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It’s a cinch…just:

(1). Read the following sentence.

(2). Rewrite it correctly fixing the mistakes.

(3). CIRCLE your corrections!

Hint: There are SIX corrections.

jacki robinson the first African American major-league baseball player played his first game with the brooklyn dodgers in 1947.

Check your answer… how did you do?

Jacki Robinson, the first African American major-league baseball player, played his first game with the Brooklyn Dodgers in 1947.

Hint: There are FIVE errors.

Would you believe that over 7000 years ago Ancient egyptians liked to bowl on alleys alot like ours.


Would you believe that over 7,000 years ago ancient Egyptians liked to bowl on alleys a lot like ours?

Hint: There are FOUR errors.

Before players begun wearing safety gear football produced so many injurys that Colleges often banned the game.


Before players began wearing safety gear, football produced so many injuries that colleges often banned the game.

Hint: There are THREE errors.

Jerry Rice hold the nfl record for touchdowns: two hundred five.


Jerry Rice holds the NFL record for touchdowns: 205.


Until 1892 all professional boxing matches was slugged out with bear fists.


Until 1892, all professional boxing matches were slugged out with bare fists.


Ill bet you didn’t no that youll sleep through one third of you’re life.


I’ll bet you didn’t know that you’ll sleep through one-third of your life.


canned foods was first developed in order to feed napoleans army.


Canned foods were first developed in order to feed Napolean’s army.


During the middle ages in england beer was oftenest served with breakfast.


During the Middle Ages in England, beer was most often served with breakfast.


in china brides traditionally adorn their selves in bright red.


In China, brides traditionally adorn themselves in bright red.


When a dessert lizard sense danger it vibrates too instantly sink beneath the sand.


When a desert lizard senses danger, it vibrates to instantly sink beneath the sand.


Would you beleive a catapillar have about 4000 muscles in it’s body?


Would you believe a caterpillar has about 4,000 muscles in its body?


A mosquitos wings beats about 1000 times a second the annoying hum comes from it’s beating wings.


A mosquito’s wings beat about 1,000 times a second; the annoying hum comes from its beating wings.


When a llama get mad it spits thick bad-smelling saliva into its enemies face.


When a llama gets mad, it spits thick, bad-smelling saliva into its enemy’s face.


Lobsters walks around on 8 legs just as spider’s do.


Lobsters walk around on eight legs just as spiders do.


A baby squirel is born with its eyes closed and it keeps them closed four about a month


A baby squirrel is born with its eyes closed, and it keeps them closed for about a month.


Starfish dont have no legs but they can creep around on alot of little tube feet.


Starfish don’t have legs, but they can creep around on a lot of little tube feet.


The most largest bird is the Ostrich it weigh as much as 300 pounds.


The largest bird is the ostrich; it weighs as much as 300 pounds.


Ostriches cant fly but it can run as fast as forty miles per hour.


Ostriches can’t fly, but they can run as fast as 40 miles per hour.


Are rhinoceros horns which both male and female have mades of hardened hare?


Really, are rhinoceros horns, which both male and female rhinoceros have, made of hardened hair?


Dolphins one of the mostly intelligent creatures on this earth lives in the ocean.


Dolphins, one of the most intelligent creatures on this earth, live in the ocean.


Pluto the most small planet in our solar system travel around the sun every 248 years.


Pluto, the smallest planet in our solar system, travels around the sun every 248 years.


It takes the moon a little more than twenty-seven day’s about a month to orbit Earth.


It takes the moon a little more than 27 days, about a month, to orbit Earth.


Earth move threw space at sixty six thousand seven hundred miles per hour


Earth moves through space at 66,700 miles per hour.


If you had read the assignment you would of discovered that skin are the larger organ of the human body.


If you had read the assignment, you would have discovered that skin is the largest organ of the human body.


You’re sense of smell is the first sense to go to sleep at night and the last one that wakes up in the mourning.


Your sense of smell is the first sense to go to sleep at night and the last one to wake up in the morning.


The harder bone in the Human body are the jawbone; or mandible.


The hardest bone in the human body is the jawbone, or mandible.

Hint: There are SIX errors.

Albert einstein a brilliant german-born physicist discovered that the force of Gravity can bend light.


Albert Einstein, a brilliant, German-born physicist, discovered that the force of gravity can bend light.


Honey is sweet, nutritious, and spoilage is never a problem it’s an favorite food of bears badgers and humans, to.


Honey is sweet, nutritious, and never spoils; it’s a favorite food of bears, badgers and humans, too.


A disease called ichthyosis turn human skin scaly as a fishs this disease is hereditary.


A disease called ichthyosis turns human skin scaly like a fish’s; this disease is hereditary.


Action speak more louder then words’.


Actions speak louder than words.


The only way to have an friend are to be 1.


The only way to have a friend is to be one.


Advice is something the wise dont never need and Fools wont never take.


Advice is something the wise don’t need, and fools won’t take.


Everything have it’s beauty but not everyone see it.


Everything has its beauty, but not everyone sees it.


Wow, the empire state building has 10,000,000 bricks in their structure!


Wow, the Empire State Building has 10 million bricks in its structure!


Of all the states in are country alaska have the most longest coastline and the smallest population.


Of all the states in our country, Alaska has the longest coastline and the smallest population.


The boot of italy look as though it kick the island of sicily.


The boot of Italy looks as though it kicks the island of Sicily.


In the year of 2050 paris is 2099 years old.


In the year 2050, Paris will be 2,099 years old..


Jamaica is a island that lays ninety miles South of cuba.


Jamaica is an island that lies 90 miles south of Cuba..


China has the larger population of any country in the world, more then a billion people live their.


China has the largest population of any country in the world; more than a billion people live there.


The persian gulf contain extremely salty water and isn’t more then 100 feet deep at any point.


The Persian Gulf contains extremely salty water and isn’t more than 100 feet deep at any point.


It is dark 24 hours a day four one hundred eighty six days of the year at the north pole.


It is dark 24 hours a day for 186 days of the year at the North Pole.


Mesopotamians who lived in what is today called iraq developed written language around 3500 B.C.E.


Mesopotamians, who lived in what is today called Iraq, developed written language around 3500 B.C.E.


When Alexander the great died his body was preserved in a big pot of honey


When Alexander the Great died, his body was preserved in a big pot of honey.

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Constantine the Great was the first roman emperor to declare his self a christian, Christianity then becomed legal in Rome in 313.

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Constantine the Great was the first Roman emperor to declare himself a Christian; Christianity then became legal in Rome in 313.

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The hundred Years War which lasted from 1337to 1453 was an English-French conflict fought four control of france.

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The Hundred Years’ War, which lasted from 1337 to 1453, was an English-French conflict fought for control of France.

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Joan Of Arc a famous French Warrior in the Hundred Years’ War was considered a heretic, tried for this crime, and burned at the Stake in 1431.

Hint:

Joan of Arc, a famous French Warrior in the Hundred Years’ War, was considered a heretic, tried for this crime, and burned at the stake in 1431.

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Elizabeth I was queen of england she was completly bald at the age of 29 and always wore a red wig.

Hint:

Elizabeth I was queen of England; she was completely bald at the age of 29 and always wore a red wig.

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The first british theater know simply as the theatre were built outside London in 1576.

6 corrections

The first British theater, known simply as The Theatre, was built outside London in 1576.

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The Great Plague breaked out in london in 1656 it killed 75000 people between July and October.

3 corrections

The Great Plague broke out in London in 1656; it killed 75,000 people between July and October.

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In 1812 napolean invades Russia but only 20,000 of his 60,000 men survived the russian winter.

5 corrections

In 1812, Napolean invaded Russia, but only 20,000 of his 60,000 men survived the Russian winter.

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Photography were invented buy french painter Louis Daguerre in 1839.

4 corrections

Photography was invented buy French painter, Louis Daguerre, in 1839.

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In 1912 the titanic the larger ocean liner of it’s time hit an iceberg and sinked in the freezing northern waters of the Atlantic.

7 corrections

In 1912, the Titanic, the largest ocean liner of its time, hit an iceberg and sank in the freezing northern waters of the Atlantic.

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In the year after world war I ended Adolf hitler becomed a member of Germanys Nazi Party.

6 corrections

In the year after World War I ended, Adolf Hitler became a member of Germany’s Nazi Party.

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In 1971, Switzerland which is located at the Southeastern border of Germany became the last Western nation too give women the rite to vote.

5 corrections

In 1971, Switzerland, which is located at the southeastern border of Germany, became the last Western nation to give women the right to vote.

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The national cancer institute say that 70% of the plants useful in treating cancer come from rain forests.

5 corrections

The National Cancer Institute says that 70 percent of the plants useful in treating cancer come from rain forests.

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100 lbs. of rainwater are needed to produce 1 pound of grain from the earth.

4 corrections

One hundred pounds of rainwater is needed to produce one pound of grain from the Earth.

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The enviromental protection agency (epa) were founded in 1970.

5 corrections

The Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) were founded in 1970.

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If american’s carpooled regularly more then 600,000 gallons of gas cold be saved every day.

4 corrections

If Americans carpooled regularly, more than 600,000 gallons of gas cold be saved every day.

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Did you no that the average american Office Worker throw away 180 lbs. of paper every year.

6 corrections

Did you know that the average American office worker throws away 180 pounds of paper every year.

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Are Science teacher mentioned last weak that the worlds population has more then doubled since 1950.

4 corrections

Our science teacher mentioned last week that the world’s population has more than doubled since 1950.

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It has been estimated that american’s throw away twenty eight million tons of branchs mowed grass and dead leafs every year.

8 corrections

It has been estimated that Americans throw away 28 million tons of branches, mowed grass, and dead leaves every year.

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American’s uses about 8 times more fuel energy then people anywhere else in the world.

4 corrections

Americans use about eight times more fuel energy than people anywhere else in the world.

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