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2014
Foreword Year after year I am overwhelmed by the commitment, the confidence and the capability of our young people when they become part of the Wordsmith Awards. The progress made in ten weeks is astounding, with pupils developing real life skills and building meaningful relationships with their teammates. Wordsmith draws out the passion and individual voices from young people who are under so much pressure to fit a mould; it creates a platform for students to explore feelings and express opinions. It is the not-so-secret club where it truly is about the ‘taking part’ and the enjoyment – where self-reflection and evaluation occurs no matter what the outcome of the final showcase. We are proud to take part in Wordsmith each year and delighted to support the project’s continued success and growth.
Becci Wadeson Burnage Academy Boys
INDEX
Burnage Boys Academy 04 Xaverian College 08
Whalley Range High School for Girls 14 Loreto High 18
Whalley Range High School for Girls 22
Make my mark- villanelle
I am the shining light when you see dark
I’m the voice of the voiceless
An ordinary man but I make my mark
I’ve made my choice and my choice is stark
I spoke for the rest and spoke for the choice less
I am the shining light when you see dark
I saw the floods of injustice and built an arch
They tried to drown me in the water that was poisonous
An ordinary man but I make my mark
If a caged bird sings, a beaten dog will bark
I’m not intimidated by my enemies, they’re nothing, they’re only boisterous
I am the shining light when u see dark
An ordinary man but I make my mark
by abdul rahman
Do you know why the caged bird sings?
It sings when in depression
To escape eternal oppression
She knows her song will not be heard
It sings so people will recognise that bird
Do you know why the caged bird sings?
The small bird songs because it knows it can’t escape
But its voice travels further than any cage you create
And while you thought you had the upper hand
The bird strives on continuing its stand
Do you know why the caged bird sings?
It sings because it knows simple iron bars cannot stop
its burning passion and it will burn through
Metal in any way shape or fashion
And where ever that bird sing hope is what it brings
Do you know why the caged bird sings?
It knows the cage is where her body will always be
But her soul will be free
And while her heart is stuck in this cage
Her soul soars free on the world stage
So the pain of tyranny may sting
But it’s the reason the caged bird sings
by Adam Mussa
Explanation
I know why a caged bird sings while cruelty undergoes a promotion.
Living the dream.
Worrying about which outfit goes with what shoes.
Tormented and abused. Gurgling on the very water that ends your life.
Lying crooked on cold concrete. Moaning the words help me.
Thrown away like unwanted furniture.
Backs turned, disgusted faces, precarious civilians.
But when did a helping hand lead you to prison .
A society truly infiltrated by propaganda .
feeding lay to the naive minds .
I know why a caged bird sings.
Faint voices, whispering torment, blank faces.
Expunging the nauseating site from their feeble minds
birds sing as words inspire but words create a freedom fighter.
Maya Angelou her words so strong that swing low leaving dropped jaws
and painful punch lines.
Her words so extreme a voice is yet just a projection.
Tweet tweet the bird tweets courageously.
Tormented standing proud getting back up after being thrown down .
why?
Well because it knows its soul roams free.
So now you know why a caged bird sings.
by Adnan Mohammed
I know why caged bird sings
I know why the caged bird sings
I was there stuck in a world of darkness I dont feel stable
I want to get out sadly I'm stapled
Why am I being accused of something for doing nothing
Why am I being kicked of a bus
Why am I going to jail yearly
I feel like I'm in hell my guts are burning
In my head my emotions are turning
Sleeping in the room of lonesome dark
I hear the whistling of the lark
I walk towards the sound full of empty joy
Now Im whistling too and we are joined
I hear the lark my heart feels light
Im not here to fight
Im here to live my life
Look into my eyes you will get lost
Too much emotion
Too much loss
I know why the caged bird sings when its left to rot
by Ariful Haque
Nelson Mandela – Villanelle
No matter your race, I’m part of the history
I am a resilient man
Right now justice is a mystery
I lived a life of hope and misery
Hell in a beautiful land
No matter your race, I’m part of your history
Locked in the dark, I had my epiphany
We have to make them all understand
Right now justice is a mystery
Released in the shadows, to re-shape my imagery
Set on a mission to save my motherland
No matter your race, I’m part of the history
Right now justice is a mystery
by Ijaz Rana
Villanelle
I am the one whose thoughts couldn’t be crazier
I am the one with a burning desire
I am the killer of racial segregation, an unholy creation
I am the martyr
I am the one with intentions more intense than fire
I am the one whose thoughts couldn’t be crazier
I am the instigator of war against the insane nation.
Against insidious liars and heretical hypocrites.
I will make my legacy worthy of being mentioned as I am the killer of racial segregation
I will form a free nation in which the helpless will not be subjects of annotations.
Racial diversity will be sanctioned, my legacy will be mentioned.
I am the ones whose thoughts couldn’t be crazier, towards my goal I draw near.
I am the killer of racial segregation; I will not be denied my deserved elation.
My creation will be holy, echoing throughout the new century.
My words will be so loud that they will make the sly haters cry.
by Murshed Ali
Burnage Boys Academy
Tutor:
Yussuf Mrabty
Team:
Ijaz Rana
Adnan Mohammed
Adam Mussa
Araful Haque
Abdul Rahman
Murshed Ali
Most improved:
Abdul Rahman
"If a caged bird sings, a beaten dog will bark" Abdul Rahman
"But when did a helping hand lead to prison?” Adnan Mohammed
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