AS Pre-production Tasks Feedback

Student Name: George Eccles

Task 1 – Pre-production: Research & Planning Evidence on blog

1. Similar Products – film beginning analysis Yes2. Genre Analysis Yes3. Target Audience Yes4. Script Yes5. Drafts Some Yes6. Storyboard Yes7. Shotlist Yes8. Layouts – floor plan Yes9. Locations Yes10.Costumes Yes11.Props Some Yes12.Actors Yes13.Equipment Yes14.Production schedule Yes

Teachers commentsYou need to upload all of your preliminary work so far please.

1. Some good analysis of your 4 film openings although more detail could be added. Is there anything you will take as inspiration from them for your film? Some additional thoughts added, although very brief.

2. Excellent prezi on your chosen genre, lots of good detail. Also good blog post on the conventions of your genre.

3. Good visualisation of your target audience. You could add what interests they might have or other types of films/media they might like. Some additional information added.

4. Good first draft of your script. You could re-do this with the characters name to follow script conventions (taking out the actors names). Script now re-written in correct format. Please re-label it so it appear in with your pre-production.

5. Some evidence of drafting from initial ideas to script.6. Good clear storyboards, well done7. A basic shot list. You could use this as a draft and use the table format to

add more detail. No changes have been made.8. Clear floor plan showing your plans9. Good photos of your location from a variety of angles10.Costume choices identified well.11.Some evidence of props mentioned in with costumes – a bag, is this all

you will need? More props and images have been uploaded.12.Actor choices identified, you could add photos of your actors and state

why you chose them to be in your film. Images of actors now added, no reasons behind choices given.

13.A very brief equipment list, will you not need an SD card or tripod? You

could make this more visual and add photos of the things you will use. More detail and images now added.

14.A good production schedule. You need to add when you will edit to this. Editing time has now been added.

Good overall work George, all tasks have been completed. At the moment this is a level 2, if you add more detail to the above then this could be solidly into level 3.All work has now been uploaded and improved to a proficient level, well done.

Mark out of 20: 11Teacher name: A Jones Date: 22/12/14

Student action plan for improvement1. I have included some inspiration within my 4 film opening analysis2. I have made amendments to my target audience visualisation3. Visual improvements to my equipment list4. Added editing times to my production schedule5. Added actor photos6. I have improved my script to show stage directions and names

Final mark out of 20:14 Date:15/03/15