any other

English or composition course has ever given me. I got to make genres such as; a timeline, diary

entry, survey, speech, magazine cover, and a letter. By mixing up the writing varieties it helped

keep me more focused and interested in this project. Tying all the genres together and making a

website (fan page) out of them was also pretty exciting. It gave me a clear goal to look forward

to as I was approaching the end of the project, and I cannot wait to see what it looks like as a

finished product.

I felt like letting the students pick which topic they wanted will make each project unique and

interesting. Students will want to put hard work in when it is a topic they truly want to write

about instead of being forced to write about something that may not interest them. It definitely

motivated me to get this project finished on time.