grade 2 comparative stories
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The grade 2 class created some stories using similes.TRANSCRIPT
GONDOLA By Adrien Chabanne
Once I was on a holiday with my family and we decided to go to Venice
Italy.
Venice is very small; it is as small as a mouse!
We did lots of things it was it was our last day so we did my favorite thing,
which was the gondola.
We lined up.
The line was as long as a crocodile!
Finally it was our turn to go in the gondola.
It was very wobbly.
Then it began to move!
We could see salty water; I could hear the splashing of the paddle.
I touched the water and it was as cold as ice!
I could smell the fresh air going in my face.
My mum wanted the operator to stay still so she could take a picture of him
but she was shy.
When it was finished we got out of the gondola.
But I think my mum was sad because she did not get a picture of the operator!
Well at least we hade a very good day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Costco
By Aoi Fujimoto
Last year my family went to Costco. The pizza smelled burnt. The fruit smelled fresh, and the fish smelled stinky. Inside Costco I saw a lot of animals. I saw a hamster, a dog, a cat, and a fish. There were a lot of people too. They were talking a lot while I ate ice-cream. The ice cream was very yummy and sour. I saw lots of books. There were some English books, and some were Japanese. I saw a lot of toys. There were Lego’s ninja go characters. I found a big chocolate bar. It smelled like strawberry, and it tasted like cake, so I bought it. Next time I will buy a big tub of ice cream in Costco.
My House By Ayane
One day I was in the school bus comming home. My friend was on bus
too. I got home and ate dinner. The dinner I ate was very yummy. The
dinner I was as yummy as a hamburger. I ate many kinds of food. I
think it was the yummiest food I have ever eaten, but before I ate my
yummy dinner my brother made the living room so noisy. It was as
noisy as a band. (I don’t like this time.) When I went to bed it was as
quiet, as school at night. (I like this time.) When I woke up it was
6:20am. The breakfast I ate was so sweet. It was as sweet as candy. I
quickly did my work. My brother also did the work. We finished the
work fast, as fast as the wind. When I went to school, I still
remembered the yummy foods I ate. In the bus I told my friend about
my food. The yummy dinner and yummy breakfast made my so
happy, plus the snack and lunch was so yummy I think it was a very
good time, as good as my dream. When I go home I still remember the
yummy foods.
Ok-Mart By: Ee Heng
Last week I went to ok-mart to look around. I went to the drink area first and it was as cold as ice. There were a lot of drinks. There was milk, juice and many other things. Then I went to the tidbits area. I saw a lot of plastic bags and potato chips. They taste cheesy and sweet. Then I went to the instant noodle area. The cup of noodles tastes sweet. The instant noodles were as spicy as chilly. Then I made up my mind and bought a drink instead. I bought raspberry juice. It was as sweet as candy. It cost $90. When I finished, I bought orange juice. It was as sweet as candy and as sour as lemon. Then I bought apple juice and a cup of noodles. Then I went
home which took 5 minutes. Then I went to ok-mart again to buy a chocolate bar called kinder bueno and Hi-chew. Then I went home and watched TV. Then I went to ok-mart again to buy Doreamon cake and juice. I went home and watched TV again. Then I did not go back, I just went to sleep.
THE END
At the hospital By Mami Sugiura
Last winter I went to the hospital. I was very
sick,so I stayed 2 weeks. The room was as white as a cloud.
At night, outside was as beautiful as a diamond.
The room smelled like medicine. It was
so good but at first I couldn’t eat food or drink water and I used
an I.V.. Later I could eat and drink. The food was as yummy as
the yummiest restaurant in the whole world. My mom and I
were the only people in the room. Sometimes we moved to
another room. Sometimes I sat on the wheelchair and went to
the X‐ray room. I didn’t like it because, it was so cold. When I
was waiting for my X‐ray, I watched the T.V.. I liked laying on
the bed more than sitting on the wheel chair. When I laid on
the X‐ray bed, I was surprised, because the bed was as cold as a
ice. I really missed my class mates and Mr. Anderson. I got
tired of watching T.V. and playing games. When I stayed in
ICU, even my parents couldn’t stay together. My mother
thought we were lucky because, I learned English so I could
communicate with the staff. I thought so too. I was as lucky as
a person who wins the lottery. I think I was lucky that the food
was yummy and I didn’t need to do my homework . The bad
thing was later when I came back, I had a lot of Chinese
homework.
Hi-life Story Michael
g.2 4/26/2012
One day I came to Hi-life. I saw many things and this is how I’m going to start my story. This is a story about cookies and other things. The cookies in Hi-life are as hard as a rock. It is good that I have very hard teeth. The cookies are as round as a ball, but not 3D. Oh no I forgot to give the cashier $50! I ran up to the cashier table. The cashier said, “Its okay,” to me. I sighed and went home but I didn’t know why I remembered I wanted to drink good water. I ran to the Hi-life again. I bought a bottle of good water. Also, I bought a pack of potato chips
(sour cream). I brought it to the cashier. I gave him $10 and he gave me the change. I was so hungry I ate many potato chips and drank some good water. I bought more potato chips because they are so yummy. I was as full as a pig. Then I came to hi-life as hungry as a skeleton. I bought 3 packs of potato chips (sour cream). I bought 1 pack of hi-chew. I bought kinder bueno. I gave the money and the cashier gave me change. I went to hi-life again. I bought many many things. I bought another pack of chips of cheese flavor, and a kinder bar (yummy kinder bar).
The END
Soccer ball By Ray Chang
Last week I played soccer at my grandmother’s house with Jack. My grandmother’s house is very big. My whole family was there for Chinese New Year. Everyone was as busy as a bee. I was playing soccer against my cousin Jack. Jack is my older cousin and he is as strong as an ox. We were playing for a long time and the score was 0-0. Finally Jack scored a goal and he got very excited. I told Jack it was a good game. I was as fast as a cheetah but Jack was faster. After the game I was as thirsty as the desert, so I drank a lot of water. I can’t wait to go back to my grandmother’s house next year. THE END
At Family Mart Richard Tsai
2012/4/26 Grade 2
Last week I was at Family Mart buying a drink, when I drank it, it was as sweet as a chocolate bar. When I was in the drink section, it was as cold as ice! Then I went to the food section to buy a rice ball, it was cold too. When I bought the rice ball, it smelled as salty as the ocean. At the cashier, the table was as smooth as silk. When I bought the drink and the rice ball and when I went out, I heard a Ding-Dong sound. The outer door
was as hot as fire. There were a lot of cans in the drink section and a lot food rapped with plastic in the food section. The place is as small as a mouse hole. Then I went to Family Mart to buy a rice ball again, salmon flavor, it tasted like fresh salmon in the sea… Then I went to Family Mart, I want to buy another rice ball but another flavor and Fin drink because I played soccer and I was very sweaty because its summer and it is as hot as fire! So I drank Fin and ate my rice ball, it was as cold as ice!
The End
Lego Land By Tom Lu
Last summer I had a great time at the Lego Island with my family. I felt very happy because I could go buy toys and play games. It was very loud in there and I smelt plastic. I got to play a Lego Star Wars game. I bought Lego shoes and a Lego book. I went to a Ninjago game, Lego halos, and Lego Kingdom. I walked around for what felt like 45 hours. I went back to the Lego hotel to play with toys. Later I went to Lego Island to have dinner. When I went back to the Lego hotel, I took a bath. I played for about 10 hours, and then I went to sleep. My dad turned off the light and I thought the wall was as dark as the night sky. The next day the sun was as light as fire. I went to Lego Land to buy toys and I saw a Ninjago that was as white as ice. I bought the Lego Halo 3 toys and I went to the airport. When it was time to go on the plane, I got on and came back to Taiwan to go back to my house. I had such a good time.
THE END
The Book Store By Victoria
Today I went to a book store. The book store was as big as
a castle. The air conditioner was on in the book store it was
so cold it was as cold as ice. The stuffed animal was as soft
as a pillow. I saw many wonderful books and I like the
books very much. I bought a little bunny that was very
cute. The colour of the bunny was as yellow as the sun. I
gave Yvette a blue one that was as blue as the ocean. My
little sister got a pink bunny. I went there because we were
supposed to buy my sister’s birthday gift. There was a
white one too but we didn’t buy that. It was as white as
snow. There were a lot of people. I think that it was a kind
of a public library. At last we’re going home. My sister
My Home
By Wilson Tang
One day, at night time, my Aunty cooked some salmon at my home. The salmon was as yummy as chocolate. After dinner, I went to write my homework. I hate it, but I need to listen to my dad. My mom came home, and she was as dirty as mud. I was practicing piano, and she was very happy. She said it was because it was her BIRTHDAY. She let my sister and I watch Shrek, the ogre movie. I love that movie. Shrek is as ugly as a slug. Then, we went and brushed our teeth and went to sleep. The next morning it was time for school. I woke up and went to school. It rained, so we went to the computer room for recess. After that, we all went to music class. We had a lot of fun because we played music games. When it was the end of school, we had robot club. It was as fun as playing games. I used my robot to fight with other people. It was as easy as running. Then my dad came to pick me up.
THE END
About my house By:Yvette
I am at my house. My house is as big as my school. I have a playroom at my house. I like my dogs and onetime I slept on my dog’s bed. My playroom has toys, couches, dog’s bed, table, TV, and cookies. Sometime I watch TV in the playroom and I took drinks from the kitchen. My dog is in the kitchen. M y dog is as big as a bear. The playroom is as big as our class and the kitchen, too. Beside the playroom is the study room. I always write my homework there. The kitchen has an oven and the oven is as big as a school desk. There is a sink and some pots. Sometimes I would just eat in the kitchen. I helped my mom cook one time. My brother said is very good and then my mom said I cook it. Then my brother said it is too salty. He said it’s
as salty as the ocean. :D