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Nidale Zouhir Ryan Gallagher AP Literature 17 February 2011 The Plasticity of Memory: A Jessica Smith Analysis “Plastic arts...[demand] that the subject change her use of the her environment, thus introducing a dimension of temporal succession along with that of spatial simultaneity.” -- Jessica Smith, Organic Furniture Cellar As far as poets go, Jessica Smith tends not to be as set on creating specific meanings for her poetry as other more popular poets in the avant garde literature scene. Smith's writing is more experiential than strictly meaningful, as it takes each reader on a unique path, stressing the importance of the individual. However, despite its unique meanings for each reader,

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Nidale Zouhir

Ryan Gallagher

AP Literature

17 February 2011

The Plasticity of Memory: A Jessica Smith Analysis

“Plastic arts...[demand] that the subject change her use of the her

environment, thus introducing a dimension of temporal succession

along with that of spatial simultaneity.”

-- Jessica Smith, Organic Furniture Cellar

As far as poets go, Jessica Smith tends not to be as set on creating specific meanings for

her poetry as other more popular poets in the avant garde literature scene. Smith's writing is more

experiential than strictly meaningful, as it takes each reader on a unique path, stressing the

importance of the individual. However, despite its unique meanings for each reader, Smith's

poetry does contain certain unifying themes, specifically regarding isolation and memory. Smith

calls her work “plastic poetry” for its ability to change depending upon the reader; with this

plastic poetry, Smith can “change the reading space in such a way that the one who reads is

forced to make amends for new structures in his or her virtual path” (Smith, Organic 12). As

Don Ihde, a professor at Stony Brook University, told New York Times reporter Fred Bernstein,

the plastic arts “[make] people think through what they wouldn’t normally think through” (“A

, 05/24/11,
I think you could do better with the opening and make more compelling —ryanseangallagher
, 05/24/11,
I recall a certain discussion we were discussing about masculine and feminine writing. I think it would be very appropriate to infuse it here, whereas Smith’s very abstract avante garde writing is a critique of the traditional- male writing of our society.—Hchu011
, 05/24/11,
This is a good analysis of what her poetry does. Maybe you can expand on this theory of how literature is not meant to have one meaning. —Francescaxoo
, 05/24/11,
I think not only the individual but after reading of Smith’s poem, the individual EXPIERIENCE. That is what is stressed I believe. Her poem heightens one’s senses and makes us aware of the process instead of the end result through abstract viewing foils. Smith’s poems are essentially foils to explore our own mentality no?—Hchu011
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House” par. 3). Ihde was referring specifically to Smith’s greatest influence, the Japanese

architect Arakawa, but his words hold true for Smith herself.

Smith's “The Wandering Rocks” is one of the structurally most interesting of her book of

poetry, Organic Furniture Cellar. The poem resembles a word search, and words can be read

both vertically and horizontally, and sometimes from both left to right and right to left. Specific

readings of the poem, therefore, are unique to specific readers of the poem, a concept directly

influenced by Arakawa, whose work Smith says she is “in love with” (“Hiroshima” par. 1). Like

Arakawa, whose architecture “makes people use their bodies in unexpected ways to maintain

equilibrium, and that...will stimulate their immune systems” (Bernstein, “A House” par. 3),

Smith employs this varied structure in order to allow the reader to create her own journey

throughout the poem, thus “changing the reading space in such a way that the one who reads is

forced to make amends for the

new structures in his or her

virtual path” (Smith, Organic

12).

This varied structure

and unique experience for each

individual reader contains a

sense of loneliness; each reader

having a different experience

when reading isolates each

reader, thus amplifying the

loneliness already implied by

, 05/24/11,
I wonder if you’d get more out of the word “isolation” for your overall concept in the paper. ..? —ryanseangallagher
, 05/24/11,
I agree with Mr. Gallagher that you should focus more on isolation than lonlieness with your paper, because loneliiness is more of a feeling and isolation is a state one is put in. Your essay seems to focus on how Smith is putting her readers in isolation for them each to interpret her poems differently. —Francescaxoo
, 05/24/11,
I think here your argument could be enriched as the subject (reader) reading Smith’s poem like a ‘dream’. The sense of loneliness and isolation is interesting in terms of physcoanalytic critique that Smith mentions how one can more accurately ‘observe’ in the absence of chaos. The chaos or the element of rebellion that I find prevalent in Smith poems is natural conventions and ethics. She rebells against the overused route. Is Smith trying to diffferentiate between the natural forces influencing men and women mentality? pg. 242
, 05/24/11,
Elaborate on why she wants her poems to have the ability to read different ways for readers. —Francescaxoo
, 05/24/11,
This quote is interesting and perhaps could be analyzed more complexly. In terms of equilibrium and its definition, could it also be interpreted as social equality between men and women? Poor and rich? Orthodox versus unorthodox views? And the whole discusion of the body in terms of poetry, Smith uses the body as a malliable ‘empty (yet open) vessle in which the reading of her poems can take on multifaceted meanings. —Hchu011
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the lone letters and incomplete phrases scattered over the page. This isolation is only amplified

by the concept of being “AMID A CROWD of stars” (Smith), as, in the same way that being

amid a crowd of people without actually being a part of that crowd, the subject of the poem is

isolated in a crowd of burning particles of gas. This is further supplemented by the implications

of the word “star” – a star tends to outshine whatever surrounds it, so in a reversed situation like

this one, the stars outshine the subject to create a sense of isolation for the subject as well as for

the speaker. This sense of isolation is one that is echoed on one of Smith's largest influences,

Homer's epic poem The Odyssey, which details the exile of Odysseus post-Trojan War, when he

is “being held captive on Kalypso’s island” (“The Odyssey Summary” par. 2). Like Odysseus,

the subject of this poem seems to be in some form of exile, randomly hearing or feeling bits of

conversation the speaker has either with him or with some arbitrary other person. This is

amplified by seemingly random, entirely isolated bits of words and phrases scattered throughout

the poem.

In this particular poem, the words and phrases that can be read horizontally are simple

observations – “the one veiled male face” and “the vulnerable sleeping chest,” for example –

while the words and phrases that can be read vertically are more conversational, with the speaker

at one point instructing some unnamed subject to “bring the camera” (Smith). The words read

vertically create a poem within a poem, one that at first glance seems completely separate from

the words read horizontally. However, this is not entirely true. The tone created by the horizontal

observations is wistful with a dash of fairy tale mysticism, bringing to mind the vulnerable

princesses of Disney movies and the fragile main characters of Jeffrey Eugenides’ The Virgin

Suicides. This ethereally suggests a lack of reality to the people referred to in the poem, though

, 05/24/11,
explain (for us culturally deficient types” —ryanseangallagher
, 05/24/11,
Explain why these pieces of literature come to mind when reading her poem. —Francescaxoo
, 05/24/11,
This might be stretch, but being influenced by Freudian theology, do you think Smith’s poem is a textual manifestation of a person? Poem= ego. Or more speficically a woman? It’s aesthethics being beautiful however content wise the complexity is noted. And often is viewed by others negatively. Backlash against women and female gender roles. —Hchu011
, 05/24/11,
Besides being technical with your explication, it’d be interesting to include a feminist perspective as well. I believe Smith may be trying to insinuate the deceit that is associated with men and contrast that against the innocence of women. And if you’d like go ahead and add historical critique and why we as people are conditioned to associate negativity towards the unconventiona. As in against society- which is mainly male driven.—Hchu011
, 05/24/11,
What is Smith’s purpose for making this distinction. —Francescaxoo
, 05/24/11,
This is a good conection of two pieces of literature. —Francescaxoo
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the vertical lines again draw the reader back to reality with concrete bits of information and

dialogue.

In addition to isolation, Smith discusses memory in “The Wandering Rocks.” Smith is a

blogger, as evidenced by her Tumblr, Wordpress, Blogspot, and Twitter accounts -- in other

words, she preserves her memories, if only in some intangible digital form, either for future

reference or for catharsis. It is therefore unsurprising that throughout “The Wandering Rocks,”

Smith references memory often. In fact, her speaker instructs someone to “bring the camera” at

one point, while discussing “prememory” at another. This use of a camera here indicates a need

to preserve moments that cannot be remembered otherwise. This creates a sense of immortality,

one that is echoed by Smith's use of the phrase “amour immortal.” Interestingly, Smith detailed

her views on immortality as related to architecture “Hiroshima Mon Amour.” The use of the

word “amour” (which translates, obviously, to love) in both cases seems to indicate a sense of

immortality associated with love, especially in the latter, as it is a eulogy for the architect

Arakawa, who believed it to be “immoral...that people have to die” (Bernstein, “Arakawa” par.

20). Though Smith does not necessarily subscribe to this specific concept, as “architecture

creates neither morality nor immortality, because at the end of the day, bodies and architecture

are extricable and one lasts longer than the other” (“Hiroshima” par. 4), she does feel that

memory and immortality are intrinsically related, as one renders the other obsolete because

“there is no need for memory in immortal life” (“Hiroshima” par. 5). Her use of memory in this

poem then becomes fascinating, as she clearly does not mean it as a way to create immortality in

the way that Arakawa and his wife used their form of art to create immortality prior to his death.

In fact, she seems to use it to counter the immortality that she mentions. Though the memories in

, 05/24/11,
I believe the concept of immortality is so deeply rooted in human ego and selfishness, it’d be intresting if you could prove some physcoanalytic analysis of the super ego and it essentially is the driving force behind human motivation. —Hchu011
, 05/24/11,
Just thinking out loud here: I wonder if the myth of Cupid and Psyche would help develop idea at all. Not just the actual myth, but say, Thomas Taylor-- Neo-Platonist writer, might be interesting?) —ryanseangallagher
, 05/24/11,
Really good analysis of what Smith does and her purpose behind it! —Francescaxoo
, 05/24/11,
good, better. I wonder if this is a concept that you’d want to highlight a bit more? —ryanseangallagher
, 05/24/11,
I think you could do better to synthesize these two ideas with some more philosophical thought / effort. —ryanseangallagher
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the poem do not seem to have a specific meaning, their inclusion indicates the significance of

memory and of the past, while simultaneously downgrading the importance of immortality.

Smith continues the idea that memory is detrimental to immortality in her poem,

“Locations along the Rust Belt.” This structure of this poem is vastly different from that of “The

Wandering Rocks,” as it begins almost conventionally, with a concept that is almost entirely

unique amongst Smith's poetry: the ability to number lines. At first, the poem seems melodic in

that it makes sense in a single, linear path. However, soon enough, the poem dissolves into what

reads like several poems at once, once again allowing the reader to choose her own path

throughout the poem and therefore create her own meaning from the words that she reads.

In fact, the structure of this poem mimics the jazz music that Smith praises. Like John

Coltrane's music, this poem begins in an almost expected manner, but soon comes to resemble

the “controversial experiments”

that Coltrane (and Smith)

favors (“PBS – JAZZ” par. 4).

This rejection of expectations is

evident in all of Smith’s poetry,

which, because of its ability to

be read in various directions

and interpreted in infinite ways,

defies the expectations of

typical poetry. This particular

poem almost tricks the

audience into believing that it

, 05/24/11,
I love this idea! The expectation to be versatile, perhaps think like a marxist and think of the origins of those expectations: society AND BECAUSE ITS A PATRIARCHAL SOCIETY HERE IS A GREAT PLACE TO INCLUDE MODERN EVIDENCE FOR THE GREAT DIVIDE BETWEEN MEN AND WOMEN!!!!! =D —Hchu011
, 05/24/11,
I wonder why Smith is so interested in rejecting expectations. It would be a good analysis to add to your essay of why this is a common factor in her poetry. —Francescaxoo
, 05/24/11,
I think here you could reconnect to the idea of how Smith creates isolation for her readers. —Francescaxoo
, 05/24/11,
How about mention of just the pure aesthetic value and physical appearance of poetry and how it majorly impacts the favorbility in which we read her poems if it doesn’t fit into our conventional criteria for accepted poetry and literature. —Hchu011
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will work as typical poetry, but quickly goes on to defy these expectations when it quickly

switches into the more atypically structured plastic poetry that Smith so prefers. Like Coltrane’s

music, this poem starts out almost melodically, with the reader able to understand and interpret a

single line of poetry down a single path until the music of the poetry suddenly stops and becomes

much more typical of both Coltrane and Smith – unique and multi-rhythmic, allowing the reader

to choose a specific path or indulge in all of them.

Interestingly, Smith switches to her clearly favored plastic poetry immediately after

suggesting that the reader might “want to remember” something, then going on to scatter the

remaining text and allow the reader to choose what to remember: “sloss furnace,” “a loved one,”

or “glasses with limes at the / bottom.” The scattering of the text here does exactly what Smith

describes in the foreword of Organic Furniture Cellar – it “entangles the reader in a web of

undetermined syntactical relations,” thus allowing the reader to “choose from many possible

syntactical paths.” This “multi-linearity” thus “allows for a constant opening of new paths in the

poem’s field” (13), here meaning that it directly allows the reader to choose precisely what

memory represents for her.

Here, the glass with limes at the bottom suggests an alcoholic beverage – in other words,

choosing not to remember anything at all. Meanwhile, the loved one gives a sense of positivity to

the idea of remembering. Unfortunately, this positivity does not stick – Birmingham’s Sloss

Furnace is considered to be “one of the scariest places on earth” (“The Sloss Furnace” sec. 1).

Because of its “extremely dangerous” living and working conditions, “several hundred” of the

men who lived and worked there died” (“The Sloss Furnace” sec. 3), causing some to believe

that “several spirits lurk in the Sloss Furnace” (“The Sloss Furnace” sec. 1). This adds chilling

connotations to memory in general, as ghosts tend to hover in the space between memory and

, 05/24/11,
Elaborate on this assumption. —Francescaxoo
, 05/24/11,
well done —ryanseangallagher
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immortality. The Sloss Furnace is especially significant when one considers that what was once

one of the most dangerous factories in the United States has now become a tourist attraction; in

other words, though the ghosts themselves are interesting to people, the significance of the

memories they once had has been essentially destroyed in favor of immortalizing the pain

associated with them.

The negativity behind memory is further stressed throughout the rest of the poem, which

discusses death in relation to memory. At one point, Smith writes, “remembering is suffocating,”

again associating remembering with a destruction of life. Using suffocation here, as opposed to

some other form of death, indicates that memories are stifling in their ubiquity, so stifling that

they almost inevitably lead to death. Smith goes on to imply that memories themselves are only

“mementos / of / suffering,” thus furthering the discussion of the negativity of memories,

especially when associated with the word “vulcan,” which is the name of the Roman “god of fire,

particularly in its destructive aspects” (“Vulcan”). This association with something as destructive

as fire makes memories themselves seem somewhat destructive, thus giving memory itself a

sense of power over the person who has said memory.

Ironically, Smith seems to value memory despite this negativity; in most of Organic

Furniture Cellar, poems are referred to by the date on which they happened, indicating a sense

of importance in preserving those memories. Like photographs, the poems seem intent on

capturing specific moments in her life, especially those with both locations and dates, such as

“Niagara Falls Revisited / 12.04.2003” (Organic 50). This suggests a sense of futility in fighting

the memories that otherwise seem to have negative connotations in “Locations along the Rust

Belt.” Smith does seem intent on preserving memories; in fact, she does not try to promote

immortality in her poetry, nor even on her blog, despite posts about Arakawa and his belief in the

, 05/24/11,
The efforts to preserve memory--> historicism in which writers tend to reconstruct past, in their efforts revealing some lack or abscence of something that they believe should have been there. —Hchu011
, 05/24/11,
or, offers a different conception of how memory works? —ryanseangallagher
, 05/24/11,
rather than loaded word: think of it in terms of necessity (like Blaser writing about evil.) Also, as far as feminist critique goes, this could really be developed here, esp since you move onto specifically “male” symbol in this para.: this para., and smith’s poetry, I think, would be very interesting to show as a way to read as antithesis of “symbolic” dominated analysis, which is very ridged / rationale and is what feminist theory really did such a great job of freeing us from —ryanseangallagher
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possibility of immortality. Her preservation of these memories, despite their destructive nature,

speaks to the importance of preserving memory, not only for its ability to aid in predicting and

enhancing the future but also for its amplification of relationships.

Of course, these relationships are often downplayed in favor of discussing isolation.

“Locations along the Rust Belt,” for example, speaks of death and the loneliness associated with

it. It also contains imagery typically associated with isolation -- for example, the "unused / grain

elevators" and clear lack of a"loved one" that causes the subject to "want to remember" him all

create a distinct feeling of isolation and loneliness. In fact, every instance of a person in this

poem except for the the suggestion of a reader ("you") speaks only of someone lost, whether

through death or just forgetfulness. This poem has the same sense of lonely ethereality as “The

Wandering Rocks” and any of the rest of Smith’s poems, all of which seem to place the reader in

a strange, somewhat imagined location wholly independent of other human beings. This is

enhanced, naturally, by Smith’s structure, which she uses to isolate specific words in the same

way that she isolates her reader (and, in some cases, her speaker). Furthermore, the unique path

each reader will take throughout “Locations along the Rust Belt” speaks to that particular

reader’s isolation, as no two readers will read the poem in the same direction. This isolates each

reader, thus enhancing the feeling of isolation that Smith creates throughout her poetry.

Smith, with her penchant for unusual (often to the point of frustration) structure and

unique ability to create individual meanings for each individual reader, manages to set an almost

ethereal tone to most of her poetry, which is naturally supplemented by the plasticity with which

she writes. This poetry, influenced by her taste in art, music, and literature, creates a unique

experience for each reader who finds her poetry, specifically in the various paths in which most

of Smith’s poetry can be read.

, 05/24/11,
what value does this give her as a writer? —ryanseangallagher
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