English Writing SkillsEnglish Writing SkillsZhangzhou No.5 Middle School

Miss Zheng

Are you good at writing ?

How do you learn to improve your writing skills?

I learn by….

I try to improve my writing by…

• by readingby reading the textbook. the textbook. • by memorizingby memorizing the useful phrases and sentences. the useful phrases and sentences.

• by reading by reading English magazines and English magazines and newspapers.newspapers.

• by studying by studying grammar rules.grammar rules.

• by keepingby keeping a dairy in English. a dairy in English.

   

总体把握，要点齐全；字迹工整，留好印象；

　人称时态，逻辑清楚；关键词汇，动词第一；

　组词成句，结构完整；此路不通，绕道迂回；

　组句成文，连词增色；从句适量，高分有望。

写作决窍写作决窍高分作文？

1. 审题目

2.定基调

3.圈要点

4.列提纲

5. 组词造句

6. 组句成文

7. 改错误

体裁 、 格式、人称主体时态

不遗漏要点句型、关键词语

《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

注意事项 :

确定文体和时态。

人称、顺序、开头、结尾。

书信、日记、通知、留言、假条；看图作文、提示作文

要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了

防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充

分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的

各个要点逐条列出。

根据文章要点将主要句

型、关键词语记下，形成提纲 ,

为写作做好准备。

写句子时要注意灵活表达，不钻“牛角尖”。不会表达，另辟蹊径。

注意事项 :

谴词造句必须符合语言规范，切忌硬译、乱译、避免中文式的英语，或根据语法编造一些不地道的语言；

扬长避短，选择自己熟悉的型。正确使用时态、语态、标点符号和字母的大小写，注意主谓一致和单词拼写的准确性。

1 ）表示并列关系的： and, as well as, or… 2 ）表示转折关系的： but, yet, however… 3 ）表示时间关系的： when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4 ）表示因果关系的： so, therefore ,as a result… 5 ）表示目的的： in order to, in order that , so that… 6 ）表示列举的： for example , such as… 7 ）表示总结性的： in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

注意事项 :

上下文的连贯 适当使用连词

先草稿，后抄写。注意卷面整洁 , 争取印象分 .

1 ）格式是否有错。

2 ）拼写有无错误。

3 ）时态、语态错误。

4 ）标点错误。

5 ）人称是否用错。

6）动词 , 名词 , 冠词和代词。

从以下几个方面检查改错：

华山是中国名山之一。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据以下要点向外国友人简单介绍华山（ the Hua Mountain ）

1．位于陕西东部，是中国著名的旅游胜地，

每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。

2. 从这儿乘汽车去大约要花 2 个小时；也可以乘 火车去。

3. 登山便可领略其云海（ the sea of clouds ） ,奇松 （ wondrous pines ）、怪石（ unique rocks ）

等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。

注意 :1. 字数： 80 词左右。 2．请不要逐字翻译

华山是中国名山之一。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据以下要点向外国友人简单介绍华山（ the Hua Mountain ）

1．位于陕西东部，是中国著名的旅游胜地，

每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。

2. 乘汽车去大约要花 2 个小时；也可以乘 火车去。

3. 登山便可领略其云海（ the sea of clouds ） ,奇松 （ wonder pines ）、怪石（ unique rocks ）

等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。

Simple Present Tense 一般现在时

圈要点① ②

③

④

⑦

⑤列提纲

① east

② famous, place

of interest

③tourists , vist

④It takes…to .. go to…by bus

⑤ also,by train ⑥climb,enjoy ,sights

⑥

⑦ sunrise/rise

1. 位于陕西东部 east

5. 组词造句 :

The Hua Mountain is in the east of Shanxi.lies in the east of Shanxi.

2. 是中国著名的旅游胜地 famous, place of interest ( 华山是中国名山之一 )

The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous

places of interest in China.

The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains

in China.

is/lies in easten Shanxi.

3. 每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光 tourists/visitors , visit

5. 组词造句 :

Thousands of tourists from China and abroad visit there every year.

Thousands of tourists from China and other countries visit there every year. Thousands of Chinese and foreigners visit there every year.

4. 乘汽车去大约要花 2 个小时 It takes…to .. go to…by bus/car

You will spend about two hours going there by bus.

It takes you about two hours to go there by bus .

to take the bus there.

around the world/ all over the world

taking the bus there.

6. 登山便可领略其云海（ the sea of clouds ） ,奇松 enjoy ,sights （ wonder pines ）、怪石（ unique rocks ）等秀丽的风景 climb

5. 组词造句 :

You can also get there by train/on a train.You can get there by train/on a train as well.You can also take a train to go there.

5. 也可以乘 火车去 also, train

When you hike to the top , you will find clouds , wonder pines and unique rocks around you.You can enjoy the sea of clouds, wonder pines and unique rocks at the top of the mountain.You can enjoy the beautiful sights, such as the sea of clouds, wonder pines and unique rocks at the top of the mountain .

7. 清晨美丽的日出 sunrise/rise

5. 组词造句 :

When the sun rises early in the moring, it is very beautiful.

You can appreciate the beautiful sunrise early in the

morning.

Written by 黄夏威

travel spotlight are/come

them

make

sunrise early in the morning

The Hua Mountain is in the east of Shanxi.  It is a famous tra

vel sight in China. Every year, lots of visitors who from every co

untries come to visit it. You can go to the Hua Mountain by car.

It will take you about three hours to go there. You can also go th

ere by train. The Hua Mountain is one of the most beautiful mou

ntains in China. Climbing the Hua Mountain is wonderful. You

can see the sea of clouds, wonder pines and unique rocks. I think

you will be interested in it. You will also enjoy the fascinating, be

autiful sun in the morning. The Hua Mountain will made your v

acation relaxing and wonderful.

The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the east of Shanxi.  Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there. It’s not far from here. It takes you about two hours to get there by bus. You can also go there by train. When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wonder pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful. It’s really a nice place to visit.

Your turn!

Try your best!

某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动 . 请你根据下表提示 ,以“ The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇 90 字左右的短文。（选自 2006 连云港中考试题）

过去1. 生活贫困 , 房屋破旧 (shabby house)

2. 污染严重 , 垃圾遍地 (pollute / pollution)

3. 交通不便 , 游客很少 (transportation)

现在1. 生活 : 住房宽敞 , 明亮 ; 许多人有自己的车2. 环境 : 山更清 , 水更绿 ,天更蓝…3. 旅游 : 每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客

将来 请你展望家乡的未来

The Changes in My Hometown In the past, people in my hometown are pool. They lived in shabby houses. The environment was badly polluted. Rubbish could be found here and there. Very few people came to visit because the transportation was not convenient. Now, things have changed. Houses are big and bright. Many families own cars. The mountains are greener, the water is cleaner and the sky is bluer. Every year, thousands of tourists come to my hometown. I think my hometown will become better and better in the future.

Thank you

Dear friend,

Hello！ I’m your new friend. My name is Bob. I’m fifteen. I’m American. I live in New York.

I am a middle school student. I’m good at maths. It is very interesting. My favorite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like pop music. My friends and I often sing pop songs together.

After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I’m learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day.

Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Bob

假如你叫张强。请根据下面美国朋友 Bob的来信内容，结合你自己的情况写一篇语言连惯、符合逻辑的英文回信。要求： 1. 认真阅读来信的内容，从中获得你需要的信息。2. 词数： 80左右。回信的开头、结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。注意：回信中不得出现你的真实地址和所在学校的名称。

1 、收到对方的来信； 2 、愿意和对方交朋友； 3 、自己的姓名、年龄和住址； 4 、自己的身份、特长和爱好； 5 、自己的希望。

Dear Bob,

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Yours, Zhang Qiang