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Comprehension There are no hard and fast rules for the students to understand the text and answer the questions asked. However, there are some guidelines for the students to understand any text and answer the questions that follow. Read the passage quickly for specific information like names and dates. Read it again slowly and carefully to understand the whole text. Read each questions, find the answer and underline it in the passage. Try to answer in your own words, don’t just copy the whole paragraph or sentence. In a very few cases only, you can copy the complete sentence. Maintain the tense in your answer in which it is asked. Maintain the speech in which you are answering the question. Generally while answering such questions as what did somebody say? You better write in indirect speech. Simple, correct and clear sentences should be used. Don’t give unnecessary and long answers. The complete answer is a must. You cannot just write short phrases in your answers. Paragraph writing A paragraph is a group of sentences dealing with a particular topic. A paragraph may have only one sentence or many more according to the nature of the topic. However, it is best to write short and moderate paragraphs including all necessary supporting details on the given topic. Every sentence in it must be closely connected with the main topic, and they can be linked with each other with the help of sentence linkers, such as however, therefore, as a result, on the other hand, though, because, so that , …. Thus all the ideas related to the main topic should be expressed in a logical order. Guidelines *Ideas should be logically expressed. *Main idea should be mentioned first and sub ideas/supporting details should be written afterwards. *The language should be simple. *A very direct and persuasive style should be used. *Irrelevant ideas should strictly be avoided. *Sentences should be grammatically correct. *Use of logical connectors makes the writing powerful. Here is one specimen paragraph: Difference between the polar regions Geographers have found that there are some important differences between the northern and southern polar regions of the earth. The Arctic region, in the north, is mostly sea, 1 | Composition & Grammar/ rbtdhakal @01 Jan 2010.

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ComprehensionThere are no hard and fast rules for the students to understand the text and answer the questions asked. However, there are some guidelines for the students to understand any text and answer the questions that follow.

Read the passage quickly for specific information like names and dates. Read it again slowly and carefully to understand the whole text.

Read each questions, find the answer and underline it in the passage. Try to answer in your own words, don’t just copy the whole paragraph or sentence. In a very few

cases only, you can copy the complete sentence. Maintain the tense in your answer in which it is asked. Maintain the speech in which you are answering the question. Generally while answering such

questions as what did somebody say? You better write in indirect speech. Simple, correct and clear sentences should be used. Don’t give unnecessary and long answers. The complete answer is a must. You cannot just write short phrases in your answers.

Paragraph writingA paragraph is a group of sentences dealing with a particular topic. A paragraph may have only one sentence or many more according to the nature of the topic. However, it is best to write short and moderate paragraphs including all necessary supporting details on the given topic.Every sentence in it must be closely connected with the main topic, and they can be linked with each other with the help of sentence linkers, such as however, therefore, as a result, on the other hand, though, because, so that , …. Thus all the ideas related to the main topic should be expressed in a logical order. Guidelines*Ideas should be logically expressed. *Main idea should be mentioned first and sub ideas/supporting details should be written afterwards.*The language should be simple. *A very direct and persuasive style should be used.*Irrelevant ideas should strictly be avoided. *Sentences should be grammatically correct.*Use of logical connectors makes the writing powerful.

Here is one specimen paragraph:Difference between the polar regions

Geographers have found that there are some important differences between the northern and southern polar regions of the earth. The Arctic region, in the north, is mostly sea, surrounded by masses of land. The South pole, on the other hand, is situated in a land mass surrounded by oceans; in fact, Antarctica is regarded as a continent by itself. Both the regions have a very cold climate, but the winter in the Arctic is not so severe or so long as that in the Antarctic. Antarctica is snowbound almost throughout the year, but the snow in the Arctic melts in summer. There is some vegetation in the Arctic, but Antarctic is a desert with virtually no plant or animal life.(From V.R. Narayanswami, 2005)

What is a paragraph? It is a group of sentences that introduces, presents and develops one main idea about the topic. And it can be divided into three major parts.A. The Topic Sentence : It is normally the first sentence of the paragraph which conveys the overall point of the paragraph. It helps the writer focus on the idea written about.It helps the reader know about what the paragraph is all about.B. The Supporting Details: They are sentences used to support the main idea stated in the topic sentence. They give more information about the main idea through examples. They say in details what the topic sentence says in general. They should be clear evidence that what the topic sentence says is trustworthy. They should be strong convincing points on which the topic sentence can rely upon.C. The Concluding Sentence: It is a reflection of the main idea pronounced in the topic sentence.It sums up what the topic sentence and the supporting details talk about. It is the closing sentence that reminds the readers of what they have to value. It is compulsory for the completion of the

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paragraph unity. It eventually indicates the end of a paragraph. It prepares the reader for a smooth transition to the next paragraph if there is one.

How to write your paragraphParagraph writing consists of many necessary elements to be taken into consideration before, while and after writing.I. BEFORE WRITING:In this stage it is important to specify the topic you are intending to tackle.Take a sheet of paper and just start jotting down notes that have tight connection with your topic.In this stage, mistakes and word-order are to be overlooked momentarily.After you gathered the data necessary for your topic the next step is to be taken.II. WHILE WRITING:o Topic Sentence:Choose a topic sentence for your paragraph that states the main idea of your topic.The topic sentence is a statement that generally introduces the topic and thus it is often referred to as: the opening statement. Keep in mind that the readers will greatly rely on what it says so as they can decide if the paragraph is worth reading or not. It gives them a broad view of what you are writing about because the topic sentence is meant to state the main idea of the paragraph. It helps you focus on the main idea and not drift away from it. o Supporting Details:They give information that reinforces the main idea stated in the topic sentence. The students are strongly advised to provide at least three strong details which can support the main idea. The students can use all the writing techniques necessary to make the paragraph sustainable and eligible: descriptions, definitions, examples, elaboration and exploration. o Concluding Sentence:This is the last sentence of your paragraph and it should reflect what you have talked about in your paragraph and it should echo the topic sentence in a way or another. III AFTER WRITING: ReviewingThis final step can be called the editing step. This is a very crucial stage of your work process as you should review what you have done and make sure the paragraph is eligible, technically speaking. Among the things that this stage is about are:o Coherence and cohesion of the content o The stability of the form o The linking wordso Grammar, spelling and punctuation. o Clear handwritingApart from these essentials, other factors are to be mulled over:1. Your main idea should be expressed in the topic sentence in a full, clear declarative sentence.2. Your topic sentence should in no way be a purpose statement such as: The purpose of this paragraph is … I will prove in this paragraph … In this paragraph, I will tell … Show but don’t tell.3. Don’t repeat yourself now then thinking that you are reinforcing your point.4. Don’t use complex or farfetched terms that may puzzle the corrector.5. Don’t use long winding sentences. Keep simple.6. Instead of giving definitions, it’s better to explain and give examples.7. Your supporting details shouldn’t be too excessive.8. Try not to be redundant or out of point. Stick to your topic.9. Never introduce or present new ideas.10. Irrelevant supporting details should immediately be discarded.Finally, you can transform your concluding sentence into a thought provoking statement that the reader may find appealing.

Essay writingAn essay is a regular and connected piece of writing about any topic. It may be a narration of some events, description of some substance, place, etc., reflection of some abstract ideas, exposition of one’s arguments on some issues, etc.Guidelines

Plan: Mental or rough written plan to include all necessary ideas and to avoid irrelevant ideas. Structure/parts

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Introduction: first one paragraph. Body: three paragraphs according to three main ideas. Each paragraph should have a

clear main idea that can be underlined. The main idea is also called the pilot sentence which is mostly written as the first sentence or as the last sentence though there is no strict rule for where to write it.

Note: there is no strict rule regarding the number of paragraphs. But in the exam you are advised to write no less than three paragraphs and no more than five paragraphs. And regarding the length of paragraph also there is no strict rule, it can be a single one line sentence or a page or more pages long writing, but for you average length in each paragraph would do.

Mind! Each paragraph should be interconnected. And within paragraph also each sentence should naturally lead to the next.

Conclusion: final one paragraph( with a conclusive main idea) Content: show clear understanding of the topic, include strong points from your rough plan

and avoid irrelevant ideas. Vocabulary:

Do not use those words and phrases which are not clear to you. Repetition of words should be avoided as far as practicable. Do not try to be very literal in your expression. Avoid too much use of proverbs, sayings and idioms.

Grammar: your essay should be grammatically correct. You can check for the grammar after you finish writing the essay as a proofread.

Here is one specimen essay from Hedge, Tricia (1988,p.136)Renewable Energy

The sun is the source of al life on earth and provides us with almost all the energy we use. Fossil fuels, such as gas, oil, and coal, are simply stored solar energy: the product of photosynthesis millions of years ago; while the renewable energy sources, solar, wind, tidal, wave, biomass, and hydro are all the direct result of the sun’s energy.

More energy arrives at the earth’s surface in an hour than is consumed in the world in a whole year. Even in cloudy northern countries like Britain there is more than enough solar energy for our needs. The total falling on Britain every year is more than one hundred times greater than all the energy used.

This energy can be used to heat buildings either directly (passive solar energy) or by use of solar collectors (active solar energy). The sun is also responsible for rain, which can be harnessed as hydro-power. Falling or flowing water generates 25% of the world’s electricity. Waves are the result of winds over the ocean, and ways of harnessing this new source of energy are being developed at present, while the complex interaction of earth, moon, and sun results in the tides, which can also be used to produce electricity.

The official view in Britain is that renewable sources of energy such as these will be unable to provide more than a small proportion of our needs until well into the next century. But such pessimistic predictions are directly linked to the lack of money for research and development. In 1983/84 for example, only £11.3 million was spent on all he renewable sources of energy put together, while £206 million was given to the development of nuclear power. Some renewable sources, such as solar and wind energy, are already cost-effective and working well today. However, these are not being taken up by industry or the general public, due to lack of information on what is available, and financial incentives. We need to develop many of the more promising renewable energy options now if we are to ensure that the world has enough energy to take us through to the new century.

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Organizing your essayStudy this block diagram of a five-paragraph advantages/disadvantages essay to plan a first draft of your essay. In your notebook, draw your own diagram and write your notes in each of its sections.Main Task Alternative Task

Main Task Alternative Task

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Write a five-paragraph essay about the advantages and disadvantages of workplace monitoring of employees by employers.

Write a 3-5paragraph essay in which you explain the following quote. Indicate whether you agree or disagree with it and use detailed examples to support your opinion. Use examples form history, current events, and/or personal experience.“Power may be compared to be a great river; while kept within its bunds it is both beautiful and useful, but when it overflows its banks it is then too impetuous to be stemmed; it bears down all before it, and brings destruction and desolation wherever it comes.” – Andrew Hamilton(1676-1741)

(Adapted from: Colonna & Gilbert 2006, p. 82)

BODY 3 Support for your opinion

Topic sentenceExamples from history/current

events/personal experienceConcluding sentence

BODY 3Your opinion on workplace

monitoringTopic sentence

Summary of research as supportConcluding sentence

CONCLUSIONRestatement of thesis

Summary of main pointsAdvice and/or warning

CONCLUSIONRestatement of thesis

Summary of main pointsReference to quote

Advice and/or warning

Transitional Sentence Transitional Sentence

INTRODUCTIONHook

Summary or general statementsThesis statement

INTRODUCTIONHook (optional)

Explanation and analysis of quoteThesis statement

BODY 2Disadvantages of workplace

monitoringTopic sentence

Summary of research as support

BODY 1Support for your opinion

Topic sentenceExamples from history/current

events/personal experience

BODY 1Advantages of workplace

monitoringTopic sentence

Summary of research as support

BODY 2 Support for your opinion

Topic sentenceExamples from history/current

events/personal experience

Transitional sentence Transitional sentence

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The following procedure is useful while writing an extended essay

  Task Skills Needed Product

1. Read the question and understand what you are required to do. Think about the subject, the purpose and the audience.

thinking academically Essay subject.

2. Think about what you know about the subject. Write it down in some way.

brainstorming Diagrams or notes.

3. Go to the library and find relevant books or articles.

library/research skills Reading list.

4. Find the books on your reading list and study them.

reading skills: skimming and scanning

List of materials studied.

5. Make notes on these books and articles. Record full details of the materials you use.

reading in detail selecting & note-taking paraphrasing/summarising

Notes.

6. Organise your essay/assignment.

planning organisation

Essay plan.

7. Type or write your first draft. writing from notes synthesis writing paragraphs typing/word-processing

First draft.

8. Discuss your first draft informally with friends, other members of your class and your lecturer if possible.

speaking skills listening skills discussion skills

List of revisions/changes.

9. Revise your first draft, bearing in mind any comments that were made in your discussions. Go back to 2. if necessary Produce your second draft.

use of dictionaries & reference books writing introduction & conclusion quoting/writing a list of references

Second draft.

10. Proofread your draft.

 

checking for spelling mistakes checking punctuation and grammar checking vocabulary use checking style checking organisation, references etc. checking for plagiarism

Assignment with changes marked.

11. Produce a final typed version. typing/word-processing writing title/contents page

Final assignment.

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12. Check everything. final check Hand in.

Guidelines 1. Look at your notes.2. Decide on the purpose of your paper. Is it to inform, to explain, to compare, to describe something, to describe a process, to explain the reasons, to enumerate the causes, to compare/contrast, to discuss, to defend (a point of view), to contest (a point of view), etc. or a combination?3. Organise your notes into sections; organise sections into subsections. The organisation of your paper will depend on your communicative purpose as in 2.4. Order your information.5. Plan your paper. The main text should consist of three main parts:

I. Introductiona. Comment on subject of essayb. Which aspects will you deal with?II. Main bodya. Develop your line of argument through three or four main ideas.b. Support your main ideas with examples and illustrations from experience or other authors.III. Conclusiona. Summary of main ideas.b. Answer to question or comment on topic of essay indicating wider implications for or future

trends.English essays are linear: - they start at the beginning and finish at the end, with every part contributing to the main line of argument, without digressions or repetition. Writers are responsible for making their line of argument clear and presenting it in an orderly fashion so that the reader can follow. Each paragraph discusses one major point and each paragraph should lead directly to the next. The paragraphs are tied together with an introduction and a conclusion.An essay has three main parts1. An introduction2. A main body3. A conclusion1. The introduction.The introduction consists of two parts:

a. It should include a few general statements about the subject to provide a background to your essay and to attract the reader’s attention. It should try to explain why you are writing the essay. It may include a definition of terms in the context of the essay, etc.

b. It should also include a statement of the specific subdivisions of the topic and/or indication of how the topic is going to be tackled in order to specifically address the question.

It should introduce the central idea or the main purpose of the writing. It should address the question.2. The main body.The main body consists of one or more paragraphs of ideas and arguments. Each paragraph develops a subdivision of the topic. The paragraphs of the essay contain the main ideas and arguments of the essay together with illustrations or examples. The paragraphs are linked in order to connect the ideas. The purpose of the essay must be made clear and the reader must be able to follow its development.3. The conclusion.The conclusion includes the writer’s final points.

a. It should recall the issues raised in the introduction and draw together the points made in the main body

b. and explain the overall significance of the conclusions. What general points can be drawn from the essay as a whole?

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It should clearly signal to the reader that the essay is finished and leave a clear impression that the purpose of the essay has been achieved, and that the question has been answered. Don’t just leave the evidence hanging there - analyse it! Comment on the implication/significance/impact and finish off the paragraph with a critical conclusion you have drawn from the evidence.

I. INTRODUCTION

  General StatementOrganisation Statement

 

II. MAIN BODY

  A. Introductory SentencePoint 1Point 2Point 3

...Concluding Sentence

 

  B. Introductory SentencePoint 1Point 2Point 3

...Concluding Sentence

 

  C. Introductory SentencePoint 1Point 2Point 3

...Concluding Sentence

 

III. CONCLUSION

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  Recall issues in introduction; draw together main points;

final comment.

 

Check list: Essay writingHere are some useful questions to ask yourself about your essay:

i. Does it cover all the main aspects and in sufficient depth?ii. Is my essay clearly structured? Does my written work look like an essay?

iii. Does my argument make sense? Is it well balanced and researched?iv. Are my paragraphs and arguments clearly connected and coherent? Is each main point well supported

by examples and argument?

v. Are the grammar, punctuation and spelling acceptable?vi. Is it neatly and legibly written?

vii. Are my examples and quotes relevant to and supportive of my answer?viii. Have I used a consistent referencing style? Have I referenced all my quotes and paraphrases?

ix. Have I remained within the set word limit?x. Is what I have written an organized essay, not just a collection of paragraphs?

Short Story writingA story is an account of past events, incidents or imagined events.Guidelines

i. Order: in telling a story, the events should be related in the order of time in which they occurred.

ii. Plot: every story must have a plot i.e. a thought out plan that will bring all the events to a crisis wherein lies the whole point of telling the story. Before we begin to write our story, we must think out a proper conclusion, and plan out in our mind the chief events in such a way that they might lead up to the climax in a convincing manner.

iii. Proportion: To make the story interesting, the proportion between the important and the less important points should be maintained. We should emphasize the important points, pass over the minor points, neglect all useless details and finish up in the most natural way.

iv. Personal interest: The characters of the story must be made as distinct and alive as possible. Each character must have an individuality of his/her own and behave as naturally as in real life. Great story writers create characters which live, breath, and move like real human beings.

v. Setting (time and place): A story writer should give clear descriptions of the locality where the events take place, the weather, the time – day, night, evening, personal appearance of the people, etc.

vi. Use the past tense. But we can use present or future tenses also in dialogues while using direct speech.

vii. Sometimes dialogues/ direct speech should be used to make the story lively and interesting.

viii. Write a suitable title of the story which must be brief but covering the whole theme of the story.

ix. Write the moral of the story either directly in the next sentence or indirectly implying in the last sentence of the story. It can be a very famous proverb, saying or quote, or your own witty remarks.

Some specific hints to write a guided storyi. Read the given outlines carefully to understand it.ii. Have a clear and definite idea of the plot of the story.

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iii. Give a suitable title to the story.iv. Use all the points given; and add other necessary points that make real sense in the story.v. Generally write the story in the past tense.vi. Mention the moral the whole story imparts. It can be given the concluding sentence, or in

a next line starting with Moral : ………….. .Sample short story An old lady becomes blind – calls in a doctor – agrees to pay large fee if cured, but nothing if not – doctor calls daily – put eyes o lady’s furniture – delays the cure – everyday takes away furniture – at last cures her – demands his fees – lady refuses to pay – saying cure not complete – doctor brings a court case – judge asks why she will not pay – she says sight not properly restored – she cannot see all her furniture – judge gives verdict in her favor - moral

The Fair JusticeNot so far away from the city center, there lived an old lady on the outskirt of Bombay. She was very rich. Once she had an accident and became blind. Therefore for her treatment, she called in a doctor. She told the doctor that she would pay him a large fee if her problem was solved. However, if she was not cured, he would not be paid anything. He agreed to her proposal. As his agreement, he visited her daily for curing her blindness. He was lured by the furniture she had in her house. As he put his eyes on the furniture, he started delaying the cure. Then he started to take the furniture away every day. At last when he cured her completely, he demanded his fees. But the old lady refused to pay it. She said that she was not completely cured. The doctor brought the case into the court. The judge asked the woman, “Why did you deny to pay the fees after all he gave you a good treatment?” She replied, “My sight is not properly restored. I cannot see all my furniture.” When she told it as a proof, the judge realized the doctor was guilty. Thus, he gave the verdict in favor of her. She was very happy with the fair justice; so she thanked the judge. Moral: Truth is after all discovered.

News story/news report/newspaper article writingThe news story or newspaper report writing means writing a story from news happening or events taking place in a particular place or in our daily life. It is written or reported in a newspaper or for other forms of media such as radio, TV, etc. It means that writing a news story is different from writing a fiction or any other literary story.If we minutely observe newspaper report, news article and news story they slightly differ but they are generally used synonymously. News report is a description of something or some event, or some persons prepared for someone’s consideration. News story is also a detail of anything or any person for readers. It is wider than news report.News story is unlike news report in which the writer can include his opinions about the issue. The purpose of news story becomes more to present the story in an effective manner than to inform the readers. It slightly differs from news report in the manner of presentation of issues. It is longer and more detailed than news report. There is no need to be an event or a program or an incident. It should be appealing also so that everyone can take interest in seeing it. In brief, a report or news story should include the following points:

- A newspaper report and a news story should be based on facts.- It should have a complete story- It should be fair and unbiased- It should have a catchy (attractive) headline.- Even if you are one of the eye witnesses, you should not describe it yourself. You must

make other people speak and you just report to what they say to make the report authentic and based on facts.

- If there is any one digit number to be mentioned, it is written in words.- There is no need to add Mr/Mrs/Ms types of titles before names.A news story or report should answer the following questions

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- What has happened(the details of what has happened)- What has happened since the event took place- What hasn’t happened since the event took place- What has been happening since- What is going to happen next- News story or report should answer what, when, where, who, whom, how, which

questions in brief. In the terms of journalism, it should answer the questions to 5 W’s and1H (i.e. where, why, what, when, who, and how).

Guidelines Headline: the headline should have catchy words or phrases to draw the readers’ attention to the

news story. Generally, it is written in present tense for the past events/ incidents, for example: PRESIDENT STEPS IN FOR DEMOCRACY and for future events to + main verb is used, KOIRALA TO MEET UN SECRETERY. The headline is written in either of the following ways:

All in upper case: MAOISTS DISCUSS HQ PANEL Each first letter of major words are capitalized: Maoists Discuss HQ Panel Only first letter of the first word and of the proper nouns are capitalized. Maoists discuss HQ

panel By line/source: who wrote the article/from where is the article received/bought. The reporter’s name

is written in the by- line. If it is bought from the news agency, the source would be the same news service/agency like Himalayan News Service, AP, AFP, RSS.

Date line: it includes the place and date of where and when the news is written. We write this as Kathmandu, May 6. Sometimes the source if short is also written after the date line in parenthesis, as Kathmandu, May 6 (RSS).

Body/Information:

Specimen format

Headline Maoists discus HQ panelBy line/(source) RENU KSHETRY/RSS/Himalayan News ServiceDate line KATHMANDU, JAN.19Body ………………………………………..

……………………………………….……………………………………….…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………....……………………..

Sample article 112 student organizations submit memo to PM

Himalayan News Service Kathmandu, June 5

A delegation of 12 student organizations affiliated to various political parties handed over a memorandum to Prime Minister Madhav Kumar Nepal at his office today. The student organizations urged the PM to adopt diplomatic means to resolve the ongoing controversy on the Nepal-India border.

On receiving the memoranda, the Prime Minister made it clear that the government had already made a series of diplomatic efforts to solve the issue. Prime Minister Nepal expressed his commitment to

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the issues of nationalism. He informed the Foreign Secretary Gyan Chandra Acharya asked Rakesh Sood, the Indian Ambassador to Nepal, to discuss on the matter. He also said that a team, including border experts and government officials, had been deployed at the site.

Interpreting charts and diagrams

Charts and diagrams are visual representation of some statistical data and factual elemental factors of any subject. They can be formed of different kinds like charts, graphs, maps, diagrams, tables etc. while interpreting such para-orthogrphic (semi-written) texts, we should consider the following factors.

Our interpretation should give a complete description of the text. While analyzing we should compare and contrast the data and facts of each other category A suitable title is to be given( in most of the cases it is given in the question) Use of appropriate connectives ( while, whereas, in comparison to the second element, in

contrast, likewise, thereby, at the end) is required

ExampleLook at the following example:

Figure 1 shows sales of mobile phones per month. As can be seen, it covers the years 1998 to 2001 and shows that the sales of mobile phones declined steadily in 1998, then remained steady from May until the end of the year. The sales rose, more and more steeply, throughout 1999, with a steep increase at the end of the year, and reached a peak of 6,200 in February 2000. A sharp fall followed but sales leveled off at about 5,300 per month in April, fluctuated slightly through the year, and are now increasing again.

Letter writing

Look at these different styles of writing a letter. i. Traditional style:

Paragraphs are indented and there is no one-line spacing between paragraphs.Address and date are also punctuated.

ii. Block style:

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Sender’s add.

…………………….., …………………… . Date … , ………….

Inside address………………………… ,…………………………. ,………………………… .

Salutation,

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….?

Compli. Close,

sign ………….

Sender's address……………………….………………………..

Date …………………

Inside address………………………………………………………

Salutation………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… .

……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….. ?

Complimentary Close

Sign……………

Name …………..

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iii. Modified Block style:

Note: Inside address is needed only in formal letter.

a. Personal letter: Read the following letter observing the arrangements of the different parts.This is an example of a personal letter. A personal letter is written to friends and relatives. They are informal variety of letter. Such letters are written in a chatty or conversational style. Look at the form of a personal letter …………… ……………

…………………………..,

…………………………………………. .. ……………………………………...........…………………………………………..……………

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Sender’s add.………………………………………….

Date …………Inside address…………………….……………………..

Salutation,…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………

………………………………………………………………………

Compli. Close,

Sign………….

Name ………...

Sender’s address (not punctuated in current practice)

Date (not punctuated in current practice

Body of the letter (one-line spacing as paragraphs are not indented)

Salutation

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…….…………………………………….………………………………………….………………………………………….……………………

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We should follow the following format while writing a personal letter:1. Address of the sender and date of letter2. Greeting to the person we are addressing to(writing to): Dear father, Hi Ramesh, Dear

friend, but not Dear friend Ramesh3. Body of the letter: this is the main part of the letter where we write our message 4. Subscription: name or sign of the sender

b. Letter to the EditorLetter to the editor is written to draw the attention of the concerned authorities on any issue through the columns of a newspaper. It is written to the editor so that s/he would publish it in the newspaper and the concerned ones come to know about the problem in question and could take necessary steps to solve it. Letters to the editor usually contain comments, complaints or opinions expressed by readers on matters of public interest. Here is one sample letter to the editor:

Sample letter (concerning quality education)

Sallaghari, Bhaktapur

30 December 2009

The EditorThe Rising NepalKathmandu

Dear Sir,

I would be grateful if you would allow a little space in your widely circulated and popular newspaper in order to draw the attention of the general public as well as the concerning authority of the government to the problem of quality education.

As we all know these days most of the students are going abroad for study and work. This is because of lack of quality education and unemployment that we are suffering in Nepal. Which will ultimately invite the problem of brain-drain in Nepal. If the students are provided with quality education which will make them able to compete with international students and provide them with good jobs, the problems of educated manpower fleeing away will be solved and the country will be proud of its own skilled manpower. Only when we pay more attention and give importance to technical education, we can at least create the study-and-earn situation which will certainly check the flow of the intelligentsia towards other countries for work. Thus the government should open technical institutions and conduct nonformal

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Complementary close

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trainings all over the country to control the problems of brain-drain and unemployment. In the meantime the local people should be made aware of the importance of technical education.

I hope the concerning authority will take apt steps immediately.

Faithfully yours,

……………..

Mitra Maharjan

c. Job applicationOne of the most important types of formal or official letter is one written to apply for a job. It is usually sent in response to a vacancy advertisement. It is written in the following format:1. Heading: address and date2. Addresssing the post,Inside address3. Subject4. Salutation (Dear Sir/Madam)5. Body of the letter6. Subscription (Yours faithfully/sincerely yours)

13 Pako, New RoadKathmandu

1 January 2010

The Personnel ManagerAlka Engineering WorksNew Baneswhor, Kathmandu

Dear Sir,With reference to your advertisement in the Kathmandu Post of 25 December 2009, I write to apply for the post of security officer in your company.

I am twenty two years old. I was educated in the National College of Applied Sciences, Satdobato, where I completed the intermediate course.

For the last two years I have been a security officer in Ashok Engineering Works, Putalisadak. I have been responsible for the maintenance of the building and the protection of factory property. I have been supervising the movement of goods into and out of the factory.

I enclose a testimonial from the personnel manager of Ashok Engineering Works.

My present employer is willing to relieve me in two weeks if I am appointed by you.

Yours faithfully,………………Krishna Mahat

Encl. 1

C V WritingCurriculum Vitae

Name: Date of Birth:Address: Age: Sex:

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Marital status:Educational Qualifications: S.No. Institute Degree Division Passed Year 1. ………………….2. ………………….3. …………….Experience :1. 2. 3. Trainings: 1. 2. 3. Special interests: Languages known:Referees: 1. 2.

RULES AND REGULATIONSWhile writing the rules and regulation on behalf of some institutions, public places and so on, use the following structures. You are recommended to use a variety of structures rather than using the same structure for all the rules.

1. You should (not)…….2. You are (not) supposed to…………..3. You are (not) allowed/ permitted to…………….4. You are restricted to…………5. You are forbidden to……………….6. You ought (not) to………..7. You (don’t) have to ………………8. You are (not) to……………..9. Do ing…/to do ………… is strictly prohibited / forbidden here.10. You may/can …………………

GRAMMAR EXERCISESArticles

___ girl was playing in __ street __girl was ten years old. She was playing with ___ ball. __ ball was made of ___ rubber. Suddenly __ dog came and began to frighten her. ___ girl ran hastily to ___ neighboring hours where___ elderly man was sitting with ____ stick in ____ hand. ____ man took up ___ stick, ran to __ dog and drove him out of ___ street ___ girl thanked __ man and again went to play in ___street.

Once I was standing on __ bank of ___ river. __ elderly sadhu was selling __ beads. I bought some of ___ attractive beads. ___ fisherman was waiting for his catch. __ washer man was beating___ clothes against his slate. __ few young men were rubbing oil on their bodies some boys were bathing in __ river. It was so cold that even __ sun trembled in ____ wavy water of ___ river

I like to eat __ sweets but I like __ sweets made from __ milk of _ cows most. Yesterday my uncle came with ___ sweets. Everybody liked __ sweets. But I didn't like them because they were made form milk of __buffalo. Although I don't like to drink _ cow's milk yet my father forces me to drink __milk every day.

Did you see _ boy? He is _ friend of mine. He is _best student of my school. All __ teacher and ___student love him very much. He always helps __ poor boys. He will never tell ___lies. He has __ sound health. He drinks __ milk every day. He also goes for __walk in __morning.

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1. He is _______ M.S. in orthopedics. 2. He is _______ humble man. 3. Pokhara is _______ old town. 4. She is _______ university teacher. 5. The workers have formed _______ union. 6. He is _______ M.Sc. in physics. 7. Don't make _______ noise.8. He wants to buy _______ H.M.T. watch.9. This is _______ usual sight.10. My brother is _______ M.P. 11. He is strong like _______ ox. 12. _______ boy is waiting for you. 13. He bought _______ inkpot.14. He gave me _______ one-rupee note.15. This is _______ useful book. 16. He became _______ great man.17. Sita has _______ headache.18. I have got _______ cold. 19. We have so fine _______ day ! 20. You are _______ real Hitler.21. London, _______ capital of England is one of _______ busiest place in _______ world. Many a mother tries to act out her unrealized dreams through her daughter.

PREPOSITIONS TIME PREPOSITIONS: IN, AT, ON

In before periods of time Parts of the day: early in the morning, in the afternoon • Years: in1938, Months: in July, • Seasons: in (the)summer, in autumn, Decades and centuries: in the 1930s, in the 21st century ‘In’ can mean ‘during or within a period of time’. He had made the flight in twenty-eight hours.

‘In’ can also mean ‘at the end of a period of time’. He expected to land in California in about 23 hours. Note that the phrase in time means ‘early enough for something’ or ‘not too late for something’.

Just in time to celebrate his birthday on July 17th

On before days/dates Days: on Monday, on his birthday, on Christmas day • Dates: on July 17th, on November 2nd

With parts of days/dates: on Tuesday afternoon; on the morning of Monday, July 16th

Note that the phrase on time means ‘at exactly the right time’. Corrigan left exactly on time.At before exact timesWe use at :

With clock times: at 16.30. But we don’t normally use at in questions like: What time did he leave New York?(at what time did he leave new York? Is very formal)

With single words meaning a time of day. At dawn, at midday, at night, at lunchtime With beginning, start, end. At the end of a heroic flight, at the beginning of the flight With the words time, moment. At that time he was a young pilot, at the moment(=now) With public holidays and festivals. At Christmas (but on Christmas day), at Easter, at the weekend(‘on the

weekend’ in American English)When not to use in, on or at

We don’t use in, on or at before the words every, next, this, last and tomorrow, yesterday.Next Monday, every day, this morning, last Tuesday, tomorrow morning

Prepositions of place: in, on, atIn

In general, we use in when we talk about an enclosed space that is surrounded on all sides. He lives in a tent. He sleeps in a sleeping bag.

We use it with buildings and areas surrounded by walls, etc.(in cheap cafés, in the park, in a square, in the street)

With larger areas like cities, states, countries, continents. (In the city, in the country, in London, in Britain )

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With words that describe the relative position of something. In the middle of the square, in a corner of the tent, in the south of England

With words like hospital, church, school. ( He was in hospital last year. ) With newspapers and magazines. (An article in the Daily Mail )

On In general, we use on when we talk about a horizontal or vertical surface.

On the floor, on the front page, on the walls We use it with any kind of line.

On the north bank of the River ThemesOn the border between Italy and AustriaOn the west coast of Scotland

With machines. (On the phone, on his computer, on television ) With the positions right and left and the word side. (On the right , on the other side of the river)

At Small places like villages, toals, stations, etc. (at the party, at Sallaghari, at the airport, at the pub) When something stops after a long time: at the end of the film, at the end of the street, at the end of the

week)Extra

1. The fire alarm is above the poster.2. The man is walking across the road towards the telephone box.3. The girl is leaning against the wall.4. The family is walking along the pavement past the library.5. The woman is waiting at the bus stop.6. The girl is standing behind her mother.7. The poster is below the fire alarm.8. The child is between her parents.9. The lady is walking down the library steps.10. The newspaper is in the bin.11. The bus stop is in front of the library.12. The man is dropping the bottle into the bin.13. The bus is near the zebra crossing.14. The library is next to/beside café.15. The boy is getting off the bus.16. The woman is getting on the bus.17. The man is sitting on the motorbike.18. The telephone box is opposite the library.19. The man is coming out of the library.20. The boy selling newspapers is out of the library.21. The boy is looking through the window.22. The girl is walking under the ladder.23. The man is going to the library.24. The workman is climbing up the ladder.25. The blackboard is above the bench. (=higher than)26. The bench is below the blackboard. (=lower than)27. There is a fan over the table. (=vertically above)28. There is a cat under the cat. (= vertically below)

Adjective with preposition : about, for on at in with by of 1. She's very good _______ maths. 2. The room was full _______ people. 3. I don't think he’s very interested _______ politics. 4. Are you excited _______ your birthday next week? 5. I'm tired _______ this game. Let's play something else.

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6. I'm worried _______ Tina. Do you think she'll be ok? Verbs with preposition9. I agree _______ you I think this one is too expensive. 10. She sat down and asked _______ a cup of coffee. 11. He smiled _______ her and walked away. 12. Thank you _______ all your help, I really appreciate it. 13. I'm not sure when I'll arrive. It depends _______ the traffic. 14. They are always arguing _______ money. 15. Does your little brother believe_______ Santa Claus?

Use of At, In, and On at 5 o'clock in the morning on Mondayat dinner in the evening on the 16th of julyat square in patna on the coast/bank at midnight in London speak on the phoneat dusk in India on your headat daybreak in America hit on your heatat down in the room on new years' dayat noon in uniform on the committee/staff/juryat the meeting in rags Line on grassat a desk in green -kf]zfsdf_ on my birthdayat Hetauda in the west on tourat war in politics on businessat peace write in ink congratulate on at work in bed play onat school in hospital on footat state in summer on T.V.at the top of in debt on that dayat stake in a temper on saleat the station in love on guardat first in order runs on petrolat his best/worst in a week on creditat leisure in the sky on holidayat full speed in the bag on the roadat once, smile at in trouble on the radio at the platform in problem on fire look at in common on leaveat times in reply on rentbad at in July on a journeygood at in 2009 on the tablejoke at in jail to live onat 12 noon in the exam on the whole dayat (the page) 50 in old age on purposeat play in winter on the telephoneat sunset swim in the river on the wallat last in a taxi on a plane/train/buslaugh at on a bicycle

Use of By and with by Monday (by = till) write with a pen by accident cut with a knifeby the way with joyby post see with own eyesby my watch with your helplittle by little quarrel withcome by 6 O'clock with pleasureby bus/train/sea heard with patiencehouse is by the river acquainted withpay by cheque afflicted withby birth consistent with

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Use of From and For suffer from qualify for different from pay for draw water from a well for saleprevent from anxious forprotect from apology forprohibit from blame for

Use of To and Of turn to the left full ofprefer to short of moneyjunior to tired offace to face died of choleraadd to die of hungerapologize to SB for proud ofappoint to guilty ofassent to negligent of

Fill in the blanks with suitable prepositions where necessary: 1. The lady was dressed _________ black. 2. Cows live _______ grass. 3. He is married _______ my sister. 4. He prevented me _______ speaking.5. I have been waiting there _______ two hours. 6. He traveled _______ a bicycle. 7. She stayed _______ home yesterday. 8. The train comes _______ 7 o'clock. 9. Rice sells _FOR______ Rs 3000/– a quintal. 10. Here is a girl _______ blue eyes. 11. I will come _______ Monday.12. She was born _______ August 15 1979. 13. You should apply _______ the post.14. Do you object _______ my opening the window? 15. Every week I write _______ my friend. 16. I was annoyed _______ his brother. 17. He entrusted me ___TO____the letter. 18. There is an exception _______ every rule. 19. What is the time _______ your water? 20. Is it an answer _______ that question? 21. He did not die _______ cholera. 22. I inquired __OF_____ him ____ABOUT___ that matter. 23. Please fill __UP_____ the form ___IN____ ink. 24. We prefer milk _______ tea. 25. I congratulate you __ON_____ your success ___IN/AT____ the exam. Fill in the blanks with proper prepositions: 1. Be careful to guard ___(against)____ danger.2. When do you intend to go _______ India. 3. Are you connected _______ the matter? 4. The woman was overwhelmed __BY_____ grief. 5. The English triumphed __(over)(x)_____ the Mughals. 6. The father deprived the son _______ all he had. 7. A mother is blind _______ the faults of her son. 8. I can read the book _______ the light _______ the moon. 9. It is __(beyond)_____ my power to help. 10. She was absorbed _______study. MORE PRACTICE EXERCISESThey are somehow clever. = they are not clever in any way.They helped us to some extent. = they didn’t help us at all.She is still working there. = she isn’t working there any longer.They’re sometimes fools. = they are rarely/never (aren’t ever) fools.

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I wrote a letter and so did my sister. = I didn’t write a letter, and neither did my sister.He likes meat,too. = he doesn’t like meat, either.Either Ram or Sita went home. = Neither Ram nor Sita went home.All of the information …correct. (is/are)There are…………, aren’t there? Something…………., it? This/that ………, it? These/those…….., they?Agreement according to last noun.Not only….but also. Noun’s noun (aeshop’s fables are)Noun+relativeclause (I invite one of the boys who were…)Singular noun+prep+same singular noun - singular verb (ship after ship goes…)Agreement according to first nounNoun + As well as/in addition to/with/along with/together with/(of,in,on)….. the condition of our hospitals is poor.

One reason for accidents ….carelessness. (is/are)Either or/neither norAny noun plural – plural verb Both singular nouns – singular verbIf two pronouns, verb agrees with the nearest one.Speech ‘I want to buy some exercise books,’ he said.‘We are waiting to see what will happen next,’ they said.‘You may be surprised when you hear what I have to say,’ he said to her.‘Rita, can you wait for five minutes more?’ said Roshan. She said, ‘I am having a wonderful time now.’The inspector said, ‘Don’t move a step from here.’Negative & TagShe used to have long hair. (neg) Didn’t she use to have long hair? (assertive)That isn’t very nice, ……..? The term begins soon,……….?PrepositionIt has not rained … 6 months. (since/for/from)She has not written to me ….she left me/ ……..two months/ ……..April. (since/for/from)Tense and conditionalAs he was cycling down the street, he ….a steam-roller. (meet)When she saw smoke coming from a window, she…towards the house.(run)After they…one game, they at once began another. (had finished)If I …him, I will give him your message. (see)If Jack …the cake, he would have been very ill. (eat)Kate …….an accident unless she rode more carefully. (have)Mr Banjade ……….my essay if I don’t give it in today. (not mark)If it rained for two days, the river ……. its banks. (overflow)Things would be different if they …….him captain. (make)If he had not asked her, she………him. (not tell)John always ……..late to school. (come) Be quiet! The teacher ……… (come)I …(have) a cold all last week so I …(not want) to go out.By the end of the term we …English for five years. (study)I …(sing) a song and Jane …(dance) at the concert next month.Sonali …(write) an essay when I called to see her. I …(not see) Mr Sharma for two weeks. I …(finish) my dinner. Please may I go to watch TV?Rohan …(take) rest this morning but now he ..(work) hard.The fields were bare because the herd of cattle …(eat) all the grass.voiceWhat ought we to do about this? Why were you breaking the glasses? Ought I to help her?They took him away. Somebody has stolen my bicycle. Carelessness causes accidents.Nobody is going to help him. Your answer surprised me. The road outside our house is being dug up.

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They will build the house. TRIVIAL FACTS 2065

1. What does NEA stand for?2. Why has annual conference been postponed?- Annual conference has been postponed because due to unforeseen circumstances.3. Library rules: Mention silence. 4. Natural resource is our property. - We should them. If we are not protect them what should harmful will come in our daily life.

- I’ll them some knowledge about wild life.5. Unless you invite her, she would come. (won’t)6. What did Pradip pal remember? = he remember however was that he had once been a prosperous farmer.7. He think of dowries……..

2066 8. What does CV stand for?9. Mr. Sharma was surprised ….my skills. (at/in/with)10. How do they solve the problem? (passive)11. Have this picture -------in the city square. (post/ posted/to post)12. Had he gone there, he ------his relatives. (meet)

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