English Composition

英语书面表达

2011 年是福清市创建文明城市年，市委、市政府发出号召：争创文明城市，争做文明市民。为配合此项活动，《福清侨乡报》正在举办“环境因我而清洁、城市因我更文明”为主题的征文活动。请你给《福清侨乡报》投稿，举出一到两个福清市民的不文明行为，并谈一谈作为一名中学生应该如何为创建文明城市做出自己的贡献。

1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 2. 不少于 80 词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

步骤一：审题仔细审题，注意题目的具体要求，明确写作要求，确立短文的体裁，时态和格式。本题是提示作文，写一篇如何为创建文明城市做贡献的

作文。作文总体应以一般现在时态为主。

关于环保

步骤二：注意写作要点。理出写作框架。 本题是提示作文，所给提示的内容一定要写全

面，可以写出不文明的一些行为，然后写自己可以为文明城市建设所做的事情。所用到的短语如： spit,drop litter,obey the rules,more and more beautiful 。

步骤三：连句成篇，注意语言的连贯和过渡。如果写作过程中适当运用连词，如 and ,so , but ， then ， however 等，就会使文章过渡自然。还要注意单词拼写，标点符号，大小写等细节。

独立写作

You have 20 minutes!!

Show yourself !!

Dear editor, I agree with you that everyone should pay more attention to our city environment. However, some people are still doing things that harm the environment, such as spitting, dropping litter or walking across the street when the traffic lights are red. So it's time for us to do something useful to keep our city clean and tidy. As a student, we should obey all kinds of the social rules. When we wait for a bus, we should wait in a line. When we meet the people who need help, we should help them at once. We should keep our classroom and our school clean. If everyone tries their best to protect the environment, our city will become more and more beautiful! Best wishes!

Lili

One possible version

平时要多积累语言素材，坚持长期写作训练，做到善于思考、勤于训练、勇于探究，充分发挥潜在力，对于我们这些农村学校大部分“语言综合能力”偏弱的学生有一定效果。

Tips:

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