The masthead shows great improvement due to the font shown. The font in my final version is a lot more complex in colour and target audience appeal. The preliminary one is plain and far to simple.

The image is a lot more professional in the final piece as It covers the whole front page, where is the other one shows two small images.

The font being so bold and vibrant in my final product shows more professionalism where is the preliminary is just a simple ‘aerial’ font.

The colour scheme is far to plain on the preliminary and doesn’t show much professional quality. In my final piece it shows a good colour scheme as the colours are bold and fit into the thought of grime.

In the preliminary there is far to much text and comes across as an actual page, the final product shows less text/ content which shows good quality.

The layout shows a lot better quality and finishing touch as everything

is well in place from the masthead to the date. The preliminary shows a simple layout but could be seen as effective.

For me this shows the biggest difference.

The final product shows a quality lay out as well as images and a sophisticated look to the content/ text and the all round display; where is the preliminary shows no real quality as it is far to plain.

The text shown is terrible in the preliminary as it shows just pure name of the content where is the final product shows insight into what the content will be, also the colour scheme shows good quality with the way it blends into the background.

The layout shown to the left is far to simple and boring and needs extra things added in such as images which are shown to the left, which shows just how far I’ve come with my designs.

The colour scheme is a lot more sophisticated as it goes with the front cover. The preliminary shows just a pure boring green which isn't very eye-catching and looks extremely un-professional.