Crafting argument

Supporting argument paragraph

One paragraph = ______________

(Point) First, females will be discriminated less if there were no censorship. (Elaboration) They will be given more rights and say in society. (Evidence) The BBC reports that only 10% of directors of UK’s top 100 firms are women. Women currently hold only 1 in every 10 top decision making positions in California’s 400 largest publicly traded companies.

One paragraph = one evidence

(Point) First, females will be discriminated less if there were no censorship. (Elaboration) They will be given more rights and say in society. (Evidence) The BBC reports that only 10% of directors of UK’s top 100 firms are women. Women currently hold only 1 in every 10 top decision making positions in California’s 400 largest publicly traded companies.

One paragraph = one evidence

(Point) First, females will be discriminated less if there were no censorship. (Elaboration) They will be given more rights and say in society. (Evidence) The BBC reports that only 10% of directors of UK’s top 100 firms are women. Women currently hold only 1 in every 10 top decision making positions in California’s 400 largest publicly traded companies.

Evidence-Point ____________

(Point) Females are neglected despite working harder than men. (Elaboration) Females make up a large number of the poor. They have to work hard to keep themselves alive. (Evidence) Women in Africa walk 16 times the distance to the moon just to supply their household with water.

Evidence-Point Mismatch

(Point) Females are neglected despite working harder than men. (Elaboration) Females make up a large number of the poor. They have to work hard to keep themselves alive. (Evidence) Women in Africa walk 16 times the distance to the moon just to supply their household with water.

Evidence-Point Mismatch

Rewrite: (Point) Females are neglected despite working harder than men. (Elaboration) Females make up a large number of the poor. They have to work hard to keep themselves alive. (Evidence) Of the 37 million people living below the poverty line, 21 million are women.

Point-__________Mismatch

(Point) Women and men are the same and therefore should receive the same treatment. (Elaboration) Women work as hard as men. Sometimes, women work harder. In Indonesia, a female president is doing the job of a male president. (Evidence) Women do more than two-thirds of the work. Yet, they only receive 1% of the world’s

Point-Elaboration Mismatch

(Point) Women and men are the same and therefore should receive the same treatment. (Elaboration) Women work as hard as men. Sometimes, women work harder. In Indonesia, a female president is doing the job of a male president. (Evidence) Women do more than two-thirds of the work. Yet, they only receive 1% of the world’s production.

Point-Elaboration Mismatch

(Point) Women and men are the same and therefore should receive the same treatment. (Elaboration) Women work as hard as men. Sometimes, women work harder. In Indonesia, a female president is doing the job of a male president. (Evidence) Women do more than two-thirds of the work. Yet, they only receive 1% of the world’s production.

Point-Elaboration-Evidence ______

More than two-thirds of the world’s unpaid work is done by women. Women should get education to get out of poverty. Education can give women high pay. Thus, they will not remain in poverty.

Point-Elaboration-Evidence Order

More than two-thirds of the world’s unpaid work is done by women. Women should get education to get out of poverty. Education can give women high pay. Thus, they will not remain in poverty.

Point-Elaboration-Evidence Order

Rewrite: (Point) Women should get education to get out of poverty. (Elaboration) Education can give women high pay. Thus, they will not remain in poverty. (Evidence) More than two-thirds of the world’s unpaid work is done by women.