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BREAKDOHM
on
THIRD KHVI3ED PIKAL
J**J..
1940 - EXT.
XAMAPa
-
DAV/H (MIMIAT'.-RES)
1 Long shot of estate, moving toward lighted window
2 Closor ohot of estate
3 Golf links
4 Zoo
5
Konkey
torraoe
6 Alligator pit
7 Lagoon
8
Swimming
pool
9 Cottages
10 Drawbridge
11 Window
1940 - INT.
KAMS'5
t'EDROOM
- DAWK
12 Bed silhouetted against window
13 Olobe falls fron hand and breaks
14 Kurae covers body with sheet - FADE OCT
1940. - HIT .-PROJECT IOH ROOM
IXSERT
Start
<
17 Establishing s
1040 - INT. CADAR
18 Susan at
dlsoourages
T
Captain a;
and calls
discuss digest -
Rosebud' - FADS
/Susan 47
reveals
Susan at tabl^, alone*
~ Susa n 47
a p t a i n l e a d s
Thompson to her \ she
son - Thompson and Captain walkNaway -
o w al to r - Thompson goe a to p i on e \« 5o tb
on
- FADE
IAL LIBRARY - DAY
040
- INT.
19 fcertha
Anderaoh
and Thompson at' desk
i n f r o n t
o f ThatoL.
s t a t u e / - £ »r th i Jfeada Thompson towar d Vau lt Room - DIS3oi>(E
1 4 9 5 3 6 6
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1940
-
IHT.
LIURAtA VATLT R00U
-
20
Thompson and Vertha
onjfrer
- Ouard hands manuscript to
B e r t h a , w h o
places ijron.
t a b l e
-
l e a v e s - Thom pson s t a r t s
t o r e a d -
INSEHT
- PAOE
1 8 7 0 - J E X T . fc
V
ThatoherX s t o r y
•JE'.3 oOAhDDTO HO SE - COLORADO - DAY
me
- o\ Kane
itohor
V 2 6
1'rs.
in
sno\
- 7h&tenor, moth
s dooucsnts
- they
21 Kane
playl
thru parlor - mot
28
O u t s i d e - K a n e V p la y in g w i t h s l e d
-
Thatoher - hlfcsv T h at ch er - DISSOLVE
1070 - TRAIN TKfEELa ON TRACE
77\
1S70 - IHT. TRAIN
DRAWI33 RCOM
-
NIQHT
T h a t o h e r 20
Kane 6
T h a t o h e r s t o r y
2 9 K an e i n b e r t h ,
o r y i n g X - Thatohor^standins alongalds
- DI330LVE
INSERT
- PAOE W T U A T C I I E ^ M33.
1896 - INT. EASE'S OFFICE * DAY
T h a t o h e r
atori
\
Thatcher - 64
" l i e - 93
Bernstein -
34
3 0 K an e a e a t e d a t
deok/^
T h a t o h e r
Indignant
o v e r h e a d l i n e
i n p a p e r • B e r n s t e i n e n t e r s w i t h c a b l e - g r a m - Kane
s e n d s r e p l y -Eernatiain e x i t s - Thatohor a r g u e s a t t a c k
o n T r a c t i o n T r u s t - p o i n t s o u t n e w s p ap e r i s los ing mone y -
DISSOLVE
1940
-
IH T. VAULT ROOM
-
DA
PAOE OP
U S 3 .
Abpfore i t r e g i s t e r s , T hom pson s h u t s b ook -
c o n f r o n t s £ertti£ - h e l e a v e s - FADS OUT
3 1
1940 - INT. U E R : I 3 T 5 I H » 3
OFFICE - DAY
i s t e i n - 70
3 2 B e r n s t e i n s t a r t s tel l i tag/s tory t o
Thompson*
(60 )
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1890 - EXT. IN3JIRKR BL
Bernstein story
33
Kane and Leland
B e r n a t e l n a r r i v e a
1890
-
IHT . CITY RO
Bernateln
s t o r y
- 26
• 2 8
B e r n s t e i n
- 26
Wagon driver.
cab
- exit Into bldg. -
gon with furniture
Kane-"- 26 Carter
Leland - 28 Staff
.Bernstein
- 26 Wagon driver
X T
\* /
34 Kane and Le lan d
woloomod'by
C a r t e r a n d s t a f f . B e r n s t e i n
a p p e a r a w i t h
furniture,vfollowed
b y w a go n d r i v e r w i t h
m o r e f u r n i t u r e -,Kane s a y s h e ' s g o i n g t o l i v e i n the
off loe -
DI3S0LVE
'
1890 - IHT. KANE'S OFFICE -'LATE DAY
36
Borastsin
s t o r y
F u r n i t u r e In plaoe
e a t i n g
-
Leland wa
Kane and Cartor d
Kane an d Lela nd
/
ane/^28
aland - 1
Kane,
Inland
-
28
irernstoin •
2 6
C a r t e r
no
in
s h i r t s l e e v e s w o r k i n g
and
-
B e r n a t e l n w o r k i n g o n
figures
ousavpolicy o f p a p e r - C a r t e r e x i t s «
eavo
f o r d i n n e r
-
DISSOLVE
1890 - IHT. CO«P03XH3 _V PRESS R00& - KIOHT
\ -
B e r n s t e i n s t o r y
/
/
36 All at table on whlo
(Kane and Leland
in
e
pagea
remade •
and exits with Le
/
1890 -
EXT.
INQUIRER
Bernstein
eto
87 Portion of build
lighted window •
Kane •
Leland^-
28
cerneseln
- 26
Carter
Smathera
(foreman)
several locked forms of type •
g clothes) - Kane orders
.osigns - Kane destroys forms
DISSOLVE
w i t h sign - K a n e ' s
SOLVE
e s e e n
in
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1800
- IHT. KAIiS'3 OFFJcA
-
PAWN
Be rns t e i n s t o ry
38
Kane - ,
Lelaui - 28
isteln -
2 6
Kane In shirtsleeves
present - Kane
Leland aaka for t
window - Bernstein and Leland
3CLARATI0H - Kike takee it away •
:lnal draft * DISSOLVE
1800 - EXT. INQUIRER WIN DO* OH STREET - DAWN
Bernateln story
Kane - 25>
Loland
Bernateln
- 26
Eewsboys
39
Piles of papers wit h DECL&RATICH on front page •
Window, wit h sign : Circulation 26 ,00 0.
Kane*
Bernateln
and Leland behind w ind ow - newsboys aeen - DISSOLVE
1890 - EXT. O:IHQWICL:
Bernstein story
2
8L20.
WIMM7
be ing
p-iotographedv
j /Eejwist el n
,
' a t banquets t a b l e .yQt4he
Chronicle e t o f f X - anloounaos vac at ion •
:ear - Kane, B£r£atoin\and Leland
ijbots job of correspondents •
— ;wlth hlmj» Oeors le's lOace - DISSOLV
J*
Oeorsfe
Ethel and girls
^Pianist
Oeorgie intrbduolng E t h e l t o L e l a n d - Ke\e a t p iano wi th
Bernateln-'&nd g i r l a , s in g in g "Oh,'
Kr.
KanoV - Leland
comes over
-
Kane,
offers him Job
o f
dramatic,
c r i t i c - DISSOLVE
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1808 -
INT.
KANE'S OFPTfig
-
m v
B e r n a t e l n
stoj
r
iland - 36
B e r n s t e i n - 3 4
43
Offloe filled wltlypacklns cases which Leland is «„.„<»„
SEE
1
:
?VA£*
«*• - -
1
«» S2
i:
3SS8
1808 - IHT. C I T £
ROOM
- DAY
Bernstein story
Earnstein
Kane -
54 Hlllran
Townsend
Staff
44
B e r n s t e i n , Ulllman a n d staff^waltlng t o oreaenfc
I « , H „ „
S L : . * ™
a r p l V O a
" SlT.- - teiounoan.Jt to ToTOsen^mfd
ruahea away - a ta f f
g o e i ' t o
window -
iownaend
and
1898 - EXT. STREET - IHQTIRER
ISLDSy^
DAY
Bernstein s t o r y \ /VnW\r - 19
46 SEEN
FRO .'
CITY ROoa WsDOV,' - Em ily In barouche -
1898 - EXT. CITY RCOV
UAY
Bernstein^etory
46 Faoes o f bernateln a n d s t a f f a
1898 -
IHT.
CITyROOyV DAY
B e r n a t e l n
tory
'bernateln 34
Townsend
S t a f f
47
1898 -
Townsend reads
apnounoesent
- t e l l s B e r n s t e i n a b o u t
Kane
engagesentr tby^Emlly
•
FXT. STRgJT
-
E.WJIRER
f-.LD0.
B e r n s t e i n story
DAY
48
e - 33
Emily - 19
1898 - IH T. CITY ROOM - ru v*
B e r n s t e i n ***& S .rnsteln - 3 4 Townsend
49 Comments o n , en ga ge m en t - DISSOLVE
S U
*
r
IHSEl-T HEWSP^R •
Kmnm
a W Emi ly
XH3ERT NEWSP/
- Kane a S Em ily wedding
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1040 - INT. B..hNSTEIN'3 GFFrCB -yfi&Y '
6 0 \ s^ B e r n a t e l n - 7 6
B e r n a t e l n f i n 1 s h e . t e l l i n g s t o r y t o T hom pson
-
FADS OUT
1940 - EXT.
H03PIT/1
B O Q F V
DAY
61
(69)
(79)
Leland starts
1901- INT. EREA
1909
6 2 -
68
Leland - 78
to Thompson
KANS'S HOKE -
DAY
L e l a n d s t o r y \
/
Kane -
30-44
Emi l y
- 2 2 - 3 0
S e r i e s o f ahort ifroakfast s c en es - Ka ne a nd Em i ly - DISSOLVE
1040 - EXT. :t03PmL ROOF * DAY
i 69 L e l a n d t o l l l p c s t o r y to Thompson.
1915 - EXT.
DHtfnSTOfE
h H.Y. STREET
- NIOHT
L e l a n d s t o r y
60
lan
- 22
Kane 60
Suaan on way
homo
£*bn drugstore - carriage passes by
she X moots l.ano/0ho\ is spattored with mud - they
exit
Into
aouse/- DISSOLVE
1015
- INT.
5nSAt^3
ROOM
- KIQj
61
62
Leland story
Susan brings
her toothac
LATER -
Kane
themselves -
STTICAL
Sus a n V2H
Kane
/ 6 0
lain
an d
towolA
Ka ne c l ea ns up -
awaro
o f
- am uses he r
by
w ig g l i n g e ar s - DISSOLVE
iking shadowgraph
-
t h e y t a l k a b o u t
ua a n
s i n g s
7
for h la
• DISSOLVE
101Q
- POLITICAL
CAMPAIi
3 NEWSPAPER INSERTS^Wbout B os s R og er s - DISSOLVE
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1916 - INT. tttPISOH SQUARE GARDEN - HI-RT
Leland
attf
Kane -
6 L '
37
63
64
T h e g r e a t ral
s p e e c h - DISSOti
S p e a k e r ' s Platfor
Emily and Ju nio r
i i l l l san J o i n s h
1910 - EXT.EXIT -
Junior 9
1/2
Blllman
Junior in box - Kane naklng
e being congratulated - sees
left box -
hurries
to an
exit
-
ISSOLYE
Leland s
E GARDEN - J1I0HT
Kane - 61
Emily - 37
J u n i o r - 9
1/2
HI l i m n
a t e x i t - Kane ap p e ars wi t h HlUman
rushes to Easi ly -
Emily aenda
J u n i o r
borne
ah o and Kane l e a v e i n cab - DISSOLVE
Kane - 61
Sally - 37
on way to Susan
1
a
apartment - DISSOLVE
1916 -
IH
67
80
69
L e l a n d s t o r y
HALLWAY - Kano and
- ;IALL?.'AY A
U P
L i v m o ROOM - :iiaaT
Kane - 51
Emily
- 37
Susan
-
23
ly
admitted by
Maid
Rogers
kid
LIVIHO ROOM -
and Sally enter - Susan and Rogers
present - Emily" has note Tiiloh ehe received from Susan -
Rogers explains -\Rogera/thrcatena Kane -Kane orders
hia
out
-^Rogers
and Emily leave •
i na
Jd\j
-•~N
HALLWAY - E m ily andYflogers on way t o d oor - Kane and
Susan 'in apartment yd oorw ay - DISSOLVE
~~ r
'.
IHSEiT
CHRONICLE
expose
of Kan. and 3
uean
1916 -
IHT.
COKPOSIHQ ROOM - NIOHr
Leland
etoi
Berne t i
/.
- 62 / ' Jenki ns (foreman)
70 Prep ared headline tqKANE 00VERN0R - Tserfietoin and Jenkins
p r e s e n t - Bernstein indicates anotherSarepared headlineI
Kane Defeafvd - FRAUD AT POLLS - p^SSOLV"
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1916 - IHT.
KA.VE'SWFICB
-
KIIHT
8
7 1
L e la n d
atory
Leland and Kane
to b e transferi
"fan* - 51
Leland -
64
r
ouas Kane's oonduot - Leland asks
t o , C h ic a g o o f f l o s - DISSOLVE
1917 - EXT. TOE><LALL IN TR5STP«T - DAY
L e l a n d stori
72
R e p o r t e r s
Cameramen
C o p s /
Kane and
23 Suaun
a p p ea r - Kan e u p s e t s o a a er a a -
announoea
t h a t S u s a n ' s
goxp^" i n t o
opera - DI3SGLV7"
INSERT
C-IICAap^I ^TlXER
announ cing opening of
( 1 9 1 9 ) o p e r a / - DISSOLVE
1919 - INT. jg ICASO OP.'KA .-iO'AjS -_"(I0HT
L e l a n d a t o r y \ y Susan - 26
7 3
03
STAGE -
Susan/amld
p r i n c i p a l s ,
eto^. \ c u r t a i n
r i s e s -
S u s a n s i n g s -^jsisagehanda In g r i d geature ^heir o p i n i o n -
DI3SCLVB
1919 - IHT.
CHICAGO IN-
R - CITY RL'OH fr
LZiXXD
CVFTCE - '.' KHT
L ela n d a to r y
i te ln - 66
- 57
7 4
74a
75
7 6
7 7
78
CITY hOOM - Bernstein>and s t a f f - u n ea a y o v e r L e l a n d ' s
d e l a y in f i n i s h i n g review - Kane entere - l e a r n s a b o u t
L e l a n d - g o e s i n t o
e l a n d ' s
o f f i c e - B e r n s t e i n f o l lo w s
-
LELAHD'3 OFFICE - Borns
ibolvr'
ontors / s e e s Ka n e s ta n d in g
b e s i d e Loland woo i s slumped o v e r t y p e w r i t e r - B e r n s t e i n
r o a d s a l o u d w h a t I^lsndUiaa written - Kano a n n ou n c es h e ' l l
f i n i s h r e v i e w - Bernrfcein retreats - DISSOLVE
3ernsxe£n retreats
t i l i n g
-
DISSOLVE
ITY ROOM • Kane
LSLASD'3 OFFICE - Lelakd^combs b u t o f s t u p o r •'.Bernstein
informs aim tact Kane/is finishing r ev iew •
CITY ROOM
-*Kane ty pi As ^L eJ
t e l l s
aim ho' a f i r e d > \ D 1330
V
1040 - EXT. HOSPITAL RCOF ^ DAY/
tland goee to aim - Kane
JSOLVB
\
79
L e l a n d f i n i s h e s te l l l hgy s t o r y t o Thompson - DISSOLVE \
/
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ytf^FN,
19 4 0 - EXT. CABARET - NIOtIT
~"~~ Susan 47
80 SKYLIGHT sr ip t" ^ Su san and Thompson se e n at t a b l e •
1940 - INT. CA6ARET\- DAWTfX
61
(108 )
S u s a n s t a r t
1917 - INT.
1333"
82
l i ng s t o r y t o Tnompaon - DISSOLVE
Y .
LIVIM3
ROOM - DAY
Susan story Kane -
62
Susan - 24
k a t l s t l
S u s a n s i n g i n g ' - Satlsti accompanying - K ane l i s t e n i n g -
Katlstl discouraged
- Kane ta lk s
him Into
continuing - DISSOLVE
1919 - IHT.
/ .
JPTRA HOUSE - HEJUT
8 3 -
9 2
Sussn s t o r y
C u r t a i n r laea -
vory hard -
Susan - 26
Kane - 64
B e r n s t e i n - 65
Hillamn
1919 - IHT
C.ilCXoO :iOTEL ROOD -
in s i n g s - Kane and b i s s t o o g e s a p p l a u d
ta t
Ion
from audience - DISSOLVE
DAY
Susan s tory
Kane - 64
'Susan
- 26
Copy boy
9 3 e l a n d ' s I
tra ins toi
DECLARATION *
3us£n
a n n o u n c es s h e ' s g i v i n g tf p s i n g i n g -
Kane t e a r s up DECLARATION - o rd er s he r t o c o n ti n u e - DISSOLVE
Sus a n up s o t o v e r
e n v e l o p e w h i c h
r ev i e w - Copy b o y en te r s w i th
frins torn-up oheok an d d r a f t o f
Il.'SERT VARI006 EIQ-JIRERSXannounoing S u s a n ' s
independent
o p e r a
weaeon
-
/fl^^V
1920 - EffT. KANE'S K.Y.HOMg -
S u s a n s t o r y
9 4
08
9 6
97
Susan / 27
Kane / 55
Dr* Corey
H u r a .
J o s e p h
BIOIIT *
K a n .
and Joe^eph oraph In - f ind Sus a n unoonsclous
NIOHT
- a l i t t l e
late
Kane and
nurae
r e m a i n
DAWN • Kane end N ur ae
DAY - Susan awakee - yte l ls
Kane oonsente t o d r o p p i n g
SAK'S ROOtf
-
HI05T
AMD DAY
uaan aaleep - Dr* Corey leavea
"SOLVE
Ing
Susan • DISSOLVE
why she attempted aulolde
elnglng oareer • DISSOLVE
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^926 - EXT. XANADU -
98 Sh ot o f Xanadu -
10
built -
1920
I & 3 5
1931
1932
0 9 -
102
"
I?TT
' "t**™ " ™ 4 T MAIJ>. HTr. r
Susan story
1929 - S u W bored'
r \
.ano
-
'64-67
Susan -^36-69
, working on pus a l e -
uS
"
yn
f
"""* Piece^ano
W32 " ^ t ^ - Kana o r d e r s Susahto aVrange f o r v l a i t \ «
ladea Camp - J ^ a
^ J ^ f J * J j
v i a
" t o
seated nearby
ther plctura pusale
1932 -
EXT.
XANADU
ROdD
-
3usan a^ory
• \ D :
103
j a n . ^ W i„
ta
0
„
.
o t h
\ / „ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^
1 8 3 2 -
E C T .
( T i T - T . ^ .
TO
AaiAa
. «.
Susan
storyN
104
105
""Susan - 39
Kane - 67
EXT.
- ea t ab l l s h l n^ s hot
TEST - yusanafftVano argue - DISSOLVE
1032 - INT.
XAtarfxr - Q R E A T V A M — n«v
106
S u s a n s t o r y
\
Kane look
to soe him}
Kane
Raymo:
67
1 0 3 2 - I N T . XftMATTTT
S u s a n s t o r y
Susan read
u p v a l i s e
refusee^nic
SUSAN'S ROOM - nAV
T
"Kane
- \
3uaan -
' leave - t o l l a mat
hane e n t e r s -
•vee
- DISS0L\
bogs"her
ive chauffeur p ick
setay
- she
1940 - INT. CAHARHT . nij
108 Susan
f i n l s h e e / ^ e l l i n s
« t
n
^
#.~ »u
^y
v«ix4.uxg story to Thompson - DI330LVH
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THIS
IS
THE PROPERTY
RKO
RADIO PICTURES,
INC ""
78 0
North
Gower
S t.
'—
Hollywood y
' ' " '
jy?<u# r*/«»ni promptly to
STENOGRAPHIC DEPARTMENT
ry
" ^ 2 - ,
wAfli >ou Adw finished with
it. ^ " ^ L ^
^
CITIZEN KA?rs
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*
3RD
REVISED
FINAL
7/16/40
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CI7XZF.U KAJIE
PROLOGUE
FADE IN
EXT.
XANADU - FAINT DAT? - 1940 (MINIATURE)
WIND03.
VERY
S.-.ALL
IN TEE
DISTA'iCE.
ILLUMINATED
Ail around this an
almost
totally
black
screen. How, as
the CAMERA iMOVES SLOWLY towards this window which is
almost a
postage
stamp in the frame, other forms appear;
barbed v/ire, cyclone fencing, and now, looming up against
an early morning 3ky, enornous iron grille work. CAMERA
TRAVELS up what is now shown to be a gateway of gigantic
proportions and HOLDS on the top of it -- a huge initial
"X"
showing darker and darker against the dawn sky.
Through this and beyond we see tho fairy-tale nountainton
of Xanadu, the great ca.stle a silhouette at its summit,
the little window a distant accent in the darkness.
DISSOLVE
(A series of set-ups, e'jch closer to the great window,
all telling something of:)
THE LITERALLY
ptCTttTTiT.*:
LOriAI'I fF CKAKLES FOSTER KANE
its right flank resting I'or nearly forty niles on the
Gulf Coast, it truly extends
In
all directions farther
than the eye can see. Designed by nature to be almost
completely bare and flat — it was, as will develop,
practically all marshland when Kane acquired and
changed its face -- it is now pleasantly uneven, with
its fair share of rolling hills and one very good-sized
mountain, all man-made. Almost all the land is improved,
either through cultivation for farming purposes or
through careful landscaping, in the shape of parks and
lakes.
The castle itself, an enormous pile, compounded
of
several
genuine castles, of European origin, of
varying architecture -- dominates the scene, from the
very peak of the mountain.
DISSOLVE
G0L7 LINKS (MINIATURE)
Past which we move. The greens are straggly and
overgrown, tho fairways wild with tropical weeds, the
links unused and not
seriously
tended for a long time.
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2
WHAT 'VAS QJCCE :. ftnpD-SIZKD 200 (£INIATUREJ
f L p H M
a L f e n b e c k t y p e # A 1 1 t h a t n o w
remains, with one
Sill
«
n
' £ f \
t h e i n d i v
i
d u a
l P l o t s , surrotuiaed
by
Se£' .
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r 23 ^ ^ d ^ p e
e
L
t
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f
r I e .
a
1 s i £ r
i ^ - g ^ ^ r s ; r
t
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t b a t here
- - — —
DISSOLVE
THE MONKEY TERRACE (MINIATURE)
In the f.g., a great obscene
ane
is outlined against the
dawn murk. He is scratching himself slowly,
thoughtfully,
looking out across the estates of Charles
Foster Kane, to the distant ll. ht flowing in the castle
on the
hill.
DISSOLVE
THE ALLIGATOR PIT (MINIATURE)
The idiot pile of sleepy dragons. Reflected in the muddy
water -- the lighted window.
THE LAGOOI-J (MINIATURE)
The boat landing safv3« An old newspaper floats on the
surface of tno water -- a copy of the Now York
"Enquirer." As it moves across the frame, it discloses
airain the reflection of the window in the castle,
closer than before.
8
THE GREAT S^IiWiyQ POOL (."INIATURE)
I t i s e m p t y . A
newspaper
b lows ac?*oas the cracked
f loor
o f" t h e t a n k .
DISSOLVE
\
THE COTTAGES
(
HI."I\?URE)
In the shadows, literally tno shadows, of the castle.
As we move by,
we aee
that their doors and windows are
SSSaliX l™\
loC
l
:
?
d
' "
,ith ho av
y
b a r a
as furtSer
protection and sealing.
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DISSOLVE IH
A DRAWBRIDGE - (MINIATURE)
10 Over a wide moat, now stagnant and choked with weeds. We
move across it and through a huge solid gateway into a
formal garden, perhaps thirty yards wide and one hundred
yards deep, which extends right up to the very wall of the
castle. The landscaping surrounding it has been sloppy
and casual
fo»*
a long time, but this particular garden has
been kept up in perfect shape. As the CAMERA MAKES ITS
WAY through it, towards
the"
lighted window of the castle,
there are revealed rare and exotic blooms of all kinds.
The dominating note is one of almost exaggerated tropical
lushness,
hanging limp and despairing. —
Moss, moss,
moss.
Ankor Wat, the night the last King died.
DISSOLVE
THE WE-IDOW - (MINIATURE)
11 CAMERA MOVES IN until the frame of the window fills the
frame of the screen. Suddenly the light within goes out.
This STOPS the action of the CAMERA and cuts the music
which has been
accompany ins
tiie
sequence.
In the glass
panes of the window we see reflected the ripe, dreary
landscape of Mr. Kane's estate behind and the dawn aky.
DISSOLVE
IHT. EASE'S BEDROCK - FAIKT DAWN - 1940
12 A VERY LONG SHOT of Kane's enormous bed, silhouetted
against the enormous window.
DISSOLVE
INT. ONE'S BEDROOM - FA ITT DAWN - 1940
13 A SNOW SCENE. An incredible one. Big impossible flakes
of snow, a too picturesque farmhouse and a snow man. The
Jingling of sleigh bells in the musical score now makes an
ironic reference to Indian Temple bells — the music
freezes —
RosebudI
KANE'S OLD OLD VOICE
(CONTINUED)
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13 (C0NTD1UED)
14
o ^ t o ^ S * * ? *
1 8 BACK
'
3 h 0 w l n s t h e
^
o l e 3
" n e
to be
contained
in one of those g lass ba l l s which are ««?*
<„
I T i
1
?
s t o r e s a l
l
o v
^ th e wo r ld .
A
hand . . ? J p i £" *
o u t
1 C
of
h
? ?
s
b
r
n
,
h 0 l
^ i
S the ba l1
'
1 * ^
T h e ^ n ' f e S s '
out of
h i s hand and bounds down two
came
te d
st»nt 1
I ,
l L ? V
e d
'
t h S CAHERA
WLLOWISB. T h T E a l l M i S o f f S ?
l a s t s t e p on to the marble f lo or -.There i t breaks thf
fragments
g l i t t e r i n g in th e f i r s t
rays of
t h T m o r n ^
„
a u i l J ?
7
°
U t 3
m
o n
«
t t l a p
P
a t t e r n
across th e f l S o r
5
Un
*
sudaenly
c r o ssed wi th a th o usan d b a r s o f
l i a h t a s \ h .
b l in d s a r e p u l l e d ac r o ss th e win do w.
^ ^
THE FOOT OF KANE'S BED. The CAMERA v e r y CLOSE. O u tli ned
against the shut tered window, we
can
see a form — the
form of a nu rs e , as she p u l l s the sh ee t up over h is head .
The CAMERA
F0LL0I7S
THIS ACTION up th e l e n g t h of th e bed
and a r r i v e s a t t h e
face after
th e sh ee t h as co v er ed i t .
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15
FADE IN
1ST . OF A MOTTOM PICTURE PROJECTION ROOM
On t h e s c r e e n a s t h e CAMERA MOVES IN a r ^ / t h e w o r d s :
"MAIN
TITLE
U
Stirring brassy music is heard on
or course, sounds more like a 30
le sound track (which,
track than ours*)
The screen in the projection room fills our screen as the
second title appears: '
"CREDITS;
NOTE: Here follows a typical news digest short, one of
the regular monthly or birmonthly features, based on
public events or personalities. (These.are distinguished
from ordinary newsreels/and short subjects in that they
have a fully developed/editorial or 3tory line.) Some of
the more obvious characteristics of the "March of Time,"
for example, as well Ls other documentary shorts, will be
combined to give an
authentic
impression of this now
familiar type of
sliert subject.
As is the
acceptedr
procedure in those short subjects, a
narrator is used As well as explanatory titles.
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1 9 4 0 - SXT. XANAOT - LAT
1 0 9 MINIATURE a
1 9 4 0 - INT. XAN
U 0
(115)
1 9 3 2 ' -
\
u
- DISSOLVE
t e l U f i g '
aymond'
a
tar
\
I N T . XA:;ADU -
cclmipotyfc
TSL&TKAFH OF
Raymond
a t o r y t o Thompson. DISSOLVE;
Raymond story
Raymond T e l e g r a p a o p o r a t o r (Fred)
T e l e p h o n e
b
(Katherine)
e ra o f f i ce - re a ds
Kane 'a/divorce etatement
ph operator - a call cornea tnru svltohboa
" ymond upstairs - DISc'OLVBS.
- CCRi.IDOR ft SUZAii>3 ROOM - MIOHT
Kane -
y7
Housekeeper
Raymond \ Ser va n ts
112
119
114
CCRRIDORx - Househoeper and maids outside
noises from
vlthtn
- Raymond goee
B E D R O O M -
t o hla 1
f
d o m o l i a h l n g room - g
- Raymond ploka i t u p
CORfilDO
Kane
look s
Lors
Into
1 9 4 0
-
I NT£
XANADU
-
OHEAT 4ALL
-
NI03T
^or°?^;j
Ut
• ??
S
}2f
-
V * » » * f o l l o w -
oor
locked - walks
dofcn mlrWed hallwav
-
rror - DI3S0LVE ' \ * « » *J»XAway -
"Raymond- flrifr
Raolafcon-gre,
Kane and Rooobud<- thoy prepare
pioka up hls^fcat from sled - DI
1040 - INT.
117
R - MO-i
etching laborers feed
ace
-
- sled
Is
thrown
J.940
-
EXT»
XANAD3
-
KIOHT
U S
Catnore Dovoa away from castle - smoke ooalnr r»»o« . u , w , . .
camera paasa. fence
with slgni
ramis
^ I M ^ S S T
FADE OUT
T i g END
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jflvw?**.
E W S D T Q E S T
3rd Revised Final
July 16
ftg*
7 &XS-KTK1S 0? KAHE - pull-baek to show fr o n t p a g e of I n q u i r e r
H:a^INES~M^AJU«n^PAPnRS announolns K a n e ' s d e a t h
8 _JHfcE^Tl89S to 1940)
SAB" PRAJffiISCO~~FIRE - n e w s r e e l s h o t s - 1909
_3?fiCXaL TRAINS - "Kane_Jteltef O r g a n i s a t i o n "
FOCHjS--Sft-lLSOAD_pAfl-and
p e a c e n e g o t i a t o r s - 1918
SasSd-wlthdates i - I83fc~^- 1010 — 1922
HEADLINES I
I 9
rER30XAL
1 - Woman Suffrage
2 - Prohibition
3 - T . V . A . ^
4 - Labor-Riots
OLD
raquiREa-Krfsrr- 1892
NE7 IWKSRE3 8L30. - 1940
KA> -«7 ' a .3»A.
-
1831-1911
- showing
sproad
of K a n e p u b l i c a t i o n s
EUnf-Slga readai "Colorado Lode Mining C o . "
-
( 1 9 4 0 )
3I0H reading» " L i t t l e S a le m , C o l o . ,
23
U l l e a . "
10 STILL OF LITTLE SALEM - 1670
STILL of K a n e ' s f a t h e r and mother on w e d d in g d a /
STILL of Kane and mo ther a b o ut 4 y e a r s l a t e r
CAPITOL, Washington,
D .C .
0 - U
C0flGH£33IC2AL INVESTI0ATI05
of
Tha tc her *
12 OoicH SQUARE HEETIBO
ttfoi -nirr, HASfMSl - "-- iftlng
-JIITL5-
Kane-ahaking bands with pseple offstage
/ y'
13 DECK OP-BOAT • Sa ne cud ^ixito^'ayhura • 1033-1039
14 STILL 0E--2tfXLr -
1900
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N E W S n i Q E 3 T
13
STILL OF
3I7SAJI
tfKUJlNa o u t s i d e .RarTOif c i l f ;1ALL - Kane and Snaan-
3KETCH of Ch ica go Opera House - 19 19
XANADU - MINIATURE - alm o st f in is h e d - (1 9 2 7 - 1 9 2 9 )
PREPARATION o f XANADU - 1920-1929
T r u c k s a n d t r a i n s
D r e d g e s , s t e a m - s h o v e l s
Shipa
u n l o a d i n g
C o n s t r u c t i o n , d i g g i n g , p o u r i n g eonorote
C o n s t r u c t i o n o f m o u n t a i n
An Inn I s
P a c k i n g o a s e s
16 XANADU
TERKACS
- STILL - 1929
•iSVf
HEADLINES In A m e r i c a n p a p e r a s i n c e 1896
SHOTS - Spanish American War - 1808
JRAVSYARD IN FRANCE - 1 91 9
POLITICAL
CAMPAI02I
-
Newsreols
17 CROWD burning Knne In effigy - 1016
— ITLS—»
~CR0Sg3~atreaBri.no • l iy to^«f ladlaon-aouare-Sarden-~-
1 0 1 3 -
EMILY AND JTTHinR^in-4><»q^iQia~"
SPS.\rTT>tS rU T iT -i" 1TT1H—-
&AH3-dellv*rtag j y e o u U ^ * J t O i a -
18 PHOTOS OF KANE AND 3USAU In contemporary ne wspa pe r - 1 91 6
MAP OF U.S.A. - 1 9 3 2 - 1 9 3 9 - r e v e r s e a n i m a t i o n
DOOR OF
NE3SPAPHR OFiTCS with
s i g n » c l o s e d »
19 XANADU - s l o t s - 1 9 4 0
MOVING ELECTRIC 3I0H o u t s i d e I n q u i r e r b l d g . a n n o u n c i n g d e a t h
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•I S
-;
3 D I G E 3 T
HASRATOR
Legendary was the Xanadu rherc Eubla Kahn
decreed his stately pleasure dome —
(witli
quotes in his
voice)
"Where twice five miles of fertile ground
With walls and towers were girdled 'round."
(dropping the quotes)
Today, almost as legendary is Florida's
XANADU,
— world's largest private pleasure
ground. Here, on the deserts of the Gulf
Coast a private mountain was commissioned,
successfully built for its landlord......
Here for Xanadu
1
3 landlord vill be held 1940»s
bi 'gest, strangest funeral; here this reek is
laid to re3t a potent figure of our Century —
America's Kubla Kahn — Charles Foster Kane.
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N E
J
S
D I G E S T
6
U . S . A .
XANADU'S
LANDLORD
C h a r l e s F o s t e r K a n e
OPENING SHOT of
s r e a t
d e s o l a t e e x p a n s e o f
F l o r i d a C o a s t l i n e . ( 1 0 4 0 - DAY)
DISSOLVE
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H E W S D I O R g
T
NARRATOR
m Journalism's biatorv o^e r „
*
"
e r n:i
'~
e
3
are honore
"vered .
toong p u b U s h 3 p s #
^ ^ ^
' « .
Cordon Sonnott
the
„ , , « ,
h u d r ; s
expatriate
s o n ; & e l c n a
,
3 :
,
o p t h c l U f a a n d
Soaverbrookj chlea,.-o>a F i t - - , „
Rit-eraor.
and
HcCormlek
Denver'a gonflls
c n d S o a r
,
^ • ^ ° . "ow /ork's
l a t e
S-eat Joeeph
W i t a r ;
^ ^
» » . W ^ , a n o t h e r e d i t o r and
lan d lo r d , t h e
8
t i U
i - i ^ s ^
_,
1
nighty r^
d
once might ier
* « s t . Great names a l l of them - bu*
a.,,
u e r a
" "
but
none of
those
3 0
loved -
h a t e d
. .
r ea r ed , so o f t en
apokan " " « • * • . P o . f r Kane.
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N E
W
S
D I G E S T
TITLE:
TO FORTY-FOUR MILLION U.S. HE7S
BUYERS,
J'ORE
NE.VSV.'ORTHY
THAN TEE
NAMES IN HIS 0*.VH HEADLINES, VIAS
KANE HIMSELF, GREATEST
21E.7SPAPER
TYCOON OF THIS OR ANY OTHER
GENERATION
SHOT of a hug e, screen-filling picture of Kane.
PULL BACK to show that it is. a picture on the
front page of the Inquirer, surrounded by the
reversed rules of mourning, v/ith
masthead
and
headlines. (1940)
DISSOLVE
A GREAT NUT3ER of headlines, 3et in different
types and different
styles,
obvicusly from
different papers, all announcing Kane's death,
all appearing over photographs of Kane himself.
(Perhaps a fifth of the headlines are in foreign
languages.) An important item in conne ction
with the headlines is that many of them —
positively not all - reveal passionately
conflicting opinions about Kane.
Thus,
they
contain variously tho words, "patriot,"
"Democrat," "pacifist," "war-monger," "traitor,"
"idealist," "American," otc#
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•».
>«;-;* ~s.
•••I
I- ,*lm
a-8
N E
VI
S D I G E S T
NARRATOR
— The San Francisco Earthquake. First with
the news were the Kane Papers. First with
Relief of the Sufferers, First with the news
of their Relief of tho
Sufferers.
NARRATOR
— Kane papers scoop the world on the Armistice —
publish, eight hours
beforo
competitors, complete
details of the Armistice terms granted the Germans
by Marshall Foch from his railroad car in the
Forest of Compeigne.
NARRATOR
For forty years appeared in Kane newsprint no
public issue on which Kane papers took no stand*
I
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N
E v: s
D I G E S T
8
TITLE:
1895 to 1940
ALL OF TliESE YEARS HE COVERED,
MANY OF THESE YEAIiS HE
V/AS.
NE'.'SREEL SHOTS of San Francisco during and after
tho fire, followed by SHOTS of special trains with
larre streamers: "Kane Relief Organization."
Over these shots superimpose the date — 1906.
ARTIST'S PAINTIMG of Foch's railroad car and
peace negotiators, if actual newsreel shot
unavailable. Over this shot superimpose the
date — 1918.
SHOTS with the date - 1898 - (to be supplied)
SHOTS with
the
date - 1910 - (to be supplied)
SHOTS with the date - 1922 - (to be supplied)
HEADLINES, cartoons, contemporary newsreels or
stills of the following:
1. Woman Suffrage. (The celebrated newsreel
shot of about 1914.)
2.
Prohibition. (Breaking up of a spoukeasy
and such.) *
3. T. V. A.
4« Labor riots.
. >
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i
|
t
' s
J
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i .
1
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1
1
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N E T / S
i
NARRATOR
No Publlo » „ „
h o n K M C h i M e l f d i d M t
^
or denounce
-
o r t
e n a u p p o r t . t h e n d e n o u n a . ;
NARRATOR
I t s hu mble bocirm-fn-*.. «
J
,
-ginnmgs
a
d y i n g d a i l y
—
NAHRATOR
K a n e ' s e s n l r e i* **.
thlrtv
E
*'
h S W
d a
'-
l n l
« °*«
thirty-
sov
«n newspapers I-**, *
M
*, '
thirteen maga
2
i
ne 3
,
a
radio network.
A n ejaDlrc
first „r empire. Th
e
iirst of grocery stor-« ™„
building
, W * U . . apartment
buildings, factories, f
oreata
„
'
l o r e 3 t
3 , oce-an liners —
BARRATOR
An
em
P
i
re
through which
for
f
lftv
^ - unendlns atree
m
.
the
. a " "
7
T " ""'-•
. « * -
« - . .
sold
n
ile....
* " ""
" " > "
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N R '7 S
D I G E S T
BRIEF CLIPS of old newsreel shots of
"illiam
Jennings Bryan, Theodore Roosevelt, Stalin,
Walter P. Thatcher,
Al
Smith, HcKinley, Landon,
Franklin D . Roosevolt and such, j (Also, repent
Nazis
Lain
newsreels\ of^^e elderly Kane with
9
as Hitlerjf Goering and England's Ch
and
Chdrch\ll.)
SHOT of a ramshackle buildink with old-"fashioned
presses shg^^ag throufjh plate Vlass windows and
the
na»<f
"Inquirer" in
old>Tashianed
gold
letters. (1892\
\ DISSOLVE
THE MAGNIFICENT INQUIIiER BUILDING of today.
1891 - 1911 A MAP OF THE U.S.A., covering tho
entire screen, which in animated diagram shows
the Kane publications
spreading
from city to
city. Starting from Mew York, miniature newsboys
speed madly to Chicago, Detroit, St. Louis, Los
Angeles, San Francisco, Washington, Atlanta, El
Paso,
etc., screaming, "Wuxtry, Kano Papers, Wuxtry."
SHOT of a large mine going full blast, chimneys
belching smoke, trains moving in and out,
etc*
A
large sign reads "Colorado Lode Mining Co." (1940)
Sign reading: "Little Salem, Colo. , 25 Miles."
DISSOLVE
:
i f
j
M
h
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N E 'V S
NARRATOR
F a n e d
I n
A l M r i c a n l c i
_
a n a
^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^
Kane
. V r t u n e . . . . „ov,,
t o
boardlns-houa.keeper
Mary Kane, by a
d e r a u l t i n
S
b o a r d e r .
In 1368
™ icrt
th e
auppoaedly
v . o r t h l , a 3 d e e d t o a n
abandoned
„ „e
a h a r t :
ffie O o l o r a d o
^
HARRATOR
F i f t y - s e v e n v e o r s ln t-->« w *
'
l a t o r
'
b e f o r
° a
C o n g r e s s i o n a l
d e s t i n a t i o n ,
™
t c
'
P . c a t c h e r ,
grand o ld
Kane
P a i J e r s
,
a t t a c J : 3
^ . ^ ^ ^ ^
Journe y he
made
a s a y o u t h . . . .
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N E 'f S
D I G
-E S T 10
An old still shot of Little Salem as it was 70
years
ago.
(Identified
by
copper-plate caption
beneath
the
still.)
(1070)
SHOT of early tintype stills of Thomas Foster
Kane and his wife, Mary, on their wadding day.
A similar picture of Mary Kane some four or
five years later with her little boy, Charles
Foster Kane.
SHOT
of
Capitol
in
Washington,
D. C.
SHOT of Congressional
Investigating Committer
(Reproduction of existing J. P.
I.Torganvi£v/sreel.)
This runs silent under narration.
j
/^alter P.
Thatcher
is on the sxand. He/is
flanked
by his
son,
"{alter P. Thctcl\or,,^,Jr., nnd other partners .
He is be In j question*? by some Merry Andrew
congressmen.
At
this
foment a
baby alligator
has ju3t
bceri
placed
in\his Ian,
causing
considerable confusion nyid cmbnrra a
anient.
y
/
/
SUP
of.
Tli
E~;SLEEL CLOSEUP
of.
T hatc her, the sound tr ac k
of
whicli
now FADES IN
Thatcher
••••beccuae of t ha t\
t r i v i a l
iuc i t3o. i t .. .
In ves t iga t or
It i s a fa ct , however,
\ s
i t no t,
that
i n 1U70 you d id go \ o
Colorado?
i
i
t:
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N EW S
I d i d .
D I G E S T
Thatcher
I n v e s t i g a t o r
In c onne c t i on w i t h t he
Kwne
a f f a i r s ? j
I
Thatcher
Yes.
My firm had been
appointed
trustees by M rs . Kane for the
fortune, which she'had recently
acquirr.-d. It was her wi3h that
I should take charge of this
boy, Charles Foster Kane.
J,
nvestigator
Is i t not a fac t tha t on tha t
oc c a s i on t he boy pe r sona l l y
a t t a c h e d yo u a f t e r s t r i k i n g you
in the s tomach with a s led?
Loud lau gh te r and co nf u s io n.
Tha tcher
Mr. Chairman, I
.will
re a d t o t h i s
committee a
prepared
s ta tement I
have
brou.^ht \?ith
me — and I
will
then
refuse
to answer any f u r th er
q u e s t i o n s . M r . ' Jo h n s o n , p l e a s e
A
ycung
a s s i s ta n t hands h im a 3hee t of paper f rom
a b r i e f c a s e .
/ S ^ V
jThotcher
(reading
Jit)
'With
full
awai ono33
of the meaning
of my words anc. the responsibility
of what I am alout to say, it la ny
considered bel. ef that Mr, Charles
Foster Kan e, in every es3ense of
his social beliefs and by the
dangerous manni ir in which he has
persistently a'stacked tho American
traditions of private property,
initiative and opportunity for
advancement, li — in fact —
nothing moro of leas than a
Communist.'
i
i
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N E W S n i O T T R m
NARRATOR
That same
month
in Union Square'.
NARRATOR
And
yet another o p i
n i o n
..
Kane's own.
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IT E W S
D I G E S T
12
NEWSREEL OF UNION SQUARE
MEETING, se ct i o n
of
crowd carrying banners urging boycott of Kane
pap ers. A spe ake r i s on the platform above
the crowd.
. I
i i
Speaker
(FADING IN on sound track)
— till
the
word3
"Charles
Foster
Kane" are a menace to every working
man in this land.' He is today what
he has always been and always will
be — a Fascist]
SILENT NE.VSKEEL on aNwindy
platfprm,
flag-draped,
in front of the ma(-;nif\ccnt/fnquirer Building.
On platform, in full ccrtmonial dress, is Charles
Foster Kane;. Ho
ora-tcs silently.
T I T L E :
V
\
" I
AH, HAVE-.3LT /^A;TD
WILL
BE ONLY
ONE
TXl"G
— AN
ALJERICAN."/
CHARLES
FOSTER
KANE
/
Same l o ca l e , Kane shaking hands out of f rame .
J
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a-13
N E W S D l G V . g m
BARRATOR
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NEWS
D I G E S T
1 3
DECK OF BOAT\- Authentic
nev/sreel
i n t e r v i e w o n
a r r i v a l i n lie* York H arb or . Kane i s pos in g f o r
p h o to g ra p h er s \ i n h i s e a r l y s e v e n t i e s ) .
\ Repor te r
This i s a
u n ic rophone,
Kr. Kane.
\
Kane
I know i t ' s
x
a micro phon e . You
p e o p le s t i l l a b l e t o a f f o r d
microphones
with
a l l t h a t n e w
income tax?
\
An embarrassed s m i l e from t h e r a d i o i n t e r v i e w e r .
\
R e p o r t e r
T h e T r a n s a t l a n t i c .broadcast says
y o u ' r e b r i n g i n g b a c k t e n m i l l i o n
dol la rs w o rt h o f a r t o b j e c t s .
I s t h a t c o r r e c t ?
\
Kane \
D o n ' t be l i e v e e v e r y t h i n g y o u h e a r
on the ra d io . Read th e
InquirerJ
onditions
R e p o r t e r
Hcw'd you f in d bu s in ess
ab oa rd , ?. r. Kane?
Kane
How d i d I f i n d bu s i n e s s c o n d i t i o n s ,
Mr. B ones? With g r e a t
diff icultyJ
( l a u g h s h e a r t i l y )
Reporter
Glad to be back, Mr. Kane?
Kane
I'm always glad to get back,
young man. I'm an American.
(sharply)
Anything else? Come, young man V-
when I was a reporter we asked them
faster than that.
fCOHVlNUED)
'J:
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W A R R A T
0R
Twice m a r r i e d
-
t w l c a
Ai
vw4.ce
d i v o r c e d
*
P r e s i d e n t >
s n l e c e
' "
f l r
* t
to a
.
4
'
^ i y
Norton - ,u
"«- m Wis . .
d l e d
»• -" »» lert
««» t ha l r
e o n .
aeeldent
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N E '.V S
D I G E S T
v;-
(CONTINUED)
R e p o r t e r
.,
What do you t h i n k o f t he ch anc es
f o r a Wbr i n E u r o p e ? /
Y ou ng m a n , t h e r e ' l l b e n o w a r .
I h a v e t a l k e d ' w i th a l l t h e
r e s p o n s i b l e l e a d e r s o f t he
G r e a t P o w e r s , a n d I c a n a s s u r e
y ou t h a t E n g l a n d , F r a n c e ,
G erm a ny a n d I t a l y a r e t o o
i n t e l l i g e n t to e m ba rk u p on a
p r o j e c t t h a t m u s t m ea n t h e e n d
o f c i v i l i z a t i o n a s we now know
i f i
T h e r e w i l l b e n o
warl
1 4
DISSOLVE
TITLE:
J0&>\,
FEW PRIVATE LIVES KEBE
KORE PUBLIC
PERIOD STILL of E m il y N or to n (1 9 0 0 ) . DISSOLVE
RECONSTRUCTION o f very \p ld s i l e n t news r e e l o f
w e d d i n g p a r t y o n t h e b a c k lavai o f t h e W h i t e H o u s e .
Many n o t a b l e s , i n c l u d i n g JC a ne , E m i l y ; T h a t c h e r S r . ,
T h a t c h e r J r . , a n d r ecogn izab ly B e r n s t e i n , L e l a n d ,
e t
a l ,
am ong t h e g u e s t s . Al \o s e e n i n t h i s g r o u p
a r e p e r i o d n e w s p a p e r photographers a n d n e w s r e e l
.cameramen. (^900)
Jtffi&y,
/ '
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E
w
S p _ ^
o
E S T
rrX
NARRATOR
TW
ff
e e k s a f t e r
h i s
d i v o r c e r ^
^
°
r C e
f r o a
^ 3 i l y
N o r t o n ,
Kane
m a
r r i e d
Su san
Alexander s W *. .
H a n <„ *
3 l l
* g e r , a t
the
To
Hall i n
T r e n t o n ,
New
J e r s e y .
NARRATOR
For W if e Tw o, one- t i™.
.
- itchiea.;; :;;;;
1
: ;--
ta
«««..d,u,„.
p l
* • « • * « . . co
NARRATOR
Ccneelvea f
or S u s a n A l e x
- r e
a h e d l
v o r e e d h l a >
^ ' . ^ " ^
« —
NARRATOR
One h u n d r e d theaaand t r e e a t
3 o f
Xanadu's
mounta in .
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N E W S
D I G E S T
PERIOD STILL of Susan Alexander. DISSOLVE
IS
/
J0&>\
~ ^ ^ ^ " *
a
= ' -
RECOliSTRUCTED
SILENT
i:
B e r n s t e i n e m e r g i n g fr om
i n t o a r i n g o f p r e s s p h o
K ane l o o k s s t a r t l e d , r e c
SREEL.
Kane^Susan and
de doorway o f C i t y H a l l
t o k c a p h e r s , r e p o r t e r s , e t c .
f o r a n i n s t a n t , t h e n
ch ar ge s down upon tae /photogra\phers , l a y in g ab ou t
h i m w i t h h i s s t i ck / smash ing wha teve r h e c a n h i t .
S (19 17)
STILL o f A r c h i t e c t ' s sketoh w i th t y p i c a l l y g l o r i f i e d
" r e n d e r i n g " o f t h e C h i c a g o M u n i c i p a l O p e r a H o u s e .
(1919)
DISSOLVE
A GLAMOROUS SHOT of th e a lm o st f i n i s h e d X an ad u , a
m a g n i fi c en t f a i r y - t a l e e s t a t e b u i l t o n a m o u n t a i n .
(19 2 7-19 2 9 )
SHOTS of its preparation (1920-1929)
SHOTS of truck after truck, train after train,
flashing by with tremendous noi3e.
SHOTS of vast dredges, steamshovels.
SHOT of ship standing offshore unloading into
lighters.
In quick succession SHOTS follow each other, some
reconstructed, some in miniature, some real shots
(maybe from the dam projects) of building, digging,
pouring concrete,
etc.
More SHOTS as before, only this time we see (in
miniature) a large mountain — at different periods
'in its
development — rising out of the sands.
± ]
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a-16
Jt$V&*..
Q
N E W S
D I G E S T
NARRATOR
X a n a d u ' s l i v e s t o c k :
the
f ow l
of the ai r , the
f i s h
o f
the se a, the
b e a s t
of the
f i e l d
and
J ung l e
—
t.vo o f
e a c h ;
the
b i g g e s t p r i v a t e
zoo
s i n ce N oah .
C o n t e n t s
of
X an ad u's p a l a c e : p a i n t i n g s , p i c t u r e s ,
s t a t u e s ,
and
m ore s t a t u e s ,
the
v e r y s t o n e s
of
many
a n o t h e r p a l a c e , shipped
to
F l or i d a f rom e ve ry
c o r n e r
of the
e a r t h . Enough
for ten
museums.
—
T h e l o o t
of the
w or l d .
NARRATOR
Kane urged
h i s
c o u n t r y ' s e n t r y
Into
one war.
- •
— O p p o s e d p a r t i c i p a t i o n
In
a n o t h e r .
- -
— Swung
the
e l e c t i o n
to one
Ame r ican Pr e s i d e n t
at l east - - so fur iou sly attacked another as to be
blamed for h is death — cal le d hi s a ss is aln - •
burned In effigy.
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N E W S
D I G E S T
1 6
SHOTS o f e l e p h a n t s , a p e s ,
z e b r a s , e t c . , b e i n g
h e r d e d , u n l o a d e d , s h i p p e d , e t c . in v a r i o u s w a y s .
SHOTS o f p a c k in g c a s e s b e i n g u n lo a d e d f ro m s h i p s ,
f ro m t r a i n s , f ro m t r u c k s , w i t h v a r i o u s k i n d s o f
l e t t e r i n g on them ( I t a l i a n , A r a b i a n , C h i n e s e , e t c . )
b u t a l l c o n s i g n e d t o C h a r l e s F o s t e r K a n e, X a n ad u ,
F l o r i d a .
ma^n t
A g r o u p o f p e r s o n s i n c l o t h e s o f the ' 'per iod o f
A
RECONSTRUCTED
STILL o f Xanadu — th e
terrace.
1929. .In the
Kane and Susan
/
r m i d s t ,
>
A 7
l e a r l y r e c o g n i z a b l e , a r e
TITLE:
FROM XANADU, FOR THE PAST TWENTY-
FIVE YEARS, ALL KANE EHTERPRISES
HAVE B EES DIREC TED , MANY OF THE
NATION'S DESTINIES SHAPED.
SHOTS of v ar io u s authe nt ica l ly w o r d e d h e a d l i n e s
o f A m e r ic a n p a p e r s s i n c e
1 8 9 5 .
.
Sp an is h-A m eric an War SHOTS.
(1898)
A g r a v e y a r d In France o f the World War and
h u n d r e d s o f c r o s s e s . ( 1 9 1 9 )
OLD HFiVSREELS o f a p o l i t i c a l c a m p ai g n.
J ^
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WE WS
n
T
„
r n
\
)
NARRATOR
Kane, molder of mass opinion though ne was,
a l l h i s l i f e was n ev er g r an ted
elect ive
of f i
by the vo ters o f h is count ry .
Few U.S. nev/s pu bl is he rs have been . Few, l i k
one-t ime Congressman Hearst , have ever run
fo
any of f ic e - - most know b e t t e r — conclude w
o t h e r p o l i t i c a l o b s e r v e r s t h a t no m a n 's p r e s s
has power enough fo r hi m se lf . B ut Kane paper
were once strong indeed, and once the prize se
a lm o s t h i s . I n 19 16 , a s
Independent
Candidate
for Governor , the best e lements o f the Sta te
behind him — the
White
House seemingly the ne
e a sy s t e p in a l i g h t n i n g p o l i t i c a l c a r e e r —
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N E W S
D I G E S T
17
NIGHT SHOT o f c ro wd b u rn i n g C h a r l e s Fos te r Kane
i n e f f i g y . T he dummy b e a r s a g r o t e s q u e , c o m i c
r e s e m b l a n c e t o K a n e . I t i s t o s s e d i n t o t h e f l a m e s ,
w h i c h b u m u p —
-- and then down (1916)
FADE OUT
TITLE:
IN POLITICS — ALWAYS A
BRIDESMAID,
.-EVER
A BRIDE
NEWSREEL SHOTS o f g r e a
b u i l d i n g — M a d is on S q u a r e
SHOTS in s id e th e vast an
p i c t u r e o f
/
\
SHOT OF BOX containing the firs
t crowds streaming into a
which is a huge
rden — then
lum, at one end of
Kane.
(1916)
Kane and
y o u n g C h a r l e s F o s t e r K a ne
a c k n o w l e d g i n g t h e c h e e r s
(1916)
9 1 / 2 . T h e y a r e
c ro w d . (SILENT SHOT)
NEWSREEL SHOT o f d ig n .
K a n e a l o n g s i d e o f spea
u p r a i s e d t o s i l e n c e
t a r i e a ^ o n p l a t f o r m , w i t h
• s t a b l e , b e a m i n g , h a n d
rovvd. (SILENT SHOT) (1 91 6)
«'
, * '
m
;
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r '
j
•
•
1
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N E W S D I G E S T
NARRATOR
T h e n , s u d d e n l y
-
i
0 S 8
t h a n o n e week b e fore
e l e c t i o n - defeat S h a m e f u l , i g n o m i n i o u s .
, -
D e f e a t t h a t s e t b a c k f o r t w e n t y
years
t h e
cause of Reform
in' t: -^ ?•
«
*
• *"
8 J
*
s
'» forever
c a n c e l l e d
P o l i t i c a l
c h a n c e s f o r C h a r l e s F o s t e r K a n e .
T h e n i n t h e t h i r d
vesr « r *.. I
i w
y e a r o f
t i c g r s a t
d e p r e s s i o n . . .
I
-
t o a l l
publ i
S
hers
i t
sometimes
u m t
. . ^ '
d o s e s '
Fo r K ane ,
ta f o u r S f t o r t
p
. . . „.
r
-
o r t
^ e a r s :
col lap se J
E le .en
K ane paper s
f«.,« v
P P o r s , f o u r Ka ne m a g a z i n e s m e r g e d ,
Horo s o l d , s c r a p p e d - .
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N E W S D I G E S T
1 8
NEVYSKEEL
SHOT -
closeupJ VfKai e
d e l i v e r i n g
s p e e c h ^ a 9 l 6 )
)NT
R
HE FRONT PAGE o f a
contompora
A G 1
•
h e a d l i n e — T w i n p h o t o s ' o f K a n e
H e a d l i n e r o a d s
)IDATE
KANE
„
IN"
LOVEiTE ST
WITH ' SINGER"
- / a s c r e a m i n g
a n . ( 1 9 1 6 )
PRINTED TITLE ab o u t d e p r e s s io n .
ONCE MORE REPEAT THE MA? OF
THE
U . S . A . 1 9 3 2 - 1 9 3 9 .
S u d d e n ly t h e c a r t o o n g o e s i n t o r e v e r s e , t h e e m p i r e
b eg in s to s h r i n k , i l l u s t r a t i n g t h e n a r r a t o r ' s w o r d s.
TEE DOOR OF A NEWSPAPER OFFICE w i t h t h e s i g n s :
" C l o s e d . "
F ^
V.
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N E W S
D I G E S T
NARRATOR
T h en f o u r l o n g y e a r s m or e — a l o n e i n h i s
n«vor
f i n i s h e d ,
already
d e c a y i n g , p l e a s u r e
p a l a c e ,
aloof,
se ldom v is i ted , never photograp
Ch ar l e s Fo s te r Kan e co n t in ued to d i r ec t h i s
f a i l i n g
empire.. .vainly
at tempted to sway, as
he once d id , the d es t i n ie s o f a na t io n t ha t ha
ceased to l i s t e n to
him.. . .ceased
t o t r u s t
h i m . . . .
NARRATOR
T h en l a s t w e e k, a s i t m u s t t o a l l m e n ,
d e a t h c a m e t o C h a r l e s F o s t e r K a n e .
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N E W S
D I G E S T
19
SHOTS OF
XANADU ^(1940)
SERIES OF
SHOTS e n t i r e l y
m o d e m
j u m p y a n d o b v i o u s l y bootlegged,
a b a t h c h a i r ,
swashed
i n
steeme
h i s r o s e g a r d
( 1935 )
>U£
e r a m b u l a t e d
thj
f i g u r e i n
the s u n s h ;
EX T. THE NEW INQUIRER B UILDING, NEW
v
0 R K
(PAINTING AND DOUBLE PRINTING)"
NIGHT (1940)
A moving electric sign, similar to the one on the
Times Building
--
spells out the words:
"CHARLES
FOSTER KANE - DEAD."
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INSERT
POOR with\
the
sim "PROJECTION RCO?f
l
on
it.
INT.
PROJECTION'-RfDM
- DAY - 1940
16 (A fairly large one, with a long throw to the screen.)
It
is
dark. Present
?.re the
editors
of a
"News Digest"
short, and of the Rawlston magazines. Rawlston himself
is also present. During this scene, nobody's face
is
really seen. Sections
of
their bodies
are
picked
out by
a table li-ht,
a
silhouette
is
thrown en
the
screen,
and
their faces
and
bodies
are
themselves thrown into
silhouette a :ainst the brilliant slanting rays of light
from
the
projection booth.
\
That ' s i t .
THOMPSON
\
\
He rises,
l ight ing
a c i -a r et te , and s i ts on corner of
table. There is
nove:r.cr.t
of men sh if ti ng in sea ts and
l ighting c igarettes .
\
FIRST .'UN
(into nhone )•
Stand
by. I'll
tell
you if we
want
to run it
a<?a'VLn.
(hangs up)
attn
\
TalOIIFSON
Well? - - How about i t , Mr.
Pawls tor. ?
\
RAWLSTON
(has r isen)
\
How do you l i k e i t , boys?
A short s i len ce .
SECOND
HAit
(well
- - e r — \
( \
{ THIRD MAN
\
Almost (Seventy year s of a man's ^.ife - -
together ( \
(
F01TRTH
HAN \
(That ' s a l o t to t r y to
get\
{into
a
newsreel - -
,
Thompson turns
on the
tnble lamp.
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16 (CONTINUED)
Death
soeech
V-
SECOND MAN
\RAWLSTON
What were the last words Kane
said on earth?
\Maybe
he told
us all about himself on his
deathbed.
THOMPSON
Yes, and maybe he\didn't.
Maybe —
RAWLSTON
(riding over
him) .
All we saw on that apreen was
a big American —
(walks toward
the screen)
THIRD MfcN
One of the biggest.
RAWLSTON'
But how is hs different rrom
Ford? Or Hearst for that
matter? Cr Rockefeller -\- or
John Doe?
There is a murmur of accord.
RAWLSTON (coht'd)
(walks toward
Thompson)
I tell you, Thompson -- a
man's dying ?/ords --
SECOND MAN
W ha t w e r e t h e y ?
THOMPSON
( t o S e c o n d
Kan)
You d o n ' t r e a d t h e p a p e r s .
L a u g h t e r .
2 2
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16 (CONTINUED)
\
RAWLSTON
When I'.r. Charles Foster Kane
died he said just one word —
\
Rosebud
THO.'IPSON
'FIRST MAN
(Is that what
he
said? Just
(Rosebud? \
<
1
(
SECOND
MAN
Almost (Umhum — Rosebud\ —
together ( \
( FOURTH MAN
(Tough guy, huh?
( (derisively)
(Dies calling for RosebudI
Laughter.
RAWLSTON
(riding over
them)
Yes, Rosebudl
-- Just that one
word I — But who was she —
Or what was it?
SECOND
Tittering.
RAWLSTON
Here's a man who
mi#it
have
beer.
President.
He's been
loved and hated and talked
about as much
as
any man in
our time -- but when he comes'
to die, he's got something on
his mind callad
'Rosebud.'
What does that mean?
THIRD MAN
;i race horso ho bet. on onco,
probably --
FOURTH MAN
Yeah -- that didn't come in
-«
23
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11
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16 (CONTINUED)
, RAWLSTCN
All right
--
(sUrldes
toward Third
and Fourth
Meri)
But what W s
the
race?
There
is a
short silence.
] l e i
ThompsonI
RAWLSTON (cont'd)
THOMPSON
Yes,
Mr.
Rawlston.
I RAWLSTON
Hold the piciure up a week -•
two weeks if iyou hava to —
\
\
THOMPSON
(feebly)1
Don't you think, r ig ht after
his death, i f we re lease i t
now — i t might be better
than — '
IWLSTON
(dec is ive ly ;
cutting in on
above speech)
Find
out about
Rosebud1
- -Go
afte r everybody tha t knew him
that manager of
His
—
(snaps 1
fingers)
|
- - Bernstein.
- - jHis
second
wife — she's s t i ^ l l iv ing - -
THOMPSON
S u s a n A l e x a n d e r Kane - -
SECOI'D MAN
She's running a
n i m t
club in
Atlan t i c Ci ty —
24
(CONTINUED)
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X<5 (CONTINUED)
FAWLSTOK
: rossos t o
I'json)
S ee ' e m N a i l . — A l l t h e people
who worked f o r h im — who l i v ed
h im - - wh<» h a t ed h i s g u t s / -
(pausaj "'
/
I don ' t mean
RO
t h r o u g h
ihe
C i t y D i r e c t o r y , of
course
/
The Third Man ^ives a h«arty "yes-man" lauch. Others
titter. \
/
•
THOMPSON
(rising)
I'll get to it ,-ri
Mr. howls ton. /
away,
RAKLST\)K
(pp.ts
h i 3
arm) /
Goodl R os ebud dead o r \ i l l vc l
I t ' l l p r o b a bl y t u r n ou t \ t o be
a ve ry simple t h i n g .
\ FADE OUT
/
/
( 'C7E:
I'ow begins th'j
story oropcr — the search by
Thor.rso:i for the facts about Kane -- his Researches
his Interviews with tho poople who knew Kane.)
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FADE IN
EXT. CHEAP CABARET - 'EL ••..-••"CIIO" - ATLANTIC CIT Y - NIOHT
1 9 4 0 -
(.V.INIATURE - HA
IN)
17 T he f i r s t
iirage
t o r e g i s t e r i s a s i g n :
"EL
RAMC.IO"
F l o o r S h o w
S u s a n A l e x a n d e r K a ne
T w i c e N i g h t l y
These
w o r d s , s p e l l e d o u t i n n o o n , gl o w o u t o f t h e
d a r k n e s s . T he n t h e r e i s
l i g h x n i n g
w h i c h r e v e a l s a
s q u a l i c
r o o f - t o p on w h i c h t h e s i g n / s t a n d s .
CAi-ERA
MOVES CLOSE
t o t h e s k y l i g h t . " '3
s e e y t i i r o u f h
t h e s k y l i g h t do wn i n t o
t h e c a b a r e t .
D i r e c t l y k el ow
a t a t a b l e s i t s t h e l o n e
f i g u r e o f a w o m an ,
d r i n k i n g
b y
herse l f .
DISSOLVE •
18
I N T .
"EL
RANC'HS"
CABARET - *)IGHT
- 1 5 4 0
T he Ions f i g u r e a t t h \ t ; b l e i s S u s a n . She i s f i f t y ,
t r y i n g t o l o o k m u c h y o \ n
t t
er , c h e a p l y
klon:led,
i n a c h e a p ,
e n o r m o u s l y g e n e r o u s
eve i i i ng
d r e s ' s . T h e s h a d o w s o f
T hompson
and
t h e
Capra i :v n re
s e e n m o v i n g t o w a r d t h e t a b l e
f r o : ; :
d i r e c t i o n o f
d o . - . r v : a ' \
T h e
Captair.
a p p e a r s , c r o s s e s
t o Svsan r-nc s t ' . nd s b e h i n d h e r . T ho m ps on m o v e s i n t o t h e
p i c t u r e i n c l o s e f.^.
h i s \
,
: a c k
t o c a m e r a .
CAPTAIN
( t o
Susan)
K i s s A l e x a n d e r —
t h i s
i s
M r . T h o m p s o n , : '
:
iss Alexander .
SUSAN
( w i t h o u t
l o o k i n g u p )
I w a n t a n o t h e r d r i n k , J o h n .
L o w t h u n d e r f r o n o u t s i d e .
CAPTAIN
R i g h t
a w a y ,
' . ' . ' ill
y o u h a v e
s
o.ne
t h i n g,
Mr •
Thomps on
?
N
THOMPSON
(starting to
sit down)
I'll have a highball.
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18 (CONTINUED)
SUSAN
\
(looks at
\ Thompson)
Who\told
you you could 3it
down-here?
THOMPSON
I thought maybe we could have
a drink together.
Think again I
SUSAN
There is an awkward pause.
\
SUSAN (cont'd)
Why don't you people let me
alone? I'm minding my own
business. You mind yours.
..THOMPSON
If you'd Just let me talk to
you for a little while, Miss
Alexander. All I want to
ask you —
\
SUSAN
Get out of here I \
(almost \
hysterical) \
Get out I \
(rising)
I'm sorry.
Get
out.
THOMPSON
\
SUSAN
\
THOMPSON \
Maybe some other time -- \
Get out.
SUSAN
\
Thompson looks up at the Captain. The Captain indicatea
the door with a slight jerk of his head, then walks away
from
the table
toward
a waiter who is leaning against the
wall in front of tho door. Thompson follows.
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1 8
(CONTINUED)
2 8
\ .
CAPTAIN
Gino
— get
\ier
another
highbal l .
( to
Thompson
as he parses
them) \
She's just
notj
ta lk in g to anybody,
Mr. Thompson.
\
THOMPSON
O k a y —
(walks to
phone booth)
WAiTER
Another double?
\
CAPTAIN
Yeah
—
During above Thompson
has
dropped coin into phone slot
'and dialed long distance operator
(112).
The waiter
exit3 for the drink.
THOMPSON
(into phone)
Hello — I want Mew Yo*k City —
Courtland 7-9970....
The Captain steps closer
to the
phone booth.
THOMPSON (cont'd)
This
is
Atlantic City
4-6827 —
All right —
(puts coins
into slot; turns
to Captain)
Us-? — do you
think
she oug it
to have another drink? • \
CAPTAIN
Yeah. S he ' l l snap out
o f • i t i
Why, u n t i l he d ie d, she' d just
as soon t a l k about Mr. Kane
as about anybody . Sooner —
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18 (CONTINUED)
THOMPSON
( i n t o \ p h o n e )
H e l l o - - t h i s i s T h o aDso n .
L e t me t a l k \ t o t h e Chief, w i l l
you?
( c l o s e s \ b o o t h
d o o r )
H e l l o , M r . R a w l s t o n . S he w o n ' t
t a l k —
29
•
r-Ksr
During above, waiter enters
and
sets highball
in
front
of
Susa n. She drink s thirstily.
Who — ?
ALSTON'S VOICE
THOMPSON
The second Mrs . Kane — about
Rosebud or anyth ing e l s e
I
I ' m
c a l l i n g f r o m A t l a n t i c C i t y .
Make her ta l k I
RAY/tSTON'S VOICE
THOMPSON
A l l r i g h t — I' m goihg over to
P h i l a d e l p h i a i n t h e m o r n in g —
t o t h e T h a t c h e r L i b r a r y , t o t a k e
a l o o k a t t h a t d i a r y to f h i s - -
t h e y ' r e e x p e c t i n g r a e . l T h e n
I ' v e £ot a n a p p o i n t m e n t i n Kew
Y o r k w i t h K a n e ' s general manager —
w h a t ' s h i s nam e — B e r n s t e i n .
T hen I ' l l come b ack h e re .
S ee ev ery b o d y .
RAWLSTON?3 VOICE
THOMPSON \
Yes, I ' l l se e e v e ry b o d y
\-
t h a t ' s s t i l l a l i v e . G oo d-b ye ,
Mr . R aw l s t o n . \
( h a n g s u p ;
l
o p en s d o o r ) \
Hey — e r —
Jo h n —
CAPTAIN
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16 (CONTINUED)
John -- yoi \
to he lp me,
t a l k about
ever happen
— about* Rose
THOMPSON
j u s t m i g h t b e a b l e
Whon s he u s ed to
ne — d i d 3 he
o s e y a n y t h i n g
( l o o k s ovej
a t S u s a n )
Rosebud?
JAPTAIN
T hom pson s l i p s h im a b i l l .
CAPTAfU
( c o n t ' d )
( p o c k e t i n g i t )
Oh,
tiiank
y o u ,
."j?.
Thompson.
T h a n k s. As a n a t t e r oA f a c t ,
j u s t t h e o t h e r d a y ,
v/hei
a l l t h a t s t u f f v;ca i n tl
p a p e r s — I a s k e d
She ne ve r ho a rd o f Rosel
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FADE IN
3 1
I N T L T I ' A T C H E I L
MEMO
RIAL
LIB RA HY
'A'.
r
- 1 9 4 0
A noble interpretation of M r. Thatcher himse lf, executed
in expensive marble, his stone eyes fixed on the camera.
We MOVE DOWN off of this, showing the pedestal on
which
the words,
"".alter
Farks Thatcher" are engraved.
Immediately below the inscription v/e encounter, in a
MED. SHOT, Bertha Anderson, an elderly, mannish spinster,
seated behind her de sk. Thompson, his hat in his hand,
i3 standing before her.
BERTHA
(into a phone)
Yes. I'll take him in now.
(hangs up and
looks at
Thompson)
The directors of the Thatcher .
Memorial Library have asked
me to remind you again of the
condition under which you may
inspect certain portions of
*.'r.
Thatcher's unpublished
memoirs. Un-ier no circumstances
are direct quotations from his
manuscript to be used by you.
THOMPSON
That's all right.
BERTHA
You may come with me .
She rises and starts tov/ards a distant door.
Thompson follows.
DISSOLVE
I??T. THE VA
T
TLT HOOM -
TrATCK^
MEMORIAL LIBR ARY - DAY -
1 9 4 0
20 A room with all the warmth and charm of Napoleon's tomb.
As we DISSOLVE IN, the door opens in and we see past
Thompson's shoulders tho length of the room. The floor
is marble. There is a gigantic, mahogany table in the
center of everything. Beyond
this
la a safe from which
a guard, with a revolver holster at his hip, is
extracting the journal of V.alter P. Thatcher.
<fe
brings it to Bertha.
BERTHA
( t o t h e g u a r d )
P a g e s
e i g i . t y - t h r e e
t o o n e
h u n d r e d an d f o r t y - t w o , J o n n l n g a .
(CONTINUED)
} .
4;
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20 (CONTINUED)
QUA 3D
Y e s ,
Miss
Anderson.
BERTHA
( to
Thompson)
You wil l confine yoursel f, i t
i s
our
u n d e r s t a n d i n g ,
to the
/
chapte r
d ea l ing with Mr.
K a n e . -
y
/
THOMPSON
That's all I'm interested in.
BERTHA
You will be required to leave
this room at four-thirty promptly.
She leaves. Thompson starts to light a cigarette. The
guard shakes his head. V.ith a sigh, Thompson bends over
to read the manuscript. CAME.'A MOVES,DOWN over his
shoulder onto page of manuscript.
KANE
print , f i f ty
INSERT NAKUSCHIFT,
neatly and
p rec i se l y
written:
\
"CHARLES FOSg
When these lines appet
years after my death/' I
am
confident
that the whole 7/orld will agree with my
opinion cf Charles
/
Foster Kane, assuming
that he is not
t)zen
completely forgotten,
which I regard 4s extremely likely. A
good deal of nonsense has appeared about
«my first meeting
with'Kane,
when he was
six years old....The facts are simple.
In the Winter of 1870..X."
DISSOLVE
21
22
#
r B R
N
EXT. MPS.
KANE'S BOARDINGHOUSE - DAY -
1870
THE WHITE OF A GREAT FIELD OF
&..0W
'- In the same
position as the la'et word in above INSERT, appears
the tiny figure of^Charles Foster Kane, aged five. He
throws a snowball
&\
the camera. It sails toward us
and out of scene.
REVERSE ANGLE - on the house, featuring a large sign
reading:
MRS.
KANE»S\B0ARDINGHOUSE
HIGH CLASS MEALS AND LODGING
INQUIR E \ WIT KIN
Charles Kane's snowball hits the sign.
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T-nsri
/
/
3 3
INT. PARLOR
-
MRS. KANE'S BOARDINGHOUSE - DAY - 1 87 0
23 CAMERA IS ANGLING th r o u g h th e window , b u t th e w indo w- fram e
i s n o t c u t i n t o s c e n e . We s e e o n l y t h e f i e l d o f sn ow
a g a i n . C h a r l e s i s m a n u f a c t u r i n g a n o t h e r s n o w b a l l . Now —
CAMERA PULLS BACK, t h e fr am e of t h e window a p p e a r i n g , and
we a r e i n s i d e t h e p a r l o r of t h e b c a r d i n g h o u s e . 'lira. Kane,
a g e d a b o u t 2 8 , i s l o o k i n g o u t t o w a r d s h e r s o n .
MRS.
KANE
( c a l l i n g o u t )
B e c a r e f u l , C h a r le s
I
t :
Mrs. Kane —
THATCHER'S VOICE
MRS.
KANE
( c a l l i n g o u t
the window)
P u l l y o u r m u f f l e r a r o u n d y o u r
n e c k , C h a r l e s —
B u t C h a r l e s
run3
away . Mrs . Kan e t u rn s i n t o came ra an d
we sec h e r f ac e — a 3 t ro n g f a c e , wo rn an d
kind.
THATCHER'S VOICE
I t h i n k w e ' l l h a v e t o t e l l h i m
now —
CAMERA NOW PULLS BACK FURTHER, sh ow in g T h a t c h e r s t a n d i n g
b e f o r e a t a b l e o n w h ic h i s h i s s t o v e - p i p e h a t a n d
d o cu me n t s . He i s 2 6 an d a v er y s t u f f y y o u n g man .
:
MRS. KANE
I ' l l s i g n t h o s e p a p e r s n ow ,
M r . T h a t c h e r .
KANE, SR.
Y ou p e o p l e s ee m t o f o r g o t t h a t
I ' m t h e b o y ' s f a t h e r .
At the sound of Kane,
S r . ' s
v o i c e , b o t h h a v e t u r n e d t o h im
and
CAI.IERA
PULLS BACK s t i l l f u r t h e r , t a k i n g h i m
i n .
MRS. KANE
I t ' s g o i n g t o b e d o ne e x a c t l y
t h e w a y I ' v e t o l d M r, T h a t c h e r —
(CONTINUED)
;
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KANE, SR.
I f I wan t t o , I can go to c o u r t .
A f a t h e r h a s t h e r i g h t t o — A
b o a r d e r t h a t b e a t s h i s b i l l an d
l e a v e s w o r t h l e s s s t o c k b e h i n d /
— t h a t p r o p e r t y i s j u s t a s /
m uch my p r o p e r t y a s a n y b o d y ' s
i f i t t u r n s o u t t o b e v a l u a b l e .
I knew Fred Graves and i f he ' d
had any idea th i s was go ing to
happen — he ' d have made out
t h os e c e r t i f i c a t e s i n b o th our
names —
THATCHER
However, th ey were made ou t in
M r s . Kane ' s name .
KANEHe owed th e money f o r the b oa rd
t o b o t h o f u s . B e s i d e s , I d o n ' t
ho ld w i th s i gn in g my boy away to
a n y b a n k a s g u a r d e e n j u s t b e c a u s e - -
MRS. KANE
( q u i e t l y )
I w a n t y o u t o s t o p a l l t h i s
n o n s e n s e , J i m . /
THATCiiER
T he B a n k ' s d e c i s i o n i n a l l
m a t t e r s c o n c e r n i n g h i s e d u c a t i o n ,
h i s p l a c e s o f r e s i d e n c e an d
s i m i l a r s u b j e c t s a r e t o b e f i n a l .
•' KANE, SR .
The idea
of
a b a n k b e i n g t h e
g u a r d e e n . .
/
Mrs .
Kane ha s me t h i s ey e . Her t r i u m ph ove r h im f in ds
e x p r e s s i o n in h i 3 f a i l u r e t o f i n i s h h i s s e n t e n c e .
MRS.
KANE
(even more
q u i e t l y )
I w a n t y ou t o s t o p a l l this
nonse nse , J im*
;
THATCHER
We will
assumo full
management
of the Colorado Lode -- of which
you, Mrs. Kono, I repeat, are
the sole owner.
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Kane,
Sr. opens his month onco or twice, as if to
say
something, but. chokes down his
opinion*
/
/
MRS. KANE
W h e re d o I s i ^ n , M r . T h a t c h e r ?
/
THATCHER
R i g h t h e r e , K i rs . K a n e . /
/
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KANE, SR. /
(sulkily)
Don't say I didn't warn you —
Mary, I'm asking you for the
last tir.o — anyone'd think I
hadn't
beer,
a good husband and
a --
Mrs.
Kane looks at
hi.::
slowly. He 3top3 hi3 speech.
/
THATCHER
The sum of fifty thousand
dollars a year is to be paid to
yourself and
I.r.'Kane
as
long
as you both live, and thereafter
tho survivor -
J
Kane
signs.
VA\V£,
S R .
W e l l , l e t ' s h o p e i t ' s a l l f o r
t h e b e s t . .'
MHS.
KANE
I t i s . — Go o n , M r . T h a t c h e r —
M r s . K a ne , l i s t e n i n g t o T h a t c h e r , o f c o u r s e , h a s h a d h e r
o t h e r e a r b e n t I n t h e d i r e c t i o n o f t h e b o y ' s v o i c e . K a n e ,
S r . w a l k s e v e r t o c l o s e t h e w i n d o w .
/
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K a n e , J r . , s*en f ro m t h o v . i n d o w . He i s a d v a n c i n g o n t h e
snov.ir.ari, s nowba l l s i n h i s h a n d s . He d r o p s t o o n e k n e e .
KANE
t f t h e r e b e l s wunt a f i g h t b o y 3 ,
d i e t ' s g i v o i t t o 'eruj T h e t e r m s
a r o u n c o n d i t i o n a l s u r r e n d e r . Up
a n d a t
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- DAY - 1 8 7 0
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S r . ,
c l o s e s t h e w i n d o w .
THATCHER,
E v e r y t h i n g e l s e — t h e / p r i n c i p a l
a s w e l l a s a l l
monies,-eerned
—is to be
administered
b y t h e
b a n k i n t r u s t f o r y o u r s o n ,
Charles F o s t e r K sfle , u n t i l h i s
tw e n ty - f i f t h b i r t h d a y , a t w h i c h
t i me h e i s t o crime i n t o c o m p l e t e
p o s s e s s i o n .
Mrs. K an e r i s e s a n d g o e s t o t h e w i n do w , o p e n i n g i t .
/
MRS. KANE
Go o n , M r . T h a t c h e r .
EXT.
MRS.
KANE'S
=0AKPI%'C-H0USE -
PAY - 18 70
2 6 Kan e , J r . ' , s e en f ro m t h e wi n d o w.
KANE
Y o u c a n ' t l i c k A n d y J a c k s o n l
O ld H i c k o r y , t h a t ' s me I
He f i r e s h i s s n o w b a l l , w e l l wide c f t h e mark an d f a l l s
f l a t o n h i s s to : . - ach , s t a r t i n g t o c r a w l c a r e f u l l y t o ward
the snowmpn. '
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I t ' s n«=arly f i v e , M r s . K a ne ~
d o n ' t y o u t h i n k
I'd-better*-meet
t h e b o y - -
INT. PAHLOR - MPS.
K/NE'3
FOARDIKOHOUSE - PAY - 1870
£ 7 Mrs . Kene a t t h e w i nd ow . T h a t c h e r / i s now s t a n d i n g a t
h e r s i d e . '
MRS.
KANE
I ' v e g o t h i s t r u n k / l l p a c k e d —
( s h e c h o k e s
a l i t t l e )
I ' v e h a d i t packed f o r a c o u p l e
of weeks —
yfW^'^v
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S h e c a n ' t s a y a n y
m o r e .
S he s t a r t s f o r th e h a l l d o o r .
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THATCHER
I've arrnnged for a tutor
mpet
UF
In Chicago* I'd hav e
brought him along with me, but
you were so anxious to/keep
everything secret —
/
He stops. Mr3. Kane
is
al:
looks at Kane, Sr., tight
Kane. Kane follows him.
ready well into the hall. He
hl3 lips and follows Mrs.
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MRS. KANE'S BOARDINGHOUSE - DAY - 1870
Kane,
in the snow-covered field. He holds the sled in
his hand. The Kane house, in the b.g., is a
dilapidated,
shabby, two-story frame buildlnr, with a wooden outhouse.
Kane look3 up as he sees the procession, Mrs . Kane at .
its head, coming toward him.
KANE
H'ya, Mom.
(gesturing at
the snowman)
See, Mom? I took the pipe out
of his mou th. If it keep3 on
snowin',
maybe I'll make some
teeth and —
MRS. KANE
You better come inside, son.
You and I have got to get you
all ready for — for —
THATCHER
Charles, my name is Mr. Thstcher
MRS.
KANE
This is
Mr.
Thatcher, Charles.
THATCHER
How do you do, Charles.
KANE,
SR.
He cornea from the East —
K/NE
Hello. Hello, Pop.
Hello, Charliel
KANE,
SR.
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MRS. KANE
M r . T h a t c h e r i s goin.7 t o t ak e
y ou o n a t r i p vlth him t o n i g h t ,
C h a r l e s .
Y o u ' l l bn l e a v i n g on
Number Ten.
T h a t ' s t h e
l i g h t s .
KANE, SR.
t r a i n w i t h a l l t he /
KANE
Y ou g o i n ' , M om ?
THATCHER/
Y ou r m o t h e r w o n ' t be- gping
r i g h t a w ay , C h a r l e s - 7
/
KANE/
Whtire'm
I g o i n g ?
KA-NE, SR.
Y o u ' r e g o i n g t o *
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New York — and
7 e r h i n g t o n ,
m a y b e , . . I s n ' t h e , M r . T h a t c h e r ?
/
. THATCHER
(heartily)
He cortninly is . I wish I were
a little boy and going to make
a trip like th?t for the first
time •
/
/
KANE
V.hy a r e n ' t y o u com i n ' w i t h u s ,
Mom? /
/
We
h av *
MRS.
KANE
t o s t a y h e r e , C h a r l e s .
/ KANE, SR .
YouVre g o i n g t o l i v e w i t h M r .
T h n r c h e r f ro m now o n , C h a r l i e
Y o u ' r e g o i n g t o b e
r i c h *
Your
Ma,
f igu res — t h a t i s « e r - -
she and I htve decided t hr t
t h i s i s n ' t t h e p l a c e f o r y ou t o
grow u p i n . Y o u ' l l p r o b a b l y b e
th e r i c h e s t mnn In America some
day and you o u g h t t o —
MRS. KANE
You w o n ' t b e l o n e l y , C h a r l e s . . .
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THATCHtR
..e'ro c.oing
to
have
a lot of
good
tir.'.es
together, Charles. .
Really
v;e
are.
Kane stares
at him.
•
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THATCETiR (.cont'd)
Cone on, Charles. Let's shake
hands.
(Kane continues
/
to look ft him) /
Nov/, now I'm not as
/
•frightening ns all that I
Let's
shake, whrt do you soy?
He reaches out for Charles' hand.
..'ithout
a word,
Chsrles
hits
him in the
stoxach
v-ith
the
sled. Thatche:
3tumble3 btck f fev-
feet,
gasping.
TUATCir-CR (cont'd)
(with a sickly
grin)
You clrost hurt
re,
Charles.
Sleds aren't to hit people with.
Cileds are to — to slai- h on.
'..'hen
v;a
QQt to .lev.' York, Charles,
we'll get you r. sled that will —
He's near enough
to
try'to
put
n
hand
on
Kane's shoulder.
As he
does,
lime kicks him in the ankle.
Charles
• ' P C i.-.i »r p
i"i>w. lUii.il.
He throws himself
on
her,
his
arms around
her.
Slowly
I.;rs. K: ne
puts
her
arms
around him.
/
KANE
(frightened)
Mom I Ilqsr.1
'RS. KANE
I t ' s
a l l
r i gh t , Uhar l c3 , i t ' s
a l l r igh t .
KANE,
SR.
Sor ry ,
Mr. Thatcher '.-hat
that
kid
nuods la
n
jood
thrashing
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MRS.
KANE
T h a t ' s w h a t y o u t h i n k , i s i t ,
J i m ?
Y e s .
KANE, SR.
MRS.
KANE
( l o o k s a t
M r . K a n e ;
s l o w l y )
T h a t ' s w hy h e ' s g o i n g t o / be
b r o u g h t u p w h e r e y o u c a u ^ t g e t
a t h i m .
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u n d e r n e a t h a s l e e p e r , s p i n n i n g
a l o n g t h e t r a c k .
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INT.
TRAIN - OLD-FASHIONED DRAWING ROOM - NIGHT - 1870
Thatcher, with a look of ringled exasperation, annoyance,
sympathy and inability to handle tho situation, is
standing alongside a berth, locking at Kane. Kane, his
face in the pillow, is crying with heartbreaking
sobs.
KANE
Mom
?4om
DISSOLVE
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THE THATCHER MANUSCRIPT, which fills
the screen. It reads:
...nothing but a lucky scoundrel,
spoiled, unscrupulous, Irresponsible.
Ho acquired hi3 first newspaper
through a caprice. His whole attitude
as a publisher —
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INT.
KANE'S OFFICE - INQUIRER - DAY - 1 8 9 8
50 CLOSEUP o n p r i n t e d h e a d l i n e w h i ch r e a d s :
"GALDEONS OF SPAIN OFF JERSEY COAST"
CAMERA PULLS BACK to r e v e a l T h a tc h e r, h o l d i n g th e
INQUIRER w i t h i t s ' . h e a d l i n e , s t a n d i n g i n f r o n t o f K a n e ' s
d e s k . Kane ' i s s e a t e d b e h i n d th e d e s k .
\
, THATCHER
Is this really your idea of how
to run a newspaper?
KANE
I d o n ' t kno>y how to r u n a
n e w s p a p e r , M r. T h a t c h e r . I j u s t
t r y everything I can th ink o f .
THATCHER
( r e a d i n g t o
10
headl ine]
Galleons of S p a i n O ff J e r s e y
C o a s t . Y ou know y o u h a v e n ' t t h e
s l i g h t e s t p r o o f \ tha t t h i s —
t h i s A r m a d a i s olff t h e J e r s e y
c o a s t .
KAN
C an y ou p r ov e t h a t \ i t i s n ' t ?
B e r n s t e i n r u s h e s i n , a c a b l e in his ha nd . He s t o ps when
h e s e e s T h a t c h e r .
KANE
(cbnt 'd)
( g e n i a l l y ) \
M r. B e r n s t e i n , M r . T h a t c h e r .
BERHSTEET
How a r c y ou , M r. ThatcherY
T h a t c h e r g i v e s h i m t h e b r i e f e s t o f n o d s .
BERNSTEIN (coht 'd)
We j u s t had a w i r e f rom C uba ,\
Mr . Kane .
( h o
a t o p s ,
e m b a r r a s s e d )
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KANE
T h a t ' s a l l r i g h t . We h a ve n o /
3 e c r e t s f ro m o u r r e a d e r s . M r.
T h a t c h e r i s o n e o f o u r m o s t /
d e v o te d r e a d e r s , Mr. B e r n s t e i n .
He k no ws w h a t ' s wro n g w i t h ev ery
c op y o f t h e I n q u i r e r s i n c o / l
t o o k c h a r g e . R oa d t h e c a b l e .
BERNSTEIN/
( r e a d i n g )
F o od m a r v e l o u s i n C u b a f g i r l s
d e l i g h t f u l s t o p c o u ld s/end you
p ro se p o ems ab o u t scenery b u t
d o n ' t f e e l r i g h t s p e n d i n g y o u r
m oney s t o p t h e r e ' s no/war i n
C u b a s i g n e d W h e e l e r . / A n y a n s w e r ?
KANE
Y e s . D e a r W h e e l e r V-
(pauses a
moment)
— y o u p r o v i d e the /p rose poems —
I ' l l p r o v i d e t h e war,
BERNSTEIN
That' s f i n e ,
Mr./
Kan e .
T h a t c h e r , b u r s t i n g w i t h i n d i g n a t i o n , s i t s dow n.
KANE
I k i n d a l i k e At myself. Send
i t r i g h t awa;j
R i g h t away.)
BERNSTEIN
B e r n s t e i n l e a v e s . A f t e r a m om ent o f i n d e c i s i o n , T h a t c h e r
d e c i d e s t o m ake o ne / l a s t t r y .
THATCHER
C h a r l e s , ; I ca m e t o s e e y o u
a b o u t t h i s — c a m p a i g n o f y o u r s
— er — t h e I n q u i r e r ' s campaig n
— a g a i n s t t h e M e t r o p o l i t a n
Transfer Company.
• i
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Good. You got some material we
can
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against thorn?
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\ THATCHER
YouJre still a college boy,
aren't you, Charles?
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\ KANE
O h, n o , I w as ex p e l le d f rom
c o l l e g e — s e v e r a l c o l l e g e s .
D on ' t you r ememb er ?
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Tha t c he r g l a re s a t hiia.
\
KANE (cont 'd)
I remember, I th in k t h a t ' s when
I
f i r s t l o s t my b e l i e f t h a t y ou
were omn ipotent , Mr. Th a tche r —
when you to ld me th a t the
Dean's
d e c i s i o n a t H a r v a r d , d e s p i t e a l l
you r e f fo r t s w a s
Irrevocable
—
(he t h i nks , a nd
looks a t Tha tcher
i n q u i r i n g l y )
—
irrevocable
—
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a n g r i l y ,
t i g h t - l i p p e d .
KA1
NE
( c o n t ' d )
I c a n ' t t e l l you-,how o f t e n I ' v e
l e a r n e d
the corrept pron unc iat ion
of tha t word ,
bu t - I
a l w a ys fo rge t .
THATCHER
(no t i n t e re s t e d . ,
coming ou t \
w i t h i t ) \ .
I th ink I should remind you ,
C h a r l e s , o f a f a c t you\seem t o
ha ve fo rg o t t e n . You a re yo u rse l f
one of the company's la tgest
i n d i v i d u a l
s t o c k h o l d e r s ^
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KANE .
The t r o u b l e i s , M r . T h a t c h e r ,
y ou d o n ' t r e a l i z e y o u ' r e
talking
' to two p eo p le . As
Charles Foster Kane , v /ho has
eighty-two
thou sand , s ix hundre d
a nd t h i r t y - o n e s h a r e s o f
Metropolitan Transfor — you
se e , I do have a rough ide a o f
my h o l d i n g s — I s y m p a t h i z e w i t h
you . Ch ar le s F o s te r Kane i s a
d a n g e r o u s s c o u n d r e l , h i s p a p e r
should be run out of town and a
committee should be formed to
b o y c o t t ,
h h n .
You may, i f you
can form such a com m it te e , put
me dow n f o r a c o n t r i b u t i o n o f
o n e t h o u s a n d d o l l a r s .
"THATCHER
( a n g r i l y ) \
C h a r l e s , my t im e i s t o o v a l u a b l e
f o r me - -
I
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KANE
On t h e o t h e r hand —
(hi s manne r-
becomes \
s e r i o u s ) -
I am t h e p u b l i s h e r o f t h o .
INQUIRER. As su c h , i t i s my
d u t y - - I ' l l l e t yo u i n o n a
l i t t l e s e c r e t , i t i s a l s o my
p l e a s u r e — t o s ee - t o i t t h a t
t h e d e c e n t , hard-working p o o p l e
o f t h i s c i t y a r e n o t ro b b ed
b l i n d by a gro up of"; money-mad
p i r a t e s b e c a u s e , God h e l p t h em ,
the y have no one to-look a f t e r
t h e i r in tores ts l
T h a tc h er h a s r i s e n .
away.
He now puts on
hi s ha t
and walks
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KANE (cont'd)
— I ' l l l e t yo u i n o n a n o t h e r
l i t t l e s e c r e t , M r. T ha tJ ch er.
Thatcher s t o p s . Kane walks up to tyihn.
KANE
(cont'd)
I th in k I 'm the man to do* i t .
You se e I have money and b ro po rty .
I f I d o n ' t d e f e n d t he i n t e r e s t s o f
t h e u n d e r p r i v i l e g e d , - s o m e b o d y
olse
w i l l — maybo somebody w 1thou t an y
money o r any pro pe r ty - - and tha t
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(CONTINUED)
THATCHER
(puts on
his
hat)
I happened to see your
consolidated statement
morning, Charles. Don
think
it's
rather unwi
continue this philan
enterprise
—
this
that'3
costing yo
dollars a year?
th*a
you
to
opic
G.UiRER —
one million
I1H
45
You're
mill ion
expect to
year,
to<
« at
year —f v
right.
KANE
We did lose
ars last year.
We
ose a million next
, You know, Mr.
Thatcher
rate
of a
million
a
'11 have to close this
sixty ycar3.
DISSOLVE
THS VAULT ROOM - THATCHER
MEMORIAL
LIERARY - DAY
31
THE MANUSCRIPT:
\
"The ordinary decencies
of
human
life were, I repeat, unknown to
him.
His
incredible vulgarity,
hi3 utter disregard
u
jgarc
Before- the audience has had
a
chance to read thi s ,
Thompson, with a gesture of annoyance, has clo sed the
manuscript. He turns to confront Miss Anderson who has
come to shoo him out.
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MISS ANDERSON
You have enjoyed
a
very, rare
privilege, young man.
Did you
find what
you
were looking for?
THOMPSON \
No. Tell me something, Miss
Anderson. You're
not
Rosebi
are you?
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What?
MISS ANDERSON
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THOMPSON
I d i d n ' t t h i n k y o u w e r a . W e l l ,
t h a n k s f o r t h e u s e o f t h e h a l l , .
32
He p u t s h i s h a t o n h i s h e a d a n d s t a r t s o u t , l i g h t i n g a
c i g a r e t t e a s h e g o e s . M i ss
A i j d ^ r s o n ,
s c a n d a l i z e d ,
w a t c h e s h i m .
DISSOLVE
INT. 3ERNSTSIN' T OFFICE - " INQUIRER" SKYSCKAPER-DAY-1940
CLOSEUP o f a s t i l l o f v K a n e , a g e d a b o u t s i x t y - f i v e .
CAMERA PULLS BACK, shdwing i t i s a f ramed p h o t o g rap h o n
t h e w a l l . U nder i t s i t s B e r n s t e i n , b a c k o f h i s d e s k .
B e r n s t e i n , a l w a y s a n u n d e r s i z e d J e w , now s ee m s e ve n
s m a l l e r t h a n i n h i s y o u t h . He i s b a l d a s a n e g g , s p r y ,
w i t h
remarkably
i n t e n s e i s y e s . As CAMERA CONTINUES to
TRAVEL BACK, t h e b a c k of 'Thompson's h e a d a n d h i s s h o u l d e r s
com e i n t o t h e p i c t u r e .
BERNSTEIN
( w r y l y )
Who'3 a busy man?
Chai rman of
t he
Boa
n o t h i n g b u t t i m e ,
you want to know?
I'm
I got
'"/hat do
THOMPSON
Well,
we thought maybe -
3
(slowly)
if we could find out
what
he
meant by his last words —'as
he was dying —
' BERNSTEIN
That Rosebud, huh?
(thinks)
Maybe some girl?' There wore
a lot of them back in the early
days and —
THOMPSON
(amused)
It's hardly likely, Mr. Bernstein,
that Mr,
Kane
could have mot
some girl oasually and then,
fifty
years later, on his
deathbed —
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BERNSTEIN
, Y o u ' r e p r e t t y y o u n g , M r . —
\ ( r ememb ers
\ th e name)
- - Mr . T h o mp so n . A fe l l o w w i l l
r e m e m b e r t h i n g s y o u w o u l d n ' t
t h i n k h e ' d r e m e m b e r . Y ou t a k e
me. One d ay , b ac k i n 18 9 6 , I
w as c r o s s i n g o v e r t o J e r s e y o n
a f e r r y a n d a s w e p u l l e d o u t
t h e r e w as a n o t h e r f e r r y p u l l i n g
i n — •
( s l o w l y )
— an d o n i t t h e r e w a s a g i r l
w a i t i n g t o g e t o f f . A w h i t e
d r es s s h e h a d o n - - an d she was
c a r r y i n g , a white paras ol — an d
I o n l y saw h e r fo r o n e se co n d
a n d s h e d i d n ' t s e e me a t a l l —
b u t I ' l l b e t a m o nt h h a s n ' t
g o ne b y s i n c e t h a t I h a v e n ' t
t h ou g h t o f t h a t g i r l .
( t r i u m p h a n t l y )
See what I mean?
(smiles)
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Yes. \
(a near sigh) \
But about
Rosebud,
i; wonder —
BERNS
Who else you been to
se
TEIN
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Wel l , I wen t d o wn t o Atlah
C i t y —
nt io
BERNSTEIN
S u s i e ? I c a l l e d h e r m y s e l f t h e
d a y a f t e r h e d i e d . I thought\
maybe somebody ou gh t t o —
( s a d l y )
— s h e c o u l d n ' t e v e n c o m e t o
t h e p h o n e .
THOMPSON
( r u e f u l l y )
S h e w a s n ' t e x a c t l y i n a
c o n d i t i o n t o t a l k t o me e i t h e r .
I ' m g o i n g do wn t o see h e r ag a i n
In a c o u p l e o f d a ys *
( p a u s e s )
A b ou t R o s e b u d , M r . B e r n s t e i n - -
4
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48
BERNSTEIN
If I had any idea v /ho i t w a s ,
b e l i e v e m e , I ' d t e l l y o u .
THOMPSON
I f y o u ' d k i n d o f j u s t t a l k , M r .
Berns te in
— a b o u t
anything
c o n n e c t e d w i t h M r . Kane t h a t
y o u c a n r em e m b e r. — A f t e r a l l ,
y o u w ere w i t h h i m f ro m t h e
b e g i n n i n g .
BERNSTEIN
F ro m b e f o r e t h e b e g i n n i n g ,
y o u n g
f e l l o w .
( n o t t o o
maudlinly)
— And now i t ' s a f t e r t h e
end.
( a f t e r a p a u s e )
H a ve y o u t r i e d t o s e e a n y b o d y
e l s e e x c e p t S u s i e ?
THOMPSON
I h a v e n ' t s e e n a ny bo dy e l s e ,
b u t I ' v e b e e n t h r o u g h t h a t
s t u f f o f W a l t e r T h a t c h e r ' s .
T h a t j o u r n a l o f h i s —
BERNSTEIN
T h a t c h e r T h a t m an w a s t h e
b i g g e s t d a r n e d f o o l I e v e r m e t .
THOMPSON
He made a n aw fu l l o t o f m oney .
BERNSTEIN
I t ' s n o t r i c k t o m ake a l o t o f
mo n ey , i f a l l ".you ?/ant i s t o
make a l o t o f mo n ey . Yo u t a k e
Mr . Kan e — i t wasn ' t mo n ey h e
w a n t e d . M r . T h a t c h e r n e v e r d i d
f i g u r e h i m o u t . S o m e t i m e s ,
e v e n , I c o u l d n ' t —
( s u d d e n l y )
You know who y o u o u g h t t o t a l k
t o ? M r . J e d L e l a n d . T h a t i s ,
i f - - h e wa s M r . K a n e ' s c l o s e s t
f r i ond , yo u know . They wen t to
s c h o o l t o g e t h e r .
(CONTINUED)
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52 (CONTINUED)
THOMPSON
H a r v a r d , w a s n ' t i t ?
BERNSTEIN
H a r v a r d — Y a l e — C o r n e l l .
P r i n c e t o n - -
Switzerland.•' '
Mr.
L e l a n d — h e n e v e r h a d a '
n i c
kel
— o n e o f t h o s e o l d f a m i l i e s
w h e re t h e f a t h e r i s vrbrth t e n
m i l l i o n t h e n ono d a y h e s h o o t s
hir-sclf r n d i t t u r n s o u t t h e r e ' s
nothing b u t d e b t s .
( r e f l e c t i v e l y )
He was wi t h Vte. Kane and me t h e
f i r s t d a y M r . K a n e t o o k o v e r t h e
I n q u i r e r .
S3
^
3
* ,
DISSOLVE
EXT.
Ill-
CLP
gINQUIRER"
BUILDING - DAY
- 1890
(The same shot as in
"News
Digest" but this is the real
thing, not a still.) A hansom cab comes into the scene.
In it are Kane, a year older than
in. the
previous
sequence, and Leland. They arc both dressed like Hew
York dandies. It is a warm
surmer
day. Kane jumps from
the cab, cz Leland follows wore slowly.
\
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(pointingV
w i t h h i s \
s t i c k ) \
T a k e a l o o k a t itiy Jed . I t ' s
r a i n - : t o l o o k a l o t d i f f e r e n t
o n e o f t h es e
d a y s .
He i 3 b o i s t e r o u s l y r a d i a n t . J 3d ag re es w i t h a t h o u g h t f u l
s m i l e . As t h e y s t a r t a c r o s s
t h e .
s i d e w a l k t o w a r d t h e
b u i l d i n g , wis.eh t h e y t h e n e n t e r , \ a d e l i v e r y w a g o n d r a v / s
u p a n d t a k e s t h e p l a c e v a c a t e d b yV t h e c a b . In i t s o p e n
b a c k , a l m o s t b u r i e d b y a
bod,
b e d A n g , t r u n k s , f ra m ed
c l o t u r e s ,
e t c . ,
i s B e r n s t e i n , who c%imbs o u t w i t h
d i f f i c u l t y .
BERNSTEIN
( t o t h e
d r i v e r )
Cono o n I ' l l g i v e y o u a hand
w i t h t h i s stuff.
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DRIVER
T h e re a i n ' t no b e d r o o m s / i n t h i s
j o i n t . T h a t ' s a
newsjraper
b u i l d i n g .
UISTEIH
Y o u ' r e
ge t t ing /pa id ,
M i s t e r ,
for o p i n i o n s /- o r fo r h a u l i n g ?
DISSOLVE
INT.
CITY ROOM
•/
»INQUIRER" BUILDING - DAY - 18 90
/ —.
3 4 T h e f r o n t h a l f o f t h e s e c o n d f l o o r c o n s t i t u t e s o n e l a r g e
C i t y Room. D e s p i t e t h e b r i l l i a n t s u n sh i ne o u t s i d e , v e r y
l i t t l e of i t i s a c t u a l l y g e t t i n g i n t o t he room b e c a u s e
t h e w in do w s a r e s m a l l a n d n a r r o w . T h e r e a r e a b o u t a
d o z e n t a b l e s an d d e s k s , o f t h e o l d - f a s h i o n e d t y p e , n o t
f l a t , a v a i l a b l o f o r r e p o r t e r s , Two t a b l e s , on a r a i s e d
p l a t f o r m a t t h e e n d o f t h e r o o m , o b v i o u s l y 3 e r v e t h e
c i t y ro om e x e c u t i v e s . To t h e l e f t of t h e p l a t f o r m i s
a n op en d o o r w h i c h l e a d s i n t o t h e S a n c t u m .
A s K an e a nd L e l a nd e n t e r t h e ro om a n e l d e r l y , s t o u t g e n t
o n t h e r a i s e d p l a t f o r m , s t r i k e s a b e l l an d t h e o t h e r
e i g h t occupants o f t h e r o om — a l l men — r i s e a n d f a c e
t h e new a r r i v a l s . C a r t e r , t h e o l d e r l y g e n t , i n f o r m a l
c l o t h e s , r i s e s a nd s t a r t s t o w a r d t he m .
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CARTER \
Welcome, Mr. K an e, t o th e \
"Inqui rer . "
C a r t e r .
I a m H e r b e r t
KANE
T ha nk y o u , M r. C a r t e r . T h i s
i s M r . L e l a n d .
CARTER
( b o w i n g )
How do yo u d o , M r . L e la nd ?
KANE
M r. L e l a n d i s y o u r n ew d r a m a t i c
c r i t i c , M r. C a r t e r . I h o pe I
h a v e n ' t m ade a m i s t a k e ,
J o d e d i o h .
I t i s d r a m a t i c o r i t i c you wan t
t o b e , i s n ' t i t ?
(po i n t i ng t o
t h e r e p o r t e r s )
A r e t h e y s t a n d i n g f o r m e ?
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CARTER
I t h o u g h t i t w o u l d . b e a n i c e
g e s t u r e - - t h e n e w p u b l i s h e r
KANE
( g r i n n i n g )
As k them to s i t down.
CARTER
You may
rosuno
y o u r w o r k ,
g e n t l e m e n .
( to Kane)
I d i d n ' t know y o u r p l a n s
so I was unable to make
p r e p a r a t i o n s .
KANE
I
c c n ' t
know
ir.y
rtlaiyi
myself.
A s a n a t t e r o f fact> I h a v e n ' t
g o t a n y . E x c e p t
t /
g e t o u t a
n e w s p a p e r .
i ••
T h e r e i s a t e r r i f i c c r a s h a t t h e d o o rw a y . T he y a l l t u r n
t o s e e Bernstein scrawled a t t h e e n t r a n c e , A r o l l of
b e d d i n g , a s u i t c a s e a nd t wo f r am e d
p i c t u re s
were too
much f o r h im .
\
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KANE ( c o n t ' d )
O h, M r, B e r n s t e i n I f y o u
would
come
h e r e ^ a .
moment p loas o ,
Mr.
B e r n s t e i n ?
B e r n s t e i n r i s c 3 and co mes
o v e a .
KANE (c \nt«d)
M r. C a r t e r , t h i s i s
MrA
B e r n s t e i n . M r. B e r n s t e i n l a
my gsnera l m a n a g e r .
CARTER
( f r i g i d l y )
How do you d o , Mr. Bernsteinl
KANE
Y o u ' v e got a p r i v a t e o f f i c e
h e r e , havon ' t y o u ?
T ho d e l i v e r y w agon d r i v e r h a s now appoarod in \t he
e n t r a n c e w i t h p a r t s o f t h e b e d s t e a d a nd o t h e r
f u r n i t u r e ,
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B u t a m o r n i n g
Kane . — Af te
p r a c t i c a l l y
hour3 a day
business
52
CARTER
My l i t t l e s a nc tu m i s a t
d i s p o s a l . B u t I d o n ' t
I u n d e r s t a n d —
KANE
I 'm g o i n g t o l i v e
ri^ght
h e r e .
( re f l ec t ive ly
As lo ng a s I ha ve
3ARTER
Lewspaper, Mr.
a l l ,
w e ' r e
.osed f o r t w e l v e
e x c e p t f o r t h e
KANE
T h a t ' s o n e o f t h e t h i n g s , I
t h i n k must be ch an ge d , Mr .
C a r t e r / T h e n ew s g o e s o n f o r
twenty-four h o u r s a d a y .
/
/
DISSOLVE
IN T. KANE'S OFFICE - LATE DAY - 1 89 0
3 5 K a ne , i n h i s s h i r t s l e e v e s , a t a r o l l t o p d e s k , i s
w o r k in g f e v e r i s h l y on c o py a n d e a t i n g a v e r y s i z a b l e m e a l
a t t h e same t i m e . C a r t e r , s t i l l f o r m a l ly c o a t e d , i s
s e a t e d a l o n g s i d e h i m .
\
L e l a n d , s e a t e d i n a c o r n e r ,
Is
l o o k i n g o n , d e t a c h e d , a m u s e d . On a c o r n e r o f t h e d e s k ,
B e r n s te i n i s w r i t i n g down f i g u r e .
I ' m n o t
c r i t i c i z i n g ,
M r . C a r t e r ,
b u t h e r o ' s
what
I V n e a n . T h e r e ' s
a f r o n t p a g e s t o r y \ i n the
" C h r o n i c l e , "
( p o i n t s t o I t )
a n d a p i c t u r e — o f
a\
woman i n
B r o o k l y n w ho i s
P r o b a b l y
murdered.
A tos. H ar ry
S i l v e r s t o n e . Why d i d n ' t t h e
"Inquirer" h a v e t h a t
m o r n i n g ?
K ane h a s f i n i s h e d e a t i n g
CARTER
( s t i f f l y )
B e c a u s e w e ' r e r u n n i n g a n ew sp ^
M r . K a n e , n o t a s c a n d a l s h e e t ,
E e
pushos
away
h i s
p l a t e s
.
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5
(CONTINUED)
KANE
I 'm s t i l l h u n g r y , J e d .
LELAND
W e ' l l g o o v e r t o R e c t o r ' s
a n d g e t s o m e t h i n g d e c e n t .
KANE
(no in t
ing t o the
n
C h r o n i c l e " ) .-
T h e " C h r o n i c l e " h a 3 a
two
co lu mn
h e a d l i n e , M r. C a r t e r . / Why
h a v e n ' t w e? /
53
CARTER
T he n e w s w a s n ' t
big
enou gh.
KANE
I f t h e h e a d l i n e i s b i g e n o u g h ,
i t
riokes
t h e
nows
b i g eno u gh.
The
:..urc2r
o f t h i s
M r 3 .
H a r r y
S i l v e r s
t o n e —
/
CARTER
T h e r e ' s n o p r o o f t h a t t h e woman
was
murdered
- - o r even t h a t
s h e ' s d e a d .
1
t
Is
KANE
( s m i l i n g a b i t )
The
: ,
C h r o n i c l e
; 1
d o e s n ' t s a y s h e ' s
m u r d e r e d , M r. C a r t e r . I t s a y s
s h e ' s n i s s i n g ; t he n e i g h b o rs
a r e g e t t i n g s u s p i c i o u s .
CARTER
I t ' s n o t o u r f u n c t i o n t o r e p o r t
t h e
goss ip
of
h o u s e w i v e s .
I f
v.e w e r e
I n t e r e s t e d
i n
t h a t
k i n d
o f t h i n g ,
t h e
Dapor
/
M r . K a n e , we c o u l d f i l l
t w i c e o v e r d a i l y —
/ KANE
/
( g e n t l y )
.That ' s
t h o k i n d o f t h i n g we a r e
• g o i n g t o b e
int o res
ted in f rom
•'now
o n , M r. C a r t e r . I
wish
y o u ' d
send
y ou r b e s t man u p to
s e e M r , S i l v « r s t o n o . H ave h im
t o l l M r . Si lvcrBtone i f he
d o e s n ' t p r o d u c e h i s w i f e a t o n c e ,
the
" I n q u i r e r " w i l l h a v e him-
ar restod .
( g e t s
an
idea)
( c o n t ' d )
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KANE (cont 'd )
H ave h im t e l l M r . S i l v e r s t o n e
h e ' s a d e t o c t i v e f ro m t h e
C e n t r a l O f f i c e . I f M r,
S i l v e r s t o n e a s k s t o s e e h i 3
b a d g e , y o u r m a n i s t o g e t /
i n d i g n a n t a nd c a l l Mr. S i l v e r s t o n e
a n anarch is t . L o u d l y , s o t h a t
t h e n e i g h b o r s c a n hear.
CARTER
R e a l l y , M r . _ K a n e, I c a n ' t s e e
t h a t t h e funct ion o f a r e s p e c t a b l e
nev/spaper —
KANE
M r. C a r t e r , y o u ' v e b e e n m o s t
u n d e r s t a n d i n g . G ood d a y .
C a r t e r l e a v e s t h e ro o m , c l o s i n g t h e do o r b e h i n d h i m .
LELAND
P o o r M r . C a r t e r
KANE
What makes those f allows t h i n k
t h a t a n e w s p a p e r i s so:r.cthing
r i g i d , s o m e th in g i n f l e x i b l e ,
t h a t p e o p l e o r e s u p p o s e d t o p a y
tw o
cents
f o r —
BERNSTEIN
KANE
T h r e e c a n t s .
i
/
(calmly)
T w o c e n t s .
B e r n s t e i n l i f t s h i s h ead an d l o o k s a t Kan e .
[ BERNSTEIN
( t a p p i n g o n
t h e p a p e r )
T h i s Ii3 a l l f i g u r e d a t t h r e e
cen ts / a co py .
KANE
Re-fitgure i t , M r. B e r n s t e i n , a t
tw o / c e n t s . R e a d y f o r d i n n e r ,
Jedf
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BERNSTEIN
M r. L e l a n d , i f
Mr,
K an e h o s h o u l d
d e c i d e n t d i n n e r t o c u t t h e p r i c e
t o o n e c e n t , o r m a y b e e v e n h e
s h o u l d m a k e u p h i 3 m i n d t o giv
t h o p a p e r a w ay w i t h a
half-pg*6id
o f t e a —
LELAND
Y ou p e o p l e w o r k t o o f a s ' t f o r
m e
T a l k a b o u t n e w b r o o m s
BERNSTEIN
Who s a i d a n y t h i n g a b o u t b r o o m s ?
. KANE
I t ' 3
a s a y i n g , M r, B e r n s t e i n ,
A new
bro/foi
s w oo p s c l e a n .
BERNSTEIN
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PRIMITIVE COMPOS CIO
AND PRESSROOM
-
NEW YORK
^INQUIRER"
- NIGHT - 1 89 0
3 6 T h e g r o u n d f l o o r w i t h t h e w i nd o w s o n t h e s t r e e t . I t i s
a l m o s t m i d n i g h t . G r o u p ed a r o u n d a l a r g o t a b l e , on w h i c h
a r e s e v e r a l l o c k e d f o r m s o f t y p e —
a r e
K an e a n d L e l a n d
i n e l e g a n t e v e n i n g c l o t h e s , B e r n s t e i n , u n c h a n g ed f ro m
t h e a f t e r n o o n , C a r t e r a n d S m o t h e r s , t h o c o m p o s i n g r oo m
f o r e m a n , n e r v o u s a n d
ha r a ssed .
\KANE
M r. C a r t e r , f r o n t p a g e s d o n ' t
l o o k l i k e t h i s a n y m o r e . H av e
y ou s e e n t h e "Chron ic le '*?
CARTER
T h e " I n q u i r e r "
i s
n o t
c o m p e t i t i o n w i t h a r a g
t h e " C h r o n i c l e . "
j t*t.
BERNSTEIN
W o s h o u l d
b e p u b l i s h i n g
s u c h
r a g . T h e " I n q u i r e r " — I
w o u l d n ' t w r a p u p t h e l i v e r f o r
t h o c a t i n t h e
"J
I nq u i r e r " —
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CARTER
Mr. Kane, I must a s k you t o se e
t o i t t h a t t h i s - - t h i s p e r s o n
l e a r n s t o c o n t r o l h i s t o n g u e .
I d o n ' t t h i n k ho
1
3 e v e r b e e n i n
a n e w s p a p e r o f f i c e b e f o r e .
/
KANE
Y o u ' r e r i g h t . M r. B e r n s t e i n
i s i n t h e w h o l e s a l e j e w e l r y
b u s i n e s s .
BERNSTEIN
Was i n t h e w h o l es a l e j ew el ry
Bus ine s s
.
/
KANE
H i s t a l e n t s soemed to be what
I was
looking,for .
CARTER
( s p u t t e r i n g ;
h e ' s r e a l l y
s o r e )
I warn y o u , Mir, K a n e , i t would
go a g a i n s t my g r a i n t o d e s e r t
you when you need no s o b a d l y —
b u t I w o u l d f e o l o b l i g e d t o a s k
t h a t m y r e s ig n a t i o n b e a c c e p t e d .
KANE
I t i s a c c e n t e d , M r, C a r t e r ,
v/itn~"assurances
of ny d e e p e s t
r e g r e t .
CARTER
B u t Mr. Ka n e , I mean t —
KANE
( t u r n i n g t o
S m a t h e r s ;
q u i e t l y )
L e t ' s d o t h e s e p a g e s o v e r a g a i n .
SMATHERS
( a s t h o u g h K a n e
w o r e t a l k i n g
Gre ok)
W o c a n ' t rcmako thorn,
Mr.
Kan e .
KANE
Roraake? I s t h a t t h o r i g h t wo rd ?
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SMATHERS
Wo g o t o p r e s s i n f i v e m i n u t e s . /
KANE
/
/
( q u i e t l y )
W e l l , l e t ' s re m a k e t h e s e p a g e s ,
M r . S m a t h e r s . /
/
SMATHERS
I
e go to press in five minutes,
Mr.
Kane. '
/
KANE /
W e ' l l h a v e t o p u b l i s h h a l f a n
h o u r l a t e , t h a t ' s
a l l ^
SMATHERS
You
d o n ' t und era
tand , Mr.
Kane .
We go to pross i n f i v e m i n u t e s .
We c a n ' t r ema ke them , Mr . Kan e .
K an e r e a c h e s o u t a nd s h o v e s t h o f o r m s o n t o t h e f l o o r ,
w h or e t h e y s c a t t e r i n t o h u n d r e d s of b i t s .
KANE
You can remake th e m n o w , c a n ' t
y o u , M r. S m a t h e r s ? A f t e r t h e
t y p e ' s b e e n r e s e t a n d t h e p a g e s
r e m a d e a c c o r d i n g t o t h e w ay I
t o l d y o u b e f o r e , M r. S m a t h e r s ,
k i n d l y h a v e p r o o f s p u l l e d —
i s t h a t r i g h t , J e d - - proofs
pul led? — a n d b r i n g t h e m t o m e .
T h e n , i f I c a n ' t f i n d a n y w ay
t o improve them aga in — I
s u p p o s e w e ' l l h a v e t o g o t o p r e s s .
He s t a r t s o u t o f t h e r o o m , f o l l o w e d b y L e l a n d .
BERNSTEIN
In c a s e y o u d o n ' t t i n d e r s t a n d ,
M r , S m a t h e r s — h e ' s a n e w
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EXT. NEW YORK STREET - VERY EARLY DAWN - 1890
37 The picture is mainly occupied by the "Inquirer" building,
identified
by
sign. Over this newsboys
are
heard selling
the "Chronicle." A3 the dissolve completes itself, CAMERA
MOVES toward the one lighted window - the window of Kane's
office.
DISSOLVE
I N T . KANE'S OFFICE - VERY EARLY DAWN - 1890
38 The newsboys are s t i l l hea rd from the s t r ee t belo w. Kane,
in hl 3 s hi r t s le ev es , s tan d s at the open window lo ok ing
o ut . On the bed
13
seat ed Ber ns te i n. Leland i s in a
c h a i r . \
\
\ NEWSB OYS' VOICES
Chronicle] — Chronicle] —
H'ya
— the Chronicle] — Get
ya'
Chroniclei\
\
Kane closes
the
window
and
turns
to the
others.
LiE A
ELAND
We'll
be on the
street soon,
Charlie — another.ten minutes.
OSTEINERNSTEIN
I t ' 3
thr ee hour s and\ fi ft y
mi nutes l a t e — bu t we d id I t —
Leland r i se s from the c ha i r , st r et c hi ng
painful ly .
KANE
Tired?
LELAND
It's been a tough day.
A wasted day*
Wasted?
Charlie?J
KANE
BERNSTEIN
LELAND
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BERNSTEIN
You just made the paper
ovei
four times tonight, Mr.
That's all —
KANE
I've changed the front page a
little, Mr, Bernstein. /That's
not enough. « There's/something
I've got to get into
this
paper
besides pictures and print —
I've got to make the /'New York
Inquirer" as important to New
York as the gas in t,nat light.
LELAND
What're
you
going/to
do, Charlie?
/
/
KANE
My Declaration of Principles —
Don't 3mile, Jed --
(getting
.
the idea)
Take dictation, Mr. Bernstein —
BERNSTEIN
I can't write shorthand, Mr.
Kane —
KANE
.I'll
write it myself.
Kane grabs a oiece of rough paper and a grease crayon.
Sitting down on the bed next to Bernstein, he starts to
write*
BERNSTEIN
(looking over
his shoulder)
You don't wanta make any promises,
Mr.
Kane, you don't wanta keep.
KANE
(aa
he writes)
These'11
be kept,
(stops and
reads what
he has written) (cont'd)
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KANE (cont'd),
I'll provide the people of this
city with a daily paper that
will
tell all the news honestly,
(starts to /
write again;
reading as
he writesT
I will also provide then —
/
LELAND
T h a t ' s t h e s e c o n d sentence
y o u ' v e s t a r t e d w i t h "
1
KANB
(looking up )
People are going
to'know
who's
responsible. And they're going
to get the news —'the true
news -- quickly and simply and
entertainingly. /
(v/ith
real /
conviction)
And no special interests will
be allowed to interfere with
the truth of that news.
(writes again;
reading as
he writes)
I will also provide them with a
fighting and tireless champion
of their rights as citizens and
human beings — Signed -
Charles Foster Kane.
Charlie
LELAND
Kane looks up.
LELAND (cont'd)
Can I have that?
KANB
I'm going to print it —
( c a l l s )
Mike]
j f l f l lW-^
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Y e s ,
M r.
Kane*
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KANE
H e r e ' s a n e d i t o r i a l . I w ant
t o r u n i t i n a b o x on
the
f r o n t
p a g e .
61
MIKE
(very wearily)
Today's front page,
Kane?
KANE'
That's right. We'll have to
remake again —
better
go down
and let them
knowJ
MIKE
All right, Mr. Kane.
(he starts/
away)
LELAND
Just a minute/ Mike.
Mike turns.
/
ISLAND (cont 'd)
W hen y o u ' r e d o ne w i t h t h a t , I ' d
l i k e t o h a v e i t back,
/
* --
Mike registers that,
this,
in his opinion, is another
screwball and leaves.
Kane
looks at Leland.
/
LELAND (cont'd)
— I'd just like to keep that
particular piece of paper
myself. I've got a hunch it
might turn out to be one of the
Important
papers — of our time.
(a little
ashamed of
his ardor)
A document — like the
Declaration of Independence —
.end
the Constitution
—
and my
first report card at
school.
Kane smiles back at him, but they are both serious. The
voices of the newsboys fill the air,
/
VOICES OF
NEWSBOYS
C h r o n i c l e ] — H ' y a , t h e
C h r o n i c l e ] G e t y a ' C h r o n i c l e ]
- - - t h e
C h r o n i c l e ]
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S X T .
layriasa CINDOV/
ON STREET LEVEL -
DAY
- IM90
CLOSEUP - front parte of the INQUIRER shows big bc xed
editorial with heading:
LY PRINCIPYSS - A DECLARATION
By Charlea Foster Kane
CA353A CO:mNUSS PULLING BACK and
SECm
newspaper to be
on
the
top of a pile of newspapers,
/As
we DRAW FURTHER
BACK, we see four piles — then six-'piles -- until we see
finally a big field of piles of INQUIRERS. Hands come
into the frame and start pickinfe/up the piles,
CAMEhA PANS to glass windov; on the\street level of the
INQUIRE?.. Painted on the glass
areXthe
words
"NET?
YORK
DAILY INQUIRER - CIRCULATION; 26.000.X — this very
prominent. Through the glass we can
tine
Kane, Leland and
Bernstein, leaning on tho little velvet\draped rail at
the beck of the window/ peering out throtigh the; glas3 to
the street where Inquirer newsboys are seen to be
movin>r.
During this, CA1Z.JJL TIGHTENS on window unti\ "CIRCULATION
26,000" fills frame-i Then —
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EXT. CS'iQJTICLZ '.YIKDOy.' - 0;; STREET LEVEL - DAY - 1600
CLOSEUP 0? SIi.N ; HICH READS; CIRCULATION 495,000
CAMSitt PULLS BACK TO SH0V7 this is a similar window on the
street level of the Chronicle Building, The
words:
"NEW
YO.tK DAiLY
CHRONICLE"
are prominentlv painted above this
and throurh the glass we can see a framed Dhotofrraph of
some nine men. A sign over this reads: EDITORIAL AND
EXECUTIVE STAFF OF THS NSW YORK CHRONICLE. A aim beneatl
it reads: GREATEST HS7SPAPE?. STAFF IN THE-WORLD.
Then
CAMERA CONTINUES PULLING BACK to show Kane, Leland and
Bernstein standing in front of the window, looking in.
They look very tired and cold^
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I know you're
t i r e d ,
gentlemen,
but I
brought
you here f
oit
a
reason.
I"think
thi s l i t t l^
pilgrimage wi l l do us good.
LBLAND
(wearily)
The
Chronicle's
a good
newspaper)
KANE
I t ' s a good id ea f or a newspaper*
Notice tho circulation?
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bSRNSTSIN
(sullenly)
Four hundred sixty thousand.
KANE
Well, as the rooster suld/to his
hens v/hen they looked at/the
ostrich eggs — I an nop
criticizing, ladies — A am
merely trying to show Xrou what
io being done in the .same line
by your competitors,
BERNSTEIN
Ah,
Mr. Kane -- with them
fellows on tho Chronicle --
(indicates
photograptO
— it's no tric/k to get
circulation.
KANE
You're right/, Mr. Bernstein.
BERNSTEIN
(sigh's)
You know iiow long it took the
Chronicle to get that staff
together? Twenty years.
KANE
I know.
Kane smiling, lights a cigarette, looking into tho
window. CAMEHA MOVES IN TO HOLD on the photograph of the
nine men,
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CITY ROOM - T:£S INQUIRER - NIGHT • 1898
The same nine men, arrayed as in the\photogranX
r
but with
Kane in the centor of the first
row,
CAMERA PULLS B.iCK, revealing that theyVs« being
photographed in a corner of the room.
Xx
is 1:30 at
night^ Desks,
etc.,
have been pushed^Against the
wall.
Running down tho center of the
room
Jcz a Vang banquet
table.
PHOTOGDlvPHER
That's all. Thank you.
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The phonographic subjects rise,
KANE
(a sudden thought;
Make up an extra copy^nd mail
it to the "Chronicle.
Kane makes his way to the head of the table.
KANB (cont'd)
Gentlemen of the Inquirer]
Eight
year3
ago
-/•
eight long
very busy years dgo — I stood
in front of the Chronicle
window and looked at a picture
of the nine greatest newspapermen
in the world, f. felt like a kid
in front of a ctndy shop.
Tcni;jht I-got ray candy. Welcome,
irentlemen, to pho Inquirer. It
inppy to learn that
this morning was
n New York -- six
ghty-four thousand.
will make you
our circulati
the greatest
hundred and e,
oEENSTSIIT
Six
hundred/eighty-four
thousand
cne hundred/ and
thirty-two.
General applause.
KANE
All of yoii - new and old —
you're all getting the best
salaries an town. Not one of
you has been hired because of
his loyalty. It's your talent
I'm interested in — I like
talent.
/ Talent has made the
Inquirer tho kind of paper I
want —/the best newspaper in
the
wor/Ld.
Applause.
K A N E ( c o n t ' d )
Having
thus welcomed you,
p e r h a p s y o u ' l l f o r g i v e my
ru de ne ss i n t a k i ng l e a ve o f you .
I 'm' go in g abr oad ne xt week
for
a
v a c a t i o n .
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KANE (cont'i
I have promised ray doctor for
some time that I would leave
when I could, I now realize
that I can. This decision is
every wuy the best compliment
that I could pay you.
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Gratified murmurs.
KANE
(Cont'd)
I have promised Mr. Bernstein,
and I herewith repentt that
promise publicly, fori the next
three months to forgelt all about
the new feature sections — the
Sunday supplement —/ and not to
try to think up anyjideas for
comic sections -- and not to —
BERNSTEIN
(interrupting)
Say, Mr. Kano, so/long
a3
you're
promising --
ther/b's
a lot of
statues in
Europe^
you ain't
bought yet —
1:
LANE
(int e rrupt ing)
You can't
blame/
me, Mr. Bernstein,
They've been making statues for
two thousand years, and I've only
been buying for
five.
BERNSTEIN
Nine Venuses/already we got,
tv.'enty-six Virgins — two whole
warehouses full of stuff —
promise me, Mr. Kane,
KANE
I promise y6u, Mr. Bernstein*
Thank you.
BERNSTEIN
KANE
Oh, Mr. Bernstein —
BERNSTEIN
Yes?
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K/iNE
You don't expect me to keep an
of my promises, do you, Mr,
Bernstein?
Terrific laughter.
KANE
(cont
1
Do you, Mr. Leland?
Certainly not.
Laughter and applause.
• KANE
And now, gentlemen, your
complete attention, please]
LELAND
Kane puts his two fingers in his rcouch anu whistles.
This is a signal. A band strikes up and enters in advance
of a regiment of very magnificont rauidens. As some of the
girls are detached from the line and made into partners
for individual
dcncing
—
BERNSTEIN
Isn't it wonderful? Such a
party:
LELAND
Yes.
What
\
BERNS'r
(to Leland)
's the matter?
'KIN
LELAND
— B e r n s t e i n , t h e s e men whh are
now w i th the " I nq ui r e r " —
\ h o
w e r e w i t h t h e " C h r o n i c l e "
uiitjll
y e s t e r d a y — w e r e n ' t t h e y j u s t
a s d e v o t e d t o t h e " C h r o n i c l e " '
H
M - n
4
T
<
T
M
'
a
s
they are now
—
our
kind-oil paper?
BERNSTEIN
Sure, Thoy'ro like anybody
else.
They got work to
do*
They do it,
(proudly)
Only they happen to be the best
> i
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men in the
business.
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7
(after
a
J°
w
« s W d
for the
sainc
things
the "Chronicle" stondTfor,
Bernstein? ' '
BERNSTEIN
(indignantly)/
Certainly not./ What of it? Mr.
Kane he'll have Ehara changed to
his kind of
newspapermen
in a
week.
There's always/a chance, of
Kane — without his knowing it.
, KANE
(lirhtl r)
tt^i'
p
n t l
^
e n
» are we going
to declare /ar on Spain?
» ,
, - LELAND
lhe Inquirer already has.
v
, , KANE
Sarchiftf
C6d
'
" ™ - * ™ —
_ , LELAND
I am not'over-dressed.
/ KANB
necktiei Mr. Dernstein.
Bernstein
embarrassed,
beams from one to the other.
/
LELAND
Charlie, I wish —
,
, KAHE
Are
yA
u
trying to bo serious?
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LELAND
KANE
(to
Bernstein),
He d r ives m\ c r az y / Mry
Eernstein,
we.
get twoyftundred
applications sTday from
newspapermen a l l over the
country who wnnt\to go to Cuba —
don ' t we, Mr. Bernstein?
Bernstein i s unabl e tjO
answer.
Eernstein , do
necktie?
ND
you like my
KANE
le —
(*gno
I offer
(porn^
s ^ c " f l
L
C o S
~
J ^ ^ u l r e r ' s
(turns to)
LelandJ
£U$%- --
7
^
naDed a
\
iLAND
" g a r f
r d l
y r t t a t
you'd call a
1
A man of
very
Mr» Bornste;'
.standards,
LEi
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KANE
It's the best I can do,
(looking up)
Hello, Georgie."
/
Georgie, a very handsome madam has walked into the
picture. She leans over and speaks quietly in his ear,
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Hello, Charlo.
GEORGIE
LBLAND
You're
d o in g v e r y we l l .
r I
GEORGIE
Is
everything the
why
you want
it, dear?
'
KAME
(looking
around)
If everybody's having fun,
that's the way
Iwont
it,
/G30RGIS
I've got
sons
other little girls
coming over -•*
i '
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i r-r-r . « T
. LELAND
( interrupt ing)
I f y ou want to know what yo u 'r e
d o i n g — y o u ' r e d r a g g i n g y o u r
cou ntr y in to a wa r . Do vou know
w ha t a v/ar i s , C h a r l i e ?
/
KANB
I've
told
you about Jed, Georgie.
He needs to relax* «*« «.
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There's a condition in Cuba that
noed3 to be remedied maybe —
but between that and a
v/ar.
/
KANE
You know G eo rg ie , Jed , d on ' t
you?
„,
GEORGES
Glad to meet you , Jed ,
»ti
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KANB
Jed, how would the
Inquirer
look
with no news about this
non-existent war with Pulitzer
and Hearst devoting twenty
columns a day to it.
LELAND
They only do it because you do.
KANE
And I only do it because they
do it -- and they only do it vo
lt's a vicious circle, isn't/it?
(rises)
I'm going over to
Georgie'*,
Jed. — You know Georgie,/don't
you,
Mr. Bernstein?
Bernstein shakes hands with Georgie.
KANB/
Georgie knows a young lady whom
I'm sure you'd adoro, Jed. —
Wouldn't he, Geongio?
,/LBLAN
LAND
The first paper that had the
courage to tell the actual truth
about Cuba -*
KANE
Why only the other evening I
said to
myself,
if Jededlah
woro only here to adore this
young lady — this —
(shaps his
fingers)
What's her name again?
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42 Georgie is introducing a young lady to Leland. On sound
track
we
hear piano
music. .-'" *
GEORGIE
,'
(right on the
y"
cue from ./'
preceding
scene)
Ethel — this gentleman has
been very anxious to meet you --
Mr,
Leland, this is Ethel.
• LTKLL
Hello,
Mr. Leland.
CAMEF.A PA.:S to include Fane, seated at piano, with
Bernstein and girls ,;ataered around him.
ONE
Or T:{E Ouii
Charlie I Play
the song
about
yau".
ANOT/£F. '.
:
IHL
Is
thei-e
a
son^ abTsut Chai'lie?
F.ANE
You buy a
baV
of
peanui>c
in
thi3 town/and you get
a\ong
writ ten,'about you.
^ \
K a ne h a s b r o k e n i n t o " O h , I'r. Kaixrf" a n d h e a n d t h e g i r l s
s t a r t t o s i n g . E t h e l leads th&^unhap.ny L e l an d o v er t o
t h e g r o u p . K a n e ,
3e-:.in.7,
Loland ano t a k i n g liis e y e ,
motions t o t h e professor v*o ha a been s t a n d i n g n e x t t o
h i m , t o ' t a k e o v e r . The/ prof 033o r doo3 s o . T he s i n g i n g
c o n t i n u e s . K ane r i s e s
a:id
c r o s s e s t o L e l a n d .
"'• KANE ( c o n t ' d )
S a y , J e d — yo u , d o n ' t h a v e t o
g o t o Cu b a i f yon d o n ' t w an t t o .
Y ou d o n ' t h a v e
to
r
be a war
c o r r e s p o n d e n t i f
y.ou
d o n ' t w a n t
t o . I ' d v /nnt to be, a war
c o r r e s p o n d e n t . \
( s i l e n c e ) 1
I ' v e
<-ot
a n i d e a .
LELAND \
Pa;, c l o s e a t t e n t i o n , B e r n s t e i n .
The hand ia quicker tlian ' the
e y e .
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LiiLAND
( a t i l l s m i l i n g )
I t doesn't iralw an y di f ference
>.-
abo'-.t
i.:e,
b u t o n e o f t h e s e daj?£
y o u ' r e
r-o:ln'-;
t o f i n d o u t t ha i ;
a l l t - . i -
ci&Tv.
of y^ars wixfi't
/
s
bo enough —
s
.'•C-.*
1
ILAN _
It,Co;)n r.ako a
ou ' re wron:"
d i f f e r e n c e a b o u t ^ y o u . - - Come
to thinl*. of i t . / r . r .
- I c i T i s t o i n ,
I d o n ' t blamo M r. Loland f o r n o t
wanting t o bo a v/ar eorrscpondent.
I t ir.n't much o f a v / a r . B e s i d e s ,
t h e y t e l l ' m e t h e r e i s n ' t a d e c e n t
rnstaura.-it on t he
v;hole
i s l a n d .
DISSOLVE
T"*
KANS'S 0,>"ICT3 - DA7 - 1CS3
The s ho t begins on a CLOSEUP C7 a l a b e l . The words
:nr
C.
:"*. K a n e ,
r-aria,
f r a n c o , " f i l l t h e s c r e e n .
T h i s r e g i s t e r s a s CAMS-A P>JLLS ?>ACi; t o
shov;
ramaindar of
l a b e l i n . lur^-jr let ters teller, r e a d : "To
C:
a r l e s ? o s t c r
/ * * :;r.rio, .ev: York - HO.-.3 FO^VcitZVAL." C:X.?\: C0'-
r
,:ir.
T
£S
PULL::."G
BA iF ,
showing the Juitirc s a n c tu m p i l e d t o t h e
c o i l l n - wit h :.nc ,i;ij b o x c 3 , \ c r 3 t o ' - s t a t u e s e nd a r t
o b j e c t s . One- third of t h e
s\at'.v.--s
Jiavo been ur.ci'atod.
Leland i s i n h i s u ' . i r t sloov-jai c l e a r l y h« na3 h;en
opening
boxer;,
w i t h
claw-harr. o \
i n (me
hand.
Barns t a i n
lias
cone to
tiie
d o o r .
V*'.?-. ' " C ' l - . 'T*" \
I g o t h e r e a c a b l e fror-: l'\,
H a n : .
— Mr . Li l a n d , why d i d n ' t
you ^o t o E u r o p e v;.tth ham? \He
w ant ed yo t t o .
LELAND
I wanted hi:.i t o have f un — and
u i t h r<;« a l o n g —
T h i s 3to '.j
j - e r : i s t o i : i «
3 c r » t e i n l o o k s a t h i m .
LELAND ( c o n t ' d )
I 3 n m s t o i n , I w i s h y o u ' d l e t me
ai.l:
you a
i'ov/
quontiovsa - and
a n sw e r me t r u t h f u l l y *
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~» BnaasasBBSaESZ "•'•'- »
_.
I .
^URNST'SIN
D on ' t I a lw ay s? M os t o f the
t i m e ?
LELAND
B e r n s t e i n , am I a s t u f f e d
3 h i r t ? Am I a
horsc-facod
h y p o c r i te ? Are I a Now Eng land
3choolmarm?
B
-.
,
~'T
T,
^ •'".•T'•
,
:
Yes.
Leland is surpriaed.
DE?.NST";iN
(cont'd)
If
you
thought
I'd answer you
different
from
v/hat Mr, Lane
tells you — well, I
wox-.ldn
1
1.
\
?au3 0
as
I?»rnstcin
l o o k s a r o u n d t h e r o o m .
\
BLT.HSTJillM, ( c o n t ' d )
M r.
Lolar.d, r.t's
good he pr o mis ed
n o t t o ro n e, b a c k a n y s t a t u e s .
LELAND
\
I d o n ' t t h i n k y ou
understand'.
E e r n s t e i n .
T hi s i s one of
th
rareot Venuses
i n
e x i s t e n c e . *
(studying
3KT-ST3H
«ne s t a t u e
o n r o f u l l y )
Mot s o r a r o l i k e y o u t h i n k , M r .
L e l a n d , '
(handing
c a b l e t o
Loland)
H e r e ' s t h e c a b l e f r o m
Mr.
K ane .
L e la n d t a k e s i t , r e a d s i t , s m i l o 3 .
BiSKNSTEIN ( c o n t ' d )
( a s L e l a n d
r e a d s
cablo)
Ho
w a n t s t o bu y t h e w o r l d ' s
b i g g e s t d i a m o n d . .
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?£?.
d r / -COM ^^DAY - 18C3
^ —
DISSOLVE to olabqrato lovin.5 cup on
v;hich
i s engraved :
\
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"OME,
EK.\lCA J2
— Pro-. 730 employees of
tlie
rev: "c rk Inqui rer
«\
A3
CA "E?A rVLLL JACI.Ait
rev eal s tha t thi s cup i s on a
l i t t l e taol - a;;
thy
far
eno
of th?
Inquirer
City Room.
]"e;rc
to tL.^
tabi c stonus Hernstcin,
rubbing his hands,
•"illisan
anc
:
a ACV ni;h<ir\e::ocuo ives. Throughout tho
en
Sir-?.
Z. iy .".-jor, there \*: a feeling of cleanliness and
ant ic J. pa t ier :.
CAIT HOY
(at stairway))
H o n
h.-j
cor:-.;sl
Bernstein and Hi ll r-an st. n-t towr.n- the door . A l l t'<e
others r i s e , ju s t as '>---rnot'ii\i .'»
R
ts to tho do or , i t
burstoop"::; and i nn c , an o nv o l o to i n hi s hand, sc or ns i n.
KANE
Hollo ,
i : r .
.-".emote in I
Kane co ntinues a t the same r a te oAspoed with v hi c i he
entered,
j e m s t i i n .Vol lowing
behind hir., at
tho
head of
a t ra in
v.'hich
inc lud so Uil lr r.n am', bt her s. Tlie ra ce
sto ps a couple of stops boyond the Jpc io ty Ed i to r ' s desk
by Kane ;:ho roves back to the desk, Sakin*; something of
a t raff ic
.iar.i.
(A plaque on the deskYvhich ro ada
"Socioty i l l
to r"
i s what caught Lans '
A.-jye
. )
KANE (cont' d )
Secure Y..Q,
I ' v e boon away so
lonr;,
I d o n ' t know your r outi ne
Miss —
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E.JRNSTSIN
( p r o u d l y )
Miss Tovmscnrt, M r . C h a r l e s
i
F o s t e r KaneI
I1AN2
Miss
Tovmsend,
I ' d —
( h e ' s p r e t t y
embarrassed, b y
h i 3 a u d i e n c e )
I — h a ve a l i t t l o soc ia l
announcement
h e r o ,
( ho p u t s i t
o n t h e desk)
I wish you w o u l d n ' t / t r e a t t h i s
a n y d i f f e r e n t l y t h a n yo u wo u l d —
y o u wo u l d — an y opher —
anything
e l s e .
He l o o k s a r o u n d a t t h e o t h e r s w i t h
some
e m b a r r a s s m e n t .
At t h a t mo men t , "113man hands "er-nsLein t h o c u p .
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78
48
to the barouche.
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49
DOWN SHOT - of
Kane,*crossing
the
ci
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in
this
shpt, aeea
the/_
waves Gaily* steps into, the barouche. Emily looks at
him smilingly. He kisses her full on tho lips before he
sits down. She aots a bi\ totfen aback because of the
public nature of the scenes/but she isn't really annoyed.
DISSOLVE
INT, CITY ROOM -^INQUIRER" - DAY \ 1898
Bernstein and group at window.
BERNSTEIN
A girl like that, believe me,
she's lucky President's niece,
huh
Say, before he's through,
she'll be a president's wife I
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Large picture of
— Kane and Emil
four columns -
NEWSPAPER -
KA
WITH STILL
OF GR
FRONT PAGE ' ' I N Q U 1 R 3 R V U 8 9 8 - 1 9 0 0 )
(Same set-UD as e
"News Digest."
young oouple
oooupying
happy.
IAGE TO EMILY
WHITE HOUSE LAWN (1900)
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newsreel in
INT. BERNSTEIN'S OFFICE - "INQUIRER" - DAY - 1940
50
\
Bernstein and Thompson* As the dissolve
oomes,
Bernstein's voice is heard.
V / '
^ERNSTEIN
The way things turned out, I
don't need to
tell
you — Miss
Emily Norton
waa ip osebudI
/
?H0MP\
HOMPSON
It d idn't end very we' l l , d id
It? /
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, BERNSTEIN
It ended.\ — Then there was
Susie. — \That ended too,
(shrugs,
a pause)
I guess heididn't make her very
happy. — You know, I was
thinking —that Rosebud you're
trying to find out about ~
79
Yes —
THOMPSON
^ERNSTEIN
Maybe that was something he
lost. Mr. Kane Vas a man that
lost — almost everything he
had. You ought to talk to Mr.
Leland. Of oourae, he and Mr.
Kane didn't exactly see eye to
eye.
You take tho Spanish-
American V/ar. I guess Mr.
Leland was
ri^ht.
That was
Mr. Kane's war. We didn't
really have anything to fight
about — \
(chuckles) \
Eut do you think if it hadn't
been for that war of M*r. Kane's,
we'd have the Panama Canal? I
wish I knew where Mr. Leland
was — \
(slowly) \
Maybe even he's — a lot *of the
time now they don't tell
ee
hose
things — maybe
evon
he'3^dead.
THOMPSON
,
In case you'd like to
kno\7,
,Mr.
Bernstein, he's at the Huntington
Memorial Hospital on 180th Street.
BERNSTEIN
You don't say Why I had no
idea —
THOMPSON
Nothing particular the matter \
with him, they tell me. Just
— \
BERNSTEIN
Just old age*
(smiles sadly)
It's the only disease, Mr.
Thompson, you don't look forward
to being oured of.
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EXT. HOSPITAL ROOF - DAY - 1940
51 CLOSE SHOT - ThompsbVi. He 13 tilted back in a ohalr
leaning against
a~chimney.
Leland's
voico
is heard for
a few moments before Leland i3 seen.
LELAND'S VOICE
When you get Ao my age, young
man, you don't\miss anything.
Unless maybe itiy's a good drink
of Bourbon. Even that doesn't
make much difference, if you
remember there hasn't been any
good Bourbon in
tljis
country
for twenty years.
CAMERA HAS PULLED BACK, revealing that Leland, wrapped
in a blanket, is in a wheel chair, talking to Thompson.
They are on the flat roof of a
yiospital.
TH0MPSO1
Mr.
Leland, you were —
LELAND
You don't happen to have
cigar, do you? I've got a young
physician who thinks I'm going
to stop smoking .... I changed
the subject, didn't I? Deal
dear
What a
disarreeable
old
man I've become. You want to\
know what I think of Charlie
Kane? — Well, — I suppose he>
had some private sort of
greatness.
But he kept it to
himself.
(grinning)
He never — gave himself away —
He never gave anything away.
He just ~ left you a tip. He
had a generous mind. I don't
suppose anybody ever had so many
opinions. That v/as because he
had the power to express them,
and Charlie lived on power and
the excitement of using it. —
But he didn't believe in
anything
except
Charlie Kane.
He never had a conviction
except Charlie Kane in hi3 life,
I guess he
diod
without one. —
That must havo been pretty
unpleasant. (cont'd)
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LELAND (cont'd)
Of
course.,
a lot of us check out
with no special conviction about
death. But we do know what
we're
leaving....we
believe in
something.
(looks\
sharply
at Thompson)
You're absolutely sure you
haven't got A oigar?
\
\ THOMPSON
Sorry, Mr. Leland.
LELAND
Never mind. — Bernstein told
you about the first days at
the office, didn't he? — Well,
Charlie was a bad newspaperman
even then. He entertained his
readers but Ii9 never told them
the truth.
THOMPSON
Maybe you could remombor
something that — \
\
LELAND \
I con remember everything.
That's my curse, young m^n.
It's the greatest curse that's
ever been inflicted on th?
human raoe. Memory -- I
his oldest friend.
(slowly)
— As far as I was concerned,
he behaved like a swine. Hot
that Charlie ever was brutal\
He just did brutal things.
Maybe I wasn't his friend. IJ
I wasn't, he nevor h- d one.
Maybe I was what nowadays you
oall a
stooge*
THOMPSON
Mr.
Leland, what do you know
about Rosebud?
LELAND
Rosebud? Oh Hi3 dying words
— Rosebud — Yeah. I
saw that
in
the
"Inquirer," Well, I've
never believed anything I saw in
the "Inquirer." Anything
else?
8 1
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Thompson is taken aback.
LELAND (cont'd)
I'll tell you about Emily. I
used
to go to
dancing school
with her. I was very graceful.
Oh — we were talking about
the first Mrs . Kane
—
THOMPSON
What was
she like?
82
/
NOTE:
She was like all/the other
girls I knew In/dancing school.
They were nicfir girls. Emily
was
a
little/nicer. She did
her best -^Charlie did his
best — yell, after the first
couple dr months they never
saw much of each other except
at breakfast. It was a marriage
jus/s like any other marriage.
The following scenes ftove,
are played
in
the
sar
lighting, special efCects
wardrobe•
a period of nine years
et
with only changes
in
outside the window,
and
52
INT. KANE'S HOME - BREAKFAST ROOM - DAY - 1901
Kane, in white tail?, and' Emily formally attired. Kane
is pouring a glass of milk
N
for Emily out of a milk
bottle. As ho finishes, he. leans over and playfully
nips tho baok of her nock*
EMILY>
(flustered)
Charles
(she' s
Go sit down
loving it)
where you
Long.
yti$&r^
KANE
(on the way
to his own
plaoe)
You're
boautiful*
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52 (CONTINUED)
EMILY
I
caA't
be. I'vo never been
to
sik
parties in one night
befora. I've never been up
this late.
KANE
It's Just\a matter of habit.
EMILY
What do
youNauppose
the
servants will think?
LNE
T h e y ' l l t h i n k wfe en joyed
o u r s e l v e s . D i dn V t w e?
EMILY
( 3 h e g i v e s
a p u r r i n g
s m i l e * T h e n -V)
D e a r e s t — I d o n ' t
sae
why you
h av e t o go s t r a i g h t
osf
t o t h e
n e w s p a p e r .
KANE
You n ev e r s h o u ld have raa rVied
a n e w s p a p e r m a n . T h e y ' r e worse
t ha n 3 a i i o r s . I absolutel j
l o v e y o u .
They look a t eaoh other*
EMILY
Charles, even newspapermen have
1
to sleep.
KANE
(still looking
at her)
I'll call up Bernstein and tell
him to put off ny appointments
till noon. — What time is it?
EMILY
I don't know — ' it's
late.
83
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It's early*
KANE
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INT.
KANE'S HOME - BREAKFAST ROOM - DAY - 1902
53 Kane and Emily - different clothes — different
EMILY
Do you know how long you kept
me waiting while you went to
the office last night for ten
minutes? Really, Charles, we
were dinner guests at the
Boardman's — we weren't
invited for the v/eek end.
KANE
You're the nicest
gir.
married.
Charles, if I didil't trust you —
What do you do
OJI
a newspaoer
in the middle oy the night"?
My dear,
yo
is the
f
'Ini
KANE
only corespondent
Lrer."
INT.
KANE HOME -/BREAKFAST ROOM - 1904
Kane and Emily -X change of costume and food. Emily is
dressed for the
street*
EMILY .
(kidding\ on
the level)
Sometimes I think I'd prefer a
rival of flesh dnd blood.
Ah,
Emily — I don'\ spend that
muoh time —
EMILY
It Isn't Just time — ifcjs what
?
ou print — attacking tt
resident —
KANE
You moan Unole John*
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EMILY
I mean tho President of the
United States.
KANE
He's still Unole John, and
he's still a
well-moaning
fathead —
EMILY
(interrupting)
Charlos —
KANE/
(continuing
on top of heV)
— who'3 letting/a pack of high-
pressure
crooks'run
his
administration^ This whole
oil scandal
/ EMILY
He happens to be the President,
Charles /- not you.
KANE
That
/a
a mistake that will be
corrected
one of the30 days.
DISSOLVE
55
INT. KANE'S HOME - BREAKFAST ROOM - 1905
Kane and Emily —
\hange
of costume and food.
not
EMILY
Charles, wllen people make a
having
the
their homes ~
Lsh says that
on
at the Assembly
-0 than forty
agreed to oanoel
point of
^Inquirer"
Margaret Engl
the Reading
already has
names that have
tho paper —
moY
/JI^PN.
KA\E
Tliat's
wonderful.
\
Mr. Bernstein
will be delighted.\ You see, Emily,
when your friends cancel the
paper.
that just takes
anot
our
deadbont list,
you,
it's practically
honor among tho rioh
tho newsdealer*
tu
no
1
name off
know, don't
point of
to pay
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INT. KANE'S HOME - BREAKFAST ROOM - 1906
56 Kane
and
Emily
-
change
of
costume
and
food.
EMILY
Your Mr. Bernstein sent Junior
the'
most incredible atroeity
yesterday.
I
simply can't have
it
in the
nursery*
KANE
M r. B e r n s t e i n i s a p t t o nay a
v i s i t t o t h e n u r s e r y now" a n d
t h e n .
EM
Does he have to ?
( shor t ly)
Yes. /
57
58
/
/
DISSOLVE
INT.. KANE'S HOME - BREAKFAST ROOM - 1 908
Kane and Em ily - change of cos tum e and foo d.
EMILY
Real ly ,^Charles — p e o p l e h a v e
a r i g h t t h e x p e c t —
KANE
What I care toN^ive them.
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INT.
KANE'S HOME
-
BREAKFAST" ROOM -
1909
Kane and Emily
-
change of 'costume
and
food. They
are
both silent — reading newspapers — Kane is reading
his
"Inouirer" —
Emily
is
reading
a
copy
of the
"Chronicle." f
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59 Leland and Thom pson.
THOMPSON
Wasn' t he e ve r in love w i th
he r?
ISLAND
He m a r r i e d f o r l o v e —
(a l i t t l te
l a u g h ) \
T h a t ' s wh y h e d i d e v e r y t h i n g .
That ' s w hy he
w'ent Into
p o l i t i c s . I t ae/Tis w e w e r e n ' t
e nough. He w ante d a l l th e
v o t e r s t o l o v e h im , t o o . A l l
h e r e a l l y
wanted
o u t o f l i f e
w as l o v e . — T h a t ' * C h a r l i e ' s
s t or y — how he l o s t i t . You
s e e , he Ju3t didn't \have any
t o g i v e . He l o v e d C h a r l i e
K an e, o f c o u r s e , v e ry , d e a r l y ,
— and h i s m othe r , I gu e ss he
a l w a y s l o v e d h e r .
THOMPSON'
How about his second wifV*
LELAND
Susan Alexander?
(he chucklea)
You know what Charlie callec
her? — The day after he'd mat
her he told me about her — ha
said she was a cross-section on
the A-ierican public. — I guess
he couldn't help it — she mant\
have
had something for him.
(with
a smile)
That
first
night,
according
to
Charlie — all she had
was
a
toothache.
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Y o u a r e .
( t h e p a i n
re tu rns )
Oh
Ah
hal
SUSAN
K A N E
61
SUSA
If you want to
come'
in and wash
your face — I
can
get you some
hot water to
gel:
that dirt off
your trousers X
Thanks
Susan starts, with Kane following her.
INT.
SUSAN'S ROOM - NIGHT . 1915
Su3an come3 into the room, carrying a basin, with
towels over her arm. Kane is waiting for her . She
doesn't close the door.
SUSAN
(by\«ay of
explanation)
My landlady prefers me to keep
this door open\when I have a
gentleman callex^. She's a very
decent woman.
(making a fade)
Owl
Kane rushes to take the basin from her, putting it on
the chiffonier. To do this, he has to shove the
photograph to one side with the basin. Susan grabs
the photograph as it is about to fal^ over.
SUSAN ( c o n t ' d r
Hey , y o u sh o u l d b e mo re carei
T h a t ' s my Ma an d Pa* .
KANE
I 'm s o r r y . T he y l i v e h e r e t o o ?
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61 (CONTINUED) 90
SUSAN
No.
They've passed on.
Again •• she puts her hand to her jaw.
KANE
You poor kid,\you are in pain,
aren't you?
Susan can't stand it any more and sits down in a chair,
bent over, v/himpering a bit.
Look at me .
KAwE (cont'd)
She looks at him.
KANE I cont'd)
V.hy don't you laugh? \ I'm just
as funny in here as l\was on the
street.
SUSAN
I know, but you don't like me to
laugh at you.
KANE
I don't like your tooth toyhurt
either.
SUSAN
I can't help it.
KANE
Come on, laugh at me .
SUSAN
I
can't
-- what are you doing?
KANE
I'm wiggling b oth my ears at
the same time.
(he doea so)
It took me two solid years at
the finest boya' school In the
world to learn that trick. The
fellow who taught me is now
President of Venezuela,
(he wiggles his
ears again)
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61 (CONTINUED)
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"T:. . ' ," . . . . .Vf .V.yi
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.;y
I • MINI— if
H_LL
91
62
Susan starts to smile.
T h a t ' s i t .
KANE (cont'<
INT. SUSAN'S P.a
-f
Suaan
s m i l e s v e r y b r o a d l y
- ^ k e n
s t a r t s to l a u g h .
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NIGHT -
191
fi
CLOSEUP of
a
duck,
CAMERA
PULLS BACK showing it to be a
shadowgraph on the
wally
made by Kane, who is now in
his shirt sleeves. \
(hesitating
A chicken?
KANE
No.
But you're
close.
A rooster?
KANE
.
You're
getting further away
\ll
the
time.
It's a duck.
SUSAN
A duck. You're not a
professional
magician, are you?
KANE
No. I've told you. My name
is Kane — Charles Poster Kane.
SUSAN
I know. Charles Foster Kane.
Gee — I'm pretty ignorant, I
guess you caught on to that —
KANE
You really don't know who I am?
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62 (CONTINUED)
„ ,
SUSAN
No.VThat
i s , I b e t i t t u r n s
o u t
Y've
h e a r d y o u r n a m e a
how H i s
1
1
3
' °
nl
3T°
U
taow
\
KANE
B u t y o u l i k e m e , d o n ' t y ou ?
E v e n t h o u g h y o u d o n ' t k n o w
1
I am?
A
SUSAN
Y o u ' v e b e e n
wonderfulI
I c a n ' t
t e l l y o u h ow g l a d I cm y o u ' r e
h e r e ,
I d o n ' t k now many peo ple
and — \
( s h e
s tops
JUUtb
And I know, to o raahy p e o p le .
O b v i o u s l y , w e ' r e tioth l o n e l y .
( h e s m i l e s ) \
fc'ou ld you l i k e t o know where I
was g o i n g t o n i g h t
—\
when you
r a n i n t o me a n d
ru inad
my
S u n d a y c l o t h e s ?
T
*,
SUSAN
J ) , f i ^
? t r
i ?
lnto
y °
u
« ¥ * s e t
they're not
your Sunday Clothes.
You've probably
got a
LSfo fclothes. »
KANE
I
was
only joking
I
(pauses)
I was on my way to the T'este
Manhattan "'arehouse s —
in
search
of my
youth.
Susan
is
bewildered.
» — " I I n .
KANE (cont'd)
You see, my mother died too —
a long time ago.
Her
things
were
put
into storage
out T/est
because
I had no
place
to put
them then.
I
still haven't.
But now I've sent for them Just
the same.
And
tonight
I'd
planned
to mako
a
sort
of
aentimontal
Journey
— and now —
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62 (CONTINUED) V 93
Kane
d o e s n ' t \ f i n i s h .
He l o o k s a t S u s a n . S i l e n c e .
KATE (con t 'd )
V.ho
am\I? V .'e ll , l e t ' s
s e e ;
C h a r l e s F o s t e r K an e w as b o r n i nNew S a le m , C o lo ra d o i n e i g h t e e n
s ix — \
( h e s t o p s o n t h e
w o r d ^ " s i x t y "
- -
o b v i o u s l y a
l i t t l e , e m b a r r a s s e d )
I r u n a c o u p l e o f n e w s p a p e r s .
Hov; ab ou t you ?
\
Me?
SUSAN
I ;
yff^V
KANS,
Hov/ o ld d i d yo u sayxyou w e re ?
SUSAN
( v e r y b r i g h t )
I d i d n ' t s a y .
KANE
I d i d n ' t t h i n k yo u d i d . is y o u
h a d I w o u l d n ' t h a v e a s k e d \ y o u
a g a i n , b e c a u s e I ' d h a v e
remembered.'
How o ld ?
SUSAN
P r e t t y o l d . I ' l l b e tw en ty -tw o*
i n
August.
KANE
T h a t ' s a r i p e o l d a g e . —
T.hat
do you do?
SUSAN
I wo rk a t S e l i g m a n ' s *
: |
KANE
Is that what you want to do?
j#**K.
SUSAN
I wanted to be a singer.' I
moan, I didn't. Mother did
for me .
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62 (CONTINUED)
KANE
What happened
to the
singing?
SUSAN
Mother always thought
— she
used
to
talk about Grand Opera
for\me.
Imagine — Anyway
my voice Isn't that kind.
It'sNjust — you know what
mothers are like.
Y e s .
KANE
SUSAN
As a matt er' of f a ct , I do si ng
a l i t t l e .
V.'ould you s ing
fo,r
me?
JSAti
USAX
Oh , you wou ldn' t wari£ to bear
me si n g .
KANE
Y e s , I v/ould. Th at 's why I
asked.
Well, I —
SUSAN
KANE
Don't tell me your toothache
is bothering you again?
SUSAN
O h , no, that's all gone.
Vf-
KANE
Then you haven't any alibi at
all. Please sing.
Susan, with a tiny ladylike hesitancy* goes to
the'
piano and sings a polite song. Sweetly, nicely, she
1
sings with a small, untrained voice. Kane listens•
He is relaxed, at ease with the world.
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INSERT
INSERT
INSERT
" I N Q U I R E " J T E , / D L T N > \ (1 91 6)
B O S S ROGERS P ICKS DEMOCRATIC NOMINEE
\ /
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HEADLINE,
\ l 9 1 6 )
BOSS ROGERS PICKS REPUBLXCAN NOMINEE
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OP "INQUIRER.
11
(1916)
This shows Boss
Rogers,/labelled
as such, in
convict striper., dangl/nj; littl\ marionette
figures —
labelled Democratic
Candidate and
ftepublic >n
Candidate Y-
from
eachXhand. As
CAMERA PANS to r?mini:i
L
four columns it
reveals box . This -f
lieaded:
K
7
" P u t t h i s nan
' a i l ,
p e o p l e
o\
Mew Y o r k ."
I t i s signed, i n b o l d t y p e , "Charles :\oster
K a n e . " T h e t e x t
between
h e a d l i n e an d S i g n a t u r e ,
l i t t l e of w h ic h
neeki
b e r e a d , t e l l s o f t h e
b 0 3 s - r i d d e n
a i t u a t j / o n .
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63
DI3S0LV
i::?. M A D I S O ^
s•"*.,T".
n
A
VI-.T:
-
-IT^T
- 1916
The evening of the final treat rally. Emily and Junior
are
to be Seen in the
front
of o box. Emily is
tired
and
wears
a forced smile on her
face. Junior,
now
aged nine
and a half, la oa,er, bright-eyed and excited. Kane is
Just finishing his speech.
X
\
KANE
It is no secret that I entered
upon this campaign with no
thought fchit I could be elected
Governor ef this Sta-el It is
ue secret that ray only purpose
was to brills f-s v/ido publicity
as I could to the donir.stion of
this Stat* —. of its every
resource -- nf. its every income -
of literally the liv-.-s and
deaths of its citizens by 3os3
T
'd-:ard
P.
'i.oitcrsl
It is now no
socret that every, strew vote,
eery . ndependent. ..poll, shows
that I v:iii hc» ale'cted. iUid I
r«r-2ar.
to you — r-A first
e-ff.uCi.ul acv as Oov\rnor will be
to onpoxnt r.
special\
Dlstric t
Attorney to arrange ror the
mdlctnent, prosecution and
conviction oi' Bess '-.dwljrd G.
F.ot,er3i
Terrific screanin.,
and cheerin?
the
audience.
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64
i?r?. MAi-isrT syuRE
r
- i ' ' r a -
?'TCT'T
- iflqi6
THE SPEAKERS' PL«.TroEM. Nur.orous o f f i c i \ l s and c i v i c
leaders are
crowding 8round fpn^ . Caiaera\;en tal te
f lash
photographs.
ri l 'ST CIVIC LEADER
Great speech,
i t r .
I'.ane.
SECOND LEADER
(pompous)
One
of the
post notable public
utternrcKS over made by a
candidate
in
this State
—
KANE
Thank you , gentlemen. Thank you.
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97
He looks up and notices that the box in which Emily and
Junior were sitting is now
empty.
Ho starts toward
rear of the platform, through the press of people.
Hillman
approaches him.
\ HILLMAN
A wonderful speech,
Mr.
Kane,
Kane pats him on the shoulder as he walks along.
\
HILLMAN (cont'd)
If
the
election were held today,
you'd
be
elected
by a
hundrea
thousand votes \-
on an
independent ticket there's
never boen anything like it J
\
Kane is very pleased,
through
the crowd --
\
He continues with
a band playing
off.
Hillman slowly
\
y^EtfPI&S.
I t does
true.
KANE \
seen
too
good
to
be
\
HILLMAN \
Rogers
i s n ' t
even
pretending.
He i sn ' t just scared any more.
He's si ck . Frank Nor ris told
me las t night he hasn ' t knotm
1
Rogers to be that worried in
twenty-five
years.
KANE i
I t h i n k i t ' s b e ^ in n in c to dawn \
on
Mr.
Hog or 3 t h a t
I
mean wha t \
I
say.
v/ith
Mr.
Hogers
out of
\
t h e
way,
H i l l n a n ,
I ih ink we may \
r e a l l y bc^ln to h o p e for a good
g o v e r n m e n t In t h i s * S t a t e ,
( s t o p p i n g )
A '7ELL-7ISHER
G r e a t s p e e c h , Mr. KaneJ
ANOTHER ''TiXL-r/ISHER
Wo nd er fu l , Mr. K a n e
\
Ad l i b s fr om o t h e r w e l l - w i s h e r s .
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65
\
ISIS
Emily
«md
J u n i o r fcr'* s t a n d i n g , w a i t i n g f o r K a n e .
Govdj
JUNIOR
Is Pop
Governor
y e t , Mom?
Kane
a p p e a r s w i t h
HllLr.an
a n d s e v e r a l o t h e r m e n . He
rushes
t o w a r d
Kr i ly
and Njunior. T he men p o l i t e l y
te
r<
^ m i l y .
p o l i t e l y
b
ree t
H e l l o , B u t c h i
DidAyou
l i k e
y o u r o l d
man's
s p e e c h ?
JUNIOI
I was in a cox,
Fol
hfear every
w o r d .
KANE
I saw
youI
G ood n i g h t ,
g e n t l e m e n .
I
could
There arc good r.ight3. Kane's car is at the curb and he
starts to walk toward it with Junior ana Qnilv.
unior
an^
Emily.
EMILY
I'm sending Junior hone in the
car, Charles — with Oliver —
KANE
But I'd arranged to go home with
you myself.
EMILY
There's a call I want you to
make with m e, Charlea,
It can wa it .
KANE
EMILY
No, it can't,
(kisses
Junior)
fl-rod night, darling .
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JUNIOR
G o o d n i g h t , '
Mom.
KANE
( a s c a r
d r i v e s o f f )
Vrtiat's t h i s a l l a b o u t , E m il y?
I ' v e h a d a v e r y
t i r i n c
day and
EMILY
I t m ay n o t b e a b o u t a n y t h i
a l l .
( s t a r t i n g t o
a cab a t
c u r b )
I i n t e n d t o f i n d o u t .
KANE
I i n s i s t o n b e i n g tyold e x a c t l y
wha t you have in
m/nd,
I
f
m g o i n g t o —•
( s h e looksi a t a
s l i p of/x)Bz e r )
185 West 74 t i / S t r ee t .
K a n e ' s r e a c t i o n i n d i c a t e s t h a t the a d dr es s d e f i n i t e l y
means something t o
h i m .
EMILY (con t ' d )
I f you
/ i s h ,
you can come wi th
m e , , ,
KANE
' ( n o d s )
I '13/come w i t h
y o u .
He o p en s t h e / d o o r a n d s h e e n t e r s t h e c a b . He f o l l o w s
h e r .
/
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y
66
Kane and Emily. He
of enlightenment.
oks Hf her in search of some kind
face is set/and impassive,
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67
68
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1 0 0
s
NIGH
•H?
- 1 9 1 6 /
' *
K a ne a n d E m L l y, i n f r o n t o f a n a p a r t m e n t doo-rC E m i l y i s
p r e s s i n g the b e l l .
KANE
I h a d n o i d e a y o u h a d t h i y f l a i r
f o r n e l o d r e m a , E m i l y .
E m i ly d o e s n o t a n s w e r . T h e dyor i s o p e n e d b y a m a i d , w h o
reco g n i zes K a n e .
PRE MAID
Cone i n , Mr . t fane, come i n .
S h e s t a n d s t o o n e
s i / fe
f o r K an e a n d E m i l y t o e n t e r . T h i s
t h e y s t a r t t o d o . JSeyond th«m we s e e i n t o t h e r o o m .
I N T .
SUSAN'S ATriTTMENT
y
NirHT - 191 6
A s K an e a nd E m i l y e n t e r , S u s a n r i s e s f ro m a c h a i r .
1
o t h e r p e r s o n i n
the roon
- a b i g , h e a v y - s e t n a n , a
l i t t l e p a s t m i d dl e a&e — 3 t a y s w h er e lie i s , l e a n i n g
b a ck i n h i 3 c h n i r , reg a rd i ng Kane I n t e n t l y .
SUSAN
I t w a s n ' t my f a u l t , C h a r l i e .
H e m a de m e s e n d y o u r w i f e a
n o t e . H e s a i d I ' d — o h , h e ' s
been s a y i n g t h e \ n o s t t e r r i b l e
t h i n g s , I didn't>know w h a t t o
d o . . . I —
( s h e s t o p s )
R0GERS
>
G o o d e v e n i n g , M r . K a n e ^
( h e r i s e s )
I d o n ' t s u p p o s e a n y b o d y Vould
i n t r o d u c e u s . M r s . Kane,\l 'ra
E d w a r d R o g e r s .
l i e
How do y ou do?
EMILY
R0GE5S
I made Hiss — M i s s A l e x a n d e r
send
y o u
tlie
n o t e . S h e w as a
l i t t l e
unwill ing
a t f i r s t —
( s m i l e s
Grimly)
b ut s h e d i d i t .
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SUSAN
I can't tell you the
thlng3
he
said, Charlie. You haven't
got anv ldea\—
__.NE
(turning \
on
Rogers )\
Rogers,
I don't think I will
postpone doiiv,
s one
thing about
you until l'm"elected.
(starts
\
toward
him)
\
To start with, I think I'll
break your neck.
ROGERS
(not giving
way an inch)
Maybe you can do
it and\maybe
you can't,
Hr.
Kane.
EMILY
Charles
I
(he stops to
look at her)
Your — your breaking this
man's neck —
(she is clearly
disgusted)
i
-- would scarcely explain thii
note —
(glancing
at the note)
—
Serious
consequences for
Mr.
None —
(slowly)
— f o r myself, pnrt f or my son .
'That docs
t h i s n o t e m e a n , M i s s
SUSAN
(stiffly)
I'm Susan Alexander.
(pauses)
I know what you think, Mrs.
Kane, but --
.
EMILY
„.
(ignoring this)
AlexaSdlr?
thl3
n
°
t 0 B c , m
'
:Ua3
101
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SUSAN
It's
11We this,
Mr3. Kane. I
happened to Ac studying singing
I always wanted to be an opora
singer -- and\Mr« Kene happened
I wean, he's Wpen helping me —
\
V/hat d o e s this
A l e x a n d e r ?
JULY
jte
n e a n ,
Miss
RO«iSRS
S h e d o e s n ' t k n o w ,
M r s .
Kane .
S h e j u s t s e n t i t -A b e c a u s e I
m ad e h e r s e e i t wouldn' t b e
s m a r t f o r h e r n o t t\ s e n d i t .
KANE
I n c a s e y o u d c n ' t knoi- , Emily ,
t h i s — t h i s g e n t le m a n . - - i s —
ROGERS
I ' n n o t a g e n t l e m a n ,
l ira. .
Kane,
u.nd
y o u r h u s b a n d i s
just\
t r y i n g
t o b e funny c a l l i n g n e o n e . I
d o n ' t even know wha t a gentleman
i s .
You s e e , my id e a of
g e n t l e m a n , M r s . K an e — w e l l ,
i f I owned a nev/opapcr and Uf
d i d n ' t l i k e t h e way scnebodj
e l s e w a s d o i n g t h i n g s — so ma
p o l i t i c i a n , sa y — I ' d f i g h t )
them
vd.
t h everything I had .
Only I w ou ld n ' t s how hin i n al
c o n v i c t s u i t , w i t h s t r i p e s —
s o h i s c h i l d r e n c o u l d see t h e
p i c t u r e i n t h e vajter. Or h i s
m o t h e r .
EMILY
Ohij
K A N E
You're a chaap, crooked grafter
— one your concern fcr you
children and your mother --
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ROGERS
Anything you say, Mr. Kane.
Only we're talking now about
what you are . That's what that
note
is
ebout, Mrs. Kane. I'm
going to lay all my cards on
the table, I'm fighting for my
life. Not Just my political
life. My life. If your
husband is elected Governor —
KANE
I'm going to
tie
elected
Governor. andXthe first thing
I'm going to do —
EMILY
Let him finish, Cnarles.
ROGEBS
I'm protecting myself every
way I know how, Mrs.\Kane.
This last week, I firthlly
found out how I can shop your
husband from being eleeted.
If the people of this state
learn what I found out this
week, he wouldn't have
a\chance
to — he couldn't be elected
Dog Catcher.
KANE
You can't blackmail me,
Rog«
You can't —
SUSAN
(excitedly)
Charlie, he said, unless you
withdrew your none --
ROGERS
That's the chance I'm willing
to give you,
Mr.
Kane, More
of a
cfhance.thnn
you'd give
me.
Unless you ma^e up your mind
by tomorrow that you're so
aick that you've got to go
away for a year or two — Monday
morning every paper in this
state — excoot yours — will
carry the story I'm going to
give them.
EMILY
What story, Mr. Rogers?
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K A : I E
Have you gone completely mad,
Emily? You don't think I'm
going to let this blackmailer
intimidate ne, do you?
EMILY
I don't see what else you can
do, Charles. If he's right —
and the papers publish this
story he has —
\ KANE
Oh,
they'll publish it all
right.
I'm not afraid of the
atory. You can't tell me that
the voters of this state —
EMILY
I'm not
interested
in the
voters of this state right
now. I am interested in —
well,
Junior, for one thing.
SUSAN
Charlie
I
If they
publish
this
story
—
EMILY
They won't. Good nightV
Mi'
Rogers.
There's nothing more
to be said. Are you coning,
Charles?
KA1IE
No.
105
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She looks at him. He starts to work himself into a rage.
KANE (cont'd)
There»s
only one person in the\
world to decide what I'n going'
to do — and that's me. And
if you thin : — if any of you
think —
EMILY
You decided what you were going
to do, Charles -- some time agoi
Come on, Charles.
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106
KANE
Go on 1 Get out I I can fight
this all alone I Get out I
ROGERS
You're making a bigger fool
of yourself tlian I thought you
would, Mr. Kane. You're licked.
•Thy don't you —
X
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KANE
(turning-
on hia)\
Get outl
I'v
got nothing to
talk to you about. If you
want to see
*\e\
have the V/arden
write me a letter.
\
R o g e r s n o d s , w i t h
a
l o o l : t h a t s a y s " S o y o u s a y . "
SUSAN
\
(starting
to cry)
Charlie, you're j
You don't realize
u
. \
excited.
doing.
KANE
I k now e x a c t l y v .h a t I '
( h e i s
s c r e a m i n g )
Get ou t 1
EMILY
(quietly)
Charles,
if you don't
listen
to reason, it mny bo too late
KANE
Too
lato
for what? Too late
for you and this — this publ
thief to take the love of the
people of this state away fron
me?
"."ell,
you won't do it, I
tell you. You won't do it I
SUSAN
Charlie,
there are other things
to think of.
(a sly look
comes into '
her
eyes)
Your son — you don't want him
to read . in the papers —
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EMILY
I t i]c to o l a t e n ow , C h a r l e s .
KANE
(iushos
t othe door
and opens
i t \
G e t c u t , b o t h o f you I
SUSAN
(ruahej
to him)
C h a r l i e , p l e a s e d o n ' t —
>
V
HE
'That are y ou v. siting here
for?
Why
don't you
go?
EMIIY
Good night, Charles'
\
She
v.-r»l :s
out.
P.ogera sto^s
directly in front of Kane.
50GEKS
You're the greatest fool I've
ever known, Kane. If
ltt-;as
anybody else, I'd ::ay what's
goin^ to happen to you
wo\ild
be a lossoa to you. Only
you're going to
need
more
\han
one
lesson#
And you're
going
to
net noro
than one lesson
KANE
Don't worry about me. I'm
Charles Foster "one. I'm no
cheap,
crooked politician,
trying to save hinself from the
consequences of his crimes —
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KALLV/AY
- NIGHT - 1 9 1 6
108
69
CAJSTRA
ANGLING toward Kane from other end of the
hall,
Rogers and Emily are already down the
hall,
moving
toward
f.g.
Kane in apartment doorway b.g.
KANE
(screams
louder)
I'm going to send
Sing, Rogers. Sin
Kane is trembling
wither
age as he shakes his fist at
Rogers' back. Susan< quieter now, has snuggled into the
hollow of his shoulder as they stand in the doorv/ay.
DISSOLVE
INSERT Tlie Chronicle front page with
photograph (as in the News Digest)
revealing Kane's relations nith
Susan. Headline
reads:
CANDIDATE KANE FOUND IN LOVENEST
WITH
"SINGER"
DISSOLVE
I N T . COMPOSING ROOM
ZNCUIRER - NIGHT - 1 9 1 6
70
CAMERA ANGLES down on enormous headline in type with
proof on top. In back of this headline lies complete
front page, except for headline. Headline reads:
KANE GOVERNOR
CAI.-ERA TILTS UP showing Bernstein, actually crying,
standing with composing room foreman, Jenkins.
BERNSTEIN
(to foreman)
With a million majority already
against
hin,
and the Church
Counties still to be heard from
— I'm afraid we got no choice.
This one.
CAMERA PANS to where he io pointing; 3hows enormous •
headline, the proof of which in small type reads:
Kuno defeated
and in large type screens:
FRAUD AT POLLS
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I N T .
EA:iE'S OFri CE
-
IN.J.LIHEH
- NIGHT -
1916
71 Kane looks
up
iron his desk
as
there
is a
knock
on the
door.
\
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Come id.
1CANE
L e l a n d e n t e r s .
KANE
( s u r p r i s e d )
I
thought I
h^ard somebody
knock.
\
: a >
(a
bit
drunk)
I knocked.
(he loo
5
:^
at
hin defiantly)
I AME
(trying
to \
laugh
it \
off)
\
Ohl
An
official visit
of
3tate,
eh? \
(waves
his
\
hand)
\
Sit down, Je:lidiah.\
LELAND
(sitting down \
angrily)
I'm drunk.
\
Good I
It's high time
-n
v
LELAND
You d o n ' t h a v e t o b e a m u s i n g .
KANE \
A l l r i g h t . T e l l y ou w h at 1*11
d o . I ' l l
G 9
t d r u n k , t o o .
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LELA11D
(thinks this
over)
No.
That wouldn't help.
Besides,
you never get drunk.
(pauses)
I wont to talk to you — about
'— about ~-
\(he can't
'
ge t i t out)
KANE
(^Look3 a t him
Sharply a
moment)
If you'yc got yourself drunlc to
talk to'.ne about Susan Alexander
—
I'm riot interested.
\
LELA-.HD
110
She
• s no t' inn or tan t. "ha t • s
much
nore
4
important
—
(he lioeps
glaring
at Kane)
KANE
(as if \
genuinely
surprised)
Ohl
\
(he gets\up)
I frankly didn|t think — I'd
have to listen to that lecture
from yoi. \
(pauses) \
I've betrayed the sacred cause
of reform, is
thut
it? I've set
back the nacrod cause of reform
in
t ii3
3tato two'nty years.
Don't toll
ae,
Jed, you —
Despite his load, Leland
i;anage3
to achieve a dignity
about tho 3ilent contempt with which he looks at Kane.
KANE'
(an outlmrst)
'-That makes the sucred cause of
reform so sacred?
Hny
does
the'
nacre*',
cause
•:>?
reform liavo
to
l'-n exempt frcjL.1 a l l tha other
Tacts of life? Why do\ the laws
of tliis state
have to be executed
by a man on P whi te changer ?
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L e l a n d l e t s thfe
storr.
r i d s o v e r h i s h e a d .
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KANE (cont 'd )
.calming down)
B u t , i f t h a t ' s t h e w ay t h e y w a n t
i t —
( they 've
m ade t h e i r c h o i c e .
The p e o p l e o f t h i s s t a t e
obviously p r e f e r M r . R o g e r s
t o me , \
( W i s l i p s
t i g h t e n )
So b e i t
LELAND
You talk 'about the people as
thqugh thfey
belong to you. As
long as
l\can
remember you've
talked about giving the people
their rights as though you
could make \then a present of
liberty -- in reward for
services rendered. You remember
the working wan? You used to
write an awful lot about the
working
nan. \
1;
eil,
he's turning
into something called 'organized
labor', and
ycu're
not going
to like that A hit when you find
out it means tliat he thinks he's
entitled to something as his
right and not Apur gift.
(ho
pauses?
And listen,
Chai\le3.
"Tien your
precious unaer;>ru.vile;:ed really
do get together V- that's going
to add up to something bigger —
than your privilege — and then
I don't know what\you'11 do.
Sail away to a desert island,
probably, and lord\i t over the
monkeys.
KANE)
Don't worry about ill too much,
Jed, There's auro tb be a few
of them there to tell me whore
I'm v/rong.
:t
ISLAND
1
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You may not always be vthat lucky.
(pauses) \
Charlie, why can't you\get to
look at thinps less personally?
Everything doesn't have\ to be
between you and — tlie personal
note doesn't always —
^ . M M M ^ a M M I W . * *
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ICANE
(violently)
The personal note is all theiy
is to it. It's all there
evdv
Is to it. It's all there
e/er
is to anything Stupidity/in
our Government - crookedne33 —
even just complacency
and
self-
satisfaction and an unw/llingness
to believe that
anythi/g
done by
a certain class of pe/ple can be
wrong — you can't fight those
things impersonally/ They're not
impersonal crimes against the
people.
They're being done by
actual persons --Xvith actual
names and positions and -- the
right of the American people to
thoir own country is not an
academic issue,/Jed, that you
debate — and tfhen the
judges
retire to return a verdict --
and the
wimiens
give a dinner
for the loser/
You
almost
The truth 1
don't earn
you. You
people tha
much that
back. On
own terms
LELAND
bnvince
me, almost.
, Charlie, you just
bout anything except
ist want to convince
you love them so
hey should love you
you want love on your
It's
sonothing
to
be played/your way -- according
to your rules. And if anything
goes 'wons and you're hurt —
then
the /game
stops, and you've
soothed and nursed,
what else is happening
matter who else is
got to b
no matte;
— and
hurtl
They look at each/other.
/ S r ^ S
KANE
(tfrylng
t o
i d h i m
nto a
e t t e r
lumor)
Hey,
jfcdediahi
L el a nd i s no t
to)
b e s e d u c e d .
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LELAND
Charlie,
I wish you'd
Let
me
work on the Chicago pa
you said yourself
you/»ere
looking for someone to do
dramatic criticism
t/ere
—
KAN1
You're more valuable here.
There is silence.
INLAND
Well,
Charlie,/then I'm afraid
there's nothing I can do but
to ask you to
Joccept
—
KANE
(harshlV)
All ri.Tht.
jrou
can go to
Chicago.
Thank you.
LELAND
There io an
cr'.ward
fcause. Kane
open3
a drawer of his
desk and
takes
out al bottle and two glasses.
KANE
I guess B'd better try to get
drunk, anyway. "
Kane
hands
Jed a gaass,
?/hich
he makes no move to take,
KANE (cont'd)
But I ivnrn you , Jedediah, you're
not
goang
to like it in Chicago.
Tlie widd cones howling in off
the lore
anil
the Lord only
knows
if
they've ever heard of
Lobstqr
Uowburg.
LELAND
V/ill /a
week
f rom Saturday
bo
a l l f i g h t ?
KANE
( w e a r i l y )
Any t ime you soy ,
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LELAND
Kane looks at him intently and lifts the glass.
y
A toast, Jedediahy*- to love
on my_ ter ms. Those are the
only tersw anybjwly knows —
his own.
DISSOLVE
EXT, TOWN HALL IN TRENTON (AS IN NEffS DIGEST) - DAY - 1917
K ane ( a s i n News D i g e s t ) i s j u s t e m e r g i n g w i t h S u s a n ,
Ho smashes ono cameraXand b e f o r e h e b e g i n s o n a s e c o n d ,
a cop removes a
no.vsrjj^l
cam eram an. He sm ashe s a second
c a m e r a , a nd i s j u s t ahout t o s t a r t on a t h i r d .
KOTOGRAPHER
M r. Kane I M r . Ka\ie 1 I t ' s
The I n a u i r e r l
K a n e s e e s T h e I n q u i r e r pa in ted\on t h e s i d e o f t h e camera
and
s t o p s .
REPORTER
( q u i c k l y )
How a b o u t a s t a t e m e n t , MrXKane?
ANOTHER REPORTER
On t h o l e v e l , M r . K a n o , a r e
you th r o u g h w i t h p o l i t i c s ?
KANE
I wo ul d s a y v i c e v e r s a , yo u n g
man.
( s m i l e s )
We' r e g o i ng to b e a g r ea t o p er a
s t a r .
REPORTER
Are you going to sing at the
Metropolitan, Mr s. Kane?
KANE
W e c e r t a i n l y
a r e .
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73
74
SUSAN
Cliarlle
sa i d i f I d l d n > \ . ,
b u i l d me a n ooera hcnrae.
he'd
115
That won't
hr
necessary.
DISSOLVE
FRONT FAGS CHICAGO INQUIRER, with
photograph proclaiming that Susan
Alexander opens at now Chicago Opera
House in "T hais." (As in News Digest)
(1919)
On sound tract during above we^hear the
big expectant murmur o£ an jrpening night
audience and the
noodllnjv'of
the orchestra.
DISSOLVE
INT. CHIC.'.PO OPERA
Tlie CAMERA is jus
We see th-3 set for\Thai3 -- and in
in an elaborate costume, looking ve
lost, is Susan. 3he\is almost hys
Apclause is i.eard, anq the ore he
The curtain starts to
NIGHT - SET FOR THAIS^- 1919
tide the curtain NG
upstage,
er of all
this,
and very
ical with fright,
starts thunderously.
CAMERA with it. Susan
squints and starts to s
the curtain tho full he
then on up into tho grid
but faintly. Two
typic
looking down on the
One of them puts hi
*,nt
AMERA
CONTINUES on UP
with
o f t h e p r o s c e n i u m a r c h a nd
a . S u s a n ' s v o i c e s t i l l h e a r d
t a g e h a n ds f i l l t h e f r a m e ,
l o w .
They l o o k a t e a c h o t h e r ,
nd
to .
h i s n o s e •
a
DISSOLVE
IN T. CITY ROOM - CHICAGO INQUIRER \ NIGHT - 1 919
I t i s l a t e . Tho ro om i s \ a l m o s t em p t y . No bo dy i s a t
w or k a t t h e d e s k s . B e r n s t e i n i s w a i t i n g a n x i o u s l y w i t h
a l i t t l e g r o u p o f K a n e ' s V i i r e l i n g s , m o s t o f th e m
In
e v e n i n g d r e s s w i t h overcoats a n d h a t s . E v e r y b od y i s
t e n s e a nd e x p e c t a n t .
CXXY EDITOR
( t u r n s t o a
y o u n g h i r e l
q u i e t l y )
What a b o u t Jod.
Leland?
Has
he g o t i n h i s copy?
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H o t y e t .
HIRELING
/
BERNSTEIN
Go i n a n d a s k h i m t o h u r r y .
CITY EDITOR
W e l l , w hy d o n ' t y o u , M r .
B e r n s t e i n ? Y ou k no w M r . L e l a n d .
BERNSTEIN-
( s lowly )
I m i g h t m a ke h i m n e r v o u s . M r .
L e l a n d , h e ' s ' w r i t i n g i t f r o m
t h e d r a m a t i c
anglo?
/
CITY EDITOR
Y e s . I t h o u g h t i t
^as
a
£Ood
i d o a . W e ' v e c o v e r e d i t f r o m
t h e n e w s e n d , o f c d u r s e .
BERNSTEIN
A nd t h e s o c i a l , /llo v: a b o u t t h e
m u s i c n o t i c e ? Y6u g o t t h a t i n ?
IITY
EDITOR
Oh,
y e s , i t ' s a l r e a d y m ade u p .
Our Mr. K erv in , ' w ro te a 3wo 1 1
r e v i e w .
E n t h u s i a s t i c ;
Y e s , v e r y l /
( q u i e t l y )
N a t u r a l l y . /
BERNSTEIN
CITY EDITOR
/
BERNSTEIN
W e l l , w o l l — i s n ' t t h a t n i c e ?
/
M r. B e r n s t e i n —
KANE'S VOICE
/
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74a MED. LONG SHOT of Kane. He i3 in white/tie,
wearing his overcoat and carrying a folded opera
hat.
BERNSTEIN
Hello,
Mr . Kane.
The hirelings rus h, v/ith Bernstein, to Kane's 3ide.
Widespread,
half-suppressed
sensation.
CITY EDITOR
Mr. Kane, this j s a .surprise I
117
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KAN1
W e ' v e g o t a n i c e g i a n t h e r e .
Evsrybody f a l l s s i l e n t . T he re i s n ' t a n y t h in g t o s a y .
JITY EDITOR
E v e r y t h i n g h a s b e e n d on e e x a c t l y
t o y o u r i n s t r u c t i o n s , M r. K a ne .
We ' v e g o t t wo -spreads of
p i c t u r e s a n d •f
KANE
The music nojbice on t h e f i r s t
p a g e ?
CITY EDITOR
Y e s , M r. Kafne.
( h e s i t a t i n g l y )
T h e r e ' s s t i l l on e n o t i c o t o
c o n e . The/ d r a m a t i c .
KANE
T h a t ' s
Le/Land,
i s n ' t i t ?
Y e s , Mr . / K a n e *
CITY EDITOR
KANE
Has he i a l d w he n h e ' l l f i n i s h ?
CITY EDITOR
We h a v e n ' t h e a r d f ro m h i m .
Ho
used
dldn't
KANE
to wor k fast, —
he, Mr,
Bernstoin?
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BERNSTEIN
He s u re d i d , Mr, Kane ,
Where
i s he?
KANE
ANOTHER HIRELING
Right in thero, Mr. Kane.
The hirel ing ind ic ates the closed glass door of a l i t t l e
office at the other end of tho City Room. Kane takes i t
in.
118 \
3ERNSTEJTN
( h e l p l e s s
b u t v e r y
c o n c e r n e d )
Mr. Kane
—
KANE'
T h a t ' s a l l r i g h t , Mr. B o m s t e i n .
K a n e c r o s s e s the l e n g t h of th6 long C i t y Room to the
g l a s s d o o r i n d i c a t e d boforo
b'.* the
h i r e l i n g .
The
C i t y
E d i t o r l o o k s
a t S e r n s t o i n .
Kano opens
tne
d o o r
and
goes
i n t o
the
o f f i c e , c l o s i n g
the
d o o r bahlnd
M m ,
' • /
BERNSTEIN
Mr.
L e l a n d
and Mr.
iume
—
t h e y
h a v o n ' t spoken, together for
f o u r y e a r s — /
CITY EDITOR
Y o u d o n ' t aupboso —
/
EERNSTEIN
There's nothing
to
suppose.
(a Ions'
pauso7-
flnally)
Excuse
mo. ;
(starts toward
tho door)
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mi i n i i w . ' - L . "..'.•..'.
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119
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INT.
LELAND'S OFFICE - CHICAGO INQUIRER - NIGHT - 1919
Boms to
i n co m es i n . An e m pt y b o t t l e i s s t a n d i n g o n
L e l a n d ' s d e s k . He h a s f a l l e n a s l e e p o v e r h i s t y p e w r i t e r ,
h i s f a c e o n t h e k e y s . A s h e e t o f p a p e r i s i n t h e
m a c h i n e . A p a r a g r a p h h a s b e en
typed.
K an e i s s t a n d i n g
a t t h e o t h e r s i d e of t h e d e s k l o o k i n g dow n a t h i m . T h i s
i s th o f i r s t
t i n e
we s e e m u r d e r i n K a n e ' s f a c e .
B e r n s t e i n l o o k s a t K a n e, th e n
crosses
t o L e l a n d . He
s h a k e s h i m .
•t
i
' B ERNSTEIN
( s t r a i g h t e n s ,
l o o k s a t K a n e ;
a p a u s e )
He a i n ' t b oo n d r i n k i n g b e f o r e ,
M r . K a n e . ITever. We wo u ld
h a v e h e a r d .
KANE
( f i n a l l y ; «.
a f t e r a
pause)
x
What
d o e s i t s a y t h e r e ?
\
B e r n s t ei n s t a r e s a t h i m .
KAK2
( c o n t ' d )
W h a t ' s ho w r i t t e n ? \
\
Bernstein loans over near-sightodly, painfully reading
tho paragraph written on tho page. \
BERNSTEIN
(reading) \
"Miss Susan
Aloxcnder, a
pretty
but hopelessly
incompetont
\
a:sateur
—
(waits for
a minute to
catch his
breath; doesn't
like
it)
— last night opened the new
Chicago Operu House in a
performance of — of
—"
(looks up
miserably)
— I still can't pronounce that'
name, jir. Kane. .
Kano doesn't answer. . Bernatoin looks at Kano for a
moment, thon looks back, tortured.
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75 (CONTINUED)
BERNSTEIN (cont'd)
(reading
again)
"Hor singing, happily, is no
concern of this department,
her acting, it is absolutely
impossible to — "
(continues to
stare at tho
page)
120
Of
KANE
( a f t e r a
s h o r t
si lence)
Go on I
3ERNSTEIN
( w i t h o u t
l o o k i n g u p )
T h a t ' s a l l t h e r e i s .
K ano s n a t c h e s t h e p a p e r fro.i th o r o l l e r a n d r e a d s i f f o r
himself. S l o w l y a q u e e r l o o k cor.es i n t o h i s f a c e . T he n
h e s p o a k s , v o ry q u i e t l y .
', KANE
Of h e r a c t i n g , i t i s a b s o l u t e l y
i m p o s s i b l e t o 3 a y a n y t h i n g
e x c e p t t h a t i t r e p r e s e n t s i n
t h e o p i n i o n of t h i s roviowor a
new low — '
( t h a n s h a r p l y )
H av e y o u g o t t h r . t , M r. S e r n s t o i n ?
I n t h e o p i n i o n o f t h i s
rov icwer--
EERIJSTEIK
(mise rabl y |
I d i d n ' t
soo
t h a t .
KANE
I t i s n ' t t h o r e ,
Mr.
3 o r n s t e i n ,
I 'm d i c t a t i n g i t i
I
1SRNSTEIK
B u t Mr , Kane , I c a n ' t — I
mean — I —
G et me a t y p e w r i t e r . I ' l l
f i n i s h t h o n o t i c e . \
Bornstoin r e t r e a t s fro m t ho r oo m .
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77
78
DISSOLVE
IN
121
r r r . LELA:-D'S OF.-ICE -\
c"iCAf-y
INQUIRER - NIGHT - 1919 --
LONG SHOT
- of
Kane
in
h i s / s h i r t
s l e e v e s ,
i l l u m i n a t e d
by
a
d es k l i g h t , t y p i n g f u r i o u s l y .
As the
CAMERA s t a r t s
to
PULL
even
f u r t h e r
AWAY
y
frb
v
ia
t h i s ,
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INT. LELAND'S OFFICE
-
CHICAGO INQUIRER
-
NIGHT
- 1919
L e l a n d , s p r a w l e d a c r o s s
h i s
typev/riter.
He
s t i r s
and
l o o k s
up
d r u n h e n l y ,
hi s eyes
e n c o u n t e r i n g B e r n s t e i n ,
who
s t a n d s
besido him.
BERNSTEIN
H i l l o ,
Mr.
L o l W .
LELAND
H o l l o ,
" B e r n s t e i n . . ' ihere i s
i t
—
wh er e' s ;?.y Noti ce
—
y've
got
to
f i n i s h
i t I
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( q u i e t l y ) \/
M r.
Ilane i s f i n i s h i n g i t .
\
LELAIH)
Kano?
—
C h a r l i e
— ? \
(pa in fu l ly
\
r i s e s /
\
'.'.'hers i s he? \
D u r i n g
a l l
t h i s ,
the
sour.::
of a
b u s y t y p e w r i t e r
h i s
been
h o a r d . L e l a n d ' s
oyos
f o l l o w
tho
s o u n d . S l o w ly
he
INT.
CITY ROOM
-
CHICAGO INQUIRER
-
NIGHT
- 1919
K a n e ,
in whito t i e and
s h i r t s l o e v e s ,
i 3
t y p i n g a w a y
a t
a m a c h i n e ,
hi s
f a c e ,
sooA
by
tho
d e s k l i g h t b e f o r e
him,
s-jt in a s t ranro
h a l f s m i l\ > . L e l a n d
3tands in tho
d o o r
of
hi 3
o f f l c o , s t a r i n g
acAcss a t him.
LELAND
I suppose he's fixing it up —
I knew iid never get that
through.
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78 (CONTINUED)
BERNSTEIN
(moving to
/
his side) /
Mr. Kane is finishing your /
piece the way you started It.
122
Leland turns incredulously to Bernstein.
cont'd)
ERNSTEIN (
He's wri t ing a b ad not i ce / l i ke
you wan ted i t to be — /
( t h e n with a /
k i n d o f q u i e t
p a s s i o n , r a t h e r
/
than trium ph) /
— I g u e s s t h a t ' l l show y o u .
Loland p ic k s h i s way ac ro ss to Kane ' s s id e . Kano goos on
t y p i n g , w i t h o u t l o o k i n g u p ,
/
i ;
i
KANE
(aftor
pause)
Hello, Jedodiah..
LELAND
Hello, Charlie — I didn't know
we were
speaking.
i ;
Kane s t o p s t y p i n g , b u t. d o e s n ' t t u r n .
KANE
S u r e , w e ' r e s p e a k i n g , J e d —
Y o u ' r e f i r e d .
He s t a r t s t y p i n g a g a i n , t h e e x p r e s s i o n on h i s f a c e
d o e s n ' t c h a n g e .
DISSOLVE
EXT. HOSPITAL ROCF - DAY - 1940
79 Thompson and Leland* It is getting late. The roof is
now deserted.
/
lOilPSON
Everybody knows that a t o r y ,
Mr. Le la nd , b u t ' — why d id he
do i t ? How co ul d he w ri te a
n o t i c e l i k e t h a t w hen -
5
/
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'••- -• • - -
It r-'
l
~
a.
Just dc
123
LELAND
You J u s t d o n ' t know C h a r l i e .
Ho
though t thii t
by f i n i s h i n g
t h a t pieco ho could show me he
was an h o n e s t n a n . Ha was a lways
t r y i n g to p r o v o s o m e t h i n g .
T h a t wholo t h i n g a b o u t S u s i e
b e i n g
an
opera singor
—
t h a t
w a s t r y i n g to p r o v e s o m e t h i n g .
Do you know what the h e a d l i n e
w as
tha day
b e f o r e
the
e l e c t i o n ?
CANDIDATE KANE FOUND IN LOVE
NEST WITH quota SINGER unquote .
He was going to t a k e the q u o t e s
o f f
tho
s i n g e r .
( p a u s e s )
Hey, nurs o 1 F i v e years ago hs
w r o t e f r o m t h a t p l a c e
of his
down South —
( a s
i f
t r v i n g '
t o t h i n k )
—
you
k no w . S h a n g r i - l a ?
El
Dorado?
( p a u s o s )
S l o n r y J o e ' s ? W h a t ' s
the
name
o f t l iat p l a c e ? . . . A l l r i g h t .
Xr .nadu. I know what i t was a l l
t h e t i n e . You c a u g h t on,
d i d n ' t y o u ?
i-
THOMPSON
Y e s .
LELAND
I guess .aaybc I ' u not as hard
to seo tlirou.Ji r.s I think .
Anyway, I never evon answered
hi s
l e t t o r . Mnyba
I should
have. He must have been pr et ty
lonely down there- in that
coliseu.7. those l as t year s. He
hadn't
finished
i t whon she
l ef t him - - ho never fini shed
i t — he never finished anything,
except ay no ti c e. Of course,
ho built tho
jo int
for her,
\
THOMPSON
T h a t m u s t h a v e b e o n ' l o v e .
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124
LELAIHD /
I d o n ' t k now. He v/aa /
d i s a p p o i n t e d i n t h a w o r l d . S o
h e b u i l t o n e o f h i s own — a n
a b s o l u t e m o n ar ch y — ' I t w as
s o m e t h i n g b i g g e r than an opera
house anyway —
( c a l l s )
Nurse 1
( l o w e r s h i s /
v o i c e ) /
S a y , I ' l l t a l l you one th in g
you can do for jrte , young fe l low.
T
S u r e .
THOMPSON
LELAND
On your way out, stop at a
cigar store, will you, and
send mo up a couple of cigar3?
THOMPSON
Sure,
Mr. Leland. I'll be
glad
to. /
Hoy, Nurse
1
LELAND
A nurso has already
appeared
and stands behind him.
NURSE
Yes,
Mr. Leland.
LELAND
I'm ready to go in now. You
know when I was a young man,
there was an impression around
that nurses were protty. It was
no truer then than it is now.
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79 (CONTINUED)
125 1
NURSE
Here l e t me take yo ur arm, Mr
L e l a n d .
LELAND
( t e s t i l y )
A l l
r i g h t ,
v
a l l
r i g h t . You
w o n ' t
f o r g e t , w i l l y o u , a b o u t t h e
c i g a r s ?
Ano\
t o l l them to wrap
t he m u p t o l o o k l i k e t o o t h
p a s t e , o r s o m e t h i n g , o r t h e y ' l l
s t op them a t
the/desk.
That
young d octor I/was t e l l i n g y o u
a b o u t , h e ' s g o t a n idoa he
w a n t s t o keep m e d l i v e .
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EXT. "EI RANCHO" CABARET IN ATLANTIC CITY-EARLY DAWN-1P4Q
80 Neon sign on the roof —
n
EL
RANCHO**
Floor Show
Susan Alexander Kane
Twice Nightly
CAMERA as before, MOVES through the lights of the sign
and down on the skylight, through which Is seen Susan
at her regular table, Thompson seated across from her.
Very faintly during
this.
Idle piano music playing.
DISSOLVE
INT. "EL RANCHO" CABARET - EARLY DAWN - 1940
81 Susan and Thomoson are\facing each other. The place is
almost deserted. Susan\ is sober. On the other side of
the room somebody is playinir a piano.
KHOMPSON
I'd rather you Just talked.
Anything that comes Into your
mind — about yourself and Mr.
Kane.
SUSA1
You wouldn't want to\hear a lot
of what comes into myXmind about
myself and Mr. Charlie, Kane,
(she tosses
down a drink)
You know, — maybe I shouldn't
ever have sung for CharMe that
first tine. Hah — I dJ
lot of singing after thai
start w< th, I sang for
at a hundred bucks an hour
The teachers got that, I didn't.
THOMPSON
What did you get?
SUSAN
What do you mean?
Thompson doesn't answer.
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81 (CONTINUED)
I didn't pet a
music
lessons,
was to it.
He married you
SUSAN (cont'd)
thing. Just the
That's all there.
THOMPSON
. d i d n ' t
heJ
SUSAN
H e n e v e r sa id an yt h in g a b o u t
morriaro
u n t i l
I t
a l l ca m e o u t
In t h e p a p e r s aboux u s — a n d
h e 3oat t h e e l e c t i o n a nd t h a t
N o r t o n w o m a n d ivor c e d h i m .
W h a t a r e y o u ay6.1lr\it a b o u t ? I
t e l l y o u h e
w i s
r e a l l y
. ln t e ^ e n t e d lu m y v o i c e .
( s h a r p l y )
WVat d o y o u
7
t h i n k h e b u i l t t h a t
Ooera T
1 t . I
w a s h i s
his Id
h i m .
ou
^or? I d i d n ' t w a n t
n ' t r a n t t o s i n p . I t
ea — e v e r y t h i n g w a s
— e x c e p t my l e a v i n g
1 2 7
DISSOLVE
I ' i T .
LIVING/ROOM
- KA NT 'S HOME I N NEW YORK - DAY
1917
1918
82
S u s a n I s s ' n £ l n \ . M a t i s t i , h e r v o i c e t e a c h e r , I s p l a y i n g
t h e p i a n o . K a n e \ i s s e a t e d n e a r b y . M a t i s t i s t o p s .
MATISTI
I m o o s s i b l e l \ l m n o s s l b l e
H E /
'
It Is n o t y o u r jV> t o g l v e y M g g n .
Sane y o u r o p i n l o n \ o f l » * / t a l e n t s .
Y o u ' r e sur
n
oaerj toYtrain h e r
v o i c e . N o t h i n g ra orV - '
MATIST3
( swe at in g )
B u t , It Is i m p o s s i b l e . \ l w i l l
be t h e lauprhlng s t o c k o A t h e
m u s i c a l worldI P e o p l e w & l s a y —
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83
84
KANE
I f y o u ' r e
Interested In
what
p e o p l e w i l l s a y ,
Slpnor
M a t i s t i ,
I may be a bl e to enlighten you
a b i t . The new.oonr>ero,~for-
Inatnneen I
f
ra
r
-fih a u t h o r i t y -on<U^
what
%hn un w a^ j i l l l
"flag*,
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San
Frjinrlff-fftr.
r i g h t , d e a r , Sifmor
Mat
i s g o i n g t o l i s t e n t o r e a s o n .
A r e n ' t y o u , m a e s t r o ?
a
r
J '
MAT
M r , K a n e , h o w c a n
yo u —
Y o u c a n ' t .
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There Is a si lence/ Matisti rises.
I kn
KANE (cont'd)
yo u ' d s ee i t my wa y .
DISSOLVE
IN T. CHICAGO OPERA HOUSE - NIGHT - 1919
I t i s t h e
sVrse opening
n i g h t — i t
Is the>rfame
moment as
b ef or e — e x c e p t th a t th e CAMERA i s now
.dpstap-e
ANGLING
towa rd th e a u d i en c e . The c u r t a i n i s d own. We s e e the
sam e t a b l e a u a s N b e f o r e . A s t h e d i s s o l v e c om m e n ce a,
t h e r e i s the sound o*" a p p l a u s e and'-now a s t h e d i s s o l v e
c o m p l e t e s i t s e l f ,
\ h e
o r c h e s t r a
begins
— t h e s t a g e i s
c l e a r e d - - S u s a n
I sNle f t
a l o n e . , . The c u r t a i n r i s e s .
S us an s t a r t s t o
slTyrX
E e y o n d , h e r , we s e e t h e
orompter's
b o x , containing t h e a rubious fa c e o f the p r o m p ter .
B eyon d t h a t , a n a p p r e h e n s i v e ' c o n d u c t o r .
CLOSEUP of K a n e ' s f a c e / — sealed i n t h e a u d i e n c e —
l i s t e n i n g .
/
A sudden but p e r f e c t l y c o r r e c t li3ll i n t h e m u s i c r e v e a l s
a v o i c e from t h e .audlenca — a few\words from a
s e n t e n c e .
/
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85
86
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87
88
89
90
91
92
A
129
^
THE VOICE
Rally
pathetic.
Music crashes In
and
drowns
out the
rest
of the
sentence,
but
hundreds
of
people around
the
voice have heard
It
(as well
as
Kane) and there are titters which grow in
volume. \
\
CLOSEUP of
Susan's'face
— singing.
\
\
CLOSEUF
of
Kane's face
—
listening.
There la the ghastly sound of three thousand people
applauding as little as possible. Kane still looks.
Then, near the camera, there is the sound of about a
dozen people
applauding
very very loudly. CAMERA MOVES
BACK, revealing
Bernste'n
and
Hlllnan
and other Kane
atoopes, seated around him, beating their palms together.
THE STAGE FROM KAN E'S ANGLE
- The
curtain Is
down--
Still
thp
oolite applause dying fast. Nobody comes out
for
a bow.
\
CLOSEUr of Kane — br ea th ing heav i l y ,
to arplaud fu ri o usl y.
Suddenly he
s tarts
THE STAGE FROM THE
AUDIENCE
AGAIN - Susan a ppear s for
her bow. She can ha r d l y
walk,
there
I s
a l i t t l e po l i t e
creacendo of arnlause, but i t i s s ickly .
\
\
CLOSEUP of Kane — still applauding very, very hard, his
eyes on Susan.
\
\
THE STAGE AGAIN — Susan, finishing her bow, goes out
through
the
curtains.
The
llpht ori
the
curtain goes
out and the
houseliphts
go
up, \
\
CLOSEUP
of
Kane
—
still applauding very, very hard,
\
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130
DISSOLVE IN
INT.
HOTEL ROOM
-
CHICAGO - DAY - 1919
93 Kane - Susan in \ a neg lig ee. The flo or Is l i t t e r e d with
newspapers.
SUSAN
Stop t e l \ i n g n e he's your
fr iend,
(she^oints
-
at the paper)
A friend don't write that kind
of an article. Anyway, not
the kind of friends I know. Of
course, I'm not high-class
like
you and I
didh't
go to any
swell schools V
That's enough, Susan.
A look at htm convinces Susa)^ that he really means it's
enough.
There's
a knock at the door.
SUSAN
(screeching)
Come lnl
A copy
boy
enters.
COPY BOY
Mr. Leland said
I
nas
to
ctame
rlffht
UP —
Fe
was verv anxious
KANE
(Interrupting)
Thanks, son.
He shoves the kid out. He opens the
envelope aa
Susan
returns
to the
attack.
SUSAN
The idea of him trying to
spoil
my
debut I
Kane has taken a folded piece of paper out of the
envelope and la holding it — looking Into the envelope.
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131
INSERT
KANE
spoil anything else,
,
SUSAN
And you.
(
— you
ou/rht
to have
your
hpad examinedI
Sending
him a letter he's fired
with
a
twenty-five thousand dollar
check What kind of firing do
you call that? You did send
h*T a twenty-five thousand
dollar check, dldn't you?
KANE
(slowly tipping
over the
envelope
as pieces
\>f
torn
papers fall to the
• floor) \
Yes, I sent him
a \twenty-flve
thousand dollar check,
Kane now unfolds the piece of
\?aper
and looks at It.
Kane's original grease-pencil copy
of
his "Declaration
of Principles."
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W h a t ' s t h a t ?
A n a n t i q u e . •
BACK TO SCENE:
SUSAN'S
KANE'S VOIC
^•**""*^»a*
SUSAN
You're awful funny, aren't you
Well,
I can tell you one thing
you're not going to keep on
being funny a b o u t . — iny singing
I'm through. I never wanted to
-
KANE
(without
looking up)
You are continuing your singing,
Susan.
(he starts
tearing
the paper)
I'm not going to have myself
made rldloulous.
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132
SUSAN
You don't propose to have
yourself
made* ridiculous?
«»hat
about me? I'm the one
that has to do the singing.
I'm the one that gets the
razzberries. Why can't you
Just
—
KANE
(looking up —
still tearing
the paper)
My reasons satisfy me, Susan.
You seem to be unable to
understand them. I will not
tell them to you again,
(he has started
to walk
menacingly
toward her,
tearing the
paper as he
walks)
You are to continue wi rn your
singing.
/
His
eyes are relentlessly
upch
her. She sees something
that frightens her. She nocfs slowly; indicating surrender,
DISSOLVE
INSERT
FRONT PAGE of
the/'San
Francisco
Inquirer"
(I91o)/
C
ontalning
a large
portrait of
Susah
as Thais. It
Is
announced
that,Susan
will open an
independent
season
in San Francisco
in "Thais." the picture remains constant
but the
nameij
of the papers change from New
York to St./Louis, to Los Angeles to
Cleveland, /to Denver, to Philadelphia —
all "Inquirers,
"
During all this, on the SOUND TRACK, Susan's voice is
heard singing: her aria very faintly.
DISSOLVE
N'3 BEDROOM
*
KANE'S N .Y. HOME - LATE
NIGHT-1920
-S
across the bed and Susan's form towards the
. ihe other side of which comes loud knocking
me'a voice calling Susan's name. Then:
KANE'S VOICE
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133
95
Yes, sir.
JOSEPH'S VOICE
KANE'S VOICE
Do you have the keys to Mrs.
Kane's bedroom?
JOSEPH'S VOICE
No,
Mr,
Kane, The^ must be on
the inside.
KANE'S VOICE
We'll have to break down
the,
door.
JOSEPH'S/VOICE
Yes, sir.
Get Dr.
JoseDh rushes out.
The door crashes
open.
Light floods the room, revealing
Susan, fully dressed, stretched out on the bed. She is
breathing, but heavily, i&ne rushes to her, kneels at
the bed and feels nor forehead, Joseph has followed him
in.
KANE
INT.
SUSAN/S BEDROOM - KANE'S N .Y . HOME - LATE NIGHT - 1 9 2 0
A
l i t t l e
l a t e r . A l l t h e l i g h t s a r e l i t . A t s t a r t o f
s c e n e ,
DrVsCorey
r e m ov e s h i s d o c t o r ' s b a g f ro m
in
f r o n t
of camera
l e h e .
r e v e a l i n g S u s a n , i n a n i g h t g ow n , Is in
b e d . S he i s b r e a t h i n g h e a v i l y . A n u r s e i s b e n d i n g o v e r
t h e b e d , s traightening t h e s h e e t s .
DR. COREY'S VOICE
S h e ' l l b e per f ec t l y a l l r i g h t
in a d ay or twb ,Vlr . Kane .
The nurse walks away from the bed toward b.g. We now
see Kane, who was h i d d e n b y the bourse's b o d y , s e a t e d
b eyond the b e d . He i s h o l d i n g
anNempty
m e d i c in e b o t t l e *
Dr. Corey wa lk s to h i j i .
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96
97
KANE
I can't imagine how M rs . Kane
came to make such a foolish
mistake.
(Susan turns
her head
away
from
Kane)
The sedative Dr. Wagner gave her
is in a somewhat larger bottl e.
— I suppose the strain of
preparing for the new opera ha
excited and confused her.
(looks sharply
up at Dr. Corey)
DR. CO
Y e s , y e s — I ' m s u r e £hat 's i t .
Dr. Corey turns and walks
the nurse.
There are no
ay staying
there?
LNE
Ejections to
with her, are
DR. COREY
No — not'at al l. But I'd like
the
nurse
to be here, too.
Good
n^^ht,
Mr. Kane.
Dr.
Corey
hurr/es
out the door.
I N T .
BEDROOIf - KAN E'S N,
DISSOLVE
HOME - VERY EARLY DAWN
- 1920
The lights are out.
^AICSRA^PANS
from nur3e, who is
seated stiffly in a
cttai/;
toward Kane seated beside
the bed staring at Sufg^, to Susan who is asleep.
DISSOLVE
IHT.
SUSAN'S BEDROOM
-
KANE'S N .Y. HOME
-
DAY - 1920
Sunlight is streaming
Into
the room. A hurdy-gurdy
is heard. Kane is still seatad beside the bed, looking
at Susan, who
Is
asleep.
Afte\a
moment Susan gasps
and opens her eyes.
She
looks
Wrard
the window, Kane
loans toward her . She looks up &£ him, then away;
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SUSAN
(painfully)
Charlie — I couldn't make you
see how I felt. — I Just
couldn't go through with the
singing again. — You don't
know what it's like to feel
that people — that a whole,
audience doesn't want you.
KANE
(angrily)
That's when you've
them*
to fight
She continues
She looks up at
him
s
y with pathetic eyes.
KANE (cont'd)
(after
moment,
gentj
All right/ You won't have to
fight thea any more. ~ It's
their loss.
look at him, but now
gratefully.
DISSOLVE
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EXT. ESTABLISHING SHOT OF XANADU - Half built - 1925
DISSOLVE
INT.
GREAT HALL - XANADU - 1929
99 CLOSEUP of an
enormous
jigsaw puzzle. A hand is putting
In
the last piece. CAMERA MOVES BACK to reveal jigsaw
puzzle spread out on the floor
— •
Susan
Is
on the floor
bVfore
her jigsaw puzzle. Kane is
In
an easy chair. Candelabra
illuminates
the scene.
What time is
It?
There
Is
no answer*
fcr
SUSAN (\ont'd)
Charlie I said, what\lme
is It?
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J
M . . . . 4 u > i > . . r ? r ^
<
7 . . .
99 (CONTINUED)
fc=
KANE
(looks up —
consults.his
watch)
Eleven-thirty*
SUSAN
I mean
'In
New York* —
(no answer)
I said what time is it
in
New
York.
E l e v e n - t h i r s t y *
At night?
KANE
SUSAN
kKANS
Uohm. The bulldog's just gone
to press.
SUSAN
(sarcastically)
Hurray for the
bur^dogl
(sighs)
Eleven-thirty I
Tho\
shows're
just getting out. People are
going to night clubs\ and
restaurants.
Of
course,
we're
different because we Xive In
a palace.
KANE v
You always said you wanted to
live in a palace.
SUSAN
A person could go nuts in
this
dump*
Kane doesn't answer*
SUSAN (cont'd)
Nobody to talk to — nobody to
have any fun with*
Susan —
KANE
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137
SUSAN
Forty-nine thousand acres of
nothing but scenery and «
statues. I'm lonesome.
KANE
I thought you wore tired of
house guests. Till yesterday
morning, we've had
npless
than
fifty of your friends at any
one
time*
As a ma/ter of fact,
Susan, if you'll
look
carefully
in the west wing/ you'll probably
find a dozen vacationists still
in
residence*
SUSAN
You make
a/joke
out of
everything
Charlie,
LMvant
to go back to
New York./ I'm tired of being a
hostess./ I wanta hava fun*
Please, A harlie, please.
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KANE
Our home is here, Susan,
care/to visit New York.
I don't
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DISSOLVE
100
ANOTHER-PICTURE
PUZZLE - Susan's hands fitting in a
missing piece. (1930)
DISSOLVE
101
102
ANOTHER PICTURE PUZZLE
missing pieoe. (1931)
- Susan's hands fitting in a
DISSOLVE
INT.
GREAT HALL - XANADU - DAY - 1932
CLOSEUP of another Jigsaw puzzle. CAMERA PULLS BACK to
show Kane and Susan in W c h the same positions as before,
except that they are
oltf
INE
iver
ne thing I've never been able
to understand, Susan* How do
you know that you^haven't done
them before?
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Susan shoots him an angry glanc e. She
isrf't
amused.
SUSAN
It makes a whole lot more
than collecting Ve nuse s.
sense
KANE /
You may be right — I
som/tlmes
wonder — but you get intfo the
habit — '
SUSAN
(snapping)
It's not a habit.
I/do
it
because I like it*
KAN
I was referring tp myself,
(pauses)
I thought we might have a
picnic to mo rr ow /— • Invite
everybody to go/ to the
Everglades —
SUSAN
Invito everybody. — Order
everybody, you moan, and make
them
sleep/in tontsl
Who wants
to sloop
ih
tent3 when they
have a nice room of their own —
with thoi'r own bath, whero they
know whero everything is?
Kano has looked/at he r steadily, not hostilely.
KANE
I thought we might invito
everybody to go on a picnic
tomorrow. Stay at Evorglades
overnight*
103
DISSOLVE
EXT. XANADU - ROAD - DA¥y- 1932
TIGHT TWO SHOT - Kane and Susan seated in an automobile,
silent, glum, staring before
ch^m*
CAMERA PULLS BACK
revealing that there are twenty ctn**-A*H of picniokers
following them, on thoir way through the Xanadu Estate*
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"CITIZEN KANE" 139
DISSOLVE IN "
EXT. THE EVERGLADES
CAMP
- NIGHT - 1932
104 LONG SHOT - of a number of classy- tents.
DISSOLVE
. IN T . LARGE TENT - EVERGLADES CAMP - NIGHT - 19 32
i
105 Two real beds have been
seU
up on each side of the tent.
A rather classy dressing table is in the rear, at which
Susan is preparing for bedA Kane, in his shirt sleeves,
is In an easy chair, reading^ Susan is very sullen.
SUSAtt
I'm not going to putWp with it.
Kane turns to look at her.
SUSAN-(cont'd)
I mean it. Oh, I know I
always say I mean
it,
andVthen
I don't — or you get me so I
don't do what I say I'm go:
to — but —
•'
I
KANE
(interrupting)
You're in a tent, darling.
You.'re
not at home. And I
can>
hear you very well if you just
talk in a normal tone of voice.
1
/psy
SUSAN
I ' m no t g o i ng t o ha v e my
g u e s t s i n s u l t e d , j u s t b e c a u s e
y o u —
( i n a r a g e )
—
I f
p e o p l e w an t t o b r i n g a
d r i n k o r t w o a l o n g o n a p i c n i c ,
t h a t ' s t h e i r b u s i n e s s . Y o u 'v e
g o t n o r i g h t —
KANE
( q u i c k l y )
I ' v e g o t m ore t h a n a r i g h t a s
f a r a s y o u ' r e c o n c e r n e d , S u s a n .
SUSAN
I 'm s i c k a n d t i r e d o f y o u r
t e l l i n g me w h at I m u s t n 't
do I
And wha t I • —
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140
KANE
We canviiscuss all this some
other
time.
Susan. Right now —
SUSAN
I'll di3c\.ss what's on my mind
when I want to. I'm sick of
having
you\run
my
life
the way
you want it
Susan,
as fa:
concerned, I
anything — I
KANE
as you're
never wanted
on't want
anycning
—
i uon'u
warns
anything now -A except what
you want. »
What you want me to want, you
mean, fthat you've decided I
ought to have — - what you'd
7/ant
If you were me^. Never,
what I want —
Susan I
KANE
SUSAN
You've never given me
that —
KANE
I really think —
SUSAN
Oh sure, you give me things \-
that don't mean anything to
you — - What's the difference
1
between giving mo a bracelet
giving somebody else a hundred
1
thousand dollars for a statue
you're going to keep crated up
and never look at? It's only
money.
KANE
(he has
risen)
Susan,
I want you to
stop this.
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SUSAN
I'm\not g o i n g
to
s t o p
i tI
7 / 1 9 / 4 0
1 4 1
RightXnow
KANE
SUSAN
(screams)
You neveV gave me anything in
your
lifeM
You Just
.-.tried-to
—
to buy
mo.VLnto
giving you
something A You're — It ' s l ike
you were bribing meI
KANE
Susant
SUSAN
That's all you ever done — no
matter
how
much
It
cost
you —
your time, your money — that's
all you've
done
with everybody.
Tried to bribe then
KANE
SusanI
She looks at him, with no
lessening
of her passion
KANE (con\'d)
(quietly)
Whatever
I do — I do ~
because I
lovo
you.
SUSAN
You don't love mel You
want
me to
love
you —
sure
I'm Charles Foster Kane.
Whatever
you
want
—
Just
it and it's yours. But you
gotta love
met
Without
a
word, Kane
a laps her
acrosa
tho
i ace.
He
continues to look at her*
SUSAN (cont'd)
You'll never
get a
chance
to
do that
again*
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SUSAN (contU
D o n ' t
t a l l
me y o u ' r e s o r p y .
I'm not sorr
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DISSOLVE
INT.
GREAT
H * £ L
- XANADU
-
DAY
S-932
106 Kane is at the window looking out. He turns as he hears
Raymond enter.
RAtalOND
M r s . K ano w ou ld
l i k e
t o s e e y o u ,
M r . K ane ,
A l l r i g h t .
R aym on d w a i t s a s K an e h e s i t a t e v s .
KANE
I s M r s . K a n e —
(he can ' t
f i n i s h )
RAYMOND
M a r i e h a s b e e n p a c k i n g h\ r s i n c e
m o r n i n g , M r . K a n e .
Kane
Impetuously
w a l k s p a s t h im o u t
\ f
t h e
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INT. SUSAN'S
ROO? -
XANADU
- DAY
•
1932
107 Packed suitcases
are on the
floor. Susan is completely
dressed
for
travelling, Kane bursts Into
the
room.
\ SUSAN
Tell Arnold
I'm
ready, Marie,
He
can
gat
the
bags.
MARIE
Yes, Mrs.
Kane.
She leaves. Kano closes
the
door behind
her.
KANE
Have
you
gonJj completely crazy?
Susan looks
at him.
UL'.NE
(cont'd)
Don't
you
realise that everybody
here
is
going
to
know about this?
That you've
pacliod
your bags and
ordered
the car and —
SUSAN
— And l ef t ? Of qourse they ' l l
hear .
I
r
m not say ing
good-bye
—
except to you -V but I
never imagined tha^ people
wouldn't know.
Kane i s stand ing ag ai ns t tho door as i f phy si c al l y
barring her way.
KANE
I won' t l e t you go .
SUSAN
(reaches out
hor hand)
Good-byo, Charlie.
KANE
(suddonly)
Don't
go,
Susan.
Susan Just looks at him*
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107 (CONTINUED)
144
108
1
tz
KANE (cont'd)
Susan, don't got Susan, please I
X
He has lost all pride, Susan stops,/She is affected
by this.
'
KANE
(cont'd)
You mustn't go, Susan.
Everything'11 be exactYy the
way you want
it. NotAhe
way
I think
you
want
it -/ but
your
way.
Please, Susan
/-
Susanl
She
Is
staring et him. She j/ight weaken.
KANE (cont'd)
Don't go,
Susanl/You
mustn't
go
(almost
blubbering)
You — you can 7b do this to me,
Susan --
It's as if he had throw/
freezes.
ice-water
into her face. She
SUSAN
I see — it;''s you that this is
being dono; tol"^Tt's not me at
oil.
Not
/low
I
feel.
Not
what
It
means
to
me. Not —
(she laughs)
I can't do this to
you I
(she looks
at him)
Ch yes I' can.
/
She walks out, past Kane, who turns to watch her go,
like a very tired old man,
DISSOLVE
INT.
"EL RANCHO"
CAB*EST
-
NIGnT
-
JJJ40
Susan and Thompson
aVtable.
There is silence between
them for a moment as she accepts a cigarette from
Thompson
and he
lights
\ t
for her*
In case you've
neve»r
heard
of
how I lost all my raouey — and
It
was plenty,
believVme
—
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108 (CONTINUED)
THOMPSON
T he l a s t t e n y e a r s h a v e b e e n
t o u g h o n a l o t o f p e o p l e —
\
\ SUSAN
Aw, they
haven't
been tough on
me.
I Just lost my money —
(takes a
deep puff)
So you're going down to Xanadu,
145
THOMPSON
Monday,
with
some of the boys
from tho office, Mr. Rawlston
wants the whole place photographed
cercfully -- all that art stuff.
We run a picture magazine, you
know —
A
SUSAN
Yeah, I know. If you're smart,
you'll talk to
Raymond'—
(nervously)
douses out
tho cigarette)
\
.
That's the butler. You can learn
a lot from him. He know3 whore
tho bodio3 are buried. \
\
She grabs a glass and holds it tensely In both hands*
»
THOMPSON \
Y ou k n o w , a l l t h e som e I f e o l \
kind o f s o r ry fo r Mr . Kan e . \
SUSAN
( h a r s h l y )
D o n ' t y o u t h i n k I d o ?
S he l i f t s t h e g l a s s , an d a s s h e d r a i n s i t shls n o t i c e s
t h e daw n l i g h t co m i n g t h r u s k y l i g h t . S h e s h i v e r s a nd
p u l l s h e r c o a t o v e r h e r s h o u l d e r s *
SUSAN (cont 'd)
W e l l , w h a t d o y o u know ? I t ' s
m o r n i n g
a l r e a d y ,
( l o o k s a t
h im for
a moment)
You m u s t come a ro u n d and t o l l
mo t h e s t o r y o f y o u r l i f e
s o m e t i m e *
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146
DISSOLVE
IN
EXT. XANADU - LATE DUSK - 1940
109
The
distant castle
on the
hill, seen through
the
great
iron
"K" as in the
opening shot
of the
picture. Several
lights
are on.
DISSOLVE
INT.
GREAT HALL
-
XANADU
-
LATE DUSK
- 1940
110 CAMERA
IS IN
CLOSE
on Thompson and Ijaymond —
will
subsequently reveal surrounding scene. /
RAYMOND
Rosebud?
I'll
tell
you
about
Rosebud
-- how
muc^h
is it
worth
to you? A thousand dollars?
y ;
/ :'
THOMPSON
Okay,
RAYMON:
He was a little gone in the head
sometimes,
you know. \
No,
I
didn't.
THOMPSO:
RAYMOND
He did crazy things sometimes —
I've been working f;ir
him
eleven
years
now — the
last years
pf
his life and I ought to know
Yes, sir,
the old ma n
was
ki
of queer,
but I
knew
how to
handle him.
THOMPSON
Need
a lot of
service?
RAYMOND
Yeah.
But I knew how to handle
him.
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147
V ,
HIT. CORRIDOR fe TELEGRAFH OFFICE - XANADU - NIGHT - IS
Raymond walking rapidly along corridor. He 'Tushes/open
a door. At a desk\ sits a v/ireless operator. Near hla
at a telephone switchboard sits a female operate
RAYMOND
(readlVig)
Mr.
Charles\Foster
Kane
announced toYiay that Mrs .
Charles Foster Kane has left
Xanadu, his Florida home, under
the terms of 4 peaceful and/
friendly
agreement
wi th the
intention of filing suit for
divorce at an early date./ Mrs .
Kane said that she does
pot
intend to return to theybperatlc
career which she\ gave up a few
years after her marriage, at
Mr. Kane's req uest. Sylgned,
Charles Foster Kane.
Fred finishes typing and then/looks up.
RAYMCp (cont'd)
Exclusive for immediate
transmission.
Uygem^
priority
all Kane papers./
?RED
Okay,
There is the sound of the buzner
the switchboard.
KATHERINE
Yes,.yes../Mrs.
TinsdallJ
Very well,
(turiis to
Raymond)
It's the/housekeeper.
Yes?
RAYMOND
. KATHERINE
She says there's some sort
of'
disturbance up in Miss
Alexander's room. She's afraid
to go in.
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I N T . CORniDOR OUTSIDE SUSAN'S BSDjjOOM - XANADU - NIGHT
1 9 3 2
The housekeeper, Mrs . Tinsdall, and a couple of maids
are near tho door but toOyOiraid to be in front of It.
From inside can be heard>u terrible banging and crashing.
Raymond hurries into
sc/ne,
opens the door and goes
in.
INT. SUSAN'S BEDRCgM - XANADU - 1932
Kane,
In
a truly
terrible
and absolutely silent rage, is
literally
breaking'up
the room — yanking pictu res, hooks
and all off the waljj, smashing them to bits — ugl y,
gaudy pictures -- Susie's pictures in Susie's bad taste.
Off of table to ps, off of dressing tables, occasional
tables, bureaus, he sweeps Susie's whorish accumulation
of bric-a-brac.
Raymond stands'
In
the doorway watching
him.
Kane says
nothing.
He
continues
with tremendous speed and
surprising strength, still wordlessly, tearing the
room
to bits. The curtains (vtoo frilly — overly-pretty) are
pulled off the windows in a signle gesture, and from the
bookshelves he pulls dov/ double armloads of cheap novels
— discovers a half-empty bottle of liquor and dashes it
across the room. Finailyt he
stops,
Susie's cozy little
chamber is an incredible shambles all around him. He
stands for a minute
breatfcing
heavily, and his eye lights
on a
hanging
what-not in d corner which had escaped his
notice. Prominent on its tenter shelf is the little
glass ball with the snowstorm in it. He yanks it down .
Something made of china br eaks , but not the glass ba ll .
It bounces on the carpet and rolls to his feet, the
snow In a flurry. His eye rollows it. He stoops to
pick it up — can't make it I iaymond picks it up for
him; hands it to
him.
Kane
\takcs
it sheepishly -- looks
at it — moves painfully out\ of tho room into the
corridor.
INT. CORRIDOR OUTSIDE
SUSAN'S\BSDROOM
-
XANADU
- 1932
Kano comes out of the door. Mrs. Tinsdall has been
joined now by a fairly sizable Vturnout of servants.
They move back away from Kane, etaring at
him.
Raymond
la In the doorway behind Ka ne. \Kane still looks at the
glass ball.
KANE
(without
turning)
Closo the door, Raymond,
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114 (CONTINUED)
RAYMOND
Yes, sir.
(closes It)
KANB
Lock it — and keep it
(almost in
a trance)
Rosebud.
What's that,
149
Raymond locks the door and comes to
7
his side. There is
a long pause — servants staring im silence. Kane gives
the glass ball a gentle shake and/starts another
snowstorm.
KANE
IYMOND
One of the younger servants gigle3 and is hushed u p.
Kane shakes the ball again. Another flurry of snow,
watches the flakes settle — then looks up . Finally,
taking in the pack of servants and something of the
situation, ho puts the glass ball in his coat pocket.
He speaks
very
quietly to Raymond, so
quietly
it only
seems he's talking to h imself .
He
/ •
/ KANE
Keep
it/locked.
/
He slowly walks off down tho corridor, the servants
giving way to let him pass, and watching him as he
goes.
The mirrors which line the hall reflect his image as he
moves.
He is an old, old manj
Kane turns into a second corridor — sees himself
reflected in the mirror — stop s. His Image is reflected
again in the mirror behind him — multiplied again and
again and again in long perspectives — Kane looks.
We
see a thousand
Kanes.
DISSOLVE
INT.
GREAT HALL - XANADU - NIGHT - 1940
115 Thompson and Raymond*
(callous
That's the w
up to
date*
YHOND
works, right
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115 (CONTINUED)
THOMPSON
Sentimental fellow, aren't you?
Yes and
no.*
RAYMOND
\ THOMPSON
And that's what you know about
Rosebud?
' RAYMOND
That's more than anybody knows.
I tell you, he was a little gone
in the head —
t;he
last couple
of years anyway «-- but I knew how
to handle him. That Rosebud —
I heard him say it that other
time too. He justi, said Rosebud
then he dropped that glass ball
end
it broke on the floor. He
didn't say anything\after that
so I knew ho wos dead. He said
all kinds of things that didn't
mean
anything*
THOMPSO
That isn't worth anything.
RAYMOND
You can go on asking questions
if you -want
to*
THOMPSON
(coldly)
We're leaving tonight. As sobn
as they're through photographing
the stuff --
Thompson has risen. Raymond gets to his
RAYMOND
Allow yourself plenty of time.
The train stops at the Junction
on signul — but they don't like
to wa it . Not now. I can
remembor when they'd wait all
day••••if Mr* Kane said so.
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115 (CONTINUED)
116
CAMERA has PULLED^ BACK to show LONG SHOT of the Great
Hell,
revealing the magnificent tapestries, candelabra,
etc., are still there, but now several/large packing
cases are piled against the walls, some broken op en, some
shut and a number of objects, great/and small, are piled
pell mell all over the\ place. Furniture, statues,
paintings, bric-a-brac V-
things/pf
obviously enormous
value are standing beside a kitchen stove, an old
rocking chair and other junk,yumong which Is also an old
sled, the self-same storyw\
In the center of the hall/aNphotographer and his
assistant are busy photographing the sundry objects* In
addition there are a
gj/rl
and\two newspapermen — also
Thompson and
Raymond.,
The girl and the second man,
who\wears
a hat, are
dancing somewhere An the back of \he hall to the music
of a phonograph,/^laying "Oh Mr.
Kane,
The photographer has just photographed a picture,
obviously of great value,/an Italian primitive. The
assistant consults a label on the back of it.
ASSISTANT
No. 9182
The third newspaperman jots this information down,
/ ASSISTANT (cont'd)
"Nativity"/ - attributed to
Donatello/ acquired Florence
1921, coat 45,000 lira. Got
that?
Yeah.
THIRD NEWSPAPERMAN
'OGRAPHER
All right 1 Nextl \Better get
lYMOND
What do you thinft all this Is
worth, -r. Thompson?
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THOMPSON
Millions — VLf anybody wants It•
RAYMOND
The banks are\out of luck, eh?
(THOMPSON
Oh, I don't
kniw.
They'll clear
all right.
ISSISTANT
" Venus , "
F ourthVCe ntury .
A c q u i r e d
1 9 1 1 . Co s t
twenty-three
t h o u s a n d .
Go t I t ?
Okay,
THIRD NEWSFAFERMAN
ASSISTANT
(patting the
statue on
the fanny)
That's a lot of money\to pay
for a dame without a head.
SECOND ASSISTANT
(reading
a label)
No. 483. One desk from the
estate of Mary Kane, Little
Salem, Colorado. Value
£6\00.
We're supposed to get everything.
The junk as well as the artJ
Okay.
THIRD NEWSPAPEI
A flashlight bulb goes off, Thompson has opened a box
and is idly playing with a handful of little pieces of
ardboard.
What's that?
THIRD NEWSPAPERMAN
(cbnt'd)
RAYMOND
It's a Jigsaw puzzle.
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116 (CONTINUED)
THIRD NEWSPAPERMAN
We got a lot of those. There's
a Burmese Temple and three
Spanish ceilings down the hall.
Raymond laughs.
PHOTOGRAPHER
Yeah, all in irates.
VTHIHD
NEWSPAPERMAN
There's
a part
wf
a Scotch
castle over there, but we
haven't bothereq to unwrap It.
PHOTOGRAPHER
I wonder how they\ put all those
pieces together?
ASSISTANT
(reading a
label)
Iron stove. Estate
\f
Mary Kane..
Value $2.00.
PHOTOGRAPHER
Put it over by that statue.
It'll make a good setup
GIRL
(calling out)
Who is she anyway?
SECOND NEWSPAPERMAN
Venus. She always is.
THIRD NEWSPAPEI IAN
Ho sure liked to collect thing:
didn't he?
FEOTOGRAPHER \
Anything and everything — he \
was a regular crow. \
I .
\
THIRD NEWSPAPERMAN
I wonder — You put all this
together — the palaces and
the paintings and the toys and
everything — what would it
spell?
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116 (CONTINUED)
Thompson has
turned
a r o u n d . He i s f a c i n g t h e c am e r a
fol
t h e f i r s t t i m e .
THOMPSON
C h a r l e s Fo'eter K a n e .
PHOTOGRAPHER
O r R o s e b u d ? \ H ow a b o u t i t ,
J e r r y ?
/f^.
THIRD NEWSPAPERMAN
(to the
danceraf
Turn that thing off, will you?
It's driving me
nutsi
— What's
Rosebud?
PHOTOGRAPHER
Kane's last words, aren't they,
Jerry?
(to the
thUrd
newspaperman)
That was Jerry's\angle, wasn't
it. Did you
ever\ find
out whet
it means?
No, I didn't.
THOMPSON
The music has
stopped.
The dancers have come over to
Thompson.
SECOND NEWSPAPERMAN
Say, what did you find
qut
about him anyway?
/&&*\.
Not much.
THOMPSON
SECOND NEWSPAPERMAN
Well,
what have you been doing?
THOMPSON
Playing with a Jigsaw puzzle —>
I talked to a lot of people who
knew him.
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GIRL
What do they say?
THOMPSON
Well — it's become a very clear
picture. iHo was the most honest
man
who
ever lived, with
a
streak
of crookedness a yard w ide. He
was a liberal end a reactionary.
He was a lbving husband — and
both his wives left him. He had
a gift
for I
friendship such as
few men have — and he broke his
oldest friend's heart like you'd
throw avtay
a
cigarette you were
through with* Outside of that —
Okay, okay.
THIRD NEWSPAPERMAN
155
GIRL
If you could have found out
what that Rosebud meant, I bet
that would'vjj explained
everything.
THOMPSON
No,
I don't.
I
Not much anyway.
Charles Foster Kane was a man
who got
everything
he wanted,
and then
lost lit.
Maybe Rosebud
was something
lie
couldn't get
or something
he
lost,
but it
wouldn't have
explained anything.
I don't think cuiy word explains
a man's
life* Ho — I
guess
Rosebud is justia piece in a
Jigsaw puzzle —\ a missing
piece*
He drops the Jigsaw pieces ack into the box, looking
at his watch.
THOMPSON (cont'd)
We'd bettor get alo\g. We'll
miss
the
train*
He picks up his overcoat — it has been resting on a
little sled — the little sled
yWig
Charlea Foster Kane
hit
Thatcher w ith at the
opening\pT
t n 0
picture* Camera
doesn't close In on this. It jusfc registers the sled as
the newspaper people, picking up their clothes and
equipment, move
out of the
great
hall*
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117
118
DISSOLVE IN
INT.
CELLAR - XANADU - NIGHT - 1940
A large furnace, with an open door,/fiominates the scene.
Two laborers, with shovels, are shovelling things Into
the furnace. Raymond is about tanfeet away*
Throw that Junk
EXT.
XANADU - KT.QKT - 1940
No lights are to be seen,
chimney.
156
CAMERA TRAVELS to the pll€ that he has indicated* It is
mostly bits of broken packing cases, excelsior, etc.
The sled Is on top of the
oile.
As CAMERA COMES CLOSE,
it shows the faded rosebud and, though the letters are
faded, unmistakably the word "Rosebud" across it. The
laborer drops his
shovel,
takes the sled in his hand
and throws it into jihe furnace. The flames start to
devour it.
Smoke is coming from a
CAMERA REVERSES the path it took at the beginning of the
picture, perhaps omitting some of the stages. It MOVES
finally THROUGH the gates, which close behind it. As
CAMERA PAUSES for a moment, the letter 'K* is prominent
in the moonlight.
Ju3t before we fade out, there comes again into the
picture the pattern of bnrbed v;ire and cyclone fencing.
On tho fence is a sign which reads:
"PRIVETS - MO TPESPASSING"
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36 (CONTINUED)
57
SMATHERS
We g o t o p r e s s i n f i v e m i n u t e s . /
KANE
/
( q u i e t l y ) /
W e l l , l e t ' s re m ak e t h e s e p a g e s ,
M r . S m a t h e r s . i
SMATHERS /
We g o t o p r e s s i n f i v e m i n u t e s ,
M r . K a n e . /
KANE /
W e ' l l h a v e t o p u b l i s h h a l f a n
h o u r l a t e , t h a t ' s a l i t
SMATHERS
You d o n ' t u n d e r s t a n d , M r . K a n e .
We g o t o p r e s s i n f i v e m i n u t e s .
We c a n ' t r em ake t hem , Mr . K a ne .
M
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