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I chose to change the word create into produce, I done this by right clicking the word and clicking the Synonyms button which was on the drop down section, I had a variety of words to choose and felt that produce fit well with the sentence.
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I realised there was a spelling mistake in the sentence and used spell check to find the correct spelling, which by clicking the change button automatically alters the mistake.
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I used the spelling and grammar check to correct the sentence as I misspelt the word.
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I realised that I needed to edit this sentence because it in fact was not true and the presentation I had made was not below the entry.
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I realised a coma was needed here, this sentence would be too long if not.
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As you can see I edited the sentence by adding an example of what a panning shot is, the sentence was very dull before and now has an explanation of the example.