evaluation 3 - class feedback
TRANSCRIPT
What have you learnt from you audience
feedback?
In this PowerPoint you will clearly see how I efficiently used comments and
feedback from classmates and teachers in order to improve my music video.
Amelia O’Callaghan
Good:
• Green Screen use is good
• Performance scenes look confident
• Well synced to music
Improve:
• Needs more shot type variety
• Hands disappear on green screen shots
• More narrative - to make sense of what is
happening
From this feedback we planned to correct many things and to also keep others. We re-filmed lots of the narrative in order for the
story to make sense.
We also included more variety when it came to shot types:
Amelia O’Callaghan
Good:
• Fast Paced
Editing
• Scenes cut to the
beat
Improve:
•Lighting
• Narrative becomes repetitive
• Too many mid shots
• Too much green screen shots
From this feedback we realised we had too many mid shots. Therefore we re-
filmed some close ups and long shots. By filming in front of the black screen we also managed to reduce the amount of
green screen we had.
Amelia O’Callaghan
Good:
• Green Screen use is good (matches
genre)
• Effective performance
shots
• Good editing
Improve:
• Lighting
• Some green scene shots
• Edit odd bits that are out of sync
• More narrative needed for sense of
‘flow’
• More variety of shots needed
The constructive critisism from this person was helpful as it reinforced the fact the
narrative had to be refilmed which we did do. Within my section of the music video I also made sure there were no bits out of sync!
Amelia O’Callaghan
Good:
• Cheesy
• Fits genre
•Edited well
• Good use of green screen
Improve:
• Lighting
• Hands disappear in green screen
• More narrative is needed
I was concerned with the fact the hands disappeared within the music
video as it looked unprofessional. Although the majority of those
sections were removed I did manage to edit the eight-pint garbage setting and make sure the hands stayed in
shot in certain sections.
Amelia O’Callaghan
Good:
• Seemed like a girl-band
• Good costumes
• Fit the genre
Improve:
•Storyline
•Narrative
•Some green screens don’t look
good
•Shadows/Lighting
The lighting issue seemed to come up in lots of people’s improve points. Therefore within my music video
sections I went through carefully and made sure all the lighting improved
and the shadows reduced. Especially on the green screen effect shots. I feel
it made a massive improvement to the overall music video.
Amelia O’Callaghan
Overall I feel all the feedback I received, from viewers of our music video, was taken into
account and was used efficiently to improve the music video. The positive points helped me
to further understand what was particularly like by the audience such as the good framing
and the costumes. The improvement comments helped me to think of ways to
correct my music video to make it what the target audience enjoyed.
Amelia O’Callaghan