Draft 3 of group presentation

Alexa

Haben

Kayleigh

EBI - too basic - storyboard is really not done - incomplete sides

www- re4search shows good knowledge

Part b HOW TO IMPROVE?

• Don’t have too much on research

• Organise power points • Detail structure for all

episodes • Storyboard needs to be

detailed

What we have done to our idea?

• Our idea now focuses on topic clearly

• We have subtopics • Well structured • Clear examples

Teachers assessment sheets for presenation 1

Teachers assessment sheets for presentation 1

Teachers assessment sheets for presentation 1

Part c- How ideas are developed

• Our first draft was really basic

• We had no clear topic in the 5 minutes

• we didn’t have structure for whole topic

• Very generalized

Draft 1

Part c- How ideas are developed

for draft two we had basic topic structure

It was very detailedSome slides was

clear and others too much

Sometimes there was too much writing on slides

We need to separate it in order to make it clear

No subtopic

Draft 2

Part c- How ideas are developed Draft 3 the ideas were clearerSubtopics were thereSubtopics linked well

with episodesWould better if we had

its more structures and specific

E.g. - music video- we should have specific genre

Draft 4 – current draft

• More Precise

• Subtopics link to topic

• Structure is well organised

• Clear topics

• Examples to prove e.g.- music