changes in my teaser trailer
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CHANGES IN MY TEASER TRAILER
BETWEEN DRAFT 1 AND DRAFT 2
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The first change I made was instead of going straight into the clips, I added a common code and convention which was the production company at the start.
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I then added the sundance film festival selection onto this clip so it made it more eye catching and it also made it a lot more professional looking.
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I moved the from the director … text towards the end as I found that it was too early in the trailer for it to be displayed.
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I took out the clip saying October 2009 as I didn’t like it and in the end had no room for it.
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I also removed the text in this clip and took it out completely.
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I again removed this text to the end because I felt it took away from the trailer clips.
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A lot of the clips are switched about in this section and I added black outs in between to make the pace a lot faster and build the suspense.
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I added the text into the clip as I felt it was bare around it.
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Instead of having all these clips in one I separated them because it made it too cluttered.
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I changed Eimear having an award to Aisling because I wanted it to seem like Eimear was a rising star because that is what is going to feature in my movie magazine.
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I added the review to the end and after the panning shot which fades out.