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Example of Student Response - Grade 7 FSA Long Writing: Informal Essay
Score Comments 4 The writing
- is expressive and interesting - language is varied with some precision - ideas are developed with insight and originality - has strong form; clear, aware of audience
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Example of Student Response - Grade 7 FSA Long Writing: Informal Essay
Score Comments 3 The writing
- has a logical argument and supporting detail - form is generally correct and the task is clearly accomplished - attempts to appeal to the audience - some errors in convention but they don’t interfere with the meaning
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Example of Student Response - Grade 7 FSA Long Writing: Informal Essay
Score Comments 2 The writing
- has 2-3 simple sentence patterns - is straightforward and direct with some detail - has an appropriate tone
- is somewhat general with a weak ending
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Example of Student Response - Grade 7 FSA Long Writing: Informal Essay
Score Comments 1 The writing
- is a series of loosely connected ideas - has an inappropriate formality - there are errors in convention and spelling of basic words - has grammatical errors
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