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117 Teacher Education Quarterly, Winter 2008 Fostering Preservice Reflection through Response Journals By Icy Lee Introduction Research on teachers’ knowledge, beliefs, and thoughts has shown that teacher candidates approach teaching with a plethora of initial beliefs and ideas about teach- ing. Their knowledge, however, tends to be based on simplistic views of teaching and learning in the classroom, and hence may not be “well adapted to teaching” (Calderhead, 1991, p.532). It is only when they reflect upon their knowledge critically that they can transfer what they have learned in initial teacher preparation programs as students to the real classroom situations as teachers. Reflection enables teacher candidates to construct knowledge through asking questions, critiquing, evaluat- ing, etc., helping them bridge the gap between imagined views and the realities of teaching. It is important, therefore, to prepare teacher candidates for teaching by fostering professional learning that focuses on critical thinking and reflection, so that their knowledge and beliefs interact with the teacher education program, Icy Lee is an assistant professor with the Faculty of Education of the University of Hong Kong, Hong Kong, China. including field experiences, to facilitate development of more sophisticated conceptions of the teaching and learning process. A number of approaches have been used in teacher education to promote reflectivity, one of which is journal writing. Journals can activate teacher candidates’think- ing and facilitate meaning making during the learning process (Cole, Raffier, Rogan, & Schleicher, 1998), help

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Teacher Education Quarterly, Winter 2008

Fostering Preservice Reflection through Response Journals

By Icy Lee

Introduction Researchonteachers’knowledge,beliefs,andthoughtshasshownthatteachercandidatesapproachteachingwithaplethoraofinitialbeliefsandideasaboutteach-ing.Theirknowledge,however,tendstobebasedonsimplisticviewsofteachingandlearningintheclassroom,andhencemaynotbe“welladaptedtoteaching”(Calderhead,1991,p.532).Itisonlywhentheyreflectupontheirknowledgecriticallythattheycantransferwhattheyhavelearnedininitialteacherpreparationprogramsasstudentstotherealclassroomsituationsasteachers.Reflectionenablesteachercandidatestoconstructknowledgethroughaskingquestions,critiquing,evaluat-ing,etc.,helpingthembridgethegapbetweenimaginedviewsandtherealitiesofteaching.Itisimportant,therefore,toprepareteachercandidatesforteachingbyfosteringprofessionallearningthatfocusesoncriticalthinkingandreflection,sothattheirknowledgeandbeliefsinteractwiththeteachereducationprogram,

Icy Lee is an assistant professor with the Faculty of Education of the University of Hong Kong, Hong Kong, China.

includingfieldexperiences,tofacilitatedevelopmentofmoresophisticatedconceptionsoftheteachingandlearningprocess. Anumberofapproacheshavebeenusedinteachereducationtopromotereflectivity,oneofwhichisjournalwriting.Journalscanactivateteachercandidates’think-ingandfacilitatemeaningmakingduringthelearningprocess(Cole,Raffier,Rogan,&Schleicher,1998),help

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themidentifyvariablesthatareimportanttothem,serveasameansofgeneratingquestionsandhypothesesaboutteachingandlearning(Richards&Ho,1998),andincreasetheirawarenessaboutthewayateacherteachesandthewayastudentlearns(Burton&Carroll,2001).Inwritingreflections,learnersactivelyconstructknowledge,whilepersonalizingthelearningprocess.Throughquestioningtheirownassumptions,teachercandidatesraisetheirawarenessofteachingissuesanddevelopasenseofownershipoftheirfuturework(Daloglu,2001).Journalscanalsoprovideopportunities for teachercandidates toanalyze theirown learningandseekstrategiestoimprovetheirlearning(Vickers&Morgan,2003).SummedupbyFarrisandFuhler(1996),journalsare“abirthplaceforcreativeandcriticalthinking”(p.26).Asteachercandidatesengageinjournalwriting,theyareabletodevelopahabitofreflection(Yost,Sentner,&Forlenza-Bailey,2000). Insecondlanguageteachereducation,journalwritinghasbeguntoreceivemoreattentioninrecentyears.However,muchoftheresearchhasfocusedontheuse of journals among practicing teachers and teacher candidates to reflect onclassroomteaching(seee.g.,Brinton,Holten,&Goodwin,1993;Daloglu,2001;Richards&Ho,1998;Todd,Mills,Palard,&Khamcharoen,2001;Tsang&Wong,1996;Woodfield&Lazarus,1998).Littlehasbeendonetofindouthowjournalscanbeexploitedaspartofthecourseworkofinitialteacherpreparationprogramstofosterreflectionamongteachercandidates.InHongKong,journalsareunder-usedininitialteacherpreparation(seeLee,2004).HongKonglearners,includingadvancedlearnersinteacherpreparationprograms,areusedtoapassivemodeoflearning.Inrecentyears,however,EnglishlanguageeducationreforminHongKonghasputahighpremiumonconstructivistlearning(CDC,2004). Journalwritingisakindofreflectivewritingthatrequiresprospectiveteacherstoconstructknowledgethroughquestioningtheirownassumptionsaboutteachingandlearning,andhenceinlinewiththegeneraldirectionofeducationreforminHongKong.ThisarticledescribesastudythatusesresponsejournalsasatoolforfosteringreflectioninaninitialteacherpreparationprograminHongKong.Thesubjectsare13prospectiveEnglishteacherswhoreceivedtrainingtoteachEnglish(asasecondlanguage)insecondaryschoolsinHongKong.TheresearcherseekstoinvestigatetheuseofjournalswiththeseprospectiveEnglishteacherstofindoutwhattheywriteabout,whethertheirjournalsdisplaysignsofreflectivity,andhowtheyreacttothejournalwritingexperience.

Types of Journals Fourkindsofjournalsarecommonlyusedininitialteacherpreparation:dialoguejournals,responsejournals,teachingjournals,andcollaborative/interactivegroupjournals.Dialogue journalsinvolveteachersandstudentswritingandexchangingtheirwritinginmutualresponse,andarefoundtocarrybenefitslikepromotingautonomouslearning,enhancingconfidence,andhelpingstudentsconnectcoursecontentandteaching(Porter,Goldstein,Leatherman,&Conrad,1990).Response

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journals involvestudentsinrecording“theirpersonalreactionsto,questionsabout,andreflectionsonwhattheyread,write,observe,listento,discuss,do,andthink”(Parsons,1994,p.12).Teaching journals serveasimilarpurposebuttheyarewrittenreflectionsbasedonteachingexperiencesthatteachercandidateskeepduringthepracticum(Richards&Lockhart,1996).Collaborative/Interactive group journals involveteachercandidatesinwritingandexchangingjournals(Coleetal.,1998). Comparedwithdialoguejournals,responseandteachingjournalsputagreateronusontheteachercandidatesthemselvesinthereflectiveprocess,astheyengageinaself-dialoguethatresultsinpromotionofself-understandingandreflectivity.Collaborative/Interactivegroupjournals,ontheotherhand,focusongroupdynamicsandsynergycreatedbytheteachercandidates,requiringthemtotakeresponsibil-ityforlearningbysharingideasanddevelopinginsightsamongthemselves,nottomentionconsideringavarietyofviewpointsamongcolleagues,askillthatwillbenefitthemthroughouttheircareers.

Benefits of Journal Writing Theresearchliteratureonjournalstudieshasindicatedthebenefitsofjournalsinpromotingreflectivityamongteacherlearners.DialoguejournalstudiesbyBeauandZulich (1989),Garmon (1998), andGarmon (2001) haveproducedpositivefindingstoshowthatbothteachereducatorsandteacherlearnersfavortheuseofdialoguejournalsasatoolfordevelopingreflectivity.ResponsejournalstudiesbyParsons(1994),FarrisandFuhler(1996),andGoodandWhang(2002),aswellasteachingjournalstudiesbyHoandRichards(1993),TsangandWong(1996),andWoodfieldandLazarus(1998)have,similarly,indicatedthebenefitsofjournalingasapedagogicaltoolforencouragingreflection.Interactivejournalstudieshaveshownthatteachercandidates’ideasmaycontributetotheteachingandlearningprocess.Interactivegroupjournalsexchangedamongteachercandidates,inparticular,canstimulateinterest,enhancemotivation,andbuildtheconfidenceofteachercandidates,aswellasenrichtheirconceptionsofalearningcommunity(Coleetal.,1998).

Content and Quality of Reflection Inadditiontothebenefitsofjournalwriting,previousresearchhasfocusedonthetopicsthatteachercandidatesreflecton,aswellasthereflectivetraitsexhibitedinjournals.Thetopicsofreflectionappeartobewide-ranging,includingtheoriesofteachingandlearning,approachesandmethodsinteaching,evaluationofteaching,perceptionsofteachercandidatesofthemselvesasteachers,questionsaboutteaching,questionsaboutstudents,tonameafew(e.g.,seeRichards&Lockhart,1996;Tsang&Wong,1996).Gaugingthequalityofreflectionbasedonthetopicsinjournals,however,isnotentirelystraightforward.Foronething,theteachereducationresearchliteratureaboundswithdefinitionsof“reflection,”makingithardtopindownitsexactmeaning.Recentframeworksofreflection,basedonDewey(1933)andSchon(1983),capturesomecommonelementsabouttheprocessofreflection.Thereare,

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inparticular,attemptstodescribethedevelopmentalorhierarchicalqualitiesofreflection,distinguishinglowerfromhigherlevelsofreflection. InLee’s(2005)analyticframework,forinstance,reflectionisexaminedintermsofthedepthofthethinkingprocessinvolved.Threelevelsofdepthareidentified.Thefirstlevelisthe“recall”level,whereonedescribes,recallsandinterpretsanissue/situ-ation/experiencebasedonone’sownperceptionofexperience,withoutlookingforalternativeexplanations,andattemptstoimitatethewaysonehasobservedorbeentaught.Thesecondlevelisthe“rationalization”level,whereonesearchesforrelation-shipsbetweendifferentbitsofexperiences,interpretingthesituationwithreasons,andgeneralizingexperiencesorcomingupwithguidingprinciples.Thethirdlevelisthe“reflectivity”level,whereoneapproachesone’sownexperienceswithaviewtochanging/improvinginthefuture,analyzinganissue/situation/experiencefromvariousperspectives,andbeingawareoftheinfluencesofthesediverseperspectivesonone’senhancedunderstandingoftheissueorsituation. InLee’sdefinitionofreflectivethinking,thelowestlevelofreflectionisdistin-guishedfromahigherlevelofreflectionbyadeeperthinkingprocessthatinvolvesactiveinterpretationofanissue/situationandtheabilitytoaskthewhyquestion,whereoneexploresdifferentreasons/alternativestoanissue.Thehighestlevelofreflectivethinkingischaracterizedbytheabilitytoasknotonlythe“why”butalsothe“sowhat”question,withaviewtobringingchangeorimprovementtoone’spractice,aswellasaheightenedawarenessoftheinfluencesofvariousperspectivesonone’swayofthinking. Inasimilarvein,HattonandSmith(1995)identifyfourlevelsofreflectivityin teacher candidates’ journal writing.The lowest level, descriptive writing, isnotreflectiveatall,butinvolvesapuredescriptionofanevent,asituationoranissue.Descriptivereflectionprovidesreasonsfortheevents,situationsorissuesdescribed, based on personal judgment, experience, and/or teacher candidates’interpretationsofclassroominputorreadings.Higheruptheplaneofreflectivityisdialogicreflection,whichischaracterizedbyanexplorationandconsiderationofdifferingreasons.Finally,criticalreflectionincludesnotonlypossiblereasonsbutalsoconsiderationofthebroaderhistorical,socialandpoliticalcontextsofthereasoning.HattonandSmith’sapproachissimilartothatofLee,inwhichthedepthofreflectioniscaptured.Althoughdifferenttermsareusedintheirframeworks,similarattemptsaremadetocapturedifferentdegreesofreflectivityonthebasisofone’sabilitytoputthingsintoperspective. VanManen’s(1977)viewofreflectionisalsobasedonstagesofreflection.Thefirststageinvolvesreflectionatthetechnicallevel,i.e.,applicationofskillsandknowledgeintheclassroom.Thesecondstageentailsreflectionabouttheassump-tionsofthetechnicalitiesofteachingandtheconsequencesonstudentlearning.Thethirdstageinvolvesacriticalanalysisorquestioningofthemoralandethicaldimensionsofthetechnicalitiesofteaching.ThesestagesofreflectionparallelthedepthofreflectivityputforwardbyHattonandSmith(1995)andLee(2005),in

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whichthelowestlevelofreflectioninvolvesdescriptivereflection,interpretation,orapplicationwithoutquestioning,whereasthehighestlevelofreflectionentailsreasoningbasedondiverseperspectivesplacedinabroadercontext.

Research Questions Giventhatjournalwritingisunder-exploredininitialteacherpreparationinHongKong,itwouldbeinterestingtofindoutwhatteachercandidateswriteaboutintheirjournalswhenthecourseworkrequiresthemtoengageinjournalwriting,whethertheirjournalentriesdemonstratetraitsofreflectivity,andhowtheyreacttothejournalwritingexperience.Researchquestionsthatgovernedthestudyare:

1.Whatdidtheteachercandidateswriteaboutintheirresponsejournals?Didtheirjournalentriesshowsignsofdevelopingreflectivity?

2. What were the teacher candidates’ reactions to the journal writingexperience?

The Study

Method Teacher candidates in this study are 13 female Cantonese-speaking EnglishmajorundergraduatesatHongKongBaptistUniversity,aged20-21.TheyalltooktheA-LevelUseofEnglishexaminationbeforeentryintotheuniversity,andtheirgradesrangedfromCtoE(Ebeingequivalenttoascoreof515onTOEFL).TheywereenrolledinaDiplomainEducationprogramattheUniversity.TheDiplomainEducationprogramisbasedonanewmodelofteachereducationpioneeredbytheUniversity(knownasthe2+2model),whichprovidesundergraduateswithteachertrainingattheendoftheirsecondyearofundergraduatestudyalongsidetheirEng-lishmajorstudy.WhileaBAinEnglishnormallytakes3yearstocomplete,the2+2studentswouldtake4yearstocompleteaBAinEnglishplusaDiplomainEducation(majoringinEnglish),graduatingwithtwoqualificationsthatenablethemtopracticeEnglishlanguageteaching(ELT)asaprofessionallyqualifiedEnglishteacherinsec-ondaryschoolsinHongKong.1All13studentsaspiredtobecomeEnglishlanguageteachers,andthuscouldbeconsideredreasonablymotivatedteacherlearners. Theresponsejournalstheseteachercandidateswereaskedtodowerepartofthecourseworkofthe“SubjectInstruction”courseintheDiplomainEducationprogram,whichisacompulsorycourseaimedtoequipteachercandidateswithknowledgeandskillsofEnglishlanguageteaching.Althoughthepromotionofreflectionisoneofthestatedaimsoftheteachereducationprogram,norequiredsubjectintheprogramaddressesthetopicofreflectionspecifically.Theresearcher,beingtheinstructorofthe“SubjectInstruction”course,deemeditaperfectoppor-tunitytointroducetheteachercandidatestotheideaofreflectionthroughjournalwriting.Asaqualitativeresearcher,thepastexperienceoftheteacher-researcher

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hadadirectimpactontheapproachtothestudy.Havinguseddialoguejournalswith teacher candidates fromanother teacher educationcourseand found that,indialoguejournalwriting,theteacherscandidateshadatendencytorelyontheteachereducator’sfeedbackasamainincentiveforreflection(seeLee,2004),itwasdecidedthatresponsejournalsthatfocusmoreonself-reflectionwouldbeused,sothattheteachercandidates’relianceontheteachereducatorcouldbereduced.Interactivegroupjournals,itwasfelt,couldbeusedatalaterstagewhentheteachercandidateshadbecomemoreaccustomedtotheideaofjournalwriting. On thefirstdayof thecourse, teachercandidateswere told that theywereexpectedtowriteresponsejournalsthroughoutthecourse.AsjournalwritingisseldomusedinsecondaryschoolsinHongKong,aguidingsheetwasprovidedtomakesurethatexpectationsandrequirementswerecommunicatedclearly(seeAppendix).Specifically,teachercandidatesweretoldtowritetheirresponsestosalientissuesraisedinclass,whichwasheldonceaweekfor10weeksinthefirstand second semesters respectively.2Teacher candidates were told to keep theirjournalentriesinaportfolioandturnintheentriesonspecificdates(threetimesinthefirstsemesterandtwotimesinthesecondsemester)thatwereassignedatthebeginningofeachsemester.Eachtimethejournalsweresubmitted,theinstructorreadthroughthemcarefully.Insteadofawardinggrades,theinstructorprovidedgeneralresponsestostudents’entries,answeredquestions,askedfurtherquestionstostimulatethinking,andprovidedfurtherinsightsonissuesraised.Theteachercandidateswereawarethattheirjournalswouldnotbeassessed.Topreventunduerelianceoninstructorfeedback,delayedresponsesweremadetotheteachercandi-dates’journals,unlikeindialoguejournalwritingwheretheteachereducatorandteachercandidatesexchangejournalsonaregularbasis.Attheendofthesecondsemester,studentsstartedtheir6-weekteachingpracticuminsecondaryschools,wheretheytookupteachingofEnglishindependentlywiththesupportofateachermentor.Theywereencouragedtocontinuewiththehabitofjournalwriting,thoughthiswasnolongerarequirementofthecourse. Toenhancethevalidityofthestudy,triangulationisusedinthequalitativedatacollectionandanalysisprocedures.First,datatriangulationinvolvesdatasourcesfrom (1) the teacher candidates’ response journals gathered from two teachingsemesters, and (2) individual interviewswith all the 13 teacher candidates.Tomoderate the potential biases inherent in teacher-research, the interviews wereconducted(inCantonese)byaresearchassistant(withatranslationmajorandaPostgraduateDiplomainEducationmajoringinEnglish)—afterthegradeswerepostedsoastoencouragefreeexpressionofopinionsfromtheteachercandidates.Theinterviews,whichweresemi-structured,werebasedonaninterviewguidethatfocusedonfourareaspertainingtothesecondresearchquestion:(1)howjournalwritingwasreceivedbytheteachercandidates;(2)perceivedbenefitsanddifficul-ties,ifany;(3)roleoftheinstructors’feedback;and(4)impactofjournalwritingondevelopmentofreflectivity.

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Data Analysis Toanswerthefirstresearchquestion(i.e.,whattheteachercandidateswroteaboutandsignsofdevelopingreflectivity),boththecontentanddepthofreflectionasexhibitedintheresponsejournalswereanalyzed.ThecontentanalysisisadaptedfromLee(2004),whoinvestigatesthethemesofdialoguejournalswrittenby18teachercandidates.Aftermyfirstreadingoftheresponsejournaldata,itwasfoundthatwhilemostofthe10themesinLee(2004)arerelevanttothestudy,someofthethemescouldhavebeencombinedtoyieldasmallernumberofcategories—henceahigherlevelofabstraction—andtofacilitatecommunicationofthefindingsaswell(Merriam,1998).Sincethejournaldatawouldbefurtheranalyzedforthelevelofreflectivity,withreferencetothethemes,asmallernumberofthemeswouldfacilitatedatainterpretationandhencesuitthepurposeoftheresearchbetter.Fivethemesweredevelopedforthestudy,whichwasaresultofcombinationofsomeofthethemesinLee(2004)andrephrasingafterwards.Forexample,thethemesthatinvolveinteractionwiththeinstructor(e.g.,“relationship-building”and“seekingadvice”)arecombinedandphrasedas“interactingwithinstructor.”Thethemesthatrelatetoself-development(i.e.,“drawinguponpersonalhistory,”“expressingpreserviceteacherthoughtsandconcerns,”and“commentingoncognitivechanges”)arecombinedandreferredtoas“extrapolating/expressingpersonalvoice.”Thethemesrelatingtoevaluation(i.e. ,“commentsonthecourse”and“self-evalua-tion”)arebroadenedandrephrasedas“evaluating.”Theotherthemesthatpertaintolowerandhigherlevelsofthinking(i.e.,“sharingideasaboutEnglishlanguageresources,”“askingquestions/seekingclarification,”and“discussingprofessionalissues”)arerephrasedas“describingandrecalling”and“interpreting,analyzingandinquiring”respectively.Thefivethemesaredefinedasfollows:

1.Describing and recalling:Describingandrecallingteaching/learningissuespresentedinclass;sharinglanguagelearningexperiences.

2. Interpreting, analyzing and inquiring: Discussing issues related totopicscoveredinclass/otherprofessionalissues;askingquestionsaboutELT/professionalissues.

3. Evaluating: Evaluating oneself, peers or different aspects of thecourse.

4.Extrapolating/Expressing personal voice:Extrapolatingwhathasbeenlearned—makingresolutions;personalizingandsharinginsights;express-ingfeelingsandconcerns;assertingbeliefs.

5.Interacting with instructor:Seekingadviceregardingpersonal/profes-sionaldevelopment;respondingtoinstructor’sfeedback.

Afterthepreliminaryanalyticframeworkwassetup,theresearcherandresearchassistantcategorizedabout20%ofthejournaldataindependentlyandcomparedtheir

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analysestofindoutthelevelofagreement,whichturnedouttobeashighas95%.Therestofthejournalentrieswerethenreadandcategorizedbytheresearchassistant. Asregardsthenatureofreflection,sincethepurposeofthestudyistoexplorethetraitsofreflectivityintheteachercandidates’journals,ananalyticalframeworkthatdescribes thedevelopmentalqualitiesof reflection isdeemedsuitable.TheframeworksproposedbyLee(2005)andHattonandSmith(1995),whichcharacterizereflectionintermsofthedepthofreflectivethinking,arecombinedasfollows:

Level 1: Non-reflection / pure description level, which involves mererecall/description.

Level2:Descriptivereflection/recalllevel,whichisthelowestlevelofreflection,involvingdescription/recallaswellasanattemptatsimpleexplanation.

Level3:Dialogicreflection/rationalizationlevel,whichisahigherlevelofreflection,involvingexplorationofalternativeexplanationsfromdif-ferentperspectives.

Level4:Criticalreflection/reflectivitylevel,whichisthehighestlevelofreflection,involvingacriticalanalysisthatsituatesreasoningwithinabroaderhistorical,social,culturalorpoliticalcontext,withaviewtochangingorimprovinginthefuture.

Allthejournalsegmentsthatfallunderthefivethemesaretabulatedandreadbytheresearcherandresearchassistanttogethertodiscussanddecideonthelevelofreflection.Analysisoftheentriesshowsthatthefirsttheme“Describingandre-calling”exclusivelyillustratesLevel1ofreflection.Itisoftenfollowedbytheotherthemesthatexhibithigherlevelsofreflection,suchas“Interpreting,analyzingandinquiring,”“Evaluating”and“Extrapolating/Expressingpersonalvoice.”Thelasttheme“Interactingwithinstructor”doesnotfallunderanylevelofreflection.Instead,theteachercandidates’attemptstointeractwiththeinstructorareseentoemanatefromtheirdescription,discussionorreflectionthatbelongstooneofthefourlevelsofreflection.Table1belowsummarizesthethemesandtheirlevelsofreflection. Asfortheinterviewdata,theyweretranslatedandtranscribedbytheresearchassistant.Theinterviewtranscriptsweresubjectedtomemberchecking(Brown&Rodgers,2002)—i.e.,havingtheteachercandidatesreadandverifytheirtruthful-ness.Theinterviewdatawerethencodedandsummarizedaccordingtothefourareasoffocus—i.e.,howjournalwritingwasreceivedbytheteachercandidates,perceivedbenefitsanddifficulties,roleoftheinstructor’sfeedback,anddevelop-mentofreflectivity.

Journal Data Thissectionaddressesthefirstresearchquestion—i.e.,What did the teacher

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candidates write about in their response journals? Did their journal entries show signs of reflectivity?Inthefollowing,selectedsegmentsfromtheteachercandidates’responsejournalsareusedtodemonstratethefivethemesdelineatedintheanalyticframeworkinTable1,eachwithreferencetothelevel(s)ofreflectivityevidentinthejournaldata.Thejournalsegmentsarepresentedverbatim,andpseudonymsareusedthroughout.

Describing and Recalling: Level 1 of Reflection Thefirsttheme,describing and recalling,canbeconsideredtobetheprecursortoreflectivity,formingthebasisonwhichfurtherreflectionsaremade.Whiletheteachercandidatesaredescribingand/orrecallinganissueorexperience,theystayatLevel1ofreflection,i.e.,non-reflection/puredescriptionlevel.InoneofKitty’sjournalentries,shesummarizedwhathadbeencoveredinclassbydescribing a teaching/learning issue:

OnWednesday,duringthelecturetime,wetalkedaboutlanguagecompetence,namely linguisticscompetence,pragmaticcompetence,discoursecompetence,andstrategiccompetence…

InLucy’ssegment,sheshared the experienceofateacherfriend,tryingtoshowhowdisrespectfulstudentscanbe:

Thatday, she taught students touseChinesedictionary.Her studentswere socuriousthattheytriedtoturntosomeotherpagesfilledwithpictures.Andsud-denly,oneofherstudentsaskedhersomethingaboutapictureshowinganancientcontainer.Sheactuallydidn’tprepareherselfforthiskindofquestionandshejustrepliedfranklybysaying,“Sorry,Idon’tknoweither.Wouldyouliketofindussomethingaboutitlater?”However,herstudentresponded,“You,asourteacher,don’tknoweither;thenhowcouldIknowit?”inaplayfultone.

Bothsegmentsdemonstrateanon-reflectivetrait,astheyinvolvemeredescriptionand/orrecall.

Table 1. Themes of Journal Entries and Levels of Reflection.

Theme LevelofReflection­

1. Describin­gan­drecallin­g Level1

2. In­terpretin­g,an­alyzin­gan­din­quirin­g Level2/3/4­

3. Evaluatin­g Level2/3/4­

4­. Extrapolatin­g/Expressin­gperson­alvoice Level2/3/4­

5. In­teractin­gwithin­structor Notapplicable

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Interpreting, Analyzing and Inquiring: Level 2/3/4 of Reflection Inthejournals,descriptionandrecallwereoftenfollowedbydiscussionand/orquestioning,wheretheteachercandidatesengagedin interpreting, analyzing and in-quiring,whichisthesecondthemethatemergedfromthedata.Thisthemeillustrateshigherlevelsofreflection,includingLevels2,3and4.Whenengagedinthediscussion of teaching and learning issues raised in class,NatalieattemptedtoexplainwhymostteachersinHongKongfocusondevelopingstudents’linguisticcompetence:

Whatarethedifficultiesinteachinglanguagecompetence?...afterthetask-basedapproachin1999Englishlanguagesyllabushasbeenproposed,notmanyteacherspayeffortevenlytoteachgrammaticalitem,andlanguageneededfordifferentsituationsandcommunication.Ithinkthemainproblemistheschoolteachersareboundbythetextbook.Theywilljustteachwhatthetextbookhasandteachallthechaptersinarushinordertolettheirstudentstohavealookofallthechapterswhichareinthescopeofexamination....Astheseexamina-tionsaremainlyfocusonlinguisticcompetence,teachersmayjustconcentrateonteachingmoreaboutlinguisticknowledgeinordertolettheirstudenthaveagoodmarkinthepublicexam.

The above segment demonstrates Level 2 of reflection (i.e., descriptive reflec-tion/recalllevel),wheretheteachercandidateattemptedtoexplainwhyEnglishteachersinHongKongdonotadopttask-basedlanguageteachingbutinsteadrelyheavilyonthetextbooktohelpstudentspassexaminations. Asking questions about ELT/professional issuesalsoprovidedopportunitiesfor teacher candidates to engage in ahigher levelof reflection. Inher journal,Kittybeganbyaskingaseriesofquestionsaboutlanguagecompetenceandthenbroadenedherdiscussiontoincludeotheraspectsofcompetence,highlightingtheimportanceofcriticalthinkinginthelanguageclassroom:

So, thequestion leftnow ishowmuchshouldwe teach inelementaryeduca-tion?Howcanwebalancethebasiclinguisticknowledgeandtheotheressentialcompetenceinlanguageteaching?...Criticalthinkingissomuchemphasizednowadays,butIusedtodoubtthathowcanthisbetaughtinallsubjects?...NowIbelieveteachersinallsubjectscandoitasyouhaveprovedthisinyourteaching.Iguessteacherscantrainstudents’criticalthinkingskillsbyaskingthemmoreopenquestionsoraskingthemtocommentorjudgment.Teachersshouldalsotellstudentsnottoaccepteverythingblindlywithoutreallythinkingaboutthem.

TheabovesegmentillustratesLevel3ofreflection(i.e.,dialogicreflection/ratio-nalizationlevel),showingevidenceoftheteachercandidate’sattempttosearchforrelationshipsbetweendifferentpiecesofexperienceandtodevelopsomegeneralprinciplesforteachingcriticalthinking. Inanotherexample,Sandra’sattempttodiscuss professional issues (i.e.,in-novation)providedherwithanopportunitytoengageincriticalreflection:

Veryoften,peopletendtosupport‘new’ideasblindly.Theythinkthateverything

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‘new’is‘creative,’‘up-to-date,’and‘better.’However,thisisabsolutelynottrue.Istronglybelievethattheexistinglanguageteachingmethodologycouldbeim-proved.Butthisdoesnotmeanthatanychangeoranynewmethodologywouldhelp....Wehavetothinkcarefullyifthenewmethodologyisbetterthantheexistingoneornot....Thenit’stheideaofsuitability.Whenthisideaisfromthewest,itmaynotsuittheculturalbackgroundofHongKongstudents.Andweshouldnotoverlookthisculturalthing.LearningEnglishisnotjustlearningalanguagebutlearningadifferentculture.AndwhydosomanystudentsdislikelearningEnglish?It’sbecausetheydon’tlikethefeelingofbeingimposedwithadifferentthing.Therefore,weshouldalsoconsiderthefeelingortheattitudeofstudents.Asafterall,thischangeisnotonlyfortheEnglishlanguageteachers,butalsothestudents.

Inthissegment,Level4ofreflection(i.e.,criticalreflection/reflectivitylevel)isevident,whereSandraexaminedthequestionof“innovation”inrelationtoELTmethodology.Inreflectingontheissue,sheconsideredthewidercontextincludingtheculturalandtheaffectivefactorsinlanguageteachingandlearning.

Evaluating: Level 2/3/4 of Reflection Inthethirdtheme,evaluation,higherlevelsofreflectionarealsoevident.Inthejournals,theteachercandidatesgavetheirevaluations of different aspects of the course,includingtheinstructor’steachingstyle.Catherinecommented:

...whenIamhavingyourlesson,Ifeelgoodthatyoualwaysaskusquestions.Thiscanraiseourinterestandatthesametime,payingmoreattentiontowhatyouteach.Ithinkinthesupervisedteachingpractice,Iwillaskmoregenuinequestionstoelicitmystudentstospeakup.Actually,Ithinkduringalesson,ifstudentscanparticipateandgetinvolved,thefeelingisquitegood.

ThissegmentdemonstratesLevel2ofreflection,wheretheteachercandidateana-lyzedtheteachereducator’steachingstyleandstatedherintentiontoimitatesuchastyleinherownteachingpractice. Inanotherexample,Level3ofreflectionisevidentasBeatriceevaluatedoneofherpeers’microteachingperformance:

TodayIwasimpressedbyIvy’smicroteachingonlistening.WhatIappreciatewasthatsheexposedstudentstodifferentmaterials.Forexample,theEnglishversionoftheMulanpoemandthethemesongofthemovie....Ithinkagoodteachershouldnotonlyexposestudentstoacademicknowledgebutalsothingsaroundusandaroundtheworld.Besides,ifIcandesignlessonsasinterestingasthatone,studentswouldbeeagertoattendlessonsbecauseeachtimetheyknowthattheycanlearnsomeinterestingthingsfromthelesson.

Atthislevelofreflection,Beatriceattemptedtointerpretthepeer’sperformance,explainedwhyshelikedit,andgeneralizedittootherteachingsituations. InoneofNatalie’sjournalentries,criticalreflectionisdemonstratedassheevalu-ated her own performanceinmicroteachingintheteachereducationprogram:

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Irememberthatmyteachersdidn’tteachanylisteningskillsatall.TheywouldsimplyusethetapewhichisprovidedbyLongmanorOxford,etc.whatIusu-allyheardwasnotEnglishbutthesoundof‘beep.’MyclassmatesandIwereallrushingtochoosethecorrectanswersafterthebeepsound.Ifeltnotgoodanddidn’tenjoyit.AndImadeabigmistake inmymicroteaching.I’veputtoomany things in the listening comprehension exercise. I am sure thatmystudentsfeltpressuretoo!Thoughtheydidenjoythevideo,Ithinktheyalsofeltbadabouttheexercise.IstarttoknowwhyIhavepressureallthetime.ItisbecauseIseeeverythingas‘homework’andIfocustoomuchonthefinalproduct.Asaresult,Ineglecttheneedsofmystudents.Ishouldhaveabroaderperspective—that is,my job is not only toprovide interestingmaterials anddetailedworksheets,butalsotoletmystudentsenjoytheirclassandtolearnwithoutfeelingthreatened.

Reflectingonherownlanguagelearningandmicroteachingexperience,Natalierealizedtheimportanceofde-emphasizingtheproductoflearningbutemphasizinglearningforenjoymentinanon-threateninglearningenvironment.Shewasabletoexamineteachinginabroadercontextthattakesintoaccounttheteacherrole,thestudentrole,teacher-studentrelationship,andtheuseofpedagogicalmaterials.Thisjournalsegmentisagoodexampletoshowhowtheteachercandidatemovedfromalowertoahigherlevelofreflection,andintheendshewasabletoengageinLevel4ofreflection(i.e.,criticalreflection).

Extrapolating/Expressing Personal Voice: Level 2/3/4 of Reflection Inthefourththeme,teachercandidateswereseenextrapolatingfromwhattheyhadlearnt,atthesametimeexpressing a personal voice.Insodoing,theyengagedinhigher levelsof reflection.Some teacher candidatesmade resolutions in theirresponsejournals,assertingwhattheyplannedtodointheirfutureteaching,whileotherspersonalized learning and shared their insights.For instance, through thejournalwritingexperience,Kittyhaddevelopedagreatinterestinusingthistoolasaspringboardforreflection.Shedecidedtoverbalizeandrecordherthoughtsaftereachofherteachingpracticumlessons:

Iplantobringalongamp3playerwithmesothatIcanrecordmyfeelings,mycommentsandmyreflectionsoonaftertheclass.Iamsurethatthiswouldbeveryusefulformygrowthasateacher.

Sophia,afterwatchingherpeers’microteachingongrammarteaching,recalledherownexperienceasastudentandsharedherinsightabouthowgrammarcouldbestbetaughtincontext:

WhenIwasinprimaryandsecondaryschool,myteacherstaughtmegrammar,theylikedtoseparatethecontextandthetargetlanguage;therefore,wemaynothaveaclearideabouthowtousethetargetgrammar.It’saverycommonwayofteachersteachinggrammar.Studentshavetodotheexercises(separatesentences)whichcanreinforcetheformofthetargetlanguagebutnotthefunctionofthe

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language.It’sthethingthatIhavetopayattentiontowhenIamteaching....it’sagoodstarttoteachtherelationbetweenformandfunction!

BothjournalsegmentsillustrateLevel2ofreflection,wheredescriptionisaccom-paniedbysimpleexplanation. InBeatrice’sjournalsegmentbelow,shemovedfromLevel2to3andthen4ofreflection.Shefirstexpressed her feelings and concernsafteralessonthatintroducedstudentstolanguagegames.Asshedescribedherlearningexperienceandexplainedherfeelings,sheengagedinLevel2ofreflection:

Todaywelearntsometeachingskillsintheclass.Iwasimpressedbythoseteachingskills.Ididn’tthinkofteachingcanbethatmuchfun.IfIwerestillasecondarystudent,IthoughtIwouldlovethiskindofteaching.However,asaperspectiveteacher,IfeltalittlebitstressfulasIknewthatIwouldbetheonewhodesignthosefunnygamesandplaywithmystudents.Iwasafraidthatitwouldspendmesomuchtimepreparingforthosegames.

Fromthere,Beatricewentontoassert her beliefs:

AsIhavehadmorethoughtsonit,Ithoughtit’sworthwhiletospendthatmuchtimepreparingformystudentsbecausethiscanhelpcultivatetheir interest inEnglish,IfulfillmyroleasateacherbecauseEnglishisabigfieldthatonecanevenspendone’swholelifetolearnit.Inthissense,howmuchIteachthemisnotenough,buttheniftheyhavetheinterestinEnglishthemselves,theycantaketheinitiativetolearnEnglish,andIthinkit’stheonlywayforthemtoacquiregoodEnglish.

Beatrice’sfurtherthoughtsmovedheruptohigherreflectiveplanes,i.e.,Levels3and4.DespitetheworryBeatricehadabouthavingtospendamassiveamountoftimepreparingforgoodEnglishlessons,sheconsidereddifferentperspectives(Level3)andsheassertedthatitwouldbeworththewhile,sincewhatmattersmostinlanguageteachingistheabilitytoarouseinterestinthelearners.Indeed,sheexaminedtheissueoflanguagegamesfromdifferentperspectivesandapproachedherownexperiencewithaviewtobringingimprovementtoherteachinginthefuture(Level4).

Interacting with Instructor Finally,inthelasttheme,theteachercandidatesengagedininteracting with the instructor.Lauraattemptedtoseek the instructor’s adviceontheissueofmediumofinstruction:

ButifthestudentscouldnotunderstandmyEnglishevenIspokeslowlyandusedsimpleEnglish,whatcouldIdo?

Somestudentsprovided responses to the instructor’s feedback on their journals.Forinstance,Carlyrespondedbydirectlyaddressingtheinstructor:

Thanksalotforyourresponse.ActuallyItotallyagreewithyouthateducationisahelpingprofession.

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Attemptstoseekadviceoraskquestionsarenotclassifiableintodifferentlevelsofreflection,buttheygenerallycontinuefromtheteachercandidate’sdiscussionorreflection,suchasLaura’squestionabove,whichsprangfromherreflectionontheuseofL1(i.e.,Cantonese)inthesecondlanguageclassroom. Toanswerthefirstresearchquestionposedearlier(What did the teacher can-didates write about in their response journals? Did their journal entries show signs of reflectivity?), thesamplesabovedemonstratethattheteachercandidates’thinkingdidnotsimplystayatLevel1,i.e.,thelowestlevelofreflection.Instead,journalwritingprovidedthemwithopportunitiestoengageinhigherlevelsofreflectionatdifferenttimesandasdifferentissuesweredescribedordiscussed.Theyinterpreted,analyzedandinquiredaboutteaching/learningorotherprofessionalissues,result-inginanincreaseinknowledgeandself-understanding,anddevelopingacriticalstanceregardingteaching/learningandprofessionalissuesatthesametime.Throughevaluatingthemselves,theirpeersanddifferentaspectsofthecourse,theywereabletogaininsightsabouthowtheyshouldgoaboutteaching. Theyalsoextrapolatedfromtheinputobtainedfromlessons,bothfromtheinstructorandtheirpeers,personalizedlearningbymakingconnectionsbetweenwhatwasobservedandtheorizedinclassandtheirownpersonalexperience,andasaresultdevelopedabetterunderstandingofEnglishlanguageteachingandteachingingeneral.Allinall,responsejournalsenabledthemtodeveloptheirprofessionalidentitiesbysharingtheirprivatevoices,shapingtheirunderstandingofpertinentissuesandpreparingthemfortherealitiesintheclassroom(Farris&Fuhler,1996;Good&Whang,2002).

Interview Data This section attempts to answer the second research question—i.e., What were the teacher candidates’ reactions to the journal writing experience? Relevantinterviewdataareextracted(andcitedverbatim)toillustratethefourmajoras-pects,including(1)howjournalwritingwasreceived;(2)perceivedbenefitsanddifficulties;(3)roleoftheinstructor’sfeedback;and(4)developmentofreflectivethinking.Againpseudonymsareusedthroughout.

How Journal Writing Was Received by Teacher Candidates Outofthe13teachercandidates,11saidtheyenjoyedwritingresponsejournals.Someenjoyeditthroughouttheperiod,whilesomefoundgreaterenjoymentinthesecondsemester.Thiscouldbedemonstratedbythefactthatsixteachercandidatescontinuedwithjournalwritingduringtheteachingpracticumeventhoughitwasno longer a requirementof thecourse,whereasoneof them (Kitty referred toearlier)didoraljournalsbyaudio-recordingherafter-lessonthoughtsduringthepracticum.Teachercandidates’reasonsforenjoyingjournalwritingareextractedbelow,citingthestudentsverbatim:

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Inthefirstsemester,Idon’treallyunderstandhowtoteachandIfacedmanydif-ficultiesanddoubts,andIcangetmanyadvicefrommylecturer.(Lily)

BecauseIcanwriteaboutmyfeelingsanddifficulties.Yes,anditisquiteusefulformetoreflectandtobereflective.(Lucy)

Enjoymentwasfoundtolinkwithstudents’perceptionofthenatureandpurposeofjournalwriting.Afewstudentsconsideredjournalwritingtobeakindofhomeworkinthefirstsemester,butgraduallywhenthepurposebecameclearer,theyfoundjournalwritingeasiertomanageandhencemoreenjoyable.Kittysaid:

InthefirstsemesterIthinkit’skindofhomework,andIdon’twanttodoit.It’snotpracticalforIjustwrotesomethingtosharemyfeelings....Buttheninthesecondsemester,IfinditgoodbecauseIreallyknowthepurposeandIbelievethisisagoodwaytoachievethatpurpose,andit’salsogoodformyselfandalsomyteacher.

Anotherreasonwhysomestudentsenjoyedjournalwritinglessinthefirstsemesteristhelackofideas.Catherinesaid:

WritingjournalsinthefirstsemesterismoredifficultbecauseIdidn’thaveanyideawhatkindofwritingshouldIwritebecausewejustrefertothelessonlikethe concept or the theory during the lesson, so I can say I don’t really enjoyjournalwriting.

Mostteachercandidatesfeltthatjournalwritingbecameeasierinthesecondse-mester,andhencemoreenjoyable.Kathysaid:

Forthefirstsemester,it’sapressure.Inthesecondsemester,it’sapleasurewrit-ingtotheteacher.

Forthisteachercandidate,onceshestartedtoputpentopaper,thejoyofjournal-ingkeptgrowing. Onlyonestudentmaintainedshedidnotenjoyjournalwritingatanytime,andthestatedreasonwasherlaziness:

I’mtoolazytodothat.Inormallydoitrightbeforewehavetosubmitit.

Perceived Benefits and Difficulties All13studentsconfirmedjournalwritingasabeneficialexperience,includingthetwowhodidnotenjoyit.Theonlyproblemsraisedpertainstotimemanage-mentandlackofideasinitially.Theteachercandidatesvaluedtheopportunitytocommunicatewiththeinstructor,evidencedfromthequotebelow:

...shewilltrytoanswermeandthengivemesomeresponse.It’smorelikeacommunicativewaysoIlearnfromher.(Lily)

Astudentpointedoutthattheresimplywasnotenoughtimeinclassforthekindofsharinganddiscussionmadepossiblethroughjournalwriting:

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It’sagoodwaytodiscusssomethingwiththeprofessorbecauseduringclasstimeyouwon’thavemuchtimetoshare.(Carly)

Lucypointedouttheadvantageofwrittenjournalsoverface-to-facemeetings:

Ithinkit’sdifficulttoknockonherdoorandtalktoher.Well,it’sstrange.Icangotohereveryday...butIdon’tknowwhethertheyarebusyornotsoIcannotreallytalkdirectlyorgotothem.SoIthinkwritingjournals,yes,theycanreadthejournalswhentheyhavetime.(Lucy)

Studentsalsofoundthatjournalwritingprovidedgoodopportunitiesforthemtopracticeanddevelopreflectivethinking.Sandrasaid:

Igettimetoreally,youknow,torethinkwhatI’velearnedinclass.

Withoutwritingresponsejournalsafterclass,teachercandidatesmighthavead-optedalearn-but-forgetattitudetolearning.Havingtoreflectonwhattheyhadlearnedinclass,however,mayhavepromptedteachercandidatestorethinktheissuescoveredinclass,expresstheirviews,andaskquestions.Learningbecamemorerealandmorepersonal. Severalstudentsalsocommentedonthevaluableoutcomeofself-developmentthroughpracticingreflectivethinking.Writingresponsejournalshelpedthemmakedecisionsthroughintrospection.Thejournalwritinghelpedtoclarifytheirconfusion,promoteself-evaluationandsuggestwaystheymightimprovethemselves:

Throughjournalwriting,ithelpsmetomakeupmyideas.Ithelpsmetomakeupmymind.Everythingissosimpleafterwritingjournals.(Sandra)

EverytimeIlookatmyjournals,Icanthinkof...howtoimprove(Helen)

Indeed,thejournalsprovideawindowintoteachercandidates’innermostfeelingsandthoughtsandareanexpedient toolforachievingpersonalandprofessionaldevelopment:

Ilookbackmyfirstfewjournals,IfoundlikemaybeiffoundI’vealreadygrownup.WhenIlookbackmyfirstfewjournalsandcompareitwiththelatterone,Ifindthedifferencebetween...likeitisn’tmyself.(Kitty)

Anotherbeneficialaspectofjournalwriting,asindicatedbyNatalie,isthedevel-opmentofwritingfluency:

ItcanimprovemyEnglishwritingbecausejournalissomethingtoexpressourselves.

When students lookedbackon thewhole experienceof journalwriting,4studentspointedout that theycouldappreciate thebenefitsonlyafter theyhadgotusedtowritingjournalsandwhentheybecamemorereflectiveinthesecondsemester.Nataliesaid:

InthefirstsemesterIcan’tfindanythingtoreflect...Ijustsitinthelesson.Idon’t’thinkIhavesomethingtoimprove.

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Thisshowsthatreflectivethinking,whenfirstintroducedtoteachercandidates,maybeatotallyalienideaandmaynotbeparticularlywell-received.Withmorepractice,however,teachercandidatescandevelopalikingaswellasadispositionforreflectivethinking.

The Instructor’s Feedback Allthe13teachercandidatesfoundtheinstructor’sfeedbackuseful,encourag-ingandvaluable:

The most important thing, I think, is to get the feedback from the lecturer.(Kathy)

Theinstructor’scommentsmakesmesocomfortable.(Sandra)

Ialwayswrotesomethingaboutmyanxiety,andyouknow,readingherwordscouldcomfortme.(Kathy)

Ithinkthatsheisveryexperiencedandsheinspiredmealot.(Ida)

Twelveof13studentsvaluedtheteacher’swrittenfeedbackontheirjournals,andstatedthatwithoutthefeedbacktheywouldhavelikedjournalingless.Fromtheircomments,itcanbeconcludedthattheteachercandidatesexpectedtheinstructortoanswertheirqueries,stimulatetheirthinking,pointoutareasforimprovement,etc.:

Ireallyliketohavetheteacher’sfeedback.Youknow,aslongastheteacherispresent,itmakesthehomeworkmeaningful.(Kitty)

Iwillbe lessmotivated towriteanythingbecauseI thinkmaybeIneedsomeguidance.(Lucy)

Onestudentheldadifferentviewaboutinstructorfeedbacktothejournalwriting:

Ithinkit’sokevenwithoutfeedbackbecauseIreallyenjoyreadingmyownjour-nal...Iexploremoreduring...exploremoreonmyselfduringtheprocessofwriting.Itreallyhelps,butnotonlyproduct,butalsotheprocessofwritingthejournal.(Lily)

Thequotesuggeststhatthestudentwasintrinsicallymotivated,enjoyedwriting,andhencewaslessreliantontheteacherforcommentsandsuggestions.Overall,theteachercandidates’viewsindicatethattheteachereducatorhasasignificantroletoplayinthejournalingprocess.

Development of Reflective Thinking Alloftheteachercandidatesreportedthattheyhadbecomemorereflectivethroughjournalwriting.Verbalizingthoughtsinwritingincreasestheirunderstand-ingoftheissuesdiscussedinclassanddevelopstheirprofessionalidentitiesasprospectiveteachers.Throughpracticingreflectivethinking,theteachercandidatesgainedadeeperunderstandingofwhatreflectivityentails:

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EverytimeIwriteIfirstjotdowndetailsofwhathappenedthatdayandwhenIwilllookatitlikeathirdperson,likeself-evaluatemyselfasifI’mthethirdperson.(Sandra)

WhenIfirstwrotesomething,maybeIshareaprobleminthejournal.Iusuallythoughtofeverythinglike,thereasonofsuchaproblemandwhatIshoulddonexttime.UsuallyIwillmakeaconclusionlikethis.Iwon’tjustdescribe.Iwon’tjustdescribetheprobleminthejournals.(Lucy)

The teacher candidates appeared to appreciate the importance of thinking thattranscendspurerecallordescriptionandfelttheywereabletodevelopastancethatincorporatedobjectiveanalysis(likeathirdperson),evaluation,problematiz-ingandproblem-solving.What’smore, tracing theirowndevelopment throughreadingandre-readingtheirpersonalrecordswouldprovideapreciousopportunityforfurtherreflection:

IthinkwritingdownintowordscanhelpandonethingwhichisgoodisthatIcanreaditagainlater.Ithinkthisprocessisanotherkindofreflection.(Kitty)

Byrelatingwhatwastaughtinclasstotheirpersonalexperience,byquestioningpre-conceivedideasaboutteaching,andbyprojectingthesethoughtsintotheirownfutureaspracticingteachersintheirresponsejournals,theteachercandidateswerebecomingreflectivepractitioners:

Istartedtorelatemypastexperiencetomyownteachingandonmyfuturecareer...asformypastexperience,Iknowwhatmyteacherhadputefforton.Itrytoassesstheirownskillsorteachingandfromthatassessment,IknowwhatIhavetodointhefuture.(Natalie)

Toanswerthesecondresearchquestion(the teacher candidates’ reactions to the journal writing experience),datashowthattheteachercandidateswelcomedtheuseofresponsejournalsasaninstructionaltoolfordevelopingareflectivestancetowardsteachingandlearning.Althoughsomedidnotreacttoitpositivelywhenthetoolwasfirstintroduced,allteachercandidatesweregraduallyabletoseethebenefitsandappreciatetheimportanceofdevelopingareflectivedispositionwhiletheywerelearningtoteach.Inparticular,theytreasuredtheopportunitiestocommunicatewithandlearnfromtheinstructoroutsidetheclassroom,andtheyvaluedtheinstructor’sfeedbackandconsidereditausefulimpetusfordeeperreflections.

Implications and Recommendations Thestudysuggeststhatresponsejournalsareausefulinstructionaltoolthaten-ablesteachercandidatestoexpressandasserttheirpersonalvoice,tobemoreintouchwiththeirfeelingsandthoughts,andtodeveloptheirprofessionalidentities.Throughwritingresponsejournals,teachercandidatesenhancetheirself-understandinganddeveloptheprofessionalcharacteristicstheywillneedwhentheybecomepracticingteachers—e.g.,abilitytoquestiontheirownpractice,toexploreintoalternatives,

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toproblematize,andtoself-evaluate.AsindicatedbyCochran-SmithandLytle(2001),“aninquirystance”iscrucialtoteachers’professionaldevelopment,anditisimportantforteachercandidatestolearnto“poseproblems,identifydiscrepan-ciesbetweentheoriesandpractices,challengecommonroutines,”etc.(p.53).

Provision of Prompts Basedonthefindingsofthestudy,severalrecommendationsmaybemadetoenhancetheeffectivenessofresponsejournalsasatoolfordevelopingreflectivity.First,sinceteachercandidatesmaytendtoresistjournalingintheinitialstage,per-hapsduetoinexperienceandunfamiliaritywiththispedagogicaltool,theteachereducatorcaninitiallyprovidepromptstoguidestudents’journalwriting(seee.g.,Good&Whang,2002),especiallywithmoredependentlearnersandinthebegin-ningstage.Toprovideforgreaterflexibilityandtocatertoindividualdifferences,studentscanoptforeitherrespondingtothepromptsorwritingtheirownideas.Withatopiconcommunicativelanguageteaching,forinstance,thepromptscouldincludethefollowing:In your opinion, which English language teaching method(s) would suit Hong Kong learners most? Which method would you be most comfortable using? Theteachereducatorcanmonitorstudents’progressandassesstheneedforprovidingprompts,anddecideaccordinglytoeithercontinuewiththepracticeorphasethisoutgradually.

Journal Keeping during the Practicum Journalwritingshouldbeencouragedduringtheteachingpracticumforteachercandidates.Thestudyshowsthatevenwithoutmakingjournalwritingacompulsoryrequirementoftheinitialteacherpreparationprogramduringthepracticum,abouthalfofthestudentstookituponthemselvestokeepjournals,andtheyallreportedfeelingenthusiasticaboutit.Onceteachercandidatesareadequatelypreparedtowritereflectivejournals,theyshouldbeencouragedtocarryonwiththereflectivedispositionduringtheirteachingpracticum,andmoreimportantly,besupportedduringtheprocess.Forexample,theteachingpracticumjournalscanbecollectedandreadbytheinstructor,whocanthengivefeedbackperiodicallyorattheendofthepracticum.Also,thejournalscanbekeptinaportfolioelectronicallytogetherwithstudents’ lessonplansandteachingmaterialsandcontribute to theoverallassessmentoftheteachereducationcourse.

The Teacher Educator’s Role Theroleplayedbytheteachereducatorinprovidingfeedbackonteachercandi-dates’responsejournalsshouldnotbeunder-estimated.Thesedatahavesuggestedthatteachercandidatesvaluedtheinstructor’sfeedbackasapowerfulincentivetoencouragethemtoengageinreflectionthroughjournaling.Withholdingfeedbackaltogether,especiallyatthebeginning,mayhaveanegativeimpactontheteachercandidate’smotivationtowriteinresponsejournals.Itwouldhelp,however,ifthe

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teachereducator’spresencecouldbegraduallymaderedundant,sothattheteachercandidatesdevelopahabitandwillingnesstoreflectevenwithouthavinganaudi-encetoreadtheirjournals.Lee’s(2004)dialoguejournalstudyhasfoundthatsometeachercandidatesmayactuallybemoreinterestedinusingjournaling“asameansofgettingadvicefromtheteachereducator”thaninusingitasa“toolfordevelopingindividualreflection”(Lee,2004,p.86).Toenableteachercandidatestoengageinreflectionautonomouslyduringthelearning-to-teachprocess,theteachereducatorhastobecarefulindecidingwhentogivefeedbacktostimulatethinkingandtoprovideincentiveandwhentoreducetheamountorevenwithholdfeedback.Forinstance,the teachereducatorcanstartwithexchangingdialogue journalwith the teachercandidates,andaftertheyhavegainedfamiliaritywithreflectivewritingtheycanbeaskedtoexchangejournalswithinasmallgrouporwithajournalpartner/buddy(seeGood&Whang,2002;Grisham,1997),wherebytheyexchangejournalsregu-larly,respondtotheirpeers’journals,supportingeachotherintheirdevelopmentofreflectivethinking.Theinstructor’srolecouldthenbegraduallyreduced,sincetheteachercandidateswouldbetakinggreaterresponsibilitytousejournalsasatoolforstimulatingthoughtsandfordevelopingandsustainingreflectivethinking.

The Teacher Candidate’s Role Finally, theroleplayedby the teachercandidates indevelopingreflectivityandbringingabouttheirownprofessionalgrowthcanbefurtherutilized.Asidefromaskingthemtokeeptheirjournalsinaportfolioandsubmitittotheinstruc-torfromtimetotime,theteachercandidatescanbeaskedtorevisittheirjournalsatdifferentpointsoftime(e.g.,attheendofeachsemester,andattheendoftheteachingpracticum)andtowriteaboutthechanges,ifany,observedintheirowndevelopment.Infact,thedatainthisstudyindicatethatwithoutbeingaskedto,fourstudentsdevelopedthehabitofre-readingtheirownjournalstolookforareasof improvementaswellas toponderonissuesrelatedto theirpersonalgrowthandprofessionaldevelopment.Thissuggests thatwrittenjournalscannaturallyprovidepersonalrecordsforstudentstotracetheirevolvingthoughtsandchang-ingperspectivesonspecificissues,makingsenseofthecomplexitiesinherentinteachingandlearning.Theengagementinactivelearning,whereteacherlearnerstracktheirownknowledgedevelopment,underliestheconstructivistapproachtoteacherdevelopment(Cochran-Smith&Lytle,2001).

Conclusion The study suggests that journal writing is a potentially powerful tool forfosteringreflectioninteachercandidates,preparingteacherswho“recognizethecomplexityofteaching,arethoughtfulabouttheirteachingpractices,questiontheirownassumptionsandconsidermultipleperspectivesinordertomakeinformeddecisionsaboutthelearningneedsoftheirstudents”(Schulz&Mandzuk,2005,

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p.315).Reflectionasahabit, ifsuccessfullyinstilledinteachercandidates,canpreparethemtocopewiththedailyissuesthatarisefromtheirfutureteachingwithacreativeandcriticalstance.Reflectioncouldthenbecomeamajorpartoftheirteachingrepertoiretoenablethemtoengageinreflectionwithahighcomfortlevel.Giventhepotentialbenefitsofjournalsininitialteacherpreparationprograms,howtomakejournalingmorewriter-friendly,manageable,andusefulforteachercandidateswouldprovideavenuesforfurtherresearch.

Notes 1TheHongKongGovernment’snewrequirementsforaprofessionallyqualifiedEnglishteacherare:(1)Englishsubjectknowledge,(2)anELTteachingqualification,and(3)aprofi-ciencylevelthatmeetsthelanguagebenchmarkstipulatedbytheGovernment.Thegraduatesofthe2+2teachereducationprogramwouldmeetthefirsttworequirements,whichwouldautomaticallyexemptthemfromthethird,i.e.thelanguagebenchmarkrequirement. 2Thetopicscoveredinthe20-weekcourseinclude:Englishlanguageteachingmeth-odology,communicativelanguageteachingandtask-basedlearning,curriculum,syllabusandtechniques,teachingofpronunciation,speaking,listening,reading,writing,vocabularyandgrammar,reflectiveteachingandclassroominquiry,assessment,lessonplanningandevaluation,individualdifferencesandlearningstrategies.Itwasemphasizedthatthejournalswouldnotbemarkedforwrittenaccuracy,andthatthefocuswasonthequalityofreflectivethinkingratherthanwritingcompetence.

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Appendix

Response Journals Thepurposeofresponsejournalsistoprovideopportunitiesforyoutoreflectonyourlearningexperiences,toexpressopinions,toclarifyideas,andtopersonalizelearning.Youaretowriteresponsejournals,onaweeklybasis,toreflect criticallyonsalientissuesraisedinclass. Tohelpyouunderstandwhat‘criticalreflection’means,itisa3-wayprocessfocusingon:

1.Theeventitself—e.g.,ateaching/learningepisode,alesson.

2. Recollection of the event —a factual account of what actually hap-pened.

3.Reviewandresponsetotheevent—reviewandquestiontheeventwithaviewtoprocessingitatadeeperlevel.

Ilookforwardtoreadingyourresponsejournals.