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Beyond Your Degree:Personal Statements
Student Development ServicesWriting Support Centre
UCC 210www.sds.uwo.ca/writing
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Outline
Purpose
Content
Style
Examples
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Personal Statement
Purpose:
Companion to your resume/CV/application
How do you stand out?
How well do you write/think?
Weed out the weak
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Content
Emphasis on “Personal” statement
Don’t write what you think they want to hear
Pick your best qualities and write a well-developed statement
Complement, don’t repeat, your application package
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Content
Read the instructions
Emphasis differs among schools and disciplines
Professional Schools:
You as a person
Graduate Schools:
You as a scholar
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Content
Often, you answer specific questions
As few as 1, as many as 7
Be as specific as possible
Don’t be shy
Be honest
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Coming up with Content
Serious soul-searching
Talk to your friends and family
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Content to Include
The 1 or 2 aspects that you would like to showcase
How you would fit into the school/program
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Content to Avoid
Controversial subjects (religion, politics)
Praising the school
Outdated information
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Presenting the Content
Not what you say, but how you say it
Not a resume in paragraph form
Pick a few examples and give details
Show, don’t tell
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Style
Multi-paragraph essay
Paragraph Organization
Sentence Structure
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Multi-Paragraph Essay
Paragraph Organization:
Intro-Body-Conclusion
Roughly 10-80-10 word distribution
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Thesis Statement
Directly answer the question / introduce what you will be writing about
The most important part of an essay
Thesis = Argument
More than just the topic
More than just your position
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Thesis Example
BAD: I feel I am a good candidate for your graduate program.
BETTER: My wealth of academic experience has prepared me for your graduate program.
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Introduction
Two options:
Thesis statement alone
Motivator-Thesis
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Motivator-Thesis
Take a few sentences to lead up to your thesis
Use an anecdote, quotation (short), preamble that leads to your thesis
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Thesis Statement Alone
Pros:
Get right to the point
Save space
Cons:
Can seem abrupt
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Motivator-Thesis
Pros:
Start out on a personal note
Ease the reader into your essay
Cons:
Takes up space
Not always appropriate
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Body
All content should come back to the thesis
Follow a logical order (A-B, B-C, C-D)
Cover one topic per paragraph
Explain everything
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Conclusion
Revisit your thesis
Extend beyond your topic
Maybe a new point
General
Specific
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Sentence Structure
Short sentences
Mix up the structure
Simple, compound and complex sentences
Avoid ‘I-itis’
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Resources
Purdue Online Writing Lab
owl.english.purdue.edu
How to Write a Winning Personal Statement
by Richard Stelzer
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Examples