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Nidale Zouhir
Ryan Gallagher
AP Literature
17 February 2011
The Plasticity of Memory: A Jessica Smith Analysis
“Plastic arts...[demand] that the subject change her use of the her
environment, thus introducing a dimension of temporal succession
along with that of spatial simultaneity.”
-- Jessica Smith, Organic Furniture Cellar
As far as poets go, Jessica Smith tends not to be as set on creating specific meanings for
her poetry as other more popular poets in the avant garde literature scene. Smith's writing is more
experiential than strictly meaningful, as it takes each reader on a unique path, stressing the
importance of the individual. However, despite its unique meanings for each reader, Smith's
poetry does contain certain unifying themes, specifically regarding isolation and memory. Smith
calls her work “plastic poetry” for its ability to change depending upon the reader; with this
plastic poetry, Smith can “change the reading space in such a way that the one who reads is
forced to make amends for new structures in his or her virtual path” (Smith, Organic 12). As
Don Ihde, a professor at Stony Brook University, told New York Times reporter Fred Bernstein,
the plastic arts “[make] people think through what they wouldn’t normally think through” (“A
House” par. 3). Ihde was referring specifically to Smith’s greatest influence, the Japanese
architect Arakawa, but his words hold true for Smith herself.
Smith's “The Wandering Rocks” is one of the structurally most interesting of her book of
poetry, Organic Furniture Cellar. The poem resembles a word search, and words can be read
both vertically and horizontally, and sometimes from both left to right and right to left. Specific
readings of the poem, therefore, are unique to specific readers of the poem, a concept directly
influenced by Arakawa, whose work Smith says she is “in love with” (“Hiroshima” par. 1). Like
Arakawa, whose architecture “makes people use their bodies in unexpected ways to maintain
equilibrium, and that...will stimulate their immune systems” (Bernstein, “A House” par. 3),
Smith employs this varied structure in order to allow the reader to create her own journey
throughout the poem, thus “changing the reading space in such a way that the one who reads is
forced to make amends for the
new structures in his or her
virtual path” (Smith, Organic
12).
This varied structure
and unique experience for each
individual reader contains a
sense of loneliness; each reader
having a different experience
when reading isolates each
reader, thus amplifying the
loneliness already implied by
the lone letters and incomplete phrases scattered over the page. This isolation is only amplified
by the concept of being “AMID A CROWD of stars” (Smith), as, in the same way that being
amid a crowd of people without actually being a part of that crowd, the subject of the poem is
isolated in a crowd of burning particles of gas. This is further supplemented by the implications
of the word “star” – a star tends to outshine whatever surrounds it, so in a reversed situation like
this one, the stars outshine the subject to create a sense of isolation for the subject as well as for
the speaker. This sense of isolation is one that is echoed on one of Smith's largest influences,
Homer's epic poem The Odyssey, which details the exile of Odysseus post-Trojan War, when he
is “being held captive on Kalypso’s island” (“The Odyssey Summary” par. 2). Like Odysseus,
the subject of this poem seems to be in some form of exile, randomly hearing or feeling bits of
conversation the speaker has either with him or with some arbitrary other person. This is
amplified by seemingly random, entirely isolated bits of words and phrases scattered throughout
the poem.
In this particular poem, the words and phrases that can be read horizontally are simple
observations – “the one veiled male face” and “the vulnerable sleeping chest,” for example –
while the words and phrases that can be read vertically are more conversational, with the speaker
at one point instructing some unnamed subject to “bring the camera” (Smith). The words read
vertically create a poem within a poem, one that at first glance seems completely separate from
the words read horizontally. However, this is not entirely true. The tone created by the horizontal
observations is wistful with a dash of fairy tale mysticism, bringing to mind the vulnerable
princesses of Disney movies and the fragile main characters of Jeffrey Eugenides’ The Virgin
Suicides. This ethereally suggests a lack of reality to the people referred to in the poem, though
the vertical lines again draw the reader back to reality with concrete bits of information and
dialogue.
In addition to isolation, Smith discusses memory in “The Wandering Rocks.” Smith is a
blogger, as evidenced by her Tumblr, Wordpress, Blogspot, and Twitter accounts -- in other
words, she preserves her memories, if only in some intangible digital form, either for future
reference or for catharsis. It is therefore unsurprising that throughout “The Wandering Rocks,”
Smith references memory often. In fact, her speaker instructs someone to “bring the camera” at
one point, while discussing “prememory” at another. This use of a camera here indicates a need
to preserve moments that cannot be remembered otherwise. This creates a sense of immortality,
one that is echoed by Smith's use of the phrase “amour immortal.” Interestingly, Smith detailed
her views on immortality as related to architecture “Hiroshima Mon Amour.” The use of the
word “amour” (which translates, obviously, to love) in both cases seems to indicate a sense of
immortality associated with love, especially in the latter, as it is a eulogy for the architect
Arakawa, who believed it to be “immoral...that people have to die” (Bernstein, “Arakawa” par.
20). Though Smith does not necessarily subscribe to this specific concept, as “architecture
creates neither morality nor immortality, because at the end of the day, bodies and architecture
are extricable and one lasts longer than the other” (“Hiroshima” par. 4), she does feel that
memory and immortality are intrinsically related, as one renders the other obsolete because
“there is no need for memory in immortal life” (“Hiroshima” par. 5). Her use of memory in this
poem then becomes fascinating, as she clearly does not mean it as a way to create immortality in
the way that Arakawa and his wife used their form of art to create immortality prior to his death.
In fact, she seems to use it to counter the immortality that she mentions. Though the memories in
the poem do not seem to have a specific meaning, their inclusion indicates the significance of
memory and of the past, while simultaneously downgrading the importance of immortality.
Smith continues the idea that memory is detrimental to immortality in her poem,
“Locations along the Rust Belt.” This structure of this poem is vastly different from that of “The
Wandering Rocks,” as it begins almost conventionally, with a concept that is almost entirely
unique amongst Smith's poetry: the ability to number lines. At first, the poem seems melodic in
that it makes sense in a single, linear path. However, soon enough, the poem dissolves into what
reads like several poems at once, once again allowing the reader to choose her own path
throughout the poem and therefore create her own meaning from the words that she reads.
In fact, the structure of this poem mimics the jazz music that Smith praises. Like John
Coltrane's music, this poem begins in an almost expected manner, but soon comes to resemble
the “controversial experiments”
that Coltrane (and Smith)
favors (“PBS – JAZZ” par. 4).
This rejection of expectations is
evident in all of Smith’s poetry,
which, because of its ability to
be read in various directions
and interpreted in infinite ways,
defies the expectations of
typical poetry. This particular
poem almost tricks the
audience into believing that it
will work as typical poetry, but quickly goes on to defy these expectations when it quickly
switches into the more atypically structured plastic poetry that Smith so prefers. Like Coltrane’s
music, this poem starts out almost melodically, with the reader able to understand and interpret a
single line of poetry down a single path until the music of the poetry suddenly stops and becomes
much more typical of both Coltrane and Smith – unique and multi-rhythmic, allowing the reader
to choose a specific path or indulge in all of them.
Interestingly, Smith switches to her clearly favored plastic poetry immediately after
suggesting that the reader might “want to remember” something, then going on to scatter the
remaining text and allow the reader to choose what to remember: “sloss furnace,” “a loved one,”
or “glasses with limes at the / bottom.” The scattering of the text here does exactly what Smith
describes in the foreword of Organic Furniture Cellar – it “entangles the reader in a web of
undetermined syntactical relations,” thus allowing the reader to “choose from many possible
syntactical paths.” This “multi-linearity” thus “allows for a constant opening of new paths in the
poem’s field” (13), here meaning that it directly allows the reader to choose precisely what
memory represents for her.
Here, the glass with limes at the bottom suggests an alcoholic beverage – in other words,
choosing not to remember anything at all. Meanwhile, the loved one gives a sense of positivity to
the idea of remembering. Unfortunately, this positivity does not stick – Birmingham’s Sloss
Furnace is considered to be “one of the scariest places on earth” (“The Sloss Furnace” sec. 1).
Because of its “extremely dangerous” living and working conditions, “several hundred” of the
men who lived and worked there died” (“The Sloss Furnace” sec. 3), causing some to believe
that “several spirits lurk in the Sloss Furnace” (“The Sloss Furnace” sec. 1). This adds chilling
connotations to memory in general, as ghosts tend to hover in the space between memory and
immortality. The Sloss Furnace is especially significant when one considers that what was once
one of the most dangerous factories in the United States has now become a tourist attraction; in
other words, though the ghosts themselves are interesting to people, the significance of the
memories they once had has been essentially destroyed in favor of immortalizing the pain
associated with them.
The negativity behind memory is further stressed throughout the rest of the poem, which
discusses death in relation to memory. At one point, Smith writes, “remembering is suffocating,”
again associating remembering with a destruction of life. Using suffocation here, as opposed to
some other form of death, indicates that memories are stifling in their ubiquity, so stifling that
they almost inevitably lead to death. Smith goes on to imply that memories themselves are only
“mementos / of / suffering,” thus furthering the discussion of the negativity of memories,
especially when associated with the word “vulcan,” which is the name of the Roman “god of fire,
particularly in its destructive aspects” (“Vulcan”). This association with something as destructive
as fire makes memories themselves seem somewhat destructive, thus giving memory itself a
sense of power over the person who has said memory.
Ironically, Smith seems to value memory despite this negativity; in most of Organic
Furniture Cellar, poems are referred to by the date on which they happened, indicating a sense
of importance in preserving those memories. Like photographs, the poems seem intent on
capturing specific moments in her life, especially those with both locations and dates, such as
“Niagara Falls Revisited / 12.04.2003” (Organic 50). This suggests a sense of futility in fighting
the memories that otherwise seem to have negative connotations in “Locations along the Rust
Belt.” Smith does seem intent on preserving memories; in fact, she does not try to promote
immortality in her poetry, nor even on her blog, despite posts about Arakawa and his belief in the
possibility of immortality. Her preservation of these memories, despite their destructive nature,
speaks to the importance of preserving memory, not only for its ability to aid in predicting and
enhancing the future but also for its amplification of relationships.
Of course, these relationships are often downplayed in favor of discussing isolation.
“Locations along the Rust Belt,” for example, speaks of death and the loneliness associated with
it. It also contains imagery typically associated with isolation -- for example, the "unused / grain
elevators" and clear lack of a"loved one" that causes the subject to "want to remember" him all
create a distinct feeling of isolation and loneliness. In fact, every instance of a person in this
poem except for the the suggestion of a reader ("you") speaks only of someone lost, whether
through death or just forgetfulness. This poem has the same sense of lonely ethereality as “The
Wandering Rocks” and any of the rest of Smith’s poems, all of which seem to place the reader in
a strange, somewhat imagined location wholly independent of other human beings. This is
enhanced, naturally, by Smith’s structure, which she uses to isolate specific words in the same
way that she isolates her reader (and, in some cases, her speaker). Furthermore, the unique path
each reader will take throughout “Locations along the Rust Belt” speaks to that particular
reader’s isolation, as no two readers will read the poem in the same direction. This isolates each
reader, thus enhancing the feeling of isolation that Smith creates throughout her poetry.
Smith, with her penchant for unusual (often to the point of frustration) structure and
unique ability to create individual meanings for each individual reader, manages to set an almost
ethereal tone to most of her poetry, which is naturally supplemented by the plasticity with which
she writes. This poetry, influenced by her taste in art, music, and literature, creates a unique
experience for each reader who finds her poetry, specifically in the various paths in which most
of Smith’s poetry can be read.
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