Composition: 4 Student: Lozzia BrendaVersion: 1Course: 2nd AType: Describing peopleWords: 286 Date: September 4thPlan: Describing someone as my brother.Introduction: Paragraph 1- Name of the person, when I met him, why I consider him so important to me. .Development: Paragraph 2- Physical appearance, age, height, face. Paragraph 3 Physical description, clothes and what he likes wearing at weeks and at weekends.Paragraph 4 Personality characteristics and justification.Conclusion: Paragraph 5 Comments and feelings about him.

All is joy with himPablo Arteaga is my big brother, what I mean is, he is not related to my blood but I consider him as my brother because I adore him so much. Both of our parents were friends, so we have met each other since we were little children. I am always meeting him at weekends and we have been to many places together in our trips. He is in his mid twenties; he is quite tall nearly 1m 98 and well built. He has an oval face with dimples on his cheeks. He has a tanned skin and short brown hair. He sometimes wears a beard but when he has a date he prefers shaving it. During the week, when he is at college, he usually dresses in neat clothes, but at weekends he prefers wearing formal clothes. However I do not remember if I have ever seen him in a perfectly ironed suit. Although he wears his black leather jacket and his blue suede shoes. What I particularly like about him is his personality, not only is he a humble person, but he is also helpful and willing to lend you a hand. However, one of his defects is impulsiveness. He makes mistakes because he does not think carefully about what he does. I admire him very much because he is always in a good mood and he is so witty that he makes everybody laughs with his remarks. Apart from that, I can completely consider that he is a very loyal and supportive friend since he has always been by my side.