daybook feedback
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Feedback from PeersKayleigh Poling
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Why?
Since my peer’s feedback on my writing was a major contributor to my success in this class, I
decided to display some of the helpful comments I received.
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Daybook Feedback
● First piece of daybook feedback
● Cameron responded to my entry by saying that he understood where I was coming from and that reassured me that my main idea was clear and concise.
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Daybook Feedback
Feedback given on a daybook entry where I discussed a time where I felt insecure with my writing and Shield’s encouraging comments
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Daybook Feedback● To the right is a daybook
writing about literacy sponsors I’ve had throughout elementary, middle, and high school
● At the bottom is feedback given from a peer that I’ve become close friends with
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Most Important form of Feedback:Individual Literacy Narrative & Feedback Pt. 1
Actual literacy narrative written that would later be combined with my other three group members narratives.
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Most Important form of Feedback:Individual Literacy Narrative & Feedback Pt. 2
Feedback from group members on my narrative