developing functional english - writing
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Slides from week 3 of the Teaching Functional Skills courseTRANSCRIPT
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‘As (learners) read and discuss an increasing range of text types, their implicit understanding of style will be extended and made more explicit. They can then draw on this knowledge for their own writing.’
(p 121 Adult Literacy Core Curriculum)
Using reading tasks to prepare for writing
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‘learners need to be encouraged to read as writers’
The link between reading and writing
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Exploring language features of texts
gather good examples of the type of texts your learners need to write often at school, college or work placement –
- assignments - reflective accounts
- instructions - incident reports
- care plans - messages in day books
use them as a basis to show learners key features of the text in terms of content and presentation
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use a variety of activities to highlight examples of how the texts are written to reflect their purpose and audience -
Text level- how information is chosen, how graphics are used, how headings are used, how ideas are linked
Sentence level- typical sentence structures & linking words, how punctuation is used to help the reader, use of bullets
Word level- how words are used effectively, key spelling words, formal and informal vocabulary
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Shared writing
Guided writing- writing frames
Independentwriting
Shared reading to explore language features
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What is grammar?
‘Grammar is the study of how we make sentences’
David CrystalMaking Sense of Grammar
Developing grammar – two approaches
- teacher explains ‘rules’ of grammar for learners to practise in exercises (didactic)
- teacher helps learners discover patterns for themselves in real life texts
(investigative)
Deductive Inductive
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Grammar – what should we focus on?
Text
Sentence
Word
• subject-verb agreement• consistent use of tense• simple, compound, complex structures
• endings to show plurals e.g. lorry > lorries• word building e.g. sad + ness, work + er
• use of connectives to link ideas
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I work in a charity shop two days a week. I help to sort out clothes at the back but also serve customers. I deal with their queries and handle money. I label goods for display and I tidy the book shelves. Often I cash up and check the float at the end of the day.
Re-write activities
1. Re-write the text beginning ‘Sally work 2. Re-write the text beginning ‘Last year Sally
worked...’
The unique setting of Kelling Heath Holiday Park makes it an idea destination for a short break in your touring caravan or your tent. Relax and gently unwind as you take in the panoramic views across the unspoiled heathland towards the undulating coastline of North Norfolk. The Park has a number of walks and cycle paths that guide you through a glorious range of habitats. Our Nature Trail leaflets will quickly help you to discover the fascinating variety of wildlife on the park and explain the careful conservation strategies that we carry out to protect and develop the environment. Discover how your holiday can be both relaxing and educational too for all the family. Whether by foot, cycle or car you can always use the Park as a base to explore the beautiful North Norfolk coastline and countryside.
The unique setting of Kelling Heath Holiday Park makes it an idea destination for a short break in your touring caravan or your tent. Relax and gently unwind as you take in the panoramic views across the unspoiled heathland towards the undulating coastline of North Norfolk. The Park has a number of walks and cycle paths that guide you through a glorious range of habitats. Our Nature Trail leaflets will quickly help you to discover the fascinating variety of wildlife on the park and explain the careful conservation strategies that we carry out to protect and develop the environment. Discover how your holiday can be both relaxing and educational too for all the family. Whether by foot, cycle or car you can always use the Park as a base to explore the beautiful North Norfolk coastline and countryside.
‘Protect’ is a verb – the others are all adjectives
The unique setting of Kelling Heath Holiday Park makes it an idea destination for a short break in your touring caravan or your tent. Relax and gently unwind as you take in the panoramic views across the unspoiled heathland towards the undulating coastline of North Norfolk. The Park has a number of walks and cycle paths that guide you through a glorious range of habitats. Our Nature Trail leaflets will quickly help you to discover the fascinating variety of wildlife on the park and explain the careful conservation strategies that we carry out to protect and develop the environment. Discover how your holiday can be both relaxing and educational too for all the family. Whether by foot, cycle or car you can always use the Park as a base to explore the beautiful North Norfolk coastline and countryside.
‘As’ is a conjunction – the others are all nouns.
Job search – plumber
5 tools they use
5 jobs they might do
5 qualities you look for
blow torch, saw, spanner, file, wrench
mend pipes, find leaks, connect
washing machines, change washers,
clean upreliable, tidy, cheap, punctual,
polite
A busy postman walks quickly.
A busy fireman walks quickly.
A busy fireman drives quickly.
A busy fireman drives safely.
The busy fireman drove safely.
The careful fireman drove safely.
Quick make
noun
verb
adverb
determiner
adjective
Countdown
noun verb adverb determiner
adjectiveconjunction
pronoun
shy
quietly
because
doctor
he
danced
the
preposition
in
Countdown
noun verb adverb determiner
adjectiveconjunction
pronoun
quietly
because
doctor
he
dancedthe
preposition
in the dark
was shy
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Young people who text are –
‘.. vandals who are doing to our language what Genghis Khan did to his neighbours eight hundred years ago. They are destroying it: pillaging our punctuation; savaging our sentences; raping our vocabulary. And they must be stopped.’
John Humphreys, Daily Mail, Sept 2007
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texting are wrong , or at least debatable . …there is increasing evidence that it helps rather than hinders literacy.’
David Crystal - txtng the gr8 db8 OUP 2008
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dad@hvn usrsphl we want wot us want &urth2b like hvn giv us food & 4giv r sins lyk we 4giv uvaz don’t test us! save us! bcos we know ur boss ur tuf & ur cool 4 eva! ok?
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u shall luv ur mobil fon with all ur hart u & ur phone shall neva b apartu shall nt lust aftr ur neibrs fone nor thievu shall b prepard @ all times 2 txt and 2 recvu shall use LOL & othr acronyms in conversatnsu shall be zappy with ur asr*r*sks & ex!matns!u shall abbrevi8 & rite words like theyr sedu shall nt speak 2 sum 1 face2face if u cn msg em insteadu shall nt shout with capitals XEPT IN DIRE EMERGNCYu shall nt consult a nglish dictnry
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Sniglets
• kellogulation• circumtreeviation• polygrouch• footbrawl• toastophobia• lactomangulation• aquadextrous• brakenoia
• http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sniglet• http://bertc.com/subfour/truth/sniglets.htm
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I’m sorry I haven’t got a clue
• pasteurize• protein• relief• avoidable• legend• innuendoes• decadent
= invisible= an enthusiastic youth
worker= what trees do in the
autumn= what toreadors try to do = where your toes are= Italian suppositories= someone with 10 teeth
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Dingbats
http://www.kensquiz.co.uk/table-top-quizzes/word-puzzles/dingbats
Question 1 Which sentence is correct?
(a) We were late.(b) We was late.(c) We is late.
a b cCorrect! Try again! Try again!
Next question
Question 2 Which sentence is correct?
(a) He go to Norwich every day.(b) He is going to Norwich every day.(c) He goes to Norwich every day.
a b cCorrect!Try again! Try again!
Next question
Question 3 What kind of sentence is this?
The man walked down the road and turned the corner.
simple complex compoundCorrect!Try again! Try again!
Next question
Question 4 Which language feature is typical of a setof instructions?
(a) Imperative verbs (b) Informal language (c) Consistent use of the past tense
a b cCorrect! Try again! Try again!
Next question
Question 5 Read the paragraph of text on the next slide. Which of the following sums up the tone?
(a) formal (b) persuasive (c) logical
a b cTry again!Try again! Correct
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The unique setting of Kelling Heath Holiday Park makes it an idea destination for a short break in your touring caravan or your tent. Relax and gently unwind as you take in the panoramic views across the unspoiled heathland towards the undulating coastline of North Norfolk. The Park has a number of walks and cycle paths that guide you through a glorious range of habitats. Our Nature Trail leaflets will quickly help you to discover the fascinating variety of wildlife on the park and explain the careful conservation strategies that we carry out to protect and develop the environment. Discover how your holiday can be both relaxing and educational too for all the family. Whether by foot, cycle or car you can always use the Park as a base to explore the beautiful North Norfolk coastline and countryside.
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gion • modelling active reading
• use of graphic organisers• text marking• decision making/classifying activities• proofreading• sequencing • table reconstruction• ranking• ‘jigsaw’ and snowball activities• mind mapping software
Teaching strategies
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Active learning approaches
‘We learn by doing. Research shows that active learning is much better recalled, enjoyed and understood. Active methods require us to ‘make our own meaning’, that is, develop our own conceptualisations of what we are learning.’
(Teaching Today: a Practical Guide Geoff Petty 2004)
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Listening
Practice by doing
Teaching others, immediate use of learning
Discussion group
Demonstration
Audio-visual
Reading
5%
10%
20%
30%
50%
75%
90%
Learning retention
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Encourages ‘deep’ alongside ‘surface’ learningEnables learners to
tackle problems that are harder & more realistic than those they could do alone
Challenges learners to recognise language features, patterns, rules for themselves
Uses whole texts to explore language in use
Not a passive ‘mug and jug’ approach to literacy teaching
Uses reading tasks to prepare for writing activities
Active Learning in Functional English
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