Double page spread audience feedback

By Amber Gardner

• This was my first draft of my double page spread of Bloom which again was influenced by existing pop magazines We Love Pop and Top Of The Pops.

Audience feedback• You need some secondary images

to make it more appealing a young audience

• Move the page numbers to the end of the page

• Maybe horizontally flip the main image to the other side of the page to structure it better

• Move the pull quote in the middle of the text to break it up more and reduce block text

• Anchor the main image to provide clarity

Final double page spread• I have followed my audience

feedback to form a new effective layout which is more visually pleasing. Also I have manipulated the main image by enhancing her makeup and air brushing her armpit to make her look more attractive to readers. I have also followed the house style of my front cover and contents page by using a similar colour scheme and same fonts