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ROBIN WILLIAMS (RW4953-X756279X) A363 EMA
BRING ME A DREAM
A play for radio
by
Robin H. Williams
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CHARACTERS
DR. ALEXANDER MEINHOF Male, German accent, Mid 50s
JAMES DOHERTY Male, Early 30s
MARY CARTER Female, Mid 30s
MRS. LYDIA MEINHOF Female, Late 40s
NEWSREADER Male, Mid 40s
Baltimore, USA, 1950s.
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INT. BEDROOM, NIGHT. SILENCE, EXCEPT FOR F/X
RAIN AT WINDOW AND CLOCK TICKING
FOLLOWED BY SOUND OF MOVEMENT IN SLEEP
DOHERTY: (IN SLEEP - MUMBLING) No. Oh God No! What is it?
What, what have I done? (GASPING SOUND OF WAKING
AND BREATHING HEAVILY)
TO INTRO. MUSIC OPENING BARS OF MR
SANDMAN BY THE CHORDETTES - FADE OUT AT
00:29 (NB - MUSIC TO FADE IN/OUT THROUGHOUT)
INT. OFFICE, DAY. F/X INTERCOM BUZZER.
MEINHOF: Yes, what is it?
MARY: Your four-thirty, Mr. Doherty, is here to see you Dr. Meinhof.
MEINHOF: Ah, thank you. Send him in wont you? Oh, and
MARY: Yes Dr. Meinhof?
MEINHOF: As Mr. Doherty is the last appointment today, you may leave
once you have dealt with any outstanding correspondence.
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MARY: (IN BACKGROUND) You can go right in Mr. Doherty.
(INTO SPEAKER) Thank you Dr Meinhof. Ill see you on
Monday; have a nice weekend wont you?
F/X RUSTLING OF PAPERS ON DESK
MEINHOF: (PREOCCUPIED) Ah, er, yes Sally.
MARY: (INDIGNANT) Its Mary, Dr. Meinhof. I replaced Sally two
months ago.
MEINHOF: Yes Mary, of course, my apologies. See you on Monday. (F/X
INTERCOM CLOSING) Ah, come on in Mr. Doherty, nice to
meet with you.
DOHERTY: Yeahokayyou too. Where would you like me sit?
MEINHOF: Please would you lie down on the couch?
DOHERTY: (UNEASILY) Er, thank you Doctor.
MEINHOF: Now then, Mr. Doherty, I have received your file from Dr.
Rosenberg at Johns Hopkins and I have briefly digested the
contents. As far as I can see you are suffering from a recurring
dream which is troubling you greatly no? But please, Mr.
Doherty, describe to me this dream in detail and how it is
causing you so much concern.
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DOHERTY: (CLEARS THROAT) Okay Doctor. First you gotta understand
Im in no way dangerous, I swear to you. I cant talk to my
wife about this and its making it so I cant sleep at night. See
Im not crazy but this dream is making me feel like it and they
cant help me at Johns Hopkins; I just hope to God that you
can. In the dream Im sitting in my armchair at home and there
is the sensation that theres no one else around. My wife and
son arent there, even though in reality theyre always home. I
am sitting in front of our new television set; Senator McCarthy
is being interviewed onFace The Nationbut Im not really
listening. You seein the dreamI feel the guilt of having
killed someone, not just accidentally mind. I know I have
murdered them.
MEINHOF: If you dont mind me interrupting, who exactly is this person
you believe you have killed?
DOHERTY: Thats the thing Doctor, I have no idea. There is no detail, no
act; I just know that Ive done it. Its the same every damned
time; I wake at this point and for the moments after I wake I
still feel that I am a murderer. It can take the longest while for
me to realise that Im not. The worst part, and the thing that
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worries me most, is it seems to be taking longer and longer
every time.
MEINHOF: It sounds as though you have some feelings of guilt that may be
manifesting themselves in this way, Mr. Doherty. You have to
ask yourself, and you must be brutally honest, are you
internalising anything that could be causing this guilt? Could it
be a sense of guilt about your wife, or even your child, and this
is why they are not present in your dream no? You must search
inside yourself for these answers and I am sure when you do so
we will be able to begin to resolve this matter
FADE OUT WHILE MEINHOF FINISHES SPEAKING,
INTO MUSIC MR SANDMAN 00:30 TO 00:46
INT. OFFICE, DAY, F/X INTERCOM BUZZER
MEINHOF: Yes Mary, what is it?
MARY: Your four PM, Mr. Doherty, has arrived Dr. Meinhof.
MEINHOF: Thank you Mary, you may send him in. Mary, also I need to
speak with you about a discrepancy on one of our private
clients accounts. After Mr. Dohertys appointment could you
stay behind please?
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MARY: (PERTURBED) Eryesokay Dr. Meinhof.
MEINHOF: Very well we shall discuss it later. (F/X CLICK OF
INTERCOM CLOSING) Ah, come on in Mr. Doherty. Please
lie down on the couch. Now how are things progressing since
our meeting a week ago?
DOHERTY: Its getting worse Doc. The dream is happening every night
now, only its changing. I get flashes of images. Im in a park,
it could be Patapsco Park Im not sure, but I recognise things
from when I used to go there as a kid. It is so real; the damp,
musty smell from the dogwood trees; the gurgling of a stream
and the chickadees overhead (F/X, STREAM, BIRDSONG,
PANICKED MOVEMENTS, RUSTLING OF LEAVES.) The
overwhelming sense of guilt is still there too. It becomes
consuming and I am looking at the ground and I know
MEINHOF: What, what do you know James?
DOHERTY: I know that in the ground is a body (PAUSE) and Ive put it
there.
MEINHOF: And it is now that you wake?
DOHERTY: No, it always comes back to my home; the sitting room, the
television, the guilt, oh GodDoc, the guilt. I dont how much
more of it I can stand.
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MEINHOF: Did you do as I suggested? Did you search your soul to find
why you may feel this sense of guilt?
DOHERTY: Well Doc, there is one thing thats been getting to me. I swear
to you I never looked at another woman in all the time Ive
been married to Amelia, but recently there was this one girl,
Candy; she was a secretary who filled in for a while where I
work.
MEINHOF: And this is which place?
DOHERTY: The sugar refinery down on East Key Highway. All the guys
loved Candy though; I mean it wasnt just me and I kept it to
myself. Some of the other fellas used to say things to her, you
know suggestive things, it used to make me mad but she would
just laugh it off, I couldnt understand how she didnt find it
offensive mind. I know if my Amelia had heard things like that
she wouldve flown off the handle.
MEINHOF: And what has happened to this young lady now?
DOHERTY: I dont know, she was just a temp. I guess she moved on, I
aint seen her around for a while now, and to be honest with
you Im glad about that; I dont need that kind of temptation. I
mean other guys wouldve maybe acted differently in my
position if you know what I mean.
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MEINHOF: Yes, James I understand and I am glad you have been open
with me in your feelings towards this girl but I think there is
more to it than that; after all you are only a man. I am sure we
have all felt urges of this kind in our lifetime (LONG PAUSE)
it is human nature. You must not allow this guilt to overwhelm
you. You have made the right choices and therefore you need
not reproach yourself. Now, there are a number of exercises I
want you try over the coming week before our next session
FADE OUT AS MEINHOF IS TALKING - INTO MUSIC
MR. SANDMAN - 00:47 TO 00:55
INT. OFFICE, NIGHT
MEINHOF: Come on in please Mary. Now, as you can see there appears to
be a discrepancy on Mrs. Millers account. It would appear that
although she has had eight consultations with me in the past
two months, I can see only payments received for six. Now
Mrs. Miller always pays, according to our records, in cash. Is
that not correct?
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MARY: Erwellyes Doctor Meinhof, thats right. Maybe she just,
er, forgot to pay the last couple of times. Ill tell you what, you
leave it to me and Ill call her and sort things out. Dont you
worry yourself about those matters; Ill take care of them for
you.
MEINHOF: But Mary there is something rotten here.
MARY: What do you mean?
MEINHOF: I spoke with Mrs. Miller herself earlier today, and she assured
me that she handed the cash to you personally. So where is the
money, Mary?
MARY: (FALTERING) II dont kno
MEINHOF: Now I think you do. While you were out at lunch today I took
the time to examine our financial records and found that there
are funds missing from several of our other clients accounts
also. Now you will explain yourself to me or you can explain
yourself to the police; the choice is yours.
MARY: (NERVOUSLY CHANGING TONE) Okay Doctor look, I can
explain. Money has been really tight for me and Ive had some
serious debts that I had to settle. I swear to you Im gonna
repay every cent. In the meantime (SEDUCTIVELY) Im sure
there is a way around this situation. Maybe we can come to
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some other sort of arrangement? (F/X SOUND OF PAPERS
BEING SWEPT OFF DESK)
MEINHOF: Mary, as you know I am married man and I have the utmost
respect for my wife.
MARY: (LAUGHING PLAYFULLY) Ha! Thats not what Sally told
me. She told me allabout you, now I wanna see that side of
you too. Come on, Herr Doctor
MEINHOF: OhMaryNoI can not (CAPITULATING)
TO MUSIC MR. SANDMAN - 00:55 TO 01:12 (FADE)
INT. OFFICE, DAY, F/X INTERCOM BUZZER
MEINHOF: Yes Mary?
MARY: Its your four-thirty, Mr. Doherty.
MEINHOF: (CURTLY) Send him in.
MARY: (QUIETLY INTO INTERCOM) Okay Baby.
(CONFIDENTLY TO DOHERTY) You can go right in now
honey.
F/X DOOR SLAMMING
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DOHERTY: (AGGRESSIVELY) You got anything new to say to me?
MEINHOF: I beg your
DOHERTY: I said you got anything new to say to me? Ive been coming
here for weeks, spending money I aint got, and I dont have
jack to show for it. These dreams are getting worse and you
havent done a goddamned thing thats helped me get rid of
them.
MEINHOF: ButMr. DohertyJamesWhat of all I have told you?
That your dreams are projections of parts of your inner self that
have been ignored, rejected, or suppressed. What of the
breathing exercises, the meditative processes we discussed?
Have none of these had any effect?
DOHERTY: They havent done a damned thing you stupid old fart!
MEINHOF: Now, James. There is no need for this level of aggression. I
am sure that if we are able to relax ourselves a little we will be
able to find a way forward for you.
DOHERTY: Er okay sure.
MEINHOF: Now, I feel that your difficulties may have gone a little beyond
my capabilities as an Oneirologist and I believe you may
benefit from (PAUSE) perhaps a different level of
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psychological assistance, shall we say? I have here some
tablets that I think you should take twice a day for a short
while; just as a precautionary measure you understand? They
may aid you with sleeping at night a little too no? Take one
now James, here is some water for you. (PAUSE) I am not
going to treat you anymore James, but I am going to
recommend another practitioner who may be able to help you.
DOHERTY: (MELLOWING) Okay Doc, thanks.
MEINHOF: Now I am going to ask you to go home and relax for the rest of
the evening. I shall call you tomorrow to advise you of the next
course of action.
DOHERTY: Soso youll call me tomorrow then yeah?
MEINHOF: I can assure you of that James. Goodbye.
DOHERTY: Okay Doc, thanks.
F/X DOOR CLOSING, THEN TELEPHONE BEING
PICKED UP AND DIALED
MEINHOF: (ON TELEPHONE) Ah, hello I would like to speak with
Doctor Fischer. (PAUSE FOR RESPONSE) Oh dearer
would it be possible for me to please leave a message for him.
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(PAUSE) I have a patient that I believe I am going to need to
refer to him. The patient is displaying evident signs of
schizophrenic tendencies; aggression, delusions and he may
become a danger to himself and others around him in time. I
have given him a short course of Thorazine to aid with his
distemper for now and sent him home. When Doctor Fischer
returns on Tuesday I would wish for him to call me so I may
furnish him with some more details
TO MUSIC MR. SANDMAN 01:13 TO 01:20
INT. OFFICE, NIGHT, F/X DOOR OPENING THEN
SLAMMING, FIST SLAMMING ON DESK
MARY: What in the hell is going on? Mrs. Millers just left here and
told me that she handed her cash to you, and youve told her
thats the new arrangement for future payments! Are you
cutting me off? Is that what this is all about?
MEINHOF: Please, Mary. Settle down. I am merely getting the practices
accounts in order. I can not have you taking money directly
from the coffers; it will not work out that way. I can (PAUSE)
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afford you a small allowance against ourarrangements shall
we say?
MARY: An allowance? Are you crazy? What the hell do you think I
am; some two-bit call-girl? You had better do some serious
thinking Alex. Because if you dont, sure as hell Im going
straight to your wife; your clients; your colleagues; in fact
anyone who might take an interest in our (MIMICKING
ACCENT) arrangements.
MEINHOF: Maryplease. There is no need for this, I am sure we can
work something out that ismutually beneficial.
MARY: Youre damned right we can! You can benefit me with a
hundred dollars a week on top of my salary and I can benefit
you by only opening my mouth for the rightreasons.
MEINHOF: (WEARILY) Very well, it would appear I have little choice
MARY: Damned straight. Im going home now; dont even think about
calling on me later, I wont be there.
F/X DOOR CLOSING, MEINHOF SIGHS, CLINK OF
DECANTER BEING OPENED AND DRINK POURED
INTO GLASS, RADIO BEING SWITCHED ON, INTO
NEWS ITEM.
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NEWSREADER: the Watkins Committees final report said the senator from
Wisconsin should be censured for his conduct in Senate and his
treatment of General Ralph Zwicker. Senator McCarthy has
referred to the Committee as "the unwitting handmaiden of the
Communist Party." The investigation continues (PAUSE)
And finally on WCAO Baltimore News; Maryland State Police
have made a final plea for information regarding missing
twenty-one year old Candy Roberts of Ellicott City. Miss
Roberts has been missing since September 3rd when she left
work as a temporary secretary at Domino Sugar Plant in
Baltimore for home in Ellicott City and has not been heard
from since. The Police are urging anybody with information to
come forward before the case is filed under the three month
(F/X CLICK RADIO OFF)
TO MUSIC MR. SANDMAN 01:21 TO 01:33
INT. OFFICE, DAY F/X DOOR OPENING AND
CLOSING
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MEINHOF: (BRIGHTLY) Ahh, Mr DohertyJames Please come on in
and lie down on the couch.
DOHERTY: Whywhy have you called me back in here Doc? I thought
youd done all you could for me.
MEINHOF: Wellthere is one more method I believe may be of some help
to us. It is a form of hypnosis which I believe will allow me to
identify the origin of your problem and therefore find a more
suitable way of treating it. You must trust me, James; I only
have your best interests at heart.
DOHERTY: Ohokay Doctor. If you think itll do some good then Ill
give it a shot.
MEINHOF: Good, good. Now you must listen to everything I say very
carefully and follow absolutely every instruction I give you. Is
that understood?
DOHERTY: Yeahsure.
MEINHOF: So, you must now take a good, long, deep breath and close your
eyes. Now relax the muscles around your eyes to the point
where those eye muscles wont work, and when youre sure
they wont work, test them and make sure they wont work
You must have complete relaxation in those muscles around the
eyes Now, allow that feeling of relaxation to go right down
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to your toes (LONG PAUSE) That is complete physical
relaxation, now I wish to show you how you can achieve
mental relaxation as well as physical. I am going to ask you to
start counting, when I tell you to, from a hundred backwards.
Each time you say a number, your relaxation will double, and
by the time you reach ninety-eight you will be so relaxed there
will not be any more numbers Begin counting...
DOHERTY: One hundred
MEINHOF: Double your relaxation and watch the numbers begin to
disappear
DOHERTY: Ninety-nine
MEINHOF: Watch the numbers disappear
DOHERTY: Ninety-eight
MEINHOF: I am going to lift your hand and drop it. When I do this, the
rest of the numbers will just fall away, and all that will be left is
the sound of my voice, all you will hear is my voice, all you
will understand is my voice. (LONG PAUSE) NowI know
what you have done to the girl. You must go to that night; the
last night you saw Candy and tell me what is happening.
DOHERTY: (LONG PAUSE, THEN DARKLY) I can see Candy leaving
the office now. Ive finished early but Im waiting for her. I
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know she wants it, and I know she wants me to give it to her. I
watch her walking out the gates up Key Highway towards the
bus station; so I turn on the motor and drive outta the gates.
Its Friday night so I know shes going home. I tell her Im
heading to Clarksville anyway so I can give her a lift; save her
getting the bus and shes okay with that.
MEINHOF: You must tell me what happens in the car.
DOHERTY: Were out on the Pike near Patapsco River Lake. Weve been
talking all the way; Ive been making her laugh and I can tell
she wants me by the way shes twisting her hair and the way
her cute legs are crossed in those stockings. Im pulling over
now; the road is desertedbut she changes. Shes asking me
all these questions like; Why are we stopping? Whats wrong?
Shes telling me she just wants to go home, that she has a
boyfriend and he used to play linebacker and hell kick my ass
when he hears about this. I tell her to stop pretending; that its
me she wants. Then she reaches out and thumps me right in the
face. I can taste blood in the corner of my mouth as I watch her
jump out of the truck. Im running after her, (F/X RUNNING
THROUGH RUSHES AND PANTING) off the road into the
reeds by the river and as I catch up her with she falls to the
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ground face first. I lay on top of her but she starts screaming. I
tell her to shut up, SHUT UP! But the bitch wont stop so I
push her face down into the muddy water. I can feel her
shaking underneath me. Her arms are trying to reach round to
claw at me so I push down harder; then in time the shaking just
stops.
MEINHOF: You must tell me did you leave her there?
DOHERTY: Im putting her in my truck, under the tarpaulin in the back; it
smells musty and damp. Im driving to Patapsco Park; I know
exactly where to take her.
MEINHOF: James, you must listen to me. Are you happy with what you
have done?
DOHERTY: Whos James? (COLDLY) Whats done is done. She got what
she deserved.
MEINHOF: Yes, yes, she did. My secretary, Mary, looks at you the same
way as Candy did no? You have seen when you walk through
the office her eyes follow you everywhere. You have seen how
she teases you; the way she bends over the desk when you are
looking. She is the sort of girl that wants it too but she will
never let you give it to her. She needs to be taught a lesson; the
same lesson you taught Candy.
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DOHERTY: Yeahshe does
MEINHOF: Now listen to me carefully. You must repeat tonight what you
once did with Candy. Mary will be walking from this office to
the bus station at six-o-clock this evening, you will offer her a
lift; she lives in West Friendship, so you will drive the same
route along the Pike. You will find a quiet location and there
you will put her to the test. If you find that she will not play
the game then you must deal with her, exactly as you dealt with
Candy. James will not be coming back until the next time you
go to sleep; after this James will return. Now you must tell me
that you understand the instruction I have given you.
DOHERTY: I understand.
MEINHOF: Good, good. Now I am going to begin the process of
reawakening you. As I count back up to one-hundred you will
begin to feel movement in your arms and legs and your
conscious self shall begin to leave its relaxed state. Now I shall
begin counting, ninety-seven ninety-eight
FADE TO MUSIC - MR. SANDMAN 01:34 TO 01:56
INT. OFFICE, DAY
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MARY: But I dont see how this is gonna work out!
MEINHOF: It is simple, my dear. I have already explained to you. This is
a way of settling your financial worries without having to
cripple the practice. I will be following you all the way, just
out of sight, but I will make sure that I get enough pictures of
you together in the car to use to blackmail Doherty. All you
need to do is give him a little kiss and then as soon as he tries to
take things any further I will come and get you, you have
nothing to worry about.
MARY: Oh, baby, if youre sure Im gonna be okay. And hes loaded
right?
MEINHOF: A huge inheritance my dear; recently. Now go, it is nearly six.
I shall follow you at a safe distance.
MARY: Okay baby, you just make sure youre there when the time
comes.
MEINHOF: I shall be where I need to be
F/X DOOR SLAMMING SHUT, LONG PAUSE, THEN
F/X OF TELEPHONE BEING PICKED UP AND
DIALED, PAUSE FOR ANSWER
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MEINHOF: Ah, Lydia my dear. I am just letting you know I shall be home
a little earlier than usual tonight, my last client cancelled. I
would very much care for some red meat for my supper;
perhaps a steak no?
TO MUSIC - MR. SANDMAN 01:57 TO 02:03
INT. BEDROOM, NIGHT F/X CLOCK TICKING THEN
A DULL SMASH OF GLASS IN DISTANCE
LYDIA: (STIRRING) I think Rascal wants to go out, I can hear him;
you go Alex.
MEINHOF: (MUMBLING) Das schweinhund...
F/X SOUND OF MEINHOF GETTING OUT OF BED
AND SHUFFLING DOWNSTAIRS, STAIRS CREAKING
AND SWITCHING ON KITCHEN LIGHT WITH
ELECTRIC BULB BUZZING
MEINHOF: (QUIETLY) Youwhat are you doing here? Jameswhy are
you here?
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DOHERTY: There is no James. Just me here.
MEINHOF: Where is Mary? Whatwhat happened on the road?
DOHERTY: I taught her a lesson, just like you told me to Doc. You were
right; turns out she didnt want me to give it to her after all. We
stopped on the old Pike by the lake. She let me kiss her a little
but when I wanted to do more she (PAUSE) did a strange thing.
She started calling out for you. She started screaming at me
about how you were gonna come and save her. But then when
you didnt come she panicked and ran. Just like Candy;
straight into the reeds but she was even slower; those heels.
She was screaming out for you Doc, but you werent there. I
tried to get her to shut up, I didnt want to hear it, but she just
wouldnt stop. She kept yelling about how you were both
setting me up about how you were gonna blackmail me and
how I had money from an inheritance. She wouldnt believe
me when I told her; screamed at her, that there is no money.
Yeahit was a set up alright, wasnt it Doc? But not what that
poor bitch thought. It wasnt easy, but I made her tell me
where you lived. You know she was crying out for you as she
drowned, but a funny thing; she had even less fight in her than
Candy.
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F/X OF MOVEMENT, SOUND OF HEAVY OBJECT
SCRAPING ALONG KITCHEN SURFACE
MEINHOF: PleaseJames We can work things out
DOHERTY: James isnt coming back. There is no James. You killed him.
MEINHOF: Please No
F/X THUD, SLUMP OF BODY, DRAGGING AND
OPENING AND SHUTTING OF DOOR, CAR ENGINE
STARTING THEN DISAPPEARING INTO DISTANCE,
LONG PAUSE, THEN CREAKING OF STAIRS
LYDIA: Alex? Alex? Where are you Alex?
TO MUSIC - MR. SANDMAN - 02:03 02:08 - THEN
SOUND OF RADIO TUNING TO
NEWSREADER: therefore when the Democrats take over in January, Senator
McCarthy will no longer be permitted to chair the Senate
Permanent Investigating Subcommittee. (PAUSE) Youre
listening to WCAO Baltimore News. After the strange
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disappearance of both eminent psychologist Dr. Alexander
Meinhof and his secretary, Mary Carter, over a week ago;
Maryland State Police are still none the wiser as to their
whereabouts. It is not fully clear at the moment if the two
events are linked but Dr. Meinhofs middle of the night
disappearance from his home in Mount Washington is thought
to have been under suspicious circumstances. Added to the fact
that after investigation there appears to be discrepancies in Dr.
Meinhofs practices accounts, the police believe there is a
strong possibility that the disappearance is in fact an elaborate
vanishing act on the part of the good doctor and his secretary.
Now over to Broderick Carver with the sports
RADIO TUNING - BACK TO MUSIC - MR. SANDMAN
02:08 TO 02:24 (END OF SONG)
Running time 30 Minutes
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Commentary
Before writing the piece I embarked on a fair amount of research into dream
interpretation and therapy; reading some extracts from Freud and Jungs work
amongst others. During the creative process, however, I took care not to stultify the
dramatic flow with the overuse of psychological terminology as it had the potential to
make the dialogue tiresome during the consultation scenes. Whilst conducting the
psychological research I uncovered a noteworthy piece of information concerning Dr.
George Kelly, a 1950s dream therapist, in an online biography. It concerns the
treatment of regular, everyday people and reads as follows; It was surprising, he
thought, how readily these relatively unsophisticated people took to these
explanations of their problems. Surely, given their culture, the standard Freudian
interpretations should seem terribly bizarre? Apparently, they placed their faith in
him, the professional. (Boeree, 1997) I found this fact most interesting and it led to
the ideas that underpin the play; the balance of power between the doctor and his
patient; the misuse of this power; and the change in status throughout the course of the
piece.
The choice of time period, which I discussed at length in TMA04, is apt for several
reasons; the rise of psychotherapy as a form of treatment in this decade, and my
personal desire to set a piece in a non-contemporary time period, being among them.
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However, the main rationale for the setting was the complete lack of available
information regarding conditions of this kind to the general public at this time. In this
day and age people are able to self-diagnose any number of conditions by picking up
their telephones, or logging on to the internet. For the purposes of this piece, Doherty
needed to be completely in the doctors hands; initially seeming helpless to the
listener. At first, the centre of control lies firmly with Meinhof. However during the
play, the balance of power shifts from doctor to patient and back and forth until the
final scene.
During the drafting process I attempted to use various well placed social, historical
and cultural references to make the time-setting clear. In practice, though, I felt these
appeared clunky and somewhat contrived, and did little to assist the narrative flow.
Therefore I made the decision to use just one fixed reference point for clarity; Senator
Joseph McCarthys communist witch-hunts and his subsequent censure in December
1954. I hope that the incidental appearance of the news item, added to the use of a
memorable piece of 1950s music, enable the listener to establish a sense of place and
time. The inclusion of The ChordettesMr. Sandman (1954) adds a sense of irony,
and an almost sinister perversity to the play. It also, of course, offers a method of
seamlessly juxtaposing each scene. The use of the radio tuning from the song to the
final news article, and back again, is also convenient as a platform for the final news
item; without it I believe the item may have appeared bolted on.
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With reference to varying the dramatic action, I have used the change in status, rather
than the change in setting, as the main conduit for this device. It had initially been my
intention, as suggested in my feedback for TMA04, to introduce other voices to act
out certain key scenes, for example Candys pickup and subsequent murder. I found
during the writing process, however, that due to the short running time of the play and
more importantly the crucial addition of the subplot; the affair between Meinhof and
Mary; that this was not necessary. As discussed in Chapter 9 of Neale, the
interweaving and symbiosis of the subplot and the main story is essential, and in this
play it becomes the key factor in the changing of status and eventually the shift in the
balance of power between Meinhof and Doherty.
In relation to the drafting and editing process; the initial step-outline I produced was
invaluable. I must admit I had not used this particular method of preparation until
TMA05, but I shall be for future drama projects. Using the handbook model from
Chinatown (1974) in Chapter 9 of Neale, I gave each scene a short summary title
suggesting its narrative content; this immediately adds direction and guidance to the
writing procedure. Initially in the interest of running time and avoidance of repetition,
but eventually to the benefit of the plays plot credibility, I removed a scene
completely. Scene 8 in the step outline was entitled What have I done? and
consisted of another session between Doherty and Meinhof following Marys murder.
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The scene did not work on two levels. Firstly, the hypnosis, which I based on Dave
Elmans rapid induction script, and recounting of events had a repetition which I felt
unnecessary; it is far more sinister when Doherty recalls the events directly to
Meinhof in the final kitchen scene. Secondly, the shift between Dohertys normal
character and his alter-ego is more believable if he does not return to the James
character in the interim period between the murder and the final confrontation with
Meinhof.
I hope that the listener would attempt to rationalise Dohertys schizophrenia, even to
the extent of trying to establish when and where he is truly himself and when his alter-
ego consumes him. It is possible, for instance, that upon being questioned by the
police following Candys disappearance (a situation that would surely have arisen)
Doherty could have either been completely unaware of the situation, or purposefully
misled them; either way the outcome would have been the same. There are also
possibilities for the listener to imagine that, in his schizophrenic state, Doherty could
have committed other murders; hinted at in the line I know exactly where to take
her. Apparently, the idea of schizophrenia and dream-like states being confused is
common in patients suffering from this condition; The delusions experienced by
those with schizophrenia have been likened to the experience of illusory dreams that
have come to be interpreted by the subject as actual experiences. (Kavanau, 2000)
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On a final note; at times, during the creative process, I have felt concern that the
narrative voice is somewhat misogynistic. However, I believe that this voice and
sentiment is justified given the time setting and am satisfied with the result of this
calculated risk.
Word Count 1046
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Chinatown (1984) film, Roman Polanski (director), Robert Towne (writer)
Elman, D (1984)Hypnotherapy, Westwood Publishing Co ,U.S.
Kavanau, J.L (2000). Sleep, memory maintenance, and mental disorders, Journal of
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Neale, D (2009) in Neale (ed.)A Creative Writing Handbook, Milton Keynes/London,
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