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class #7
• return memo punctilio & quiz 2
• clip of the day
• jokes
• danglers
• informative messages
• bad news workshop
• business plan video
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memo punctilio
• background, purpose, preview opening
• effective use of headings and lists
• adequate, useful content that deals with boss’s need
• your summary is more useful than original article
• model
criteria/objectives:
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clip of the day
from Wall Street 1987
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danglers
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Walking down the street, the fire hydrant sprayed John and Mary.
As the marketing director for the Seattle Times, I know you want what’s best for your readers.
Dumpy and overweight, the vet says our dog needs more exercise.
At the age of ten, my father bought me a puppy.
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sentence style coursepack p. 17
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yang vs. yin hot vs. cool
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active = yang
passive = yin
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informative messages
(p. 25 in coursepak)
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the business plan
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