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• Ideational
• textual
experiential
logical
Text cohesion
Lexico-grammatical system
Clause transitivity & ergativity
Clause complex relations
metafunctional focus
√Metafunction
Context of situation
Field
Tenor
Mode
Interpersonal
semantics
lexicogrammar
Context of culture
cohesion
cementing a text
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Ideational meaning
Interpersonal meaning
Textual meaning
T e x t
i) What is cohesion;
ii) kinds of cohesive relations
componential cohesive relations;
organic cohesive relations
outline componential cohesive relations:
§ the concept of tie;
§ reference: referring expressions;
§ direction of reference:
text-internal (endophoric):
• anaphoric and cataphoric.
text-external
• (exophoric & homophoric)§ substitution and ellipsis;§ lexical cohesion
outline
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Using cohesive devices to form lexico-referential chains;
organic cohesive relations:§ adjacency pairs; § conjunction; § continuatives
a text - spoken or written - that is functioning for some purpose within some context discourse
a discourse (text) usually consists of a number of clauses.
t e x t
co
nsi
sts
of
semantic unit
grammatical units
c l a u s e sgroups
w o r d ssounds/letters
the linguistic “cement” we use to
connect clauses
in order to make our text cohesive
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we make our text cohesive
by using
a range of
cohesive devices
cohesive devices
referring expressions, e.g. pronouns
substitution -replacing words
with substitutes -one, do, so, not
ellipsis - leaving words out
conjunctions
lexis - using words that
are related - synonyms,
antonyms, hyponyms etc
pairing, e.g. Q. & A.
continuatives, e.g. well
componential organic
Classification of cohesive devices (Hasan 1985)
Link components (parts)
of messages (clauses)
Link whole messages (clauses)
The students arrived early and they studied hard.
A: What time did you arrive?
B: 9 o’clock
componential organic
• Referring expressions, e.g.
- personal pronouns;
- demonstratives; comparatives;
• Substitution & ellipsis
• conjunction;
• adjacency pairs
Classification of cohesive devices (Hasan 1985)
Lexical sense relations:
General: repetition; synonymy;
antonymy; hyponymy; meronymy
Instantial (text-specific):
equivalence; naming; semblance
continuatives
The cohesive devices - referring
expressions, substitutes, ellipsis, and
lexical selections – all link parts or
components of messages (clauses).
componential cohesive devicesComponential cohesive devices: linking components of messages
Mr Piggott lived with his two sons, Simon and
Patrick in a nice house with a nice garden, and
a nice car in the nice garage. Inside the house
was his wife.
“Hurry up with the breakfast, dear,” he called
every morning, before he went off to his very
important job.
Referring expressions Lexical relations
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Links between components of messages = ties
Mr Piggott lived with his two sons, Simon and Patrick in a
nice house with a nice garden, and a nice car in the nice
garage. Inside the house was his wife.
“Hurry up with the breakfast, dear,” he called every
morning, before he went off to his very important job.
His / he ties with Mr Piggott house ties with garden
Car ties with garage nice ties with nice
son ties with wife
Componential cohesion 1: Reference
i.e. referring expressions
37 Mr Piggot and his sons had to make their own meal.
38 It took hours
39 And it was horrible.
Identify the referring expressions
37 Mr Piggot & his (=Mr Piggot’s) sons had to make their
(= Mr Piggot & Mr Piggot’s sons’) own meal.)
38 It (=making their own meal) took hours
39 And it (=their meal) was horrible.
It (cl.38) ties with making their own meal (cl 37)
It (cl.39) ties with their meal (cl 38)
37 Mr Piggot and his sons had to make their own meal.
38 It took hours
39 And it was horrible.
his (cl.37) ties with Mr Piggot (cl 37)
their (cl.37) ties with Mr Piggot & sons (cl 37)
It (cl.38) ties with making their own meal (cl 37)
It (cl.39) ties with their meal (cl 38)
his (cl.37) ties with Mr Piggot (cl 37)
their (cl.37) ties with Mr Piggot & sons (cl 37)
The second member of the tie is called
the interpretative source
interpretative source
categories of referring expressions
Personal pronouns
demonstrative pronouns
definite article
temporal (time)
expressions
Locative (place)
expressions
Comparative expressions
he, she, it, they, them etc;
this, that, these, those;
the
now; then
here; there
same, another, similar,
different etc
componential cohesive devices
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personal pronouns in English
person
Speech roles
Other roles
speaker
addressee
speaker plus
speaker only I, me, my, mine
we, us, our, ours
you, your, yours
specific
generalised
singular
plural they, them
human
non-human
male
female
one, ones
he, him, his
she, her, hers
it, its
referring expressions
whereabouts is the meaning to which a referring
expression refers? It could be:
earlier in the text, e.g.
The doctor crossed the road. He was in a hurry.
The meaning to which a referring expression refers could be later in the text, e.g.
This is what I would like: a bowl of soup
referring expressions
cataphoric
The meaning referred to could be outside the text but unique within the context of culture, e.g.
The sun is very hot
today
referring expressions
homophoric
referring expressions
I’ll have a piece of that cheese!
exophoric
The meaning referred to could be outside the text within the context of situation, e.g.
summary of direction of reference
referring expressions
(reference)
text external text internal(endophoric)
referring backwards(anaphoric)
referringforward
(cataphoric)
in culture(homophoric)
in situation(exophoric)
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One and the same referring expression (a
personal pronoun or a demonstrative or
comparative expression) can be used
either exophorically or endophorically
Beware
Identify the referring expressions in the following fragment of dialogue
Mother now Stephen, do you want a sandwich for lunch Stephen yes
and some passionfruitMother Where is the passionfruit?Stephen Here it is.Mother ok .. right .. Peanut butter sandwiches? Stephen yeah .. Mother you go to the table
and I'll bring it in .. You sit here in Nana’s chair
track the interpretation of the referring
expressions (e.g. by colour-coding each
referring expression and its interpretation
Mother now Stephen, do you want a sandwich for lunch Stephen yes
and some passionfruitMother Where is the passionfruit?Stephen Here it is.Mother ok .. right .. Peanut butter sandwiches? Stephen yeah .. Mother you go to the table
and I'll bring it in .. You sit here in Nana’s chair
Identify the direction (from their interpretation) of
the referring expressions
Mother now Stephen, do you want a sandwich for lunch Stephen yes
and some passionfruitMother Where is the passionfruit?Stephen Here it is.Mother ok .. right .. Peanut butter sandwiches? Stephen yeah .. Mother you go to the table
and I'll bring it in .. You sit here in Nana’s chair
anaphoricexophoric cataphoric
cl Referring expression interpretation Phoric status
1 you
4 the (passionfruit)
5 it
8 you
the (table)
9 I
it
10 you
here
Stephen (1) anaphoric
exophoric
passionfruit (4)
Stephen (1)
anaphoric
exophoric
anaphoric
exophoric
passionfruit (4) + sandwich (1) anaphoric
Stephen (1) anaphoric
in Nana’s chair (10) cataphoric
Tracking referring expressions Tracking referring expressions in a text
In the following text:
• indicate the referring expressions;
• indicate the interpretative source of each of
these;
• indicate the phoric status of each referring
expression using arrows, e.g.
• anaphoric;
• cataphoric
• exophoric
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1 An Eagle was soaring through the air
2 when suddenly it heard the whizz of an Arrow,
3 and (it) felt
4 itself wounded to death
5 Slowly it fluttered down to the earth,
6 with its life-blood pouring out of it.
7 Looking down upon the Arrow [[with which it had been pierced]]
8 it saw
9 that the shaft of the Arrow had been feathered with one of its own plumes.
10 "Alas!" it cried,
11 as it died,
12 "We often give our enemies the means for our own destruction."
1 An Eagle was soaring through the air
2 when suddenly it heard the whizz of an Arrow,
3 and (it) felt
4 itself wounded to death
5 Slowly it fluttered down to the earth,
6 with its life-blood pouring out of it.
7 Looking down upon the Arrow [[with which it had been pierced]]
8 it saw
9 that the shaft of the Arrow had been feathered with one of its own plumes.
10 "Alas!" it cried,
11 as it died,
12 "We often give our enemies the means for our own destruction."
1 An Eagle was soaring through the air
2 when suddenly it heard the whizz of an Arrow,
3 and (it) felt
4 itself wounded to death
5 Slowly it fluttered down to the earth,
6 with its life-blood pouring out of it.
7 Looking down upon the Arrow [[with which it had been pierced]]
8 it saw
9 that the shaft of the Arrow had been feathered with one of its own plumes.
10 "Alas!" it cried,
11 as it died,
12 "We often give our enemies the means for our own destruction."
• the whizz of an arrow
D Th Q
= an arrow’s whizz
• the Arrow [[with which it had been pierced]]
D Th Q
• the shaft of the Arrow
D Th Q
= the arrow’s shaft
• the means for our own destruction
D Th Q
Segment the following text into ranking clauses and number each clause;
Indicate
• the referring expressions;
• the interpretative source of each of these;
• the phoric status of each referring expression using arrows, e.g.
o anaphoric
o cataphoric
o exophoric
Sun Damage
Now that summer is over, you may notice permanent damage to your skin
for the first time. Where you have enjoyed many previous summers
unscathed, the latest hot season may have been the final straw in damaging
the collagen tissue (this is what I call "the camel's back syndrome".)
Freckles and blotches are caused by overstimulation of the pigment cells.
These can be treated by bleaching agents used for hair removal or by a
ruby laser (at selected dermatologists). The damage to the collagen causes
wrinkles and these can be treated at home with glycolic acid and Retin-A
(both are available from pharmacies). Chemical peels are also effective.
These are done by paramedical technicians in a cosmetic surgeon's or
dermatologist's office. More worrying are any sores or blemishes which
persist despite three or four weeks of conservative treatment by creams or
antibiotics. These need to be tested by a doctor or completely removed and
examined under the microscope.
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1 Now that summer is over,
2 you may notice permanent damage to your skin for the first time.
3 Where you have enjoyed many previous summers unscathed,
4 the latest hot season may have been the final straw [[in damaging the collagen tissue]]
5 (this is [[what I call ]] "the camel's back syndrome".)
6 Freckles and blotches are caused by overstimulation of the pigment cells.
7 These can be treated by bleaching agents [[used for hair removal]] or by a ruby laser (at selected dermatologists).
8 The damage to the collagen causes wrinkles
9 and these can be treated at home with glycolic acid and Retin-A
10 (both are available from pharmacies).
11 Chemical peels are also effective.
12 These are done by paramedical technicians in a cosmetic surgeon's or dermatologist's office.
13 More worrying are any sores or blemishes [[which persist despite three or four weeks of conservative treatment by creams or antibiotics.]]
14 These need to be tested by a doctor
15 or completely removed
16 and examined under the microscope.
1 Now that summer is over,
2 you may notice permanent damage to your (=you 2) skin for the first time.
3 Where you (=you 2 ) have enjoyed many previous summers unscathed,
4 the latest hot season (=summer 1) may have been the final straw [[in damaging the collagen tissue (=skin 2)]]
5 (this (=the final straw…4) is [[what I call ]] "the camel's back syndrome".)
6 Freckles and blotches are caused by overstimulation of the pigment cells (=skin 2).
7 These (=freckles and blotches) can be treated by bleaching agents [[used for hair removal]] or by a ruby laser (at selected dermatologists).
8 The damage to the collagen (=skin) causes wrinkles
9 and these (=wrinkles 8 ) can be treated at home with glycolic acid and Retin-A
10 (both are available from pharmacies).
11 Chemical peels are also effective.
12 These (=chemical peels) are done by paramedical technicians in a cosmetic surgeon's or dermatologist's office.
13 More worrying are any sores or blemishes [[which persist despite three or four weeks of conservative treatment by creams or antibiotics.]]
14 These (=persistent sores or blemishes 13) need to be tested by a doctor
15 or completely removed
16 and examined under the microscope.
cl Referring Expression interpretation phoric
status
1 Now that summer is over cataphoric
2 you exophoric
your (skin) you (2) anaphoric
the first time cataphoric
3 you you (2) anaphoric
4 the (latest hot season) summer (1) anaphoric
the (final straw) in damaging the collagen tissue cataphoric
the (collagen tissue) skin (2) anaphoric
5 this the final straw (4) anaphoric
I exophoric
the (camel’s back..) exophoric
6 the (pigment cells) skin (2) anaphoric
7 these freckles & blotches (6) anaphoric
cl Referring Expression interpretation phoric status
8 the damage to the collagen (4) anaphoric
the (collagen) collagen (4) anaphoric
9 these wrinkles (8) anaphoric
12 These chemical peels (11) anaphoric
14 these sores or blemishes which persist anaphoric
16 the (microscope) exophoric
REs
cataphoric 3 = 16%
exophoric 4 = 21%
anaphoric 12 = 63%
Total 19
After flash floods, desert streams from upland areas carry
heavy loads of silt, sand and rock fragments. As they
reach the flatter area of the desert basins they slow down
and their waters soak quickly into the basin floor. Then the
streams drop their loads; first they drop the heaviest
material – the stones, then they drop the sand and finally
they drop the silt. Soon these short-lived streams become
choked by their own deposits and they spread their load in
all directions. After some time, fan or cone-shaped
deposits of gravel, sand, silt and clay are formed around
each valley or canyon outlet.
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After flash floods, desert streams from upland areas
carry heavy loads of silt, sand and rock fragments.
As they reach the flatter area of the desert
basins they slow down and their waters soak quickly
into the basin floor. Then the streams drop their
loads; first they drop the heaviest material – the
stones, then they drop the sand and finally they
drop the silt. Soon these short-lived streams
become choked by their own deposits and they
spread their load in all directions. After some time,
fan or cone-shaped deposits of gravel, sand, silt
and clay are formed around each valley or canyon
outlet.
1 After flash floods, desert streams from upland areas carry heavy loads of
silt, sand and rock fragments.
2 As they reach the flatter area of the desert basins
3 they slow down
4 and their waters soak quickly into the basin floor.
5 Then the streams drop their loads;
6 first they drop the heaviest material – the stones,
7 then they drop the sand
8 and finally they drop the silt.
9 Soon these short-lived streams become choked by their own deposits
10 and they spread their load in all directions.
11 After some time, fan or cone-shaped deposits of gravel, sand, silt and
clay are formed around each valley or canyon outlet.
Clauses
1 After flash floods, desert streams from upland areas carry heavy loads of
silt, sand and rock fragments.
2 As they reach the flatter area of the desert basins
3 they slow down
4 and their waters soak quickly into the basin floor.
5 Then the streams drop their loads;
6 first they drop the heaviest material – the stones,
7 then they drop the sand
8 and finally they drop the silt.
9 Soon these short-lived streams become choked by their own deposits
10 and they spread their load in all directions.
11 After some time, fan or cone-shaped deposits of gravel, sand, silt and
clay are formed around each valley or canyon outlet.