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Activity 1
Use the mark scheme below and work in pairs to grade the 4 exemplar pieces ofwork. You must try and place the work into the correct level. Wherever possible youshould use a best fit model this means that you take an overall view rather thanharshly penalising for one fault. Use the space provided to give specific examples
and write a summary comment at the bottom of the page. You are examining the!"#$%! &'(')$"!
NON STOP POP
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#
incl$din! and
e%cl$din!
elements as
appropriate
&'() Some !ood
positionin! o
t"e ima!es
w"ic" are c$t
o$t o*ac+!ro$nds,
-owever not
always e.ective
and loo+s
$nproessional
in section,
/$ttin! o. t"e
arm and t"e top
"air on t"e
cover pa!e,$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances asappropriate
&'0) "ere are a
ran!e odi.erent ima!es
s"owin!s close
$ps 3 medi$m
s"ots etc,
-owever not
always
appropriate in
all parts o t"e
ma!a4ine,s"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas+ set
&20) Most
ima!es are
ta+en on a well
lit *ac+drop
"owever some
ima!es on t"e
do$*le pa!e
spread don5t
ollow t"e
conventions
and "aven5t
*een
proessionally
ta+en,selectin! miseen
sc6ne incl$din!
&27) Minimal
miseenscene
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colo$r# 8!$re#
li!"tin!# o*9ects
and settin!
in all pa!es o
t"e ma!a4ine
"owever# some
as"ion o*9ects
relatin! to t"e
!enre "ave
*een c$t o$t on
t"e cover pa!e,manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s as
appropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resi4in!
&'() Si4in! o
t"e ima!es is
relevant and 8ts
t"e yo$n!
a$dience
conte%t, "e
presentation o
t"e ima!es are
well str$ct$red
"owever inplaces don5t
loo+ very neat,acc$rately $sin!
lan!$a!e and
re!ister
&:;) "e
lan!$a!e is
very *asic and
8ts t"e
a$dience and
re!ister o t"e
ma!a4ine,
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onts and te%t si4e especially on
t"e ront cover#
"owever loo+s
$nproessional
and not
appealin! to
t"e desi!n, "is
ma+es it
di=c$lt to
$nderstand as
a w"ole,$sin!
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FLAW&
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#
incl$din! and
e%cl$din!
elements as
appropriate
&';) Some !ood
$se o e%cl$sion
o *ac+!ro$nd
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appropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resi4in!
si4in! "owever
not presented
in a
proessional
way# especially
t"e corners o
ima!es, "e
conte%t is
relevant and
sym*olises t"e
roc+3indie
!enre,acc$rately $sin!
lan!$a!e and
re!ister
&'B) "e
lan!$a!e and
re!ister is very
!ood and
represents t"e
!enre well $sin!t"e correct
lan!$a!e and
well written,
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need or variety in
onts and te%t si4e
ont displayed
t"ro$!"o$t
w"ic" varies in
si4e d$e to
relevance,
Some ont
"owever
irrelevant and in
t"e wron!
places,$sin!
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STACK
Minimal
Level 110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#incl$din! and
e%cl$din!
elements as
appropriate
&'() < t"in+ t"att"e ramin! o
s"ots "as *een
e.ectively
positioned and
s"ow relevant
*ac+!ro$nd
e%cl$sion,$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances as
appropriate
&:;) A variety o
s"ots are $sed#
incl$din! close
$ps# and medi$m
s"ots, "e p"otodistances are
very relevant and
wor+ well
com*ined,s"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas+ set
&2>) Minimal
s"ootin!
material# as no
li!"tin!
*ac+drops are
$sed w"ic"
compromises
@$ality, "e
p"otos are all
ta+en in *$sy
environments
meanin! no
p"oto st$dio
"as *een $sed,selectin! miseen
sc6ne incl$din!
colo$r# 8!$re#
li!"tin!# o*9ects
and settin!
&:2) Cery
relevant miseen
scene# incl$din!
tattoo e@$ipment
w"ic" is relevantto t"e
roc+3indie3alterna
tive !enre, "ere
is also a !$itar
and a
microp"one
eat$red s"owin!
t"e m$sic !enre,
"e as"ion
clot"in! is also
e.ective and 8ts
well wit" t"ema!a4ine,
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manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s as
appropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resi4in!
&'0) All o t"e
p"oto!rap"s are
very appropriate
or t"e conte%t#
"owever doesn5t
present a clear
@$ality and loo+
poor in
presentation in
places, Re si4in!
variation
"owever is
e.ectively $sed#
especially on t"e
contents and
do$*le pa!e
spread,
acc$rately $sin!lan!$a!e and
re!ister
& '>) "elan!$a!e re!ister
is very relevant
to t"e conte%t
and 8ts well wit"
t"e a$dience,
"ere is plenty o
in dept" detail
especially on t"e
do$*le pa!e
spread,appropriately
inte!ratin!ill$stration and
te%t
&'() e%t is
mostly wellinte!rated and
spaced apart
well# s"owin!
!ood $se o
presentation, "e
ill$strations are
inte!rated well
on top and
*e"ind t"e te%t
*o%es,s"owin!
$nderstandin! oconventions o
layo$t and pa!e
desi!n
&';) Some
!ood $se osimple3*$sy
ma!a4ine
conventions
t"ro$!"o$t
ma!a4ine
"owever no
central direct
eye contact is
$sed
s$!!estin! a
less e.ective
com*ination o
inormation,
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s"owin!
awareness o t"e
need or variety in
onts and te%t si4e
&'() ood
variation o te%t
across t"e
ma!a4ine
relevant to t"e
conte%t, "e
titles all are
lar!er t"an t"e
small para!rap"s
and t"e styles 8t
t"e !enre,$sin!
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appropriate variation#
medi$m s"ots
and a close $p,
Distance not
always relevant
and in t"e
correct spacin!,s"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas+ set
&2') $ality o
t"e camera is
poor and t"e
li!"tin!
e@$ipment is
minimal, "e
*ac+drop wall is
a d$ll !reen
and not a
proessional
w"ite wall,selectin! miseen
sc6ne incl$din!
colo$r# 8!$re#
li!"tin!# o*9ects
and settin!
&2')
-eadp"ones
and !$itar are
$sed "owever
t"e !$itar is
irrelevant to t"e
d$* 4one !enre,manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s as
appropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#incl$din! croppin!
and resi4in!
&21)
P"oto!rap"s
not always
relevant w"en
placed# limitedcroppin! o$t#
c$ttin! o
corners, Re
si4in! is need#
*arcode too
*i!,acc$rately $sin!
lan!$a!e and
re!ister
&2:) Some
lan!$a!e
relevant to t"e
d$* 4one
!enre# some
te%t minimaland irrelevant,
appropriately
inte!ratin!
ill$stration and
te%t
&2') e%t and
ill$strations not
inte!rated
proessionally#
compact
presentation
leavin! t"e
pa!es $nclear
to read,s"owin!
$nderstandin! oconventions o
&22) Attempt to
$seconventional
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layo$t and pa!e
desi!n
layo$t desi!ns#
especially on
t"e contents
pa!e, -owever
cover pa!e
eat$res too *i!
and do$*le
pa!e spread
isn5t str$ct$red
well,s"owin!
awareness o t"e
need or variety in
onts and te%t si4e
&22) A complete
ran!e o ont
ran!e w"ic" is
irrelevant w"en
com*ined loo+s
$nproessional,
"e si4e in
many partsdoesn5t loo+
e.ective and
s"ows limited
s+ills,$sin!
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Task 2
"ow using the skills youve ac-uired in task evaluate your own work and ten
two pieces of work from classmates. Use the space provided to give specificexamplesand write a summary comment at the bottom of the page.
!a"a#ine title$ SO%O &'mily Turton(
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#
incl$din! and
e%cl$din!
elements as
appropriate
&'0) S"ots are
well ramed and
loo+
proessional#
"owever more
variation in
e%cl$din!elements wo$ld
*e e.ective to
display a ran!e
o s+ills,$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances as
appropriate
&:;) ood
appropriate
s"ot variation
t"ro$!"o$t t"e
ma!a4ine#
incl$din!
medi$m s"ots
and lon! s"ots,Gsin! close$ps
and e%treme
lon! s"ots
wo$ld ma+e t"e
ran!e more
impressive
"owever,s"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas+ set
&:1) Mostly
e.ective
li!"tin! and
appropriate
s"ootin!
e@$ipment
w"ic" ma+es
t"e ima!es
clear, Some
ima!es do
"owever s"ow
s"adows w"ic"
advanced
li!"tin!
e@$ipment
co$ld remove,selectin! miseen &':) ood $se
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sc6ne incl$din!
colo$r# 8!$re#
li!"tin!# o*9ects
and settin!
o props li+e
!$itar# and
clot"in!
relevant to t"e
!enre, -owever
*ri!"ter
li!"tin! wo$ld
improve t"e
overall @$ality
o t"e ima!es,manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s as
appropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resi4in!
&'0) P"otos are
manip$lated
well and
appropriate to
t"e conte%t,
Some re si4in!
"as *een $sed
"owever noc$ttin! o$t o
en"ancin! "as
*een $sed#
w"ic" co$ld
improve t"e
loo+,acc$rately $sin!
lan!$a!e and
re!ister
&:;) Relevant
lan!$a!e $sed
w"ic" is
acc$rate 9$st
some small
alterationswo$ld complete
t"e a$dience
lan!$a!e
re!ister,appropriately
inte!ratin!
ill$stration and
te%t
&'() e%t and
ima!es are well
inte!rated in
most places
s"owin! a loo+
o
proessionalism
"owever t"eront pa!e te%t
can appear $n
clear on top o
t"e main ima!e,s"owin!
$nderstandin! o
conventions o
layo$t and pa!e
desi!n
&:;) ood clear
$nderstandin!
o typical
ma!a4ine
conventions
and desi!ns
w"ic" are
e.ectively
presented,
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Especially t"e
eye ocal point
on t"e ront
cover,s"owin!
awareness o t"e
need or variety in
onts and te%t si4e
&'7) "ere is a
!ood ran!e o
ont variation
and si4e overall
*$t < t"in+ t"at
more onts
co$ld ma+e t"e
consistency
loo+ more
e%citin! and
impressive,$sin!
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p"oto even
*etter,$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances as
appropriate
&:') A !ood
ran!e o s"ots
"ave *een $sed
incl$din!
medi$m and
lon! s"ots, Also
eac" ima!e
s"ows !ood $se
o positionin! in
t"e ima!e
s"owin! an
e.ective
distance,s"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas+ set
&:;) Most o t"e
s"ootin!
material is very
well $sed#
incl$din! a $ll
si4e st$dio wit"
li!"tin! and a
!ood @$ality
camera,
-owever some
ima!es on t"e
contents co$ld
do wit" sli!"t
ad9$stments to
en"ance t"e@$ality,
selectin! miseen
sc6ne incl$din!
colo$r# 8!$re#
li!"tin!# o*9ects
and settin!
&:1) ood $se
o miseen
scene# incl$din!
a !$itar# and a
ran!e o in
!enre clot"in!
and props li+e a
pair o *ri!"t
!reen !lasses,manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s asappropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resi4in!
&:() E%cellent
$se omanip$latin!
p"otos,
/roppin!# re
si4in!# ima!e
en"ancement
and adin! "as
*een $sed
s$ccess$lly to
ac"ieve a
proessional
loo+,
acc$rately $sin!lan!$a!e and
&:2) oodlan!$a!e
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re!ister re!ister w"ic"
clearly
represents t"e
conte%t o t"e
ma!a4ine, ?nly
minor spellin!
mista+es w"ic"
co$ld *e
improved,appropriately
inte!ratin!
ill$stration and
te%t
&:() e%t and
ill$strations
"ave *een very
well inte!ratin!
*etween eac"
ot"er and
*e"ind3 on top,
"e overall loo+
is appropriateand e.ective,s"owin!
$nderstandin! o
conventions o
layo$t and pa!e
desi!n
&:;) ood $se
o typical
ma!a4ine
layo$t
conventions
w"ic" is seen
an all pa!es,
"e same loo+
is consistently
seen t"ro$!"
o$t also,s"owin!
awareness o t"e
need or variety in
onts and te%t si4e
&'7) Gses a
!ood variation
in te%t si4es
especially on
t"e do$*le
pa!e spread,
-owever more
ont variation
co$ld *e $sed
to s"ow a
ran!e o
di.erent loo+swit"in t"e
tar!eted !enre,$sin!
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wo$ld increase
t"e level o
s+ills,
S$mmary /omment
< t"in+ t"at t"is ma!a4ine /-?RD wor+s e%tremely well and 8ts wit"in t"eindie3alternative !enre, "e lan!$a!e and ill$strations $sed reHect t"e ideal conte%t and"ave *een inte!rated e.ectively, "e overall loo+ is proessional and ollows a moresimplistic loo+# "owever even more P"otos"op s+ills co$ld wo$ld ma+e it even *etter,
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!a"a#ine title$ T)' ,-N' &Carles Timms(
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#
incl$din! ande%cl$din!
elements as
appropriate
&'() All s"ots
are wellpositioned and
elements are
e%cl$ded w"ere
necessary,
Some elements
are sli!"tly
plain and
s"o$ld consider
re introd$cin! a
*ac+!ro$nd
element,$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances as
appropriate
&2:) All s"ots
are medi$m
s"ots wit" a
very little
variation in
distance
*etween eac"
one, "ey do
loo+
appropriate
"owever more
an!les anddistance ran!e
wo$ld present
more s+ills and
a *etter
$nderstandin!,s"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas+ set
&'0) All ima!es
are o !ood
@$ality and
incl$din! t"e
camera, All
ima!es were
ta+en inside ap"oto!rap"y
st$dio and
t"ereore "ad
!ood li!"tin!
e@$ipment as
well,selectin! miseen
sc6ne incl$din!
colo$r# 8!$re#
li!"tin!# o*9ects
and settin!
&2') Cery
minimal level o
miseenscene#
no props and a
minimal
variation inclot"in! across
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all ill$strations,
"e li!"tin! is
mostly !ood
*$t only some
settin! is
displayed
s"owin! little
ran!e,manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s as
appropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resi4in!
&'0) Some !ood
$se o p"oto
editin!#
incl$din!
en"ancin!#
croppin! and re
si4in! w"ic" is
relevant to t"e
conte%t,acc$rately $sin!
lan!$a!e and
re!ister
&'7) Some
acc$rate
lan!$a!e
re!isters wit" a
ew mista+es,
Mostly t"e
lan!$a!e 8ts in
wit"in t"e
!enre "owever
does
sometimes loo+
minimal
especially ont"e ront and
contents pa!e,appropriately
inte!ratin!
ill$stration and
te%t
&'7) Some !ood
inte!ration o
te%t and
ill$strations
"owever does
in places not
loo+
proessional
and $nclear to
read w"en te%toverlaps t"e
ima!es,s"owin!
$nderstandin! o
conventions o
layo$t and pa!e
desi!n
&20) Some
$nderstandin!
o conventions
especially on
t"e ront pa!e,
-owever
minimal
conventions
s"own on t"e
contents and
t"e *ottom o
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t"e do$*le
pa!e spreads"owin!
awareness o t"e
need or variety in
onts and te%t si4e
&2:) "ere is a
very *asic level
o ont
variation# some
!ood te%t si4es
across t"e
ma!a4ine *$t
not consistently
s"own,$sin!
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'ask 3 'arget setting
Gse t"e eed*ac+ rom yo$r classmates to set tar!ets to improve yo$r wor+,Gse t"e !rid *elow to oc$s yo$r areas or improvement, ry to *e as speci8c
as possi*le and w"ere possi*le create one tar!et or eac" area o t"e mar+sc"eme, Remem*er to *e realistic# t"at means ma+in! s$re yo$r tar!ets areac"ieva*le and realistic or yo$r a*ility,
!a"a#ine title$ AS. &!y !a"a#ine +raft(
Minimal Level
110 23 marks
Basic Level 22435 marks
Procienc!Level 33"4# marks
E$cellenceLevel 44%"0 marks
ramin! a s"ot#
incl$din! and
e%cl$din!elements as
appropriate
&'>) Framin!
s"ots "as *een
e.ectively donew"ic" loo+s
proessional
and e.ective,
-owever more
elements co$ld
*e added in to
s"ow variation
in desi!n$sin! a variety o
s"ot distances as
appropriate
&'7) S"ot
variation is
@$ite little wit"
only medi$mand lon! s"ots
*ein! $sed,
/lose$ps and
variation in
distance wo$ld
ma+e t"e
ma!a4ine more
appropriate,s"ootin! material
appropriate to t"e
tas+ set
&'>) ood $se
o "i!" @$ality
camera and
li!"t e@$ipmentw"ic" is
reHected in t"e
ill$strations,selectin! miseen
sc6ne incl$din!
colo$r# 8!$re#
li!"tin!# o*9ects
and settin!
&'7) /lot"in! is
wit"in !enre
and loo+s
e.ective
"owever t"ere
is little
variation and
no props in any
ill$strations,"e li!"tin! is
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!ood *$t no
settin! is
s"own in any
part o t"e
ma!a4ine,manip$latin!
p"oto!rap"s as
appropriate to t"e
conte%t or
presentation#
incl$din! croppin!
and resi4in!
&'0) < t"in+ t"at
t"e
p"oto!rap"s
are appropriate
or t"e conte%t
and are
presented well#
incl$din! t"e
$se o croppin!#
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