don't look now
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Don’t Look NowDr Steve GaunsonRMIT University
Adapting a shortA short doesn’t have the scope to do everything a novel can
It has to imply a lot without explaining
This is why horror short stories often work better than fleshed-out novelsSome of the best horror films are based on short storiesThe film shows the backstory
55 pagesThis short is around 55 pages.
Half the length of a novella
This seems a pretty good length for feature adaptation.
It can tell its story in some detail — and focus on the characters
Think of John pondering how he will tell the police the truth about his wife’s whereabouts
The short story feels like a character story — more than genre piece
A shorter length wouldn’t have had this luxury
Encourages the reader to become a viewer — and think about it as a cinematic work
Imitation — Updates certain aspects of the source while refusing to change others.
Daphne du Maurier and Nicholas RoegFemale author – male director
Is there a issue with this? Would it have been more successful if a female directed this?
Criticism for the film: Roeg ‘feminised’ the story by making it a love story between husband and wife
The film gives Laura a POVThe love sceneAlways a distance: John (American), Laura (British)
Roeg’s film has a kinder settingDo you agree? Is this a problem?Does it shift from its chiller element?The film is a family melodrama
AdjustmentAdjusts, changes, and alters the source
without losing the sentiment.Water becomes a stronger theme in the film
Christine drowns — doesn’t die from meningitisWatching this give us more empathy/sympathy with Laura and John
Water means death – body pulled from the water in Venice
Water is connected to tragedy.
It seems odd that they would choose Venice — which is why Roeg makes it part of John’s job (to restore an old church)
John has a real purpose to be in VeniceNot tourists
RevisionRevisions seek to alter the meaning
and spirit of the sourceRed coat doesn’t have the same meaning in the story
Christine wears a prominent red coatConnects to the red coat seen in Venice.John isn’t chasing a little girl — but ghost. He’s trying to save his daughter
Red is also associated with the city of VeniceRed becomes the colour of death
CelebrationHeavy reluctance to change the exact
words or sentiment of the source.Tale about images, framing and cutting is told by images, framing and cutting.
The story ‘sees’ images – the film ‘shows’ images.
In the film people are shown watching, but what they watch is frequently unsettling (story doesn’t have the scope for this)The film is centrally interested in its sounds and images between the cutting of past, present, and future. The story is far more linear.
ColonisationThe adapter puts their own unique
style on the source.Great similarity to Roeg’s other films Walkabout and The Man Who Fell To Earth
Think of cutting and sounds
Rapid shots infuse Venice with John’s fear, imprionsing the viewer behind bars and screensFrequently the camera is placed literally within Venice’s underworld positioned at obscure, low angles (as if he is being watched from the below)Venice becomes more than a backdrop and location
Venice is out of season – dead of winter
It’s not Venice the prepackaged work of artThink how differently this Venice is to The Tourist
Final ThoughtDaphne du Maurier really liked the film — because Roeg never went from the sentiment of the storyThe film is about fleshing out the motifs and themes from the storyA story about not being in charge of one’s fateIt’s equally a celebration and adjustment – for it is both literary and cinematic
It’s adjustments are to bring attention to how simply and poignant the short story actually is.