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November 2009

Adrian Stephens, Intel Corporation

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Submission

802.11 TGmb Editor Report - Nov 2009

Date: 2009-11-03

Name Company Address Phone email Adrian Stephens Intel

Corporation [email protected]

Authors:

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Abstract

• This document summarises editorial activities on the TGmb Draft since the last meeting

• Status of Draft

• Status of comments from LB149

• Style

• E-Motions

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REVmb Draft Numbering History (>D1)

• D1.0, 2009-05 – Balloted as LB149

• D1.01, 2009-07 – speculative resolution of editorials

• D1.02, 2009-08 – speculative resolution of minor technical comments

• D1.03, 2009-08 – editing of approved resolutions

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Process for D1.04-D1.06

• D1.04 contains speculative editing of ~200 non-editorial comment resolutions approved in Sept 2009

• D1.04 was reviewed and ~xxx defects were reported

• D1.05 was prepared containing a roll-up of STD 802.11w-2009

• D1.05 was reviewed and ~xxx defects were reported

• D1.06 was prepared containing bugfixes for the D1.04 and D1.05 defects.

• Thankyou to the reviewers:

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LB149 Documents

• REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website)– Draft P802.11REVmb_D1.06.pdf

• + Incremental redlines D1.04->D1.05 etc

• Composite comments (all ad-hocs)– 11-09-0706-02-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls

• Comments assigned to / held by editor– For: resolution, editing or other action

– 11-09-0956-00-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls

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WG Ballot 149 Comments

Count Part of No VoteType of Comment N Y Grand Total

E 224 15 239T 313 178 491

Grand Total 537 193 730

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Status by ad-hoc – 2009-11-03 (summary)O

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ARCHITECTURE 80 11 57 148EDITOR 219 7 233 459

GEN 41 7 48MAC 11 5 31 13 4 64

SECURITY 2 9 11Grand Total 132 12 44 79 219 11 233 730

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E-Motions

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“Go to ballot” Motion

• Having approved comment resolutions for all of the comments received from the first working group ballot on P802.11REVmb D1.0,

• Instruct the editor to prepare Draft 2.0 incorporating these resolutions and,

• Approve a 15 day Working Group Recirculation Ballot asking the question “Should P802.11REVmb D2.0 be forwarded to Sponsor Ballot?”

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Sept 2009

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Process for D1.01-D1.03

• D1.01 contains speculative editing of editorial comment resolutions (~770 pages modified)

• D1.01 was reviewed (~100 defects reported)

• D1.02 contains speculative editing of minor technical comment resolutions, and resolution of the D1.01 defects (~410 pages modifed)

• D1.02 was reviewed (~20 defects reported)

• D1.03 contains editing of comment resolutions approved in July 2009, plus resolution of the D1.02 defects (~12 pages modified)

• D1.03 was reviewed and no defects were reported

• Thankyou to the reviewers: Bill, Eldad, Gary, Jon, Kaberi, Mark, Matthew, Michael, Peter, Stephen and Sudheer

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LB149 Documents

• REVmb DRAFT (members’ area of 802.11 website)– Draft P802.11REVmb_D1.03.pdf + D1.02, D1.01, D1.0

– + Incremental redlines D1.02->D1.03 etc

• Composite comments (all ad-hocs)– 11-09-0706-02-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-comments.xls

• Comments assigned to / held by editor– For: resolution, editing or other action

– 11-09-0956-00-000m-revmb-wg-ballot-editor-comments.xls

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WG Ballot 149 Comments

Count Part of No VoteType of Comment N Y Grand Total

E 224 15 239T 313 178 491

Grand Total 537 193 730

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Status by ad-hoc – 2009-09-01 (summary)

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ARCHITECTURE 80 68 148EDITOR 57 13 7 228 305

GEN 93 7 1 101MAC 96 3 20 5 124

SECURITY 4 48 52Grand Total 273 10 194 13 12 228 730

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Style – “Puttin’ on the Ritz” **

• Decisions on global edits made by TGmb are effectively creating a “TGmb style”

• Adrian and Bill are creating a document to describe this style– Based on decisions made by TGmb on editorial comments

• This style does not apply to amendments to STD-2007, but will apply to amendments to STD-20xx.

• Learnings from early TGn publication editing: publication editor will ensure stylistic consistency with STD-2007

• Some unknowns: will publication editor of STD-20xx reverse some of these stylistic decisions?– Are we wasting our time worrying about this now?– Are we creating work for publication editor?

** http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Puttin'_on_the_Ritz

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Compiling the MIB

• Hide any editorial tags

• Save contents of Annex D and Annex Q as text

• Move contents of Annex Q just before “END” statement of Annex D.

• Comment out headings and Editorial Notes

• Run through MIB Browser– If any errors fix them up till the file compiles while making

matching changes in the Annex D / Annex Q sources.

– Freeware MIB browsers are available that can perform this compilation.

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E-Motions

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Editorial Motion 1

• Approve resolutions of P802.11REVmb WG ballot 149 comments– in document 11-09-0956r0

– on the “Editorials” tab

• Marshall/Stephens

• Motion # 6: 9,0,1Part of No Vote A D P U Grand Total

N 118 21 76 1 216Y 5 3 2 10

Grand Total 123 24 78 1 226

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Editorial Motion 2


– on the “Minor Technical” tab

• Worstell/Montemurro

• Motion # 7: 6,0,4Part of No Vote A D P S U Grand Total

N 19 2 19 40Y 5 2 4 11

Grand Total 19 2 24 2 4 51

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Editorial Motion 3


– on the “MIB” tab

• Montemurro/Marshall

• Motion # 8

• Withdrawn

• One comment (P), “compile the MIB”, see submission 11-09/0921r1

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Editorial Motion 4


– on the “Annex C” tab

• Moved: Stephens / Myles

• Motion # 9: 5,4,2

• Proposed resolutions replace Annex C by a placeholder.Part of No Vote P Grand Total

N 6 6Y 1 1

Grand Total 7 7

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“Go to ballot” Motion

• Having approved comment resolutions for all of the comments received from the first working group ballot on P802.11REVmb D1.0,

• Instruct the editor to prepare Draft 2.0 incorporating these resolutions and,

• Approve a 15 day Working Group Recirculation Ballot asking the question “Should P802.11REVmb D2.0 be forwarded to Sponsor Ballot?”

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