english 105 – week 8!!
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English 105 – Week 8!!. Turn in: Research Scaffold Vocab Benchmark Agenda: Frag /Run on Review Capt & Punct Proj /Benchmark. Teri “of Doom” Tosspon. Review – Sentence Combining. Coordinating 1.Use a comma & a coordinating conjunction (101) - PowerPoint PPT PresentationTRANSCRIPT
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English 105 – Week 8!!Teri “of Doom” Tosspon
Turn in: Research ScaffoldVocab
Benchmark
Agenda:• Frag/Run on
Review•Capt & Punct
•Proj/Benchmark
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Review – Sentence CombiningCoordinating 1.Use a comma & a coordinating conjunction (101)
The speaker rose to his feet, and the room became quiet.2. Use a semicolon, an adverbial conjunction, and a comma – (Pg 107) I worked hard; therefore, I expected results.
3. Use a semicolon (pg 111)I worked hard; I expected results
Subordinating1. Subordinating
Conjunctions (pg 123)
While he was eating breakfast, the news came on.
2. relative pronoun. (Who, whose, whoever, what, whatever, whichever, when, that…) (pg 128)
The researcher who was studying diabetes had a breakthrough.
How to use commas – pg 239-244
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Free Powerpoint Templates
Sentence, Fragment, Run-on Basketball del Tosspon
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Review
A complete sentence• Has a Subject• Has a verb• Forms a complete
thoughtA fragment
• Lacks one or more of the elements
A run-on• Combined incorrectly
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Groups of studentsAnswer all questions on the handout.
When your team is called, 1 person must start the answer by identifying: Sentence, Fragment, or Run-on. Stand, but don’t come to the front.
Scoring:1 pt for identifying (sentence, frag, etc)
correctly. 1 pt to fix a fragment/run on1 pt to identify the subject/verb (when present)
If you get it WRONG at any point, another group can steal the ball and score points
Da Rules:
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Capitalization and PunctuationSee handout
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Why?Writers use capital letters and punctuation marks to help the reader better understand what is written.
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1st word of every sentence
All sentences begin with capital letters.We enjoyed reading the book.Those girls finished cleaning the counter.
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Specific things/places (proper nouns)
Proper nouns begin with capital letters.Mrs. Clark asked if Amy would help.We went to Texas with my Uncle Rob.
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Capital LettersThe pronoun I is always capitalized.I don’t need your help.My aunt and I picked up the papers.
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Capital LettersA capital letter begins the first, last, and any important word in the title of a book, magazine, song, movie, poem, or other work.Read the last chapter of Tom Sawyer.She saw Midnight in the Garden of Good and Evil when she was five years old.We watched “The Wizard of Oz.”
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To capitalize or not to capitalizeDo!
• Days of the week, months of the year, holidays
• Language, nationalities, races, religions, deities, sacred terms
• Titles: the first word and every important term
• First words of direct quotes
• Historical events, periods• People’s names/titles• Brand names
Don’t• Seasons (fall, winter,
etc)• Common nouns that
refer to religious places like “church”
• Titles: do not capitalize articles (the), prepositions (of, under, over), or short connecting words (or, and) unless they start the title
• Directions (north, south, east and west- unless used in a place name)
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Practice, exercise 2 pg 238
1. Every tuesday, the general visits the hospital.
2. On one level, the book the lord of the rings can be read as a fairy tale: on another level, the book can be read as a christian allegory.
3. The golden gate bridge in san francisco may be the most beautiful bridge in the world.
4. She is the sister of my french teacher.
Tuesday, the general visits the hospital.
The Lord of the Rings
Christian allegory.
Golden Gate Bridge in San Francisco may
French teacher.
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Practice, exercise 2 pg 238 continued5. I’ve always wanted to take a trip to the
far east in spring.
6. The kremlin, located in moscow, once housed the soviet government
7. I needed to see dr. Ghavami, but the nurse told me the doctor would not be in until next week.
8. He shouted angrily, “why don’t you ever arrive at your history class on time?”
I’ve always wanted to take a trip to the Far East in spring.
The Kremlin, located in Moscow, once housedthe Soviet government.
I needed to see Dr. Ghavami, but the nurse told
“Why don’t you ever arrive
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Punctuation: Commaseparate three or more items in a list or a phrase. I need hot dogs, buns, and ketchup. OrI need hot dogs, buns and ketchup.
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Punctuation: Commaseparates items in an address or date.Miami, Florida, is great…January 6, 2003, was a …
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Punctuation: CommaSet off number of adjectives that modify a nounMy favorite, old, green coat.
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Punctuation: CommaTo combine two simple sentences, use the comma and a coordinating conjunction (FANBOYS)The house was on fire, but I was determined not to leave.
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Punctuation: Comma
Follow introductory words, expressions (prepositional or adverbial phrases):• In the beginning, the movie was terrible!
Surrounding word/phrase when the idea interrupts (appositive). • Dave, who is a doctor, said to!
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Punctuation: Comma
In numbers of one thousand+• 1,001
Set off exact words in a dialog• “I won’t,” he insisted, “do this!”
When you need a short pause• To John, Russel is the best!To John Russel is the best.
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Practice1. In Weaverville California the local high
school administrators made an interesting discovery.
2. At a cost of four hundred dollars a year per student a private company was offering college-level advanced placement courses on the web.
3. Because some students need these courses to get into more competitive colleges everyone thought this would be a perfect way to take advantage of the new technology.
1. In Weaverville, California, the local high school administrators made an interesting discovery.
2. At a cost of four hundred dollars a year per student, a private company was offering college-level advanced placement courses on the web.
3. Because some students need these courses to get into more competitive colleges, everyone thought this would be a perfect way to take advantage of the new technology.
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Continued
4. Brian Jones, a senior who wants to be a record producer, and Jeremy Forbes, a classmate who dreams of being a cartoonist,..
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Punctuation: Apostrophe
Possessive = Use apostrophe!• The teacher’s pen
(one teacher owns the pen)• The Teachers’ pens
(more than one teacher owns pens)
• Good rule of thumb: if the s comes before a verb, it usually isn’t possessive. The teachers drove to work. Plural. More than 1.
Plural = Don’t Use! (except special circumstances)The cats wore pajamas. (more than 1 cat wore them)They were the cats’ pajamas. (more than 1 cat owned pajamas)
Cats’
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Other uses of Apostrophe
To form plurals (prevent confusion)• he writes a’s and o’s
When one+ letters omitted• Can’t, shouldn’t, She’ll
he writes as and os
Cannot, Should not, She will
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Practice1. sun’s rays2. press’s 3. room’s4. Anthony and Maria’s5. nobody’s 6. his7. Queen Elizabeth’s
reign
8. boys’9. book’s
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Punctuation: Quotation Marks
Quotation marks are used to identify the exact words of a speaker .Mr. Bush said, “We will not tire, we will not falter, and we will not fail.”
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Punctuation: Quotation Marks
Quotes or Material copied word-for-word from a sourceTitles of short stories, one-act plays, poems, articles, songs, essays, chapters of booksWhen terms are referred to in a special way.
It’s a “roach coach” diner.
Dave “Wolfman” Hineman
Yes, it was a “special” dinner for Hannibal Lecter.
Not the real
Name!Not his
real Name!
A special (sometimes ironic)
meaning!
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Punctuation: Semi-ColonTo join 2 independent clauses
• They were lost. He decided to use the map; she decided to ask.
In front of adverbial conjunction to join 2 sentences
• He decided to use a map; however, she decided to ask. In a series of items when the items themselves have commas!
• I had lunch with Linda, my best friend; Mrs. Armstrong, my English teacher; and Jan, my sister-in-law.
With the semicolon, there are 3 women having lunch w/ me.
Without, there are 6 women having lunch with me.
I had lunch with Linda, my best friend, Mrs. Armstrong, my English teacher, and Jan, my sister-in-law.
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Punctuation: ColonBefore a list of items• Please order: five dozen pencils, twenty rulers, and five tacks.
In the salutation of business letter• To whom it may concern:
Indicating time• 1:15pm
Between title and subtitle of a book• In Plain English Please: A Rhetoric
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The Final Benchmark Assignment
English 105
T. Tosspon
Heald College
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Possible topic ideasExplain the causes for the
popularity of fast food restaurants.
What effect does the Internet have on businesses and corporations?
What are the effects of the illiteracy?
How mood is affected by weather?
What effect and after-math can have the vanishing of the animal and plant species?
Analyze the effects of excessive television viewing on a particular audience.
The influence of TV advertising on gender identity.Soccer: Why it can't make the big time in the USA?Discuss three or four good effects of a college education. Supply appropriate examples for each.What are the actual and potential consequences of nuclear leaks and meltdowns?What caused the proliferation of the bubonic plague in the Middle Ages?What problems do cities cause? Technology and its effect on human freedom and happiness in society.
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Now, choose the best of those reasons and start breaking them down
Child care
Should be free!
Child care should be free
Russia provides it, why can’t we?
Free care would prevent abuse and neglect
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Essay planning part 2
Take each one of your “Reasons” from the topic starter
Develop each one more fully into a paragraphwith 2+ examples
Free care would prevent abuse and neglectA 2007 survey of 1,000 children who were left at home unattended found that their parents could not afford child care.
Parents who neglect their kids do so because care not affordable
If childcare was free, it would prevent abuse and neglect
My neighbors leave their 4yr old unattended
Because it is unaffordable, they don’t seek childcare
Step 1: write a statement for that reason
Step 2: Prove (give examples that support)
that statement using a direct
quote OR paraphrase
Step 3: Explain: What does that
SHOW about this topic
Step 4: Explain: how does that
connect to your THESIS!
Use phrases:
This shows that…
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Due :
Rough Draft of Essay (due next week!)